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Usne akele ghar mai jane ke liye mana kar diya ...aur sharafat dekha kar kahne laga dupeher mai aayega ....aur tab lunch leke jayega...
Asal mai woh nashta apne Abbu ke liye leke gayi thi waha tab rafi bhi room.mai tha thoda nashta shabana ne kar liya
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Tab dono ladki waha hospital mai akeli thi aur apne baap ko dekh rahi thi ...
Unke man mai kahi na kahi jo nafrat paida hue to woh nafrat ab nahi rahi apne Abbu ka hal dekh kar ....dono hi wahi rahi aur jab jab woh jagte to unki khidmat karti .....
Shabana bhi dupeher hone se pahle lunch banane lagi ....aur woh bhi ab normal tarike se ghar ki saaf safai kar ke lunch bana rahi thi.....
Sba normal hua ....usman to shabana aur sami ko pahle se pasand tha......
Aur usman bhi sanam ko jab dekhata to andar hi andar dil de betha tha....use lagta tha sanam ke sath uski shadi ho jayegi ....
Tabhi dubai jakar woh mahanat kar ke accha paisa kama raha tha..
Yani ye kahani jaisa kaha gaya mai band kar do....
To bus ye likh kar band kar raha ho ....yani sab Sahi ho gaya ....rafi ki mohabbat adhuri rah gayi....
Sanam ki shadi usman se hi honi thi saman bhi college jati bina nandu ke samna kare woh badi ahtiyat se aati yaha rafi hi lene jata ...
Aur jab tak sami Sahi nahi hua tab tak rafi duty karta ....
Durgesh bus call par hi sexy khel khelta rha dono bahno se woh bhi aage nahi bada ....
Ab mere samjh nahi aata chudai ki kahani mai chudai na likho to kiya likho....rundi to banna hi tha sab ko....par sab ke samjh mai nahi aaya ki kahani mai agar chudai na ho to likhne se kiya fayda .....
Kab tak seduce likhta rahonga ...wohi call par nanga karta rahonga....
Yaha mai saman sanam ko chudai karwata to zaroor par alag tarah alag moke se...
Rahi shabana ki baat to ye accident kahi bhi kaise bhi ho sakta hai .....
Yaha shabana ki bina marzi se sex hua uss maine sapne mai badal diya .....
Aue pak saaf sab ko rahne diya... Sab apni life mai khush the
Ab aainda se koi kahani nahi likhonga....jo is kahani ko badana chahata hai badaye apni marzi se bina sex ke bus seduce likhe
Shabana bhi sharif aurat hai use bhi to chudna hai ab kisi aur lund se .....
To maine bus yahi kara ki uske andar ka feel jagaya ...jabar jasti sex kara kar jaha uski marzi nahi hai ....
Aur woh apni betiyo ko kaise treat karti hai woh ab likhta bhi par mai hi bhatak gaya....
Agar phir se kabhi koi kahani likhonga to sirf chudai hi chudai koi sharif carecter leke nahi aaonga.....
Ok thanxxxx bhai logo mujhe ummid lagane ke liye mera hosla badane ke liye.....
Kafi kahani mere kharab hue hai maine dubara use set kara ...
Par aise native camnt nahi aaya ...ha hosla badha gaya mera par is trah se mera man nahi toda gaya....
Ab thoda mai nazbeen Afreen ko dekh kar uska bhi end kar deta ho aur ab is foam par wapis nahi aaonga.....
Thanxxxx once againnnnn
Jise likhna hai is kahani ko likhe apne marzi se mere full permission hai ....
Good bye ...is kahani ka
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03-12-2022, 12:32 PM
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Story to aap hi achi likh skte hmare mutabik par dost
Beti ki help se uski maa Tak jana chahiye tha Durgesh ko story ko aage badao dost kyu ki jitni achi tum likhte ho utna koi nhi I’m ir big fan really bht time se story pdhta hu m apki interfaithlovers p bhi pdhi thi
Ek story cuckold p likhna zrur jisme humiliation ho
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Bass ap likhna band karo lionking koi kuch b kahi ap apni story bass likte jao i hope you will come back
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03-12-2022, 01:50 PM
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Yaha kai ese readers hai jo bina baat bhosdike ke gyaani bante hai..... Khud to story likh nahi sakte or ek Banda agar likh raha hai to apna dimaag lagate hai...... Bc story pado or khush raho...... Saale koi constructive feedback to dete nahi bas ye kyu kiya wo kyu kiya......
