Romance Dildariyan by entertainerjatt ( completed )

[sarit11]

Update 25

Raj apne ghar se nikal kar Sandy ke ghar ki taraf jata hai…wo Sandy ke ghar pahunch kar Door bell bajata hai toh door Sandy hi kholta hai….wo tyar tha toh dono gadi mein baith kar college ki taraf chal padte hain..college pahunch kar Raj gadi park karta hai aur dono ander ki taraf chal padte hain…

Wo abhi thodi dur hi gaye the k unhein piche se Monty awaz deta hai…
Monty: Raj…
Raj aur Sandy ruk jate hain…
Monty: kaisa hai bhai…
Raj: thik hun Maninder tu bata…
Monty: main toh ekdum fit hun…yeh tera dost hai(Sandy ki taraf ishara karke)
Raj: han mera dost hai…Sandeep vaise hum ise Sandy hi kehte hain…
Monty: hlo Sandy
Sandy: hi..
Monty: aur suna yaar Raj kya chal raha hai…
Raj: kus nahi bas….

Abhi Raj kus age bolta usse pehle wahan Diksha a gayi…
Diksha: Monty tumhare liye daddy ka phone hai wo keh rahe hain k tumne uthaya nahi toh mere phone par kiya…
Jab Diksha ne Monty ka name liya toh Monty ke tote udh Gaye use laga kahin Raj ko pata na chal jaye Maninder wahi Monty hai jisne Raj ko preshan kiya tha…Raj ne bhi Monty ke face ke expression note kiye aur use yeh thode ajeeb se lage….usne naam toh sun liya tha par dhyan nahi diya tha use laga ke Monty ko yeh dar hoga kahin uske papa use dant na lagayein….

Khair Monty Raj ko bina kus bole wahan se chala gaya aur Diksha ke paas ja kar phone pakad ke baat karne laga….Raj aur Sandy bhi wahan se chale gaye….

Fir Pehle lecture ka time huya toh sabhi apni classes ki taraf chal pade Raj aur Sandy bhi apni kal wali jagah par baith gaye…wahan Priya aur Sonia bhi baithi thin….Raj ne unki taraf koi dhyan nahi diya Sandy ne unse thodi batein ki aur fir Raj ke paas ja kar baith gaya…

Fir lectures attend karne ke baad sabhi canteen ki taraf chale gaye Raj aur Sandy ek table par baith gaye….unse thodi dur Priya Sonia Riya aur Diksha baithi thin….Raj unki taraf koi dhyan nahi de raha tha vaise bhi wo ladkion ki taraf kam hi dekhta tha use koi interest nahi tha….Sandy idhar udhar dekhe ja raha tha kionk use ladkion ko tadne mein bahut maja ata tha…

Tabhi wahan Monty a gaya uske sath us din wale Ladke aur ladkian thin wo log ek table par jaker baith gaye….Monty ko abhi bhi yeh dar Sata raha tha k kahin Raj ko uske bare mein pata na chal jaye par wo Raj ko yeh show karna chahta tha k wo Raj ke Sath bilkul normal hai isliye wo uth kar Raj ke table par ja kar baith gaya…
Sandy: kaisa hai Monty….
Monty: thik hun but tumhe kaise pata chala k mera naam Monty hai…
Sandy: yaar subah wo ladki tujhe bulane ayi thi toh pata chala aur vaise bhi tera naam bada lamba hai yeh wala jyada asan hai bolne mein…

Monty ko ab yeh toh yakeen ho chuka tha k Raj ko pata chal gaya tha k uska naam Monty hai par yeh itni koi chinta ki baat nahi thi kionk najane kitne Monty honge hamare desh mein…par chinta toh tab thi agar use pata chal jata k yeh wahin Monty hai…khair Monty ki ander se toh dar ke mare fati padi thi par wo Show nahi karna chahta tha….aur kionk ek politician ka beta tha toh Natak karna uske liye koi muskil baat nahi thi….usne normal hote huye baat ko age badaya….

Monty: han yaar yeh baat toh hai aur vaise bhi mujhe mere sabhi friend Monty hi bulate hain toh tum log bhi bula sakte ho….
Sandy: chal thik hai bhai…
Monty: toh kya main tum dono ka friend ban sakta hun…
Sandy: kion nahi….
Monty aur Sandy hath milate hain par Raj vaise hi baitha apna lunch karta rehta hai…
Monty: yaar Sandy thanks but mujhe lagta hai Raj ko mera offer pasand nahi aya…
Sandy: yaar aisi baat nahi hai yeh toh hai hi aisa kam hi bolta hai…main toh ise 5 saal se janta hun…tumhe bhi dhire dhire adat pad hi jayegi…
Monty: chalo thik hai…

Fir Monty v apna lunch wahin baith ke karta hai fir Raj aur Sandy parking ki taraf nikal jate hain aur Monty apne group ke paas…Raj aur Sandy Priya ke table ke paas se niklte hain Raj toh kus nahi bolta but Sandy un logon ko bye karta hai….unke jane ke baas Diksha Riya se bolti hai…
Diksha: yaar yeh Raj kaisa ladka hai mujhe toh laga tha k tumhare bhai ki tarah yeh bhi hamein Bye bolega…par yeh toh aise hi nikal pada…
Riya: yaar wo aisa hi hai Maine bhi ek din usse baat karne ki kosish ki thi par Sandy ne bataya k wo ladkion se jyada baat nahi karta…
Diksha: yaar bhagban bhi kitna ajeeb hai na…
Riya: kion…
Diksha: yaar altu faltu se ladke toh Sara din ladkion ke aas paas ghumte rehte hain…aur agar koi hero metirial mila toh wo ladkion se baat nahi karta….Yaar agar yeh ek baar mujhe hye bolde toh main bhagban ko Parshad chadaungi….

Ab bechari Priya kaise itna bardast kar pati wo toh apni Chair se khadi ho gayi aur Riya aur Diksha ko dantne lagi…
Priya: yaar tum dono ko aur koi topic nahi milta baat karne ko….agar aj ke baad aisi batein ki na toh tum dono ki khair nahi…yahan hum log padne ate hain kisi ladke ki tareef ke salok padne nahi….
Riya: sorry didi….
Diksha: sorry Priya di hum toh bas aise hi…

Bechari dono chup chap Sir jhuka ke khana khane lagti hain…aur Priya ko bhi thodi shanti milti hai…fir wo apna lunch khatam karke Apne apne ghar ki taraf nikal padte hain…Priya ko lene ke liye Car a gayi thi…

Udhar Raj bhi Sandy ko uske ghar drop karne ke baad apne ghar ke liye nikal chuka tha…ghar jate hi wo apne room mein jata hai aur fresh hone ke baad bed par lait jata hai….

Udhar Priya bhi ghar pahunch chuki thi uska mood kafi ukhda huya tha ek toh Kal raat wali baat upar se aj Diksha aur Riya ka Raj ki tareef karna…uske dudh Jaise mukhde pe gusse ki wajah se laal rang saaf dikh raha tha khair wo apne room mein jaker fresh hone ke baad bed pe lait gayi aur Lait te hi so bhi gayi….

Udhar Raj ko aye thodi der hi huyi thi k Tabhi door par knock huya…

Raj: khula hi hai a jao…
Fir Door khula aur Sunidhi ander a gayi aur Raj ke paas a kar baith gayi…
Sunidhi: kaisa hai mera sona…
Raj: ekdum fit hun mom ap batao…
Sunidhi: main toh thik hun…aur bata tera college kaisa chal raha hai…
Raj: ekdum OK…
Sunidhi: OK ke bache padhai toh karta nahi Sara din ja toh gym mein laga rehta ya fir Guitar pakad ke baitha rehta hai…
Raj: mom ap toh aise hi bolti rehti ho pichli baar bhi mere 87% the...
Sunidhi: Priya ke toh 96% the tumhare usse kitne kam hain…
Raj ko Priya ka naam sun kar gussa ajata hai…
Raj: apki us Priya ke Six pack abs hain…kya wo guitar bata sakti hai…agar wo yeh sab kar sakti hai toh main v usse jyada marks le aunga…
Sunidhi: are beta tu toh serious ho gaya main toh bas majak kar rahi thi…
Raj: toh main konsa sansad bhawan mein lecture de raha tha main bhi toh majak kar raha tha….

Fir dono maa beta hasne lagte hain…
Sunidhi: chal thik hai beta main jati hun tu aram karle sham ko humein party mein Jana hai…
Raj: kiski party hai…
Sunidhi: asal mein Aj home minister ki wedding anniversary hai unhone party rakhi hai aur ham logon ko bhi bulaya hai…
Raj: mom ap log chale jao mujhe party mein nahi jana ….
Sunidhi: beta aise acha nahi lagta wo bhi toh hamare yahan pure pariwar ke sath aye the aur Tumhare Mohit uncle bhi toh puri family ke sath ja rahe hain…toh hamein bhi Jana padega na…
Raj: chalo thik hai mummy agar ap itna kehti hain toh chale jayenge…

Fir Sunidhi wahan se chali gayi aur Raj v aram karne laga…toh dosto Minister sahab ki yeh party kya rang layegi yeh toh waqt hi batayega…toh apna pyar isi tarah dete rahiye…

To be continued…..

[sarit11]

rb.lover93

kuch bate logo ko achhi lagti hy,
to kuch bhuri lagti hy,
kuch mithi lagti hy,
to kuch kadvi lagti hy,

yu to har kisiko hamari bat pasand aae ye jaruri nahi,
lekin RAJ ko apno ki bato ka bhura lage te possible nahi....

entertainerjatt

Bhai vaise toh apki baat akhtar ki bouncer ki tarah Sir ke upar se gayi par agar apko bura nahi laga toh achi baat hai...vaise v Maine question hi galat puch liya tha toh hata diya use

[sarit11]

Update 26

Raj kafi der tak aram karne ke baad sham ko lagbhag 5 baje utha aur exercise ki fir wo nahane gaya aur party ke liye tyar ho gaya…fir wo niche hall mein agaya yahan uske mummy papa bhi tyar ho kar baithe the sayad Raj ka hi wait kar rahe honge….
Raj: papa handsome lag rahe ho…
Raghuveer: thanks bhai kisi ka toh dhyan meri taraf gaya…
Raj: kion koi aur nahi tareef karta apki…
Raghuveer: bhai kisi aur se toh hamein kya Lena….bas agar hamari rani sahiba hamari thodi tareef kar dein toh dil khus ho jaye…
Sunidhi: kus toh sharam karo ap jawan beta hai apka aur apke upar apni jawani ka nasha chada hai….
Raghuveer: sunli beta Teri mummy ke munh se tareef ab chalein hum…

Raj Hans padta hai aur fir teeno bahar ki taraf chal padte hain….driver gadi lekar ata hai aur teeno gadi mein baith kar driver ko chalne ko bol dete hain…

Minister ka ghar thoda dur tha toh lagbhag 25-30 minute lage pahunchne mein…Fir teeno gadi se utre aur driver gadi ko parking ki taraf le gaya…Party ki decoration aur lighting ke karan ghar ache se toh nahi dekha ja raha tha par party ek bade se garden mein rakhi gayi thi….Mehmano ke baithne ke liye round tables par chairs lagai gayi thin…party kafi achi lag rahi thi.....
Abhi Wo teeno gate ke ander enter kiye hi the k tabhi wahan Sandy a gaya…usne Raj ke parents ke pair chuye….

Sandy: uncle ap logon ko Mohit uncle ne bulaya hai wo us taraf baithe hain…
Raghuveer Sandy ke ishare ka picha karta hai aur wahan mohit ko pure pariwar samet baithe dekh kar Raghuveer aur Sunidhi unki taraf chal padte hain….Raj aur Sandy wahin khade rehte hain…

Raj: Abe tu jahan kaise….
Sandy: oye kaise ka kya matlab Monty ne bulaya hai mujhe…
Raj: OK par Teri behnein bhi baithi hain wahan….
Sandy: yaar Monty ki Behan Diksha unki friend hai toh usne hi bulaya….vaise tu kion itni investigation kar raha hai…
Raj: sale main investigation nahi kar raha bas aise hi puch raha tha…chal vaise v mera time pass ho jayega….
Sandy: bhai dekh main us type ka ladka nahi hun….
Raj: sale tu apni nautanki apne paas hi rakh chal yaar pehle toh washroom ho ayein pressure bada huya hai….

