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Misc. Erotica Wrong number ...kaccha pakka badam
#41
bahut badhiya ek lajawab aur mast update!
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#42
Ekdom damadar aur dashu update! clps clps clps
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#43
What a fantastic update! Great writings! Great going!! thanks
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#44
(01-12-2022, 08:33 AM)hfmwife Wrote: Super excellent start!
Just amazing and outstanding writing!
Please let this story to be a one hero and many heroins  themed.

Absolutely right Namaskar
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#45
Ab baat us toofani barish se pahle us raat ki ..jaise bataya tha ki sanam ko suresh call karta hai woh pahle to call ignore karti hai par aakhir sanam call receive kar leti hai ...

Sanam...kyo mujhe ap tang karte hai kyo call bar bar karte hai apke samjh nahi aata mai apse baat nahi karna chahati ....

Suresh...are mamsahib ap naraz na ho ....dekhiye ap acche se janti hai ki apse mai sapne mai bhi nahi mil sakta ...

Bus kam se kam.ap 10 min bhale baat na kare haa hooo hi karte rahe yahi mere liye bahot hai ....

Sanam...ap jante hai ki hum aise waise ladki nahi hai hum kisi gair mard se baat karna mana hai ...aur ye gunah bhi hai ...

Ab yaha dono apni safai dene lage baat aage badne lagi aur yaha sanam call ab cut nahi kar rahi thi ....

Suresh ...plzzz kam se kam hum woh kiya kahte hai na phone a frds ban sakte hai ....

Waise na apne mujhe dekha na maine apko dekha hum log waise bhi bahot door rahte hai....thoda to baat karo na....

Sanam....mai us insan se baat karo jo baat baat par dusro ko gaali deta hai .....batmizaz insan hai .....

Suresh...ap kyo nahi samjhti mere paise ka sawal tha maine mahanat kari thi to mai kyo na paise magonga....

Khair jane do...chalo kuch apse baat karna chahata ho ....

Sanam....kaise baat ....

S...bus kuch apne bare mai batao mai apse apka adress ya kuch janna nahi chahata bus thoda bahot ....

Sanam....mai kyo bhala batao apne bare mai ....

S...plzzz thoda to raham khao...accha apki shadi kab ho rahi hai apk hone wale pati kaise hai woh kiya karte hai...ya apka koi bf bhi hai ....

Sanam....dekho lihaz mai baat karo .l...

S...par maine kiya kuch galat pucha bus ye to ek sawal hi hai ....

Sanam....mere shadi...shayd 1 sal ya 2 sal ke andar ya bad ho jai ...aur kiya kaha apne mera bf...ye hamare mahashre mai aisa nahi hota ...hum apni maa baap ki marzi se hi kam karte hai .....na ki aise falto cheez par dhayan dete hai ...

Rahe mere shohar ki baat mai unke bare mai nahi janti woh kiya karte hai kiya nahi karte mai nahi janti bus itna pata hai jis din mere shadi hogi tab hi apne shohar se milongi..
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S...ye kiya baat hue mana ki ap apne maa baap ki izzat karti hai aur ap zimmedar sharif ladki hai ...

Par iska matlab ye to nahi ki ap ko jisse chahe bandh diya jai ....
Apke bhi sapne honge apki bhi koi khushi hogi apka dil bhi ghumna pasand karta hai ....

Bato kiya ye duniya tumhara pati hi dekhayega .....aur woh aiaa nahi nikla to ....ek narak se nikal kar dusre narak mai gayi to kiya fayda.....


Ladki bhale kitni unche khayalt ki ho ya ap jaise shareef ho ....hasrte sab ki ek hoti hai ....

Mai ye nahi kahta ki ap bf banao ya kisi se pyar ke chakkar mai pado.....lakin aise zindgi bhi ji kar kiya karogi jo apna faisla khud nahi le sakti ....

Mana ki tumhari zindgi mai koi ladka na ho ...aur kaha likha hai ki bf banana zaroori hota hai ...

Par kam se kam.ek aise sathi to ho jise tum.acchi buri baat kah sakti ho jo tumse bhale na mile lakin woh mere trah call par baat kar ke apke kuch sapne pura kar sakta ho ...

Tumhare andar ek himmat paida kar sakta hai .....

Sanam uski baat sun rahi thi ek ek alfaz sun rahi thi ....

Jaisa bataya tha ki in ke Abbu ne itni sakhti se pala ki andar hi andar dono bahane jal rahi thi..

