[Dallol]

Hello all,

I just wanted to stop by and see what's going on.
I came across a message from the author, Krish, that "like the football stars after a World Cup" 
he is taking a break to regain his strength and get back into the mood to continue writing.

I share this view and think he needs time to recover. 
However, I must remind him that many former football stars have not emerged from this "break" 
and have disappeared into insignificance.

Andreas Müller, Dremmler, Junghans, Fischer, Paolo Rossi, Antognoni, Zico, Junior, Nesta, Rivaldo, 
Neskens, Arie Haan, Didier Six, Gary Lineker, Arconada, Negrete, Lato ... and many others...

I hope a similar fate does not befall the author Krish as happened to these footballers.

Hopefully we will see him very soon, either with a new story or with a continuation of the explicit 
life story of Krish and Meera, (maybe from Meera's point of view and with a time jump *5+ years*) 
that enchanted us all so much.

In this sense
all the best to you all

Lollobionda

[Rocky Rakesh]

After first child with Krish, Susheel returns to give meera her second child ;)

[bineeshm]

But, where is the fun in that? 
A husband and wife, loving each other, having sex with each other. And it just go on, and on. Where is the fun in that?

I think the intriguing sex between the husband and wife is also fun, Krish. Look up Modern Family. Although I have only seen a few episodes, Phil and his wife are honest with one another, yet they still act out certain fantasies to liven up their sex lives. For it to be engaging, the plot must be compelling and the situations must be interesting. I agree that the tale could not be as lengthy as this one. Yet, it will be great. This is the primary reason I'm asking reputable writers like you to give it a shot.

[AjitKumar]

After first child with Krish, Susheel returns to give meera her second child ;)

And meera accepting him as second husband as she told Krish earlier 

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Hello Krish,

Hope you are doing well and thanks for contributing your valuable time and hard work.

It's been a awhile since I post my comment here and I have my own reasons.


About story just like every time you just played with readers mind and emotions. The difference between updates page numbers will show how many readers are curious about Meera and Krish life. The situations you created and mental stress the character feel the readers also feel the same that much good your writing skills.

Unlike your previous stories this part have some bizarre twists and character assassination. Before Ashish incident the story is on right track after that you made Desai giving a speech to Krish and he leave the couple for good. I thought the story will end soon but some new characters introduced and I thought maybe their something going to happen. Then Desai returns and everything just ruined. his actions are just like in the beginning of the third part. He invites Krish for hangouts and try to be friends with him and manipulates him and offer money. He did everything what he did before this time everything works differently. Suddenly Krish become inferior Desai. All Desai plans start works in his favor. My biggest shock was Meera also fell for Desai and become his puppet from the beginning of this saga Meera did lot of mistakes and I am not saying she is perfect. Krish get curious when he witnessed Desai and mitheri sexual encounter and Desai did it on purpose to wake up Krish cuckold desire. Meera also show her interest towards Desai in car blowjob's incident. But one thing I can't digest Krish believe Desai after what he witnessed with ananya and her husband situation he let Desai to enter between him and Meera let him have Meera when ever he wants. After reading Desai come back and the couple behavior I just lost interest in this story and I take a break. After passing some time I come back and start reading the comments I just thought what I expected come true. But all the readers are going crazy their comments and version of thinking makes me wonder how the story goes. I start reading story where I left. Meera confession about train sex incident to Desai and agree his love proposal and ready to travel with him to his city. Krish watch Nidhi and her boyfriend sex. After reading all these situations I think you just make Krish a big pathetic fool and spineless creature. I really didn't like the end of the story.

1). Meera leaving Krish and Desai going her own way.

2). Meera knowing Desai evil plan asking forgiveness from Krish before saying yes to Desai love proposal.

3). Krish finds out about Desai plans to separates and plans something over Desai this is also before Meera saying yes to Desai love proposal.

4). After witnessed Desai and Meera sex leave everything behind and start a new life as a new man.

5). Saying no to Desai love proposal Meera declare her only love is Krish.

These ending(s) would have been good but what you given was just like part-2 ending. Without Desai incident part -2 would have a good ending. In the part-3 also Desai make a big hole in couple's love life. After everything happens Krish begs Meera to take him back was just disgusting. You destroyed Krish and Meera in our hearts. What we are reading, what we feel about them. The way Krish and Meera come together Nidhi unfold her secret with Desai not good. It's looks like Meera lost her first option so she comes back to her number two Krish. Krish took her back without any hesitation because he became spineless bastard.


