[Alex67]

Loinking bhai update dehte raho jabhi to maza aata story me aur mere dost ek story aisi likho maa beti pe threesome

[Alex67]

Agree with you....Add more law class male character.

Tume kiska psnd hai

[lionkingback7669]

Agree with you....Add more law class male character.

Mere max kahani chalte chalte isi karan band ho jayi ya plot se utar jati hai iska karan ye ki reder ka pressure hota hai kahani change kar de.....

To jaha tak maine ye kahani end karne ki sochi hai waha tak chalne de....nam iska hawak ki bhukh  hai to something aage kuch socha hi hai maine ....

To thoda patient rakhe ...aur jaise chal rahi hai chalne de immotion bhi hai dhoka bhi hai wafa  bhi hai to kahani ko itna na kare ke mai ise kharab kar do

[lionkingback7669]

Mere kuch block buster kahani jo kharab hue isi pressure mai ki reder sabar na kar pate unko woh sab chahiye hota hai jo aage maine socha ya soch kar likhne ki try kara ....

Waise mai low class logo se hi sex karata ho jaisa isme ....

Shazia khiona hai kharab hue.....bedardi balam kharab hue .
.

Nand devrani nazbeen mahanz ki . . aur bhi shandar kahani sab kharab hue ....

Ye kahani maine long nahi sochi ....bus thoda sath chahiye ....agar phir se jaldnbazi hue to ye kahani maine band kari to shayad ab lot na pao xoosipy par ya mujhe dubara interfaith lover par jana pad sakta hai .....

[Alex67]

Mere kuch block buster kahani jo kharab hue isi pressure mai ki reder sabar na kar pate unko woh sab chahiye hota hai jo aage maine socha ya soch kar likhne ki try kara ....

Waise mai low class logo se hi sex karata  ho jaisa isme ....

Shazia khiona hai kharab hue.....bedardi balam kharab hue .
.

Nand devrani nazbeen mahanz ki . . aur bhi shandar kahani sab kharab hue ....

Ye kahani maine long nahi sochi ....bus thoda sath chahiye ....agar phir se jaldnbazi hue to ye kahani maine band kari to shayad ab lot na pao xoosipy par ya mujhe dubara interfaith lover par jana pad sakta hai .....

Baat to sahi apki par interfaith lovers benn ho gai h india me

[Poojarani____]

Areee nahi ish fourum par koi bhi aisa writer nahi hai jo itne jaldi update deta hai

Mujhe khushi hai ki aap itne jaldi update de rahe ho
Well done

[Fuckstar]

Jab chut ke andar lal ram ka mal nikla to lala ne kuch aisa kara jise afreen ne socha bhi nahi tha...

Lal ram chut ko pair choda kar dekhne laga usme se afreen aur lal ram ka mal bahar nikal raha tha

Bhai aapne lala ram or afreen ki pehli chudaai to dikhaai hi nahi

[lionkingback7669]

Bhai aapne lala ram or afreen ki pehli chudaai to dikhaai hi nahi

Mere to samjh nahi aa raha hai lala ram ka sex shop par dekhaya tha ...ha waha kuch real feel jaisa karne ke liye sex jaldi nipta diya tha .....uske bad afreen saman leke ghar aayi ...aur usi din bhiku ke sath naz afreen ke pass gahi thi aur bich mai kuch aisa hua ki khet mai us pagal ko seduce ke chakkar mai sex kar diya

[lionkingback7669]

Areee nahi ish fourum par koi bhi aisa writer nahi hai jo itne jaldi update deta hai

Mujhe khushi hai ki aap itne jaldi update de rahe ho
Well done

Mera nazbeen bahak gayi se is story tak daba kar update deta ho par jab kahani reder ke karan unki wish puri karne ke chakkar mai kahani bigad jati hai tab mai gayab ho jata ho

[Fuckstar]

Mera nazbeen bahak gayi se is story tak daba kar update deta ho par jab kahani reder ke karan unki wish puri karne ke chakkar mai kahani bigad jati hai tab mai gayab ho jata ho

Bhai story aapki to wish bhi apni hi puri kro bas

[Poojarani____]

Mera nazbeen bahak gayi se is story tak daba kar update deta ho par jab kahani reder ke karan unki wish puri karne ke chakkar mai kahani bigad jati hai tab mai gayab ho jata ho

Oh sake to unki request kisi dusri story mein puri karna lekin agar aapko lagta hai ki aapne jo socha hai aur story le liye set kiya hai aage ki kahani ko to aap wahi likhiye jo aapke dimag mein chal raha hai aap jaise bhi likhoge hum readers ko padhne mein maja aayenga

[Faizi610]

Waiting to update

[abcturbine]

You are very skillful writer....
Keep going as planned....
Missing your writings so much....

[Faizi610]

Update

[Samit_bhai]

Aapko nayi kahani ke jo idea diye pls uspe gaur kare 

I think ye wali ko yahin oe khatam kar deni chahiye nahi yo monotonous ho jayega..

[lionkingback7669]

Aapko nayi kahani ke jo idea diye pls uspe gaur kare 

I think ye wali ko yahin oe khatam kar deni chahiye nahi yo monotonous ho jayega..

Yes mai zaroor karonga

[lionkingback7669]

Thoda busy hone ka karan likh na paya abhi jaha tak ye kahani sochi hai waha tak aaj se update likhonga

[lionkingback7669]

Oh sake to unki request kisi dusri story mein puri karna lekin agar aapko lagta hai ki aapne jo socha hai aur story le liye set kiya hai aage ki kahani ko to aap wahi likhiye jo aapke dimag mein chal raha hai aap jaise bhi likhoge hum readers ko padhne mein maja aayenga

Yes isme maine thoda immotion accident likha hai jo ab aage likhna shuru karonga aur kismat kiya achanak se change karta hai wohi is kahani ka main plot hai

[lionkingback7669]

You are very skillful writer....
Keep going as planned....
Missing your writings so much....

Dhanyawad bhai par mai kahani ko reder ki wish karne ke chakkar mai ya unke kahane par mere kahani khud hi flop kar deta ho isiliye maine 2 din ka gape liya ...

Aur jo socha hai wohi likhonga

[Faizi610]

Aj bhi update nahi aaya