Lion King bhai bolne do inko aap apni story apne hisab se likho...... Kyuki ye chutiya wahi log hai jo update time pe na mile to update update krte rehte hai....... Saale bade critics hai bc..... Achhi khasi story ki maa chod di......
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Bhai likho yaar jinko samjha rahi hai story unke liye to likho please please story band mat karo
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Gadhe ke beej..... Kutte ki chudi gaand...... Tune khud kitni story likhi hai madarchod jo yaha gyaan chod raha hai...... Bhosdike pehle ek story chodd ek update likh ke dikha fir baate chodiyo...... Bhadwe ki nasal saale
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03-12-2022, 10:39 PM
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Mai aaj apna chota sa jeevan parichay dena chahta ho ise dhayan se pade ...
Jab mai xossip par aaya to ye site pata nahi kaise open hue ...aur mai 1 ya 1.5 sal se kahani bus padta tha...
Aur koi jab update likhna band kar deta tha mujhe bhi bahot gussa aata tha....
Aur maine is xossip par id banayi aur kahanj ke cmmt dene laga ...bada accha lagta jab writer cmmt ka reply deta ...
Kuch story band hue jo bahot Shandar thi ....
To maine socha ki mai bhi likho ap logo ne dekha hoga ki mai nazbeen ka carecter zyada kahani mai likhta ho nam.nazbeen ka
Ye nam se mujhe bahot lagav hua par woh mai nahi bata paonga kyo ...
Aur maine bus maze ke liye nazbeen bahak gayi 4 line likh kar shuru kar di....mai bus nazbeen ko sirf sex sex sex ke liye likhna chahata tha jaha koi story nahi bus thoda seduce phir sex hi sex diffrent diffrent tarike se.....
Waise shuru bhi kari ...par pata nahi maine nazbeeen bahak gayi ko novel mai change kar diya .. Aur uska end aakhir kara
Par jo mai likhna chahata tha likh na paga...aise hi iram...sumbool.jiska nam.intizar kab tak karenge hum.bhala jaha ek writer ne chhod diya use badaya ...aur bhi kahani ko badaya ....
Par nazbeen ka nam bar bar soch kar mai jo kahani likhta jisme sex ke ilwa kuch na ho ...mai likh nahi paya aaaj tak
Nazbeen aur afreen bhi aise hi kahani hai jo chal rahi hai ....
Par woh bhi maine reder ke dawab mai immotion aur story add kar di.....
Kintu jo kafi salo se nazbeen ki mere soch thi zaroor likhonga..
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Mai jab likhonga to bhale cmmt mile na mile likhta chala jao.ga jaha sirf sex ke ilwa kuch na hoga ....sab se karonga amir garib sab se ....
Tab jab woh mai likh paya woh mere aakhiri kahani hogi....
Mai apne man ka kabhi likh hi nahi paya .....
Isi karan sabse tez update deta ho ki reder update ke liye pareshan na ho ...ha 1 ya 2 ya 3 din tak update nahi aaye to samjh lana mai busy ho aur bahot long gape ho jai tab samjhna kahani mere flop ho gayi to band kar di ...
Ungli thak jati hai deemag kharab ho jata hai naye naye idea aur naye naye sex diolouge likh te hue ....
Mai koi writer nahi bus ap logo ke liye likhta ho aur jab bahot zyada negative baate karte hai to bura lagta mai mujhe kon sa paisa mil raha hai khani likhne ka
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One of the finest writer of Xossipy... Hats off sirjee. You should write...
The vibe and pleasures you gave us though your Writing is awesome.... Keep it up
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Plz is story ko complete karo aap ak 2 bandon ke negative coments ko dekh rahe hen jab ke hum jese support karne wale bandon ki requests nai dekh rahe.
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We request you to please continue
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Ok mai dekhta ho kaha se ye start karo
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Chalo mai phir se try karta ho ...par samjh nahi aa raha kaha se shuru karo ....maine nida aur usman ka carecter jo hide rakha tha use open kar diya ....
Use mai surprise ke tor par nida ko lane wala tha jo isi city mai rahti hai abhi woh last month se hai ...
Par dekhta ho kaha se shuru karo to thoda likhne ka try phir se karta ho ....
Dono bahne hospital mai thi to ab kuch ekant jagah par bethi thi....
Shabana ghar ke kam niptane lagi rafi bhi apn3 ghar par aaya aur aaram karne laga....
