Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[chutdriller]

Thank You Krish. Please pen down your thoughts and let us have a sneakpeak in your thoughts.  Whenever you do please let us know if you wanted Meera and Krish to be together or you had other thoughts. I will be eagerly waiting for your updated and this will be the reason to visit this site again and again now. Love your creation and already feeling something is missing in life after this story ended. You have put Meera and Krish in our hearts and minds.

On second thought rewriting final chapter will screwup our minds again after what you wrote in chapter 41. To be honest it was next to impossible to digest what happened in chapter 41.

[Paty@123]

Kindly share your thinkings,and final conclusion

[bineeshm]

Dear Friends

I have been reviewing the last chapter on my mind for the last few days. I want to share my thoughts with you. I do think the latest chapter wasn't one of the greatest, but it does clear some of the issues we had in our minds. Though the end was as wished by many readers, the means weren't as smooth as it was wished for. But looking at the larger picture, it was still a great ending to this awesome story.

First I'll start with Desai:

In my previous posts, I shared my views on how he became restless when Krish asked for time for himself and Desai started his end game. This chapter makes it clear why Desai behaved so.

He wants to have Meera all for himself. He acted all good infront of her and Krish by keeping himself dry for about 2 months. But he is unable to keep himself cold and managed to sleep with Nidhi by blackmailing her.

Then he realized that since Krish can walk and ask for time for himself and Meera, he has to start his end game soon or start competing with Krish for Meera. He has no choice but find other alternatives.

He started his game as below:

First, he started acting as if nothing has changed

Second, he started taking the moral high ground and supported Meera in all her accusations against Krish

Then, he said that he conducted a test on Krish and proved that he is still a cuckold and used Meera as a vehicle for his fantasies. By doing this, he completely alienated Krish from Meera, further proving that he knows that he's losing the game. This shows how desperate he is.

When he succeeded in splitting the couple, he immediately had sex with Meera, made her utter those words and consummated his relationship unprotected in presence of Krish so that Krish believed that Meera was impregnated by Desai.

Once Krish has left the house, he started concentrating on Meera to make her his wife. He started with his best foot - hot sex. Then he trapped her emotionally by making her go on tour with him and talking to his mom - making it a personal commitment for Meera. He told the girl to go out on her own and that their relationship is all about love and intimacy.

Those were the trump cards he used against Meera when the curtain started falling.

But why did Desai do all those mind games and rush, he had slept with Nidhi but pretended that he was chaste all this time while waiting for Krish to recover. That impression created a huge respect for him in their mind of Meera and she started believing that Desai is loving her truly and he is the man for her. At the back of his mind, he knew that his bluff can be called out anytime and he has to trap Meera into his fold and also move out of that place as soon as possible. That's what has caused all those emotional talks from Desai and generally his behavior in the last two chapters.

I am convinced there is a reason behind Desai's behavior in the last two chapters and Nidhi gave a convincing testimony for that.

Desai is a beast in bed - perhaps he uses supplements or other means, given his financial position. He is also good at manipulating people and getting what he wants. Therefore, it's no surprise that he was able to seduce a married woman and even made her believe that he loves her truly. He was able to manipulate the situation and get what he wanted. But he thought that's all is required for a long-term relationship which caused his failure.

Meera:
She is the dream queen of many of the readers. The penultimate chapter caused so much damage to her psyche & character that I dont think many of us have recovered. I think the last chapter doesnt make any true amendment to her outburst in the previous one.
Let me copy a discussion on one part of the story arc to prove how she is unreliable and fake.

"I have heard the sound from your room. I have heard your voice. I know how you scream when Desai's prick is inside you."
"Watch your words, Krish." Desai broke his silence. "Have some respect for your family. I understand you are angry, but you can still talk nicely."
"You shut up, Desai. Enough of your advice." I scoffed.
"You have become insane, Krish," Meera said in a cracked voice. "You have dipped yourself too deep into this fantasy shit. That's why you are hearing such sounds everywhere. And your head is filled with only one thing; that's why you can't say what is real and what is your fantasy. Just go to a doctor and treat yourself.

When Krish accused that she had sex with Desai and he heard sounds from her room, Meera called that he has became insane and asked him to go to a doctor. The plot went downhill from there - she then asked Desai to call Piyush and say she's ready to sleep with him, and then closed the door on Krish's face completely.

But in the last chapter when Desai confirmed that he did indeed had sex with someone, here is how she reacted,

"You are so out of control in the morning. I have doubts about what Krish was talking about. He said we had sex in the mornings. I know we didn't do it. But your this...incontrollable power makes me think...how did you control it for fifty days?"

"I wanna tell you the truth." Desai's voice suddenly turned serious. "Krish was right. He had heard the sound of sex but he confused it with yours. I was having sex with someone else. In those days I used to bring someone to your bed room and bang her."
"Stop making up stories."
Meera's voice told me she did not believe him. But I thought he was telling the truth.
"Do you have any guesses? Wild guess?"
Desai asked again.
"Why are you smiling like this? You want me to say the name of Maithrei?"
"Wow. You knew it. It was Maithrei."
"Maithrei," Meera said and paused a second before continuing. "So you brought Maithrei to my bedroom and banged her like there's no other place in this world?
Before telling me things like this, you should at least throw some thoughts behind it."
Desai laughed. I felt a pinch of disappointment as I knew Desai was just joking about it.
Of course, if he wanted to sleep with Maithrei, he could have just walked into her house.
"Tell me the truth, Susheel."
Meera said again.
"The truth is that, nowadays, there's only one person I can think of making love with. That's you, my baby."
"Stop this flattery. This doesn't suit you."
"Do you believe I will see Maithrei in future?"
Desai asked.
"I want you to see her," Meera said quickly. "Because I want one good reason to dump you."
"Are you looking for it?"
"I want a break. I don't want to wake up like this."
"It was a beautiful morning. Didn't I tell you the best thing about it? The best moment in a man's life is when he gets to wake up with the man he loves. "
"Really? But I have a slightly different experience. When I woke up, my pussy was stuffed with another man's penis."