I think you changed the narration by reading some comments from readers. I know you like writing what readers not expecting giving surprise's won't work every time. 


I may sound a bit too harsh Krish but know this your my favorite writer here I love reading your story in your own way never change your direction ever for any one.


Regards
Ramesh_Rocky

[Nishant77]

Maine is story ko bahut late padan start Kiya kyoki meri English itni achi nahi ha but anyhow I can read but writing me problems hoti ha is liye comments likhne me hesitation feel kar Raha tha but raha nahi gaya aik Mera is story ka concluding comment pad kar mujhe maloom ha readers ka Sara gusssa mere ooper toot padega kya kya nahi bhaari bhaari English me adverse comments Ane Langege fir bhi rah nahi paa Raha kyoki is story'ka ma bahut bada fan raha hoo but last and final comment itni achi story' ka itna bura end ho sakta ha kya may be this is main splty of this author I cnt even imagine how he can kill such a marvelous story in the end Krish you really disappointed in Last moments of this story

[RCF]

Hello Krish,

Hope you are doing well and thanks for contributing your valuable time and hard work.

It's been a awhile since I post my comment here and I have my own reasons.


About story just like every time you just played with readers mind and emotions. The difference between updates page numbers will show how many readers are curious about Meera and Krish life. The situations you created and mental stress the character feel the readers also feel the same that much good your writing skills.

Unlike your previous stories this part have some bizarre twists and character assassination. Before Ashish incident the story is on right track after that you made Desai giving a speech to Krish and he leave the couple for good. I thought the story will end soon but some new characters introduced and I thought maybe their something going to happen. Then Desai returns and everything just ruined. his actions are just like in the beginning of the third part. He invites Krish for hangouts and try to be friends with him and manipulates him and offer money. He did everything what he did before this time everything works differently. Suddenly Krish become inferior Desai. All Desai plans start works in his favor. My biggest shock was Meera also fell for Desai and become his puppet from the beginning of this saga Meera did lot of mistakes and I am not saying she is perfect. Krish get curious when he witnessed Desai and mitheri sexual encounter and Desai did it on purpose to wake up Krish cuckold desire. Meera also show her interest towards Desai in car blowjob's incident. But one thing I can't digest Krish believe Desai after what he witnessed with ananya and her husband situation he let Desai to enter between him and Meera let him have Meera when ever he wants. After reading Desai come back and the couple behavior I just lost interest in this story and I take a break. After passing some time I come back and start reading the comments I just thought what I expected come true. But all the readers are going crazy their comments and version of thinking makes me wonder how the story goes. I start reading story where I left. Meera confession about train sex incident to Desai and agree his love proposal and ready to travel with him to his city. Krish watch Nidhi and her boyfriend sex. After reading all these situations I think you just make Krish a big pathetic fool and spineless creature. I really didn't like the end of the story.

1). Meera leaving Krish and Desai going her own way.

2). Meera knowing Desai evil plan asking forgiveness from Krish before saying yes to Desai love proposal.

3). Krish finds out about Desai plans to separates and plans something over Desai this is also before Meera saying yes to Desai love proposal.

4). After witnessed Desai and Meera sex leave everything behind and start a new life as a new man.

5). Saying no to Desai love proposal Meera declare her only love is Krish.

These ending(s) would have been good but what you given was just like part-2 ending. Without Desai incident part -2 would have a good ending. In the part-3 also Desai make a big hole in couple's love life. After everything happens Krish begs Meera to take him back was just disgusting. You destroyed Krish and Meera in our hearts. What we are reading, what we feel about them. The way Krish and Meera come together Nidhi unfold her secret with Desai not good. It's looks like Meera lost her first option so she comes back to her number two Krish. Krish took her back without any hesitation because he became spineless bastard.


I think you changed the narration by reading some comments from readers. I know you like writing what readers not expecting giving surprise's won't work every time. 


I may sound a bit too harsh Krish but know this your my favorite writer here I love reading your story in your own way never change your direction ever for any one.