Fir dono washroom ki taraf chale jate hain…wapis a kar dono aise hi ghumte rehte hain Tabhi Sandy ka dhyan us table par jata hai yahan Raj aur Priya ki family aur Priya Sonia Riya aur Diksha baithi thin.... Sonia aur Riya ko Diksha ne invite kiya tha….

Sandy: yaar wo minister ki beti hai na Diksha
Raj:Han tu kion puch raha hai…
Sandy: yaar puch nahi raha main janta hun usko main toh tujhe ek baat bata raha tha….
Raj: toh sidhe sidhe hi bol na fir…
Sandy:yaar wo Sara din tujhe hi ghurti rehti hai…
Raj: toh?
Sandy: oye tu toh ek dum ullu hai…wo tujhe line de rahi hai….
Raj: fir main kya karun …
Sandy: bhai itni hot and sexy ladki tujhe line de rahi hai toh use pata le bhai maje karega….
Raj: ismein kya fayada…
Sandy: yaar dekh Teri gf itni hot and beautiful hogi….tera sala v college mein kafi popular hai…aur sabse bada fayada tera sasur Home minister…
Raj: yaar ab yeh faltu ki batein chod…
Sandy: kya chod yaar tu ek baar uski taraf dekh toh sahi….
Raj: chal yaar baad mein baat karenge abhi kisi table par baith jate hai…

Fir Sandy aur Raj ek table par baith jate hain aur fir waiter unse order leta hai….itne mein Monty wahan a jata hai…

Monty: kaise ho bhai tum dono…sorry yaar main thoda busy tha pehle….
Raj : koi baat nahi…
Sandy: bhai hum toh ek dum fit hain tum batao kya hal chal hai…
Monty: acha hi hun….chalo main tumein ander se ghar dikha deta hun…

Fir Monty un dono ko lekar ander chala jata hai…uska ghar bhi kafi acha tha par Raj ke ghar jitna nahi…Monty unhe sabhi kamre dikhata rehta hai…tabhi ek kamre mein ek photo lagi huyi thi Raj use bade gaur se dekh raha tha….

Monty: kya hua bhai age chalein…
Raj: Monty yeh photo kiski hai…
Monty: wo…wo…wo

Monty kus bolta usse pehle piche se awaj ayi…yeh Diksha ki awaj thi….
Diksha: Monty tume bahar bula rahe hain…
Monty ki toh Jaise jaan mein jaan ayi

Monty: toh ab hum logon ko party mein chalna chahiye…
Raj: han sure…

Raj ko Monty ke behavior ki wajah se aur us photo ki wajah se yeh yakeen toh ho gaya tha k yeh wahi Monty hai…par use is baat se koi Lena dena nahi tha kionk na toh use Monty se badla Lena tha aur nahi use Monty ki complaint karni thi…

Par Raj ke man mein ek baat baith gayi thi k kahin Monty fir se koi jaal na bun raha ho….Uska Sandy se dosti karna kahin koi chal toh nahi…kahin Priya fir se uska istemal karke mujhe aur Sandy ko alag toh nahi karna chahti…

Khair Raj aur Sandy bhi Monty ke sath bahar a chuke the…fir party shuru huyi Minister aur uski wife ne cake kata fir sabhi ne unhe wish kiya fir party shuru ho gayi….Monty apne kus doston ke sath baitha tha aur Sandy Baki sabhi ke sath batein kar raha tha…
Raj kus sochta huya Monty ke paas gaya…
Raj: Monty..
Monty thoda dar gaya k kahin Raj fir se photo wali baat na shuru kar de…
Monty: kya hua bhai party enjoy karo na…
Raj : nahi yaar mujhe tujhse bas thodi der baat karni hai…
Monty: toh bolo bhai kya baat hai…
Raj: yahan nahi akele mein…
Monty: bhai aisi bhi kya baat hai…
Raj: samaj yaar yahan nahi kar sakte yeh baat…

Monty Raj ki.baat se kafi ghabra gaya tha kionk use pata tha k Raj kya baat karne wala hai use bhi samaj a gaya tha k Raj ko sab samaj mein a gaya tha....uski dar ke mare pani chod rahi thi…wo puri tarah se dar chuka tha Lekin fir bhi himmat karke wo Raj ke sath chalne ko tyar ho gaya….
Monty: chal bhai thik hai…kidhar Jana hai…
Raj: chal main gate ki taraf chalte hai wahan koi nahi hai…
Fir Raj aur Monty us taraf chal pade…

Monty(darte hue) bhai bol kya baat hai…
Raj: dekh Monty mujhe sab pata chal chuka hai k tum hi wo Monty ho jisne 5 saal pehle mujhe preshan kiya tha taki main sehar chod kar bhag jaun….
Monty Raj ke samne hath Jod ke khada ho gaya…
Monty: bhai plz mujhe maaf kardo wo sab Maine apni marji se nahi kiya tha….
Raj: mujhe pata hai tumne kiske kehne par yeh sab kiya tha….dekho main tujhe kus nahi kehne wala kionk tumhare dad aur mere dad dost hain….main nahi chahta k hamari wajah se unke bich koi unban ho….
Monty: thanks bhai…
Raj: par ek baat ache se samjhle k agar Teri Sandy se dosti fir koi chal Hui toh main tera wo haal karunga k tu apne ap ko pehchan bhi nahi payega…
Monty: nahi bhai main koi chal nahi chal raha par ap plz mujhe maaf kardo….
Raj: chal thik hai ab ja yahan kisi ne hamari batein sunli toh gadbad ho jayegi…

Fir Monty wahan se chala gaya….par yahan par ek twist hai….Raj aur Monty ki batein kisi ne sunli thi…ab kis ne Suni aur iska kya anjam hoga yeh toh waqt hi batayega par ap log aise hi Dildariyan ko apna pyar dete rahein….

To be continued….

[sarit11]

Update 27

Toh dosto pichle update mein hamne Padha k Raj ko Monty ki sachai pata chal gayi thi aur unke bich Jo bhi baat huyi wo kisi ne sun li thi….
Toh ab hum log time ko thoda reverse ghumate hain jab Raj Monty ko bulalne ke liye uske paas gaya tha…us waqt Raj aur Priya ke parents, Sonia ,Riya, Diksha, Priya aur Sandy sabhi log ek sath baithe batein kar rahe the tabhi Raghuveer bola…

Raghuveer: are Raj kahan hai…
Sunidhi: han pata nahi kahan chala gaya kafi time ho gaya use…
Sandy: aunty pehle toh mere sath hi tha ab pata nahi kahan chala gaya…
Geeta: main phone karke puch leti hun k kahan hai…
Mohit: are jyada preshan kion ho rahe ho a jayega bhai….
Riya: are aap log preshan mat hoyie mujhe dikh gaya hai Raj….wo dekho Diksha k bhai ke sath kus baat kar raha hai…
Diksha: main bula kar lati hun...
Sandy: koi baat nahi main bula lata hun….

Yeh sunke Diksha ka chehra utar gaya kionk use umeed thi k Raj ko bulane ke bahane wo usse thodi baat bhi kar legi par Sandy ne uske hath se yeh mauka bhi sheen liya….ek pal ke liye toh uske man mein aya ke sandy ke Baal noch le par wo kya karti bas chup chap baithi rahi….aur Sandy uth ke Raj ki taraf badh gaya….

Wo abhi Raj ke taraf chala hi tha k Raj Monty ke sath main gate ki taraf chal pada….toh Sandy bhi unke piche piche chal pada….unka chehra dusri aur tha aur peeth Sandy ki aur Fir Sandy ke kanon mein Raj aur Monty ki baton ki awaj ani shuru ho gayi Sandy wahin ruk gaya….

Jaise Jaise unki batein use Sunai deti rahi Sandy ka ascharya badhta gaya…wo toh puri tarah se socked tha….par use pata tha k agar Raj ne use wahan dekh liya toh gadbad ho jayegi isliye wo paas mein hi khadi ek gadi ke piche chip gaya….itne mein Monty wahan se chala gaya….aur Raj bhi jane laga….toh Sandy ne gadi ke piche se nikal kar thodi dur jaker Raj ko awaj di taki use Shaq na ho….Sandy ki awaj sun kar Raj uske paas chala gaya….

Sandy: bhai tu yahan kya kar raha hai…
Raj: kus nahi yaar bore ho raha tha toh thoda ghumne a gaya…
Sandy: chal tujhe sabhi bula rahe hain…
Raj: OK chalo fir…

Fir dono usi taraf chal padte hain yahan baki sab baithe the…wahan ja kar Raj aur Sandy baith jate hai…

Sunidhi: kahan chale gaye the Raj…
Raj: kus nahi mom bas thoda bore ho raha tha toh idhar udhar ghum raha tha…
Raghuveer: chalo toh mere khyal se ab hamein chalna chahiye fir kal subah bachon ko college bhi toh Jana hoga…
Raj: han chalo papa…
Raghuveer: OK Diksha beta apne papa ko bata dena k hum chale gaye hain…
Diksha: ji uncle….

Fir wo sabhi parking ki taraf badte hain….Priya aur Raj ki gadion ke driver gadi nikalte hain aur Sandy bhi apni gadi nikalta hai Jo uske mama ki thi…Fir sabhi apni apni gadion mein baith kar nikal jate hain….

Apne apne ghar pahunch kar sabhi thakawat ki wajah se so gaye par do logon ki neend ka koi pata thikana nahi tha….Raj aur Sandy…
Yahan Raj ko isliye neend nahi a rahi thi k kahin Monty Sandy ke sath kus galat na karde….kahin uska dost usse dur na ho jaye kahin wo ek baar fir akela na pad jaye….Sandy uska dost kam bhai jyada tha usse alag hone ki baat wo kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi soch sakta tha…

Dusri taraf Sandy ko yeh baat preshan kar rahi thi k Akhir wo kon hoga jisne Monty ke sath mil kar Raj ko bhgane ki planning ki hogi…akhir in logon ne aisa kion kiya Raj toh kisi se ladta jhagdta bhi nahi hai uska dusman kon ho sakta….par in sab baton se jyada use is baat ki chinta thi k Raj ne usse yeh baat kion chupayi….wo toh use apna bhai manta hai fir aisi konsi wajah hai Jo Raj usse yeh chupa raha hai…

Khair Sandy toh apni sochon mein kho kar so gaya par Raj ko neend nahi a rahi thi…wo kamre mein idhar udhar tehal raha tha….use dar lag raha tha k uska dost usse chin na jaye….usne soch liya tha k agar is baar Priya ne koi sajis rachi toh wo chup nahi rahega….

Raj(man mein):yaar meri life kya kya khel khel rahi hai mere sath….jab se India mein aya hun koi na koi panga ho raha hai pehle wo Priya aur sath mein Sonia aur Monty bhi….pune gaya socha in sab se picha chutega par life ghum fir ke wahin a kar khadi ho gayi hai…main fir se usi position mein hun na toh ughal sakta hun na nighal sakta hun….na toh Monty par bharosa kar sakta hun aur na hi Sandy ko sab kus bata sakta hun….

Khair Raj ko pata tha k apne ap ko kaise shant karna hai…isiliye usne kano mein headphones lagaye aur Romantic songs chala kar chup chap bed par lait gaya kab neend ayi kus pata nahi chala….