They were discussing as if it was some regular happening. She didn't high five him, that's it. Shouldn't she have given a tight rap on his face for his lie and because of which she said so many disrespectful things to her husband? Or should have she thrown a slap on him for cheating on her? Not at all, but she was discussing how she woke up with his penis inside her that morning. It was really disgusting the way she said it with so much ease! She had a video call with Desai's mom only after this conversation. So much for punishing herself and making Krish forget her. Like most men think thru their dick, Meera was thinking about a good pleasurable dick.

Get out you both
What could have kept our good impression of Meera? When the issues started in the penultimate chapter she could have told 'Get out you both' to Krish and Desai. It would have proven she is hurt and is trying to figure out her future. Instead, she kicked Krish away, indulged in a marathon sex with Desai - in both beds, shower, had a video chat with his mom, and planned tour to Himachal.... She is not the woman we all liked.

She decided to dump Desai only because of his lie, blackmailing and screwing Nidhi and when she realized that Desai cannot be trusted. So she decided to stay back with Krish. I dont know how truthful she is going to be with Krish as she was pushed to this decision only because her boyfriend has had sex with another woman in her bedroom, yet chose not to reveal anything to her because he did not want to ruin his image in her eyes.

“You know Krish, sex is sometimes like food. It can be good, bad, or ordinary. We can hate it, love it or even become addicted to it. But there’s one thing that you remember. No matter how tasty it is, no matter how addicted are you, it can’t be the only thing that matter to you. It is just a small part of your world. You can forget it, and sacrifice it for the rest of your world. Sometimes it is not important at all.”
This is the biggest bakwaas gyan I have ever heard in my life! She is saying all this to assure Krish that she is over with Desai. I dont believe a bit on her honesty.

Krish
We have seen the story in Krish's POV, so I dont want to discuss much on him. Only good thing, he finally decided to stand up for himself and his marriage. If Nidhi hasnt interrupted, he would have ended as a loser once again.

My misgiving was that the poor girl Nidhi was used to fix the marriage. She is made a sex toy in the hands of Desai and has completely screwed her life with her boyfriend. Perhaps she may judge all her future partners against the performance of Desai.

Finally, we all had Krish and Meera together. Thats the end most of us wanted, including yours truly. But is it the Meera we all started liking or we forgot that she was an amoral slut who almost walked out with another man based on lies? I think this is a very dark shaded woman, who has picked many characters of her last paramour.

This story has intrigued and captivated our attention in such a way that I am so grateful to author Krish_999 for presenting us a wonderful story. Undoubtedly the author is a genius writer with such rich and deep imagination. So many of us visited the site and stayed online for long hours only for this story. As few readers mentioned, when the story ended it left us with a huge void. I hope the author will come up with another blockbuster story soon.

[UDaykr]

Nice ending of this story.

Hoping, you will start a new thread...

[Rangabaashyam]

It was a collateral damage of Desai character. When he had decided to make meera as wife, he can never go with that path. Is he sleeping with a woman daily? Even in the two months, how many days he slept with nidhi? Cant justify.

Meera had accepted Desai knowing fully that he had sex with many women in the past and he will do in the future as well. She never fell in love or turn posessive about him. She wants him only for pleasure. Going out with him, calling him as other husband, sharing the intimate details about her to him damaged her character and she was no true to herself.

Rightly to call character assasination of Meera and Desai to bring Meera and krish together.

[RCF]

Meera:
She is the dream queen of many of the readers. The penultimate chapter caused so much damage to her psyche & character that I dont think many of us have recovered. I think the last chapter doesnt make any true amendment to her outburst in the previous one.
Let me copy a discussion on one part of the story arc to prove how she is unreliable and fake.


When Krish accused that she had sex with Desai and he heard sounds from her room, Meera called that he has became insane and asked him to go to a doctor. The plot went downhill from there - she then asked Desai to call Piyush and say she's ready to sleep with him, and then closed the door on Krish's face completely.

But in the last chapter when Desai confirmed that he did indeed had sex with someone, here is how she reacted,




They were discussing as if it was some regular happening. She didn't high five him, that's it. Shouldn't she have given a tight rap on his face for his lie and because of which she said so many disrespectful things to her husband? Or should have she thrown a slap on him for cheating on her? Not at all, but she was discussing how she woke up with his penis inside her that morning. It was really disgusting the way she said it with so much ease! She had a video call with Desai's mom only after this conversation. So much for punishing herself and making Krish forget her. Like most men think thru their dick, Meera was thinking about a good pleasurable dick.

Get out you both
What could have kept our good impression of Meera? When the issues started in the penultimate chapter she could have told 'Get out you both' to Krish and Desai. It would have proven she is hurt and is trying to figure out her future. Instead, she kicked Krish away, indulged in a marathon sex with Desai - in both beds, shower, had a video chat with his mom, and planned tour to Himachal.... She is not the woman we all liked.

She decided to dump Desai only because of his lie, blackmailing and screwing Nidhi and when she realized that Desai cannot be trusted. So she decided to stay back with Krish. I dont know how truthful she is going to be with Krish as she was pushed to this decision only because her boyfriend has had sex with another woman in her bedroom, yet chose not to reveal anything to her because he did not want to ruin his image in her eyes.

“You know Krish, sex is sometimes like food. It can be good, bad, or ordinary. We can hate it, love it or even become addicted to it. But there’s one thing that you remember. No matter how tasty it is, no matter how addicted are you, it can’t be the only thing that matter to you. It is just a small part of your world. You can forget it, and sacrifice it for the rest of your world. Sometimes it is not important at all.”
This is the biggest bakwaas gyan I have ever heard in my life! She is saying all this to assure Krish that she is over with Desai. I dont believe a bit on her honesty.