Regards
Ramesh_Rocky

Correction: Meera did not return to Krish after losing her 1st option. She came back to Krish and chose him even when Desai was available to her...Nidhi part came later...though i agree on other thoughts about making mistakes in writing characters on this part apart from Desai.

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Correction: Meera did not return to Krish after losing her 1st option. She came back to Krish and chose him even when Desai was available to her...Nidhi part came later...though i agree on other thoughts about making mistakes in writing characters on this part apart from Desai.

Hello RCF,


i didn't say the option closed. she lost her trust on Desai after Nidhi confession. She knew Desai cheated on her and lied to her. he completely hidden him self and act like changed man. after knowing that who wants be with a guy like Desai. i thought both (closed option or loosing trust) are same.

[RCF]

Hello RCF,


i didn't say the option closed. she lost her trust on Desai after Nidhi confession. She knew Desai cheated on her and lied to her. he completely hidden him self and act like changed man. after knowing that who wants be with a guy like Desai. i thought both (closed option or loosing trust) are same.

How would she knew Desai cheated on her before Nidhi? The ending is perfect considering what happened last but one episode, where in her eyes Desai is good and Krish is a cuckold and also knowing Desai is giving her his everything including ready to marry her still she chose Krish..if she knew Desai is cheating her then she chose Krish then there is no value in that..she has to choose Krish before Nidhi and that's exactly what happened before Nidhi knocked on that door.

[The Last samurai]

Like RCF has mentioned, I'm also emotionally exhausted, my friend. You know the feeling when the world cup is over, you no longer want to watch any other match of the same sport. So it will take a while before I rewrite that chapter. I think a little bit of time will do good for everyone.

Understood Krish take ur time and rewrite the last chapter and make it more adventurous and intresting. Plz inform when you do that. 

Regarding the story suggestion, I think you are better in choosing it, plz avoid old woman and young man concept. It's not that this concept is not interesting but so many stories on this topic already make to so boring and required kick is not there. 
My suggestion would be again happy wife and husband. This is interrupted by man slightly older who may be is anti social element like Gunda, Don or politician or may be person of authority. The third person should win her not by force or problems she should submit to him by her will. Gave some just rough ideas but such concepts is giving much needed kick rest are like common stories. 
Anyways all the best you know what is the right plot enjoy. Plz update the last part ASAP.

[Redbaron]

Any other ideas, anyone?

my suggestion- let meera fall in love this time. previous chapters were more more about jealousy, lust and manipulation. this time introduce someone who truly loves meera. maybe an honest young man in his early twenties who works in a shopping mall could be the man meera falls for. they meet somehow and unknowingly fall for each other. he cannot buy meera everything she wants but does overtime for several days so that he can buy a dress for her. he cannot take her to expensive trips but his one room apartment feels like home to meera. she hides everything from kris as this time she's truly in love. kris somehow finds out and keep observing their escapades. this new guy turns out to be biggest challenge for kris as he loves meera as much as kris does or even more. 
i am pretty sure you'll kill it in a love story too..
after so many ups & downs meera deserves someone who wants her to be happy instead of undressing her as soon as possible. someone who doesn't want kris to go bankrupt. someone who loves her enough to let her go at the end because he cannot offer her a life as good as kris does.

[Ramesh_Rocky]

How would she knew Desai cheated on her before Nidhi? The ending is perfect considering what happened last but one episode, where in her eyes Desai is good and Krish is a cuckold  and also knowing Desai is giving her his everything including ready to marry her still she chose Krish..if she knew Desai is cheating her then she chose Krish then there is no value in that..she has to choose Krish before Nidhi and that's exactly what happened before Nidhi knocked on that door.

i don't  understand   Please explain.

[Paul5]

But i still believe that Krish has ended this story with some many many unanswered questions main with Desai character no 1 Desai liking is only married lady why he forced nidhi Desai is not a rapist but last nidhi tell and why he involved his mother why can a man involved his mother in his chipy tricks and as per story flow each time Krish and meera create circumstances for three meeting not Desai if Desai was desperate for sex why he do sex with nidhi force fully he can go anywhere with matree ananya both are simply available for him any where why he do forced sex with nidhi in there Home and many many more unanswered question i strongly believe it's brutally murder of such wonderful story my strong opinion but i still believe Krish iis the best writer in theses days but in the end he compromised with his skills may be he feels insecure to think out of box but still he is finest writer best of luck

[RCF]

i don't  understand   Please explain.

