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Misc. Erotica eXBii Erotic Story Contest – 2013 & 2015
Udhar kabir , reshma ke pass pahuch chuka tha ..aur uske do aadmi uske dono hatho ko pakde the, vo nishay si khari thi. Kabir ne apne napak hath se reshma ke pallu ko pakda aur use kheech diya….reshma ne apne aap ko dhakne ki bahut koshish ki..lekin kabir kabir ne apne hath uske unnat vaksh pe rakhte huye use apne se chipka liya…


“ chhoro mujhe ….jalim insaan, yehi hai tumhari asliyat, jiski vajah se tum mujhe pa na sake..aur mere jite ji tum mujhe nahi pa sakte. Chhoro mujhe….” Reshma jor-jor se chillane lagi, aur uski dard bhari aawaj sunke udhar rohan bhi un gurgo se apne aapko chhurane aur reshma ko bachane ki koshish me laga hua tha…


Aur idhar main bhi apne aapko bebas samajh raha tha ,lag raha tha main kaise udd ke reshma ke paas pahuchu aur use is kamine kabir ke chungal se bacha lu. Lekin uske mustande mujhe aise jakre huye the ki main lakh koshisho ke baad bhi unse paar nahi pa raha tha.


Tabhi maine rohan ki aah suni aur ek gurge ne rohan ke chehre pe aisa mukka mara ki uske muh se khun ki dhar bah nikali…reshma bhi apne aapko kabir se alag karne ki bharshak koshish kar rahi thi, ab uske dono gurge use chhor hamare upar hi tut pade the…


“ tor do in salon ki ek –ek haddi…aur khaskar is dulhe raja ko to apang bana kar hi chhorna” kabir apne gurgo ko apna aadesh de raha tha…aur uski pakad reshma pe dhili huyi, aur reshma use dhakka dekar bhagi , lekin uske saari ka pallu , kabir ke hath me hi tha..usne us pallu ko bas pakde rakha aur parat dar parat ..reshma ke angon se saari utarti chali gayi… …kabir ne jaise hi reshma ko is haal me dekha usne apne kadam reshma ki taraf badhaye…reshma, apne aapko bachane ke liye tile ke chhor ki taraf daudi .


Ye dekh mujhe aisa prateet hua jaise reshma kuchh aur soch ke naa bhagi ho tile ki chhor ki or, maine apne hath paav jor jor se chalane suru kar diye un gurgo pe…
Kabir ne tile ke chhor se pehle hi reshma ko dhar dabocha, aur use niche gira ke uske upar chad gaya aur usne uske blose ko apne hatho se noch ke taar taar kar diya ..ab bechari reshma usne neeche dabe huye apne vaksh-sthal ko apne hatho se bharsak dhakne ki koshish kar rahi thi aur kabir, uske hatho ko hathane ki.


Kabir ke gurgo ne rohan ko bedam kar diya tha..lekin reshma ki ye halat dekhkar main jaise pagal ho gaya tha aur main un gurgo ko buri tarah se marte huye , reshma ki taraf bhaga…pata nahi kahan se mere andar itni takat aa gayi thi, maine kabir ko reshma ke upar se ghaseet ke niche kiya aur use marte huye…apne aap hi chilanne laga…


“ teri itni himmat ..ki tu meri reshma ko hath lagaye, main teri jaan le lunga kamine”


“ main aaj tak kebal isliye khamosh tha kyoki vo khus thi….aur tu uski khusiyan chhinana chahta hai, mere jite ji aisa nahi ho sakta ….main maar dunga tujhe” main pagalo ki tarah use pite ja raha tha, mujhe marte dekhkar rohan ko bhi josh aa gaya aur usne bhi un gurgo ko dhona suru kar diya, waise uska chehra khoon se sana hua tha.


Meri baten sunke hakki bakki si apne sine ko hatho me samete reshma vahi khari thi..aur mujhe in sab ki koi parwah nahi thi jaise…..main kabir ko aur gurgo ko bas marte ja raha tha aur pagalo ki tarah bas bole hi ja raha tha.


“ kamine…kya samajh rakha hai, tumne ki tu meri reshma ko hath lagayega aur main chupchap dekhta rahunga…jab tak mere shareer me jaan hai, main aisa hone nahi dunga..jaan le lunga teri”


Main apni dhun me usko maare jar aha tha, is beech uske aadmi van me rakhe talwar aur dusre hathiyar le kar aa gaye aur ek ne mere piche se vaar kiya, aur uska khanjar meri pasli me ghusta chala gaya…maine kabir ko gale se pakad rakha tha, aur hum tile ke kinare hi khare the..maine use jor ka dhakka diya aur vo vaha se fisal ke niche girta chala gaya.


Us gurge ne phir se khanjar nikal ke meri pasli ke andar daal di..mere aankho ke aage andhera chhane laga…


Reshma jor-jor se chikhte huye ro rahi thi…aur goliya chalne ki aawaj suni aur dhondhili aankhon se dekha ki security officer uniform me log aa gaye the, shayad pujari ne call kiya ho…bas itna hi dekh paya tha main…aur meri aankhen band ho chuki thi.
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“ kahan hai doctor….kyon nahi aayega, doctor ka dharam kya hota hai..pahele mareej phir kuchh aur”


Rohan ke papa…ki awaaj mere kauno me padi jab meri aankh khuli, maine apni ankhe kholi to dekha advocate mohit ganguli ,mere samne ek nurse ko daant rahe the…


“ sir..abhi call kiya hai,aa rahe hai..thoda time to lagega aap dhiraj rakhiye” nurse ne samjhane ki bharsak koshish ki.


“ kyu itna bada hospital hai, aur koi doctor nahi hai, yahan jo operation kar payen” vo phir se chilanne lage…


Meri aankhe phir se dhire dhire band hone lagi, main bas unki baten sun sakta tha lekin dekhne ki takat nahi bachi thi.


“ doctor agar mere bête ko kuchh ho gaya to main case kar dunga is hospital pe, aap jante nahi main kaun hu”


“ sir..aap samajhne ki koshish kijiye, doctor saab ke ghar pe bhi kuchh emergency aa gayi hai..aur vo best sugeon hai yahan ke..aap thoda wait kijiye” nurse ne phir samjhane ki koshish ki.


“ sir, aap abhi bahar jayiye…doctor saab aa gaye hai…aap bahar wait Karen” ek dusre doctor ne uncle ko samjhaya.


“ nahi main nahi jaunga…main dekhna chahta hu” uncle ne phir se jor pakdi.


“please..aap bahar jayiye hume hamara kaam karne dijiye” ek bhari bharkam aawaj ne unko phir se jane ke liye kaha.


“ye hai…Dr. azhar masood , ye jane mane surgeon hai..yehi aapke bête ka operation karenge” kisi dusre ne kaha.


Ye naam kuchh jana pehchana sa laga, lekin main kuchh soch pata us se pahle , meri aankhe band hoti chali gayi aur mujhe kuchh pata nahi chala ki kya hua phir.
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Phir jab aankhe khuli to doctor ek dusre se baat kar rahe the…


“ chalo kuchh to achha hua bechare aadmi ke liye… nahi to pata nahi kya karta vo…bula lo use patient ko hosh aa raha hai, dekh lega” doctor ne apne assistant se kaha.


Aur operation theatre me kisi ke aane ki awaaj aayi…


“ kya hua doctor….kuchh to batao” uncle baat kar rahe the..awaaj bharrayi huyi thi aur doctor se kuchh janna chahte the…


“ main nikal raha hu…aap mere assistant se baat kar lijiye..ye samjha denge.” Aur shayad vo doctor wahan se nikal gaya .. “ thanks doctor..take care” kisi aur doctor ne kaha.


“ kaisa aadmi hai ye..yahan kisi ke jindigi aur maut ka sabal hai aur ye bina kuchh bataye kaise nikal gaya…kisi ke dard ki fikar hi nahi hai ise” uncle ne phir gusse me apni baat kahi.


“ sir..aap ka gussa jayaj hai, lekin aap abhi unke bare kuchh na bole, vo kisi kudda se kam nahi hai” dusre assistant doctor ne kaha.


“ aisa kya bada kaam kiya usne ..ye uska farz hai” uncle ka gussa shant ho hi nahi raha tha..shayad ek baap ki dimagi halat koi bhi samajh sakta hai…tabhi mujhe rohan ka khayal aaya, lekin main bol pane ki halat me nahi tha.


Main ye soch ke khush tha, ki rohan ke papa us se sahi mayne me kitna pyar karte hai, ki kisi pagal ki tarah lad rahe hai sabse..guhar laga rahe hai…unki vedana samajh sakta tha main.


“ sir…un jaisa insaan shayad hi milega aapko…abhi vo sidhe apne bête ko daphna ke aaye the aapke bête ke liye aur aap aisi baat kar rahe hai unke liye” assistant doctor ne kaha..main bhi ye baat sunkar sakte me aa gaya.


“kya….” Uncle ki baat ruk si gayi


“ ji ha…aaj hi subah, unke bête ka sehar ke bahar tile se girne se maut ho gayi..aur vo apne ko daphnane me busy the..phir bhi unhone aake aapke bête ko operate kiya..aur aap hai ki…” assistant doctor ke bol sunke main bhi samajh gaya ki ye kabir ke pita the jinhone hamara operation kiya…kitna mahan hai ye insaan..apne bête ke katil ki zindagi bachane aaya tha.


“ sorry doctor…to mere bête ka kya hua” uncle ne apni baat kahi.


“ en dono me se bas ek hi operation successful raha…halat bahut hi kharab thi, ye doctor ki karamat hai ki ek ko bacha liye” usne lambi saans lete huye kaha.


Uncle bilkul khamosh ho gaye…aisa laga jaise hosh kho diya unhone, kyoki doctor ne nurse ko awaaj lagai… sab kuchh tham sa gaya, maine jitna reshma aur rohan ke bare me sochne ki koshish ki mera dimag utna hi sunya me jata raha aur phir andhera sa chhane laga ..aur lakh koshisho ke baad bhi,main apne aapko rok nahi paya uss andhere bhavar me jane se…..jaha se shayad hi koi laut pata ho…mujhe samajh me aa gaya tha ki main ab is jahan ko albida kar raha hu.
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Sukh –dukh , rishte- nate, apne -paraye sab bas chhan bhangur hai…kabhi hame lagta hai, koi hamse bahut pyar karta hai…aur dusre pal nafrat. Kabhi koi bahut kareeb hota hai,aur dusre hi pal bahut door…kal kisi ko jante nahi, aur dusre pal me aisi dor bandh jati hai,ki hum zindagi nibhate chale jate hai….zindagi ke rang bare nirale hote hai, aur rang bhi aisa jo apni pehchan badalta rehta hai…aur idhar hum is rango ke indra dhanush pe baithe vo rang pehchan hi nahi pate jo sabse pyara hota hai..Gulzar sahab ki vo pankatiyan mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai.

