01-11-2022, 12:00 AM
Superb aftermath
Adultery Dhika - An Innocent Angel
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01-11-2022, 12:00 AM
Superb aftermath
01-11-2022, 02:31 AM
There was a hint for this in the bigger update....where she wonders about how Leo saw her. I knew it would come later. Excited to know about how the next day with twins would be. Rooting for Bobby
01-11-2022, 02:43 PM
Hope u give a big update next time
01-11-2022, 04:18 PM
(28-10-2022, 04:33 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote: So far...
01-11-2022, 06:09 PM
03-11-2022, 12:53 AM
I personally don't like n don't want Leo character in tis unique script
03-11-2022, 04:54 PM
Good going brother... Give more chance to Chotu and Uncle . They are the pillars of this story. Good writing update more?
03-11-2022, 06:54 PM
Characters view point excluding the lust they felt on Dhikha
Chottu : Naive Kid like behaviour who doesn't know much and treats Dhikha as Sister Twins : Overdemanding but puts on limits since Dhikha is their teacher Uncle : Sees Dhikha as Daughter Raj : sees Dhikha as a shy, bit reserved/ conservative friend of his wife Leo: only as his colleague's wife who have kid Stranger: Admirers., but not sure on the view point Theses are the characters relationship limitations towards Dhikha i felt which slowly melting down Anyone agree or disagree, please comment
04-11-2022, 12:40 AM
04-11-2022, 12:44 AM
05-11-2022, 12:30 AM
Take your time and give us only mega update.
05-11-2022, 06:15 PM
Updates please bro
06-11-2022, 11:10 PM
Dear Readers...
No update this weekend. Working on something big. Will post next week. Happy Reading...
06-11-2022, 11:25 PM
Very good
06-11-2022, 11:40 PM
(03-11-2022, 12:53 AM)kanikaakochr Wrote: I personally don't like n don't want Leo character in tis unique script The script is unique because Leo too is part of it. If I remove Leo for you, teens for one, couples for one and Uncle for one, then it will be just Dhika and her ten fingers... Try and have an open mind to see the broad picture.
06-11-2022, 11:44 PM
Will SURELY waiting for next big thing.. happy happy.. brother...
Take care
06-11-2022, 11:45 PM
(03-11-2022, 06:54 PM)listener098 Wrote: Characters view point excluding the lust they felt on Dhikha Wonderful comprehension on the characters. Stranger's view point - what do you guess it would be like.
07-11-2022, 08:04 AM
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Hope it will give immense satisfaction Nd thriller experience to dhinka Nd us also .
Waiting for next week... countdown starts...7..6..5..4...
07-11-2022, 09:14 AM
(06-11-2022, 11:45 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote: Wonderful comprehension on the characters. Stranger's character is not much reviled.. And to my view point the uncertainty of stranger give some excitement. Now if we see for chottu and twins their character is almost reviled and now waiting for the inevitable to happen and how it's gonna happen. For uncle we have a backstory to tell For Raj & Sharmi, something cooking for sure but their plan involves John Leo may feel additional character along with others but he's the only person whom Dhikha felt crush and larger bulge. Stranger could be a new person or anyone among the existing character who have a fantasy over Dhikha which cannot be expressed directly for now. In case of existing character, Raj suits more as the stranger than anyone else
07-11-2022, 03:37 PM
(07-11-2022, 09:14 AM)listener098 Wrote: Stranger's character is not much reviled.. And to my view point the uncertainty of stranger give some excitement. Now if we see for chottu and twins their character is almost reviled and now waiting for the inevitable to happen and how it's gonna happen. Hahaha.... nice deductions. Waiting for the inevitable huh !... Who do you think would be the first ? Send your thoughts in a PM. Let it not be any spoilers for others. Happy Reading... |
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