Think the story from Meera's perspective..she knew in the beginning Desai is a womanizer..and she firmly believed in the fact that he changed and changed his lifestyle and she also believed 100% that he changed because of her...Having seen so much of a change in one person and that too for her made her fall for him though not completely but made her trust him a lot. Though she should have guessed his game the moment he started subtly trying to separate her from Krish or questions her intention in sticking with Krish or Desai prying into her love for Krish and other instance she should have kept him away once she finds her pic in his wallet..as she is a smart woman yet she did not doubt him and acted or her character was like rest of other woman from the story blinded by her lust which is where i did not like her character.

Now on the other hand she also knows how much she loves Krish and she cannot live with out him and on the flip side she also knows that being with her makes Krish go wild in his fantasies and Desai is just a tool for Krish in their life and does not mean the same as she sees him, Desai has become a part of her life blinded her with lust and soft corner that she generated in her heart for the changes he brought in his life but for Krish she thought he is just another person whom he allowed to fuck his wife and she firmly believed and feared that once she allowed Krish to see her and Desai as she did in the past ..Krish would move on from Desai and bring some one else..Hence she lost control when Krish agreed to bring Piyush, she now was proven wrong that despite not showing anything between Desai and her still Krish is ready to share her with yet another person so her belief that to settle with Desai as long as she can and eventually move on life and change her husband sort of plan back fired and she lost hope on her husband and hence the punishment of leaving him so he can move on and if he is not with her then he won't bring himself and her down..yet the whole theory is convoluted by the fact that she slept with Ashish on her own will and with this the plot lost the value as if she can sleep with some one for just sympathy and then why not she cannot sleep with any body that her husband brings home esp when she is enjoying it and their sex life is improving because of it and her reactions for Piyush and Jai kind of did not make any sense..and no amount of theory can now explain this better as at the end of the day guilt is guilt no matter how you did a sin , either on your own or you did it for fun or you were pushed to do it.

Now after her reactions she wanted to punish herself more by sleeping with Desai non stop and with any body he can bring which did not again make sense..and she is contemplating the fact that if Krish moves on in his life and does not return then she will eventually think about her feelings for Desai and might settle down but looks like Desai is not ready to give her that space..and with his sex skills want to bind her to him and force her into a relationship and eventually marry her and keep her as his prized possession. Meera has almost fallen for this plot and i do not think for a second she has the will to fight Desai at all on her own which is again a blunder in this story based on her strong character...So who came to her rescue and again its her husband and when Krish is back , she lost hope again that her husband will ever leave her..they are so blind in their love for each other despite the flaws that one cannot leave another and survive..he came back for her and that made her think that she cannot live with Desai or anybody for that matter when she knew Krish will never leave no matter how much she feigns him as if she chose another person or hurts him and only way he would leave her is if she loves some one else and that is almost impossible to happen when Krish is there..hence she came back to him even after knowing that there could be a better life with Desai with no cuckold business, caring husband , lot of great sex and more money and a family waiting in his home town. She chose Krish again and at that moment Nidhi appeared to give proof that Desai is indeed not changed but acting to get Meera. So where in the fact she lost trust in Krish or Desai? Its all about choices at various timelines of this story. At the end what choice you made is what matters and she chose Krish leaving a probably better life (at least in her mind at that time line) and she did that because she loved Krish as simple as that and why would you think this is a bad ending?

[abhinay67]

Think the story from Meera's perspective..she knew in the beginning Desai is a womanizer..and she firmly believed in the fact that he changed and changed his lifestyle and she also believed 100% that he changed because of her...Having seen so much of a change in one person and that too for her made her fall for him though not completely but made her trust him a lot. Though she should have guessed his game the moment he started subtly trying to separate her from Krish or questions her intention in sticking with Krish or Desai prying into her love for Krish and other instance she should have kept him away once she finds her pic in his wallet..as she is a smart woman yet she did not doubt him and acted or her character was like rest of other woman from the story blinded by her lust which is where i did not like her character.