Aur woh yaha sanam ke deemag mai ye aaya agar mai isse kuch baat kar bhi liya karo to kon sa gunah hai ....

Waise bhi kitni bar isne baat karne ki koshish kari par kabhi isne galat baat nahi ki......
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#46
Tab suresh kahta hai accha ye batao ap kon si padai kar rahi hai ....
Sanam...bcom.2nd year ....

S...bahot accha ...to ab agle sal padai kar ke ap shadi karogi....

Sanam....haa.....

S...kyo...

Sanam...kyo kia hota hai ....sab karte hai mai bhi karongi......

S...par kyo wohi to puch raha ho...isliye ki tumhari koi nai seal tode ....ya tum bacche banane ki machine ban jao....ya ab tak apne sex nahi kara isliye.....

Sanam...yeee kiyaaaaa battamizi hai ....

S...ye battamizi nahi ...mere sawal ka jab tumhare samne nahi ho bus mere awaz hi sun rahi ho....to jawab nahi de sakti to apne pati ka kiya sath dogi.....

Hai himmat tumhare andar mere sawal ka jawab dene ki....

Sanam...ha hai mere andar himmat shadi se pahle ladki apne maa baap ke liye jiti hai aur shadi ke bad apne shohar aur hone wale bacche ke liye .....

S....hahahah hahahahaha jhoot jab bolna nahi aata to ap kyo bol rahi ho...


Tumne ab tak apna komarya sambhal kar rakha hai ise ap apne shohar ko dena chahati ho ....par man lo tumhara shohar shadi ke bad tumhari ummid par khara na utre to.
..samjh rahi ho mai kiya kahna chahata ho.....

Sanam..woh mera naseeb ....

Aur mai aise koi loose carecter nahi ho jo shohar agar ummid par khara na utre to woh ....


Khair jane do...mujhe padai karni hai ...ok call cut kar rahi ho.

S....bus 5 min....

Sanam.....thik hai ...par ab kiya kahna hai ap ko.....

S...accha abhi ap kiya pahni ho...

Sanam...kiya pahni ho ka kiya matlab ....chunnidar salwar suite pahni ho.....

S...to night dress yani koi nighty ya maxi wagerha pahan kar nahi soti....

Sanam...ye mere pass nahi hai aur na hi mujhe koi zaroorat. ....
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Suresh....ek baat kaho....

S...kiya....

Suresh....ap kon se rang ki bra panty pahni ho....

S...kiyaaaa ap ka deemag kharab hai ye kaise baat puch rahe ho...

Suresh...apko mere kasam call na cut karna ...dekho ap acche se janti hai mai apse mil to nahi sakta na dekh sakta ho ...apko mere baato mai maza aayega ...thodi garam thodi gandi baat sunkar ....plzzz thoda sa apne dayre se bahar aao ....dekho mai kon sa ap ko dekh raha ho....

Samjho ap ki suhagraat hai apka pati apse ye sawal puch raha hai ....

Waha to ap nangi bhi ho jayengi woh kuch bhi puchega ap jawab dogi na....mai to phir bhi call par puch raha ho....

Na mai apko janta ho na ap mujhe janti ho.....thoda sa to maze lo mere baat ka ....

Mujhe pata hai ap bahot shareef ladki ho....ek kattar mazhabi ho....par dil to sabka ek hi hota hai na.....

Thodi garam baat kar logi to apka kirdar kam nahi hoga....ap apni saheli hi samjh kar mujh se baat karo....ha mere mard ki awaz hai mard bhi ho mai....

To thoda to himmat dekhao....mere full guarantee hai apko bahot maza aayega.....

Waise bhi apne kisi aur ko di hue gaali suni hai ...woh shabd mai yaha gusse se nahi pyar se puchna chahata ho ...

Ab suresh ne aise apni baato mai badi chalaki se fasaya ki sanam uski baato mai aane lagi....waise bhi ek sakht mijaz baap ki beti thi ....to ab yaha woh samay aaya ki kam se kam ek anjan bina dekhe ladke se baat kar sakti thi....bahot Zyada manane ke bad sanam thoda tootne lagi.....


Suresh....batao na kon se rung ki bra panty pahni ho....

Ab yaha bahot laj sharm mai uska rply dena shurh kar diya bahot zyada haqlake dar ke zaban kamp rahi thi par ye use sukoon tha ki suresh yaha nahi hai aur apne andar aise feeling layi ki uska pati hi usse puch raha hai suhagrat mai ....