 
“Mujhko Bhi Tarkeeb Sikha Koi Yaar Julahe,
Aksar Tujhko Dekha Hai Ek Tana Bunte
Jab Koi Dhaaga Toot Gaya.. Ya Khatam Hua
Phir Se Baandh Ke Aur Sira Koi Jodh Ke Uss Mein
Aage Bun’ne Lagte Ho
Tere Iss Tane Mein Lekin
Ik Bhi Gaanth Girah Buntar Ki Dekh Nahi Sakta Hai Koi
Maine To Ek Baar Buna Tha Ek Hi Rishta
Lekin Uski Saari Girhain Saaf Nazar Aatee Hain Mere Yaar Julahe”
 
Mere kalam achanak ruk gaye kisi ki awaaj sunkar… “ kabtak khatm ho jayega tumhara kaam, main intejaar kar rahi hu khane pe” ek pyari awaaj ne mere dil ke andar ghumar rahe bhavnao ke lehar ko jaise rukne pe mazboor kar diya. Maine apni diary band ki aur table lamp band kar ke dining room ki taraf badha. Wahan chair pe us awaaj ki malkin maujud thi, maine jake pichhe se uske gale me bahen dali…

“ reshma …main kitna khuskismat hu ki tum mere paas ho…aisa lagta hai,jaise mere zindagi ke sare rang ek saath sama gaye ho is pal me …mujhe sukhad anubhuti dene ko…main is pal ko kabhi khona nahi chahta” maine apne dil ki khusi bayan ki.

“ kavi maharaj …mujhe bahut bhookh lagi hai, pehle kha le…phir aaram se baith ke aapki kavita sunungi” usne bade pyar se agrah kiya.

khana khate huye sochne laga kaise hua ye sab...

[college me reshma ne jo letter diya tha, vo mere liye tha, isliye mujhe diya ..rohan ka naam bolke, lekin maksad tha apni baat mujhe batane ki, aur main pagal…uske is pyar bhari harkat ko nahi samajh paya aur apne aapko us se door karne ki ..aur use rohan ke najdik lane ki koshish me laga raha ….ye baat mujhe reshma ne hospital me batayi.
Rohan pe gundo ne bahut hi ghatak prahar kiya tha,uske pure shareer ko talwar se bhed diya gaya tha,aur doctor use bacha nahi paye the]
 
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Eak chote se kamre k andar Rohit apne ghutne ko mode subak
subak kar ro raha tha… Akhir aisa kya ho gaya jo wo aise
baithkar ro raha hai…iss kahani ki shuruaat hoti hai


Aaj se thik kuch mahine pehle:


Rohit eak 6 ft ka lamb gora smart ladka hai…Bachpan se
anath hone k bawjood usne security officer inspecter ban jindagi
me apne liye eak mukam hasil kar liya tha… Aaj usne eak
Case solve kiya jiske liye use puraskrit kiya gaya hai…


Wo kaphi khush tha aur jo medal use puraskrit kiya gaya
tha use lekar wo apne Anath ashram jahan usne apni jindagi
bitayi thi uski warden jisne use eak ma aka pyaar
diya tha uske paas jaa raha tha…


Wo utsah me aaj apni security officer jeep ko bahot tez chala wo
warden se bahot pyaar karta tha aur pyaar se use puspa
maa bulata tha…eak anath ko pushpa ne apne bête ki tarah
pala Tha… karan uski jindagi me bhi koi nahi tha…
Rohit naam bhi use puspa ne hi diya tha…


Rohit use apni momento dikhane k liye bajhot jaldi gadi
chala raha tha tabhi use bich raste me Do log dikhayi diye
jo road cross kar rahe the rohit ki najar jaise hi unnpar
padi usne unhe bachane k liye jeep ki disha badal di jiske
kaaran uski gadi uncantrol ho gayi…


Jaise taise rohit ne use side me bane footpath me chadne
se roka… uski saanse tez chal rahi thi Use gussa bahot aata
tha usne moodkar road k bich khade unn do insano ko chillaya…


Rohit: Are andhe ho kya dikhayi nahi deta…


Par jaise hi uski najr unpe padi Rohit unme se eak ko dekhta
rah gaya…unme se eak bujurg aadmi Tha jo shyad bimar tha aur
uske haant ko thame eak ladki thi…Rohit ki awaz sun wo ladki
Jaldi se uske paas aayi…


Ladki: Sorry wo actually mere papa bimar hai na isliye mai
unko road cross karwa rahi thi… Apko lagi to nahi…


Rohit ne na me sar hila diya…par use hosh kahan tha wo to
usko dekhte hi apne hosh o hawas kho chuka tha…


Ladki wahan se muskura kar chali gayi…Rohit use jata dekhta
raha…Aaj jinadgi me pehli baar Rohit kokisi ko dekhkar aisa
feel hua tha…khair usne uske bare me jyada nahi socha aur
Wahan se apni puspa maa se milne anath aashram chala gaya…


Puspa uska hi intzaar kar rahi thi…rohit ne uske haant me
inaam me mili medal thama di… Jise dekh puspa ki aankho
me aansu aa gaye…


Rohit jab se security officer me bharti hua tha tab se wo anath ashram
ko chod eak kiraye ke flat me rehta tha…usne puspa ko bhi sath
chalne ko kaha par wo nahi mani…rohit har maah apni salary ka eak
Bada hissa yahan de deta tha…


Rohit me eak achche insaan k sabhi gun the par uski eak kamjori
thi wo sochta bahot tha… Shayad isi karan use baar baar road me
mili wo ladki yaad aa rahi thi… kyon nahi pata par Rohit use
bhool hi nahi paa raha tha…


Khair din bitne lage eak din jab wo puspa se milne anath aashram
gaya to use phir se wohi Ladki najar aayi…wo wahan k bachcho k
saath khel rahi thi…


Rohit na jane kyon use dekhta hi reh gaya… uska svabhav aisa bilkool
nahi tha… wo humesha Ladkiyon se door rehta par iss ladki ne uspe
na jane koi jadu kar diya tha…


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Wo subah ki tarah uske jivan me aayi thi… Uski kajal lagi jheel si
aankho me rohit ko apni jindagi dikhayi dene lagi… Chehre par
masomiyat jo kisi chote bachcho ki tarah thi, aur
Sharir k bharav me madakta saaf saaf jhalak rahi thi…
Rohit use dekh pagal hua jaa raha tha…


Aaj jindagi me pehli baar dil me use iss ladki ko pane ki hasrat paida
ho gayi… Rohit wahin maidan k bench me baithe gaaya aur uss ladki ko
niharne laga…


Rohit man me sochne laga ki bhagwan ne iss ladki ko kitna sundar banaya hai…
Masoomiyat aur youvan ka aisa jadu aaj tak usne nahi dekha tha…
tabhi uske bagal me puspa aakar baith gayi…


Rohit: maa ye ladki koun hai aaj se pehle maine ise nahi dekha…


Puspa: Rohit ye Priya hai paas hi me rehti hai…iske pita ji yahan eak
mandir k pujari hain… Bechari ki maa bachpan me hi chal basi thi…
bahot hi sanskari bachchi hai…waise maine hi iske pitaji aur
ise yahan bulaya Hai…


Rohit: Kyon…


Puspa ne uski or muskura kar dekha…


Puspa: teri shaadi pakki karne k liye…


Rohit ye sun kar bahot excited ho gaya tha par usne khud par kabu
rakhkar puspa se pucha…


Rohit: par maa mai to anath hoon na…


Puspa: chup mere hote hue yahan ka koi bhi bachcha anaath nai hai…
aur waise bhi maine unhe Sab kuch bata diya hai… uske pita ko koi
samasya nahi hai iss baat se…


Rohit: apne inse baat bhi kar li hai kya…

Puspa: haan beta wo dono mujhe eak din mandir me mile the tab iske
pita ramadhar ji bahot hi sajjan insaan hai aur preeti to badi hi
pyaari bachchi hai wo… isliye mujhse raha na gaya aur maine tumhare
liye unse preeti ka haant mang liya…


Rohit: Aur preeti ko kya ye rista manjoor hai…


Puspa: tere aise puchne se mujhe eak baat to samajh aa gayi ki preeti
tujhe pasand aa gayi hai…


Rohit uski ye baat sun sharma gaya… jise dekh puspa ne uske sar k baal
ko sehlate hue kaha…


Puspa: wo log tujhse hi milne yahan aaye hain… preeti bahot hi seedhi
ladki hai jahan uske pita shadi karne k liye kahenge wo wahin shaadi
kar legi… ab chal uske pita andar tera intzaar kar rahe hain…


Rohit puspa k saath andar gaya… sabse pehe rohit ne Ramadhar k pair chue
aur jisse Ramadhar Ko itna to samajh me aa gaya ki Rohit me sanskar hain…
usne rohit se chand sawal puche jiska Rohit ne safayi se jawab diya…


Ramadhar ko Rohit ki sadgi bahot pasand aayi… Usne apni taraf se riste k
liye haan kar diya… Par Rohit ne sirf eak baar priya se baat karne ki
ichcha jahir ki… jise ramadhar ne maan liya…


Ramadhar aur puspa bahar nikal gaye… Puspa ne priya ko bulakar use Rohit k
paas andar bhej diya… Priya pehle to thoda hichkichayi andar akele jane se
par Ramadhar ne use ishare se milne k liye hami bhar di…


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0Priya eak bahot hi sadharan pariwar ki eak sanskari ladki thi jisne aaj tak
kisi bhi paraye insaan se akele me baat nahi kit hi…maa k gujar jane k baad
pita ne hi pala tha… bhagwan ne use sanskar k saath saath khubsurati bhi
bahot di thi…doodh sa agora rang, masoom sa chehra jiski eak muskurahat kisi ki
dil ki dhadkan rok de, figure bh kehr dhata tha uska 34C ki breast Kisi ko bhi
apna diwana bana le, jab wo raste par chalti to manchalo ki nigahe uske bhare hue
hilte Nitamb se hatti hi nahi thi…

par use inn sab chizo se koi matlab nahi
tha… wo apna saara dhyaan padhayi aur puja path me lagati… use sanskar me eak
baat mil gayi thi ki eak ladki k jivan me uska Pati hi uska sab kuch hota hai…
isliye wo humesha apne sapno k rajkumar ka wait karti rehti…


Jab wo andar rohit k samne aayi to use dekhte hi pehchan gayi…use yaad
aa gaya ki wo wohi hai jo uss din usko road me mila tha… par usne kuch
kaha nahi bus apne salwar-suit k dupatte ko haant me Lekar use ghumati
khadi rahi…


Rohit eak security officer wala tha wo samajh gaya ki Priya nervous ho rahi hai…
Is liye usne hi pehle baat karne ka faisla kiya…


Rohit: Are aap to wahi ho na jo uss din mujhe road me mili thi…


Priya ne haan me apna sar hilaya…


Rohit: Aaiye na aap wahan kyon khadi hain…


Priya dhime kadmo se uske paas aayi aur uske bagal wale sofe par baith gayi…


Rohit: mera naam rohit hai… aur mai eak security officer inspecter hoon… apko
aur kuch janana hai mere bare me…


Priya ne na me apna sar hilaya…


Rohit: Aapko to pata hi hoga ki hum log yahan kyon mil rahe hain…
Priya ne haan me sar hilaya…


Rohit: Aap iss riste se khush to ho na…


Priya ne uski iss baat ka koi reaction nahi diya… Rohit samajh gaya ki
wo bahot sharma rahi hai… Isliye usne apne dil ki baat seedhe seedhe
Priya se keh di…


Rohit: Aap kuch bhi tai kare usse pehle mai apko eak baat kehna chahta hoon...


