Romance Dildariyan by entertainerjatt ( completed )

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Update 11
Tuesday 8:00 am ka time ho raha tha…Raj abhi bhi so raha tha…pata nahi aj aisi kaisi neend ayi thi use k uthne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha…uske chehre pe ek badi muskan thi Jo saaf ishara kar rahi thi k Raj jarur koi aisa sapna dekh raha hai Jo k use kafi khusi de raha hai…par kehte hain k koi v chij chahe kitni v achi kion na ho uska ant hota hi hai…isi tarah Raj ki neend ka v ant ho jata hai wo apni ankhein maslta huya uth baithta hai…aur apni ankhein kholte hi sabse pehle deewar par tangi ghadi ki taraf najar Marta hai aur dekhta hai k 8:10 ho chuke hain…yeh dekh kar wo hadbadate huye uthta hai aur jaldi se washroom ki taraf badta hai aur sochta hai k mummy ne uthaya kion nahi khamkha college ke liye late ho jaunga…par thodi hi der mein use yaad ata hai k wo ab college nahi Jane wala…aur wo ek chain ki saans leta hai…fir brush wagerha karke aur fresh ho k wo niche hall ki taraf chal padta hai…wahan uske papa tyar ho k bahar ki taraf ja rahe the sayad office hi ja rahe honge…raj yeh dekhta hai aur apne papa ke paas ja ker unke pair chuta hai…
Raj: good morning dad….
Raghuveer: good morning beta…uth gaye…
Raj: han papa…ap office ja rahe ho kya…
Raghuveer: han beta aur mujhe late ho raha hai niklta hun aur vese v aj meri aik important meeting hai…

Fir Raghuveer wahan se nikal jata hai aur Raj sofe par baith kar television on kar deta hai…aur cricket dekhne lag jata hai…itne mein Sunidhi hall mein enter hoti hai…aur Raj ko wahan bhaitha dekh kar uske pass jaker baith jati hai…
Sunidhi: uth gaya beta…
Raj: han mummy good morning…
Sunidhi: good morning beta…
Raj: mummy apne mujhe uthaya kion nahi…
Sunidhi: beta main tujhe uthane ayi thi par jab tere chehre ki taraf dekha k tu kitni masoomiyat aur aram se so raha hai to mera tujhe uthane ka man nahi kiya…vaise v aj konsa tujhe college Jana hai…
Raj: han ye baat to hai…
Itne mein Sunidhi ko kal raat ki baat yad a jati hai aur uske chehre ka rang badal jata hai ye soch kar k uska beta ek- do din k baad usse alag jaker rehne wala hai…wo thodi emotional ho kar raj se puchti hai…
Sunidhi: Raj beta tu mujhe chod ke kion ja raha hai…
Raj: mummy main apko hamesha ke liye chod ke thodi ja raha hun bas thode time ki baat hai…fir main apke paas hi rahunga…aur vaise v main sirf isliye ja raha hun ta ki main is kabil ban paun k apni pyari mummy ka khyal rakh sakun…
Raj ki itni pyari batein sun kar Sunidhi ki ankhon mein ansoo a jate hain…Sunidhi k ansoo dekh ke Raj ka dil fat sa jata hai…wo turant apni maa k gale lag jata hai…aur fir alag ho kar unke ansoo pochte huye unki god mein sir rakh kar sofe par lait jata hai….
Raj: mummy…
Sunidhi: han beta…
Raj: mummy meri ek baat manogi kya…
Sunidhi: beta main to tere liye jaan v de sakti hun…
Raj: mummy apki jaan itni sasti nahi hai…han mujhe apki ankhon mein ansoo bilkul v ache nahi lagte hain…to plz ap royie mat…
Sunidhi: are beta main ro nahi rahi hun wo to tera pyar dekh kar khusi k mare ansoo nikal aye…
Raj: mummy I love you…
Sunidhi: I love you too beta…
Raj: mummy papa ne Mohan uncle se baat ki hai kya …
Sunidhi: han beta unhone rat ko baat ki thi aur sab samja diya tha…
Raj: mummy ap mere se gussa to nahi ho na…
Sunidhi: kis baat ke liye...
Raj: yahi k main pune ja raha hun…
Sunidhi: are beta main gussa nahi hun han thoda bura lag raha hai k tu mere se door rahega…bera ek promise kar mujhse…
Raj: bolo mummy…
Sunidhi: tu mujhe roj subah uthne ke baad aur raat ko sone se pehle phone jaroor karega…
Raj: promise mom…aur han ye Raj Sinha ka wada hai…meri garden bhale hi tut jaye par wada nahi tutega…
Raj ki baat sun kar Sunidhi hans padti hai…aur thodi der pehle Jo mahol itna emotional tha wo ek dum se khusnuma ban jata hai…
Sunidhi: chal uth ab meri god se nautanki kahin ka mujhe aur v kaam hain…
Raj uth ke baith jata hai aur wapis tv dekhne lag jata hai Sunidhi uth kar kitchen mein chali jati hai aur raj ke liye breakfast aur juice leke ati hai Raj wahin TV dekhte dekhte breakfast karta hai…rita wahan se khali barten utha kar le jati hai aur Sunidhi raj ke pass baith kar TV dekhne lagti hai…kus time baad Sunidhi uth kar apne bedroom mein chali jati hai par Raj wahin TV k samne chipka rehta hai…
Dosto yeh meri taraf se aj ka bonus update baki kal ko ayega now just enjoy it…and keep supporting..

To be continued

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Update 12

Raj kafi der tak tv dekhta raha fir wo uth kar apne room mein chala jata hai…wo apne bed par baith kar apne ane wale dino k bare mein sochne lagta hai…fir wo apna laptop on karke us pe koi movie dekhne lagta hai…itne mein uski mummy use lunch k liye bula laiti hai to wo apne laptop ko band karke niche chala jata hai…aur lunch karne ke baad wapis apne room mein a jata hai…uske baad uski ankh lag jati hai aur wo gehri neend ke kho jata hai…sham ko 5:00 baje uske gate pe knock hota hai to uski neend khul jati hai….wo uth kr darwaja kholta hai to samne Geeta khadi hoti hai…Raj uske pair chuta hai…
Raj: hlo aunty kaisi hain ap…
Geeta: main thik hun beta tum batao k kaise ho…
Raj: thik hun aunty…ap ander a kar baithiye main thoda washroom ho ke ata hun…
Geeta bed pe a kar baith jati hai aur Raj bathroom mein ghus jata hai….thodi der baad Raj v a kar bed pe baith jata hai aur dono apas mein batein karne lag jate hain…
Geeta: beta koi problem to nahi hui na college mein…
Raj thoda ghabra jata hai k kahin aunty ko pata na chal gaya ho par fir v apne ap ko normal karte huye jawab deta hai..
Raj: nahi aunty ap aisa kion puch rahe ho…
Geeta: are jab Maine aj Priya ko tere bare mein pucha to usne kaha tu aj college nahi aya to mujhe laga k kahin Teri tabiyat na kharab ho…isiliye main yahan ayi to niche Sunidhi baithi thi par jab Maine use tere bare mein pucha to usne btaya k tu ab college nahi Jane wala aur pune ja raha hai…
Raj: han aunty main pune ja raha hun…par college mein kus nahi hua…apko mummy ne mere pune Jane ka karn nahi btaya kya…
Geeta: Maine pucha to tha par usne kaha k Raj se hi puch lo toh main tere paas a gayi…ab tu hi batade k kya karn hai tumhare jane ka…
Raj Geeta ko sari baat bata deta hai…jo kal uske aur uske parents ke bich mein huyi….
Geeta: to yeh wajah hai…
Raj: han aunty…apko kya lagta hai k maine sahi kiya ya galat….
Geeta: beta agar practically sochun to tu sahi kar raha hai…par dil kehta hai k tujhe nahi jana chahiye…tum pehle hi bade saalon baad mere paas aye the to ab tujhe apne se dur karne ka dil nahi karta…par fir v main hamesha yahi chahti hun k tu ek successful admi bane isliye tu ja beta tu bilkul sahi kar raha hai…
Raj: thanks aunty mujhe samjhne ke liye…I love you aunty…
Geeta: I love you too beta…
Raj aur Geeta aise hi batein karte rehte hain aur fir Geeta apne ghar chali jati hai…uske baad us din kus khas nahi hua raat mein dinner karne ke baad sabhi apne apne kamron mein ja kar so jate hain…

Agle din Wednesday tha…Raj aj v der se uthta hai aur fresh hone ke baad hall mein pahunch jata hai…uske dad jaa chuke aur uski mummy hall mein hi baithi TV dekh rahi thi…Raj jaker apni mummy ke pair chuta hai….
Raj: gud morning mom..
Sunidhi: gud morning beta...main tere liye khana laga deti hun…
Fir Sunidhi uth kar kitchen mein chali jati hai aur khana dinning table pe laga deti hai Raj khana khata hai aur fir TV dekhne lagta hai…
Dopehar mein Geeta v unke ghar ati hai kionk Raj ne kal subah jaldi hi chale jana tha…
Fir Geeta aur Sunidhi milkar Raj ki packing karne lagti hain Raj v bich bich mein apni jarurat ka saman utha kar unhe de raha tha…fir teeno milkar lunch karte hain…aj Geeta tab tak wahan rahi jab tak Priya ke ane ka time nahi ho gaya …usne Raj se dher sari batein ki…
Iske baad us din kus khas nahi huya….raat dinner ke baad Raj jab apne kamre mein pahuncha to wo bahut khus tha…wo soch raha tha k wo ane wale Dinon mein kya karega…uske sath kya kya naya hoga aur wo apne parents ke bina apne ap ko kaise sambhalega….

Aise hi kayi bicharon ke sath Raj ek gehri neend ke agosh mein kho jata hai…ab dekhte hain k ane wala suraj apne sath kya lekar ayega…han par itna jarur pata hai k kal se Raj ke jivan ki ek nayi shuruat hogi…to dosto apna pyar is story ko dete rahiye…

To be continued…

[sarit11]

Update 13

Thursday subah 5:30 baje Sunidhi Raj ke kamre mein ati hai…Raj wahan so raha tha…par uske chehre pe ek masoomiyat bhari muskan faili huyi thi…Sunidhi ko apne bete ki is masoomiyat par bada pyar ata hai aur wo uske mathe pe chum leti hai…isse Raj ki neend khul jati hai aur wo apni maa ko apne paas baitha dekhta hai….
Raj apni ankhein malte huye bed pe baith jata hai…
Raj: gud morning mom…
Sunidhi: gud morning beta…ab jaldi se uth aur tyar ho ja..
Raj: mummy mujhe konsa aj college Jana hai Jo ap itni jaldi tyar hone ko bol rahi ho…
Sunidhi: are bhul gaya kya aj tujhe pune Jana hai…
Yeh sun kar Raj apne mathe pe hath Marta hai aur jaldi se uth kar bathroom mein ghus jata hai…Sunidhi wahan se chali jati hai…
Raj tyar ho kar niche ata hai to uske mummy papa wahin baithe the…Raj apne papa ke pair chuta hai…
Raj: gud morning papa…
Raghuveer: gud morning beta…toh ho gaye tyar…
Raj: han papa ek dum ready hun…
Sunidhi: chalo pehle khana kha lo…
Raj: ok mummy…
Fir teeno khana khane lagte hain…
Jab tak ye khana kha rahe hain tab tak chaliye thoda Priya ke ghar ho ate hain….wahan Priya aur uske mummy papa hall mein hi baithe the…itne mein Geeta khadi hoti hai…aur bolti hai..
Geeta: chalo Raj se mil ayein fir Priya ko v college Jana hoga…
Mohit: han chalo bhai…
Geeta: Priya tu v chal fir college chali Jana…
Priya to Raj ki shakl v dekhna pasand nahi kar rahi thi par fir v wo yeh jan na chahti thi k Raj se akhir kion milna hai…
Priya: kion use kya hua…
Geeta: kus ho uske dusmano ko…wo to puna ja raha hai padne ke liye…

Priya to Geeta ki baat sun kar man hi man uchal padti hai k chalo picha chuta us gubare se…wo vaise to Raj se nahi milna chahti thi par fir v apni Mummy ka dil rakhne ke liye aur Raj ki haar dekhne ke liye usne wahan chalne ka man bana liya…
Priya: chalo fir chalte hain vaise v mujhe late ho raha hai college ke liye…
Fir wo teeno v Raj ke ghar ki taraf chal padte hain…
Udhar Raj ke ghar mein sabhi khana kha chuke the aur hall mein baithe batein kar rahe the…Itne mein door bell bajti hai aur Rita door kholti hai samne Priya aur uske parents khade the wo teeno hall mein enter karte hain…aur un logon ke pass ja kar baith jate hain…Raj aur Priya ki najar ek pal ke liye milti hai par dono ek dusre ko ignore kar dete hain…
Raj uth kar geeta aur mohit ke pair chuta hai aur Priya v raj ke mummy papa ko wish karti hai…
Geeta: to Raj beta ho gayi tumhari tyari puri…
Raj: han aunty…
Sabhi aise hi batein kar rahe the aur itne mein Priya uth kar khadi ho jati hai…
Priya: mummy mera time ho gaya hai main chal rahi hun….aur han bye Raj and good luck for the future…
Ye baat kehte huye Priya ke chehre pe ek vijayi muskan thi…wo samaj rahi thi k usne apne sabse bade dushman ko hara diya hai aur ab puri duniya uski muthi mein hai…uski is muskan ko Raj ne v notice kar liya…fir v usne Priya ko thanks kaha aur Priya sabhi ko bye bol kar chali gayi…

