[Tunkai]

will read it and  update, my comments...

Ok

[Midhun0203]

Fantastic writing. Eagerly waiting for next part

[Tunkai]

Fantastic writing. Eagerly waiting for next part

Thank you sir for appriciation

[abcturbine]

Densely hot.....
Amazing.....
Dick blasting....( I never uses such words...But your erotica forced me to do so......)
Thanks for writing......
Thanks a Ton.....

[Tunkai]

Densely hot.....
Amazing.....
Dick blasting....( I never uses such words...But your erotica forced me to do so......)
Thanks for writing......
Thanks a Ton.....

Thank you very much sir for the appriciation.
But if you followed then you would have noticed that I also used to avoid these words. But as I said, this part is actually written by Mahmoodvale sirs reference. And with his reference I write it in hindi and English both. And uses these words.
So please give thanks and a big round of applause to Mahmoodvale Sir.

[veenaimo]

https://i.redd.it/rdkd80ww1sr91.jpg

I am not understanding how gamcha is worn by Purva, is it like this ?

[Tunkai]

https://i.redd.it/rdkd80ww1sr91.jpg

I am not understanding how gamcha is worn by Purva, is it like this ?

Yes you are absolutely right. I've described it. But the Gamcha is more thin and narrow. And that's why Purva's body was more exposed.

[veenaimo]

abcd 2 movie images

[devsh]

yr): clp);

[Tunkai]

yr): clp);

[Tunkai]

abcd 2 movie images

Thanks for the appropriate pic. I couldn't find any pic with Gamcha. But  you fulfill this with towel. 

[veenaimo]

Thanks for the appropriate pic. I couldn't find any pic with Gamcha. But  you fulfill this with towel. 

For writing a this kind of story, if i can be of any small help, then I feel its great.

[Tunkai]

For writing a this kind of story, if i can be of any small help, then I feel its great.

Thanks again. But you've said that you will comment after reading. Still didn't get that comments

[veenaimo]

Thanks again. But you've said that you will comment after reading. Still didn't get that comments

Yeah i have read... as usual the update was awsome... only thing is in some places the translation in english was not available.. still i could able to make it... but for that its a awesome update.. 

Hira and Bira are like heroes of the part.... i want to see them keep coming in the story..

[Midhun0203]

When will be next part bro. We all are eagerly waiting.

[Tunkai]

When will be next part bro. We all are eagerly waiting.

Within 3-4 days. Maybe earlier

[Tunkai]

Yeah i have read... as usual the update was awsome... only thing is in some places the translation in english was not available.. still i could able to make it... but for that its a awesome update.. 

Hira and Bira are like heroes of the part.... i want to see them keep coming in the story..

It's really difficult to write in both language at the same time.

[veenaimo]

It's really difficult to write in both language at the same time.

ok.. what about bira and hira.. we get to see them again.. ?

[Tunkai]

ok.. what about bira and hira.. we get to see them again.. ?

The village part gonna be very complicated for me to write. I've to follow old authors path. That part would take long. But I think I would be able to create some plot with them.

[veenaimo]

by today we can expect next update?