Priya ne uski or najre utha k dekha use aisa laga ki rohit kahin iss riste
k liye mana to nahi kar dega… wo dar gayi kyonki rohit use bahot pasand
aaya tha jaisa wo apne sapno k rajkumar k bare me sochti thi…


Rohit: Mujhe aap bahot achchi lagti ho sach kahun jab se maine apko dekha
hai mai aapko bhool hi nahi paa raha hoon… Pls meri baat ka bura mat
manana mujhe aapse pyaar ho gaya hai… aur mai eak anaath bhi hoon…
Puspa maa ne mujhe pala bus hai…


Rohit k mooh se aisi baate sun priya to jaise aasman me udne lagi…
Uska hone wala pati uspe pehle se hi lattu ho ye koun ladki nahi
chahegi… Uska chehra sharm se lal ho gaya… wo khadi hui aur bina
Kuch kahe wahan se jane lagi…


Rohit: priya aap bina kuch kahe kyon jaa rahi ho… Kya apko mera aisa
kehna achcha nahi laga… Kya mai apko pasand nahi hoon…


Priya ne use piche moodkar dekha aur usse bus itna kaha…
Priya: Pasand ho…


Aur wo jaldi se kamre k bahar chali gayi…


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Char din baad hi mandir me eak chote se function k saath Rohit aur
priya ki shaadi ho gayi… Dono hi bahot khush the… Shaadi ka pura
kharch Rohit ne hi kiya tha… jise dekh priya ki aankho me aansu aa
gaye kyonki uske pita eak pujari the jinke paas jyada punji nahi thi…


Priya ko sach me yakin aa gaya ki rohit use sach me bahot chahta hai...
Shaadi k baad Rohit use lekar apne flat me le aaya jahan saare saman
bikhre pade the… jise dekh priya k hosh udd gaye… Usne rohit ki or
banavati gusse se dekha…


Rohit: are mai kya karun mai aisa hi hoon … ab tum aa gayi ho na
sab sambhal lo aur mujhe bhi… Jise sun priya muskura uthi…dono ne
bade pyaar se khana khaya aaj rohit ne khana bahar se hi mangwaya tha…


Khana khane k baad jab rohit priya ko bedroom me le gaya to priya
dekhti reh gayi… rohit ne bedroom Ko naya banwaya tha… bedroom me
bahar jaisa kuch bhi nahi tha… sara karma foolon se saja tha…
aur jarurat k sabhi saman maujud the…


Priya room ko dekhti reh gayi… Rohit ne use god me utha liya
aur bed par rakh diya…


Rohit: aaj humari suhag raat hai priya par agar tumhe aur samay
chahiye to hum rook sakte hain...


Priya ne jab rohit k mooh se ye baat suni to uski aankhe bhar aayi…
usne to itna sapne me bhi nahi socha tha… Priya ne rohit ki aankho
me dekhte hue kaha…


Priya: Aap sach me koi fariste ho kya jo meri jindagi me khushiyan
bharne aae ho…


Rohit: Nahi mai koi "Angel" nahi hoon bus eak "LOVER BOY" hoon jo tumse
beshumar pyaar karne laga hai...


Priya ne rohit k mooh se ye sunte hi use apne gale se laga liya…
Rohit k liye ye priya ki or se khula amantran tha… uske baad dono ne
eak dusre par pyaar ki barsaat kar di…


Dono ka hi ye pehli baar tha to dono hi iss khel me nikamme the…
Par kehte hain na pyaar sab sikha hi deta hai… kuch hi der me dono
k kapde farsh me jahan tahan pade the… rohit to priya k husn se Ghayal
hi ho gaya tha… usne apne pyaar ki nishani priya k jism k har hisse me
chod di thi….


Sara karma unn dono ki aanho aur siskiyon se gunj utha… bich me eak baar
priya ki chikh bhi nikli Jiske baad rohit rukna chah raha tha par priya
eak pativrata nari thi usne apni taklif ki parwah na Ki aur rohit ko pyaar
ka khel jari rakhne k liye kaha… jab dono shant hue to rohit priya k upar hi
Lete lete so gaya priya bhi pyaar khel se thak kar aise hi so gayi…


Uss waqt dono purn roop se nagn the… priya k komal golayi k upar rohit ka
chehra pada hua tha… Rohit ka eak haant priya k kamar me tha aur dusra uske
nitamb k niche… ye raat inki jivan me pyaar ki eak nayi shuruaat le kar aayi...


Dono ko jaise saansar ki saari khushiyan mil gayi thi… Dono ne eak dusre k
jivan ko pura kar diya tha… Rohit priya ki har khwahish ko pura karta aur
Priya bhi apne pati k har chiz ka khayal rakhti… Aise hi pyaar me din bitne lage…


Par kehte na jab sab chiz eak dum sahi ho raha ho to insaan k jivan me kuch
na kuch hone wala hota hai… Eak Raat jab dono eak dusre pe pyaar barsa kar
so rahe the tabhi raat me rohit ka sharir me eak jordar kampan hua jisse
uske bagal me soyi Priya ki neend toot gayi… Usne jab dekha rohit Kaamp raha
hai to use uthane ki koshish ki par wo lagatar kampe jaa raha tha…


Priya ne use bahot uthane ki koshish ki par wo nahi utha… priyan se ab raha
na gaya usne turant Ambulance ko call kar bula liya aur rohit ko usme hospital
le gayi… jahan docters ne use thik bataya aur kaha ki use bas kaam ka stress
hai jisse wo aisa kar raha tha… jab Priya ne ye suna to uski jaan me jaan aayi…


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Par ye bus kuch hi pal k liye tha… Uss din k baad rohit kuch badla badla sa rehne
laga… uska swabhav pehle se eak dum alag ho gaya… wo baat baat par gussa karta
jo priya uski jaan hua karti thi uss par usne haant uthana bhi chalu kar diya…
Kaam me bhi ab wo pehle ki tarah nahi rehta… jo rohit kabhi bhi daru ki or dekhta
bhi nahi tha ab har raat wo ghar pee k aane laga… ab wo pushpa se bhi milne nahi jata tha…


Priya to jaise aasman se se siddha jamin par geer gayi… aisa nahi tha ki wo
humesha hi hypar hota… Har baar jab wo priya ko daru peekar marta to usse baad me
ro ro kar maaphi jarur mangta aur usse minnate karta ki wo use chod kar na jae…
Priya bhi usse bahot pyaar karti thi issliye uska man bhi pighal jata aur wo use
maaf kar deti…


Bed par bhi rohit ab pehle ki tarah use pyaar se treet na karta… har baar jab
wo sex karta to shuruaat to bade hi pyaar se karta par na jane use kya ho jata
wo bahot wildly priya k upar hawi ho jata… yahan tak jab priya uske vehshi pan
se rone bhi lag jati to bhi rohit ko koi farak na padta…


Had to tab ho gayi jab eak raat rohit ne wo kaam kar diya jo priya ne sapne
me bhi nahi socha tha…



Jab wo priya k vagina me apna panis daal ne hi wala tha pata nahi use kya hua
usne priya ko eakdum se palta aur jabardasti uske komal nitamb me apne panis ko
daal diya… priya Bilakti, kasmasati, aur chillati rahi par rohit ko uss par
rehem nahi aaya usne apni hawas puri hone k baad hi priya ko choda…


Priya saaari raat roti rahi uske saare sapne rohit ki iss harkat se chakna
choor ho gaye… wo haar maan kar subah rohit k uthne se pehle hi ghar se
apne pita k paas chali gayi… Usne jate hue eak baar rohit ki or dekha par
wo badi hi gehri neend me so raha tha…


Priya ki aankho se apne aap aansu nikalne lage par wo wahan ruki nahi kyonki
wo janti thi Ki agar rohit k uthne se pehle usne ghar na choda to rohit phir
use apne aansuon se kamjor kar dega….


Priya k achanak rote hue ghar aane se ramadhar pareshaan ho gaya usne priya
se pucha par usne Usne kuch nahi bataya… par Ramadhar se raha na gaya
usne puspa ko phone kar bulaya… Pushpa ne jab apni kasam de kar priya se
pucha to usne use sab bata diya… Jisse puspa ko rohit k upar bada gussa aaya…


Idhar jab Rohit ki neend khuli to priya ko ghar me na dekh wo pagal sa ho
gaya… usne priya k phone par call lagaya to puspa ne priya k haant se phone
lekar rohit ko bahot bura bhala kaha… Jise sun rohit rone laga aur
puchne laga ki priya kahan hai…


Puspa ko bhi uski roni awaz par daya aa gayi…usne Rohit ko mandir k piche
bane ghar par bula liya… rohit jaldi se wahan pahunch gaya… usne jaise
taise sabko manaya par puspa ne rohit se bhagwan k samne jaa kar priya ki
kasam khane ko kaha ki wo ab use tang nahi karega…


Rohit ye baat bhi maan gaya usne roti hui priya ka haant pakda aur use
apne saath rote hue mandir ki or le gaya par jaise hi wo mandir k andar
kadam rakhne wala tha ki uska sharir kampne laga aur wo wahin gir gaya…


Priya ne jab rohit ko girte dekha uska kaleja phat gaya wo uske seene me
sar rakh rone lagi… Aur use uthne k liye kehne lagi… wahan khade
shradhaluon ne rohit ko uthaya aur hospital Le gae… sabhi rohit k liye bade
chintit the par eak shaksh ko chodkar…


Jis waqt rohit mandir ki taraf aa raha tha usi waqt rohit ki aankho me
ramadhar ko kuch aur hi najar aaya… usne hospital jaakar priya aur puspa
se kaha ki rohit ab pehle wala rohit nahi raha use jald se jald eak aashram
le jana hoga jahan uska ilaj ho sake…


Usne iske aage kuch bhi nahi bataya… jab Rohit ko hosh aaya sabse pehle usne
priya ka naam liya… Priya to apne rohit se bahot pyaar karti thi wo uske paas
turant aa gayi aur use apne seene se laga liya…


Priya: aap na bahot gande ho mujhe bahot pareshan karte ho… jab mai apse door
chali jaungi tab dekhna mujhe yaad kar aap kitna rote ho…