Uske man mai kuch zakhm aaj shabana se baat kar ke taza ho gaye....
Bahot salo se bus ek dusre ko kisi wazhat se mulaqt hi hue baat to bhaot kam hoti thi...
Hue bhi to sami sahab ke samne woh bhi duniya ki .....
Aaj shabana Waise aur bhi zyada haseen ho gayi is age mai aurat ka nikhar sex bahot zyada bad jata hai nitamb to shabana ke bahot shandar hi the ....
Woh ghar mai betha rone laga ...shayad jazbati mohabbat shabana se woh pahle hi karta tha...
Shabana ke chakkar mai usne dusri shadi bhi na kari....par aaj kuch der hospital bus aur car mai rahne se shabana ko woh aur zyada baat karne ke liye taras raha tha....
Waise bhi usne shadi nahi kari to woh man hi man sex ke liye kafi tadpta bhi tha....
Tab usne socha agar mai ab uske ghar jao to woh ghar mai akele andar aane degi ....
Ya ek bhai ki trah mujhse baat karegi...waise to woh mere sagi bahan to nahi hai ....
Yaha kai salo bad rafi ka zazbaat umad aaye ...
Waha dono bahane tanha bethi thi....aur apas mai idhar udhar ki baat karte karte durgesh ki baat nikal aayi ...
Saman...appi kiya mujhe aisa lagta hai ki ap suresh se payar karne lagi ...
Sanam....ohhh nahi ye payar kiya hota hai ...ha jab se pahle call se leke ab tak jo baat aur jo mob mai gandi calling video hue hai ....tab se kuch mera man khoya khoya rahta hai ....
Aur jab usse mere baat bhi agar uske call aane par mai ignore kar deti ho to ...mujhe badi baichaini hoti hai ....
Mai uske bare mai kuch nahi janti kon hai kiya hai shadi shuda hai ya kuch aur ...hai to koi mamuli aadmi ....
Par mere andar kuch ajeeb hone laga usse baat kar ke mujhe rahat aur sokon milta hai ....
Saman...ise to pyar kahte hai ...par ye pyar hota to ek hawas jaisa hi hai ....
Man lo apki ya mera koi bf ho jo aaj nahi hai ...woh hamare maa baap ke bad usse baat kar ke uske sath kuch lamhat bita kar accha lagta hai ..
Uski mohabbat pak saf hai ...aur aage ye rishta hamare maa baap ki marzi se bhi ho jata hai. ..to kiya woh hamare sath suhag raat nahi banayega ....kiya hamara kuwarapan khatam nahi karega ...kiya woh bus shadi ke bad baat hi karta rahega .....
Waha mohabbat mai nhi hawas hogi ...hai naa..woh apne marzi se hamare jism ko chuwega bahot kuch karega ....
Par mai ye nahi kahti ap suresh ka pata kar ke usse shadi kar ke nihayat tang zindgi guzaro.....
Par kahi na kahi apke dil mai payae ya hawas uske liye aayi hai ...
Mujhe ek ladki hone ka ahsas nandu ne diya jo umar mai mujhse kafi bada aur college ka chaprasi hai ....
Ab parso mujhe college jana hoga mai samjh nahi pa rahi uska samna mai kaise karo....
Sanam....ek baat kaho tumne mujhe nandu ke sath kiya kiya hua bus tumhari suhagrat banne hi ja rahi thi ....
Agar aage chal kar woh tumhe phir se tang kare to tum kahi us hawas ke bahav mai bah gayi to ...
Aur kahi khuda na kare pregnet ho gayi tumahara kuwarapan khatam ho gaya to....phir kiya karogi ...hamare baap ki izzat is city mai kitni hai woh to muh dekhane ke qabil na rahenge hamare is harkat se .....
Saman...pata nahi appi ....lakin apki shadi 1 ya 1.5 sal mai ho hi jayegi....kiya tab tak pa apna kuwarapan bacha kar rakh sakti ho ....
Man lo suresh kahi tumhare pass aa jai aur kuch aisa lamhat aaye jaha ap apne ko rok na sako aur ap uske bacche ki maa ban jao ....tab....kiya iske bare mai apne socha hai ....
Sanam...nahi kuch nahi socha ...par ab tum se kiya chupna hum do sagi bahane us ke samne puri nangi ho gayi ....