S...mai janta ho ye apke liye mushkil kam hai waise apke room mai koi nahi itna to mai samjh gaya ......thoda enjoy karo ....

Ab batao kon se rung ki bra panty pahni ho....

Yaha sanam haqlate sharam ke woh reply dene lagi....

Sanam....woh mai woh maiiii woh whiteee color ki bra hai .....aur usi color ki pantyyyyyy hai......


S...shabash......accha ye batao ki ap khud lene jati ho ...

Sanam....nahiii mere maa leke aati hai ha mai unke sath jati ho kabhi kabhi ....

S.....accha abhi jo bra pahni ho usme cup hai ya simple hai..



Sanam....simple hai.....

S....kon si size ki hai bra.....

Sanam....woh woh haiiiiiiii wohhhh 34 b .....

S...wahhhhh kamar kitni hai ....

Sanam...mujhe nahi pata......

S.....accha mat batao .....kiya ap ne kabhi ungli dali hai chut mai......

Sanam....haiiiiiiiiiiii ,.'hhhhh aise baat kyo puch rahe ho sharam nahi aati tumhe.....

S....plzzz batao naa...dekho ye tumhara pati tumhare samne beth kar puch raha hai kabhi nahate time ya room.mai ya kahi aur masti to ap ko zaroor aati hogi.....to apne chitty mai ungli dali hai.....
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S...nahiiiiiiiii ......

Suresh.....kuwari hai bikul hai naa....jab tumhara pati tumhari chut marega...to khoon niklega...ap ghabra nahi......

Ye sab hota hai...

Accha kiya tum apni salwar utar kar apni panty utar kar chut ko sahla sakti ho.

S...ufffff mere khudaaaaaa ahhhhhh aise sawal na karo.

Mai gili ho rahi hooooo ahhhhhhhhh. ....

Suresh....dekho na salwar utar kar tumhari salwar gili hue hai ya panty......

S....ahhhhh mat karo mere sath aisa.....

Suresh....ab apni kurti pet tak le jao....aur agar naada wali pahni ho to naada khich do.....aur salwar utaro.....

Apko maza aa raha hai na is maze ko barbad na karo....khicho naada .....

Khicha na naada......

Koi reply nahi.....

Suresh...mujhe ummid hai tumne naada khich diya.....ab salwar utaro........


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Uatr di na salwar.....ab panty khich kar utar do..............


Utar di naaaa.....ab apni chut par dekho ki kitni jhante hai .....ya chikni hai.........


Dekhaaaaaaaaa naaaaa apne .....

Ye sab baate kuch der ruk ruk kar raha tha .....aur use lag raha tha ki sanam sab kar rahi hai.......

Suresh. ....ab ap apni ungli lo chut tumhari full gili hai ab apni ungli ko puri chut par upper niche sahlao...
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Ab kaisa lag raha hai .....apko.accha lag raha hai na .....

Ab apni kurti bra sab utar do......

Kuch lamhe bad.....


Kiya tumne apni kurti utar di.....bra bhi na.....

Koi sheesha laga hoga kam se kam.bathroom.mai hoga ya apke room mai .....

Waha apne ko khadi hoke nanga dekho..........




................kaisa lag raha hai apne ko nanga ab dekh kar ....ab ye dekho tumhare nipple tan gaye hai na........

Apne nipple ko thoda maslo....accha lagega apko .....
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Maza aa raha hai na....ab apni ungli ko chut par le jao...
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Ab dheere dheere chut ke andar dalo.....aur daloooo ahh puri gused do ungli apni chut mai....



Sanam.....uiiiiiiii mazaaaaaaaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


Ab ye jo awaz suni to suresh hairan rah gaya yani saman woh sab kar rahi thi jo suresh karwa raha tha.....

Sanam ke andar soyi hur ek pyas jaagne lagi....par woh khud apni seal nahi todna chahati thi.....

Woh apne bhagane ko masal masal kar jhadna chahati thi aaj pahli bar khud se......


Suresh....ab jo apki gili ungli hue hai na kam rus se use mere muh mai do.....

Mai apke pass nahi ho to woh ungli tum khud choso...


Kiya ab tumhare andar chudne ki shakti kuch kah rahi hai ....jaise mano woh kah rahi ho ki suresh mere chut mai pura lund mota sa dal de......

Nashe ki halat mai saman .........hmmmmmmmmmmm

Par mai to yaha nahi ho na....to ap ek kam karo mere lund ki photo apko send karta ho apka whts ap no mere pass show kar raha hai .....