Friday 4:30 am
Vaise toh Raj is time roj uth jata hai par aj nahi utha….isliye usne aisi situation ke liye alarm laga kar rakha hai…toh Jaise hi alarm baja Raj uth gaya aur apna brush wagerha karke gym mein chala gaya….fir Naha kar college ke liye tyar hone laga…tabhi Sandy ka phone a gaya…Raj ne phone pick kiya…

Raj: Yaar Maine tujhe kal hi bol diya tha mera dimag mat kha main tujhe roj roj sath lejane wala nahi…
Sandy: sale kabhi toh sidhe munh baat kar liya kar jab dekho rudra roop dharan kare rakhta hai…
Raj: beta agar sach mein kabhi rudra roop dharan kiya na toh sabse pehle Teri lash par hi tandaw karunga…
Sandy: yaar bas kar ab dara kion raha hai…
Raj: yaar in sab faltu baton ko chod aur bol kis liye phone kiya hai...mujhe ready bhi hona hai…
Sandy: yaar Maine tujhe isliye phone kiya taki main bata sakun k aj mujhe lene mat ana…maine apni bike pune se mangwa li hai…
Raj: chal yaar picha chuta tere se…
Sandy: tera picha toh main Marne ke baad bhi nahi chodne wala…
Raj: sale kamine kabhi chutne dunga bhi nahi….tu jaisa bhi hai kamina hai gadha hai ullu hai Teri shakal bander jaisi hai…par hai toh mera yaar mera bhai hi na…
Sandy: sale yeh koi tareeka hai pyar jatane ka…kabhi achi batein bhi bol liya kar…
Raj: sale phone rakh nahi toh phone mein ghus kar marunga tujhe…
Sandy: chal thik hai bhai college mein milte hain…

Fir Raj phone kaat deta hai aur niche hall mein chala jata hai…wahan uske mummy papa baithe the…
Raj: good morning mom dad…
Sunidhi: good morning beta…
Raghuveer: good morning beta…
Raj: mom nashta shuru karein mujhe college bhi toh Jana hai…
Sunidhi: han beta main abhi serve karti hun…

Fir Sunidhi breakfast serve karti hai aur Sabhi breakfast karte hain…fir Raj apne mom dad ko bye bol kar wahan se nikal jata hai…wo apni gadi nikalta hai aur college ki taraf badha deta hai…

Wo abhi thodi dur hi gaya tha k koi use lift ke liye ishara karta hai aur Raj gadi ke brakes laga deta hai…Samne Diksha khadi thi…wo chal kar Raj ki gadi ke paas ati hai aur uski side window par knock karti hai…Raj window niche karta hai…
Diksha: Raj acha hua tum mil gaye dekho na meri gadi kharab ho gayi hai plz mujhe bhi college jana hai toh lift de doge…
Raj: sure…but tum idhar kya kar rahi ho tumhara ghar toh dusri side hai…
Diksha(thoda haklate huye): wo…wo…wo main apni ek friend se Milne ayi thi jab college ke liye nikli toh gadi kharab ho gayi…
Raj: chalo main dekh leta hun k gadi mein kya problem hai sayad thik kar paun….
Diksha : nahi chodo use Maine ghar phone kar diya hai papa kisi ko bhijwa kar ise le jayenge…main tumhare sath hi chali jati hun…

Raj kus nahi bolta bas dusri side ka door open kar deta hai aur Diksha gadi mein a kar baith jati hai…fir Raj gadi ko college ki taraf dauda deta hai…

Toh dosto age kya hoga yeh janne ke liye bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath…ap logon ki advises se mujhe story likhne ke liye kafi help mil rahi hai toh plz ap log aise hi sath dete rahiye…

To be continued…..

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by Ashish120
Superb Update Dear Bhai Ab Raj College Me Or Boxing Bhi Karta He To Kiyuna Ek Boxing Tournament Ho jaye Ese Priya Bhi To Dekhle Raj Me Kitna Dam He or Ese Hi Likhte Raho Keep Update Posting....!!

entertainerjatt

Thanks bhai.... Rahi boxing ki baat toh iske bare mein mujhe itni knowledge nahi hai...dekhte hain kus aur karte hain

[sarit11]

Update 28

Toh pichle update mein hamne padha k Diksha Raj se Lift mangti hai aur Raj use lift de deta hai fir dono College ke liye nikal padte hain….

Ab age…
Raj apna pura dhyan driving par laga deta hai par Diksha toh bas Raj ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi….asal mein uski gadi kharab nahi huyi thi wo toh bas Raj ke sath time spend karna chahti thi isiliye usne yeh sab drama kiya tha….khair Diksha jis liye yahan ayi thi usne wo kaam shuru kiya…..usne Raj se baat karne ki kosish shuru kardi….

Diksha: Raj tum pune mein akele rehte the kya…
Raj: han…
Diksha: toh tumein akele rehna pasand hai…
Raj: nahi…
Diksha: toh tum akele kion rehte the….

Ek toh Raj use apne sath majburi mein laya tha upar se wo uska dimag kharab kiye ja rahi thi….Raj usse mukti pana chahta tha….
Raj: dekho Diksha bura mat manna but driving ke time baat karna dangerous ho sakta hai…toh hum kabhi fir baat karenge is bare mein…

Raj ke kehne par Diksha chup chap baith gayi wo toh chahti thi k wo Raj se batein kare par Raj ne use chup rehne ko bol diya tha….toh fir dono mein koi baat nahi huyi…Raj ne gadi jaldi hi college ki parking mein pahuncha di...

Fir dono gadi se utre….Diksha Raj ko kus kehna chahti thi par Raj toh jaldi se jaldi usse picha chudwana chahta isliye wo jaldi se wahan se nikal gaya aur Diksha bas use dekhti reh gayi…

Raj abhi ander gaya hi tha k piche se Sandy ki awaj ayi…
Sandy: Abe ruk kahan bhaga ja raha hai…
Raj: yaar kahin nahi ja raha…aur bol kaisa hai…
Sandy: bhai main toh thik hun par tu kus thik nahi lag raha…
Raj: kion mujhe kya hua…
Sandy: bhai sab samaj gaya main…
Raj: Abe kya samaj gaya….
Sandy: dost dost na raha…
Yaar yaar na raha….
Raj: Abe sale bakwas kiye ja raha hai…aur tujhe bata dun k jab tu gata hai toh aise lagta hai Jaise kisi sand ko gussa aya ho aur wo apna gala fad raha ho…
Sandy: bhai meri singing ko chod….mujhe sab pata chal gaya k tu mujhe apne sath kion nahi Lana chahta tha…taki tu minister ki beti ke sath time spend kar sake….
Raj: Abe sale kya bhonke ja raha hai…
Sandy: kamine Maine Sab dekha wo Diksha Teri gadi se hi utri hai…
Raj: mandbudhi insan uski gadi kharab ho gayi thi toh usne mujhse lift mangi toh Maine de di…
Sandy: bhai main sab samjhta hun….pehle wo Isha aur ab yeh…

Isha ka naam sunte hi Raj ke chehre pe ekdum se seriousness a jati hai…
Raj: Maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai mera uske sath koi rishta nahi hai wo sirf meri trainer thi ab agar tumne duwara uska naam liya toh….

Raj itna bol kar wahan se gusse mein nikal jata hai...Sandy use piche se awaj deta hai Sorry bhi kehta hai par Raj wahan nahi rukta…Sandy ko thoda ajeeb lagta hai par wo kus nahi bolta kionk usne Raj ko itne gusse mein kabhi nahi dekha tha…

Khair aise hi lecture ka time huya …Sandy Raj ke sath hi baitha tha par Raj usse koi baat nahi kar raha tha…Sandy ne kayi baar kosish ki par Raj chup hi raha…aise hi lectures nikalte rahe fir sabhi canteen mein pahunche…wahan aj kus ajeeb huya Sandy Raj ke sath na baith kar Priya aur baki ladkion ke sath baith gaya…Raj ko bura toh laga par wo kafi gusse mein tha toh usne kus nahi kaha aur chup chap akela hi baitha raha…Sandy jab Raj ke sath nahi baitha toh sab ladkion ko thoda ajeeb laga…

Riya: Sandy aj tu yahan kaise….
Sandy: yaar kus nahi aise hi…
Riya: Raj ke sath jhagda huya kya…
Sandy: nahi jhagda toh nahi huya…par wo mujhse bahut naraj hai…
Riya: kion kya hua…
Sandy : yaar mujhe khud nahi pata pehle toh kabhi aisa nahi hua…
Riya: chal koi baat nahi maan jayega…
Priya ko toh kafi khusi mili wo kabhi bhi nahi chahti thi k koi bhi Raj se pyar kare….use laga k Sandy ko usse dur karne ka yahi sahi mauka hai…
Priya: chalo koi baat nahi yaar tum khana khao kus logon ko dosti ki value hi nahi pata hoti…
Sandy: yaar aisi baat nahi hai wo aisa nahi hai….
Priya: yaar yeh sab mat socho hum bhi toh tumhare friends hain na…tum aj hamare sath baith kar lunch karo…kya tum hamein apna friend nahi mante…
Sandy: nahi aisi baat nahi hai…
Priya: toh fir shuru karo…

Fir Sandy unke sath baith kar lunch karne laga par Raj kus bhi nahi kha raha tha…pata nahi kion usse bahut gussa aya huya tha…uske gusse ki aag mein tel dalne ka kaam kiya Priya ne….kionk usne Raj ki taraf dekh kar ek vijayi muskan paas ki…iska matlab Raj achi tarah samaj gaya tha…ab use khud par bhi gussa a raha tha kionk use Sandy ko khone ka Jo dar tha usme aj Priya ne pehla kadam utha liya tha wo bhi Raj ki apni galti ki bajah se….

Udhar Priya ko bada sukoon mila kionk Raj ki tareef sun sun kar uske kaan pak gaye the aj use mauka mila tha Raj ko ek baar firse harane ka aur wo yeh mauka nahi chodne wali thi…

Yahan Diksha aur Riya ko lag raha tha k Priya Sandy ko apna dost manti hai…par wahin Sonia ko yeh baat ache se pata thi k Priya sirf Raj ko harane ke liye yeh sab kar rahi hai…par use Priya par Itna biswash toh tha k Priya is puri duniya mein Sirf Raj se nafrat karti hai isliye wo Sandy ke sath kus bura nahi karegi….

Raj yeh kabhi bardast nahi kar sakta tha k uska best friend uski jaani dushman ke sath dosti kare…isliye wo wahan se utha aur bahar ki taraf chal pada…Priya ka toh Jaise din ban gaya Raj ko aise tadpta dekh kar…par Sandy ko yeh bilkul acha nahi laga…use Raj ko lekar ek ke baad ek jhatke lag rahe the….pehle Monty aur Raj ki batein aur aj Raj ka yeh naya roop ab toh usne soch liya tha k use is baat ki gehrayi tak pahunchna hai…par use kisi ki help ki jarurat thi aur use yeh ache se pata tha k uski help kon kar sakta hai…usne soch liya tha k wo Riya ko Monty aur Raj ki sari batein bata dega taki wo Riya ki help le sake…kionk use pata tha k Riya ka dimag kafi tez chalta hai aur uspe bharosa bhi kiya ja sakta hai…

Khair Raj wahan se sidha apne ghar ki taraf nikal pada…ghar pahunche hi wo apne kamre mein ghusa aur door lock karke lait gaya…wo sochne laga k use Sandy ko sab kus sach sach bata dena chahiye nahi toh boht der ho chuki hogi aur uska dost usse chin jayega....Par agle hi pal usne socha k uske aisa karne se Sandy aur Sonia ke rishte mein koi asar na pad jaye….wo nahi chahta tha k uski wajah se kisi ko dukh ho…aj wo fir se usi mod par khada tha yahan wo aj se panch saal pehle tha….tab sawal Raghuveer aur Mohit ke rishte ka tha aur Aj sawal Sandy aur Sonia ke rishte ka tha…

Par Raj ko koi na koi hal toh nikalna hi tha…khair udhar college mein Raj ke Jane ke baad Priya ke hath ek aur mauka laga Raj ko harane ka…wo tha College ka Annual Talent Competition….Priya ek achi dancer thi aur pichle saal wo yeh competition jiti bhi thi….jab Raj ke Jane ke baad yeh khabar pure college mein phaili toh Priya ko pata tha k Raj jarur is competition mein participate karega aur uske ke paas Raj ko harane ka mauka hoga…yah baat pure college mein jungle ki aag ki tarah faili…kal se competition ke liye farm fill karne shuru hone the aur Agle Saturday ko competition tha…aj Friday tha toh abhi ek weak se jyada time tha par Form fill karne ka last din Monday hi tha…

Khair friends college mein toh aj ka din boht kus leke aya yahan Diksha-Raj us chote safar se lekar Sandy-Raj ki ladayi aur Priya -Raj ki nafrat dekhne ko mili…aj ka din Raj ke liye kus jyada hi lamba hota ja raha tha…par kya yeh din yahin khatam huya yah abhi kus aur bhi baki hai?