Meera:

Why do every one misunderstands Meera so easily in this story is beyond me.

You misunderstood the part of that episode..First of all Desai did not confess, he was merely sarcastically joking that he brought some one to home and banged her in her bed...no one would believe him and Meera did not believe him so the question of her slapping him is not even possible...Desai was laughing while saying that though for him he is saying the truth he wants Meera to take it a joke and that's exactly how she took it and any one in her place would do the same.

I agree on one thing, she should have walked away from both..that was what i would have respected as well hence all my points in the last chapter about her sleeping with Desai with in few mins of break up was major screw up...and was not convincing at all...she just did hurt Krish too much with her actions and it was totally unacceptable , no person claim to love some one and can subject them to this kind of punishment, i do not agree to the author's thinking here, though he justified it with Meera's intention to generate hatred for her from Krish. It went overboard there, as usual our Krish being generous accepted her because he loves her a lot.

As for the last statement you mentioned, Meera did not dump Desai after she knew he had sex with Nidhi, it was before when she knew and thought in her mind as  Desai is a great man. Despite knowing Desai is a great man, she came back to Krish because she still loved him....that is exactly why this ending is better and justifiable to some extent.

[RCF]

Well, I had chopped down some parts during the final editing but there's not much difference in size. The unedited version had roughly 57 pages in the MS Word document and the completed version still has 51 pages. The part you read wasn't merely "10 pages". Perhaps you read it too fast LOL. The picture of the word count is here.

And yes, I want to talk a little more about the story (not continuing though) like how it was supposed to be and how it finally became.  I am sure you'll be shocked. But this time I am going to admit that I have changed the way the story progressed toward the climax. The climax was changed from what I had thought of in the beginning (I am damn sure nobody will guess what I changed). But I will still not admit that it was entirely because of the readers' influence. Also, I didn't change it to shock you guys, and not to add a twist nobody was guessing. I will give my thoughts on that later. I need a little more time and comfort to pen those thoughts and I also wish to re-write my final chapter to make it a bit more coherent (I believe I had rushed a bit while writing it).
I haven't decided on giving an epilogue. But if I re-write it as I wish, then there won't be any need for the epilogue.
And last but not least, I need to thank you all readers for the love and support. I hope I will find time soon.

Sincere request not to reveal any other alternate endings..it would spoil the ending we have now, Updating the existing final chapter with more details and conversations/confessions totally makes sense considering the rushed ending but changing the ending or revealing alternate plots will mess up the thoughts about this ending, at least for me...Just my opinion.

[Paul5]

Pl change the end

[Rangabaashyam]

Pl change the end

So you want Susheel desai to marry all woman he fucked and take them home and live like a king by fucking them on round robin 

[abhinay67]

Dear Friends

I have been reviewing the last chapter on my mind for the last few days. I want to share my thoughts with you. I do think the latest chapter wasn't one of the greatest, but it does clear some of the issues we had in our minds. Though the end was as wished by many readers, the means weren't as smooth as it was wished for. But looking at the larger picture, it was still a great ending to this awesome story.

First I'll start with Desai:

In my previous posts, I shared my views on how he became restless when Krish asked for time for himself and Desai started his end game. This chapter makes it clear why Desai behaved so.

He wants to have Meera all for himself. He acted all good infront of her and Krish by keeping himself dry for about 2 months. But he is unable to keep himself cold and managed to sleep with Nidhi by blackmailing her.

Then he realized that since Krish can walk and ask for time for himself and Meera, he has to start his end game soon or start competing with Krish for Meera. He has no choice but find other alternatives.

He started his game as below:

First, he started acting as if nothing has changed

Second, he started taking the moral high ground and supported Meera in all her accusations against Krish

Then, he said that he conducted a test on Krish and proved that he is still a cuckold and used Meera as a vehicle for his fantasies. By doing this, he completely alienated Krish from Meera, further proving that he knows that he's losing the game. This shows how desperate he is.

When he succeeded in splitting the couple, he immediately had sex with Meera, made her utter those words and consummated his relationship unprotected in presence of Krish so that Krish believed that Meera was impregnated by Desai.

Once Krish has left the house, he started concentrating on Meera to make her his wife. He started with his best foot - hot sex. Then he trapped her emotionally by making her go on tour with him and talking to his mom - making it a personal commitment for Meera. He told the girl to go out on her own and that their relationship is all about love and intimacy.

Those were the trump cards he used against Meera when the curtain started falling.

But why did Desai do all those mind games and rush, he had slept with Nidhi but pretended that he was chaste all this time while waiting for Krish to recover. That impression created a huge respect for him in their mind of Meera and she started believing that Desai is loving her truly and he is the man for her. At the back of his mind, he knew that his bluff can be called out anytime and he has to trap Meera into his fold and also move out of that place as soon as possible. That's what has caused all those emotional talks from Desai and generally his behavior in the last two chapters.

I am convinced there is a reason behind Desai's behavior in the last two chapters and Nidhi gave a convincing testimony for that.

Desai is a beast in bed - perhaps he uses supplements or other means, given his financial position. He is also good at manipulating people and getting what he wants. Therefore, it's no surprise that he was able to seduce a married woman and even made her believe that he loves her truly. He was able to manipulate the situation and get what he wanted. But he thought that's all is required for a long-term relationship which caused his failure.

Meera:
She is the dream queen of many of the readers. The penultimate chapter caused so much damage to her psyche & character that I dont think many of us have recovered. I think the last chapter doesnt make any true amendment to her outburst in the previous one.
Let me copy a discussion on one part of the story arc to prove how she is unreliable and fake.


