22-01-2023, 08:56 AM
Let salim make her fall in love with him and separate her from husband and then take her to new world of sex.
Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter
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22-01-2023, 08:56 AM
Let salim make her fall in love with him and separate her from husband and then take her to new world of sex.
24-01-2023, 06:16 AM
Good going
24-01-2023, 06:53 PM
Waiting...
30-01-2023, 01:43 PM
What happened brother?
Waiting for your update ?
30-01-2023, 10:56 PM
Hi everyone, thanks for the continuous support. Was busy with so many things. Going to start writing. Will give an update by the weekend. Thanks
31-01-2023, 12:16 AM
Awesome can't wait for the update
03-02-2023, 10:14 AM
Waiting⏳⏳
04-02-2023, 08:50 AM
waiting
05-02-2023, 02:50 PM
Waiting
06-02-2023, 08:15 AM
bro...still no updates?
08-02-2023, 02:42 AM
Chapter -86
After hearing the narration from salmaan, Vishnu and Anand sat there completely astonished and they were not able to believe what they just heard. Vishnu was hurt really as he loves devika alot. The pain was unbearable for him. He was wondering how Rahim could start behaving like. He was his best friend. Now Rahim not only hurt him and Anand also he has hurted devika madam. Vishnu really got angry, for what rahim has done here. Vishnu showed his anger to salmaan. He gave hard slap to salmaan Vishnu - do you know, what you guys have done fucker Salman was drunk and got scared at the sudden attitude change of Vishnu. He gave another slap and shouted Vishnu - Fucker, if you tell anyone else regarding what happenes to devika madam i will kill you. Do you understand Salmaan was totally scared Salmaan - yes yes I won't say to anyone Vishnu- i wont let anyone to hurt devika madam Saying that he again raised his hand to slap him . but anand stopped him. Salmaan quickly got up and left from the bar scared. Anand - what are you doing bro, why did you get this upset Vishnu - you heard what rahim did to her right? Anand - yes, I understand that, but we were all waiting to do something with her right? Vishnu - yeah , but notf in this way, if she is willingly doing it is fine. This is not like that. It ia blackmailing and assaulting. Whatevee I did. She was ok with that Anand - I know, and we know how Rahim is , he is sometimes very aggressive and arrogant. Would go to any extend to get what he wanted Vishnu - I will not let him do anythine. Now I wilo teach him a lesson Anand - what are you planning Vishnu - need to do something, are you going to stay with me Anand - Yeah , I can stay. So its only me who have not gotten any opportunity with devik madam Vishnu - If you stay with and support me , I will make sure , you also get to enjoy her Anand - so bro you dont have any problem, me enjoying her Vishnu - bro, its true I like her a lot, but I don't have any problem , doing something with her consent. What rahim did was different Anand - I agree bro Vishnu - He has spoiled everything, now we have to find someway to win her trust back Anand - how? Chapter - 87 Last couple of days, devika was complelely shaken , sad and gloomy. She does not know what is happening in her life. She was scared and anxious. She never expected this behaviour from Rahim. She treated him like her own brother. But she can't even think what Rahim is doing to her. On top of that, now her husband needs to go to North India for 1 month deputation from his bank. She cant even think how she would be able to manage alone for that period. She was really scared to tell everything to her husband. She was on the verge of breakdown. After couple of days, her husband left for office work for 1 month. Her parents was also not there as they have gone for pilgrimage. Devika had taken leave from the college as she does not want to Rahim anymore. She was thinking of resigning from college , but that will not solve the problem. Rahim would be still after her. One day morning she was laying down on her bed , breastfeeding her baby, consumed in her thoughts, thinking about how her happy life turned upside down just in couple of days. Baby was feeding from her breast. Devika was wearing a normal nighty and she was not wearing any bra underneath as she is at home and have to frequently feed her baby. Suddenly she heard her door bell ringing. Her baby was still feeding, so she forcefully made Adi to release her nipple, wiped her breast with a cloth and put the hooks of her nighty. She kept adi on the cradle and took an cloth to cover her bosom as she was not wearing bra underneath. She went and peeked through the window and and found it was Vishnu. She did not want to see anyone and trust anyone anyomore as she found the true nature of Rahim. She was confused to open the door or not. Vishnu again rang the bell continously. So she opened the door little. Vishnu could only see half of her face outside Devika - what do you want? Vishnu - madam its me Vishnu Devika - I understood, why did you come here Vishnu - madam I wanted to speak with you Devika - I dont want to speak with anyone Vishnu - madam please can i come in Devika- No, I said I dont want to speak with anyone Vishnu - madam pls dont talk that way. Please allow me to speak with you Devika - I said I dont want to speak with anyone. Please leave me alone Saying that she shut the door closed. And after