Ab is sawal ka jawab toh filhal mere paas nahi hai… yeh toh waqt ane par hi pata chalega…toh dosto Dildariyan ke sath bane rahiye aur aise hi pyar dete rahiye….

To be continued….

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by rb.lover93

nice update bhai...
kehte ki gussa admi ko khokhla kar deta hy..
yahi raj k sath huva usne tab gusse me sandy se bate nahi ki, jisase vo priya & co k sath beth gaya...
lekin ye priya ki raj k sath dushmani bina vajah ki hy...
ye esi dushmani hy jise suljaya ja sakta hy...
dekhate hy priya or raj ki ye dushmani ab competition me kya rang dikhlati hy....

entertainerjatt

Thanks bhai....aur apne bilkul sahi kaha k gussa admi ko andha bana deta hai...

Sabse jyada dimag ki jarurat gusse mein hi hoti hai...
Rahi baat Raj aur Priya ki toh wo ek dusre ko ache se samjte nahi hain...sayad yahi bajah hai unki nafrat ki....


Ap aise hi support karte rahein

[sarit11]

Update 29

Raj college se ane ke baad apne room mein jaker lait gaya tha wo kafi preshan tha aur gusse mein bhi tha…Raj ke ghar Jane ke baad Priya ko competition ki khabar mili toh wo kafi khus huyi….uske baad Priya aur baki sab bhi apne apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye….aj college mein yahan Raj ki puri tarah se baji thi wahin Priya ki toh koi khusi ka thikana hi nahi tha…

Khair bechara Raj apne kamre mein laita raha aur sochta raha par use koi solution nahi mil raha tha…
Raj(man mein): yaar sala ajeeb panga ho gaya…ab kya karun kus samaj mein hi nahi a raha…han pehle Sandy ko mana lun…khamkha uspe baras pada…

Yeh soch kar Raj Sandy ko phone karta hai…par Sandy phone nahi uthata Raj ne kayi baar try kiya par koi response nahi mila….toh use aur tension hone lagi…par uski hi galti thi toh kisi ko dosh bhi nahi de sakta tha…

Abhi wo yeh sab soch hi raha tha k tabhi Uske gate par knock huya..Raj apne khyalon se bahar nikla aur door open kiya…samne Sunidhi khadi thi…

Sunidhi: beta kaisa hai…
Raj: thik hun mom…ap aao ander ake baitho…
Sunidhi (ander bed par baithte huye): beta koi preshani hai kya…
Raj: nahi mom…
Sunidhi: toh fir tumhari ankhein aisa kion bol rahi hain k tumhe pareshani hai…
Raj(najrein churate huye):mom aisi koi baat nahi hai…
Sunidhi: toh fir yeh baat meri taraf dekh kar bolo na…beta dekho main tumhari maa hun jab tumhe koi problem hoti hai toh mujhe mehsus ho jati hai…koi bhi bacha apni maa se jhuth nahi bol sakta…
Raj: nahi mom ap aise hi preshan ho rahi hain…
Sunidhi: dekho beta agar tum mujhe nahi batana chahte toh tumhari marji hai…
Raj bhi apne dil ka bhar halka karna chahta tha aur yeh kam uski maa ke ilawa aur kon kar sakta tha….toh usne apni maa ko baat batani shuru ki….

Raj: mom asal mein aj meri Sandy se ladai ho gayi….
Sunidhi: kion aisa kya ho gaya…
Raj: mom pata nahi maine faltu mein us bechare pe gussa kiya…
Sunidhi: beta wo tumhara dost hai toh wo tumhe maaf kar dega…
Raj: mom Maine phone kiya tha par wo utha nahi raha…
Sunidhi: dekho Raj tumne galti toh ki hai…aise gusse mein kisi ko koi baat nahi bolte jisse kisi ko hurt ho…aur Jo apse pyar karta ho usse toh bilkul bhi nahi….
Raj: mom main bhi janta hun k Maine galat kiya hai par ab main kya karun usse kaise maafi mangun…wo toh phone bhi nahi utha raha…
Sunidhi: tum aisa karo uske ghar chale jao…wahan usse Ashe se baat kar ke use mana Lena…vaise bhi jab tum khud uske paas jaoge toh wo jyada khus hoga …
Raj(apni mom ke gale lagte huye): mom you are great…yeh toh Maine socha hi nahi tha…main abhi jata hun…
Sunidhi: Maine toh pehle hi kaha tha k tum apni problem mujhe bata do…dekho agar tum nahi batate toh main solution kaise deti…
Raj: thanks mom…

Fir Raj jaldi se utha apni car ki chabi uthai aur jaldi se bahar chala gaya…Sunidhi use is tarah daud bhag karta huya dekh kar Hans rahi thi…use khusi thi k Raj ke chehre pe hansi laut ayi thi…

Khair Raj wahan se jaldi mein bhaga aur Sandy ke ghar ki taraf chal pada…wahan pahunch kar usne door bell bajayi…door Sandy ki Mami ne khola…Raj ne uske pair chuye aur Radha ne bhi use ashirwad diya…
Raj: kaisi hain ap aunty…
Radha: thik hun beta tum batao…
Raj: main bhi thik hun aunty…
Radha: aur sunao tumhari mummy kaisi hai…
Raj: thik hain aunty wo bhi…
Radha: are main bhi kya tumhe darwaje par hi roke khadi hun ander ao beta…
Raj ander ata hai…aur Radha use sofe par baithne ko bolti hai…aur khud kitchen mein se pani lekar ati hai….Raj pani ka gilas leta hai….wo idhar udhar dekhta hai par use koi nahi dikhta…
Radha: kya hua beta pani piyo na…
Raj: ji aunty vaise main Sandy se Milne aya tha….wo kahan hai…
Radha: are beta wo toh ghar par nahi hai…
Raj: ji kahan gaya hai aur kab tak ayega….
Radha: wo toh apni behano aur Priya ke sath bahar gaya hai…bola hai k der se hi ayenge…
Raj ke chehre par Jo khusi thodi der pehle ayi thi wo aise gayab ho gayi Jaise gadhe ke sir se seeng…Uska chehra gusse ke karan kisi garam tabe ki tarah laal ho gaya…
Radha: beta tum baitho main tumhare liye coffee lekar ati hun…
Raj: nahi aunty main ab chalta hun…fir kabhi aunga…
Radha: OK beta jaisi tumhari marji…
Fir Raj Radha se bida lekar wahan se nikal gaya….uska dimag puri tarah se ghum gaya….use Priya par itna gussa a raha tha k agar Priya is waqt uske samne a jati toh Raj use jaan se hi maar deta…apne gusse ko apne ander dabaye Raj wahan se apne ghar ki taraf nikal gaya…ghar pahunchte hi wo sidha apne kamre ki taraf bhaga…wo toh acha huya k use kisi ne dekha nahi warna uski shakal se saaf pata chal jata k uski gusse se laal ho rahi hai(shakal)…Raj apne kamre mein ja kar bed par lait gaya aur chhat ko dekhne laga….aj life mein pehli baar use itna gussa a raha tha…yah sayad isse pehle bhi aya ho aur hamein pata na ho…

Khair Raj ki kus samaj mein nahi a raha tha k Sandy uske sath aisa kaise kar sakta hai….wo apne ap se hi batein kiye ja raha tha….
Raj: yeh Sandy ne acha nahi kiya…mana k meri galti thi par kamine ne ladkion ki baton mein a kar apne dost se hi duri bana li…sala aj ghumne gaya aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi…aur wo kamini Priya pata nahi use mere se kya dushmani hai jab dekho meri bajane mein lagi rehti hai…pehle Monty ke sath mil kar mujhe preshan kiya aur Ab fir se Monty ke sath mil kar mere dost ko mere khilaf bhadka diya….aur yeh sab us chipku Diksha ki wajah se ho raha hai….na wo subah subah apni shakal dikhati aur nahi mera din itna kharab jata…mujhe toh Monty par pehle se hi Shaq tha k wo jarur Sandy ko mujhse ladwana chahta….ab main in sab ko nahi chodne wala….

Raj toh gusse mein na jane kya kya bake ja raha tha…tab tak hum yeh pata kar lete hain k akhir yeh Sandy ke bahar Jane ka program kab ban gaya….
Asal mein jab Priya college se ghar lauti toh wo bahut khus thi kionk aj usne Raj ki puri tarah se Baja dali thi wo bhi bina kisi mehnat ke.. Uska toh aj party karne ka mood tha...usne socha k kion na Sonia ko phone kiya jaye aur kahin bahar ghumane jayein….tabhi uske shaitani dimag mein ek toofani Idea aya k kion na Sandy ko bhi sath lekar chalein…Isse ho sakta hai k wo us par aur trust karne lage aur isse Raj ko harane mein asani hogi toh usne Sonia ko phone kiya …Sonia ne bhi phone pick kiya…
Priya: kaisi hai yaar…
Sonia: theek hun tu bata…aur kaise phone kiya…
Priya: yaar phone se phone kiya aur kaise kiya…
Sonia: yaar mera matlab hai kion phone kiya koi kaam hai kya…yah koi project banana hai…
Priya: yaar goli maar project ko…aj ghumne chalte hain…
Sonia: yaar aj tujhe kya huya…vaise main toh tyar hun Jane ko…
Priya: chal thik hai fir…
Sonia: ek kaam karte hain Riya aur Sandy ko bhi le chalte hain….isse Sandy ka mood bhi thik ho jayega jab se ghar aya hai munh latkaye ghum raha hai…
Sonia ne toh Priya ke dil ki baat bol di thi…use aur kya chahiye tha…
Priya: chal thik hai tu un dono ko bhi bol dena main Adhe ghante baad tum logon ko pick karne aungi…tum log tyar rehna…
Sonia: OK thik hai…

Fir Sonia call cut karti hai…Priya se baat karne ke baad Sonia Sandy ke paas gayi….Sandy apne kamre mein kafi udaas sa baitha tha…
Sonia: kya huya sandy aise kion baitha hai…
Sandy: kus nahi hua…bas aise hi…
Sonia: mujhe pata hai k tu Raj ki wajah se udaas hai…hum log bahar ja rahe hain aur Priya ne bola hai k tu bhi chal….
Sandy: yaar tum log jao main kya karunga…
Sonia: tumhara bhi mood thik ho jayega…chalo na hamare sath….

Pehle toh Sandy nahi mana par Sonia ke baar baar Insist karne par wo maan gaya….fir Priya apni gadi se in logon ko pick karne ayi…Asli problem toh tab shuru huyi jab jate waqt Sandy apna phone ghar pe hi bhul gaya….uske Jane ke baad jab Raj ne phone try kiya toh koi response na mila…issi ek galti ke karan yeh sab huya…

Ab dekhte hain k Sandy ka phone na uthana kya rang lata hai ya fir in dono doston ke bich sulah ho jayegi…yah Priya apni khurafation se in dono ke bich darar daal degi…hone ko toh kus bhi ho sakta hai....yeh sab sawalon ke jawab abhi toh mere paas bhi nahi hai…toh yeh sab Janne ke liye bane rahein Dildariyan ke sath.