Now on the other hand she also knows how much she loves Krish and she cannot live with out him and on the flip side she also knows that being with her makes Krish go wild in his fantasies and Desai is just a tool for Krish in their life and does not mean the same as she sees him, Desai has become a part of her life blinded her with lust and soft corner that she generated in her heart for the changes he brought in his life but for Krish she thought he is just another person whom he allowed to fuck his wife and she firmly believed and feared that once she allowed Krish to see her and Desai as she did in the past ..Krish would move on from Desai and bring some one else..Hence she lost control when Krish agreed to bring Piyush, she now was proven wrong that despite not showing anything between Desai and her still Krish is ready to share her with yet another person so her belief that to settle with Desai as long as she can and eventually move on life and change her husband sort of plan back fired and she lost hope on her husband and hence the punishment of leaving him so he can move on and if he is not with her then he won't bring himself and her down..yet the whole theory is convoluted by the fact that she slept with Ashish on her own will and with this the plot lost the value as if she can sleep with some one for just sympathy and then why not she cannot sleep with any body that her husband brings home esp when she is enjoying it and their sex life is improving because of it and her reactions for Piyush and Jai kind of did not make any sense..and no amount of theory can now explain this better as at the end of the day guilt is guilt no matter how you did a sin , either on your own or you did it for fun or you were pushed to do it.

Now after her reactions she wanted to punish herself more by sleeping with Desai non stop and with any body he can bring which did not again make sense..and she is contemplating the fact that if Krish moves on in his life and does not return then she will eventually think about her feelings for Desai and might settle down but looks like Desai is not ready to give her that space..and with his sex skills want to bind her to him and force her into a relationship and eventually marry her and keep her as his prized possession. Meera has almost fallen for this plot and i do not think for a second she has the will to fight Desai at all on her own which is again a blunder in this story based on her strong character...So who came to her rescue and again its her husband and when Krish is back , she lost hope again that her husband will ever leave her..they are so blind in their love for each other despite the flaws that one cannot leave another and survive..he came back for her and that made her think that she cannot live with Desai or anybody for that matter when she knew Krish will never leave no matter how much she feigns him as if she chose another person or hurts him and only way he would leave her is if she loves some one else and that is almost impossible to happen when Krish is there..hence she came back to him even after knowing that there could be a better life with Desai with no cuckold business, caring husband , lot of great sex and more money and a family waiting in his home town. She chose Krish again and at that moment Nidhi appeared to give proof that Desai is indeed not changed but acting to get Meera. So where in the fact she lost trust in Krish or Desai? Its all about choices at various timelines of this story. At the end what choice you made is what matters and she chose Krish leaving a probably better life (at least in her mind at that time line) and she did that because she loved Krish as simple as that and why would you think this is a bad ending?

She did not choose Desai on her own accord, she just stopped Krish from leaving when Desai asked her to kick Krish out of the house. We will never know what would have happened if Nidhi did not intervene. After Nidhi spilled the beans about Desai she had no choice but to go back to Krish. We can go by her actions in the last two episodes and she does not seem like a woman in mourning or in a bad mental state, she seemed to enjoy Desai's company. I think she was genuinely in love with Desai and had it not been for Nidhi, she would have been impregnated by Desai on their trip to Himachal. She was ceding to Desai's demands even after she was separated from her husband. She started the game by kissing Desai in the restaurant first without Krish's knowledge. 
Did she confess that? No? Did Krish ask her to fuck Desai in Hall. ? No. It has always been Meera's decision to get intimate with Desai, and in this series, she has not even involved Krish much. It was always a one-sided arrangement. She should have been the one who should have apologized, but in the end, the whole blame was put on Krish's head and his fantasies.

I seriously think the author got bored with the characters and decided to end the story prematurely.

[drillhot]

The end was really disappointing. The character of Desai is well known. All he needs is a hole to put his pole. Now nidhi had made a spoilsport and helped krish to get his meera, To punish her, desai should show the video to parvathi and fuck her. Make her to accept marrying Nidhi to him.

[bineeshm]

Think the story from Meera's perspective..

..yet the whole theory is convoluted by the fact that she slept with Ashish on her own will and with this the plot lost the value as if she can sleep with some one for just sympathy ...

