15-11-2022, 09:00 AM
It was awesome.... Just wow....but what happened with uncle in 1st night???¿?
Adultery Dhika - An Innocent Angel
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15-11-2022, 09:00 AM
It was awesome.... Just wow....but what happened with uncle in 1st night???¿?
15-11-2022, 09:08 AM
What an awesome update. Now there is a suspense about what happened between dhika and uncle 2 days ago
15-11-2022, 01:23 PM
Kept checking updates every hour after 8 pm...finally got lucky at 3 am!! Awesome update. Loved the part between Dhika and twins..waiting for her to go to twins for 'video game'
15-11-2022, 06:11 PM
Marvellous.....
Simply outstanding.... Densely erotic.....
15-11-2022, 06:37 PM
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Awesome... Also couldn't stop smiling at avatar reference
15-11-2022, 07:52 PM
15-11-2022, 11:14 PM
It is an awesome update bro ,. Really a fantastic writing, you are the best
16-11-2022, 09:08 AM
Super update bro...
But please share the part with uncle... The suspense is unbearable..
16-11-2022, 11:32 AM
Much awaited hot update.... But you see there's one problem with this episode... It's like no one is caring much to talk on how hot or what all phases did Dhikha went through just bcoz you have put a suspense story with uncle. Obviously it's an episode worth story and I'm expecting it as next update where uncle share the backstory of uncle and aunty. Aftermath episode will be just the thought going in Dhikha's mind.
Now Dhikha's mind guilt is cloud with events happening around and she's unknowingly loving the exhibitionist role with twins. Dhikha is now more open with Raj, so it can get more hotter in every visit of Raj and Sharmi. Everyone normally waited for episode with twins which got deplayed and needed to wait how Dhikha gonna settle down the owes. I found funny with the old plumber and his nephew's name. And they are going to be back when Dhikha is having 3 days leave... So.........????
17-11-2022, 08:20 PM
Next update when bro??
19-11-2022, 12:00 AM
We are truly appreciate you for the best romantic story line updates wonderful fiction story keep rocking like this
19-11-2022, 02:20 AM
Really loved the update brother..its such a pleasure reading this story, to be in the world of your story.. Hats off..really like the uncles suspense part..but i observe from last few episodes almost 3/4 part of story is with raj and sherni with full details..also the part where uncle and twins Or other characters are getting shorter and scenes are cut randomly..is other characters role will increase in future part?..eagerly waiting for next update with full of action.. Thank you
19-11-2022, 11:06 AM
The last few updates I been feeling like it's leaving me hanging in d middle , I couldn't get a complete feeling I was getting with each update in d beginning . Not sure bcs u r trying to keep it exciting with aftermath n present kinda updates or u trying to bring in different characters al in a single update but I been missing a complete feel with d updates .
But the story is been moving fine with dhika exploring her inner desires n coming out of the shell keep up d good work waiting for an other thrill episode
19-11-2022, 11:26 AM
Super eroticaaaaaaa
19-11-2022, 01:52 PM
(19-11-2022, 02:20 AM)Sush44 Wrote: Really loved the update brother..its such a pleasure reading this story, to be in the world of your story.. Hats off..really like the uncles suspense part..but i observe from last few episodes almost 3/4 part of story is with raj and sherni with full details..also the part where uncle and twins Or other characters are getting shorter and scenes are cut randomly..is other characters role will increase in future part?..eagerly waiting for next update with full of action.. Thank you Raj and Sharmi are like the paper/saw-dust that we ignite before building the campfire. Without it, the wood won't catch fire.
19-11-2022, 01:55 PM
(19-11-2022, 11:06 AM)hotmariner1512 Wrote: The last few updates I been feeling like it's leaving me hanging in d middle , I couldn't get a complete feeling I was getting with each update in d beginning . Not sure bcs u r trying to keep it exciting with aftermath n present kinda updates or u trying to bring in different characters al in a single update but I been missing a complete feel with d updates . Hang in there buddy. I feel you too. Over couple of last few updates, even I was not getting proper mood to write them, but they are necessary for what I am planning...
19-11-2022, 02:19 PM
(19-11-2022, 01:55 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote: Hang in there buddy. I feel you too. I know it starts as a stress buster and later it becomes a stress to develop each n every character in d long story , I know u wil make it up in d later updates since I been reading from d beginning I know that u can , but I was thinkin I maybe felein like that bcs I was reading the story after a gap of few days but I'm happy that I'm stil catching ur wavelength too
19-11-2022, 02:46 PM
bro, we are eagerly waiting for next updates...
20-11-2022, 04:04 AM
Awesomestt
20-11-2022, 08:53 AM
Kudos to this episode!! It was a absolute erotica. Mind blowing!! I did not imagine it would end the way you have narrated !! 100/100 . Splendidly written! amazing!!
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