Raj: papa flight kitne baje ki hai…
Raghuveer: are beta tum flight se nahi ja rahe ho…
Raj: to fir…
Raghuveer: jara mere sath ao tumhare liye ek surprise hai…
Ye bol kar Raghuveer Raj ko apne sath bahar le jata hai…bahar pahunch te hi Raj ki najar Jaise hi samne padti hai to wo ek dum surprised ho jata hai…samne ek bahut hi mehngi BMW car khadi thi…
Raj: papa apne nayi car kharidi hai…bahut achi hai…
Raghuveer: ye tumhare liye hai…aj tum puna isi mein jane wale ho…
Raj: par papa main kaise mujhe to chlani hi nahi ati…
Raghuveer: are beta tumhare liye ek driver v rakha hai…yahi tume leke jayega aur tumhe driving v sikha dega…
Raj: ok papa…and thanks..I love you papa..
Raj apne papa ke gale lagta hai…vaise to use aise mehnge gift lene ka koi sounk nahi tha par wo us car ki price ko nahi balki apne papa ke pyar ko dekh raha tha…
Fir wo dono ander a jate hain Raj ka saman gadi mein rakhwa diya jata hai…Ab Raj wahan se Jane ke liye tyar tha sabhi use vida karne ke liye bahar hi khade the…Raj sabse pehle apne Papa ke paon chuta hai…wo use ashirwad dete hain aur gale laga lete hain…fir wo mohit ke pair chuta hai…wo v use ashirwad deta hai…fir uski najar Sunidhi aur Geeta par padti hai wo dono ek sath khadi thin aur unki akhein nam ho chuki thi…Raj unke paas jata hai aur un dono ka ek ek hath apne hath mein pakad leta hai…
Raj: ap dono ro kion rahi hain main koyi army mein thode ja raha hun…plz ap dono rona band karein nahi to main v ro dunga apko meri kasm…

Raj ki baat sun kar dono siskte huye apni ankhein poch leti hain…fir Raj bari bari dono ke gale lagta hai aur bye kehta hai…
Itne mein Raj ko kus yad ata hai aur wo ek mint keh kar bhagte huye apne kamre ki taraf jata hai…wo apni guitar uthata hai aur fir se bahar chal padta hai…bahar sab usi ka wait kar rahe the…fir Raj sab ko bye bol kar apni gadi mein ja kar pichli seat par baith jata hai…wo apni gadi ka sheesa neeche karta hai aur fir se sabko hath hila kar bye karta hai...sabhi usko bye karte hain…Sunidhi aur Geeta ke chehre ki udasi dekh kar ek bar to Raj ka man pighal jata hai par fir agle hi pal Priya ki wo muskan uski ankhon ke samne ati hai aur uska faisla aur v majboot hi jata hai….itne mein gadi start hoti hai..aur main gate se bahar nikal jati hai…Raj apne ek naye safar pe nikal chuka tha…usne apne dimag mein Jo manjil Sochi thi wo uski taraf apna pehla kadam badha chuka tha…ab age kya hoga ye janne ke liye bane rahiye…

To be continued…

[sarit11]

Update 14

Raj ki gadi pune ke liye chal padi thi…is tarah uska ghar usse dur hota ja raha tha…aur uski manjil uske aur karib ate ja rahi thi…unko chale huye lagbhag 1:30 ghanta ho chuka tha…Raj ab gadi mein baitha baitha bore ho raha tha…
Raj: uncle abhi aur kitni der lagegi…
Driver: sir ek dedh ganta to aur lag hi jayega…
Raj: chalo thik hai…
Raj fir se chup chap baith jata hai par boriyat se bachne ke liye wo apna phone nikalta hai aur headphones laga kar songs sun ne lagta hai…music to Jaise uski jaan tha…wo romantic songs bahut sunta tha aur unme aisa kho jata tha k use duniya ki koi khabar hi nahi rehti thi sayad yahan bhi wahi huya...wo songs mein itna kho gaya ke wo kab pune pahunch gaya use pata hi nahi chala…jab gadi ruki to wo ekdum se aise utha Jaise wo kisi aur hi duniya ki shair par nikal gaya ho…itne mein driver ki awaj ayi…
Driver: sir pahunch gaye puna…..
Raj aas pass dekhta hai to wo ek ghar ke main gate ke ander the…Raj gadi ka door open karta hai aur aas pass dekhta hai…to uski najar us ghar par padti hai…wo Raj ke Mumbai wale ghar jitna alishan to nahi tha par fir v bahut khubsurat ghar tha…Bahar ki boundaries ke bilkul bich mein ek ghar tha…uske Charon taraf garden fails huya tha…garden ke bich hi ek Oval shape ka pool bana huya tha…main gate se ghar ke gate tak ek pakka rasta banaya huya tha jiske dono taraf rang birange phool gamlon mein lage huye the…sach kahun is ghar ki khubsurati mein Raj itna kho jata hai k ek pal ke liye wo apne bangle ko bhi bhool jata hai…yahan use kus alag sa mehsoos ho raha tha wo kus jyada hi kho sa gaya tha…par ek awaj use wapis hosh mein lati hai ye awaj Mohan ki thi jo apne pariwar ke sath Raj ke welcome liye khada tha…

Dosto Mohan aur uski family ka introduction de deta hun…
Mohan Kumar: ye ek imandar aur jimedar insan tha…ye Raghuveer ko apna bhagwan samjta tha…aur Raghuveer us pe bahut jyada bharosa karta tha…isliye pehle apna pune ka business uske bharose chod diya aur ab apna beta…Mohan ne bhi apni jimebari puri imandari se nibhayi thi…
Rekha Kumar: ye Mohan ki wife hain ye v Raghuveer ki boht izat karti hai aur Raj ke wahan ane se bahut khus thi….
Sandeep Kumar: ye Mohan ka iklauta beta hai…Raj ka humumar hai…dikhne mein thik thak hai…na to jyada fit hai aur na hi jyada mota bas thoda bhari sa hai…ladkian use jyada pasand nahi karti hain par college mein kafi mashoor hai kionk ek do ko peet chuka hai…padai mein v kus jyada acha nahi hai…

To dosto kahan the hum…han Raj Mohan ki awaj sun kar unki taraf dekhta hai aur unke paas chala jata hai…
Raj: hlo uncle aunty..
Mohan: hlo beta acha huya tum a gaye hum tumhara hi wait kar rahe the...
Fir Raj Sandeep se hath milata hai aur fir Charon ander a jate hai…aur hall mein sofon par baith jate hain…Naukron ko keh kar Mohan Raj saman ander rakhwa deta hai aur ….fir sab apas mein batein karne lagte hain…
Raj: uncle apne ghar ko bahut ashe se tyar karwaya hai….
Mohan: thanks beta ab jab Raghuveer sir ka order tha to mujhe to karna hi tha…
Raj: uncle apne meri admission to karwa di hai na…
Mohan: han beta maine Sandeep ke college mein tumhari admission karwa di hai….tum jab chaho join kar sakte ho…
Raj: OK uncle thanks…
Mohan: are isme thanks ki kya baat hai…yeh to mera farz hai…
Raj : uncle kya ap mera ek aur kam kar sakte hain kya…plz
Mohan: han bolo beta kya kam hai…
Raj: uncle mujhe ek music teacher ki jarurat hai Jo mujhe guitar sikha sake….aur mujhe ghar par gym bhi chahiye aur ek personal trainer v chahiye….
Mohan: beta jaisa tum kaho ….main kal tak hi kus intzam karta hun…aur han abhi hum chalte hain…aur sham ko Sandeep a jayega agar koi kam ho to ise bata dena…
Raj: ji uncle…han mujhe thoda aram karna hai mera kamra konsa hai....
Fir Mohan Raj ko uska kamra bata kar apni family ke sath wahan se chala jata hai…Raj ghar ko ashe se dekhna chahta tha par safar ki thakawat ke karn apne kamre mein jata hai aur bed par girte hi so jata hai…
To be continued….

[sarit11]

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Thanks bhai...and I hope k kam se kam is college mein Raj ke sath kus bura na ho

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Update 15

Raj kafi der tak apne room mein sota rehta hai…karib 4:00 baje uski ankh khulti hai aur wo uth kar bathroom mein ghus jata hai…fir fresh hone ke baad apna phone uthata hai apni mummy ko lagane ke liye…to dekhta hai k uski mummy ke 16 aur uske papa ke 7 miss call aye huye the…
Wo apni mummy ko phone karta hai…uski mummy to Jaise uske phone ke intzar mein hi baithi thi usne ring jate ke phone utha liya aur raj par baras padi…
Sunidhi: tume koi akal wakal nahi hai kya k pahunche hi ghar phone kardun…pata hai mujhe kitni fikar ho rahi thi…upar se phone uthata v nahi hai….wo to asha huya k Mohan ka phone agaya tha tumhare papa ke pass…
Raj ko apni galti ka ehsas ho jata hai…wo apni mummy mafi mangta hai…
Raj: sorry mom kafi thak gaya tha main isliye ate hi so gaya…
Sunidhi: chal chod ab aur bata kaisa hai tu…
Raj: thik hun mom ap batao ap aur dad kaise ho…
Sunidhi: thik hain beta koi problem to nahi huyi na raste mein…
Raj: nahi mom…
Sunidhi: beta agar koi v dikat ho to Mohan se bol dena…
Raj: ji mom….
Sunidhi: beta abhi mujhe kus kam hai…han raat ko pakka phone kar lena bhul mat Jana ….nahi to wahan akar Teri khabar lungi…
Raj: ji mom nahi bhulunga…
Fir dono bye keh kar phone kaat dete hain aur Raj sochta hai k chalo ghar ko thoda ashe se dekha jaye…Fir Raj wahan se uth kar bahar a jata hai…aur hall mein ghus kar charon taraf najar daudata hai…ghar sirf ek hi floor ka tha…wahan ek kitchen tha aur chaar rooms the attached washroom…fir Raj wahan se nikal kar bahar garden mein a jata hai…aur idhar udhar tehlne lagta hai…fir wo swimming pool ke paas chala jata hai aur …itne mein Sandeep wahan a jata hai…
Sandeep: hi Raj sir...
Raj: hlo kaise ho…
Sandeep: thik hun…ap batao kaise ho…
Raj: yaar thik hun but tum ye mujhe itni respect kion de rahe ho…
Sandeep: ap Raghuveer sir ke bete ho hamare boss ho…
Raj: yaar aj se tu mujhe aise itni respect nahi dega…aj se hum dost hain OK..
Sandeep: thik hai sir oh sorry Raj…
Fir dono has padte hain aur hath milate hain…
Raj: vaise yaar tumhara naam bada lengthy hai kya main tume kus aur bula sakta hun…
Sandeep: vaise to mera koi nick name nahi hai par agar tum chaho to koi rakh lo…
Raj: to fir Sandy kaisa rahega…
Sandeep: badiya hai…
(friends ab se main sandeep ko sandy hi likhunga)
Raj: tum meri hi class mein ho kya..
Sandy: han…
Raj: yaar college kaisa hai…
Sandy: college toh jahan ka number 1 hai…baki tum koi tension mat Lena...meri bahut chalti hai wahan pe…
Raj: acha vaise tumhari kion chalti hai college mein…
Sandy: kus nahi yaar bas do teen ko peet dala isiliye thodi izat mil hi jati hai…
Raj: yaar kion peeta tumne kisi ko mujhe to yeh ladai jhagda bilkul pasand nahi hai…
Sandy: yaar kaminon ne mujhe maa ki gaali di to mujhse bardast nahi huya…vaise main kisi se ladai jhagda nahi karta hun….
Raj: chal fir to thik kia…aur sunao…
Sandy: yaar aur to kus nahi tum batao koi girlfriend hai kya…
Raj: nahi bhai aj tak to koi nahi….ab age kisi ko bnaunga v nahi…
Sandy: kion bhai…
Raj: yaar sach kahun to mujhe ladkion se nafrat ho gai hai…yeh apne ap ko pata nahi kya samjti hain…yeh kisi v insan ki seerat nahi uski Surat dekhti hain…main to kabhi inke chakar mein nahi padne wala..(yeh sab kehte huye Raj ke dimag mein Priya ka chehra tha jise wo sach mein nafrat karta tha isliye wo yeh sab kafi gusse mein keh raha tha…)
Sandy: yaar tu toh jyada hi serious ho gaya koi khaas wajah hai kya ladkion se itni nafrat karne ki…
Raj: nahi yaar kus nahi tu bata Teri koi girlfriend hai kya…
Sandy: nahi yaar meri aisi kismat kahan…kafi try kiya par koi fasti hi nahi…
Raj: yaar chodo ab in sab baton ko ….abhi hamari umar hi kya hai…abhi to khelne kudne ke din hain….
Sandy: han yaar aur bata tujhe koi problem toh nahi hai na yahan…
Raj: nahi sab thik hai…
Sandy: tu aisa kar mera no. Le aur agar koi v problem hui to bata dena mujhe…

Fir Sandy Raj ko apna no. De deta hai aur fir thodi der aur batein karne ke baad Sandy wahan se chala jata…uske Jane ke thodi der baad Raj ke paas Geeta ka phone ata hai…

Geeta: hlo beta…kaise ho…
Raj: bilkul thik hun aunty ap btao kaisi ho…
Geeta: bilkul theek hun beta aur batao thik thak pahunch gaye the na…
Raj: han aunty thik thak pahunch gaya tha…aur sunao ghar par sab kaise hain…
Geeta: sab thik hain beta…aur sunao beta college kab se join kar rahe ho…
Raj: aunty main soch raha tha k parson se join karlun…
Geeta: han jaisa tum thik samjo…
Dono thodi der batein karte hain aur fir phone kaat dete hain….Raj raat ko dinner karne ke baad apni mummy ko phone karke usne baat karta hai aur apne papa se bhi baat karta hai aur uske baad so jata hai…