When Krish accused that she had sex with Desai and he heard sounds from her room, Meera called that he has became insane and asked him to go to a doctor. The plot went downhill from there - she then asked Desai to call Piyush and say she's ready to sleep with him, and then closed the door on Krish's face completely.

But in the last chapter when Desai confirmed that he did indeed had sex with someone, here is how she reacted,




They were discussing as if it was some regular happening. She didn't high five him, that's it. Shouldn't she have given a tight rap on his face for his lie and because of which she said so many disrespectful things to her husband? Or should have she thrown a slap on him for cheating on her? Not at all, but she was discussing how she woke up with his penis inside her that morning. It was really disgusting the way she said it with so much ease! She had a video call with Desai's mom only after this conversation. So much for punishing herself and making Krish forget her. Like most men think thru their dick, Meera was thinking about a good pleasurable dick.

Get out you both
What could have kept our good impression of Meera? When the issues started in the penultimate chapter she could have told 'Get out you both' to Krish and Desai. It would have proven she is hurt and is trying to figure out her future. Instead, she kicked Krish away, indulged in a marathon sex with Desai - in both beds, shower, had a video chat with his mom, and planned tour to Himachal.... She is not the woman we all liked.

She decided to dump Desai only because of his lie, blackmailing and screwing Nidhi and when she realized that Desai cannot be trusted. So she decided to stay back with Krish. I dont know how truthful she is going to be with Krish as she was pushed to this decision only because her boyfriend has had sex with another woman in her bedroom, yet chose not to reveal anything to her because he did not want to ruin his image in her eyes.

“You know Krish, sex is sometimes like food. It can be good, bad, or ordinary. We can hate it, love it or even become addicted to it. But there’s one thing that you remember. No matter how tasty it is, no matter how addicted are you, it can’t be the only thing that matter to you. It is just a small part of your world. You can forget it, and sacrifice it for the rest of your world. Sometimes it is not important at all.”
This is the biggest bakwaas gyan I have ever heard in my life! She is saying all this to assure Krish that she is over with Desai. I dont believe a bit on her honesty.

Krish
We have seen the story in Krish's POV, so I dont want to discuss much on him. Only good thing, he finally decided to stand up for himself and his marriage. If Nidhi hasnt interrupted, he would have ended as a loser once again.

My misgiving was that the poor girl Nidhi was used to fix the marriage. She is made a sex toy in the hands of Desai and has completely screwed her life with her boyfriend. Perhaps she may judge all her future partners against the performance of Desai.

Finally, we all had Krish and Meera together. Thats the end most of us wanted, including yours truly. But is it the Meera we all started liking or we forgot that she was an amoral slut who almost walked out with another man based on lies? I think this is a very dark shaded woman, who has picked many characters of her last paramour.

This story has intrigued and captivated our attention in such a way that I am so grateful to author Krish_999 for presenting us a wonderful story. Undoubtedly the author is a genius writer with such rich and deep imagination. So many of us visited the site and stayed online for long hours only for this story. As few readers mentioned, when the story ended it left us with a huge void. I hope the author will come up with another blockbuster story soon.

You hit the nail on the head with the most points. The last episode was written lazily leading to a lot of loopholes and contradictions.

Meera
Meera's character is totally ruined in this episode. It seems she only got back with Krish because Desai cheated on him and not because she loved Krish dearly.
After what happened in the penultimate episode it should have been the responsibility of Meera to apologize or explain her actions to Krish, but nothing of that sort happens. Their conversation after the reunion was reduced to just two paragraphs, and the conversation itself seems artificial and does not hit the right note.(the conversation after Desai leaves the house) The reunion happened too soon after the separation, Parvati's angle again was unnecessary. 

"I have taken the pill this morning. I'm not getting pregnant." Meera revealed out of the blue. "That was the heat of the moment." She added." - This revelation by Meera does have much value, as he allowed Desai to cum inside her the next morning.

She mentions that no sex between Desai and herself will happen for at least a day, but then happens to allow Desai to have sex twice.

"Tell me the truth, Susheel."
Meera said again.
"The truth is that, nowadays, there's only one person I can think of making love with. That's you, my baby."
"Stop this flattery. This doesn't suit you."
"Do you believe I will see Maithrei in future?"
Desai asked.
"I want you to see her," Meera said quickly. "Because I want one good reason to dump you."
"Are you looking for it?"
"I want a break. I don't want to wake up like this."
"It was a beautiful morning. Didn't I tell you the best thing about it? The best moment in a man's life is when he gets to wake up with the man he loves. "
"Really? But I have a slightly different experience. When I woke up, my pussy was stuffed with another man's penis."
"Ouch!" Desai said dramatically. "You called me another man. It hurts."
"It will hurt even more when I ask you to move out. Now Krish isn't here. So you must move out. I suggest you find a hotel right away. You are leaving immediately after breakfast."
Meera clarified. The way she was trying to stop me from embracing him all the way was making me feel better, even though I knew there was nothing so be happy about.
Perhaps it was going to be my destiny to witness her fall in love with him, properly. I thought.

"Oh really?" Desai's voice was soft. "Then what do you think am I?"

"You are alpha. The one who would get to fuck the woman he wants. The article said." Meera laughed.
"Then?"
"But I'm asking you not to show it off to me. Because it's too hot that it becomes a turn-off."
"Really?"
"It's something no article will tell you."
"What about the beta male? Anything that no article will tell me?"
"Yes."
"Tell me."
Meera took a moment to reply.
"There are some features in every beta male that the woman wishes to see in the alpha male - which would have made him perfect. But unfortunately, the alpha male can't digest it let alone possess that trait."
"What is it?"
"I'm not going to tell you."
"I will learn it from you."

