05-12-2022, 01:02 PM
Awsome going
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Misc. Erotica Wrong number ...kaccha pakka badam
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05-12-2022, 01:12 PM
Thanks for continuing story be positive and relax ho k likhte raho dunya mn achay buray log to atay hi rahtay par sab ki baton ko dil pa lene lagy to bhai kase chaly ga we all like you support you read you so just chill and write we are waiting
05-12-2022, 01:26 PM
Rafi ne himmat dekha kar door open kara to woh andar se band nahi tha ....
Door open hua woh andar gaya ...hall khali tha to woh dabe kadam se bedroom ki traf bada... Jaha shabana thi...aur jaise hi woh bedroom ki traf aaya to shabana mil gayi ![]() Shabana ki nazar rafi par padi to reaction accha nikla shabana ne muskura kar rafi ko dekha.... Rafi ghabra gaya ...shabana salwar suit pahne thi uski side se chuchi dekh rahi thi suit mai ...aur badan to haiiii bhara hua tha ... 1 no chodo item lag rahi thi... Rafi ghabraya isi liye ki woh apne man aaj pap leke aaya tha barish jo rimjhim ho rahi thi band ho gayi ... Rafi bina kuch kahe bahar nikla ...is trah se shabana ko kuch alag laga...woh bhi rafi bhai kahte hue bahar nikli... Aur bahar wale chote se garden mai dono aaye aur yaha rafi ko rok kar is trah se achanak bahar jane ka karan pucha ... Rafi ne ek nazar shabana ke bhare hue jism par dali... ![]() Shabana ki side se kamar par salwar chadi hue pichwada bahar nikla hua ...doodh kase hue bhare hue chehra khubsurat ....shabana 1 no chudas bomb lag rahi thi... Is trah apne ko ghoor kar rafi ka dekhna bhi shabana ko kuch alag nazar aaya.... Aur woh thoda is baat ko ignore karti hue boli ...ap ko kiya hua achanak se bahar kyo aaye ... Ha abhi lunch banne mai time hai ap aaiye andar .... Rafi chup raha aur is chup rahne ka karan shabana puchti hai ... Rafi...woh woh door thoda sa open kar ke dekha to mai andar aa gaya ... Aur mai apke room mai ye dekhne gaya kahi ap aaram to nahi kar rahi ...to ap waha thi mujhe ajeeb sa laga pahli bar ap loho ki izzazat ke bina andar aa gaya... Rafi ki baat sunkar shabana mutmain nahi hue...use laga rafi ki zaban uska sath nahi de rahi woh jhoot bol raha hai ...
05-12-2022, 01:27 PM
(05-12-2022, 01:12 PM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: Thanks for continuing story be positive and relax ho k likhte raho dunya mn achay buray log to atay hi rahtay par sab ki baton ko dil pa lene lagy to bhai kase chaly ga we all like you support you read you so just chill and write we are waiting Jab mai koi gusse ya kisi karan se story chhodta ho to mai dubara se plot par nahi la pata par yaha mai full try kar raha ho...ab sex sean ki zaroorat ke hisab se likhonga faltoo mai nahi likhonga ....
05-12-2022, 01:44 PM
Very nice story woww full mazedar kahani chl rhi abhi tak to dost story psnd aaye ya na aaye par likhte acha ho aap
05-12-2022, 02:07 PM
Fantastic great updates sexy sexy story hot and sexy
05-12-2022, 03:59 PM
Shabana ne baat ko aage basate hue kaha...rafi bhai aaiye pahle andar chale ...