Dosto Raj to so gaya Lekin us din kus aur v hua Jo sayad hi kisi ne socha ho…to sham ke 5:00 baje ki baat hai...Raj ke Mumbai wale ghar pe door bell bajti hai…Sunidhi door kholti hai to samne khade sakhs ko dekh kar wo khus ho jati hai….ab yeh kon hai aur kya hua uske ane ke baad yeh to agle update mein hi pata chalega par filhal ap is update ko enjoy karein…

To be continued

[sarit11]

Update 16

Toh Jaise hi Sunidhi ne gate khola to samne Priya khadi thi…vaise ap log soch rahe honge ke yeh to Raj se nafrat karti hai to aj yahan kya karne ayi hai…to main ap logon ko bata dun k yeh sirf Raj se hi nafrat karti hai…sunidhi aur Raghuveer se kafi pyar karti hai…

Sunidhi Priya ko dekh kar bahut khus ho jati hai…
Priya: namaste aunty…
Sunidhi: namaste beta kaisi ho…
Priya: thik aunty…ap batao kaisi ho…
Sunidhi: thik hi hun beta…ao ander a kar baitho…
Priya ander a kar sofe pe baith jati hai…
Sunidhi: beta main coffee leke ati hun…
Priya: chodiye na aunty coffee ki kya jarurat hai…main to apse batein karne ke liye ayi hun….
Sunidhi: chalo jaisi tumhari marji…aur batao kaise ana hua…
Priya:kyon aunty main a nahi sakti kya….
Sunidhi: are beta aisi baat nahi hai tumhara hi ghar hai jab man kare ajaya karo…main to sirf isliye pus rahi thi k sayad koi kaam ho tujhe…
Priya: nahi aunty koi kaam nahi tha…bas socha k jab se ap aye ho main ap logon se dhang se mili hi nahi…
Sunidhi: han beta mujhe to laga tha k tum hamse kisi baat ko lekar naraz ho…
Priya: aunty main bhala kaise ap se naraz ho sakti hun…bas thoda jyada hi busy ho gayi thi…
Sunidhi: chalo koi baat nahi beta aur batao tumhara trip kaisa raha…
Priya: boht asha tha aunty boht maja aya…
Sunidhi:yeh toh ashi baat hai aur batao tumhari padhai kaisi chal rahi hai…
Priya: bilkul thik chal rahi hai…ap batao aur sab kaisa hai…
Sunidhi: baki sab to thik hai but mera bilkul v man nahi lagta ghar mein…
Priya: kion aunty…
Sunidhi: beta jab se Raj gaya hai tab se bas yeh ghar khane ko daudta hai…
Yeh baat kehte huye Sunidhi ki anhkon mein ansoo a jate hain aur Priya yeh dekh leti hai…wo Sunidhi ke ansoo pochne lagti hai…Sunidhi fir se apni baat ko age badhati hai…
Sunidhi: Priya beta Raj ne aisa kion kiya aisa kya hogaya jo usne ekdum se itna bada faisla le liya…han usne wajah to batai thi…par mujhe pata nahi aisa kion lagta hai k asli wajah koi aur hai…pata nahi mera bacha apne dil mein kya chipaye baitha hai…
Priya ke paas Sunidhi ke is sawal ka koi jawab nahi tha kionk yeh baat to use pehle hi pata thi ke Raj uski wajah se hi gaya hai…bas ab farak itna tha ke tab tak Priya Raj ke chale jane ko apni jeet samaj rahi thi to ab Sunidhi ke ansoo dekh kar use lagne laga ke usne apne hathon se hi apne ap ko hara diya hai….ab use apne kiye par pastawa ho raha tha par wo ab kus nahi kar sakti thi…wo bas Sunidhi ke behte huye ansu saaf karti rehti hai aur Sunidhi ko apne gale laga leti hai…
Priya: aunty plz chup kar jaiye nahi to main v ro padungi…
Sunidhi: thik hai beta…par plz tu roz mere paas aya karegi na…tere ane se mere dil ko sukun sa mehsoos ho raha hai…aya karogi na beti…
Priya: ji aunty main roj apse Milne aungi…par ap plz rona mat…
Sunidhi: thik hai beta…tu baith main tumhare liye kus khane pine ke liye magwati hun…
Priya: nahi aunty abhi to main ja rahi hun kal ko aungi…
Sunidhi: chalo thik hai beta…
Fir Priya wahan se nikal kar apne ghar ki taraf chal padti hai…uske chehre pe udasi saaf dikh rahi thi…aj pata nahi uske dimag mein soch ke kitne dhage apas mein uljhe pade the…itne mein wo apne ghar pahunch jati hai aur vaise hi gum sum si apne khyalon mein khoyi huyi apne room me apne bed pe lait jati hai…

Aj uske jeevan mein jo toofan aya tha usne usko ander tak hila kar rakh diya tha…usne ye plan banane se pehle yeh nahi socha tha ke Raj ke sath aur v jindagian Judi hui hain Jo use jaan se jyada pyar karte hain…

Aj wo apne ap par sarmindagi mehsoos kar rahi thi…wo soch rahi thi k wo itni kaise gir sakti hai…kaise ek bete ko uski maa se alag kar sakti hai…akhir kyon?

Lekin uske in sab baton ke bare mein sochne se koi farak nahi padne wala tha…lekin ek baat to thi k kisi ne sach hi kaha hai k maa ke pyar ke samne bade bade apne ghutne tek dete hain…aur aj Sunidhi ka Raj ke prati pyar dekhkar Priya ne v apne ghutne tek diye the…wo Priya jisne kabhi harna nahi Sikha tha…jo hamesha apne ap ko sahi aur dusron ko galat samjhti thi….aj wo life mein pehli baar apne ap par guilty feel kar rahi thi…

Khair najane Sunidhi ki baton ne Priya ki aisi halat kaise kardi usne us raat dinner v nahi kiya…Geeta ne use bahut kaha par wo bas yahi soch rahi thi k wahan Raj apni mummy ke hathon ke bane khane ke liye taras raha hoga aur jahan wo baith kar bade aram se maje le le kar khayegi…us raat Priya sach mein jaise kahin kho si gayi thi wo bas yahi soch rahi thi k kaise wo apni galti ko thik kare…

Us raat Priya ko badi muskil se neend ayi…najane ab wo kya karne wali hai …par mujhe lag raha hai ke hame is story mein ab kus naya dekhne ko milega…

Agle din Friday subah 5:00 baje Pune Raj ka ghar…
Raj ka alarm bajta hai aur wo uth kar baith jata hai…wo aur sona chahta tha par fir v apne man ko mana kar uth jata hai aur fresh hone ke baad…

Apne ghar mein hi bane garden mein a jata hai…aj raj pehli baar apni marji se jogging karne wala tha…Raj thoda warm up karne ke baad ghar ke garden mein hi chakar lagane lagta hai…pehla din tha is liye wo thode rounds ke baad hi thak jata hai...aur fir ghar ke ander a kar hall mein baith jata hai…fir ramu kaka ko awaj deta hai…
Raj: ramu kaka juice la dijiye…
( ramu kaka Raj ke ghar pe naukari karta tha…aur wahin servent quarter mein rehta tha…Mohan use kayi salon se janta tha isliye uspar kafi bharosa karta tha…aur usi ne Raj ki dekhbhal ke liye use rakha tha)

Khair ramu kaka Raj ke liye juice le ata hai…Raj juice pita hai aur apni mummy ko phone karta hai…Sunidhi thodi der ring hone ke baad phone utha leti hai…
Raj: good morning mummy…
Sunidhi: good morning shona…kaise ho…
Raj: bilkul fit…ap sunao
Sunidhi: main kya sunaun…tu hi kus suna kya kya kiya wahan Jane ke baad…
Raj sunidhi ko puri batein bata deta hai…apni jogging karne ki bhi…
Sunidhi: wah mere shona ne jogging ki…jahan to tere papa bol bol kar thak jate the par tu manta hi nahi tha…
Raj: isliye to yahan aya hun…taki thodi mehnat karni seekh lun…
Sunidhi: are wah kya baat hai mera beta to badi jaldi samjdar ho gya …aisa kya hai puna ke paani mein…
Raj: mummy puna ke pani ka nahi ap logon ke ashirwad ka kamaal hai…
Sunidhi: bas kar baba subah subah itni bhari bhari batein hajam nahi hongi…
Fir Raj hasne lagta hai…
Raj: OK mummy ab main phone rakhta hun sham ko baat karta hun beech mein Mohan uncle ka phone a raha hai…
Sunidhi: chalo bye beta…sayed unhe koi jaruri baat karni hogi isliye itni subah call ki hogi…take care…
Fir Raj phone kaat deta hai aur Mohan ko call back karta hai…Mohan jaldi hi utha leta hai…
Raj: good morning uncle…
Mohan: good morning beta…
Raj: uncle sab thik to hai na itni subah subah call ki apne…
Mohan: han beta sab thik hai bas tujhe ek baat kehni thi…k Maine gym trainer aur music teacher dono dhundh liye hain…
Raj: are wah uncle apne toh kamal kar diya ek hi din mein dhundh liya…
Mohan: are beta yeh to mera farj hai…han sach gym trainer aj 10:00 am ayega…maine tumhara address de diya hai…tum usse baat kar lena agar thik lage to usko done kar dena nahi toh mujhe bata dena…
Raj: thik hai uncle…main handle kar lunga…and thank you…
Mohan: welcome beta…asal mein mujhe aj Mumbai Jana hai tumhare papa ne ek jaruri meeting bulai hai…nahi to main khud a jata…par han sham tak laut aunga…aur us music trainer ko apne sath hi le aunga…
Raj: ji uncle OK bye…
Mohan: bye beta….

Fir Raj phone kaat deta hai aur sochne lagta hai k wo trainer se kya baat karega usne to apne liye kabhi kapde v nahi kharide wo kaise decide karega k wo mere liye sahi hai ya nahi….fir socha k agar manjil tak pahunchna hai to mehnat to karni padegi ….

Toh agle update mein dekhte hain k Raj ki story kya karwat badlti hai…

To be continued…….

[sarit11]

rb.lover93

nice update

lekin yaha to baji palat gai
kaha priya ko raj se hamdardi hone lagi, dil ki kadvahat kam hone lagi,
vahi Raj ko nafrat si ho gai priya se, not only priya se but ladkiyon se...
muje ye samaj nahi aaya ladkiyon ko RAJ nam se hi nafrat kyu hy...

har koi RAJ ko hi chot lahonchata hy...
chalo kher ye to out of story ki bat ho gai...
ab dekhate apni story me age RAJ ki ye NAFRAT pyar .e kese badalti hy

entertainerjatt
Thanks bhai...ye to asha hai k mera nam Raj nahi hai...

[sarit11]

Update 17

Mohan se baat karne ke baad Raj thoda chintit tha…wo isi soch mein tha k akhir wo trainer kaisa hoga…kahin jyada khadoos na ho…kya main gym mein kus kar v paunga ya fir sirf batein hi banata reh jaunga…

Raj aise hi kafi der tak sochta rehta hai….breakfast tyar hone ke baad wo breakfast karta hai…aur hall mein baith kar TV dekhne lagta hai……

10:00 baje door bell bajti hai Raj uth kar door kholta hai aur samne ek khoobsurat aur fit body wali ladki khadi thi…
Ladki: ji kya Mr. Raj sinha ap hi hain…
Raj: ji han par ap kon hain…
Ladki: ji main miss Isha Sharma…Mohan Kumar ji ne bheja hai…main ek gym trainer hun…
Raj: ji han mujhe uncle ne bataya tha ap ander ayiye…
Isha aur Raj ander a jate hain aur hall mein sofon par baith jate hain….
Raj: Ap garam thandha kus lengi….
Isha: ji nahi thanks...
Raj: OK to apko uncle ne samja hi diya hoga ke mujhe ek personal trainer ki jarurat hai…
Isha: ji han…
Raj: apko mere ghar pe hi ana hoga…apko Jo Jo gym ka saman chahiye wo ap mujhe bata dijiye…
Isha: ji thik hai mujhe manjur hai…bas ap ye bata dijiye ke ap kya karna chahte hain..I mean ke ap weight reduce karna chahte hain yah muscles banana chahte hain…

Raj use Sara kus samja deta hai aur…Isha v Raj ko Jo Jo saman chahiye wo bata deti hai….
Isha: to sir main kab se a sakti hun…
Raj: ap kal subah se a jana…karib 6:00 baje kionk uske baad mujhe college Jana hoga…
Isha: sure sir…
Raj: agar ap bura na mane to ek baat pus sakta hun…
Isha: yes..
Raj: apki age kya hai…
Isha: 21
Raj: to fir ap mujhe sir mat kaha kijiye…main to apse 6 saal chota hun…ap mujhe mere naam se hi bula sakti hain…
Isha: OK sir…I mean Raj…
Fir dono hasne lagte hain…
Isha: OK sir ab mujhe chalna chahiye…
Raj: ok ap ja sakti hain…
Fir Isha wahan se chali jati hai…
Raj fir se baith kar TV dekhne lagta hai...ab jab tak ye janab TV dekh rahe hain to ham log Priya ke college ki taraf chalte hain…