Again, she is in a jovial and flirty mood after the separation. Does not seem she is much hurt because of the separation. She is ready for a vacation just after the separation. Also, Desai makes fun of Krish and she half-heartedly defends Krish and then proceeds to laugh at Desai's remark.(Above two statements clearly confirm she was ready to move on from Krish)

"You need to understand that when I am making love to you I am seeing myself being punished. You can use my body like the body of a whore. I have decided to take a break from my work. I want you to take me to places. I want you to keep using me for your pleasure whenever you want. Until you feel it's enough. You can try making me sleep with your friends. I will do that too. Call Piyush. I will sleep with him. Whatever you want, you can do whatever you want. But it will take time for me to become myself and say things that you love to hear. Until then I will keep saying I love you to you without really meaning it."

What kind of repentance is this? This seems more like fun. She wants Desai to use her like a whore (which she likes) and punish her and after all that, she will in the end start loving him. Why is she sure of loving him, and why does she expect Desai to take him as his wife after she fucks Piyush and many other guys. I don't understand the psychology behind this.

“I have my thirst for adventure to blame for all of it. Beginning from the incident on the train. When I encouraged you to be intimate with Jai, I only thought it would be just a little bit of adventure. I never knew it would turn into something that makes you hate me." I said.

"I didn't hate you for that, Krish," Meera said. "But I hated myself for that. And I thought Susheel would also hate me because it is justified. If he had heard about that side of me after I had given him such a tough race to get close to me, then he would hate me. I would sound like a hypocrite. An opportunistic slut who was ready to spread my legs for anyone at any place. When I felt he was serious about me, I thought I should tell him; tell him that I'm not worthy to be treated with queen-like devotion. I also told him why I was not able to confess to you about it. If you remembered, I had tried telling you about it. But you were rather thrilled to hear about it. You were so turned on to hear how Jai had enjoyed giving me oral sex. And you were excited to do those stuff by yourself. In those days, we were fighting a war against Susheel. And I felt if you knew that I had sex with another man and got excited about it, then it would be easy for Susheel. I did not want to have Susheel in our life, Krish. Everything that I feared would happen if we let him in our life has happened. When I asked you that I'm choosing him over you, you believed me, didn't you?"
“Yes, I did.”
"Our love is not unbreakable, Krish. We must acknowledge that."

Again hypocritical she says as if she had no feelings for Desai. She certainly had some feelings for him whether she agrees or not. Why did she need Desai's validation regarding Jai's incident? Why was he so important that she needed to share such intimate information with him and her husband? Clearly, Desai had evoked some feelings for himself in her heart. Clearly, Love and trust between the couple don't go hand in hand.

Krish

Krish again was meek and subservient towards Desai after whatever happened and easily took the blame upon his shoulder for the couple's separation. Meera wanted to hear that she was not a whore and that's what Krish told her to get her back.

Desai 


Desai did not bring Nidhi to manipulate Krish nor did he include Piyush in the plan. He was dumbed down in the last episode.


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Sex in the last episode was totally unnecessary, be it between Meera and Krish or Desai and Meera or Intimacy between Parvathi and Krish. We never got to know Meera's pov, a heart-to-heart conversation would have revealed her thinking and her actions. The author took the easy route of showing the sex between the couple as a patch-up. By reading the last episode I am not convinced that Krish is getting the same version of Meera back that was portrayed in the second part. 
 

[Rangabaashyam]

Guys, Desai has stretched the pussies of Nidhi and Meera to a new benchmark.
Krish or nidhi lover or anyone shoving their dick will find like a cycle in car park and they cannot feel any pleasure.
Meera and Nidhi has accepted this openly. How their life is going to be happy after this. May be they need to have some sex toys in hand to use after the fuck with their husbands 

[Acchu]

Meera:

Why do every one misunderstands Meera so easily in this story is beyond me.

You misunderstood the part of that episode..First of all Desai did not confess, he was merely sarcastically joking that he brought some one to home and banged her in her bed...no one would believe him and Meera did not believe him so the question of her slapping him is not even possible...Desai was laughing while saying that though for him he is saying the truth he wants Meera to take it a joke and that's exactly how she took it and any one in her place would do the same.

I agree on one thing, she should have walked away from both..that was what i would have respected as well hence all my points in the last chapter about her sleeping with Desai with in few mins of break up was major screw up...and was not convincing at all...she just did hurt Krish too much with her actions and it was totally unacceptable , no person claim to love some one and can subject them to this kind of punishment, i do not agree to the author's thinking here, though he justified it with Meera's intention to generate hatred for her from Krish. It went overboard there, as usual our Krish being generous accepted her because he loves her a lot.

As for the last statement you mentioned, Meera did not dump Desai after she knew he had sex with Nidhi, it was before when she knew and thought in her mind as  Desai is a great man. Despite knowing Desai is a great man, she came back to Krish because she still loved him....that is exactly why this ending is better and justifiable to some extent.

Meera has brain that's why everyone misunderstood her.And also her character is   poorly written in last update.She meekly surrendered to desai and easily reunited with krish, that's not her character.At one hand she kept her promise for 2 months while keeping desai in her house and hasn't shown any sign of desperation for sex even when krish asked her to have her fun.But last update made her slave of sexual pleasures like nidhi.May be story from her pov can explain those much better I feel

I am curious  to read krish  alternative storyline like he  written for No one dies a saint

[chutdriller]

Sincere request not to reveal any other alternate endings..it would spoil the ending we have now, Updating the existing final chapter with more details and conversations/confessions totally makes sense considering the rushed ending but changing the ending or revealing alternate plots will mess up the thoughts about this ending, at least for me...Just my opinion.

I feel the same. I am more worried about the damage it will cause to my mind. I am sure if I read it it will take many days of mental stress to over come it.

Updating the last chapter makes sense now that we know the ending. Again it is all authors decision to do what he wants about his beautiful creation.

[chutdriller]

Meera:

Why do every one misunderstands Meera so easily in this story is beyond me.