Kuch lamhe mai......

Suresh....dekho maine apne lund ki photo beji hai ab air phone lagao mob apne se door karo .....aur mere lund ki photo dekho..


Aur socho ab ye lund se ap chudna chahati ho.......


Nashe ki halat mai sanam ne wohi kara air phone lagaye aur whats up open kara ...isi no par kuch pics aayi use jaise hi open kara.....to sanam haki si masti mai sharam mai cheekh padi.....
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Sanam....haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaaaa ye kaisa hai....haiiiiiiiiiiii


Suresh....kiya pasand nahi aaya pure 8 inch lamba 3 inch mota hai full chamdi ka uncut lund hai mera......iski full chamdi jab apki gori chut ke andar jayegi to ap ko kate hue lund se zyada aayega.........

Dekho aur pics bheji hai ab ye wali teesri dekho maine apne lund ke upper se chamdi hata di....dekho kitna lal supada hai mera......kala lund mere badi badi jhaant apko pasand aaya kiya.....


Sanam hafte hue dekhne lagi pura jism paseene se bhig gaya........

Suresh.....ab mob thoda door le jake kursi par beth kar ya apne pair chode kar ke apni chut ka photo bhejo.
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Yaha thoda wohi na nukur hota raha......

Suresh..yar mai kon sa apki surat dekhne ko kah raha ho.....

Bus mujhe chut ka photo to chahye nasa dekho to mazhabi ladki ki kuwari rus se bhigi chut kaise hoti hai ..
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Ha ye apke liye mushkil hai...mera lund apki chut mai jane ko.macha raha hai.....

Accha mai apni shakal na dekhta na ap apni shakal dekhao ......

Agar phir bhi apko koi dar hai to ap hijab niqab pahan lo....


Mai video call karta ho ap bus mob ko is trah samne rakhna ki apki chut apke chuchi apka pet navel nazar aaye mai mutt apke jism.ko dekh kar marna chahata ho....
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lajawab update
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#51
Yaha kafi mazhammat video call na karne ki kahti rahi par suresh na mana aur usne call kar di....

Halaki jadi call recive bbi kari sanam ne aur mob ka camera kuch door kara jiss uska nanga jism na dekhe .....

Yaha sanam sharma to bahot rahi thi laj sharam se pani pani hone lagi....

Par suresh kafi seduce baat karta hai aur sanam aakhir man jati hai....

Sanam ki bbi to bhari jawani thi aaj pahli bar koi mila tha na usne sanam ki shakal dekhi na suresh ne bus woh pahli bar seduce ki seema par ja rahe the.....


S...ab ap thoda apne khubsurat chuchi dekhao bhale ap chehra na dekhao......aur ho sake mon mai mere mutt marte hue lund ko bbi dekhti jao.....sharam aaye to niqab pahan lo.....

Thodi iltiza karne ke bad sanam ne badi hoshiyari se mob ko kuch niche is trah se rakha ki niche wale part ki chuchi ab suresh ko nazar aane lagi....

Suresh chikh pada mare khushi ke ye Khushi sanam ko badi acchi lagi

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S....haiiiii haiiiiiiii mar jawa.....sach mai Ahhhhhhh kiya chuchi hai tere.....ahhhhh mera lund pagal ho raha hai.....haiiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiiii ohhhhhhh dekhne mai to aisa lagta hai kisi ne dabayi hi nahi ise ahhhhhh kitni gol sakht mulayam jaise hai ....

Ha Sahi hai na tu to kuwari hai .....haiiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiiii

Thoda camera ka rukh seeda kar ke pet ke samne la thoda samne se to dekha de......

Ye sun kar thoda sharma kar uski awaz mai jo khushi thi use dekh kar camera ka angle pet ki traf le aayi aur dhayn de rahi thi uska chehra nazar na aaye ....

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Suresh....mar dal mar dala is lund ko tod dala aise chuchi ahhhj maine aaj tak nahi dekhi....ahhhhhhhh qayamat aaj aake rahegiiiiiiii

Sanam khush hone lagi.....apne tarif aaj apne jism ki kisi aur se sun kar ......

S....ohhh mere jaan mere sanam mere jane sanam ahhhh hath kyo rakh diya hata naa.......haiiiiiiiiiiii mera lund phata ja raha hai


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Zara ek nipple khich kae dekha na ki kitna lamba hai....haiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiiii tere hone wale pati ki to lottery nikal gayiiiiiiiiii haiiiii haiii ohhhhhh tujhe ghodi bana kar sala khub chodega ......