Priya apni class room mein baithi thi…uske sath hi Sonia v baithi thi…Sonia aur Priya batein kar rahe the sayad jis teacher ka period tha wo aya nahi tha…Sonia to batein kar rahi thi par Priya sirf han na hi kar rahi thi…Sonia Priya ko ache se janti thi use pata tha ke Priya itni shant kabhi nahi baithti jarur koi problem hai…
Sonia: Priya ghar mein sab thik hai na…
Priya: han…
Sonia: to fir studies ki tension…
Priya: nahi…
Sonia: kisi ne kus kaha kya tujhse…
Priya: nahi yaar tum kion yeh sab puch rahi ho…
Sonia: kionk mujhe pata hai k tumhe koi na koi problem to jarur hai…
Priya: yaar nahi main bilkul thik hun…
Sonia: dekh yaar tu mujhse jhuth nahi bol sakti sach sach bata kya hua hai…
Priya: are sach mein koi baat nahi hai…
Sonia: dekh yaar tu mujhe apni friend nahi samjti…
Priya: nahi yaar aisi baat nahi hai….
Sonia: yaar ab bahut hua tujhe meri kasam tumhe sach batana hi padega…
Priya apni best friend ki kasam nahi tod sakti thi…aur wo apne dil ki baat aur kisi ko bata v nahi sakti thi isliye usne Sonia ko sab kus batane ka faisla kar liya…
Priya: kus nahi yaar bas thodi tension hai…
Sonia: kion kya hua…
Priya Sonia ko Apne aur Sunidhi ke bich huyi sari batein bata deti hai...
Sonia: to yeh baat hai…par tu itni tension kion le rahi hai…
Priya: yaar yeh to tujhe v pata hai k aunty meri bajah se dukhi hain…
Sonia: han par agar tu aise hi sochti rahegi to sab thik ho jayega kya…
Priya: aur main kya karun main bahut guilty feel kar rahi hun…
Sonia: dekh yaar tu aisa kar k ghar jate hi Raj ko phone karke usse sorry mang lena…
Priya: main usse baat nahi kar sakti…mujhe dar lag raha hai…
Sonia: yaar agar tum maafi nahi mangogi to tum aise hi ander hi ander dukhi hoti rahogi…
Priya: wo to thik hai par…mere paas uska number v nahi hai…
Sonia: to isme kya hai…apni mummy se le Lena....
Priya: yaar main kya kahungi k mujhe Raj se kya baat karni hai…
Sonia: ab wo sab mujhe nahi pata tu hi kus soch…

Priya: yaar main kya karun…ek to vaise hi main usse baat nahi karna chahti thi…uper se number lene ki v tension…
Sonia: abwo sab mujhe nahi pata tu hi kus soch…

Priya: yaar main kya karun…ek to vaise hi main usse baat nahi karna chahti thi…uper se number lene ki v tension…
Sonia: ab chod in sab baton ko tu jyada tension mat le aur class mein apna dhyan laga…
Itne mein wo period khatm ho jata hai aur agle period wali teacher a jati hai aur Priya apna dimag class ki taraf lagati hai…

Udhar pune mein Raj Hall mein baitha TV dekh raha tha k uske phone ka ring bajta hai…Raj dekhta hai wo Sandy ka number tha…Raj phone pick karta hai…
Raj: hlo
Sandy : hlo yaar kaisa hai…
Raj: thik hun tu bata…
Sandy: main v bilkul thik hun…yaar sun abhi kya kar raha hai…
Raj: kus nahi bas aise hi tv dekh raha hun…
Sandy: to kahin bahar ghumne chalein…
Raj: kya karenge yaar bahar ja kar vaise v mujhe ghumna phirna jyada pasand nahi hai…
Sandy: kya yaar Maine to socha tha k tume thoda shehar ghuma dunga isliye aj college v nahi gaya…par tune toh mood hi kharab kar diya…
Raj: yaar sorry mujhe nahi pata tha k tune mere liye chuti li hai…
Sandy: to bol fir chal raha hai na…
Raj:chal thik hai…
Sandy: sabash to main a raha hun tere ghar tujhe pick karne…
Raj: kab ayega..
Sandy: bas 15 mint mein…
Raj: OK thik hai…
Fir dono phone kaat dete hain aur Raj TV band karke nahane chala jata hai…..

To dosto abhi ke liye bas itna hi…age dekhte hain ke Priya kya karegi kya wo Sonia ki baat manegi yah fir wo kus aur karegi…Aur Raj ko yeh naya shehar kitna Raas ata hai...to plz bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath….

To be continued…….

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by spxossip

Shaandar update bhai.....
Sach kaha yaar apne maa ke aage to bhagwan bhi ghutne tekte hai......aur ek maa ko apne bete se dur karna bahut badi galti hai..........
Ab dekhte hai priya kya karegi.......raj se maafi mangegi ya raj hi mr. Perfect. Banke usko sabak sikhata hai......

entertainerjatt
thanks bhai....dekhte hai age kya hoga...

[sarit11]

Update 18

Raj sandy se baat karne ke baad nahane chala jata hai…wo abhi naha ke nikla hi tha ke sandy ka fir se phone a jata hai…Raj phone pick karta hai…
Sandy: bahar aja yaar main tera wait kar raha hun…
Raj: tu aisa kar ander hi aja mujhe thoda time lagega…
Sandy: OK yaar thik hai…
Fir sandy ander ja kar baith jata hai aur Raj v thode time mein hi tyar ho kar bahar a jata hai…
Raj: kaisa hai Sandy….
Sandy: thik hun tu bata…
Raj: main toh bilkul thik hun…kus lega kya khane peene ko…
Sandy: yaar chod bahar hi kha lenge…
Raj: chal thik hai main driver ko bolta hun gadi nikal lega…
Sandy: yaar meri bike pe hi chalenge…
Raj: abe tera toh abhi license bhi nahi bana hai…kahin chalan ho gaya toh...
Sandy: abe yeh tera UK nahi India hai yahan sab chala hai…ab tu jyada soch mat aur chal mere sath bahut maja ayega…
Raj: chal but koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye…
Sandy: chal na yaar kion itna darta hai…
Fir wo dono Raj ki bike se nikal padte hain…aur khoob masti karte hain…Dono ek ache se hotel mein baith kar lunch karte hain…uska bill Raj ne hi pay kiya…Sandy ne bahut mana kiya par wo nahi mana….

Fir lagbhag 2:30 baje dono ghar ki taraf chal padte hain…aj dono ki dosti aur gehri ho gayi thi…dono ne aj bahut batein ki…

Fir dono Raj ke ghar pahunch jate hain…aur bike park karke ander hall mein akar baith jate hain…ramu kaka dono ke liye juice lekar ata hai…dono juice pite hain aur batein karne lagte hain…
Raj: yaar aj toh sach mein maja hi a gaya…
Sandy: han yaar…
Raj: mujhe nahi pata tha ke doston ke sath ghumane mein itna maja ata hai….aur kabhi dost banaye v toh nahi sayad isliye nahi pata tha…
Sandy: yaar ab to main tera dost hun na to milkar dono damaal macha denge…
Raj: han bilkul…
Sandy: chal thik hai yaar abhi mujhe Jana hoga…kal ko college a raha hai na…
Raj: han chal fir wahin milte hain…

Fir sandy wahan se nikal jata hai…aur Raj apne kamre mein chala jata hai….wo jakar bed par lait the hi so jata hai…abhi use soye huye adha ghanta hi huya tha k tabhi uske room ke gate oar knock hota hai…baar baar knock hone par Raj ki neend khul jati hai aur wo uth kar gate kholta hai…samne ramu kaka khade the…
Raj: ji kaka koi kam tha kya…
Ramu kaka: Raj baba wo Mohan sahab aye hain unhone ne apko bulaya hai…
Raj: ji main do mint mein ata hun…
Fir Raj washroom mein jakar munh dhota hai aur bahar hall mein ajata hai…Wahan Mohan ke sath aik aur admi baitha tha Jo sayad 32-33 saal ka hoga…
Raj un dono ko namaste karta hai aur unke paas jakar baith jata hai…
Mohan: beta yeh hain Mr. Harish Patel…boht bade music teacher hain…tum inse baat karlo aur bata do ke tum kya seekhna chahte ho…
Fir Raj Harish se baat karta hai aur dono sham 5:00-6:00 baje tak ek ghante ki class fix karte hain aur fir Harish wahan se chala jata hai par Mohan wahin baitha rehta…

Mohan: toh beta aj tum us trainer se mil liye the?
Raj: han uncle aur wo kal subah se ayegi…aur han mujhe gym ka saman chahiye ap ko aj hi sab set karwana hoga…
Mohan: koi baat nahi beta tum bata do tume kya chahiye…

Fir Raj Mohan ko list de deta hai aur Mohan wahan se chala jata hai…Abhi sirf char hi baje the to Raj apne kamre ja kar lait jata hai…aur laptop on karke movie dekhne lagta hai…

Udhar Mumbai mein Priya apne room mein baithi kus soch rahi thi…
Priya(apne man main hi bol rahi thi): kya mujhe Raj se baat karni chahiye ..kya wo meri baat manega…wo to mujhse bahut jyada gussa hoga…aur upar se mere paas Raj ka number v to nahi hai…yaar bahut tension hai…main abhi to Aunty ke paas ja kar ati hun fir hi kus sochungi…
Priya wahan se Raj ke ghar ki taraf chal padti hai…wo jab wahan pahunchti hai to Sunidhi bahar hi garden mein baithi thi…
Priya: namaste aunty…
Sunidhi: namaste beta kaisi ho….
Priya: bilkul thik hun aunty…ap batao kaisi ho…
Sunidhi: main v thik hun beti aur suna aj Teri padhai kaisi chal rahi hai…
Priya: thik chal rahi hai aunty…
Sunidhi: beta main coffee le kar ati hun…tu v ander hi chal hall mein baith kar batein karenge…
Fir Priya aur Sunidhi Hall mein chale jate hain aur Sunidhi Rita ko awaj dekar coffee mangwati hai…fir dono coffee pite hain aur batein karne lagte hain…

Priya ek chij notice karti hai k Sunidhi usse batein karte waqt kafi khus lag rahi thi…Sunidhi ke chehre ki khusi dekh kar Priya ke man mein Jo sarmindagi ke bhaw the wo bhi kam hone lage the….ab usne yeh socha ke wo Raj ko phone nahi karegi…balki khud Sunidhi ka khyal rakhegi apni maa ki tarah…pata nahi Priya ka yeh Vichar sahi hai ya nahi…par ab wo pakka faisla kar chuki thi…

Fir wo kafi time tak Sunidhi se batein karti rahi…aur fir apne ghar ki taraf chal padti hai…aj uske chehre pe ek satisfaction jhalak raha tha…

Khair uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya aur bas Raj ke ghar pe ek bade se kamre mein uske gym ka saman set karwa diya gaya tha….Raat ko Raj ne apni mummy se phone pe baat ki…aur fir so gaya…

Dusre din Raj subah utha apni mummy se baat ki aur halki jogging karne ke baad Isha ka wait karne laga…Isha apne time pe a gayi aur Raj ki gym shuru karwa di…Fir Raj apne college v gaya wahan uska kafi man laga…Sandy ki bajah se use koi khas problem nahi huyi sham ko uska music teacher harish aya usne use kus basics sikhaye Raj ko gym ke karn Jo thakawat mehsoos huyi thi wo music ki wajah se bilkul thik ho gayi thi…Sham ko Isha fir se ayi …aur Raj ko exercise karwayi….

Udhar Priya v sunidhi ke paas gayi aur usse batein ki….ab Priya ko Sunidhi se ek lagav sa ho gaya tha…

Dosto ab main story ko thoda sa fast bhagaunga taki jaldi se present time mein a sakein….ap log sath dete rahiye…

To be continued….

[sarit11]

Update 19

Aj Raj wapis apne ghar Jane wala tha uske papa ne uske 2nd year admission Mumbai mein hi karwa diya tha… dosto jyada confuse hone ki jarurat nahi hai ab hum log present main a chuke hain..Toh pehle mein ye bata dun pichle 5 salon mein kya kus badal chuka hai…
Vaise badla to kafi kus hai…

Pehle hamare hero Raj se hi shuru karte hain…Raj main sabse bada badlaw toh yeh aya tha ke wo ab pehle ki tarah mota sa bacha nahi raha tha…balki ab wo muscular body ka malik tha…uske six pack abs dekhne ke liye to ladkian Marti thi...khair agar uski man pasand chij yani music ki baat karein to ab wo ek trained singer ban chuka tha…guitar toh uski unglion par Jaise nachti thi aur awaj aisi Jaise suron ki nahi balki pyar ki bundon ki barsat ho rahi ho…vaise uski awaj mein itni kashis thi k ladkian uske gore chehre neeli ankhein lambe kad aur muscular body se jyada uski awaj ki deewani thi....Jo Raj pehle apne ap mein hi khoya rehta tha ab wo apne college ki jaan tha…aur aj usi college ko use chod kar Jana pad raha tha…

Khair Raj ne itne salon mein ek aur chij payi thi wo thi Sandy ki dosti…in dono ki dosti itni gehri ho chuki hai k dono ek dusre ke liye jaan v de sakte hain…Aur isi dosti ki wajah se aj Sandy v Raj ke sath hi Mumbai jane wala tha…Raj ne toh use yeh bhi kaha tha wo uske ghar hi reh le par Sandy nahi mana usne kaha ke uske mama ji rehte hain Mumbai mein unke paas rahega…Raj ki dosti hi thi jiski wajah se Sandy thoda bahut padhai ki taraf dhyan dene laga tha sayad yahi wajah thi ke Sandy ki mummy Raj ko bahut pyar karti thi….

Khair hum log ab thoda Priya ki taraf bhi ek najar maar lete hain…Priya toh itne salon mein aur jyada khubsurat ho chuki thi …uska chehra bilkul dudh ki tarah safed tha aisa chehra dekh kar sayad chand v Sharma jaye…uske figure ke toh kya kehne…ladke marte the us par but bechare kar kus nahi sakte the kionk Priya ki reputation abhi v ek hitler ki hi thi…vaise ab wo pehle se basal chuki thi ab pehle ki tarah paglon Jaise kaam nahi karti thi…Iski sabse badi wajah sayad Sunidhi hi thi…asal mein us din ki Sunidhi ki baton ne Priya ko itna badal diya tha...Priya ab Sunidhi se bahut pyar karti thi wo har roj Sunidhi ke paas baith kar dheron batein karti thi…Jab kabhi Sunidhi Raj se Milne ke liye pune jati thi toh Priya ka bilkul v dil nahi lagta tha...