You misunderstood the part of that episode..First of all Desai did not confess, he was merely sarcastically joking that he brought some one to home and banged her in her bed...no one would believe him and Meera did not believe him so the question of her slapping him is not even possible...Desai was laughing while saying that though for him he is saying the truth he wants Meera to take it a joke and that's exactly how she took it and any one in her place would do the same.

I agree on one thing, she should have walked away from both..that was what i would have respected as well hence all my points in the last chapter about her sleeping with Desai with in few mins of break up was major screw up...and was not convincing at all...she just did hurt Krish too much with her actions and it was totally unacceptable , no person claim to love some one and can subject them to this kind of punishment, i do not agree to the author's thinking here, though he justified it with Meera's intention to generate hatred for her from Krish. It went overboard there, as usual our Krish being generous accepted her because he loves her a lot.

As for the last statement you mentioned, Meera did not dump Desai after she knew he had sex with Nidhi, it was before when she knew and thought in her mind as  Desai is a great man. Despite knowing Desai is a great man, she came back to Krish because she still loved him....that is exactly why this ending is better and justifiable to some extent.

True. Desai was not confessing. He was playing games with Meera when meera said she did not confront desai about the incident. Desai used this to know what would meera do if she knows the truth. She asked desai the truth but desai said meera is the only know person she can make love. 

One thing meera wanted was time to think what she has done and what she will do next with krish out of her life. She took a week leave to think about this. She directly told desai to pack his bags and move out of house since krish is not with her. But desai was cleaver to not give her alone time and space and quickly planned trip. She said no sex. Desai made moves in morning and had sex with her where first word from her mouth was Krish; here also desai calls mom just so that he wanted meera to think about him and his family instead of krish and what has happened a day before. In morning when she said desai to shift to a hotel; desai immediately told to have breakfast outside. Desai was making sure he does not give anytime for meera to think on her own. Even at the end desai's desperation shows when he started to accuse meera; he was going to all extent to break meera and krish.


And regarding meera's reaction after knowing about desai, She knows from beginning that desai is not exclusive to her. The outbrust/emotions comes out when you love/care for a person. With krish meera's outbrust is instant; I feel this is because of their love. This is what I feel.

Eventually at the end both realised the truth that their love is not unbreakable. Both know that they are eachother's destiny.

[chutdriller]

True. Desai was not confessing. He was playing games with Meera when meera said she did not confront desai about the incident. Desai used this to know what would meera do if she knows the truth. She asked desai the truth but desai said meera is the only know person she can make love. 

One thing meera wanted was time to think what she has done and what she will do next with krish out of her life. She took a week leave to think about this. She directly told desai to pack his bags and move out of house since krish is not with her. But desai was cleaver to not give her alone time and space and quickly planned trip. She said no sex. Desai made moves in morning and had sex with her where first word from her mouth was Krish; here also desai calls mom just so that he wanted meera to think about him and his family instead of krish and what has happened a day before. In morning when she said desai to shift to a hotel; desai immediately told to have breakfast outside. Desai was making sure he does not give anytime for meera to think on her own. Even at the end desai's desperation shows when he started to accuse meera; he was going to all extent to break meera and krish.


And regarding meera's reaction after knowing about desai, She knows from beginning that desai is not exclusive to her. The outbrust/emotions comes out when you love/care for a person. With krish meera's outbrust is instant; I feel this is because of their love. This is what I feel.

Eventually at the end both realised the truth that their love is not unbreakable. Both know that they are eachother's destiny.

One most important thing about desai. He gets more pleasure than sex when he talks about the woman's husband when he is fucking the woman. He wants the woman to go directly to their husband or boyfriend.

He did this ananya and sam. He completely destroyed their relation. 

He tried multiple times with Meera by talking about krish, degrading him. Many times he asked meera if she will kiss krish after having sex with him. He called kirsh and let me listen to their fucking; when meera had strictly told no to this. Meera herself told desai that she does not want krish to know what all they both do in bed. Still desai called krish behind her back and made him listen. 

With nidhi he did the same. Even though if their encounters were less he still spoke about her boyfriend in degrading way. He told nidhi to think about his dick while she is doing with her boyfriend. He would have even wanted to use her to have affair with krish and use this to break krish and meera.

He has made Maithre, Ananya as his fuck toys. He can call them anytime have have sex with them. He clearly told he wants nidhi also to be like this. It is clearly a lie what he promised meera about their future. Meera's future would have been same.

His intention is not only to have sex with the woman but also want to destroy the woman's relation with her husband and then use the woman like a toy. Like meera said to desai long back if anything happens to him he will die alone no one will come to help him. He will be living alone all his life running behind women.

[Karmayogee]

Actually Desai is making women run behind him for his monster dick.

[RCF]

True. Desai was not confessing. He was playing games with Meera when meera said she did not confront desai about the incident. Desai used this to know what would meera do if she knows the truth. She asked desai the truth but desai said meera is the only know person she can make love. 

One thing meera wanted was time to think what she has done and what she will do next with krish out of her life. She took a week leave to think about this. She directly told desai to pack his bags and move out of house since krish is not with her. But desai was cleaver to not give her alone time and space and quickly planned trip. She said no sex. Desai made moves in morning and had sex with her where first word from her mouth was Krish; here also desai calls mom just so that he wanted meera to think about him and his family instead of krish and what has happened a day before. In morning when she said desai to shift to a hotel; desai immediately told to have breakfast outside. Desai was making sure he does not give anytime for meera to think on her own. Even at the end desai's desperation shows when he started to accuse meera; he was going to all extent to break meera and krish.


And regarding meera's reaction after knowing about desai, She knows from beginning that desai is not exclusive to her. The outbrust/emotions comes out when you love/care for a person. With krish meera's outbrust is instant; I feel this is because of their love. This is what I feel.

Eventually at the end both realised the truth that their love is not unbreakable. Both know that they are eachother's destiny.