a moment checked through the window to see if he is gone. But Vishnu was still there sitting in the steps and it appeared he was crying. And seeing Vishnu crying again melted Devika and the angel in her kicked in. She opened the door and asked Vishnu to come in. Vishnu wiped his tears and walked into the house. Devika closed the door Devika - why are you crying? Vishnu - Why are you avoiding me these days Devika - im not avoiding you Vishnu - madam you have not spoken with for few days. Always tried to avoid me whenever I came to see you Devika - there is nothing like that. I thought to have some time for myself Vishnu - its not that madam. There is something bothering. What happened madam. You were not like this. You dont look cheerful anymore. What happened madam? Devika - nothing Vishnu , there is nothing like Vishnu - no, tell me madam, did I do anything wrong? Devika - No Vishnu , its not you. There is nothing. You can leave from here Vishnu - no I won't leave without knowing what is bothering you. I cannot see you sad. You are my elder sister. Please tell me Devika was quiet Vishnu - You don't consider me as your brother anymore Devika couldn't bear the pain anymore and she bursted into tears and started crying. Even though Vishnu know what exactly had happened to her , he acted as if he doesn't know anything. He went near Devika and held her shoulder Vishnu - madam what happened? Devika was crying and tears started rolling down her round cheeks Vishnu - madam , please let me know what happened. We will solve it ,whatever it is Devika - no vishnu , its something you cannot solve Vishnu - without telling , how would you know. Believe me madam , you are my sister. Whatever it is I will solve it for you madam Atlast after lot of assuring from Vishnu , devika started to open up slowly Devika - it is , it is, it is your friend Rahim. Rahim is the one who is bothering me. Rahim is the villain in my life now Vishnu acted surprised " Rahim" Devika - Yes Vishnu, it is Rahim and Ramu Devika slowly started to recollect what had happened. She told him, how it all started on that day of shooting with Ramu and Rahim. With tears she told Vishnu, how Ramu started to blackmail on the next day after walking off from the shooting, with her dress changing clip, which Ramu had shot hiding that day. And later to her utter disbelief Rahim also joined with Ramu in threatening to leak the video. She also told about Rahim's cruel behavior on the day of kabbadi match. After telling the whole story, devika bursted into crying and Vishnu felt really bad seeing her in that condition. He was determined to help her. He touched her shoulder to console her and devia immediately hugged him tight and weeped on his shoulder. Vishnu felt her braless boobs pressing on his chest Devika - what will I do now, Vishnu. Im scared , i dont know Vishnu - dont worry madam, im there for you. I will solve it for you. No one would come to know about this. You are my sister, its my duty to help you. Yo did not do anything wrong. Devika - but how? Devika was still hugging him by resting her head on his shoulder Vishnu - I will make a plan ,madam. Dont worry about . we will handle this. Devika felt little relieved , she raised her head from his shoulder and looked at Vishnu and still with tears in her eyes Devika - you are truly my younger brother vishnu. Saying that she kissed him on his forehead Vishnu -now stop crying madam , i gave you assurance that i will handle this. Now you should stop crying madam. Saying that he wiped of the tears from her eyes. Chapter - 88 Next couple of days, Vishnu was making plans to save Devika from Ramu and Rahim. He discussed with Anand on how they can proceed. They made so many plans, but was not impressed with anything. With their plan, they wanted to delete the videos both Rahim and Ramu had taken during the shooting of shot film. And also Vishnu wanted to teach them a lesson. After brainstorming for couple of days they made a big plan to save devika from the evil hands of Rahim and Ramu. Devika was still on leave , she was feeling little bit better after the last visit from Vishnu as he assured her that he will take care of everything. She avoided the calls from Rahim and Ramu during that time. And she was really missing her husband during this tough time. He would be away atleast for a month now because of the deputation. She speaks with him daily. On the next day morning she was in the kitchen preparing breakfast, when the door bell rang. Adi was still sleeping and devika was wearing a light blue nighty. As it was morning and as she was alone in the house and needs to feed adi frequently she was not wearing any bra inside. She came to the front door and peeked through the window and found Vishnu outside. As it was Vishnu only, she did not bother about covering her breast with shawl or wearing a bra. She opened the door and smiled at Vishnu. Vishnu was also happy to find a smiling Devika. Devika was little relieved seeing Vishnu, thinking he might have come with a plan to save her from this bad situation. She invited vishnu inside. Vishnu happily got inside and he also noticed her breasts shaking little while she was walking and also noticed small impression of her nipple pokies on her nighty. He understood she was not wearing bra inside. Vishnu - Hi madam, you are looking