Sonia v ab Priya ki tarah bahut khubsurat thi Priya se thodi kam thi par usme samjdhari Priya se kahin jyada thi…sayad Sonia hi thi Jo Priya ko har ache bure ke bare mein batati thi…

Dosto waqt ke sath bahut kus badal chuka tha….par ek chij thi Jo nahi badli thi wo Raj ke man mein Priya ke liye nafrat…Priya v Raj ko bilkul v pasand nahi karti thi han yeh baat thi ke use apne kiye par afsos tha par wo abhi v Raj ko nafrat karti thi…Sayad yahi wajah thi k Raj ke mummy papa aur Priya ke Mummy papa Raj se milne puna aksar jate rehte the par Na toh kabhi Raj mumbai gaya aur na hi kabhi Priya Pune gayi….dono ke man mein ek dusre ke prati itni nafrat thi ke in panch salon mein na to ek dusre ki photo Dekhi aur na hi ek dusre ke bare mein kabhi baat ki….

Raj toh Mumbai Jana hi nahi chahta tha par uske 1st year ke exams ke baad uski Mummy ne use kasam de di thi ke ab wo uske bina aur nahi ji sakti agar wo nahi aya toh wo uska Mara munh dekhega…ab Raj kus v seh sakta tha par apni mummy ke munh se aisi batein nahi sun sakta tha…isliye usne Mumbai Jane ka faisla kiya…Vaise toh Priya aur Raj ek hi college ki alag alag branches mein padte the...Raghuveer ne Priya ke college mein hi Raj ka admission karwa diya tha…

Aj Raj Jane wala tha…wo via road hi Jane wala tha ab wo khud hi drive kar leta tha isliye wo lagbhag 10:00 baje ghar se niklta hai aur Sandy ke ghar ki taraf chal padta hai…Sandy ka ghar jyada dur nahi tha...isliye Raj sirf 5-7 minute mein hi wahan pahunch jata hai…wo door bell bajata hai…Sandy ki mummy door kholti hai Raj unke pair chuta hai aur Rekha use ashirwad deti hai…fir Raj ander ajata hai wahan Sandy aur Mohan baithe the Sandy v bilkul tyar tha aur uska saman v packing kar ke uske paas mein rakha hua tha…
Raj: namaste uncle….
Mohan: namaste beta…toh ho gayi tyari tumhari…
Raj: han uncle…aur mere khyal se hame ab niklna chahiye Sandy…
Sandy: chalo main toh ready hun…
Raj: OK bye uncle aunty…
Rekha: bye beta apna khyal rakhna aur is nalayak ka bhi…aur han Sandeep jate hi phone kar dena…
Sandy: ji mom…

Fir dono Sandy ke parents ko bye bol kar wahan se chal padte hain…ab inhe Mumbai pahunchne mein time to lagega hi tab tak hum log Mumbai ka hal chal dekh lete hain…
Aj Sinha mansion mein toh Jaise time se pehle diwali a chuki thi….ghar mein sabhi bahut khus the…Mohit aur Geeta v Raj ke ghar pe hi the…sabhi bas usi ka intzar kar rahe the….Priya college gayi huyi thi aisa nahi tha ke wo Raj se bhag rahi thi but wo apne college ki topper thi aur kabhi v apni classes nahi chodti thi…vaise to abhi 1st year ke exams khatam hi huye the aur Aj yani Monday se 2nd year ki classes shuru huyi thi isiliye Priya nahi chahti thi ke wo pehle din hi absent rahe….vaise v aj sham ko Raghuveer ne apne bete ke ane ki khusi mein ek grand party rakhi thi…toh wo tabhi Raj se mil legi isliye ghar ke kisi v mamber ne Priya par koi pressure nahi dala…

Yaar hum v kin baton mein uljh gaye…khair hum baat kar rahe the ke ghar mein bahut chahal pahal thi…bahar garden mein party ki tyarian badi jor shor se chal rahi thi..aur gharwale sirf Raj ka wait kar rahe the…Sunidhi toh baar baar bahar nikal kar main gate ki taraf dekh rahi thi….

Aise hi waqt beeta aur karib 1:00 pm ko ek nauker ander daudte huye aya…sayad iski duty Sunidhi ne lgayi thi taki wo apne jaan se pyare bete ka sawagat kar sake….
Nauker: mam wo Raj sir a chuke hain wo gadi park karne garage ki taraf gaye hain…

Nauker ki baat sun kar Sab khus ho jate hain khas kar Sunidhi aur Geeta….Sunidhi to sayad hawa mein hi ud rahi thi...fir Sunidhi aarti ki thali uthati hai aur Door ke paas ja kar khadi ho jati hai…Baki ke gharwale v uske sath chal dete hain…Raj Jaise hi gate pe ata hai toh Samne ghar walon ko dekh ke bahut khus ho jata hai…Sunidhi v apne bete ki aarti utarti hai....Fir Raj aur Sandy bari bari sab logon ka Ashirwad lete hain…Sandy ko sabhi ache se jante the…

Raj pehle Raghuveer aur Mohit se milta hai jab wo apni mummy ke paas jata hai toh wo use apne gale se laga leti hai…vaise toh thode time baad hi Sunidhi Raj se Milne ke liye Pune jati thi par fir v ab use bahut jyada khusi thi kionk use pata tha ke Raj ab hamesha ke liye uske paas a gaya hai….

Kafi time aise hi rehne ke baad Raj apni mummy ko apne se alag karta hai toh dekhta hai ke uski mummy ki ankhon mein ansoo the wo unhe saaf karta hai…

Raj: mom ap ro kion rahi ho ab toh main apke paas a gaya hun na aur ab main apko kabhi chod kar nahi jaunga…
Sunidhi: beta yeh toh khusi ke ansoo hain…main bata nahi sakti k main kitni khus hun ….
Geeta: are wah yeh toh koi baat nahi huyi…apni ek maa se itna pyar aur dusri ki taraf dekha v nahi….
Raj Geeta ke paas jata hai aur use apne gale laga leta hai…
Raj: are aunty apse kisne keh diya k main apse pyar nahi karta…
Mohit: are bhai ab tum dono us bechare ko chod v do use ander toh ane do thak gaya hoga wo…

Fir sabhi ander a kar baith jate hain….aur apas mein batein karne lagte hain…

Raghuveer: beta tum dono ko raste mein koyi pareshani toh nahi huyi na…
Raj: nahi papa…
Raghuveer: sandeep beta tumhare ghar pe sab kaise hain…
Sandy : ji thik hain sir…
Raghuveer: yaar tum Raj ke dost ho Mujhe uncle keh sakte ho…
Sandy : ji thik hai…
Sunidhi: Beta Raj toh Tea coffee kus peeta nahi hai main tumhare liye Coffee mangwa dun…
Sandy: nahi mam main fir aunga abhi toh mujhe mama ji ke ghar Jana hai unka phone a raha hai…
Sunidhi: chalo jaisi tumhari marji par han sham ko party mein jarur ana aur apne mama Mami ko v sath lana…
Sandy: ji yeh koi kehne ki baat hai Raj ke liye party rakhi ho aur main na aun yeh toh kabhi ho nahi sakta…
Raghuveer: toh beta main driver bhej deta hun tumhe ghar chod ayega…
Raj: papa main chod ata hun aur party ke liye invite v kar dunga…
Raghuveer: thik hai beta jaisi tumhari marji…

Fir Raj aur Sandy wahan se chal padte hain…Raj ka saman gadi se nikal kar uske kamre mein rakh diya gaya tha par Sandy ka saman gadi mein hi tha…Raj ke ghar se Sandy ke mama ke ghar tak tarkriban 15-20 minute lage…Raj aur Sandy uska saman leke ghar ki door bell bajate hain…

Door ek lady kholti hai…Raj use nahi janta tha par jab Sandy ne uske pair chuye toh raj ne v chu diye us aurat ne un dono ko ashirwad diya aur fir teeno ander a gaye…
Sandy: Raj ye meri Mami hain…aur Mami yeh hai Raj mera dost mera bhai…
Lady: han beta mujhe Teri mummy ne bata diya tha…vaise inke daddy ko toh pura shehar janta hai…tum dono baitho main khane pine ko kus lati hun…
Raj: nahi rehne dijiye aunty…
Sandy: Mami koi ghar mein najar nahi a raha…
Mami: wo tumhare mama ji toh duty pe gaye hain aur tumhari Behan college….
Raj: OK sandy ab main chalta hun…Aunty aj mere ghar pe party hai aur ap sabhi ko ana padega…
Mami: beta main kya karungi a kar…
Raj: mujhe kus nahi pata mummy ne kaha hai ke ap logon ko ana padega aur vaise v Sandy ke mummy daddy v a rahe hain sham ko toh ap ko v jarur ana padega…
Mami: chalo thik hai beta hum jarur ayenge…
Fir Raj wahan se apne ghar ki taraf chal padta hai…

toh dekhte hain ke aj raat ki party mein kya kya hota hai…Ap log Dildariyan ko aise hi pyar dete rahein…

To be continued……

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by spxossip

Shaandar update bhai.......ab to story ka maza dugna ho gya.........ab dekhte hai raj aur priya ki mulakat kaise hoti hai........aur kya sandy ki mama ki ladki soniya to nhi hai...?
Eagerly waiting for next

entertainerjatt

Thanks bhai.... Par ek baat toh hai apse toh bachkar hi rehna padega.....

[sarit11]

Update 20

Raj apne ghar pahunchte hi so jata hai…us din kus khas nahi huya…toh hum log seedha party mein chalte hain…sham ko 7:30 se hi mehman ane shuru ho chuke the…pura Sinha mansion lighting aur decoration se chamak raha tha…Party mein Raghuveer aur Mohit ke business partners, friends, ristedaar a rahe the…kafi VIP log Jaise ministers aur Celebrities aye huye the…Raj abhi bhi tyar ho raha tha…

Sandy v a chuka tha uske sath uske mama Mami aur Do ladkian thi sayad uski cousins thi…Wo wahan pahunchte hi Raj ko phone karta hai...Raj vaise toh busy tha par kionk Sandy ka phone tha toh usne utha liya…

Raj: kaisa hai…
Sandy: thik hun yaar tu kahan hai…hamko bula liya aur khud gayab hai…
Raj: yaar main gayab hone ko Mr. India nahi hun…tu aisa kar abhi party mein thoda time hai tu ander aja…
Sandy: yaar tu bahar kion nahi a jata…
Raj: yaar main a toh jata hun par jab log mujhse puchenge k main underwear mein kion ghum raha hu toh tu khud un ko bata dena ke Maine hi bulaya hai…
Sandy: chal thik hai yaar…par mere sath meri family hai unko akela nahi chod sakta…
Raj: yaar tu tension bahut leta hai aisa kar main dad ko phone kar deta hun wo in logon ko attend kar lenge…
Sandy: chal thik hai…
Fir Raj apne dad ko phone karta hai…wo thodi der ke baad utha lete hain…

Raghuveer: are beta kya huya kus chahiye kya…
Raj: nahi papa ap abhi kya kar rahe ho…
Raghuveer: kus nahi Home minister aye hain apni family ke sath unse hi batein kar raha tha….
Raj: wo Sandy ki family wale aye hain…wo yahan kisi ko jante nahi hain kya ap unko attend kar sakte hain…
Raghuveer: are koi baat nahi beta tum tension mat lo main sab sambhal lunga tum bas jaldi se tyar ho kar niche ao sare mehman a chuke hain…
Raj: ji papa thoda time lagega bas…
Fir Raghuveer Sandy ki family ko attend karta hai aur Sandy upar Raj ke kamre mein chala jata hai…

Sandy: yaar tu na tyar hone mein ladkion se v jyada time lagata hai…
Raj: bhai mujhe koi Shauk nahi hai aur vaise v nahane mein time lagata hun tyar hone mein nahi…
Sandy: yaar tu kion yeh kapde pehan ke ja raha hai…itni achi body kion banayi hai…aise hi chala ja sari ladkian tujhpe mar mitengi…
Raj: yaar mujhe ladkian patane ka koyi Shauk nahi hai par teri cousin ayi ho toh bata main aise hi chalne ko tyar hun…
Sandy: Abe kya bakwas kar raha hai…
Raj: bakwas main nahi tu kar raha hai sale tujhe kitni baar kahun ke mujhe ladkion se nafrat hai…
Sandy: yaar mujhe toh Jaise kus pata hi nahi…Wo tere aur Teri us trainer Isha ke beech Jo chakar hai na mujhe sab pata hai…
Raj: yaar tu baar baar uski baat kion leke baith jata hai…dekh main tujhe last warning de raha hun…main nahi chahta ke jab tu niche party mein jaye toh tera chehra suja huya ho….
Sandy: yaar sorry ab jaldi se tyar ho ja…

Fir Raj jaldi jaldi tyar hone lagta hai…usne aj blue jeans aur white shirt pehna tha…fitting ke kapdon mein Raj ki physic ek dum kamal ki lag rahi thi...Raj kafi handsome lag raha tha…Fir tyar hone ke baad dono bahar party mein a jate hain…Raj sab se pehle Sandy ki family ki taraf jata hai…wo ek taraf khade the wo sirf teen log the ek ladki kam thi pata nahi kahan gayi thi par koi baat nahi pata chal jayega…un teeno ke paas Sunidhi aur Geeta v khadi thi…Raghuveer wahan nahi tha…

Sandy Sab se pehle Sunidhi ke pair chuta hai aur fir Raj ko apni Family ka intro deta hai…
Sandy: Raj yeh mere mama ji hain Jagdeesh Sharma aur Mami ji ko toh tum mil hi chuke ho vaise inka naam Radha Sharma hai aur yeh meri Choti cousin Riya aj sham ko hi ayi hai aur hamare college mein hi admission li hai ek saal junior hai hamse…

Fir Raj Sandy ke mama Mami se milta hai aur Jab wo Riya ki taraf hath badhata hai toh Riya jhat se apna hath badha deti hai…fir wo un sab se batein karne lagta hai….
Tabhi Sandy bol padta hai…
Sandy: Mami Sonia kahan gayi dikh nahi rahi kahin mujhe laga ke washroom gayi hogi par ab toh kafi der ho chuki hai…
Radha: Wo beta Sonia ki best friend hai Priya wo yahin rehti hai…Wo usi ke ghar chali gayi aur boli k uske sath hi ayegi…

Radha ki baat sun ke Raj ke toh Jaise hosh hi udh jate hain…use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ke Sonia Sandy ki Behan ho sakti hai…wo ek dum se sun sa ho gaya tha…

Tabhi Raghuveer use awaj deta hai…

Raghuveer: Raj beta mere sath chalna wo main tujhe Home minister se milwata hun…

Fir Raj Raghuveer ke sath chal padta hai…wahan char log ek round table par baithe the...Jaise hi Raj aur Raghuveer wahan pahunchte hain wo Charon khade ho jate hain…

Raghuveer: beta yeh hain Satpal Chada hamari state ke Home minister…yeh hain inki patni Parveen Chada....yeh inke bete Maninder Chada aur inki beti Diksha Chada….