To be continued.....

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by Ashish120

Bhai Abhi To Update Do....

entertainerjatt

Bhai update tyar hai...aur main update kar bhi raha hun...par ap hi batao ek bhi din aisa ho jab Maine update na diya ho...par agar koi padhe ga hi nahi toh likhne wale ka bhi dil tut jata hai...

Par ek baat ki khusi hai...5-7hi sahi par kus log toh hain Jo meri story padh rahein hain...yeh bhi ho sakta hai k mere likhne mein hi kami ho...

[sarit11]

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[HUNTER]

entertainerjatt

Bhai update tyar hai...aur main update kar bhi raha hun...par ap hi batao ek bhi din aisa ho jab Maine update na diya ho...par agar koi padhe ga hi nahi toh likhne wale ka bhi dil tut jata hai...

Par ek baat ki khusi hai...5-7hi sahi par kus log toh hain Jo meri story padh rahein hain...yeh bhi ho sakta hai k mere likhne mein hi kami ho...

bhai aisa math bolo yaar main apki story padtha hu. aur maine khud apko private message bi kiya tha is story aur besharam ko satart karne ke liye.
main  story padtha hu lakin offline hokar.mere pass na tho phone aur na hi pc ki apko reply bhej saku.main basic phone se padtha hu.aise hi baoth sare log honge jo story offline padthe ha unke liye update dedo bahi please... apka jab update nahi aaya tho main cyber me akar apko reply bhej raha hu.aisa matht shocho ki paki story  kyoi nahi padhtha sub paadh the hai. please continue the story please many of them are waiting. ....

[Eswar P]

Sarit bro super
Please post remaining

[HUNTER]

update dedo bhai please........

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by spxossip
Raj aur priya ki is nokjhok ka maja badhte jaa rha hai..........mast update tha bhai........yaar ab hero ko kuch karna padega khud ko sabit karne ke liye..........aur haa bhai aap cmnts ka tension na lo .........story ke views to dekhiye aap ......wo to badh rhe he na.......rhi cnmts ki baat to kabhi kabhi apne frnds kuch din nhi aa pate threads pe......lekin wo baad me jarur cmnt karenge....aur apne kafi saare silent aur alsi readers bhi hai.......to kahna ka matlab hai ki aap nirash na ho.......xossip pe stories ki ginti bahut badhti jaa rhi hai....aur isme itne views n cnmts pana bahut badi baat hai........aur haa hum to hamesha apke saath bane hai aur rahenge...... So keep it up bro..... story is going brilliantly.....
Eagerly waiting for next .....

entertainerjatt
Thanks bhai....main apki baat samjta hun...par kabhi kabhi lagta hai k main story likh kiske liye raha hun....ab jahan par koi paison ke liye toh likhta nahi hai sab bas isliye likhte hain k unhe pyar mile...par fir bhi ap friends hain Jo roj update padhte hain aur comments dete hain ap logon k liye main likhta rahunga...jyada na sahi kus logon ka pyar mile yeh bhi badi baat hai...

[sarit11]

Update 30

Pichle update mein hamne padha k Sandy Priya aur apni dono behano ke sath bahar ghumne gaya aur apna phone ghar par hi bhul gaya….Raj ne use phone try kiya par usne nahi uthaya toh Sunidhi ke kehne par wo Sandy ke ghar gaya wahan ja kar use Radha se pata chala k Sandy Priya ke sath bahar gaya hai jiske karn Raj kafi gussa huya….

Ab age….
Uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya Raj ne gusse mein Sandy ko dobara phone nahi kiya aur Sandy jab ghar lauta toh usne dekha k Raj ke kafi sare calls aye huye hain…use khusi huyi par kionk raat kafi ho chuki thi toh usne socha k kal college mein hi baat kar lega isliye usne Raj ko call back nahi kiya…

Saturday 4:30am….
Roj ki tarah Raj apne time pe uth gaya…fir fresh hone k baad exercise ki….fir college ke liye tyar huya aur niche dinning table pe chala gaya…wahan uske mummy papa baithe the…usne dono ke pair chuye….
Raj: good morning mom dad…
Raghuveer: good morning beta….
Sunidhi: gud morning Sona…
Raghuveer: beta aur batao tumhari padhayi kaisi chal rahi hai…
Raj: thik chal rahi hai papa….
Raghuveer: chalo achi baat hai …chalo bhai tum nashta karo Maine toh kar liya aj ek jaruri meeting hai toh jaldi Jana padega…
Raj: OK papa bye and good luck…
Raghuveer: Thanks beta….and bye….
Fir Raghuveer wahan se nikal jata hai…aur Raj apna breakfast shuru karta hai…breakfast karne ke baad Raj college Jane ke liye nikalne lagta hai…
Raj: bye mom…
Sunidhi : beta ek mint mujhe kus baat karni hai tujhse…
Raj: mom jaldi bolo late ho raha hai…
Sunidhi: beta mujhe pata hai k tumhare aur Sandy ke beech ki misunderstanding dur nahi huyi hai…tum usse college mein baat kar lena aur thoda pyar se aur apne gusse ko khud par hawi mat hone dena…
Raj(munh khole huye sun raha tha): mom yeh apko kaise pata chala…
Sunidhi(muskurate huye): maa hun teri…tumhari shakal dekh kar hi pata chal jata hai mujhe…ab jao munh fade kya khade ho..ab late nahi ho raha tujhe…
Raj: bye mom…

Fir Raj wahan se nikal jata hai par wo hairan bhi tha aur khus bhi kionk use boht asha lagta hai k uski maa uski har choti badi chij ka khyal rakhti hai…Fir wo apni gadi nikalta hai aur college ke liye nikal jata hai…

College pahunch kar wo apni gadi park karta hai aur ander ki taraf chal padta hai…wo idhar udhar najar ghumata hai toh bahut sare students koi forms uthaye unhe fill kar rahe the…use nahi pata tha k yeh kia ho raha hai wo yeh sab dekh raha tha tabhi uske kandhe par kisi ka hath padta hai…

Raj piche mud kar dekhta hai toh samne Sandy khada tha…wo use dekh kar hairan ho jata hai…jaise pehli baar dekh raha ho…
Sandy: Abe kya hua tu aise kion hairan ho raha hai…
Raj: kus nahi par tu toh mere se gussa tha na…
Sandy: tujhse yeh sab kisne kaha…
Raj: kya matlab…
Sandy: yahi k main tujhse koi naraz nahi hun…
Raj: yaar fir tumne mera phone kion nahi pick kiya kal…
Sandy: yaar main kal phone ghar pe hi bhul gaya tha…mujhe Mami ji ne bata diya tha k tu mujhse Milne aya tha…main bahut khus hun bhai kal toh main dar hi gaya tha k tu mujhse kahin jyada naraz na ho jaye…
Raj: yaar sorry kal mujhe tere sath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha…
Sandy: yaar koi apne bhai ko bhi sorry bolta hai kya…

Fir dono ek dusre se gale milte hain…
Raj: sale par main Teri ache se bajane wala hun…
Sandy: Abe ab kya ho gaya…
Raj: kamine kal tu bahar gaya aur mujhe bataya tak nahi…
Sandy: bhai mujhe laga k tu abhi mujhse naraz hai toh abhi tujhe akela hi chod deta hun…kahin fir se na dhantne lage mujhe…
Raj: chal yaar chod in sab baton ko…yeh bata yeh college mein kya chal raha hai sabhi ke paas yeh form kaise hain…
Sandy: bhai yeh toh apne college mein agle Saturday ko Annual talent competition hai usi k form hain…
Raj: acha toh yeh baat hai…
Sandy: Abe tu kion nahi participate karta…
Raj: abe chod na yaar kya karenge …
Sandy: sale tu bhi na bada ajeeb piece banaya hai bhagban ne…itna handsome hai par ladkion se baat nahi karta…itna acha singer hai par competition mein part nahi leta…
Raj: yaar fir kya hua yeh sab mera shauk hai…mujhe showoff mein koi interest nahi hai…
Sandy: dekh meri baat sun…ek talwar ko agar ab diwar par latkaye rakhoge toh use Jung lag jati hai aur uski dhar kam ho jati hai…isi tarah agar ap apne talent ko apne tak hi rakhoge toh wo dhire dhire khatam ho jayega…
Raj: yaar sochenge is bare mein…par yeh sab lecture chodo aur class mein chalte hain…
Sandy: chalo but jaldi soch lena form submit karne ki last date sirf Monday tak ki hai…
Raj: chalo koi baat nahi…ab chalein…
Sandy: han chal…

Fir dono lecture attend karne chal padte hain…dono class mein enter karte hain toh…dono aj ek dusre se batein karte huye apni seat ki taraf badhte hain…yeh dekh kar Priya ki toh shakal hi badal jati hai…par Sonia Sandy ko khus dekh kar khus hoti hai…Fir Sandy Priya ko hi hello karta hai aur Raj ke sath apni seat par baith jata hai…

Aj Sandy aur Raj ke sabhi lectures bahut maje se nikal rahe the….kionk yaar dono dosto ke bich koi galat fahmi nahi thi….dono ko jab bhi mauka milta gapein hankne lagte…aise hi sabhi lectures nikal gaye aur fir sabhi canteen ki taraf chal pade….aj sab kus pehle jaisa tha…matlab Raj aur Sandy ek alag table par aur Priya and co. Alag table par…par aj ek chij badal gayi thi Raj aur Priya ke chehre ke haaw bhaaw…yahan kal Raj ke chehre pe barah baje huye the toh aj Priya ke chehre pe hawaiyan udhi huyi thi…kal Priya ko Raj ke harne ki khusi thi toh aj Raj ko Priya se jitne ki nahi balki apne dost ke maan Jane ki khusi thi….Priya ke toh Jaise sare nut bolt dheele ho chuke the…
Sonia: yaar Priya aj tera mood kisi gale huye santre(Orange) ki tarah kion lag raha hai…
Riya: yaar di mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai…
Diksha: kya hua apko koi problem hai kya…
Priya: yaar bas karo tum log mai bas competition ko lekar stress mein hun…
Riya: di ismein itni tension ki kya baat hai…competition hai exam thodi na hai…
Priya: yaar main pichli baar ki champion hun…is baar bhi mujhe apna title defend karna hai…
Diksha: han di apki yeh baat toh sahi hai…
Sonia: are kya hua hamari Priya is baar bhi jitegi…
Diksha: di I hope k ap sahi ho…but kya apne us party wali raat Raj ko gate huye nahi suna kya…
Riya: han yaar kitna acha gata hai wo toh…
Sonia: are fir kya hua Priya kisi se kam thode na hai….
Priya ab tak apne ap ko control kar rahi thi par ab uska jawalamukhi fatne wala tha…Sandy ka gussa kahin aur nikalne wala tha…

Priya: yaar ab tum teeno bas karo…aur tum dono(Riya aur Diksha ki tarf ishara karte huye)agar tum dono us Raj ki itni badi fan ho na toh kal se uske table par hi baith Jana…in fact kal se kion abhi se hi kion nahi baith jati uske sath….
Riya: di hamara wo matlab nahi tha….
Diksha: han di hum toh bas apke liye worried the…
Priya: tum dono meri tension mat lo pehle apne apko toh sambhalna seekh jao…aur ab koi baat nahi chup chap apna lunch finish karo…

Priya ki dant sunne ke baad dono bechari garden niche karke apna khana khane lagti hain aur Sonia Priya ki tadap ko ache se samjti thi…use in dono ki halat pe hansi Bhi a rahi thi k kaise is Hitler ne kisi ka gussa un dono pe nikal diya…

Khair sabhi khana finish karte hain aur apne apne ghar ke liye nikal jate hain…..

