08-02-2023, 06:14 PM
superb short update...
Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter
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08-02-2023, 06:34 PM
Thank you for the update
08-02-2023, 08:21 PM
(08-02-2023, 02:54 AM)Bookkeeper Wrote: Hello everyone, Thanks for support. It was a small update. These days little busy. I had written few more chapters as well with Devika and Vishnu carrying out the plan, but unfortunately it got deleted. Now I have the tedious task of rewriting those and it is very boring to rewrite everything. so instead if you guys have interesting idea or suggestion for the next chapters I can write fresh. I thinking vishnu coming with a plan both Vishnu and devika can carry out to escape from the blackmails from Rahim. Let me know if you guys have any ideas which I can use to develop. If there is something. Pls message privately. Thanks again for all the support Suggestions sent on private message
11-02-2023, 08:31 AM
An ad shoot at river bank t o destroy camera and mobiles, game like kabbadi to keep ramu and rahim away from mobile
13-02-2023, 08:25 AM
Excellent narration
Waiting for the next update
13-02-2023, 02:30 PM
wast of time
16-02-2023, 01:47 PM
It has been more than a week
Please give us the new update on the story Eagerly waiting and worthy to have.
17-02-2023, 11:49 AM
Please update
18-02-2023, 02:17 PM
Missing your writings so much....
24-02-2023, 04:55 PM
Kindly update....
27-02-2023, 03:16 PM
Waiting.....
03-03-2023, 06:02 PM
Update please
04-03-2023, 11:31 AM
Please give updates
06-03-2023, 10:51 PM
Was busy these days, will try to give update soon.
07-03-2023, 12:59 AM
Giving a small update, this is all I could right till. Giving a build up for next chapters
†***********************""""***"""""""""************ Devika - so whats our plan? Vishnu - okay. First of all inorder for this plan to work out. I would need full corporation from you and trust me Devika - yes, I will do as you say. I just want to somehow finish this and be happy again Vishnu - okay. So this is the plan As far as they have those videos and clips , they are going to blackmail you with it Devika - yes Vishnu - so we have to get those videos somehow and delete it. If we do that , then dont have to worry about anything Devika - but how? Vishnu - thats where the plan comes in. We have to get them away from their phones and laptop. i know rahim is having a phone and laptop. So if we are able to get them away from their gadgets. Then we somehow access it and delete to those. Devika - again how can we get them away from it? Vishnu - madam, there is a resort known as ," Nature village". The special thing about that resort is technology is banned there. People would have to keep their phones, laptops locked in a locker during the visit to that resort. People come there to enjoy the nature and village and be away from all the technological things Devika - ok Vishnu - so we have to bring them to that resort and get their gadgets locked. My friends father runs this resort. So he will help me the keys to the locker, so we could access their phone and computer and delete those files. And I know rahim always carries his laptop with him and its there he had saved all the videos taken from the shoot. Devika - but how we will get them to that resort? Vishnu - ok. So this weekend they have a special function on women's day. And the theme is "women rights and empowerment". Devika - okay Vishnu - in the resort they are organising a special program based on that theme for the entire day. For that purpose on that day in the resort they going to create a traditional village environment through out the day. Employees will be wearing traditional dresses of kerala and will be portraying the village life of kerala from 1800s. The whole resort will be transformed to ancient kerala village with huts, people doing traditional jobs. Whatever you see is going to be old Kerala there on that day. Devika - okay interesting, but how it is related to women rights and empowerment. Vishnu - so , all the activities on the day will be played like a stage play based on the story of " Nangeli ". Nangeli is a girl who fought bravely against all the evil norms and rituals prevailed during that time. Devika - yes, I know the story of Nangeli. She fought against the breast tax system during that time and fought for the rights of backward community women covering the breast Vishnu - thats correct, during that time in kerala. Lower caste women was not supposed to cover their breasts and had to pay tax if they are covering it based on the size of breast. Nangeli was the women who fought against it to stop this evil rule by sacrificing her life. She cut her breast and threw at the face of the rulers and sacrificed her life. With that incident breast tax wax remved in Kerala and lower caste women were allowed to cover their breast. Devika - thats correct Vishnu - so they will be depicting the story of Nangeli on that day. It is not like a stage play , it will be played like everyone is living their life . There is no stage, resort guests would be able to roam around in village , seeing the play. All the employees would be acting their part and it will look like a day in the traditional kerala village but the day will be based on the story of Nangeli. Devika - ok Vishnu - so my friend told me that they are still looking for a person to play the nangeli role. And thats when I got this plan. Devika - ok Vishnu - madam , if you can play the role of Nangeli on that day, I can make Rahim and Ramu come to that resort. If they come , they would have to leave their phones in the locker. And then we could get easily delete those files from their phone Devika - Me playing Nangeli role, how it is possible? And that too in such a short notice? Vishnu - madam , you can. I also would be there with you in that play. You dont have to worry about anything . it will be like living a day like nangeli thats all. There is no dialouge and all. It is like you can talk whatever comes to your mind, without deviating from the story. You can walk around the village, there is no stage. Devika - but still. Vishnu - madam, im just asking for a day that's, you