Raj sabhi se milta hai...par wo unki taraf koyi khas dhyan nahi deta kionk uska dhyan toh Sonia ki taraf tha…Minister aur uski Family Raj ki personality dekh kar kafi Impress the…wo baar uski tareef kar rahe the…Diksha toh Raj ko hi ghure ja rahi thi…par Raj ne jyada dhyan nahi diya wo toh bas yahi soch raha tha ke Sonia Sandy ki behan kaise ho sakti hai…
Thodi der aise hi batein karne ke baad Raj wahan se chala jata hai…use ajeeb sa lag raha tha wo bas Sonia ke bare mein hi soche ja raha tha…wo wahan se sidha apne room mein chala jata hai aur bed par baith jata hai…wo kafi preshan tha pehle toh wo sirf yahi soch raha tha ke wo Priya se kaise duri bana kar rakhega par yahan toh ek aur bomb phut chuka tha...Uski sabse badi dusman ki best friend uske best friend ki Behan Nikli…use dar tha ke kahin Priya Sonia se keh kar Sandy se uski dosti tudwa na de....

Hum thoda dhyan Priya ke ghar pe v mar lete hain…Wahan Priya aur Sonia hi thi baki members toh Raj ke ghar par the…
Sonia kafi tension mein lag rahi thi…
Sonia: yaar ab kya hoga agar Raj ne Sandy ko bata diya ke hum dono ne hi use yahan se bhagaya tha toh kya hoga…
Priya: yaar isme tera kya kasur tha sari planning toh meri hi thi na…
Sonia: par Raj ko toh yahi lagta hoga na ke main v tere sath hi thi…
Priya: yaar tu ghabra kion rahi hai…usne aj tak kisi ko nahi bataya toh ab kion batayega wo…
Sonia: yaar mujhe nahi pata mujhe toh bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai…agar mujhe pata hota ke Raj hi Sandy ka friend hai toh main toh yahan ati hi na….
Priya: yaar koi baat nahi kus nahi hoga ab hamein chalna chahiye sab intzar kar rahe honge…
Sonia: nahi mujhe nahi Jana…
Priya: yaar dar mat main hun na sath tu chal kus nahi hoga…
Fir Priya Sonia ko mana kar wahan se party ke liye nikal jati hain…wo party main pahunch kar Sonia ke pariwar se milti hai….fir sabhi party ke liye ke jagah ikathe ho jate hain kionk Ab Raghuveer sabhi ko apne bete se milwana chahta tha…par Raj toh wahan tha nahi toh Raghuveer use phone karta hai…aur party mein ane ko kehta hai….
Ab Raj ke ane pe kya hoga yeh toh agle update mein hi pata chalega…toh bane rahiye aur aise hi apna pyar dete rahiye…

To be continued…..

[sarit11]

Update 21

Raghuveer ke phone karne ke baad Raj apne ap ko mentally tyar karta hai aur bahar ki taraf chal padta hai…party itni grand hai toh jiske liye party rakhi gayi hai uski entry v toh kus special honi chahiye…aur is entry ke liye pehle se tyari ho chuki hai…yahan party rakhi gayi hai wahan sabhi mehman apni apni family ke sath round tables pe baithe hain…aur sab ki nigahein stage ki taraf hain yahan par Raj ki entry hone wali hai…Sab ki udeek ka alag alag karan hai…yahan kus log toh isliye udeek rahe hain kionk wo dekhna chahte hain k Sinha Empire ka eklauta waris akhir dikhta kaisa hai…kus logon ki udeek mein Raj ke prati unka pyar jhalak raha hai…wahin kus log aise v hain jo Raj ko apna dushman samjte hain…

Stage pe light band ho chuki hai…sabki nigahein abhi v stage ki taraf hi hain but wahan kus dikhayi nahi de raha…thodi hi der mein Guitar ki volume ani shuru ho chuki thi aur badi hi mithi composition thi…Fir ek romantic song shuru hota hai…sabhi guest jhum uthte hain….song khatam hote hi sabhi guest khade ho kar talian marte hain...fir achanak Stage ki light jalti hai aur samne ek Jana pehchana sakhs khada tha….wahan majood kus log use jante the par kus ke liye bilkul ajnabi tha…tabhi Raghuveer stage pe ata hai…

Raghuveer: so friends hum log jiske liye yahan ikathe huye hain…jiska hamein intzar hai…mera beta mera waris koi aur nahi balki ye hai Raj…

Ji han Jisne wo song gaya tha wo koi aur nahi balki hamara hero Raj hi tha…Sabhi log Raj ko dekh rahe the…par do logon ka munh khula huya tha…Priya aur Sonia….

Kionk 5 saal pehle jis Raj ka majak bana kar use yahan se bhaga diya tha….yeh wo Raj nahi tha…jis Raj ko sabhi mota,pumpkin, balloon aur na jane kya kya kehte the…wo Raj toh sayad bahut pehle mar chuka tha…aj Jo Raj un logon ke samne khada tha uski tarif ke liye un logon ke paas koyi shabad nahi tha…

Aj Raj ki awaj ne aisa jadu kiya k ek pal ke liye toh Priya v pighal si gayi par wo itni kamjor nahi thi usne apne ap ko sambhal liya…par wo abhi bhi hairan thi k yeh zero ek dum se hero kaise ban gaya…Raj mein kus toh aisi baat thi Jo khas thi…

Priya toh thik hi thi par Sonia ki toh jaise halat hi kharab ho gayi thi usne kabhi itna handsome ladka nahi dekha tha najane uske lakh rokne ke bawjood kion uske man mein sirf Raj hi ghum raha tha…Najane kion uske kanon mein Raj ke song ke bol hi gunj rahe the…uska munh khula huya tha jise Priya ne band kiya…

Priya: tu kion munh phad ke dekh rahi hai koi Rajkumar nahi hai wo…
Sonia: may be…
Priya: kya boli tu…
Par Sonia koi jawab nahi deti…

Tabhi stage pe lagi badi si screen par Raj ki bachpan se jawani tak ki photo ane lagti hain…Sabhi log in photos ka maja utha rahe the….par sayad ab munh khulne ki bari kisi aur ki thi....aur wo ek ladka tha dosto galat mat samjna wo koyi gay nahi tha aur na hi uska munh Sonia ki tarah khula tha…balki uska munh toh piche se khula tha…agar sudh Hindi mein bataun toh uski phat chuki thi aur sayad itni buri tarah phati thi ke koi maa ka laal aisa tailor nahi hoga Jo uski see sake…

Khair Jyada lumba suspense nahi rakhunga….yeh koi aur nahi balki minister sahab ka beta Maninder tha..ab uski kion phati yeh toh pata lagana hi padega…aur uski phatne ki wajah thi Raj ki ek photo Jo tab hi thi jab Raj Pehli baar India aya tha …yani 5 saal pehle ki…

Par ab ap log soch rahe honge ke Is photo se Maninder ka kya Lena dena hai…toh ap logon ko bata dun ke 5 saal pehle bhai sahab ne ek kand kiya tha…ek bechare bhole bhale cute se ladke ko dara ke bhaga diya tha ..ab ap sabhi samaj hi chuke honge…par fir v story writer hone ke nate mera farz hai batane ka toh…main bata dun ke Maninder ka nick name Monty hai…yeh wahi Monty hai…jo Priya ke ishare pe Raj ko preshan karta tha…vaise toh iske papa ab ek minister the…par fir v use pata tha k agar Raghuveer Sinha ko pata chal gaya k Raj ke Pune jane ki wajah Monty tha toh Pata nahi uske papa ke sath kya hota aur fir uske papa uski Jo halt karte wo main likh nahi paunga…

Usne kabhi socha v nahi tha k Jo kand kar ke wo bhul chuka tha…wo itne salon baad uske samne a jayega aur itna bada ho kar ayega….Raghuveer ki baat toh alag hai agar kahin Raj ko v pata chal jaye k yeh Monty hai toh Raj itna strong toh tha hi k uski bones ka churan bana kar Dabar walon ko bech de…

Khair hum monty ki halat mein kus jyada hi kho gaye the par yahan toh uski halat aur v kharab thi…uske mathe pe pasine ki bundein saaf najar a rahi thin…wo ekdum se uth kar khada ho jata hai…uske aisa karne se minister ka dhyan uski taraf jata hai….

Satpal: kya aise kion uth raha hai Jaise kisi ne kaat liya ho…
Monty: kus nahi dad wo toilet Jana hai…
Satpal: tu koi panch saal ka bacha nahi hai Jo tu aise bol raha hai k papa papa mujhe toilet Jana hai…
Monty: sorry papa…
Satpal: Raj se kus seekh dikhne mein kisi hero jaisa hai…padhne mein v intelligent aur Aj toh yeh v pata chal gaya ke wo kitna acha singer hai…aur ek tu hai toilet Jana v nahi ata…kamse kam meri izzat ka toh khyal kar….

Satpal kafi dhire bol raha tha…taki kisi ko sunai na de…par Satpal ki batein sun kar Monty ka pressure sach mein badh gaya aur wo bina kus bole wahan se washroom ki aur teji se chal pada…

Khair fir kus khas nahi huya aur sabhi ne party enjoy ki teen logon ko chod kar…fir sabhi guest 11:30 baje ke as pas chale gaye the aur Raj v apne kamre mein ja kar so gaya kionk wo bahut thak chuka tha isliye use jaldi hi neend a gayi…

Subah Raj jaldi uth gaya ab uski habit ban chuki thi subah jaldi uthne ki aur Fir apni routine exercise mein lag gaya…uske gym ka saman pehle hi ghar pe set kara diya gaya tha…

Fir usne shower liya aur apna juice wagera pi ke apni guitar uthai aur bajane laga…Tabhi uske gate pe knock hota hai…uska gate ander se band tha toh usne uth kar khola…samne Sunidhi khadi thi…

Raj: good morning mom…
Sunidhi: good morning beta…sorry tujhe disturb kiya..par kya karun kal v tujhse ache se batein nahi kar payi…aur kya pata din mein fir se mauka na mile…
Raj: are mom ap mujhe kabhi disturb nahi kar sakte…ap jab chaho mere paas a sakte hain…ayiye ab ander baith ke batein karte hain…

Fir dono ander a jate hain aur bed par baith jate hain…
Sunidhi: beta tune abhi bhi wahi guitar rakhi huyi hai nayi kion nahi le leta…
Raj: mom nayi le ke kya karna hai …vaise v uncle aunty ne kitne pyar se di hai…
Sunidhi: beta tum abhi bhi nahi badle na…abhi bhi sabse pyar karte ho aur sabka khyal rakhte ho…tujhe pata hai jab tu yahan nahi tha toh mujhe aisa lagta tha Jaise kisi ne meri jaan nikal li ho aur main bas ek jinda lash ban ke reh gayi thi…
Raj: mom ab main a gaya hun na aap bilkul fikar mat kijiye main ab apka Ashe se khyal rakhunga..
Sunidhi: mujhe pata hai beta k tu sabka khyal rakhta hai…sach kahun toh mujhe tumhari yahi baat sabse jyada pyari lagti hai…hamesha aise hi rehna beta kabhi bhi apne aap ko badlna mat…
Raj: promise mom apka Raj kabhi nahi badlega…
Sunidhi: mujhe tum pe apne se bhi jyada bharosa hai…vaise sach tu college kab se ja raha hai…
Raj: kal se jaunga mom…aj thoda Mumbai ghum ke aunga..
Sunidhi: kis ke sath ja raha hai…
Raj: aur kiske sath sandy jayega na main use bol deta hun….
Sunidhi: OK thik hai aur breakfast kar lena niche a ke…
Raj: thik hai…

Fir Sunidhi wahan se chali jati hai aur Raj v thodi der baad niche chala jata hai breakfast ke liye....

Friends abhi ke liye bas itna hi ap sab aise hi bane rahiye…aur support karte rahiye…

To be continued….

