(19-08-2021, 08:51 PM)themaskeditor Wrote: BTW I love the character and exploits of suchita. Also being your first story you have nailed it.
(22-09-2021, 08:13 PM)KASHIKA Wrote: All time greatest story and all time best writer[quote pid='3731600' dateline='1632321817']
Salute to your writing skills
Aaj maine ye story chalu hone ke bad sab updates pdhe and its awesome experience
I think professor das is one of the best ans stable character you build him so nicely aisa lagta he he is vilain of this story because he have moto , aim , past , and sabse badi bat sundar sanskari ladkiyo ke prati hawas aur nafrat
I think iss phase me NAMRATA ka character khul raha he aisa jara bhi nahi lag raha ki namrta ko ham 2 years se padh rahe he har update me vo new lagti he aur naya flavour lati he other stories me ab tak main character chud kar use kya kya nahi banaya jata par yahi to ap tarif ke hakdar bante he joh jan ap namrta ke writing me lagate ho voh chij is story ka heart he
Ab age lagta he das ke liye rasta saf he but we all know namrta is mysterious character so das ko itna bhi easy nahi jayega
And appreciation for kinjal , ek aisa character joh vilain ko hame imagine karne me madat karta he ek aisa hatiyar jise das ka kamina pn hame imagine hota he
Ab age ka intazar he cabin scene , namrta ki situation , aur das ka kamina pan on top clp);
(27-09-2021, 01:48 PM)KASHIKA Wrote: Once again fantastic , great , masterpiece update i think is update se puri story set ho chuki he way of seduction next level , writing next level kuch points he
1) ye namrta ka first experience tha apke writing se saf pata chalta he so i am not expecting any twist in it
2) das he namrta ka character develope karne vala he
3) I think next mention place vahi place he i mean vo khandar
4) dance ka theme imp role play ksrega because vahi reason se namrta das ko karib ane de rahi he varna namrta jesi sanskari ladki khud ko aesa chune nahi degi
Aur apke question ka answer
I think namrta ka ye pehla experience tha seduction ka jo uske sath indirectly huva agar directly hota to vo aisa reaction nahi deti magar use lag raha he das ne uske sath anjane me ye sab kiya aur khud ke andar ke hawas ki pehchan se namrta ko laga agr mene short dress pehna hota to kya hota that's y namrta ka vo expression tha
Waiting for next update game on
(01-12-2021, 01:39 PM)amisssa38 Wrote: Isko aur erotic banaiye na..namrat ki gand ki khusboo describe karte huye uski gand ke ched ke bare mein bhi vistar se btiye
(16-12-2021, 04:38 PM)amisssa38 Wrote: aaap itna accha likhte ho. main kabhi soch bhi nhi sakti. Main manrata aur Suchita ki kahani mein apne aap ko dhoondhne lagi..meri beti abhi utni badi nhi hai teens mein hai..lekin main mahsoos kar rahi thi ki kabhi aisa bhi ho saktahai
(01-06-2022, 08:52 AM)Simran671 Wrote: Sir mai simran apki fan ho bohat badi pls kya hum baat kar sakte hai pls hangout pe pls sir pls meri Id - apko send ki hai
(07-11-2022, 11:34 AM)imles4le Wrote: [quote pid='3731600' dateline='1632321817']
Sacch me....bahut khujli ho rahi hai mere bur me....mere saath bhi Aisa hi college me hua THA jab mere PT Sir ne mere gaaand....auuur chuchio ko parade ke bahane mere Charo globes ko dabane laga tha.....aurrr ek baar to....
(11-04-2023, 02:36 AM)imles4le Wrote: college me chae male teacher ho ya female teacher pr unke sath masti krne ka alag hi mja h mene apni life ki 1st chut apni teacher ki hi li
(11-04-2023, 07:18 AM)wildarman Wrote: Ohhhhhh..... Baaaaadmassss tune Apne teacher ki hi chut chod di... Kyaaaa Abhi bhi uske sath maje leta hai re baaadmass.... Saach batana WO tujhe fasai thi.... Yaa tune use....tab tu kitne saal ka tha.... Aaaaur WO teacher kitne saal ki thi....
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