Toh dosto kya Raj competition mein participate karega …kya Priya Raj ko harane mein kamzab hogi…kya Riya Raj ki ladkion k prati is berukhi ka pata laga payegi aur Sandy Raj aur Monty ki baton se Jude raaz tak pahunch payega…..inki tarah aur bhi kayi sawal aur Raaz hain Jo waqt ane par pata chalega… sabhi sawalon ke jawab janne ke liye Dildariyan ke sath bane rahein….

To be continued…..

[sarit11]

Update 31

Toh pichle update mein hamne padha k Raj aur Sandy k wich mein sari galatfehmian dur ho gayi…aur ab Priya ne yeh soch liya tha k use kisi bhi Kimat par Raj ko competition mein hara kar apna badla lena hoga….par Raj competition mein participate karega ya nahi yeh abhi sure nahi hai…khair college mein aj ka din nikal chuka tha aur sabhi apne apne gharon ki taraf ja chuke the….

Ab age…
Ghar pahunch kar Raj apne kamre mein gaya aur bed par girte hi so gaya…aj wo kafi khus tha uska dost Jo maan gaya tha toh use jaldi hi neend a gayi…

Udhar dusri taraf Priya ka gusse ke karn bura haal tha….wo apne kamre mein bechain si idhar udhar ghum rahi thi…use bas ab is baat ka intzar tha k wo kab Raj ko hara kar apna badla le…use yeh toh samaj a chuka tha k wo Raj aur Sandy ko alag karke is tarike se usse badla nahi le sakti thi ab uske paas talent competition se badiya koi tareeka nahi tha…toh ab use bas competition ki tyari karni thi….

Udhar karib 5:00 baje sham ko Raj utha aur exercise wagerha karke 6:00 baje tak free ho kar hall mein a kar baith gaya…Wo TV dekhne laga tabhi uski mummy uske paas ayi…
Sunidhi: are aj toh janab ka mood bada acha hai…lagta hai k Sandy ke sath problem short out ho gayi…
Raj: han mom Maine use sorry keh diya tha…aur wo maan bhi gaya…
Sunidhi: yeh toh achi baat hai…wo tumhara best friend hai toh tujhse dur kaise reh sakta hai…
Raj: mom ap sahi keh rahi ho…wo mujhe dil se apna manta hai….
Sunidhi: han vaise bhi insan usi ke sath ladta hai jise wo pyar karta hai…
Raj: ab main usse kabhi gusse mein baat nahi karunga…
Sunidhi: achi baat hai k tum apni galti se kus sikhe…

Wo abhi baat kar hi rahe the k tabhi door bell baki…naukar ne gate khola aur Raghuveer ander agaya…

Raghuveer: are wah maa bete mein kya batein ho rahi hain…
Raj: kus nahi papa bas aise hi…ap batao apki meeting kaise rahi…
Raghuveer: meeting toh boht badiya rahi…
Sunidhi: ap dono batein kijiye main thoda room mein ho kar ati hun…

Fir Sunidhi wahan se chali jati hai aur Raghuveer Raj ke paas baith jata hai…

Raghuveer: aur sunao beta padhai kaise chal rahi hai..
Raj: papa achi chal rahi hai…
Raghuveer: mujhe yaad aya k mujhe tere se kus baat karni thi…
Raj: ji dad…
Raghuveer: mere paas aj Sandy ka phone aya tha…
Raj: kion…
Raghuveer: usne mujhe bataya k college mein competition hai…
Raj: han papa…
Raghuveer: aur tum usmein participate nahi kar rahe…
Raj: ji papa main wo soch raha tha…
Raghuveer: ismein sochne ki kya baat hai…tumhe jarur participate karna chahiye…
Raj: ji dad main Monday ko form submit karwa dunga…
Raghuveer: chalo thik hai…

Raj ne han Toh keh di thi kionk wo apne papa ki boht izzat karta tha par use Sandy par bada gussa a raha tha k usne ghar par kion bataya…

Raj: dad main apne room mein ja raha hun…
Raghuveer: thik hai jao….

Raj apne room mein chala gaya aur jate hi sabse pehle Apna phone uthaya aur Sandy ka number dial kiya…Sandy ne phone pick kar liya…

Raj: sale kutte kamine chugalkhor…tere pait mein koi baat nahi pachti kya…
Sandy: are bhai kya hua tujhe itna bhadhak kion raha hai…
Raj: sale kamine tujhe toh Jaise kus pata hi nahi hai…
Sandy: kya hua hai tujhe…
Raj: tune dad ko phone karke bataya k main college competition mein participate nahi kar raha hun…
Sandy: toh yeh baat hai….bhai dekh main tera dost hun toh tere bhale ke liye hi kiya hai maine aisa…
Raj: sale dost hai toh dost banke reh na baap kion ban raha hai…
Sandy: chal yaar chod tu yeh bata tune uncle ko kya kaha…
Raj: ab main kya kehta keh diya hai k main Monday ko form submit kar dunga…
Sandy: yeh toh badi achi baat hai…main abhi aya tere ghar…
Raj: kion ab kya hua…
Sandy: yaar main form le aya tha tum fill kar dena fir Monday ko submit kar denge…
Raj: sale tu toh sab kus pehle se Sochi baitha hai…
Sandy: bhai mujhe pata tha k tu uncle ki baat nahi talega…
Raj: tu boht bada kamina hai…
Sandy: bhai kya karein kalyug hai…kamina banna padta hai…chal ab phone rakh main aya tere paas form leke…
Raj: chal thik hai tu a main Teri tangein tod dunga aj…

Fir Raj phone kaat deta hai aur bed par baith kar apna laptop on karke videos dekhne lagta hai…

Karib adhe ghante baad uske door par knock hota hai…Raj uth kar door open karta hai…Samne Sandy khada tha…
Raj: ander aja…
Sandy Jaise hi ander ata hai Raj use bed par gira deta hai aur uske upar baith kar uske pait mein Marne lagta hai…

Sandy: bhai chod de mujhe jaan se marega kya…
Raj: sale man toh mera tujhe Marne ka hi kar raha hai par fir bhi tu mera dost hai toh teri tangein hi todunga…
Sandy: bhai yaar chod de bas kar main hath jodta hun…age se aisa kus nahi karunga…
Raj Sandy ko chod deta hai aur side mein baith jata hai…
Raj: sale age se tune agar koi aisi harkat ki na toh soch lena …
Sandy: bhai thik hai abhi Toh tu form pakad aur fill kar…

Sandy Raj ko ek form deta hai aur Raj use fill karne lagta hai..form fill karne ke baad Sandy khada ho jata hai…
Sandy: bhai main ab chalta hun…
Raj: Abe baith na thodi der tujhe kon sa khana pakana hai ghar Jake…
Sandy: bhai agar late ho gaya toh gharwale tension lenge…toh abhi main jata hun…kal ko milte hain…
Raj: sale kal ko Sunday hai…
Sandy: toh Sunday ko konsa hum mil nahi sakte…chal kal ko koi movie dekh ke ate hain…
Raj: chal thik hai…main tujhe phone karke bata dunga aur fir tujhe pick bhi kar lunga…
Sandy: chal thik hai…ab main chalta hun…
Raj: OK bhai…

Fir Sandy wahan se chala gaya aur Raj bhi niche hall mein chala gaya…wahan Priya aur Sunidhi batein kar rahi thi toh Raj wahan na ruk kar bahar chala aya aur Garden mein tehlane laga…uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya…aur dinner karke sabhi so Gaye….

Toh dosto Raj ne form toh fill kar diya ab dekhte hain k age kya kya hota hai….main ek din update nahi de paya uske liye main ap sabhi se maafi mangta hun…aur ap sabhi jo pyar is story ko de rahe ho uske liye thanks…aur aise hi Dildariyan ke sath bane rahein…

To be continued….

[sarit11]

Update 32

Sunday subah 4:30 am
Raj apne roj ke time pe uth gaya aur fresh ho kar exercise ki….fir nahane ke baad niche hall mein chala gaya aj college toh Jana nahi tha toh wo wahan baith kar TV dekhne laga…itne mein Sunidhi wahan a gayi…

Raj: good morning mom…
Sunidhi: good morning beta…
Raj: mom main aj movie dekhne ja raha hun…
Sunidhi: yeh toh achi baat hai...Sandy bhi ja raha hai kya tumhare sath…
Raj: han mom…han sach mujhe yaad aya k mujhe use phone karna tha…
Sunidhi: chal thik hai tu phone karle tab tak breakfast lag jayega…

Fir Raj apne room mein gaya aur Sandy ko call kiya…Sandy ne call nahi uthaya...Raj ne fir try kiya fir se koi response nahi aya…Raj ne kayi baar try kiya par samne se Sandy ne phone nahi uthaya…Raj kafi preshan ho gaya toh usne uske ghar ke phone par call karne ki sochi usne number milaya toh kisi ne pick kiya aur kisi ladki ki awaj ayi…

Ladki: hlo…ji kon…
Raj: ji main Raj bol raha hun kya ap meri baat Sandy se karwa sakte hain…

Jaise hi samne wali ladki ne Raj ka naam suna toh uske toh hosh hi udhar gaye…ji han kayi readers samaj gaye honge k phone pick karne wala koi aur nahi balki Sonia hi thi…Toh huya kus yun k jab Raj ne phone kiya toh Sonia aur Riya Hall mein baithi thi…aur phone ki ring sun kar Sonia ne phone uthaya…par Jaise hi use pata chala k Raj baat kar raha hai toh uski kus samaj mein nahi aya aur wo phone kaat kar ander ki taraf bhagi….

Yeh baat Riya ko badi ajeeb lagi…usne socha k koi awara ladka hoga jo badtamiji kar raha hoga isliye Sonia ne aisa react kiya….par Raj ko laga k kahin wrong number na lag gaya ho…usne ek baar fir se number check kiya….number toh sahi tha toh usne socha sayad cut gaya hoga toh usne duwara call kiya aur Is baar phone Riya ne pick kiya …use laga phir se wahin ladka hoga…toh usne socha k abhi uski khabar leti hun…

Riya: hlo kon bol raha hai…kion preshan kar rahe ho…
Raj: I am sorry …par Maine socha k yeh mere friend Sandy ke ghar ka number hai…
Riya(thoda hairan hote huye): kon hain ap…
Raj: ji mera naam Raj hai…main fir se maafi chahta hun apko preshan karne ke liye…

Riya ko apni galti ka ahsas ho chuka tha…par use Sonia ke is tarah baghne ka karan samaj nahi a raha tha…
Riya: I am really Sorry Raj main Riya bol rahi hun…kya pehle bhi tumne hi call kiya tha…
Raj: han par tum aise kion bhadki mujh par Maine toh socha k wrong number lag gaya…
Ab Riya kya bolti toh usne apni galti cover karne ki kosish ki…

Riya: yaar sorry par koi ladka baar baar preshan kar raha tha isliye Maine bina soche samjhe yeh sab bol diya…
Raj ne baat ko jyada lamba nahi khincha…
Raj: asal mein mujhe Sandy se baat karni thi…wo apna phone nahi utha raha tha toh ghar ke number par laga liya…
Riya: han wo so raha hai…main use utha deti hun aur keh dungi k tumhe call karle…
Raj: thanks…bye Riya..
Riya: bye and sorry again…
Raj: its OK…

Fir Raj ne phone kaat diya…Raj ko toh tasali ho gayi k Sandy se baat ho jayegi par Riya boht jyada bechain thi k Sonia ne aise react kion kiya….use boht ajeeb laga…usne socha k wo Sonia se baat karegi…par pehle Sandy ko utha de…yeh soch kar wo Sandy k room mein chali gayi…Sandy door lock nahi karta tha toh Riya ander chali gayi Sandy so raha tha…

Riya: bhaiya…uth jao 8 baj gaye hain…
Sandy(neend mein): abhi sone de na Riya aj konsa college Jana hai…
Riya: bhaiya Raj ka phone aya tha bol raha tha tumse baat karni hai…

Raj ka naam sunte hi Sandy ki neend pata nahi kahan ud gayi wo jhat se uth kar baith gaya…
Riya: kya hua aise kion uth gaye koi bura sapna dekh liya kya…
Sandy: yaar kus mat puch Ab wo khadoos meri class lagayega…tune mujhe pehle kion nahi uthaya…
Riya: main kion uthati mujhe laga ap khud hi uth jayenge….