Agreed that she just needed a reason to dump him but still it would have been satisfying to feel the hatred from her towards Desai as she agreed she had feelings for him though not as great as for Krish. Her calculations for Desai are wrong..Desai's game is next level so any one can fall into his trap but this is Meera who always strongly opposed him and also she is the one whom Desai always wanted so her defeating him in his game would make more sense to me...The plot should have been better..The moment Desai started to show his feelings and slowly demeaning Krish before Meera when they were in private she should have understood his game and should have planned to overcome his games..that would have been a very good story.

[RCF]

One most important thing about desai. He gets more pleasure than sex when he talks about the woman's husband when he is fucking the woman. He wants the woman to go directly to their husband or boyfriend.

He did this ananya and sam. He completely destroyed their relation. 

He tried multiple times with Meera by talking about krish, degrading him. Many times he asked meera if she will kiss krish after having sex with him. He called kirsh and let me listen to their fucking; when meera had strictly told no to this. Meera herself told desai that she does not want krish to know what all they both do in bed. Still desai called krish behind her back and made him listen. 

With nidhi he did the same. Even though if their encounters were less he still spoke about her boyfriend in degrading way. He told nidhi to think about his dick while she is doing with her boyfriend. He would have even wanted to use her to have affair with krish and use this to break krish and meera.

He has made Maithre, Ananya as his fuck toys. He can call them anytime have have sex with them. He clearly told he wants nidhi also to be like this. It is clearly a lie what he promised meera about their future. Meera's future would have been same.

His intention is not only to have sex with the woman but also want to destroy the woman's relation with her husband and then use the woman like a toy. Like meera said to desai long back if anything happens to him he will die alone no one will come to help him. He will be living alone all his life running behind women.

Yes good observation..Author gave a small hint on Desai's history..at one point of time Desai surely loved a woman..and she betrayed him with another guy..his trust on love is destroyed, he might have hated himself being the guy whom a girl left for another one and hence might have decided that he want to be the other guy and he might have basically started hating women and started treating them nothing but sex toys..He might have converted his hate for them into games where he would pray on the attractive women in his life..pursue them until the end and then show them heaven and leave them to face the guilt or split with their husbands..that's his revenge on them.

[Lollobionda]

Dear Friends

I have been reviewing the last chapter on my mind for the last few days. I want to share my thoughts with you. I do think the latest chapter wasn't one of the greatest, but it does clear some of the issues we had in our minds. Though the end was as wished by many readers, the means weren't as smooth as it was wished for. But looking at the larger picture, it was still a great ending to this awesome story.

First I'll start with Desai:

In my previous posts, I shared my views on how he became restless when Krish asked for time for himself and Desai started his end game. This chapter makes it clear why Desai behaved so.

He wants to have Meera all for himself. He acted all good infront of her and Krish by keeping himself dry for about 2 months. But he is unable to keep himself cold and managed to sleep with Nidhi by blackmailing her.

Then he realized that since Krish can walk and ask for time for himself and Meera, he has to start his end game soon or start competing with Krish for Meera. He has no choice but find other alternatives.

He started his game as below:

First, he started acting as if nothing has changed

Second, he started taking the moral high ground and supported Meera in all her accusations against Krish

Then, he said that he conducted a test on Krish and proved that he is still a cuckold and used Meera as a vehicle for his fantasies. By doing this, he completely alienated Krish from Meera, further proving that he knows that he's losing the game. This shows how desperate he is.

When he succeeded in splitting the couple, he immediately had sex with Meera, made her utter those words and consummated his relationship unprotected in presence of Krish so that Krish believed that Meera was impregnated by Desai.

Once Krish has left the house, he started concentrating on Meera to make her his wife. He started with his best foot - hot sex. Then he trapped her emotionally by making her go on tour with him and talking to his mom - making it a personal commitment for Meera. He told the girl to go out on her own and that their relationship is all about love and intimacy.

Those were the trump cards he used against Meera when the curtain started falling.

But why did Desai do all those mind games and rush, he had slept with Nidhi but pretended that he was chaste all this time while waiting for Krish to recover. That impression created a huge respect for him in their mind of Meera and she started believing that Desai is loving her truly and he is the man for her. At the back of his mind, he knew that his bluff can be called out anytime and he has to trap Meera into his fold and also move out of that place as soon as possible. That's what has caused all those emotional talks from Desai and generally his behavior in the last two chapters.

I am convinced there is a reason behind Desai's behavior in the last two chapters and Nidhi gave a convincing testimony for that.

Desai is a beast in bed - perhaps he uses supplements or other means, given his financial position. He is also good at manipulating people and getting what he wants. Therefore, it's no surprise that he was able to seduce a married woman and even made her believe that he loves her truly. He was able to manipulate the situation and get what he wanted. But he thought that's all is required for a long-term relationship which caused his failure.

Meera:
She is the dream queen of many of the readers. The penultimate chapter caused so much damage to her psyche & character that I dont think many of us have recovered. I think the last chapter doesnt make any true amendment to her outburst in the previous one.
Let me copy a discussion on one part of the story arc to prove how she is unreliable and fake.


When Krish accused that she had sex with Desai and he heard sounds from her room, Meera called that he has became insane and asked him to go to a doctor. The plot went downhill from there - she then asked Desai to call Piyush and say she's ready to sleep with him, and then closed the door on Krish's face completely.

But in the last chapter when Desai confirmed that he did indeed had sex with someone, here is how she reacted,




They were discussing as if it was some regular happening. She didn't high five him, that's it. Shouldn't she have given a tight rap on his face for his lie and because of which she said so many disrespectful things to her husband? Or should have she thrown a slap on him for cheating on her? Not at all, but she was discussing how she woke up with his penis inside her that morning. It was really disgusting the way she said it with so much ease! She had a video call with Desai's mom only after this conversation. So much for punishing herself and making Krish forget her. Like most men think thru their dick, Meera was thinking about a good pleasurable dick.