Ye sun kar rafi andar aa jata hai to rafi ko guest room ki taraf ishara kar ke jane ke liye kahti hai ... Tab rafi guest room mai jata hai waha ek bed aur sofe chair padi thi woh wahi bed ke pass ek chair par beth jata hai Uska rookh kitchen ki traf hota hai tab kitchen mai kam kar rahi shabana ka pichwada choda gudguda bhari sa dekh kar ek tees man mai hoti hai Woh kahte hai na jaha mard aur aurat tanha ho waha shaitan aa jata hai ...aisa hi kuch ho bhi raha tha ... Shabana apna sir par acche se tahzeeb se duppta lagati hai Chai ka pani rakh kar ...chini patti dal kar dheemi low kar ke kitchen se ab room ki traf aati hai ... Use aata dekh rafi nazar hata leta hai ...aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hai ... Shabana pass aati hai to ab rafi ko use dekhna hi padta hai ... ![]() eastpointe country club Shabana bahot hi haseen lag rahi thi woh ek bar ke liye uski saadgi se nazar nahi hata pata shabana pass beth jati hai . Shabana...aur batiye rafi bhai kaise chal raha hai aur nida kab khushkhabri dene wali hai .... Tab itna open jaisa bina takalluf ke rafi khush hota hai ...aur kahta hai ...jald hi .... Phir idhar udhar ki baat hoti hai to shabana asal mudde par aati hai ...shabana badi masumiyat ke sath apna hath gaal aur chin ke pass rakh kar rafi ki aankho mai dekhti hai . ![]() coastal bend blood center Rafi dekh kar shabana ko ulta sharma jata hai ...aur woh idhar udhar dekhne lagta hai ... Shabana...accha ye bato apne dusri shadi us time kyo nahi kari aur ap shuru se hi mujhse nazar churate hai ....aur mere samne ap sahi se rah nahi pate aur ap ko ek uljhan mai dekhti ho ....ap mere padosi bhi hai aur hamare khir khawar bhi hai.... To ap mer samne kyo chor ki trah nazar jhuka kar ya alag trah se mujhe feel karate ho....aakhir kiya baat hai ap ko sab sach batana hoga. .. Apko mere kasam ....aur ye chor nazar tab insan karta hai ki samne wale ke liye kuch ajeeb sochta hai ya koi chori kari hoti hai. ... Ap batao aakhir kiya majra hai ..... Ab shabana ne kasam de di ..par shabana ye baat kar ke kitchen ki traf gayi waha se jald 2 cup mai chai leke aayi ek rafi ko di dusri apne samne rakhi aur woh bed par beth gayi ... Tab phir se apna sawal pucha .... Rafi....mai kaise kaho ap mujhe apna bhai kahti hai ...par mai koi lambi kahani nahi bataonga ...bus ap ye samjh lo mai apse barso se pyar karta ho mujhe khud nahi pata ki kab apse pyar karne laga.... Ab mai aage kuch nahi kah sakta ....aur woh sir jhuka kar chai pine laga.... Shabana ko jis baat ka andesha tha woh aaj ab jakar suni .... Par shabana ne koi aisa reaction nahi kara ki rafi ko bura lage .... Shabana khamosh rahi kuch na boli bus bahot kam lihaz mai halka sa muskurayi .....aur woh ye to janti thi ki uski biwi guzre barso ho gaye... Aur shyad tab hi se ye mujh se pyar kar betha ek pados ke nati aisa hona lazmi tha.... Us ki wazah se ab tak usne shadi nahi kari ....shabana bhi detail mai nahi pucha.... Bus ek ahhhh bhar kar rah gayi jaisa laga ki barso se woh bhi kisi ko miss kar rahi hai .... ![]() Shabana pair upper kar ke bade itminan se chai piti hue uski nazar jhuki hue dekh kar ab pata nahi kuch uske andar bhi missing jo hua woh jaaga ....rafi ko ye betakullaf andaz shabana ka accha laga .... Waise to nam shabana hi tha par sami sahab moond mai hote to shama kahte ....woh kahi na kahi sami ki beti hi lagti thi aur ladkiya poti naati lagti thi .. Sami sahab ki umar mai kafi difference bhi tha.... Shabana sach mai kisi se shadi se pahle shadi ke bad chudwaya nahi tha...par woh kuch na kuch miss kar rahi thi . Shabana...ha to mera shaq sahi nikla ...mai kahi na kahi ye janti hi thi ap mujhse mohabbat karte hai ... Aur aj is moke par apne kaha..... Mere shadi ko bhi 24 sal hue kam umar mai mere shadi hue...2 ladki ke bad mera koi aur bacha nahi hua kafi koshish kari bhi gayi par teesra koi nahi hua... Mai apne shohar ke sath rah kar bhi sath nahi ho unse mile hue pata nahi kitna arsa ho gaya mujhe yaad bhi nahi .... Mai kai bar apni majboori mai behiyai dekha kar bhi unke karb na aayi .... Pata nahi mai ye alfaz apse kyo kah rahi ho....shyad ap soch rahe honge mere bare mai...... Mai kitni beharam hoke baat kar rahi ho ....mere baccho mai apni zindgi guzar rahi ho...aur ab ja ke mai aisa koi kam nahi kar sakti ki iska asar mere baccho par ho.... Par rafi sahab apki traf se kafi der ho gayi ...is bat ko yahi khatam kaete hai .... Ab shabana ne ye baat yahi khatam kar di par itna aasan nahi tha shabana kitchen mai chali gayi... Kuch der bad rafi bhi kitchen ki traf bada...... Aur yaha saman sanam ka bhi kuch aur chal raha tha .... ..............................................