Rohit: nahi priyu aisa mat kaho na mai bhi tumse apne jaan se jyada pyaar karta hoon…


Tabhi Ramadhar wahan aa gaya aur usne rohit ko apne saath eak aashram chalne ko
kaha… Jise rohit ne badi hi berukhi se nakar diya… jiske baad sab uski or gour
se dekhne lage… Tabhi Rohit ne has k kaha ki use kuch nahi hua bas kaam ka thoda
stress hai wo bilkool thik hai… jispar pushpa ne use daanta aur kaha ki ghar par
apne kaam k stress ko na laya kare…


Wahan se Rohit aur priya wapas ghar aa gae… kuch din to sab theek raha par eak
din rohit haanphta hua ghar par aaya aur usne priya ko khud ko bachane k liye kaha…
Jab priya ne usse uski iss halat ka karan pucha to usne bataya ki aaj usne galti
se S.P ko bahot maar diya hai… jiske karan use sabhi mental hospital le Jaa rahe
the par wo bhag kar wapas aa gaya…


Priya ne jab ye suna to use rohit par bahot gussa aaya par wo bechari kya karti
usne rohit ko apne saath bahar chalne ko kaha aur rohit ki security officer jeep me baith
wo dono wahan se nikal gaye…


Priya ko tabhi ramadhar ki baat yaad aayi ki use eak aashram me la jana chahiye…
usne Ramadhar ko call lagya par jo khabar use phone par mili usse uski duniya
hil gayi… Ramadhar k phone se use kisi aur ne bataya ki uska aaj katal ho gaya
hai… usne jab ye suna to uski saans atak gayi usne rohit ki or dekha aur paya ki
uske shirt me khoon k dhabbe lage hain… wo kuch sochti uske pehle hi anath ashram
se call aaya aur usme bhi dukh ki hi khabar thi ki puspa ka bhi katal ho gaya tha…


Priya ka chehra inn do khabro se murti ki tarah ho gaya jisme koi emotion nahi the…
usne rohit ko jeep rokne k liye kaha… uss waqt jeep sheher se bahar eak sun san si
jagah par thi… Priya aur rohit dono gadi se niche utare…

Priya ne Rohit ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha...


Priya: Tum mere Rohit nahi ho...


 

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Present time:


Rohit uss chote se kamre me sar niche kiye rote hue badbadae jaa raha tha…
Rohit: maine nahi mara… maine kisi ko nahi mara… Maine apni PRIYA ko nahi mara…


Tabhi achanak wo husne laga… usne apna sar upar kiya uski aankhe surkh lal thi…
Aur chehre par eak vehsipan wali hasin…


Rohit: Dekh Rohit aaj maine apna badla le liye… Aaj tere paas maine kuch bhi nahi
choda mera badla pura hua… maine tujhse tere saare apne chchin liye...
ab ji iss bojh k saath…


Aur usi waqt Rohit ki aankhe normal ho gayi aur wo wahin behosh hokar let gaya…
Darasal iss kahani ki shuruaat me jis case k liye puraskar mila tha usme rohit ne eak
Sereial killer jisne dus logo ka katal kiya tha uska encounter rohit ne kiya tha wo bhi
Uska trap ban kar… uska naam Ramanna


Actually wo sereial killer ka beta bahot bimaar tha aur usko kisi Baba ne gyaarah
logo ki bali dene k liye kaha tha… usne dus logo ko to maar diya aur rohit ko usne
apna gyarawah shikar banaya tha jo khud uske changul me use marne gaya tha…


Pehle rohit ne usse jaan bujh kar dosti ki aur jab eak baar dono hotal gaye to Rohit
ne Ramanna ko apni drink me kuch milate dekha aur samajh gaya ki wo behoshi ki dawa
mila raha hai… rohit ne chalaki se uss drink ko phek diya aur phir behosh hone
ka natak kiya…


Jiske baad ramanna use uthakar eak jangal me le gaya jahan eak baba hawan k sath uska
intzaar kar raha tha… Rohit jaise wahan pahuncha wo khada hua aur usne pehle baba ko
apni pistol se mara aur uske baad Ramanna par goli chala di…


Ramanna ki jaan turant na nikli marne se pehle usne rohit ko kaha ki wo wapas aakar
iska badla jarur lega jaise aaj rohit ne use apne bachche ki jaan bachane se roka…
waise hi eak din wo apno ko nahi bacha paega…


Ramanna: “ mai har chiz ka hisab lene aaunga... teri jindagi se har wo chiz chchin lunga
jo tujhe pyaari hai... “


Aaj shayad log rohit ko "Dissociative identity disorder" ka mariz samajh rahe ho …
par eak hasta kheta insaan itna darinda ban jaega ye kabhi bhi gale se utarne wali
baat nahi thi…


Rohit k andar se wo haivaan to chala gaya par usne rohit ko eak aisa dard diya
tha jisse rohit jindagi bhar na ubar paya… Aaj Rohit eak mental asylum me hai
jahan wo har pal eak hi Baat kehta rehta hai…


"Maine meri Priya ko nahi mara"