Get out you both
What could have kept our good impression of Meera? When the issues started in the penultimate chapter she could have told 'Get out you both' to Krish and Desai. It would have proven she is hurt and is trying to figure out her future. Instead, she kicked Krish away, indulged in a marathon sex with Desai - in both beds, shower, had a video chat with his mom, and planned tour to Himachal.... She is not the woman we all liked.

She decided to dump Desai only because of his lie, blackmailing and screwing Nidhi and when she realized that Desai cannot be trusted. So she decided to stay back with Krish. I dont know how truthful she is going to be with Krish as she was pushed to this decision only because her boyfriend has had sex with another woman in her bedroom, yet chose not to reveal anything to her because he did not want to ruin his image in her eyes.

“You know Krish, sex is sometimes like food. It can be good, bad, or ordinary. We can hate it, love it or even become addicted to it. But there’s one thing that you remember. No matter how tasty it is, no matter how addicted are you, it can’t be the only thing that matter to you. It is just a small part of your world. You can forget it, and sacrifice it for the rest of your world. Sometimes it is not important at all.”
This is the biggest bakwaas gyan I have ever heard in my life! She is saying all this to assure Krish that she is over with Desai. I dont believe a bit on her honesty.

Krish
We have seen the story in Krish's POV, so I dont want to discuss much on him. Only good thing, he finally decided to stand up for himself and his marriage. If Nidhi hasnt interrupted, he would have ended as a loser once again.

My misgiving was that the poor girl Nidhi was used to fix the marriage. She is made a sex toy in the hands of Desai and has completely screwed her life with her boyfriend. Perhaps she may judge all her future partners against the performance of Desai.

Finally, we all had Krish and Meera together. Thats the end most of us wanted, including yours truly. But is it the Meera we all started liking or we forgot that she was an amoral slut who almost walked out with another man based on lies? I think this is a very dark shaded woman, who has picked many characters of her last paramour.

This story has intrigued and captivated our attention in such a way that I am so grateful to author Krish_999 for presenting us a wonderful story. Undoubtedly the author is a genius writer with such rich and deep imagination. So many of us visited the site and stayed online for long hours only for this story. As few readers mentioned, when the story ended it left us with a huge void. I hope the author will come up with another blockbuster story soon.

Dear @bineeshm,

I agree with all your points...

Meera's behaviour in the last two chapters cannot be ignored.
She was just "out of line" and also "unworthy" of Krish. 
Under normal circumstances, such behaviour cannot be approved of...

However, after trying to put myself in her position, which was "not normal" due to the situation, 
I could show some sympathy and understanding for her behaviour.

She was under a very heavy "burden of shame" and especially towards Krish with a humiliating 
feeling of guilt. She wanted to put an end to it without "verbal" attacks and further discussions 
with Desai (which might have ended in a physical confrontation between Krish and Desai. 
Which she did not want!) to put an end to it all and have him out of their life.

I think and after going through and analysing her relationship, conversations and love for Krish 
(from the beginning to the end), I am convinced that in the end she did the right thing and made 
the best possible out of the situation...

It would be very desirable (moreover, it would bring us joy) if the explicit author Krish soon draws 
us into his orbit with a "again" captivating story.

I am already looking forward to it... 

Also, I am "looking forward to and cannot wait" for his final thought processes announced for Krish 
and Meera's story....


Hope to see you soon
dear Krish

Lollobionda

[hero123p]

Krish, Thanks for this wonderful story. Though I definitely wanted a happy ending of this story but it seems like a rushed end. Desai character has fallen just in few lines and that too not by Meera or Krish but Nidhi. Meera's character has flaws in last chapter. She was having morning sex with Desai even though she is not aware of well-being of Krish. In real life nobody does that if there is an iota of love. We get worried for loved once. Meera was also planning honeymoon kind of trip and then to meet Desai's mother. Yes Desai was planning but Meera was completely in tune. She has full plan to move on. The message I got is Meera was thinking Desai has changed and she is looking forward a new life with Desai and leaving Krish behind. She found Desai has not changed so she decided to stay with Krish. Lollypop for Krish is that she wanted him to move on. I think this was same excuse as in part-2. But there it looked real and I could feel that she really wanted to help Krish in part-2. Here she just wanted to dump him. Meera should know by this time that Leaving Krish is not a solution but treating Krish is. For that she needs to be with him.
I think we could have put same end little differently by putting more lines about
a. Meera in pain when she found Krish has left. She found how painful it is when Krish is not around even for few hours. Desai saw the restlessness of Meera and realized he is nowhere close.
b. Meera's confrontation with Desai (instead honeymoon planning) about the girl he had sex. She definitely knows when Krish is lying and when not. Nidhi is not required to reveal the truth. Meera just trust Krish.

One thing I like is Krish did not give up. Very difficult but he tried again.
One thing I miss is Krish always gives a fitting reply at the end. Here Desai has left almost unpunished. Desai must be laughing outside.

Also one other thing this chapter proves that Desai is simply god of sex. Meera and Nidhi forget everything when having sex with him. I would not be surprised if they invite Desai for a threesome in the future. How would Meera get satisfied by Krish when she knows better pleasure is possible? That is where I wanted Meera to completely go with Desai and realize that pleasure has a cost associated with it. How difficult it is to live with Desai (womanizer + possessive). May be after that realization, Meera and Krish should have come together. More loving and caring to each other realizing what mistakes they have made. Lessons which are taught by life are sometimes hard but stay with you life long.

Once you asked what should you write next. I would say 'Adutrey'. Thriller I don't like. Incest you will write so good that many would start living that (not good at all).

Will miss your writing but I hope you start writing soon. Bye till then.

This portal is another pain now. I don't know if it will survive till then.