more happy today Devika - im quite releived to see you. I hope you are having a plan Vishnu - haha, I told na your brother would be always there for you, when you are in trouble Devika - you are so caring Vishnu. I want those 2 rowdies realise what they are doing is wrong and it should not be repeated to any women Vishnu - I assure madam, they will get appropriate punishment for what they have done Devika - i dont want to punish them, They are kids. I just to make them realise and make them good people Vishnu - dont worry about that madam, just stay as per my plan. And they will get what they deserve and you would be able to stay happy after that. Devika - i trust you Vishnu, I will follow what you say. I wanted to get out of this torment Vishnu - thats good Devika - so whats your plan? Vishnu - its bit complicated. I will you in detail Devika - ok. Did you have breakfast? Vishnu - no madam Devika - first we will have breakfast then? I will get it for you. Vishnu wash your hands and sit on the table. I will come now Saying that she got up and went to the kitchen. Vishnu sat there staring at her swaying ass in the nighty. He got up and washed his hands and settled in the table. Soon devika came with plates and food. She served dosa and chutney to him. Vishnu did not miss the view of how her boobs are jiggling with her each steps. Vishnu - where is Adi? Devika - he has not woken up yet. How is the food? Vishnu - its super. Havnt eaten such a tasty food recently Devika - is it. ? Haha? Vishnu - did Adi had his beakfast? Devika - haha no. He will soon wake up and gonna be hungry? Vishnu- So his food is ready? Vishnu asked with a grin Devika - his food is always ready? This time Vishnu looked at her breast directly. Vishnu - it looks like his food is already cooked and ready to serve Devika looked at where Vishnu is looking and found her nipples poking on her nighty. Devika - chee. You are always naughty Vishnu. Where are you looking? Vishnu - haha. It seems you have cooked too much food for him. It looks bigger Devika - stupid, it because im not wearing inner. So I could easily feed him Devika do not mind Vishnu being naughty with her as she is really comfortable with him and treats him like a brother. And she thinks Vishnu also feel the same way. Devika becoming little serious Devika - so whats our plan?
08-02-2023, 02:54 AM
Hello everyone, Thanks for support. It was a small update. These days little busy. I had written few more chapters as well with Devika and Vishnu carrying out the plan, but unfortunately it got deleted. Now I have the tedious task of rewriting those and it is very boring to rewrite everything. so instead if you guys have interesting idea or suggestion for the next chapters I can write fresh. I thinking vishnu coming with a plan both Vishnu and devika can carry out to escape from the blackmails from Rahim. Let me know if you guys have any ideas which I can use to develop. If there is something. Pls message privately. Thanks again for all the support
08-02-2023, 04:18 AM
(08-02-2023, 02:54 AM)Bookkeeper Wrote: Hello everyone, Thanks for support. It was a small update. These days little busy. I had written few more chapters as well with Devika and Vishnu carrying out the plan, but unfortunately it got deleted. Now I have the tedious task of rewriting those and it is very boring to rewrite everything. so instead if you guys have interesting idea or suggestion for the next chapters I can write fresh. I thinking vishnu coming with a plan both Vishnu and devika can carry out to escape from the blackmails from Rahim. Let me know if you guys have any ideas which I can use to develop. If there is something. Pls message privately. Thanks again for all the support nice update Keep going
08-02-2023, 04:31 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-02-2023, 04:34 AM by Gauravbaba. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.
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Update is awsome...... But plz now update fast as any long gap will effect the reader interest for your story...... My suggestion is there should be such a plan which should be benefiting her from those two.... And also mean while vishnu and the other one can enjoy devika as they are enjoying earlier in the story.
08-02-2023, 06:24 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-02-2023, 06:42 AM by Gandhi krishna. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Super update.
Wishnu should slowly poison the mind of devika by making her hate her husband for not taking good care of her. He should send some morphed pics to her husband and make him divorce her. He should also do something to the child of devika and make her lose it and then he should slowly seduce devika in the pretext of helping her and bed her secretely and make her pregnant and laugh at Rahum and salmaan
08-02-2023, 06:47 AM
Devika trust vishnu. Deceived by trust means vishnu is the first person to take her chastity?
08-02-2023, 07:02 AM
Awsome update waiting for the plan
Please provide update soon waiting waiting
08-02-2023, 01:09 PM
08-02-2023, 01:42 PM
Wonderful.....
Take your time.... Story is nicely balanced... Try to add introspection emotion of female lead in different situation to make it more erotic and interesting..
08-02-2023, 02:50 PM
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