Zara khich na apna nipple ...


Sanam full masti mai to thi hi aur use tadpane ke niyat se apna nipple khicha....


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Suresh....loda fataaaa re meraaaaa lodaaaa fata mera ........

Mar dala haiiiii haiiiiiiii aisa gazab ka husn haiiiiii mera bus chale to mon mai gus kar tera nipple kha jaooooooooo kiya jandar mal hai tu........


Ab itna kar hi tune diya hai to itna ahsan aur kar de apni chut gaand ka ched ....haiiiii chut dekha de.....

Sanam....Ahhhhhhh ab mere pakizgi ka imtihan aur na lo......mere halat kharab ho rahi hai....tumne ye kiya kar diyaaaaa mera jism shola ban raha hai.....Ahhhhhhh plzzzz aisa ab na karwao.......


Suresh kaha manne wala tha woh use bharose mai to le liya tha......aur wohi kuch der sanam ke nakhre utha kar aakhir kaise bhi mana liya.....bus sanam ko ye pata tha samne wala mera chehra nahi dekh raha hai ....

Aur ek din use apne pati ke same nanga hona hi hai ....to suresh ko jo use Sahi sex sekha ya pada raha tha uska haq banta tha ki woh ye kar de....

Aur sanam ne mob aise rakha ki woh aakhir sharmagah dekh le.....


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Sanam ne apni chut ko chipaya aur ungli se gili chut ko upper se niche sahlane lagi......

Ab ye to suresh ke liye mano kisi ne uske sir par pahad tod diya ho.....


Woh lund ko dabana chhod diya agar woh daba deta to sara mal niakl jata.....lund sach mai fata jane laga....suresh ki bolti band ho gayi.....

Woh kuch der bus dekhta hi raha.....sanam ko bhi uski halat ka andaza dekh kar maza aane laga.....


Yaha ab sanam ki thodi aur shararat karne ka man kara.....aur usne ab khud se taange upper jaise hi uthayi to gaand ka ched chut ka pura bhag saaf dekha...


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Suresh.....maaa chud gayi mere ....maa ka bhosda bana dala mujhe loda khatam ho gaya ....mai to gayaaaa faad ke tune mere rakh di....aise chut gaand tum mazhabi ladkiyo ka hi hota hai ......itni saaf chikni chut tum mazhabi ladki hi rakh sakte ho....


Mera bus chale mai ud kar aa jao haiiiiii sanam ab itna mere liye kar diya hai to thoda chut cheer kar lalima andar ki dekha de......plzzzz ab mana na karna .


Tujhe mere lund ki kasam.....

Uski ye baat sunkar sanam has padi....aur ab bina nakhre kare apni ungli se chut ko chir kar thoda andar na nazara dekhaya ...


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Iski maa ki kuwari chut maro....haiiiiiiii kash mai tere pass hota to tere is lalima ko aone zaban dal kar chat jata ....

Sanam.....haiiiiii kitne gande ho ap koj bhala aise gandi cheez ko chumta hai kiya ya zban dalta hai bhala.....

S....haiiii haiiiiii tujhe kiyaaa pata chut ko chatwane mai chusane mai ladkiyo ko kitna maza aata hai......tere jism ko kisi ne bhoga nahi to tujhe kiyaaaa pata.......


Lund chut mai jata hai gaand mai bhi jata hai muh mai bhi jata hai ....

Aise hi zaban se pure jism ka rus chata jata hai chut chati jati hai..

Aur tere jaise haseena ki gaand bhi chati jati hai ye doodh piye jate hai ....tere gulabi honto ko bhi chusa jata hai....

Aise hi ladki iska badla ladke ka lund chus kar deti hai poto ko muh mai bharkar deti hai...
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.ab thoda sa apne chuttad dekha de bus ab mera mal nikalne wala hai.....ye mal agar tere chut mai jata to tujhe maa bana deta .......


Ab sanam ne apni position change kar ke aakhir bar ganad ka gora ched chut ke sath aur hips ka kuch hissa dekha diya.....

Aur uski ek ek baat note bhi karti ja rahi thi.....

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Ab ye sean dekh kar suresh se ruka nahi gaya.....aur woh mutt marna shurh kar deta hai..aur sath mai kahta hai....


Agar tu apne pati ko chut de dena ...par apne is yaar ke liye ye gaand chhod dena ....kiya pata koi aisa din aaye ki mai tere gaand mar sako.