The End


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ammuriti2015
 
BADALTI RAAHEIN




Mein apne kamre mein baitha hua subah ki chaaye ke sath akhbaar padh raha tha, subah ki chaaye ki chuskiyo ke sath garma-garam ore chatpati khabro ka aanand leta hua ek page se dusre page ore dusre se teesre page par aa-jaa raha tha. lekin abhi tak mujhko subah ke akhbaar mein koi bhi aisi khabar nahi mil paayi thi jispar mainey dhyaan diya ho.. aise hi panno ko palatey hue youn hi meri nazar padi aisi khabar par jisko mein dhundh raha tha, par meri umeed se bilkul alag.
Mein ore meri patni ne kaffi samay se ek chotey se ghar ka sapna dekha tha, par aaj ki iss mehangaayi bhari duniya mein roti, kapda ore makaan aisi cheez hai jisko juta paane mein acche-accho ka dum nikal jaata hai.. hum dono aaj bhi lagbhag kayi saalo se yaha delhi mein 8"-11" ke chotey se kamre mein reh rahey hai. Maine kabhi bhi kisi bhi cheez se samjhota nahi kiya tha shaadi se pehle, khul kar jeena ore zindgai ka puri tarah se luft uthaana meri hobbies mein se ek tha, lekin shaadi ke baad jab zimmedaari sar par padi toh pata chala ki sab kuch sirf "samjhotey" se hi chalta hai yaha par. haalaki mere paas ek acchi job thi, khaane-peene yaa phir kisi bhi cheez ki kami nahi thi ore hum dono kisi acche se flat ko bhi rent par le saktey they par hum dono ne hi decide kiya tha ki bekaar mein paise barbaad naa karke hum apne ghar ke liye paisa ikkhatta karengey..
Newspaper mein jiss khabar par meri nazar padi thi wo thi "FLOPE HOUSING SCHEMES". Yeh ek aisi headline thi jisko dekhtey hi mein isski taraf thoda sa serious ho gaya, iss news mein diya tha ki kaise bank ka paisa dub raha hai loans wagerah dene ke baad. Waise yeh news mere kaam ki toh nahi thi, lekin naajaane kyon aaj pehli baar mere dimaag mein ek khurafaat ne janam liya tha. Humaar ghar lene ke sapne ko hum pura kar saktey hai, lekin usske liye humko zarurat thi kisi bank ke paas se ek loan uthane ki. Aisa loan jisko hum aagey jaakar chukaane waley nahi they.
Ek mahina ho chuka tha mujhko saare bank ke baare mein ore unki schemes ke baare mein pata karte hue. Ore laghbhar sabhi bank ka haal ek jaisa hi tha. sabhi jagah par sawaal tha "security" ka, matlab ki bank se agar loan chahiye toh bank ko bhi assure karna hoga ki hum bank ka paisa sahi waqt par chukaatey rahengey. Ore itni chaan-been karne ke baad yeh bhi pata chala ki lagbhag saare bank apni EMI ko recover karne ke liye legal ore illegal dono tarah ke raastey apnaatey hai. Legal tariko se bachne ke liye toh kayi tarikey they par agar baat illegal tarike se vasuli ki aati hai toh ussey bachne ke liye humaare paas koi bhi tarika nahi tha, jisse hum bank ke paise dene se bach sakey. Ek baar mujko apna sapna dubta hua nazar aa raha tha. Meine aaj tak koi bhi kaam illegally nahi kiya tha par naajaane kyon mein iss taraf khichta chala jaa raha tha. Mujhko pata tha ki issme risk hai par phir bhi mein yeh kaam karne ke liye utaavla hua jaa raha tha.
Ab mujhko zarurat thi aise bakre ki jo meri security bank ko de sakey. Ore isske liye mere paas ek hi option tha, Seth natwar laal.seth natwar laal, humaare ilaake ke ek jaane-maane sunaar hai, jo ki logo ko waqt-zarurat paise udhaar diya karte rehtey hai. kaha toh yeh bhi jaata hai ki unka kuch aisa kaam hai jo ki 2 no. ka hai. Matlab ki unnke paas aane waala kuch sona ulte-sidhe raasto se bhi aata hai.Ab mujhko kisi bhi tarah se Natwar laal jee ko pata kar apni taraf milaana tha, taaki mein apne kaam mein kamyaab ho saku. Seth jee ki pauch ore uth -baith bhi kayi logo mein acchi khaasi thi. Isiliye mujhko apna kaam banta hua sa lag raha tha. Abb waqt aa chuka tha apni kismat ko ek naya raasta dikhaane ka.
Mein ore seth ji ek bank ke manager ke saamne baithey hue they ore seth ji unnse mera intro karwa rahey they. mujhko kya karna hai isski puri taiyaar maine kar rakhi thi. Paisa mujhko seth ji apni kuch zameen joki unki thi, wo bank ke paas girvi rakh kar leni thi hum logo ko. Seth ji ne abhi tak kaa kaam badey hi acche tarike se sambhaala tha. jald hi humaara saara paper work khatam ho chuka tha ore 15 dino ke andar ek bande ke inspection ke baad dobaara se humko yaha par aakar apna paisa collect kar lena tha.
Waise toh seth ji ki zameen ki keemat naa ke hi barabar thi (kyon...? aagey pata chalega.. )par seth ji ne bank manager ko kuch rupyo ka laalach dekar ussko humaari taraf mila liya tha. Manager ne bhi humaari haalat ka faayda uthaya ore humse hisse ki baat kar di. matlab ab seth ji ke sath-sath mujhko uss manager ko bhi ek hissa dena tha. Ab jab kaam kiye hai ultey toh seedha toh kuch bhi milne ki ummeed nahi ki jaa sakti. toh, humko manager ko bhi ek naye hissedaar ke taur par apne sath milaana hi pada.
Aaj mujhko ore seth ji ko ek baar dobara se bank jaana tha, apne loan ke paiso ke liye. aaj mera sapna pura hone jaa raha tha, wo sapna jisko pura karne ke liye mujhko aagey jaakar kya-kya papadh belne padengey, isska mujhko ehsaas bhi nahi tha.
khair, bank se saara paisa ore paper work karne ke baad mein seth ore manager ko unnka hissa dekar waha se nikal liya apne ghar ki taraf. Ab mujhko pakka bharosa tha ki jald hi mera sapna sach ho jaayega.
mujhko iss baat ki bhi chinta nahi thi ki bank se yeh jo loan maine liya hai yeh mujhko lautaana bhi hai, kyonki yeh loan seth ji ne apni zameen par liya tha, uss jameen par jispar waha ke local MLA ka kabza tha. abb bank ke liye bhi kaam asaan nahi hone waala tha. sab kuch meri planning ke anusaar chal rha tha.
kuch hi dino mein mujhko apna istefa dena tha ore jaise hi bank ke log apni recovery ke liye mere paas aatey mujhko apna fata haal unko dikha dena tha. fir bank waalo ke paas seth ji ki jameen ko baichne ke alawaa ore koi bhi chaara nahi tha, joki uss MLA ke kabze mein thi. Phir bank waaley jaane yaa phir wo MLA.
jald hi meine apni jama punji ore bank se liye hue loan ke sath apne liye makaan dekhne kaa kaam suru kar diya. ore jald hi meri khoj "keshu apartment" ke ek flat par jaakar khatam ho gayi. ab humko jald se jald issko lena tha. meine jald hi saare kaam kiye ore apni biwi ke naam par waha ke apartment ka ek flat apne naam par karwaa liye.
abb humaare paas humaara ek jaha tha, joki humaara tha. ore mein khush bhi tha. par jald hi meri khushi ko kayi logo ki nazar lagne waali thi. jisme sabse bada naam uss MLA ka aane waala tha.
jaise ki maine socha tha, bank waalo ko kayi maheeno tak tarkaane ke baad aakhirkaar bank waalo ne uss jameen ki bid ke liye mujhko notice bhej hi diya. mein apni job pehle hi chodh chuka tha. toh abb bank waalo ke paas koi chara nahi tha , sirf isske ki wo uss jameen ko bech kar apne loan ki recovery kartey. par wo jameen jiske paas thi usske aagey toh bank waalo ki bhi nahi chalne waali thi. toh jaise hi bank waalo ko pata chala ki unnke saamne ek bohot badi aafat aa chukki hai toh unhone mere paas dobaara se chakkar kaatne suru kar diye ore mein humesha ki tarah unnko waha se yahi keh kar bhej deta ki mere paas unnka paisa lautaane ka ore koi bhi zariya nahi hai wo jab chaahe uss zameen ko bech saktey hai ore apna paisa recover kar saktey hai..
20 october ki wo shaam shayad meri zindagi ki sabse khatarnaak shaam honi thi, jab mein ore meri patni mere dost ki annivesary ki party ke baad apne apartment ke flat par pauche. jab hum dono wha par pauche toh humaare flat ka darwaaza khula hua tha. aise youn apne flat ka darwaaza khula hua dekhkar hum dono ke hi aankhein khuli-ki-khuli reh gayi. Humko iss baat ka darr sataane laga ki shayad humaare flat mein chori hui hai par baat itni badi ho jaaygi yeh toh hum logo ne bhi nahi socha tha.
jab hum dono uss flat mein daakhil hue toh humaare saamne ek lamaba saa aadmi, hatta-katta, humaare saamne saufe par baitha hua paan chaba raha tha, usske bagal mein hi wo bank manager ore seth ji bhi khadey they. Seth ji ko dekhtey hi mera maatha thanka, ki kahi seth ji ne mere sath double game toh nahi khel daali.
wo aadmi- (paan chaabaata hua..) toh tumhi ho aaditya..
mein- haan, par tum kaun ho..
wo aadmi- mein hu dinkar yadav, uss jameen ka illegal maalik jissko tumne bank ke paas girvi rakh kar yeh shaandaar flat liye hai.
'ab mein saari baatein samajh chuka tha, mein samjh chuka tha ki bawal bohot hi zayada ulajh chuaka hai.. abb mujhko bohot hi soch samajh kar kaam lena hoga .. kuch bhi ho jaaye mujhko darna nahi hai kyonki legally mera koi bhi kuch nahi bigaadh sakta hai..(par yahi meri sabse badi bhul thi..)'
mein- par aap mere flat mein youn choro ki tarah se kya kar rahey hai..
dinkar yadav- jubaan ko lagaam de apni, naadaan ladke. tujhko shayad nahi pata raja ore praja mein kya fark hota hai.. praja ko humesha raja ka hukum maana padhta hai ore raja kabhi bhi, kahi bhi aa yaa jaa sakta hai..
mein- par aapki yaha par aane ki wajah kya hai..
dinkar yadav- mere aane ki wajah hai yeh bank manager jo mere logo ko baar-baar pareshaan kar raha hai ki mere log uss zameen ko khaali kar de.. jissko maine kayi saalo se kabza rakha hai.. ore mere log uss zameen ko kisi bhi haalat mein nahi chodhne waaley hai.. ore ab tu bata ladhke ke mein karu toh karu kya ..
mein- issme mein kaha se aa gaya ..
dinkar yadav- tu bhul raha hai chore ki bank se wo loan tene hi uthaya hai.. wo bhi uss zameen ke badle mein, jissme tera sath diya hai iss seth Natwar Laal ne.. toh saari musibat ki jadh tu hi hai..ab agar mein wo zameen chodh deta hu toh phir tera yeh flat mera ho jaayega. ore mein wo zameen naa chodhuga toh yeh bank kaa manager mere logo ko paresaan karta phirega.. toh tu ek kaam kar yeh flat mere naam kar ore apna raasta naap.
ore sochne ka waqt chahiye toh 1 hafta hai tere paas..
mein- yeh kya matlab hai.. mein kyon dene laga yeh flat... mein nahi dene waala yeh flat kisi bhi keemat par..
dinkar yadav- (muskuraatey hue..) dena toh tujhko padega hi.. ore kaise dega tu yeh bhi mein acchi tarah se jaanta hu... tu baas din ginna suru kar ... mein 1 haftey baad phir se aaunga...

"aaj teen din ho chuke hai, uss raat ko beete hue .. par mein yeh nahi soch paaya hu ki mujhko aagey kya karna hai.. kuch bhi samjh nahi aa rhaa hai ki kaise mein khudko ore iss flat ko uss dinkar yadav se bacha paunga... dinkar yadav ne jo dhamki mujhko di hai wo ussey peeche hatne waala nahi hain, ore upar se mujhko seth par bhi kuch shak ho hi raha tha ki dinkar ke sath unnki kuch na kuch toh mili bhagat zarur hi hai... toh meine fauran faisala kiya ki mein aaj hi seth se milne jaaunga..ore unnke dil mein kya hai iss baat ka pata lagaane ki koshish karunga.."
(seth natwar laal ka ghar)
natwar laal apne aalishaan drawing room ke saufe par baitha hua tha, jab mein waha par paucha. pehle toh mujhko dekhkar wo thoda sa muskuraaya phir apne haath ke ishaare se mujhko wahi usske paas aane ka ishaara karta hua sofe par baithne ke liye bola.
natwar laal- toh kaise ho aditya, ummeed hai sab kuch thik-thak hi hoga..(fiki si muskaan ke sath..)
"mujhko iss waqt behad hi gussa aa rha tha, kyonki jisss tarah se yeh seth bartaav kar raha tha mujhko iss baat ka andaaza lag chuka tha ki seth ne zarur mere sath dhokha kiya hai.."
mein-(thoda theekhe lavzo mein) sethk, tumne mere sath accha nahi kiya.. kyon kiya tumne mere sath aisa.
seth- maine kya kiya, jo bhi kuch kiya tumne hi kiya ... meine toh wahi kiya joki tumne mere se karne ko kaha ..
mein- par maine yeh toh bilkul bhi nahi kha tha ki kuch bhi aisi cheez ho jo aapko uss dinkar se hath milaane ke liye mazbor kar de..
seth- ab har cheez agar tumhaare ishaaro par hi chalti toh phir issme mera kya faayda hona tha..
mein- tum bhul rahey ho ki mainey tumko bhi ek hissa diya tha.
seth- wo toh mera mehnataana tha jo kuch bhi mainey tumhaare liya kiya hai..
mein- tumhaare ore dinakar ke beech mein kya decide hua hai..
seth- yahi ki wo tumhaare flat ko lekar meri zameeen ko chodh dega.. haan par isske liye mujhko 1 lakh rupaaye bhi dene honegey..
mein- ore issme mera kya hoga..
seth- tumaari tum jaano, shayad tumne iske baare mein bhi kuch naa kuch soch hi rakha ho....
seth se milne ke baad bhi koi bhi aisa rasta nikalkar nahi aaya tha . . ab adiya aise do-raahe par khada hua tha jaha se naa toh wo nikal ssakta tha.. ore naa hi piche hat sakta tha.. kya hoga usski life mein.. kya wo iss chiz ka koi raasta nikaal paayega... yaa phir ussko waqt ore taqat ke aagey haar maanni padegi.. kismat insaan ko kayi khel khilaati hai.. naajaane aditya ki life ussko kis ore lekar jaa rahi hai.. kaise honge usske bache hue "do din" ... kya yeh do din adiyta ke zindagi ko phir se uss patri par laa payengey jispar wo chalne ki soch raha tha.. yaa phir
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Kya Yahi Pyar Hai

Ye Story mere best friend ki hai jo bachpan se mere sath hi khelta tha. college jata tha aur College me bhi hum sath me hi the. Meri age abhi 24 years hai aur mere dost ka naam Vipin Sengar hai.

Humara ghar bhi same colony me hi hai. Vipin college time se hi ek ladki se bahut payar karta tha jiska naam rachna hai.

Dono ki friendship jab vipin agra se B.tech kar raha tha or rachna agra se m.b.a. kar rahi thi tab huyi aur fir dono ek couple ban gaye.

Un dono ki jodi bahut hi acchhi lagti thi, dono me bahut hi payar tha.

Vipin ke ghar me uski mom ko ye baat pata thi, aur uski mom se Rachna ki baat bhi hoti rahti thi,

Uski mom ne uske papa ko ye baat nahi batai thi kyu ki unhe dar tha ki bho is baat ke liye nahi maane ge kyu ki rachna alag cast ki thi. Aur na hi rachna ne apne ghar me kisi ko vipin ke baare me bataya tha.

Mujhe yaad hai jab main rachna ke baare me mazak me kuch bhi keh deta tha to wo mujse bhi naraz ho jata tha.

Unki relationship ko 4 years ho chuke the aur mane kabhi bhi use rachna se ladte ya naraz hote nahi dekha. Wo dono ek dusre se itna payar karte the ki kabhi unme narazgi tak nahi hoti thi ye dekh kar main bahut hairan hota tha. kyu ki dusre teesre din meri apni gf se ladhai hoti hi rahti thi.