[sarit11]

Update 22

Raj breakfast karne ke baad apne kamre mein chala jata hai Aur Sandy ko phone karta hai….Sandy phone pick karta hai…

Sandy: hlo yaar kaisa hai…
Raj: thik hun tu bata kaisa hai…
Sandy: main v bilkul thik hun…bol kaise phone kiya…
Raj: yaar main soch raha tha k kion na Mumbai ghum ayein fir kal se college join kar lenge…
Sandy: han thik hai chalte hain…
Raj: chal thik hai tu yahan aja fir chalte hain…
Sandy: yaar main a toh jata par kaise aun yahan toh meri bike bhi nahi hai tu hi aja yahan…
Raj: chal thik hai…

Fir Raj phone kaat deta hai tabhi wo sochta hai ke Maine keh toh diya par agar wahan Sonia mil gayi toh…sayad wo college gayi hogi aur agar mil v gayi toh kya ho jayega vaise v ek na ek din toh humara samna hona hi hai…

Fir Raj apni gadi nikalta hai aur Sandy ke ghar ki taraf chal padta hai…Wahan pahunch kar Raj door bell bajata hai Raj bas yahi soch raha tha k kahin sonia na gate kholne a jaye…tabhi ek ladki darwaja kholti hai…tabhi Raj ki sans mein sans ayi kionk samne Riya khadi thi…

Riya: hi..
Raj: hi…kaisi ho..
Riya: fine: ap batao…
Raj: thik hun Sandy kahan hai…use bhej do na plz…
Abhi Raj ki baat puri hi huyi thi k wahan Sandy a gaya…
Riya: kion kahin ja rahe ho kya…
Sandy: han bahar ghumane ja rahe hain…
Riya: sach? Mujhe v le jao…
Sandy: tum kya karogi wahan…
Riya: plzzzzz
Sandy: yaar thik hai par agar mami nahi mani toh…
Riya: mummy ko main mana lungi…
Sandy: chalo thik hai Jo karna hai jaldi kar hamare paas jyada time nahi hai…

Fir Riya bhagti huyi Apni mummy ke paas jati hai aur use apni mummy ko manane mein jyada time nahi laga fir wo jaldi se apne room mein jati hai aur change karke ek top ke sath jean pehan ke bahar ati hai…wo kafi khubsurat lag rahi thi fir teeno bahar a jate hain aur gadi mein baith jate hain…

Raj driving seat pe aur Sandy uske sath wali seat pe aur Riya piche baith jati hai…

Riya: bhaiya hum kahan Jane wale hain…
Sandy: aisa karte hain pehle koi movie dekhne chalte hain fir lunch ke liye chaleinge…
Riya: OK thik hai…

Fir Raj gadi ko theatre ki taraf badha deta hai…par wo kus bol nahi raha tha…Fir wo log Theatre pahunch jate hain teen tickets lete hain…movie v khatam ho jati hai aur wo log ek restaurant mein chale jate hain…par pure samay Raj ne koi v baat nahi ki…aur yeh Riya ko bada ajeeb lag raha tha…

Fir Sandy ko bata kar Raj washroom chala jata hai aur Sandy aur Riya jaker ek table pe baith jate hain…

Riya: bhaiya ye Raj kaisa ladka hai…jab se aya hai kus bolta hi nahi apne kaise usse dosti kar li…
Sandy: nahi yaar wo aisa nahi hai…bas use ladkion se pata nahi kya problem hai na toh ladkion se jyada baat karta hai aur na hi unki taraf koi dhyan deta hai….
Riya: yeh kya baat huyi uski koi girlfriend toh hogi hi na…
Sandy: na koi nahi hai…
Riya: bada ajeeb hai yeh itna handsome hai k chahe toh ladkion ki line laga de….par koi toh wajah hogi hi na iske aise hone ki…
Sandy: pata nahi Maine kayi baar pucha lekin kehta hai bas aise hi…han ek ladki jaroor hai Isha jiske sath yeh thoda khul ke baat karta hai…iski gym trainer thi…
Riya: toh ho sakta hai wo iski girlfriend ho…vaise dikhne mein kaisi hai…
Sandy: yaar toh wo kamaal ki ek dum kisi model jaisi par wo Raj se 6 saal badi hai…
Riya: toh fir kya hua bade hone se kya hota hai…
Sandy: yaar ab bas kar aur dimag mat kha mera…

Itne mein wahan Raj a jata hai…Raj ko pata nahi kya hota hai wo apne table ki taraf Jane ki bajaye age chala jata hai aur ek table pe teen ladke baithe the unmein se ek ka collar pakad kar khada karta hai…

Ladka: Abe kya hai yeh collar chod mera…

Tabhi wahan Sandy aur Riya v a jate hain…

Sandy: kya kar raha hai Raj chod ise…

Raj sandy ki baat ka koi jawab nahi deta aur ek jordar punch us ladke ke jabde pe Marta hai…par uska collar nahi chodta…

Raj: kya bol raha tha tu ab bol jyada herogiri chadi hai kya tujhe…

Tabhi wahan pe baki ke dono ladke v a jate hain aur Raj ko pakad kar us ladke ko chudane ki kosish karte hain tabhi Raj dusre ladke ke pait mein laat marta hai…aur wo dur jaker girta hai aisa dekh kar Jo teesra ladka tha wo bhag jata hai kionk wo dikhne mein hi kafi kamjor sa tha…Raj fir se usi ladke ko teen char thapad Marta hai jiska usne collar pakda huya tha...fir Sandy jabardasti Raj ko wahan se bahar le jata hai Riya v uski madad karti hai Riya toh bahut jyada Dari huyi thi…

Sandy: Abe tu pagal ho gaya hai kya Jo aise mar peet kar raha hai…
Raj: pagal main nahi tu hai aur sayad behra bhi hai…isiliye tujhe wo nahi suna Jo mujhe itni dur se bhi sun gaya…
Sandy: kya sun gaya aisa tujhe Jo us sab ko mar raha hai…
Raj: yaar wo ladke Riya ke bare mein ulta seedha bol rahe …main nahi bata sakta k wo kitna ganda bol rahe the…par tum dono toh pata nahi kis topic mein itna uljhe pade the k itni paas baithe hone k bawjood pata nahi chala…

Raj ki baat sun kar Sandy ka sir sarmindagi se jhuk gaya kionk kus log uski Behan ke bare mein ulta seedha bol rahe the par usko pata tak nahi chala aur dusri taraf Wo Raj jise ladai ke naam se bhi nafrat hai wo un ladkon se bhid pada…
Riya toh jaise kisi shock mein thi kionk jab Sandy ne use bataya tha k Raj ladkion se nafrat karta hai toh use laga tha k wo kitna ghumandi hai aur ladkion ki respect nahi karta hoga….par usi Raj ne aj uski izzat ke liye un ladkon se ladai ki….

Riya: thanks Raj…
Raj: kis liye…
Riya: tumne mere liye unse ladai ki…
Raj: dekho agar koi v ladki hoti toh mein yahi karta tum toh fir v Sandy ki Behan ho….ab chalo yaar ghar chalte hain…pura mood hi off kar diya in logon ne…

Fir teeno gadi mein baith kar ghar ki taraf chal padte hain…Yahan Sandy ke dil mein Raj ke liye izzat badh gayi thi…wahin Riya ko itna pata chal gaya tha k Raj pehle se aisa nahi hoga jarur uske sath kus galat huya hoga…usne soch liya tha k chahe kus v ho wo pata laga kar hi rahegi…

Sabhi apni apni soch mein dube huya the pure raste koi v kus nahi bola itne mein gadi ke brakes lage dekha toh gadi Sandy ke ghar ke bahar khadi thi…

Sandy: chal aja Raj ander chalte hain…
Raj: nahi yaar mujhe ab ghar Jana hai kafi thak gaya hun…
Sandy: chal thik hai kal ko college mein milte hain…
Raj: thik hai yaar aur sun ghar pe aj ke bare mein kisi ko mat batana aise hi pareshan honge sab…
Sandy: chal thik hai...
Riya: bye Raj…
Raj: bye

Fir Raj wahan se apne ghar ki taraf chal padta hai…ghar pahunchte hi Raj apne kamre mein ghus jata hai aur bed pe lait kar Raj chhat ki taraf dekhne ladta hai…aisa lag raha tha Jaise wo kus soch raha ho…

Vaise ap logon ko bata dun k Raj ne Riya aur Sandy ki batein sun li thi Jo wo log Isha ke bare mein kar rahe the...Raj Sandy ko kafi baar keh chuka tha k wo Isha ke bare mein baat mat kare par wo baar baar uske aur Isha ke bare mein bolta rehta tha....pata nahi Raj aur Isha ka aisa konsa raaz tha Jo Raj ko itna pareshan karta rehta tha khair yeh toh waqt ane pe hi pata chalega…

Toh dosto umeed hai k ap logon ko update pasand aya ho….ap log aise hi Dildariyan ke sath bane rahein…

To be continued….

[sarit11]

spxossip

Excellent update bhai........har update ke saath apki writing skills badhiya hoti jaa rhi hai.........ab clg k pehle din kya hoga wo dekhne mai bahut maja aane wala hai......
eagerly waiting for next bhai........
Ek aur update mil jata to sunday super sunday ban jayega bhai ..........please try if possible .....

entertainerjatt

ThanksBhai....update de toh deta but kya karun kapil Sharma ka fan hun...par agar show khatam hone ke baad likh paya toh kosish karunga

[sarit11]

Update 23

Raj kafi samay tak apne room mein leta raha wo sham ko dinner karne ke liye hi bahar nikla…uska mood aj kus thik nahi tha…khair us din kus khas nahi huya…agle din college Jana tha toh Raj jaldi hi so gaya…

Wednesday 4:30 am
Apni adat ke anusar Raj jaldi uth jata hai…fir wo apni jogging exercise wagera karta hai aur college ke time tyar ho ke ghar se nikal padta hai…wahan pahunch kar Raj car park karta hai aur ander ki taraf chal padta hai…wahan seniors new comers ki raging le rahe the…

Raj abhi thoda age hi gaya tha k use kisi ne awaj di….wahan ek group khada tha jisme char ladke aur do ladkian thin…Raj unke paas chala jata hai…wo bolta toh vaise hi kam tha toh bas wo in logon ke paas ja kar khada ho jata hai…

Ladka 1: kya naam hai tera…
Raj: Raj…
Ladka 1: naya aya hai kya…
Raj: han…
Ladka 2: 1st year?
Raj: nahi 2nd year…
Ladki 1: koi baat nahi hai toh naya hi na….chal aisa kar nagin dance kar ke dikha…
Ladki 2: are aisa kar shirt utar ke dikha…bahar se toh hero lagta hai ander se bhi dekh lein…
Fir wo sabhi hasne lagte hain…Raj kus nahi bolta bas wahan se chal padta hai…
Ladka 1: Abe kahan chala jyada hosiyar banne ki kosish mat kar…
Raj kus nahi bolta aur wahan se Jane lagta hai tabhi wo ladka a ke Raj ko kandhe se pakad leta hai…abhi wo kus bolta…
Tabhi piche se kisi ki awaj ati hai: oye chod use…
Wo ladka piche mud ke dekhta hai toh samne Monty khada tha…
Ladka 1:bhai yeh jyada nakhre dikha raha hai…
Monty: Abe tujhe bola na chod use…

Fir wo ladka na chahte huye v Raj ko chod deta hai aur Raj bina kus bole wahan se chala jata hai…
Ladki 2: Monty tumne use Jane kion diya…
Monty: tum log agar college se rusticate hona chahte ho toh rok lo use…
Ladka 3: kion bhai Principal uska baap hai…
Monty: yaar uska baap principal ka bhi baap hai…salo wo Raghuveer Sinha ka beta hai…aur tum log ache se jante ho k wo kya kar sakta hai..
Ladka 1: sala pehle toh sirf Priya thi ab yeh bhi agaya…bhai vaise ap in logon se kion darte ho ap ke dad toh Minister hain na…
Monty: bhai dekho wo Jo kus v hain Raghuveer aur Mohit ki wajah se hain toh main bekar mein unse panga nahi Lena chahta…

Udhar Raj abhi thodi dur hi gaya tha k kisi ne piche se awaj di wo koyi aur nahi Riya hi thi…
Riya: Raj…
Raj piche dekhta hai…
Raj: hlo…
Riya: hi kaise ho…
Raj: thik hun…Sandy kahan hai…
Riya: wo tume hi dhundh raha tha keh raha tha k bahar parking mein dekh kar ata hun…wo yahin ane wala hai…tab tak agar tume koi problem nahi hai toh yahan ruk jao…

Raj kus nahi bolta bas aise hi wahan khada rehta hai…Riya baat karna chahti thi par use koi Bahana nahi mil raha tha baat shuru karne ka…fir thoda sochne k baad…
Riya: thanks Raj…
Raj: kisliye…
Riya: kal k liye…
Raj: welcome…
Riya: agar bura na mano toh ek baat puchun…
Raj: sure..
Riya: tum itna kam kion bolte ho…
Raj: bas aise hi…
Riya: kya tum mere friend banoge…
Raj: kion….
Riya: aise hi tum ache ladke ho…
Raj: dekho tum Sandy ki Behan ho isliye ek advice deta hoon…k kisi pe itni jaldi bharosa nahi karte khas kar jab baat dosti ki ho…kionk pata nahi us dosti ke piche samne wale ka kya maqsad ho…

Itna bolte hi Raj ke chehre pe ek udasi si a gayi thi yeh Riya ne notice kar liya tha…par Raj ki baat ka uske paas koi jawab nahi tha isliye wo kus nahi boli use dukh toh huya tha k Raj ne uski dosti accept nahi ki…kionk kisi v ladki ke liye yeh bahut badi baat hai par fir bhi Raj ke chehre ko dekh kar lag raha tha k usne boht kus saha hai isliye wo chup hi…wo bas yahi soch rahi thi k kus na kus toh huya hai Raj ke sath…aur usne yeh soch liya tha k use pata karke hi rehna hai…

Khair fir dono mein se koyi v nahi bola tabhi wahan Sandy a gaya…
Sandy: hlo bhai Kaisa hai…
Raj: thik hun yaar tu bata…
Sandy: thik hun….
Raj: yaar tu kahan chala gaya tha itna time laga diya kab se tera yahan khada wait kar raha hun….
Sandy: yaar main toh parking mein gaya tha…tabhi wahan Sonia aur uski friend Priya a gaye..unke paas ruk gaya…

Priya ka naam sun ke Raj kus nahi bola bas aise hi khada raha…
Sandy: toh chalein ab hum log…
Fir wo teeno apni apni classes ki taraf chal padte hain…Riya apni class mein chali gayi aur Raj aur Sandy apne room mein…wahan Sonia aur Priya baithi thi Sandy ne unhe bulaya par Raj ne unhein puri tarah se ignore kiya aur ek jagah ja kar baith gaya sandy v uske sath a kar baith gaya…Fir sabhi ne apne apna lectures attend kiye aur fir canteen ki taraf chal pade…

Raj aur Sandy ek table par baithe the aur Priya, Sonia, Riya aur Diksha( minister ki beti Riya ke sath hi padti hai aur dono mein friendship ho gayi thi aur usne Priya aur Sonia se bhi uski introduction karwa di thi ) ek sath baithe the….