Chut to tu marne nahi degiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Tab sanam ne pahli bar kisi lund se safed maal nilakta hau dekha par mob mai mal.ka andaza nahi laga payi.


Asal mai yaha 10 percent battery rah gayi thi use charge nahi kara ....khud sanam yaha charge ho gayi thi .....


Woh to thunda ho gaya .....mob bhi band ho gaya...lakin sanam ab kiya kare......

Aur aaj raat mob par gair mard ko lund dekh kar woh seduce hue dusri traf subah saman school jake nandu se live seduce hue ....

Ab yahi dekhna hai ki kon si bahan apni seal kis se tudwati hai .......

Kis khushnaseeb ka lund chut mai pahle jayega ......sanam aur saman ek hi kashti ka sahara le liya ...

Par uski maa bhi shabana bhi thi abhi tak uske pati ke ilawa kisi ne use choda nahi.......


Ab dekho yaha tak badi mahanat se likhi hue kahani pasand aati hai ya mahi ......
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Story abhi tak achi h par sanam or saman name to thik kro kuch feel nhi aara
Shabana ka seen dalo
Naam Aese hone chahiye jisko pdhke acha lage ye sanam or saman ache nhi h name dost
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#53
Best...
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#54
Bahut badhiya update
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#55
super excellent story! Very very nice writings! Just awesome and amazing build up! clps clps clps
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#56
such mein ek garam,romanchak aur kamuk kahaani hain ye! ekdom faddu,lajawab, jabardast aur fataka update! ekdom kamaal tharika se likha is kahaani ko yaar,
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#57
Zabardast yourock
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#58
Super excellent and extremely exciting update
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#59
Ab yaha thoda mai is kahani ke main point kuch likhta ho ...jisse kahani aur zyada real lage ....

Jaise mai cmmt ka reply deta ho par kabhi kabhi nahi bhi de pata ho ...

Yaha saman aur sanam nam change karne ko kaha ...lagega to change kar donga....

Ye kuch real kahani jaise 2 sister ki hai ....ab iska real point ye hai ki mere area mai 2 sister thi ....

Jo kafi mazhabi pariwar se belong karti thi unke 2 bhai bhi the ....

Dono bhai apne baap ki trah kattar mazhabi bhi the ....ye dono bhai in 2 bahno par nazar rakhte the.....

Yaha tak ghar ghar se school ya collage ....yaha tak ki woh dono ladkiya apne teris par bhi nahi jati ....bahot daba kar rakha jata tha ...

Tab ye dono ladki pata nahi kaise ek sath bhag gayi aur kisi ko vishwash hi nahi ye ladkiya aisa kuch kar sakti hai ...

Hamare area ke logo ne sach mai in dono bahano ka chehra tak nahi dekha ....itni pabandi ke bad bhi dono ghar se bhag gayi ....

Aur aaj tak pata nahi ....mohalle mai apni izzat jate dekh unka pariwar waha se south kisi city mai chala gaya ....

Ha bada ladka isi area mai hai ....aur nam saman aur sanam dono hi hai .....ye ab tak ab bhi kam se kam mujhe vishwash nahi hai aise ladkiya shayad zyada ghar ki sakht pabandi ke chalte pata nahi kaisa faisla kara dono ne .


Par woh 2 ladke jo is area ke bhi nahi the ...kaise inka chakkar chala .....

Wohi maine socha ki kyo na ye story aise 2 ladkiyo ki likho ....

Aur apne writing skill se maine likhna shuru kara....par ye jo mai likh raha ho ...ye thoda diffrent hi likhonga....

Aise 2 paysi dabi hue apne ghar mai qaid jaise ladki ki kahani jise padte time sab ko yahi lage ki ye sachi kahani hai ...

Rahi shabana ki baat woh bhi kahi na kahi apni betiyo ki trah banda banda sa feel karti hongi ....abhi shabana ka maine socha nahi .....

Kintu ab jo next update donga jisse reder ko lage ye koi fantacy adult kahani nahi ....ye real hi hai ....

Aur aisa ho sakta hai aaj ke time mai.....aur zyada dawab mai rahne wali ladkiya kuch galat harkat kar sakti hai....

Isiliye ladkiyo ko na zyada azadi do na zyada qaid jaisa jeevan.

Balance life hi rakho.....to ye kahani wohi sab darshati hai ....

To aaj is update ko likhta ho to ap ise real samjh kar apne apne lund khada rakhe ......koshish karonga ap logo ke lund se pani nikal do......
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Ekdum lajawab update, superb! Outstanding writing
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