Two points,
1. She slept with Ashish on her own free will
2. She let that guy in train have sex with her, whereas Krish asked her to let him play/entice but implicitly no sex. But she allowed him to have his way with her,

On both occasion she found way to blame Krish that he isn't possessive of her enough, whereas Desai was too possessive of her. Having sex with the above both was with her free will and not pushed by Krish. Also, Desai was possessive of her because she is married to Krish & she is not his legally or ethically. So he have to work hard to prove his love/lust/possessiveness to her whereas the husband may need not show that much possessiveness as he believed she is playing along with him and she belongs to him. That possessiveness theory of Desai can be applied to all illicit relationships in the world. 
This story is somewhere a grey area between cuckold and swapping. It is not pure cuckold as Krish is not too comfortable when the relationship between Meera and male partners grow. It is not swapping as they never did with another couple.
Mildly put, Meera's attitude is 'Fun is mine, Blame is yours".

[Dallol]

Hi friends,

it's hot around the comments, they enliven the story as if it's still going on...

This shows us 'readers and fans' (including me) that we have not yet finished with Krish and Meera, and that 
we hope in full expectation for the continuation and expect this from the author Krish.

When I think back now and ask myself (Ramesh_Rocky, RCF, too) the question;
When Meera made the decision to choose Krish over Desai?
The answer is much easier and clearer to me now, even before Nidhi entered the house and revealed what 
happened between her and Desai.

With the move to involve Piyush in the game, Meera has brought Desai's true ambitions into the light !

When Meera called Piyushu and told him that she wanted to sleep with him and to come to their house immediately, 
she expected Desai to take a stand against it and take steps to prevent it. 
The opposite happened, Desai took it for granted as if it was the most natural thing, and even kept silent as if 
approving it.
It was at that moment that Meera realised that Desai was only using her for sexual gratification; she also realised 
that his statements like "I love you .. I will make you my gueen and marry you" were only meant to tie her to him 
as an object and tear her away from Krish...

During and immediately after that phone call with Piyush, Meera saw something else; 
Krish's gestures and facial expressions ...
this made her feel again his displeasure, anger, jealousy and on the other hand how much Krish loved her.

At that moment Meera realised the mistake she had made with Desai and her deep devotion and love for Krish .. 
and made her choice in favour of Krish...


In this sense
All the best and hope to see you soon

Lollobionda

[RCF]

She did not choose Desai on her own accord, she just stopped Krish from leaving when Desai asked her to kick Krish out of the house. We will never know what would have happened if Nidhi did not intervene. After Nidhi spilled the beans about Desai she had no choice but to go back to Krish. We can go by her actions in the last two episodes and she does not seem like a woman in mourning or in a bad mental state, she seemed to enjoy Desai's company. I think she was genuinely in love with Desai and had it not been for Nidhi, she would have been impregnated by Desai on their trip to Himachal. She was ceding to Desai's demands even after she was separated from her husband. She started the game by kissing Desai in the restaurant first without Krish's knowledge. 
Did she confess that? No? Did Krish ask her to fuck Desai in Hall. ? No. It has always been Meera's decision to get intimate with Desai, and in this series, she has not even involved Krish much. It was always a one-sided arrangement. She should have been the one who should have apologized, but in the end, the whole blame was put on Krish's head and his fantasies.

I seriously think the author got bored with the characters and decided to end the story prematurely.

The whole thing can be interpreted in multiple ways , i gave my thought process and thanks for putting out yours. I always feel like readers only read the event that they are interested in but they leave out the details in prior episodes which lead up to that event. Please focus on Krish and not Meera on prior episodes before the event in Hall, you will understand whom to blame for everything that has happened. Please do not pick incidents that show as Meera took initiative but read the couple's intention together prior to that and it will then seem to you that the decision is always taken by the couple together except Ashish in this part.

Anyways coming to the point , Meera asking Krish not to leave means she is welcoming him back in to her life or resigning to the fact that she is destined to be with him as she exactly puts it before telling Desai she cannot ask him to leave..that's my interpretation.

[Paul5]

The main unanswered questions are still ignored by readers still alive ist why Desai look like rapist but in the past as writer Krish never give a single hint about Desai character 2nd if is was desperate for sex why he prefered to fuck nidhi in same house though he can do sex anywhere with ananya matree both were easily available for him any where and the main and solid question about Desai s mother involvement and many more questions are still alive