Diksha lagatar bas Raj ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi aur yeh baat Riya ne notice karli thi….
Riya: kya hua aise kion ghur rahi hai use…
Diksha: yaar bas aise hi kitna handsome hai na…
Riya: yeh toh hai….

Par wahan Priya bhi baithi thi wo toh Jaise Raj ki tareef sun hi nahi sakti thi…
Priya: Dekh Riya tu yeh faltu batein mat kar aur lunch kar fir hamein ghar bhi chalna hai…

Riya Priya ke gusse ko ache se janti thi toh wo chupchap lunch karne lagti hai…fir wo Charon ladkian apne apne ghar ke liye nikal jati hain…fir Raj aur Sandy bhi wahan se nikal padte hain…
Raj sandy ko drop karne ke baad apne ghar ke liye nikal padta hai…Ghar pahunch kar wo aram karta hai fir sham ko exercise karne lagta hai wo exercise karne ke baad vaise hi bina shirt ke bahar chala ata hai uska dhyan nahi jata par Wahan Priya baithi thi Jo Sunidhi se batein kar rahi thi uski najar Jaise hi Raj par padti hai toh use Diksha aur Riya ki batein sahi lagti hain Raj sach mein handsome tha…Par Priya aisi ladki nahi thi k kisi ladke ke Six pack abs dekh kar latoo ho jaye isliye wo jyada dhyan nahi deti aur Sunidhi se batein karti rehti hai…

Raj apne kamre mein chala jata hai...Thodi der baad uske door pe knock hota hai…Raj door open karta hai toh samne Sunidhi aur Geeta khadi thin…Raj Geeta ke pair chuta hai fir in dono ko ander ane ko kehta hai…wo dono ander a kar bed pe baith jati hain….

Geeta: beta tumhara college ka first day kaisa raha…
Raj: acha raha aunty…aur sunao kaise ho…
Geeta: beta main toh theek hun…par hum dono tumse ek complaint karne aye hain…
Raj: kya hua sab theek toh hai na…
Sunidhi: baki sab toh thik hai bas tum pata nahi kahan khoye rehte ho…
Raj: kya hua mom ap dono kaisi batein kar rahe ho…
Geeta: pehle yeh batao kya tum hum dono se pyar karte ho…
Raj: yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai kya…
Sunidhi: toh yeh batao ke tumhe koi problem hai kya…
Raj: nahi toh…
Sunidhi: dekho jhuth bolne ki jarurat nahi hamein saaf saaf dikh raha hai k jab se tum yahan aye ho apne aap mein hi khoye khoye se rehte ho…dekho beta agar koi v problem hai toh humein bata sakte ho…
Raj: nahi mom aisi baat nahi hai…wo bas abhi abhi aya hun toh apne aap ko thoda adjust karne ki kosish kar raha hun…
Geeta: tum sach bol rahe ho na…
Raj: han aunty…
Geeta: toh thik hai but agar kabhi bhi koi bhi problem ho toh humein bata sakte ho…filhal chalo mere sath main tume apne sath lene ayi hun…aj tum wahin dinner karoge…

Raj nahi Jana chahta tha kionk use pata tha k wahan uska samna Priya se hoga…par wo Geeta ko mana nahi karna chahta tha…isliye wo uske sath chalne ko tyar ho jata hai…toh dekhte hain kya Priya aur Raj ka samna hoga ya nahi…

To be continued…..

[sarit11]

Update 24

Raj wahan se Geeta ke sath uske ghar ki taraf chal pada…wahan pahunch kar Raj hall main baith gaya aur Geeta bhi uske sath baith gayi…thodi der baad Mohit bhi a gaya...fir teeno batein karne lage…
Mohit: aur sunao beta kaise ho…
Raj: bilkul thik hun uncle ap batao…
Mohit: main toh bilkul fit hun tumhari tarah…
Geeta: ap na khud ko mere bache se compare mat kijiye…kahan yeh aur aap…
Mohit: are bhai mujhme kya kami hai…
Geeta: apme koi kami nahi balki sab kus jyada hi hai…
Mohit: yahi toh main keh raha hun…
Geeta: han Jaise apke pait pe fat jyada hai…sir pe safed baal v jyada hai..aur ab toh chehre se bhi bhudhe dikhne lage ho…

Fir Raj aur Geeta hasne lagte hain…Mohit bas in dono ki taraf dekh raha tha…
Mohit: meri toh bas yahi isha hai k hamare dono bache khus rahein…Are yaad aya wo maharani kahan hai…
Geeta: wo toh apne room mein hai bola k padhai kar rahi hun…bola dinner ke time hi ayegi…
Mohit: toh dinner lagao bhai badi bhukh lagi hai…
Geeta: han han lagati hun pehle Raj ke mummy daddy ko toh ane do…
Mohit: are wah aj toh maja a jayega sab sath mil kar dinner karenge…

Itne mein Raj ke parents bhi a jate hain aur Priya ko bhi bula liya gaya tha…fir sabhi dinning table pe baith jate hain…Ek taraf Raj ki family baithi thi aur dusri taraf Priya ki…Priya aur Raj ek dusre ke amne samne baithe the par wo dono ek dusre ki taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe the…

Fir khana naukaron ne serve kiya aur sabhi khane lage…aur sath sath batein bhi kar rahe the…

Mohit: Raj beta tumhe college pasand toh aya na…
Raj: han uncle kafi acha hai…
Mohit: han beta yeh baat toh hai…
Raghuveer: vaise achi baat hai k ab dono bache ek sath padenge toh agar kisi ek ko problem hai toh ek dusre ki madad kar sakenge…

Raghuveer ki baat sun kar Raj aur Priya dono hi khansne lagte hain…
Geeta: beta kya hua tum dono ko kahin khane mein mirchi toh jyada nahi hai na…
Raj: nahi aunty bas aise hi khansi a gayi…
Sunidhi: chalo ek ka toh mana dono ko ek sath kya hua…
Priya: aise hi ho gaya hoga aunty…
Geeta: chalo chodo aur batao khana kaisa bana hai…
Raj: asha bana hai aunty bahut hi tasty hai…

Tabhi Raj ki t shirt pe thoda khana lag jata hai..Raj jaldi se khada hoke use saaf karne lagta hai…jisse sabhi ka dhyan uski taraf jata hai…

Geeta: Are beta yeh kaise Fir gaya…Priya tum aisa karo Raj ko mere kamre mein le jao wo wahan apni shirt saaf kar lega…

Geeta ki baat sun kar Priya uski taraf aise dekhti hai jaise usne Priya ko bomb ka bag pakda kar kaha ho k is pate pe pahuncha do…par wo kus bol toh sakti nahi thi bas khadi ho jati hai…par Raj baitha rehta hai…
Sunidhi: are beta jao na tum toh aise kar rahe Jo Jaise koi ajnabi ke sath Jana ho…
Raghuveer: lagta hai dono mein abhi tak koi dosti nahi huyi hai…chalo dosti toh hoti rahegi abhi tum apni shirt saaf karke aao…

Apne pita ji ka order sun kar Raj jhat se khada ho gaya aur Priya ke sath Geeta ke kamre ki taraf chal pada…dono mein se na toh kisi ne ek dusre se baat ki aur na hi ek dusre ki taraf dekha…khair Priya ne room mein ja kar washroom ka door khola aur Raj ander chala gaya Raj ne door lock kar ke apni t shirt utari aur use saaf karne laga…tabhi door pe knock huya usne thoda sa door khol ke sirf apna sir bahar nikal kar dekha toh Priya khadi thi…Priya ne bina kus bole apne hath mein pakad huya towel Raj ki taraf badha diya…Raj ne wo towel uske hath se pakda aur Priya Jaise hi wapis mudi toh uska pair much gaya aur balance bigad gaya isse pehle k wo girti Raj ne jaker use sambhal liya…un dono ki position aisi thi ke Priya ki kamar mein Raj ka hath tha aur Priya usi hath ke share piche ki taraf jhuki huyi thi…Priya ki nazar Jaise hi Raj ki muscular body par gayi toh usne apna face jhat se dusri taraf kar liya…Raj ko bhi uski Halat ka andaja ho gaya toh usne Priya ko bed par bithaya aur khud bathroom mein ghus gaya..aur apni shirt pehan kar bahar aya…Tab tak ghar ke baki log bhi Priya ke paas a gaye the kionk girte waqt uski cheekh nikal gayi thi…

Geeta: beta kya hua tum chikhi kion…
Priya: kus nahi mummy balance bigad gaya tha aur gir gayi thi…
Sunidhi: beta chot toh nahi lagi…
Priya: nahi aunty Maine deewae ka sahara le liya tha…

Priya ki baat sun kar Raj ko bahut gussa aya kionk ek toh usne apne sabse bade dushman ko girne se bachaya…samne se thanks toh usne kya bolna tha…upar se Priya ne uska Sara credit bhi deewar ko de diya tha…Raj kus nahi kehta aur wahan se bahar chala jata hai…Sabhi ko yeh bada ajeeb lagta hai…kionk Priya ko chot lagi thi aur sabhi uska haal chal puch rahe the par Raj wahan se bahar chala gaya…

Khair fir kus nahi hua aur Raj aur uske parents apne ghar ki taraf chal pade…ghar pahunch kar Raj apne kamre mein chala gaya…aj uska para bahut jyada chada huya tha….wo soch raha tha k kash wo Priya ko na bachata aur jab uski najar tut jati tab use pata chalta …

Khair yeh sab sochte sochte Raj ko neend a gayi…Udhar Priya ke ko neend nahi a rahi thi uske pair mein toh jyada chot nahi lagi thi par uska yeh soch soch kar bura haal tha k Use Raj ne kion bachaya…wo kabhi nahi chahti thi k uska sabse bada dushman uski koi bhi help kare …use kafi der tak neend nahi ayi par a jarur gayi…

Thursday subah ke 4:30
Raj apne bed se utha aur brush wagerha kar ke apni gym mein ghus gaya…wo Raat wali baat ko bhul chuka tha…kionk wo apne man mein koi bhi baat jyada der tak Daba ke nahi rakhta tha…sirf do chijon ko chod kar ek toh Priya ki uske prati dusmani aur dusra Raj aur Isha ke beech ka wo Raaz jiska hum logon ko abhi koi pata thikana nahi hai...

Khair Raj apni Gym lagane ke baad nahaya aur College ke liye ready hone laga…tabhi uska phone ring huya usne dekh toh Sandy ka tha…usne phone pick kiya…
Raj: oye kya huya Jo itni subah dimag kha raha hai…
Sandy: yaar wo maine toh tujhe bas yeh kehne ke liye phone kiya tha k aj mujhe mere ghar se pick kar Lena…
Raj: kion kal kaise gaya tha…
Sandy: yaar kal toh main Sonia aur Riya ke sath gaya tha…
Raj: toh aj bhi chala ja na faltu mein mera time kion waste kar raha hai…
Sandy: kya yaar main asha lagta hun ladkion ke sath jata…
Raj: chal thik hai main a jaunga…tu 8:45 tak tyar rehna main wait nahi karne wala tumhara…
Sandy: OK bhai pakka usse pehle tyar ho jaunga….

Fir Raj tyar hone lagta hai…udhar Priya bhi college ke liye tyar thi wo bhi Raj ki help ko bhul chuki thi yeh koi badi baat nahi thi…uske pair mein halki si chot thi isliye use chodne aj driver ja raha tha…

Khair Raj nashta karne ke liye niche ata hai…wahan uske mummy papa pehle se baithe the Raj in dono ko morning wish karta hai…

Raghuveer: ho gaya tyrant college ke liye…
Raj: han papa bas nashta karke nikal jaunga…
Raghuveer: chal achi baat hai…

Fir teeno khana khane lagte hain khana khatam karke ke baad Raj table se uth jata hai…
Raj: bye mom dad ….
Sunidhi: beta abhi toh time pada hai na…
Raj: mom aj Sandy ke ghar se use pick karna hai…
Sunidhi: OK beta toh jao fir….bye…
Raghuveer: bye beta main v office ke liye niklta hun bas…

Fir Raj apni gadi nikal kar Sandy ke ghar ki taraf nikal padta hai…udhar Priya bhi nashta karne ke baad sabko bye bol kar bahar ati hai…wahan driver gadi lekar ata hai aur Priya piche wali seat par baith kar college ki taraf nikal padta hai…

Toh dekhte hain k agle update mein kya hota hai…toh dosto bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath….

To be continued….