Sandy ne kus nahi kaha aur bhagta huya washroom mein gaya…Riya bhi bahar chali gayi… Sandy brush wagerha kar ke bahar aya tab tak Riya bhi uske liye chay lekar a gayi…

Riya: bhai yeh lo apki chai…
Sandy: yahan table pe rakh de…
Riya: bhai kya hua Raj ne apse kya baat karni hai…
Sandy: aj hamein movie dekhne Jana tha Maine use kaha tha k mujhe phone karke bata dena k mujhe kab pick karega but main sota hi raha…
Riya: wow bhai main bhi chalun…
Sandy (jaldbaji mein): ok
Riya: OK toh tum chay pio…mai Di ko puch kar ati hun usko bhi le chalenge….
Sandy: Ok

Fir Riya baghti huyi Sonia ke room mein pahunch jati hai…wahan Sonia abhi bhi thodi ghabrayi si baithi thi…Riya ne yeh dekh liya tha par use you movie ka bukhar chada tha toh usne Sonia se baat kar hi li…
Riya: di main Raj aur Sandy ke sath movie dekhne ja rahi hun ap bhi chalo na…
Sonia pehle se hi preshan thi upar se Riya use Raj ke sath chalne ko bol rahi thi…
Sonia (gusse mein): mujhe kahin nahi Jana tu bhag yahan se…
Riya: par di…
Sonia: Maine kaha na tujhe ja yahan se…
Sonia ki itni rude baton se Riya ko boht dukh pahuncha uski ankhon se ansoo nikalne lage aur wo wahan se bhagti huyi apne room mein chali gayi…

Sonia ne jab Riya ki ankhon mein ansoo dekhe toh use boht bura laga aur use apni galti ka ahsas ho gaya…use samaj mein a gaya k usne over react kar diya hai par usne socha k baad mein Riya se maafi mang legi…

Udhar Sandy ne chai khatam karte hi Raj ko call back kiya Raj ne phone jaldi hi pick kar liya aur utni hi jaldi Sandy par baras pada…
Raj: sale kumbhkaran ki aulab…uth gaya
Sandy: bhai sorry yaar Maine socha aj Sunday hai toh thodi der aur so jaun…
Raj: fir utha kion kamine leta reh aur main paglon ki tarah tujhe phone karta rahunga…
Sandy: bhai sorry yaar…galti toh insan se hoti hai na…
Raj: han par kya tujhe lagta hai k tu insan hai…sale tu wo sand hai Jo Sara din kha peekar Raat ko ghode bech kar so jata hai…
Sandy: bhai ab gussa thuk do…
Raj: man toh karta hai k tere munh par hi thuk dun par fir sochta hun sale mera dost hai jab gale lagega toh meri shirt gandi ho jayegi…
Sandy: wah bhai apni shirt ki fikar hai…
Raj: yaar chal tujhe maaf kiya par main adhe ghante baad tujhe pick karne aunga agar tyar nahi huya toh dekh Lena kya hal karunga tera…
Sandy: OK boss main pehle hi tyar ho jaunga bas tum late mat ho Jana…
Raj: main late nahi hounga….
Sandy: ok bhai main tyar ho jaun…

Fir Raj ne phone kaat diya aur Sandy Riya ke kamre ki taraf chal pada use batane ke Raj adhe ghante baad ayega....Sandy ne Riya ke kamre mein jakar dekha Toh Riya bed par laiti huyi thi…
Sandy: kya hua Riya tum aise kion laiti huyi ho…
Riya(juth bolte huye): bhai thoda headache hai…
Sandy: toh chalo doctor ke paas ho ate hain…
Riya: nahi bhai itna nahi hai….Maine pain killer le li hai aram karungi toh thik ho jayega…ap jao apko Raj ke sath Jana hai na…
Sandy: chal thik hai main toh tujhe batane aya tha...but ab tum aram karo…

Fir Sandy wahan se wapis apne kamre mein chala gaya aur tyar hone laga….udhar Sonia apni pyari behan sa maafi mangne ke liye uske kamre ki taraf chal padi…use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k wo Riya se kaise mafi mange kya excuse de….par fir bhi wo himmat juta kar Riya ke kamre ki taraf chal padi aur usne Door kholne ke liye hath utha liya…

Toh dosto ab yeh toh ane wale waqt mein hi pata chalega k kya Sonia ka is tarah react karna uski sabse badi galti hogi kya is galti ki wajah se uska aur Priya ka barson purana raaz sabke samne a jayega…kya Riya ye pata laga payegi….toh sawal kafi hain par jawab waqt ke paas hi hai…aur in sab jawabon ko janne ke liye Dildariyan ko isi tarah pyar dete rahiye….

To be continued…..

[sarit11]

Update 33

Fir Sandy wahan se wapis apne kamre mein chala gaya aur tyar hone laga….udhar Sonia apni pyari behan sa maafi mangne ke liye uske kamre ki taraf chal padi…use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k wo Riya se kaise mafi mange kya excuse de….par fir bhi wo himmat juta kar Riya ke kamre ki taraf chal padi aur usne Door kholne ke liye hath utha liya…

Ab age…
Jaise hi Sonia ne door khola toh dekha k Riya ander apne bed par laiti huyi hai…aur usne apne chehre par pillow rakha huya hai…Sonia apni himmat bandh kar uske karib chali gayi aur Riya ke bed pe uske sir ke paas baith gayi aur uske sir par hath phirane lagi…

Sonia: Riya….
Riya ne koi jawab nahi diya…
Sonia: choti mujhe maaf karde...main boht buri hun mujhse galti ho gayi….mujhe koi haq hi nahi tere se is tarah baat karne ka…
Sonia ki baat se Riya ka dil pighal gaya…wo apni badi Behan se boht pyar karti thi isiliye yeh Haq wali baat seedha uske dil mein lagi…Riya ne apna chehra Sonia ki taraf kiya toh dekha k Sonia ki ankhon mein ansoo the…Riya ne jhat se uth kar Sonia ko gale laga liya…

Riya: di ap kaisi baat kar rahi hain apka mujh par pura haq hai…balki galti toh meri hai maine itna bura mana apki baat ka…
Sonia(Riya ke balon mein hath pherte huye): nahi meri gudiya tum bura mat mano…mujhe tujhe dantna nahi chahiye tha…main bas thoda preshan thi isliye maine itna over react kiya…
Riya( Sonia se alag hote huye): di kya preshani hai ap mujhe bataiye…main chutki mein dur kar dungi…
Sonia: kus khas nahi hai…tum aram karo....
Riya: par ap bataiye toh sahi…
Sonia: dekho jidd nahi karte…meri baat nahi manogi tum…
Riya: ji didi…

Vaise toh Riya boht kus puchna chahti thi khas kar wo phone wali baat par wo Sonia ko jyada pareshan nahi karna chahti thi toh usne age koi sawal nahi kiya aur Sonia ki god mein sir rakh lait gayi…Dono behano ke man mein uthal puthal machine huyi thi par dono ise bahar nahi ane dena chahti thin…

Riya ke man mein yeh baat baar baar a rahi thi k aisi konsi pareshani hai Jo Sonia use nahi bata rahi…kahin Raj ne toh kus nahi kaha…par use Raj ke bare mein itna toh yakeen tha k wo bura insan nahi hai…fir Sonia ko kya hua Jo wo us phone se itna pareshan ho gayi…khair iska pata lagana itna asan nahi tha…toh us waqt ke liye Riya ne yeh khyal apne dimag se nikal diya…

Udhar Sandy tyar ho chuka tha Raj ne use phone karke bahar bula liya aur wo chala gaya fir dono movie ke liye nikal gaye...wahan pahunch kar Sandy ne tickets liye aur Raj popcorn aur cold drinks le kar ander chale gaye….apni seat par baith kar dono popcorn khate huye movie dekhne lage….Movie kafi achi thi toh dono maje se dekh rahe the…movie dekhne ke baad dono abhi bahar nikle hi the k Raj ko ek bada jhatka laga yeh jhatka Sandy ne diya…

Sandy: oye Raj wo dekh Isha…
Raj ne Jaise hi Sandy ke ishare ka picha kiya toh samne Isha khadi thi uski najar Jaise hi Raj se mili toh uski ankhon mein ek chamak a gayi…par Raj ke chehre par gusse aur hairani ke mile jule bhaw the…Sandy toh kafi khus lag raha tha….
Sandy: chal usse milkar ate hain…
Raj kus nahi bola aur aise hi khada raha…
Sandy: chal na aise kya khada hai…
Raj: yaar late ho raha hai…ghar chalte hain…
Sandy: ek saal baad mili hai wo toh bina mile nahi jayenge…chal na hamein konsa koi kam hai…

Is baar Sandy ne Raj ke jawab ka intzar nahi kiya aur lagbhag Raj ko khinchta huya Isha ki taraf chal pada…Raj Jana toh nahi chahta tha par Sandy ko mana karta toh wo sau sawal karta isliye usne kus nahi bola dusri taraf Jaise Jaise Wo dono Isha ki taraf badh rahe the Toh vaise vaise Isha ki dadhkne tez ho rahi thi…Akhir ek saal pure ek saal baad wo apne sabse azeej dost se Milne wali thi…uski ankhein khusi se chamak rahi thin…Wo bhi apne haule kadmo ke sath in dono ki taraf chal padi…paas pahunchte hi…Isha ne Raj ko apne gale laga liya…par Raj ne koi response nahi kiya wo toh bas aise hi khada raha…Par Isha ko is baat se koi faraq nahi pada wo toh bas Raj ke gale lag ke apni puri jindgi gujarna chahti thi…wo toh acha huya k Sandy Isha ko is duniya mein wapis le aya…

Sandy: hlo madam yahan aur bhi koi hai….
Isha(Raj se alag hote huye):toh unki bhi bari ayegi…
Isha ne Sandy ko bhi gale lagaya aur fir alag ho gayi…
Sandy: yaar kahan chali gayi thi tum pure ek saal baad mili ho aur bataya bhi nahi…
Isha: yaar main apni bhua ke paas Delhi chali gayi thi wahan ek company mein job lag gayi thi Maine kayi baar phone bhi karne ki kosish ki par tumhara number kho gaya aur Raj ka number lag hi nahi raha tha…. aur ab mera transfer Mumbai mein ho gaya…mujhe nahi pata tha k tum dono bhi Mumbai a gaye ho…
Sandy: han wo Raj ki mom ne ise bapis bula liya toh main bhi iske sath hi a gaya…
Isha: chalo achi baat hai aur sunao kya haal chal hai…
Sandy: main toh ekdum fit hun tum batao…
Isha: main bhi thik hun pehle Jaise…
Sandy: are kahan tum toh ab pehle se bhi khubsurat ho chuki ho…
Isha( Sandy ke Halka sa marte huye): tum na kabhi nahi sudhro ge…chalo chodo Raj tum batao kaise ho…
Raj(bujhe man se): thik hun…
Isha: yaar kya hua naraz ho kya koi baat bhi nahi kar rahe...
Sandy: yaar tum toh ise ache se janti ho…yeh baat karta kab hai…
Isha: han yeh toh hai…kion na hum kisi restaurant mein chalein baith kar batein karenge…
Sandy: sorry yaar ishu asal mein aj mujhe ghar pe ek kaam hai…toh abhi toh mujhe ghar Jana hoga…
Isha: chalo koi baat nahi fir milte hain abhi Toh main Mumbai mein hi hun…
Sandy: OK yaar…
Isha: OK bye…

Jate jate Sandy ne apna number Isha ko diya….Fir wo dono wahan se apni gadi ke paas chal pade Sandy boht khus tha Isha se milkar par Raj aur Isha ke man mein alag se bhaw tha…Raj ka toh dimag gusse se phata ja raha tha par Isha kus soch rahi thi k akhir Raj aise kion kar raha hai…jabki pehle toh wo usse boht sari batein karta tha…aj toh wo uski taraf dekh bhi nahi raha tha…use yeh baat ajeeb lagi…par fir yeh soch kar ke sayad is liye naraz ho k wo bina bataye chali gayi….Isha bhi wahan se nikal padi….