Fir ek din vipin or rachna agra ke T.D.I. mall me baithe huye the. Rachna thodi udaas thi us din aur rachna ko kisi ka call aaya.

Rachna ne usse jyada baat nahi ki aur use bol diya ki ¡°abhi main busy hun tumhe thodi der baad call karti hoon¡±.

Ye dekh kar vipin ne kaha ki kon tha phone pe?

Rachna ke kaha ki koi nahi bus ek friend thi..

Vipin- konsi friend? naam batao?

Rachna- tum use nahi jante.

Vipin- Tum mujhse kush chhupa rahi ho batao kya hai?

Rachna- Main tumhe sab kuch batati hun lekin tum vaada karo ki tum kush bhi galat nahi karoge.

Vipin- batao na kaya baat hai?

rachna- jaisa ki tum jante hi ho hamari ghar wale hamari shadi ke liye kabhi nahi manage kyu ki Humara religion alag alag hai.

Isliye mere gharwalo ne meri shaadi fix kar di hai main apne gharwalo ki marzi ke bina shaadi nahi kar sakti. Isliye tum mujse vaada karo ki tum kuch bhi galat nahi karoge aur na hi khud ko koi chot pahunchao ge aur mujhe bhool kar new life start karoge.

Vipin- tumhe yahi lagta hai na ki main kahi mar na jau suicide kar ke, To tum chinta na karo mai khud ko kuch nahi karu ga par main tumhe nahi bhool sakta.

Ye bol kar Vipin wahan se aa gaya aur usne mujhe call kar ke bulaya, main jab wahan pahuncha to mere gale lag kar wo bahut roya.
aur rote rote usne mujhe sari baat batai, uski baat sunke main bhi ro padha, uska dukh mujse dekha nahi ja raha tha kyuki main janta tha ki vipin uske bina nahi reh sakta mujhe uski fikar ho rahi thi mujhe dar tha ki kahi bo kush kar na baithe isliye mai use uske ghar lekar geya aur uske mom dad ko bataya,

Uske papa gusse bhi huye kyu ke unhe kush nahi bataya tha kisi ne is baare me.

Fir vipin ke aansu dekh kar unka dil pighal geya aur unho ne vipin ko dilasa dete huye kaha ki wo khud jakar Rachna ke gharwalo se baat karege. ye sunkar main bhi khush ho gaya ki ab sab theek ho jayega.

Agle din subha ki meri train thi mujhe nashik jana tha meri naani ki health theek nahi thi.

Vipin ke papa bhi agle din rachna ke gharwalo se milne gaye, lekin rachna ke papa nahi mane unhe ne kaha ki agar aap pahle baat karte to hum maan bhi jate magar ab kuch nahi ho sakta.

shadi ke card bant chuke hai agar ab kuch kiya to humri bezti ho jayegi. Vipin ke papa ne bahut minnte ki magar aman ke gharwale nahi mane.

Fir Mujhe pata chala ki vipin ki haalat kharab ho chuki hai wo hospital me admit hai.

Main pareshan ho gaya itni jaldi main train se waha nahi pahunch sakta tha, aur mere pas itne paise bhi nahi the ki main by air aa jau.

Khair main sirf phone par uska haal chaal hi pooch sakta tha.

jo ki main har dus mint baad pooch raha tha. fir pata chala ki vipin ki haalat me abhi sudhar hai lekin uski mansik halat theek nahi hai.

Doctors ne use ghar le jane ke liye bola. 15 din baad ki meri train thi, agra me pahunchte hi main apne ghar jane se pahle vipin ke ghar gaya.

Uski mom ne mujhe baithne ke liye bola par mane kaha ki vipin kaha hai mujhe us se milna hai uski mom ne kaha ki wo andhar hai lekin uske phone ko chhona mat, main unki ye baat samajh nahi paya.

Lekin jab main andhar gaya to use dekh kar mere ronghte khade ho gaye.... Uski aankhe band thi aur aankhon se aansu nikal rahe the phone charging pe laga tha aur earphone uske kaano me,

Uski mom ne bataya ki ye phone sad songs se bhara hai aur agar ye 2minute ke liye bhi band ho jaye to ye chillane laggta hai ghar ka saman todh deta hai¡*

Use dekh kar main bhi jor jor se ro raha tha, jo mera dost mere bina kahi ghumne nahi jata tha bo mujhe pehchan bhi nahi raha tha, main use bula raha tha woh meri baat ka zawab bhi nahi de raha tha.

Ye mera wo pahle wala dost nahi raha tha jo mujhe rota dekh mujhe zor se gale laga leta tha, main zor zor se ro raha tha is ummed me ki mera dost uthe ga aur mujhe gale laga le ga par nahi wo nahi utha jaise use meri parwah hi na ho.

Main apne dost ko kho chuka tha, jo mere samne baitha tha wo koi aur hi tha¡*

Sacha payar karne ki saja agar aisi hoti hai to asha hai mane kabhi sacha payar nahi kiya¡*

The End

 

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Muje pata tha tu aaj bhi yahi hogi .(kisi ne muje peeche se pukara).

(Mai reet****mere bare mai batane ko aab kuch nahi baccha aab meri jindgi ya duniya sirf mere es kamre mai hi simat ke reh gayi hai.muje to bas aab us pal ka intzar hai jab mai khud se milogi aapne pyar se milogi.es duniya mai na sahi to us duniya mai hi sahi .aur jis ne muje abhi pukara hai WO hai meri best friend Rashmi ek bahut hi khubsurat aur samajdar ladki abhi mere saath hi rehti hai )

Mai-Sorry per es dil ka kya karu ek pal bhi use bhulne hi nahi deta.

Rashmi-Tu kyu nahi samajti ki Jo ek baar es duniya se chala jaye wo kabhi lout ke nahi aata .bas aati hai to un ki yade wo bhi sirf hame dard hi deti hai .

Mai-kis ne kaha ki wo aab es duniya mai nahi hai .wo muje mai aaj bhi jinda hai mai to kab ki es duniya se dur jaa chuki hu ye to us ke vichar hai Jo muje khud ke pass nahi aane dete mai to tadap rahi hu us se Milne ke liye es duniya mai na sahi to us duniya mai hi sahi per mai use khud se alag kabhi nahi hone dungi.(aur us ke aakho mai aashu ki do bunde girne ko huwi.)

Sorry-sorry mai ro nahi rahi thi sacchi chaho to rashmi se puch lo rash I bol na ki mai ro nahi rahi thi nahi to ye mere se naraj ho jayega please bol na .(ek photo ko aapne hato mai liye huwe wo rashmi ki taraf badi .)

Rashmi-mai kya bolu wo khud janta hai ki us ki Jungli billi us se kabhi jhut thode bolegi.aab chal dinner ka time ho gaya.

Mai-tu ja muje bhuk nahi hai .

Rashmi-thik hai to mai Arvind ko bol deti hu.

Mai-Nahi nahi us se kuch mat bolna nahi to WO mere se naraj ho jayega.chal chalte hai .

WO waha se nikal gayi us ke jate hi us room mai ek ladke ne entry ki.

Ladka-Rashmi ye sab kya tha .

Rashmi-ye jaane ke liye thume hamara atit janna hoga .

Baat 5saal pehle ki hai .hum dono ne yaha ke sabse acche college mai addmission liya tha .wahi muje ravi mila us ke dad ek businesses the aur kaffi paise wale bhi.

Tum to jante hi ho ki mai ek meddile class family se belong kerti hu college ki fees bhi Reet ne hi bhari thi meri .to muje us mai mera aane wala kal dikhne laga muje lagne laga ki yahi hai WO Jo meri meri jindgi ko khusiwo se bhar dega Jo meri her iccha ko puri karega.

Ladka-to kya ye sab usi ke karan huwa ravi ke .

Rashmi-Nahi WO to sirf ek jariya tha .

Ladka-kya matlab thumara .

Rashmi-Maine jald hi Ravi ko aapne pyar ke jaal mai fasa liya kam se kam muje to yahi laga .dheere dheere hamara pyar pure college mai kisi se nahi chupa .phir kya tha jab mere bare mai reet ko pata chala to us ne Jo hungama kiya mai aaj bhi soch ker pagal ho jati hu .per kisi tarah Maine use mana liya per dheere dheere muje reet mai kuch change dikhne laga jaise ki use canteen mai Jana bilkul bhi pasand nahi tha per wo aab lagatar canteen ke chakker lagane lagi thi .Maine us se kaffi puccha per us ne muje kuch nahi bataya phir ek din Maine us ke phone mai us ki Photo dekhi aur sab samaj aa gaya.

Ladka-kis ki photo Story to interesting hai please aage batawo na .

Rashmi-Arvind ki dekhne mai normal tha per us ki ek khasiyat thi ki wo dil ka bahut saff tha sirf aapne kam se hi kam rekhta tha .per shaitan bhi bahut tha us ke ass pass rehne wale kabhi bhi dukhi nahi rehte the sabhi haste muskurate rehte the .college ke sabhi ladke aur ladkiya us pe khud se Jada vishwash kerte the ek tarah se kuch na hote huwe bhi wo sabhi ke liye bahut mayne rekhta tha .

Ladka-ye Kahi WO hi to nahi jis ki picture ander hai .

Rashmi-ha ye wahi hai Reet us ke taraf attrack hone lagi thi phir use pata hi nahi chala ki kab WO us se pyar kerne lagi .aab to had hi ho gayi WO roj aapni class miss ker ke canteen mai us ka wait kerti aur jis din WO nahi aata aapni roni se shakal le ker wapas ghar aa jati aur ghar ke saman pe aapna gussa nikalti.

Ladka-to es mai ravi ka kya role hai.


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Rashmi-Aise hi din gujre lage aab muje bhi ravi se pyar ho gaya tha per us ke ghar wale hamare rishte se bilkul bhi khus nahi the aisa muje ravi ne kaha tha .per aab mai sach mai ravi se pyar kerne lagi thi to hum ne ghar se bhagne ka faisla kiya .

Ladka-tum to bahut hi bahadur ho.

Rashmi-(us ke taraf dekhte huwe ek fiki se Muskan dete huwe)us din hum canteen mai baithe ye hi discuss ker rahe the ki ghar se kaise bhage aur kya kya le ker a aye etc .reet to Arvind ko dekhne mai hi khoyi huwi thi isliye hame us ki koi parwah nahi thi .hum aabhi aapna plan bana hi rahe the ki kisi ne hamare table pe ek dam se aa ker ek jordar haath mara mai to dar hi gayi jab Maine us ke face ki taraf dekha to meri aakhe fati ki fati reh gayi .

Ladka-oh koi bhoot hoga ha na.

Rashmi-very bad joke.WO Arvind tha aur bahut gusse mai tha .