dont have to anything to loose. But at the end of that I will make sure all your problems would solved. Im doing all the hardwork to help you madam. And this is the only plan we have Devika thought for a moment Devika - I agreed, I dont have any other option. And I trust you in this and I can do this. But you will be there with me through out right? Vishnu - yes madam, dont worry? Devika - what should I do , being as Nangeli.? Vishnu - that resort people will breif us Devika - okay Vishnu - so I have lots of work to do and I have to make Rahim and Ramu come there for the program Devika - okay. Thank you Vishnu for everything you are doing By bidding bye Vishnu left the house to make all the arrangements Chapter -89 After coming out of her house, vishnu right away called his friend in the resort Harish. Harish - hi Vishnu, what's up bro? Vishnu - hi bro...there is a good news Harish - tell bro Vishnu - I got the girl to play the character of nangeli Harish - wow, that's a good news bro. I knew that you could find it Viahnu - yeah bro..haha Harish - bro, did you tell her everything. Does she know the character will require to do lot of nude scenes. I dont want anyone to backout now Vishnu - she will do it bro..dont worry. But I need to do the other character of Chirukandan. Then only she will be comfortable Harish - that's okay. Agreed. Vishnu - then dont worry about anything. Just make all the arrangements Harish - bro , there shouldn't be any problem. All guests are VIP. It is the prestigious event for us Vishnu - don't worry. And one more thing. Make 2 reservations for Rahim and Ramu for the event and stay Harish - okay. Will do brother. After the call, vishnu went to meet anand to make the necessary arrangements. Vishnu - bro, the plan is on Anand - did she agreed Vishnu - yeah, she doesn't have any other option Anand - that's good Vishnu - if this plan works out. We could teach both rahim and ramu a lesson. Devika madam doesn't have to worry about them again and on top of that I would be able to enjoy her as well. Its a win win situation for everyone Anand - bro, what about me Vishnu - dont worry bro. I will make sure you are also included in the fun Anand - thanks Vishnu. So far I haven't received a single opportunity to enjoy her Viahnu - don't worry, I have the master plan and devika madam will never doubt us or she will never take us in a bad way. Nothing is going to be done against her will. And we are not going to lose her friendship Anand - okay Vishnu - now I wanted you to do something for me Anand - what is it? Vishnu - I want you to meet Rahim and convince him to come to the resort along with ramu. Reservations are already made for both of them. If they come then only we could deal with them Anand - i will take care of that. Dont worry. Chapter - 90 In the evening Anand went to meet Rahim at his house to make them come to the resort Rahim - What are you doing here? Anand - bro, why are you angry with me Rahim - its not me who is angry with you guys. You guys had made huge scene about it and angry with me Anand - its just Vishnu , who is pissed off with you. I dont have any issues with you. You are still my buddy Rahim - why the fuck he is pissed off? What did I do? Anand - he thinks that you cheated him by making plans without us and enjoying devika madam Rahim - if im enjoying her, its because I succeeded in my plays . And he lost. He is pissed just because he knew that Im winning in our bet. Anand - I don't know, but he is fucking angry with you Rahim - bro, we 3 together made the bet together. We were racing against each other to see who will suceed and enjoy devika madam. But when he saw im going to be the winner. He got pissed off Anand - i think he is in love with her. He doesn't want anyone else to become closer with her Rahim - fuck with his love, I dont care. I just want to get her into my bed . that's it Anand - hmm Rahim invited Anand inside home and when got inside he saw ramu is also there. Rahim - so tell bro , why did you come Anand - Bro, I came to tell about something vishnu is planning Rahim - what is it? Anand - bro as I said , he is completely pissed off with. So he is planning something to sleep with devika Rahim - what plan?.. Bro none of his plans will work out. Im in command here. Bro I will fuck her anytime now. Im so close now. You wont even believe what all things I have done with her Anand - no bro, it is serious. This weekend, Vishnu is taking devika madam to resort far away. He said that to me. Rahim - what? What are you talking? Anand - yeah , bro he had made some plans for her there. He is said they are going there for a function Rahim - what function? Anand - I dont know, some women's day function Rahim - what rubbish Anand - yes bro, he didnt give much detail. But he has some plans there. And I asked him , but he said he is the only person who will enjoy her Rahim - fuck him, I won't let it happen Anand - yes bro, I stood with him, thinking I will get a chance to enjoy devika madam. But he said, he does not want anyone else to get closer with devika madam. Thats why I got mad at him and thought will tell you about this Rahim - okay. So what we will do now Anand - Bro I have a plan. The resort owners son is my friend. I can make reservations for us on the same date. And lets go there see what he is up to. And if necessary, we can intervene and spoil his plans Rahim - yeah, that seems a good idea. I dont want that fucker to sleep with her before me. Lets do this Anand - but bro, im telling you all this ,because I also wanted to enjoy her Rahim - dont worry bro, you are also my friend. Im not like Vishnu, you will definitely enjoy her Anand - okay, then I will call my friend and will make all arrangements. Be ready to go to the resort in the weekend Rahim - sure bro **********************************************************************
08-03-2023, 01:27 PM
Super
08-03-2023, 03:06 PM
Super update after long time... waiting for the hotter part...
09-03-2023, 04:48 PM
super writing, please five frequent and longer updates.
09-03-2023, 09:54 PM
please update dear sir
10-03-2023, 11:29 AM
Awesome plz update soon
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