Raj ne raste mein koi jyada baat nahi ki aur chup chap Sandy ko uske ghar drop karke apne ghar ki taraf nikal pada…ghar pahunchte hi Raj apne kamre mein gaya wo kafi gusse mein tha aur apne ap se hi batein kiye ja raha tha…
Raj: ab yeh kion ayi wapis meri jindagi mein akhir kya chahti hai ab yeh….main use apne samne bardast nahi kar sakta…par kya karun….han Sandy ko sab kus bata deta hun…

Raj ne Sandy ko phone karne ke liye phone uthaya hi tha k tabhi Uske phone par kisi unknown number se call aya Raj ne phone pick kiya…

Raj: hlo kon…
Samne se: main Isha bol rahi hun…
Raj(gusse mein): tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhe phone karne ki…agar tumne dobara phone kiye Toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga…
Isha(hairani se): Raj akhir huya kya hai tumhe aise kion batein kar rahe ho…mujhe pehle hi shaq tha k tum mujhse naraj ho par kion…
Raj: naraz nahi nafrat karta hun main tujhse…itni jyada k man toh chahta hai k tujhe jaan se maar dun par fir sochta hun k kahin duniya se dosti hi na mar jaye…

Yeh keh kar Raj ne phone kaat diya uske chehre par shanti thi sayad is baat ki k usne apni bhadas nikal li…par Isha ka bura haal tha use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k Raj kaisi batein kar raha hai…uske kaan mein bas yahin line ghum rahi thi( naraz nahi nafrat karta hun main tujhse…itni jyada k man toh chahta hai k tujhe jaan se maar dun par fir sochta hun k kahin duniya se dosti hi na mar jaye…)par use kus nahi pata tha k Raj ne yeh sab kion kaha…usmein itni himmat nahi bachi thi k wo Raj ko dobara phone kar paye…

Raj ka gussa toh kam ho gaya tha par use samaj nahi a raha tha k Isha ko uska number mila kaise….use kus yaad aya k Sandy ne apna number use diya tha sayad usne hi mera number diya hoga…Par wo Sandy par gussa nahi tha kionk use pata tha k Sandy ko kus pata nahi tha k Akhir ek Saal pehle kya hua…ab kya hua yeh toh sayad Raj hi janta hai…ab usse hi pata chalega k huya kya…

Toh dosto Maine Ap logon ki baton ko dhyan mein rakhte huye is update mein Raj ki daily ki faltu batein nahi dali…aur ek incident ko bhi pura likha…par agar abhi bhi mujhse koi kami reh gayi ho toh plz maaf kar dijiyega aur apne sujhab jarur dena….

To be continued…..

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by Shalvi1992
Wow kya update the. Raj or sandy ke misunderstanding and Priya ke khushi ke usne Raj ko fir se hara diya. Ab or maja aayega story mai. Dekhna h aage kya hota h. But in dono ke bich kuch karo or ye collage compition ke bich mai start ho apne apne ego ke karan ye kuch aage abhi na badhe to or maja aayega. Waise thankx meri baat rakh kar collage compition ka idea dalne ka wo bhi itni jaldi. Waiting for next. I'm very exited for next update soon as possible. Thode bade update pls

entertainerjatt
Thanks.... Vaise apki sabhi baton ka khyal.rakhunga.... Yahan tak ho saka kosish karunga k story interesting bana...

[sarit11]

Update 34

Raj ka gussa toh kam ho gaya tha par use samaj nahi a raha tha k Isha ko uska number mila kaise….use kus yaad aya k Sandy ne apna number use diya tha sayad usne hi mera number diya hoga…Par wo Sandy par gussa nahi tha kionk use pata tha k Sandy ko kus pata nahi tha k Akhir ek Saal pehle kya hua…ab kya hua yeh toh sayad Raj hi janta hai…ab usse hi pata chalega k huya kya…

Ab age…
Toh uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya
Monday wale din Raj apne roj ke time utha rojana ke kaam kiya aur nashta karke college ke liye nikal pada…college pahunchte hi gadi park karke ander gaya toh Sandy wahin khada tha sayad usi ka wait kar raha tha….

Sandy: hi bhai kaisa hai….

Raj: ek dum fit tu bata…

Sandy: main bhi badiya hun….main tumhara hi wait kar raha tha chal form submit kar dete hain…

Raj: han chal bhai…

Fir dono us office ki taraf chal padte hain yahan form submit karna tha wahan kafi lambi line lagi huyi thi Raj bhi usi line mein lag gaya….Par ek sakhs aisa aya Jo tufaan ki tarah line ko todta huya seedha window par pahunch gaya yahan form submit ho rahe the….par kisi ne kus nahi kaha yeh koi aur nahi balki Priya hi thi…Raj ne jab yeh dekha k Priya baki sab ki fikar kiye bina apni marji kar rahi hai toh use bada gussa aya…par wo Priya se koi baat nahi karna chahta tha isliye wo kus nahi bola aur chup chap wahin khada raha….dhire dhire uski bhi bari a gayi…Raj ne apna form samne baithe sakhs ko pakdaya…Us sakhs ne Jaise hi Form par padha Raj Sinha S/o Raghuveer Sinha…toh wo apni seat se khada ho gaya…

Sakhs: apne pehle kion nahi bataya k ap Sinha sahib ke bete ho…aur ap ko line mein lagne ki kya jarurat…

Raj(bade sapat lehje mein): dekhiye main Mr. Sinha ka beta ghar par hun par yahan main ek student hun toh jo adhikar baki Students ke hain wahin mere hain….

Sakhs: Maine ap jaise insan boht kam dekhe hain nahi toh yahan jitne bhi bade gharon ke bache padhne ate hain wo hum par hukum chalte hain…

Raj: chalo har ek ka apna tareeka hota hai….kya ab ap mera form submit karenge mera friend mera wait kar raha hai...

Sakhs: sure…

Fir usne Raj ka form submit kar diya aur Raj Sandy ke paas chala gaya Jo uska wait kar raha tha…fir dono class ki taraf chal pade…wahan par dono apni seat par baithe lectures attend kiye aur Fir canteen ki taraf chal pade…wahan unka samna Monty se huya….

Monty: hlo bhai kaise ho tum dono…

Raj: thik hain…

Raj aur Monty ki batein sunne ke baad Sandy ki Monty se pehli mulakat thi isliye Sandy ke man mein kafi batein chal rahi thi….khas kar wo Monty ko kaise treat kare…
Monty: chal baith kar kus khate hain…

Raj: chal…

Fir wo teeno table par ja ker baith jate hain…Sandy nahi chahte tha k Raj ko shak ho k wo Monty aur uske past ke bare mein jan gaya hai…isliye wo normal hone ki kosish kar raha tha…

Sandy: are yaar kahan raha tu itne din…

Monty: yaar puch mat papa ne ek kaam mein fansa diya tha…usi ko pura karte karte do teen din lag gaye…

Sandy: acha vaise tu annual competition mein participate kar raha hai yah nahi…

Monty: bhai competition mein participate wo log karte hain jinmein koi talent ho….mujhme toh koi talent hai nahi…tu bata…

Sandy: yaar mujhme talent Toh boht sare hain…par wo is competition mein nahi hain…

Raj: han Jaise ladkian tadna…

Raj ki baat sun kar Monty Hans padta hai par Sandy ki jal jati hai...

Sandy: Abe sale apne dost ki thodi toh izzat rakh le…vaise tujhse toh acha hun…agar mere mein koi talent hota toh main sabse pehle form submit karta…na k Teri tarah k minatein karke participate karwao…

Monty: han yar Raj tu toh bada acha gata hai…main toh tujhe vote karne wala hun...

Sandy: yaar isme voting ka kya kaam….yahan Toh judge honge na…

Monty: yaar pehle toh audition honge fir 20 Contestant select honge….fir top 10 aur last mein top three….yahan tak toh judges hi decision lenge…but top three Rankings ke liye voting hogi…College ke students aur staff aur Jo bhi dekhne ayega unko ek slip di jayegi…wo us slip par naam likhega aur fir ek ghanta baad result announce hoga…

Sandy: yaar yeh toh locha ho gaya…maine suna hai Priya last baar ki champion hai aur vaise bhi hum Toh naye hain…toh jyada voting toh usi ke liye hogi….

Raj ko jab yeh pata chala k Priya last baar ki Champion hai toh use toh Priya se badla lene ka ek golden chance mil gaya….

Raj: yaar Sandy tu tension mat le agar Maine jyada acha gaya to mujhe bhi votes milegi…

Monty: yaar tum log fikar mat karo tum log naye ho par main toh nahi…main tum logon ke sath hun…

Yeh bol kar Monty ne apna hath age badaya…thoda soch ke Sandy aur Raj ne bhi apna hath uske hath par rakh diya…Raj ne toh is liye kionk pata nahi kion use lag raha tha k ab Monty badal gaya hai….aur Sandy ne is liye kionk wo chahta tha k Raj ka support system strong ho…

Monty: ab bhai tum log tension mat Lena bas apni performance par dhyan dena main Sandy ke sath milkar sab sambhal lunga….

Raj: OK bhai ab toh hum hi yeh competition jitenge…

Sandy: bhai trophy ke sath pehle pic main social media par upload karunga…

Raj: chup sala shaikchili ki aulad…

Fir teeno Hans pade…..us din un teeno ne Milkar lunch kiya aur boht sari batein bhi ki…

Udhar Priya aur co. Bhi competition ki baton mein hi lagi huyi thi….

Riya: Priya di apne form submit kar diya…

Priya: han aj subah hi kar diya tha…

Sonia: ab tum ache se apni dance practice karna…is baar bhi tumhe hi jeetna hai…

Priya: fikar mat karo main apna title nahi chodne wali…par agar Riya aur Diksha kisi aur ko vote na karein toh…

Priya ka ishara kis aur tha yeh sab samaj gaye the Priya ki baat par Sonia Hans padi aur Riya aur Diksha ne apni garden niche kar li…

Diksha: di Maine toh apke liye competition mein participate bhi nahi kiya aur ap kaise batein kar rahi hain…

Riya: han di apko kya lagta hai k hum dono apse jyada kisi aur ke bare mein sochenge…

Priya: yaar main toh majak kar rahi hun aur Maine diksha ka form submit kar diya hai…wo bhi competition mein participate karegi…

Diksha(hairani se): par di Maine toh form faink diya tha…

Priya: Riya ne utha liya tha usne mujhe puri baat batayi toh maine tumhara Form submit kar diya…

Diksha: par di main apke samne kaise...

Priya: dekh yaar agar meri jagah tum jeet gayi toh bhi trophy toh hamare group mein hi ayegi na….vaise yeh mat soch Lena k main tumhe jitne dungi…

Priya ki baat sun kar Diksha uske gale lag gayi….

Diksha: thanks di…

Priya: pagal di bhi bolti hai aur thanks bhi…chal ab chod mujhe aur khana khatam kar fir ghar chalte hain….

Fir Diksha alag ho gayi aur sabhi apna lunch khatam karke apne apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye….Raj Monty aur Sandy bhi….

Toh dosto Aj Ka din college mein Dildariyan k naam raha yahan nayi dosti huyi toh wahin purani dosti nibhayi gayi…ab yeh Dildariyan age chal kar is story mein kya bhumika ada karengi aur kya kya twist lengi yeh toh waqt hi batayega….toh bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath…apka apna entertainer JATT….

To be continued……