Par sach mano ye bahot bada gunah azeem hua...lakin aage bhi mob par uske samne nangi hue to shayd ab mai sharma na karo ...uski gandi bhasha uske galiya dena. ...
Mujhe ek sokon dene laga hai ....shyad usse mai hawas kaho ya kuch aur usse pyar karne lagi ho ...
Sanam...hmmm..par mere andar nandu ko leke koi feeling nahi hai ...
Hame to ye bhi nahi pata sex mai kiya kiya hota hai ...hamara koi aise frds ya koi bf to nahi jo bataye sex mai kiya kiya hota hai ....
Hamri ammi ne bhi to ek insan se shadi kari aur usse wafadari kar ke aaj ek shandar zindgi guzar rahi hai...
Sanam...kiya pata hamari ammi ne shadi se pahle ya shadi ke bad maze liye ho ...mujhe Abbu ko dekh kar to nahi lagta woh ammi ki abhi tak khawaish mitate honge....
Jaisa hum do bahane ke bare mai kisi ko kiya pata.....
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Dono bahane durgesh ke liye apne apne view rakhne lagi ya saman bhi durgesh se kuch lagav mahsoos karne lagi woh bhi durgesh se pyar karne lagi...ye ilm sanam ko bhi hua ...
Saman durgesh ko call karne ko kaha par yaha ye log akele mai hi bethe the .. Pr kuch log aa ja rahe the...
Yaha sanam ek bar aur kahti hai ki suresh usse milna chahata hai uake sath woh sab karna chahata hai jo shadi ke bad karre hai ...
Par woh seal na todega balki apni pyar ka nishani uska pichle ched mai dal kar mal nikalega....aur aage se kuwara hi rakhega......
Sanam ka man bhi usse milne ko hone lga tha pr sanam ko durgesh ne apna city aur nam jhoot hi bola tha....
Yaha saman ka man bhi durgesh ki baat karne ka kahne laga...
Is par room mai jakar ki balcony se baat karne ko kaha ...uske Abbu so rahe the waise bhi aaj raat shyad dr chhuti kar dete ...
Barish phir se hone lagi par woh pahle ki trah toofani nahi thi lakin dar to wohi tha...ki kahi waise hi barish na ho jai....
Durgesh subah apne room par gaya barsat ke karan aaj site band thi jaha woh apni labour lagata tha ...
Isi karan woh so raha tha ...yaha sanam se zyada saman baichain ho rahi thi durgesh se baat karne ke liye...
Ia karan sanam ko usse kahi na kahi jalan si feel hone lagi ....
Aur shadi tak sanam ruk pati ya nahi ...sex ka bukhar sanam saman ke andar bad raha tha ...woh ab na gunah dekh rahi thi na kuch ....haa apne maa bap ki fikar to dono ke man mai thi ....
Kul milakar woh baat durgesh se karne ke liye apne Abbu ke room mai aayi aur waha us room ki balcony mai chali gayi ...
Yaha saman ne durgesh ka call laga diya ...air phone bhi use kara dono bahano ne ek ek air phone lead kan mai laga di...
Durgesh gahri nind mai so raha tha pura call hua recive nahi hua ....
Sanam...shyad woh busy hoga ..
Saman..nahi agar usne hamara no dekha hoga to woh call zaror uthata ...ek bar aur call lagati ho ...
Phir se ring hue ...tab durgesh ko gusaa aane laga ...aur kahane laga sala mob band kar ke sota to accha rahta ...
Usne adhkuli nind mai aankho se no dekha...
Par pura no thik se nahi dekh paya ...woh wohi no samjha jab wrong call lagi thi ....aur yaha bus ek digit ki galti se hua...
Woh call us apne dost ka samjh kar kan pr lagaya aur shuru ho gaya....
Durgesh....abe bhosdi ke is time kyo call kara ...tujhe pata hai na mai aaram karta ho tere bahan ko chodu gaandu kaise call kar diya .....jab moond hota hai lode tu call kar deta hai ab is time call na karna warna tere gaand mar donga...
Woh ye kah kar call cut karne wala tha. Aur dono bahne ko gaali uske gusse mai sunkar maza aaya ...par yaha to saman ne uski baat ya gaali sunkar andaz lagaya ki ye bahot bada harami insan hai. ...
Jis par bharosa nahi kar sakte the...par yaha kuch saman ke man mai uski baate sunkar maza aaya ....
Tab call katta to usse pahle ...sanam ne kaha ....rukiye mai sanam ho....