Arvind-Tum log aapne Aap ko samajte kya ho .

Ravi-Dekh mere mamle se dur reh nahi to accha nahi hoga.waise kya galat ker rahe hai hum Jo tu itna bhadak raha hai .

Arvind-tum log pyar ko sirf badnam ker rahe ho agar tum pyar ko jara sa bhi samajte to tum kabhi bhi aapne ghar se bhagne ki nahi sochte .

Ravi-kyu es mai galat kya hai .

Arvind-Kyu es ki jindgi kharab ker raha hai .aur tum jisse pyar samaj rahi ho WO sirf ek fashion ka simble hai aur kuch nahi .

Rashmi-mere pyar ko bezzat kerne ki thumari himmat kaise huwi mai use aapne dilo jaan se pyar kerti hu.

Arvind-Accha aur un logo ka kya Jo thume dilo jaan se pyar kerte hai .kya wo thumare jindgi mai koi mayne nahi rekhte ya WO sirf aaj tak thumari jarurat rahe hai jinhe tum aapne hisab se use kerti rahi ho aur aab kam khatam hone ke baad sab khatam the end.

Us ki bate kadvi jarur thi per sacchi thi aur seedhe mere dil pe asar ker gayi mai kisi mujrim ke tarah us ke samne aapne garden jhukaye khadi thi .

Ravi-to kya pyar kerna galat hai .

Arvind-bilkul nahi per kisi ke pyar ke liye aapno ke pyar ko dhoka dena kya sahi hai .Agar tum ESE sach mai pyar kerte to ESE kabhi bhi ghar se bhagne ke baat nahi kerte .aur tum tumne kabhi socha ki kyu ravi ke gharwalo ne thume aapnane se mana kiya .

Rashmi-kyu ki hum middel class family se hai.

Arvind-aur ye thume kaise pata .

Rashmi-wo wo Maine guess kiya.

Arvind-wah kya soch hai hey upper wale kya jodi banayi hai ek andha aur ek kodi.jab akal bat rahi thi us samay kya bhais charane gayi thi .

Muje aaj bhi yad hai us ki es baat per pura canteen hasne laga tha aur bhi us ki yahi khasiyat thi ki WO kabhi kisi ko nirash nahi kerta tha.

Arvind-tum dono samaj nahi rahe ho thumare es kadam se tum dono ki family barbad ho jayegi aur mere se acchi tarah koi nahi janta ki aakele rehne ka dard ka kya hota hai .yakin mano jindgi maut se battar ho jati hai .

Ravi-per hum ek dusre se dur nahi reh shakte.

Arvind-kyu chumbak laga hai kya .tumne aapne ghar pe baat ki hai .

Ravi-nahi.

Rashmi-per tum mere ko to bol rahe the ki tum ne baat ki thi aur unhone mana ker diya.

Ravi-nahi muje pata hai ki mere ghar wale nahi manege.

Arvind-WO mane bhi kyu tum kaun ho thumari pechan kya hai .aaj tum khud un ke bharose ho jab tum kisi kabil ban jawo tab un se baat kerna mera vishwash hai ki WO na nahi karege .aur tum Jo es ke saath bhagne ko taiyar thi kanji socha hai ki ghar se bhagne ke baad tum dono kya karoge .aab please ye mat kehna ki hum ek dusre ke pyar ke sahare jee lete aur aapne pyar ki ek alag duniya basa lete kyu ki aisa sirf movies mai hota hai real life mai nahi samji .

To meri mano tum dono ek dusre ki family ko samajne ki koshish karo aur tum pehle es kabil ban jawo ki koi thume aapni beti de sake phir saath rehne ki sochna samje.

(Rashmi) -us ne thode gusse se thode pyar se hame WO samja diya Jo shayad Jo aaj ki hamari life style ka sabse bada kadva sach hai.us ne kai jingdiga barbad hone se baccha le .us din us ke liye khub taliya baji aur us mai sabse aage thi hamari reet us ki khusi to dekhne layak thi .

Ladka-aab samja usi din reet us se mile hogi aur wo reet ke khubsurati ka kayal ho gaya hoga ha na.

Rashmi-nahi kash ye itna asan hota WO kehte hai na ki khubsurati dekhne wale ke aakho mai hoti hai .us ne to reet ko dekha bhi nahi aur waha se chala gaya .us ke baad to ye pagal ho gayi tab muje hi indono ko milwana pada aur mai aaj bhi aapne us faisle pe gilty feel kerti hu ki na Maine ja ker Arvind ko Reet ki felling batayi hoti aur na hi ye dono milte aur na hi aaj
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Mr. Alias

Ise Jine ka koi haq nehi




Ise Jine Ka Koi Haq Nehi





Doctor ke chamber se nikalne ke waqt mere pair jaise patthar ke ban gaye the!!!! Bachpan se main kabhi sharab ko muh nehi lgaya, ciggratte kabhi chua tak nahi, or mujhe hai ye ghatak bimari!!! Doctor ne mera scan report hath mai lete hue bahut gambhirta ke saath mere taraf dekha or kaha.’


“ Kya aap akele aye hain yahan par? koi rishteydar ya dost hai aap ke saath?”

Dur dur tak risto ka naam par meri bas ek budi maa hai, jo gaon main rahti hai. Wo aankh se andhi hai or padosi ke sahare jee rahi hai. Main bas paise bhejta rahata hu or kabhi kabar saal main ek ya do baar chala jaata hun maa ko dekhne ki liye. Padosi bhi mere thoda bahut paise ke karan hi mere maa ka khuch dhyan rakhti hai, jis din mera paisa bhejna bandh, usi din meri maa ko khana dena bandh kar degen ye giddh log.


Maa ko dekhu bhi to kaise, unki haalat ab dekhi nehi jaati mujhse. Main jo do paise bacha leta hu, saal me ek kapda or ghar ke maramat main wo kharch ho jaate hai, to unke aankh ka operation ke paise ka jugaad karna mushkil hi nehi, na-mumkin hai.


Aur rahi dost ki baat, kabhi apne kisi garib ka dost dekha hai? Paisa nehi to dost bhi nahi. Apne jivan ke 40 saal lagatar jindagi ke bhhag dodh main kabhi dost ya dushmani, pyaar mohabbat ka time hi nahi mila.


Lekin, meri ram kahani se Doctor ko kya matlab.

Meine apna gardan hila kar unhe na kaha.

“ Apke liver main cancer hain.Mujhe dukh ke sath kahna pad raha hai, ke ye advanced stage mein hai or aapke paas medical science ke hissab se jada samay nehi hai. Lekin aap himmat na haro, bahut kuch hai jo abhi hum logon ke samajh se pare hai, aap kuch alternative medicine try karke dekho.”


“Doctor sahab, kya chemotherapy ya fir ray de kar kuch ho nehi sakta?”
Jindagi ki chahat aisi hoti hai, koi bhi jindagi se juda nahi hona chahta, main bhi jeena chahta tha, kisi bhi keemat par. Apni chair se khade ho kar maine doctor ka haath pakad lia tha, ek gujarish thi meri ankhon mein, kuch bhi kar ke mujhe jindagi ka daan de do.


Doctor sahab ne apna chehra latkaye hue bina kuch bole apne haath se mere hath ko tham liya.Main samajh gaya or apne vajan ko apni kanpti tango se khichte hue unke chamber se nikal aya.


Maut bina kuch kahe aa jaye to pata hi nahi chalta aur na hi koi ahsas ya dukh janam leta hai, par vahi maut jab dastak de kar dhire dhire rengti hui aati hai to pal pal bache hue lamhen jeene aur bhi bhari pad jaate hain.
Ankhon mein andhera sa cha gaya tha, pal pal aati hui meri maut ne meri ankhon ko nam kar daala tha, ansuon se bhari meri ankhen mujhe dhudalke mein apni maa ke chehre se rubaru karwa rahi thi. Mere bina wo bhukh se tadap tadap kar maregi, isse achcha hoga agar main ja kar unka gala daba du, kam se kam wo takleef to kam hogi!!!


Dekha jaaye to ek jinda laash ki tarha jee raha tha main, na koi umang, na koi prasanta,na hi kabhi kisi nashe ka sevan kiya, aur na hi jindagi ne kabhi kuch bhogne ka moka diya. Bas do paise kamane mein sara waqt nikal jaata ek khud jeene ke liye rakh leta aur ek maa ke liye bhej deta.




Aati hui maut pal pal bata rahi thi meri jindagi ka diya jald bhuj jaayega, dukh ke sagar mein gote lagata akela in lehron se jhujta hua main apni sochon mein gum park mein ek kone mein baith gaya , taaron ki timtimati kirne mujh pe gir rahi thi, par mujhe unka ahsas hi na ho raha tha.


“ Ae saale, yaha kya kar raha hai be?”

security officer hawaldar ne meri garden daboch jor se jathka diya. Dard se bilbilate hue main yatharth mein pahunch maafi ki guhar lagane laga.

“ Saab, main to sirf yaha baitha hu”

“ Ye teri Biwi ki godh hai kya be, ke jee chaha baitha raha? Chal bhag, raat main yaha baithna mana hai”


Mujhe park se nikal kar hawaldar khaini malte hue chala gaya andhere ka labh lete hue do premi jode ke taraf, paisa ainthne apni aesh ke liye.


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Mujhe bahot gussa aya. Gussa aya us hawaldar ke upar, wo timtimati roshni ke upar, wo corner ke bench ke upar jis se dhakke de kar mujhe nikala gaya, wo premi jode ke upar, ye duniya ke upar or sabse jada gussa aya us uparwale ke upar, jisne mujhe jindagi to di, magar use jine ka haq nehi diya.


Apni jindagi to main jee nehi paya, lekin main marunga to apne tarike se. Main dard ke maare bistar main let kar tadap tadap kar dam todne wale main se nehi hu, main apne tarike se ek hi lamhe main dam tod dunga, lekin usse pahle main apne maa ki jaan apne haath se lunga. Use main jindagi mein kabhi sukh na de saka, kam se kam maut ki takleef to kam kar sakta hun.




Mere kiraye ke ghar ke piche sahar ka sabse badnaam ilaka tha. Jahan par paisa fenko to kuch bhi mil sakta tha. Mainne pehle ATM jaa kar apne jivan ki sari kamai or agle barsaat ke pehle ghar ki marammat ke lie rakha hua sara paise nikal lia. Jab agle barsat tak gharwala hi nahi rahega, to ghar kaisa?


Andhere main kisi bhayanak jungle ki tarha vo ilaka railway track ke dono taraf faila hua tha, main vahan chala gaya aur jab lota to, ahkbaar me lipta hua mera sabse pehla or akhri dost mere hath mein apni neend tutne ka intezar kar raha tha. 6 goli ka vo revolver mujhe or meri maa ko iss dukh or dard bhari dunia se dur le jane wala tha kisi sachche dost ki tarha.


