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(26-10-2022, 02:47 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: First of all Wish You A Very Happy and prosperous happy Diwali Brother.
And Congratulations For 4 Lakhs + Views.   
(26-10-2022, 03:08 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: What a sensational erotic update.Amruta ki halat kya behatarin varnan kiya hain aapne bahot hi lajawab.Aur kya fabalous intro diya hain new character ekta ka.Ekta aur Savla kya to encounter ke bare main kya kahoon wah wah.Aur farsh pe baith ke chodne wala scene to bahot behatarin tha.Aur unki conversation main Namrata ka jikra ahhaha ahaa aur iska matlab hain namrata abhi tak savla ke hath to nahi lagi hain abhi tak.Aur udhar amruta ye soch rahi hain ke kya ritesh mujhe raga,savla jaise sukh de sakta hain kya??iska matlab amruta ne abhi tak kinky hardcore sex enjoy nahi kiya hain.
Aur aapne kya twist diya hain end main wah wah.Sanjay prakash Mahajan ka beta hain aur suchita uski Bahu aur kuch toh hua past main jiski wajah se prakash ne Sanjay aur suchita ko apni jindgi se nikal diya tha aur uska reason to suchita ka charitra hi hain.Ab dekhna interesting hoga ke aage kya hota hain???Gafur ka plan to success hua hain Ab ye dekhna hoga ke lifafe main letter amruta ko kisne diya hain??gafur ya raga aur kisi aur ne??kisko apni kamvasana amruta ke andar leke mitani hain??
Aur abhi tak Pratap ki beti shanya ka bhi jikra nahi aaya pratak ke munh se????
Waiting for next series eagerly.
Yess brother ...thank you for your wishes .....
You are one of the best reader ...boht time se aap meri dono kahaniyo ko follow kar rahe ho and i am glad aap story me likhe hidden things and hints ko capture kar lete ho ...aise he support karte rehna 
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(27-10-2022, 08:31 AM)Explorer@life Wrote: Absolute carnage in last episode..
Some twist and turn makes story...Very very intersting..
New character of Ekta Makes story Sensual...
Savla ki kaam Puri hui...that's amazing..
Ekta aur Savla Ka Seduction or 1st encounter will be epic..
Salva ne kese Seduce kiya Ekta ko...
It will be fantastic..
Raga ke boss ko bhi Chance Dena thoda chahiye...
Usne Ghar me Secretly Dr..Sahiba ke Roop ke darshan kiye the...
DCP.. Mishra is also in the Queue...
Lots of possibilities in the story...
Suchita ka character New SENSUALITY layega story me...
Endless possibilities to develop storyline...
What an amazing Writing...@royalkingfire bhai..
Wishes that new Chapter update will be come soon..
It's unbearable to know that what turn this story will make...
Waiting eagerly for update..
Once again clap for this greatest story...
(27-10-2022, 08:33 AM)Explorer@life Wrote: And Happy New Year to you and All family members..
Hope in this vacation time..you will cherish happy Moments with them..
And hopefully We will get New big update soon..
Thank you brother for your best wishes....
Yesss endless possibilities are there abb ye aap sab pe bhi nirbhar karta hain ki aapko kya dekhna hain aage ke chapter main , aap sabhi ke suggestions ka swagat hain .
And brother aap ek best reader ho jo motivate karte ho ek writer ko uske kam ke prati so hatts off to you .
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(27-10-2022, 09:26 AM)Vik88 Wrote: Absolutely super sensational and super excellent update! Awesome and mind blowing writings! 
(27-10-2022, 09:37 AM)Aliza Khanum Wrote: ekdom damaka aur faddu kahaani, bahut hi shandar likha, lajawab aur mast narrations, jabardast theme, 
(27-10-2022, 12:23 PM)Sangeeta Saha Wrote: zabardast, lajawab aur ekdom fataka update! bahut bahut mast writings! Fantastic story! 
(27-10-2022, 12:42 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Absolutely sensational....
(27-10-2022, 10:43 PM)Aditya.ekmitr Wrote: Very Well narrated with perfect situations
Thank you all of you ....your one comment and responses give me a inner peace that joh bhi main kar raha hu voh apko pasand aa raha hain ...
Keep supporting...
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(27-10-2022, 01:18 AM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Royal brother can't send you private message you have exhausted private message limit.please check it down.
(27-10-2022, 08:23 AM)Explorer@life Wrote: Yes..that issue has been from last 2 days...
Sorry ...but now it's solved ...
Aap sab aapke suggestions...ideas apki fantasy chapter 2 ke liye mujhe personally bhej sakte ho ya fir yaha pe comments kar sakte ho .
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kab tak newa update aye ga??
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(30-10-2022, 12:33 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Yess brother ...thank you for your wishes .....
You are one of the best reader ...boht time se aap meri dono kahaniyo ko follow kar rahe ho and i am glad aap story me likhe hidden things and hints ko capture kar lete ho ...aise he support karte rehna
I will always support you brother,tum ek behatarin writer ho aur main hamesha tumhari story ka update 2-3 baar padta hoon tabhi sab details samaz aate hain.bahot Kam writers hain jo itne details ke sath story likhte hain.keep it up,Stay safe keep rocking.