05-12-2022, 04:28 PM
Is kahani ko aap ne abhi tak to bahut acchi tarah likha he..
Muje ye kahani acchi lagi.... Qki same ek asi hi interfaith kahani mene is site par likhi.. Thi.... But unfortunaly muje vo kahani bich me hi chod ni padi ......
05-12-2022, 04:37 PM
(05-12-2022, 04:28 PM)Unknown human951 Wrote: Is kahani ko aap ne abhi tak to bahut acchi tarah likha he.. Please restart your great story.
05-12-2022, 04:50 PM
(05-12-2022, 04:28 PM)Unknown human951 Wrote: Is kahani ko aap ne abhi tak to bahut acchi tarah likha he.. your story was extraordinary. Please try to write another story.
05-12-2022, 05:13 PM
Thank you story start karne keliye and maza aagaya updates parh ke
05-12-2022, 05:54 PM
05-12-2022, 06:06 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-12-2022, 06:22 PM by Alex67. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Story to aap likhna jante ho bht achi aur likhte bhi achi but ek zrur bolunga story m hero ek hi rkha kro aur female beshaq 3 4 ho jye mard srif ek bar try kro achi or jyda hogi story Baki marzi h mere dost
Loin king tum master ho story likhne m me itna janta hu tum best story likhte ho Ek story aisi likho jisme aurat ko baccha na hora ho to uska pati usko pandit ko dikhaye uske baad kaise hoga baccha wo tum ache se jante ho story king ho dost phir dekho logo ko kitna maza aayega
05-12-2022, 08:50 PM
(05-12-2022, 06:06 PM)Alex67 Wrote: Story to aap likhna jante ho bht achi aur likhte bhi achi but ek zrur bolunga story m hero ek hi rkha kro aur female beshaq 3 4 ho jye mard srif ek bar try kro achi or jyda hogi story Baki marzi h mere dostHa ye ek cheez hai mai hamesha heroin ka main carecter likhta ho aur mard zyada hote hai ....to ab jo bhi likhonga kahani jo trend hai alag type ki kahani ho pure inyerfaith ho ...woh likhonga aisa hi mai likhna chahata tha par likh hi nahi pa raha ho
05-12-2022, 09:54 PM
Puri interfaith likho jisme biwi pati k smne kre woh bhi hubby k smne majburi m yaha to pati usko raste pe lê jye yah woh majburi me kre but ho pati k smne m kisi ko cmnt nhi krta hu sirf apki story p hi krta hu kyu ki bht purana slinet reader hun apka aab I’d bhi sirf apke Back hone k bad bnai h mne ho ske to likhana real story m apko bta dunga todhi joh mere smne hui h
05-12-2022, 11:13 PM
(05-12-2022, 09:54 PM)Alex67 Wrote: Puri interfaith likho jisme biwi pati k smne kre woh bhi hubby k smne majburi m yaha to pati usko raste pe lê jye yah woh majburi me kre but ho pati k smne m kisi ko cmnt nhi krta hu sirf apki story p hi krta hu kyu ki bht purana slinet reader hun apka aab I’d bhi sirf apke Back hone k bad bnai h mne ho ske to likhana real story m apko bta dunga todhi joh mere smne hui h Ha ek aise story ki talash mai ho jo mere har story se alag ho interfaith hi ho par sab ek jaise mere kahani mai na ho
06-12-2022, 09:14 AM
Aab tak ki apki best story hai ye.. be continue
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06-12-2022, 04:10 PM
Absolutely great....
Thanks for continuing..... Superb... |
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