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(30-10-2022, 12:45 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Sorry ...but now it's solved ...
Aap sab aapke suggestions...ideas apki fantasy chapter 2 ke liye mujhe personally bhej sakte ho ya fir yaha pe comments kar sakte ho .
Sent you private message for review and suggestions check it out.
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(30-10-2022, 11:27 AM)Explorer@life Wrote: Waiting another mega update from grand new chapter of your creation..
Seduction..SENSUALITY..and Slow burning hot moments..it is speciality of your writing..
Can't wait to see what will happen on next updates..
Hope eklta and salvla ka backdrop story will come in future..
Raga ke boss ke sath kuch very erotic moments will be cherry on the top for Dr.. Amruta...
I wish suchita ke mature character ki jagah par Uska older version which is like 25- 32 age time ki seduction story dekhane ko mile...
Older female character will reduce interest of story..
Character like whose age below 30 like Namrata, Dr.. Amruta..Aur Ekta will set fantastic tempo for story..
Hope we will get surprise character introduction like baba or Beggar character will be do more hotness and sensuality in story...
Very eagar to see savla-Raga's boss and Dr.amruta 's seductive encounter...
As per your style... Expecting twist and turns and surprises and super erotic pictures and GIF...
Hopefully we will get Weekend surprise or Update regrading next chapter From You.. brother
You mean younger version Suchita right??haa wo to aayega iss story main jab suchita ki backstory aayegi.kyun use mahajan ne ghar se nikala tab iss cheez ka khulasa hoga.begger ka character unrealistic lagega abhi ke scenario main.Haa I and agree with your point that younger female characters are more interesting than elder one.
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Thank you Dear Royalkingfire Bhai Generous response..
Waiting for another cracking update..
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(30-10-2022, 02:19 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: You mean younger version Suchita right??haa wo to aayega iss story main jab suchita ki backstory aayegi.kyun use mahajan ne ghar se nikala tab iss cheez ka khulasa hoga.begger ka character unrealistic lagega abhi ke scenario main.Haa I and agree with your point that younger female characters are more interesting than elder one.
Yes.. brother..
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Bhai update kab doge ab...?
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(30-10-2022, 12:45 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Sorry ...but now it's solved ...
Aap sab aapke suggestions...ideas apki fantasy chapter 2 ke liye mujhe personally bhej sakte ho ya fir yaha pe comments kar sakte ho .
Nice but if it's a blackmailer then again a routine one...unknown seduction you portrayed is best. Knowingly and by blackmail if that happens as contract...enthusiasm will be decreased please consider my words and u can build in thatway as per ur writing skills. Thanks.
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Waiting for new chapter to began with Bang Bang erotica...
Waiting.....
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Bhai v can not wait pls upload as soon as possible
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Hope to see update announcement soon brother..
Waiting for update
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Wonderful story! Very very exciting and erotic writings!
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Really great update brother..muze to lag raha hai apki dono kahani aage jake link hogi.. Aur hame firse hamari first heroin e namrata ke updates milenge.. Finger crossed?
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Waiting for new chapter starting brother..
Eagarly waiting for new start..
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CHAPTER 02 ANNOUNCEMENT
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EXTREMELY THANK YOU FOR YOUR RESPONSE ON CHAPTER 01 OF THIS STORY AND IAM THANKFUL TO EVERYONE FOR SUPPORTING THIS STORY .....
NOW ABB HAM DEKHNE VALE HAIN ISS STORY KA CHAPTER 02 JOH BASICALLY 5 EPISODES KA HOGA AND CHAPTER ONE EK UNSOLVED MYSTERIES KO SOLVED KARNE KI KOSHISH KAREGA ....
MERE PASS ISS CHAPTER KA BASIC PLOT HAIN BUT THIS IS YOUR STORY AUR MAIN APKE LIYE LIKHTA HU SO ..
AAPKE MADAT KI JARURAT HAIN...LIKE..
1) AAPKE DIMAG KI FANTASY JOH APKO UPCOMING CHAPTER MAIN DEKHNE KO PASAND AYEGI .
2) APKE IMAGINATION MAIN KOI SCENE HAIN JOH STORY KE CHARACTERS KO SUITE KARENGE (FOR EXAMPLE :- SEDUCTION IN BATHROOM , SEDUCTION IN ICU )
3) STORY KE MAIN FEMALE CHARACTERS KE LIYE AAP APKE PASAND KE PICS ( SAREE , MARRIED , MATURE) SEND KAR SAKTE HO .
4) APKI REAL FANTASY JOH AMRUTA YA SUCHITA KO SUITE KARE .
SO SUCHITA KA CHARACTER ISS STORY MAIN MENTION HO CHUKA HAIN JOH MAHAJAN PARIVAAR KI BADI BAHU THI YA HAIN USKE RELATED APKO KYA DEKHNE MAIN MAJA AYEGA .
APKE VICHAR , SUGGESTIONS , PICS , PREDICTIONS KA SWAGAT HAIN IT'S YOUR STORY KHUL KE POST KARIYE LIKHIYE , IF YAHA NAHI POSSIBLE TOH PERSONAL MESSAGE KIJIYE .
CHAPTER 2 KA FIRST EPISODE JALD HE AYEGA .
KEEP SUPPORTING......
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