‘ Main aapki pair padti hu, mujhe chod dijiye. Mere pati mujhe apne ghar le jaane ke liye taxi lane gaye hai, vo abhi loutenge. Please, bhagwan ke lie mujhe chod dijiye”


Andhere main kisi ladki ki ye awaj samne ke kothi se aayi, or saath main kisi aadmi ki bhari bharkam aawaj.


“ Chal Rand, tera pati mujhse bees hazar rupiya le kar tujhe yaha chod gaya hai suhag raat manane ke liye. Tu to bahut lucky hai be, tujhe har raat naya pati milne wala hai.:


Ye to is muhalle ka aam baat hai.Har roz yaha aisa kuch hota hi rahta hai. Agar ye koi aam raat hoti, to main muh chupa kar yaha se nikal leta. Lekin aj to baat alag hi hai. Jo maut se nahi darta, wo kisi se nahi darta.


Darwaje ko dhakka dekar main ghar ke andar jaa kar khada ho gaya. Andar saree main kisi tarha lipti hui ek ladki patte ke tarha kaanp rahi thi, our samne nashe main dhut ek badmash use ched raha tha. Ek mota sa insan apne chaddi baniyan main sofe pad baitha us ladki ko ankhon hi ankhon se chat raha tha.

‘Kya re, tu keya yahan iski nath utarne aaya hai? Iski booking apne minister saab ke sath ho chukki hai, tu dusri try kar le”


Gandi juban hilate hue wo janwar mere taraf badha. Meine newspaper se apna revolver nikal kar pahele wo ladke par or uske baad sofe par baithe hue us minister ke naam par desh ke kalank par che ki che goli khali kar di. Mera revolver se wo goli nahi nikli thi, nikla tha to mere man me jama hua itne dino ka gussa, mera na-kamyabi ka frustration or mere tute hue sapno ka dard. Khoon se lath-path vo dono apne jagah hi dher ho gaye.


Ladki ki halat daar ke mare bahot hi kharab ho gayi thi. Mere man main achanak ek nasha sa fail gaya. Jeevan main paheli baar dusre ke lie kuch kar ke mera man ne itna anand mehsus kia ke byaan karna mushkil hai. Mera dimag abhi shant nahi hua tha, Kuch aisa karna tha ke is tarah ka kaam karne ke pahle admi dubara soche. Main us duniya ko kuch dena chahta tha jisne mujhe kuch na dia. Meine ghar ke kone me rakhe table se ek paper ka tukda uthaya or usme un dono ke khoon se likhkha, “ ise jine ka koi haq nehi” Meine us kagaz ke tukde ko unki bejaan laash ke upar rakhkar us ghar se nikal gaya.







Agle din,Newspaper main neta ji ke katal ki badi charcha thi. Sahar ki badnaam gali main payee gaya unka shav aur us par likhkhi gayi us likhawat ne case ko our pechida bana dia tha. Rulling party wale ise opposition ki conspiracy aur opposition wale unki mrityu ka shok prakat karte hue unke jivan shaili our jurm ki duniya ke saath unke sambandh ko lekar sawal utha rahe the. Dinbhar ye chrcha TV main ayi, our main bahut hi rochakta our umeed ke saath din bhar wo sab khabre our unke analysis pe nazar rakhta gaya. Zindagi main pahli bar kisi aur ki jubaan par mere kaam ka charcha tha, aur bura ho ya bhala, mujhe bahut maza aa raha tha.
Jada tar log us minister ke atyachar se pareshan the, our vo unke marne se khush the. Achanak mere jeevan ke bache kuche dino ko ek laksh mil gaya our maine apne saath hue har ek anay ka hissab lene ka faisla kar liya. Maine bahut hi pyar se apne paas rakhkhe hua revolver par hath rakhkha.


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Saat din aur beet gaye aur dus samaj ke kide apne karmo ka fal bhugat chuke the. Achanak corrupt politician or ghuss lete hue sarkari affsaron main jaise kapkapi suru ho gayi thi. Main in saat dino main nyay ka ek Prateek, ek ankh ban chukka tha. Samaj ko apna batman, apna superman mil chukka tha. Main andhere main rah kar andher ka shikar kar raha tha, aur harek shikar ke upar apna signature mark wo kaagaz ka tukda jarur chodta tha, jisme likhkha tha’ Ise jine ka koi haq nehi”. Main bahut chalaki se har ek black market ki dukan se ghuma fira kar golia kharid raha tha, taaki kisi ko mere upar shaq na aa jaye.




Meri haalat tezi se bigad rahi thi. Ab har ek khansi ke saath khun nikal raha tha.Mere paas jada time nehi tha. Main jaldi se jaldi jitna jada ho sake darindo ko maut ke ghat utarna chahta tha, taaki baki log sudhar jaye our apne jine ka haq sabit kar sake.


Andhere main dur se ek auto aa kar gali ke paas rukha. Mujhe pata tha ke is ilake main drugs ka vyapar faila hua tha, our main un haramzado ko aaj apna shikar banana ki aas liye andhere main chup kar unka intezar kar raha tha.


Auto se teen nojowan nashe main dhut ho kar ladkhate hue utar kar age badne lage. Piche se autowala awaj dia;

“ Are o bhaisaab, auto ka kiraya kon dega?”

Teeno mud kar auto ke paas laut kar gaye.

:Bhodsi ke, tu hum se kiraya vassul karega? Janta hai hum log kon hain?”

“ Saab, aap jo bhi ho, garib ka paisa dete hue jao, warna naatija achcha nahi hoga.”

“Kya ukadh lega tu mera?” Un mein se ek ladka autowale ka collar pakad kar use auto se bahar le aya. Autowala bhi ek nadaan ladka tha, vo bhi un teeno badmaso se mara-mari karne laga.


Achanak ek ladka apne jeb se pistol nikal kar autowale ke pet main laga kar goli chala dia. Khoon mein lathpath autowala raste main gir gaya aur vahin par dam tod dia.

“ Shit yaar, tune goli chala di????” Ghabra kar ek ladke ne kaha.

“ Chal yaar, patli gali se nikal lete hai.” Teeno ulte taraf bhagna suru kar dia. Achanak ek ladka kuch dur se wapas aya or uss autowale ka upor jhuk kar kuch kiya or fir se bhagne laga.


Wo teeno mere nishane main tha. Lekin ye ghatna itni achchanak hui ke pathar sa khada hakka-bakka reh gaya or wo ladke mere najar ke samne se bhag gaye.


Main lahu luhan us autowale ke karib aya, aur jo dekha us se mera ankho ke samne mano andhera sa cha gaya.



Lahu luhan raste main ek ladka jo abhi puri tarha jawan bhi nahi hua tha ,apni aakhri sans le chukka tha aur uske shav par ek kagaz ka tukda laga hua tha jisme likhkha tha ke’ Ise jine ka koi haq nahi”


Main bahut der tak raste main khada raha, us autowale ke lash ke saath.Wo shav jaise mere taraf dekh kar keh raha tha ke “dekh tera karmo ka natiza.”


Main dhire dhire apne jeb se paper ka ek tukda nikala kar uspe apne kampte hue hath se likhkha ke’Ise jine ka koi haq nehi”. Use apni jeb main rakhkar revolver nikalkar apni kan patti main rakhkha. Agar is dunia main jine ka haq sabse kam kisiko hai to wo sirf main hu, sirf main our dushra koi nahi.


 

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Dill K Derwazey


Who dil ki surgery ka jana mana Doctor tha. Usey yaad nai tha k us ney ab tuk kitney marijon ki heart surgery ki ho gi. OT main dakhil hotey hi hasb e mamool who hello Hi k liey mareez ki traf berha.

Doctor ko herat hui Mareez ka response deikh k jo k us se bhi zyada purzosh nikla. Mareez k chehrey se zara bhi yeh tasir nahi mill raha tha k who surgery kraney aaya hai who bhi dill ki.

Shahid esi baat se Doctor ko herat hui ho gi. Aam tor per yahan jo bhi mareez aatey hn, Mout ka khouf un ki aankhon se zhalak raha hota hai. Baat krney ka lehja toota phoota aur bey jaan hota hai. Umeed aur na Umeedi, Yakeen aur bey yakeeni k miley juley Takleef deh ehsasaat chehron per likhey hotey hn.

Lekin yeh ajeeb aadmi tha Mout k kinarey per khara tha lekin muskura raha tha. Koi tou baat hai? Doctor soch raha tha. Intehayee mahir Heart surgon honey k bawejood us k nazdeek dill ka operation ek kisam ka Muskil kaam tha, jis main jeet aur haar ka imkaan her waqt rehta hai.

Yahan zara si bhi ghalti aur ghaflat ki gunjaish nai hoti. Aesay moqon per doctors mareezon ko Zindagi ki Umeed dilate hn. Un ka hosla berhatey hn, Inhey Operation k liey ready krtey hn lekin shaid us k purey career main pehli baar aesa hua tha keh usey aaj es ki zaroorat hi mehsoos nai hui ja phir mareez ko es ki zaroorat thi hi nai.

Doctor ko herat hui tou mareez ki traf mutwajah hua.

Doctor: Kia aap ko pata hai k aap k dill ka valve band hai?,,
“G haan! Main tou dill k valve ko Dill ka derwaza kehta hoon”. Mareez ne muskuratey huey kaha tou Doctor usey herat se deikhney laga. Usey yeh saksh waqiey hi dilchasp laga tha.

“Chaliey tou phir mein yun kehta hoon k aap k Dill ka derwaza band hai mein usey kholney ja raha hoon ya ho sakta hai tabdeel hi krna parey”. Doctor ne bhi muskuratey huey kaha aur Mareez k sath thoda bey takalluf honey ki koshish ki.

Mareez ne pehley Doctor ki traf deikha phir bola. “Kia aap mujhey bata saktey hn k yeh derwaza band kiun hua hai? Halankeh mein tou isay hamesha khula rakhta hoon ya yun keh lein k kam az kam isay khula rakhney ki koshish zaroor krta hoon”. Mareez ne kaha.

Who kesay? Doctor k labon pe muskurahat thi. OT main es kisam ki ghftagu us ki zindagi ka pehla moqa tha.


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Deikhein.,, Mareez ne zara si gehri saans li aur bola. Kisi ko gham zada aur preshan deikhta hoon tou Ehsaas ki lehar kisi rukawat k bagheir sidhi dill main uterti hai. Ager Derwaza band ho tou kia aesa ho sakta hai? Kitney bhi zaroori kaam se ja raha hoon, kisi zakhmi ko sadak pe tadaptey deikhta hoon tou mera dill bhi tadapney lagta hai.

Us ki madad kiey bagheir mujh sey ek kadam aagey berha nai jata. Kisi beemar dost k bed pe phoolon ka guldasta rakhney main meri pehal hoti hai. Apney Rishtey daron, Behan bhaion aur azeezon ko kisi bhi sermindagi se bachaney ki her mumkin koshish krta hoon.

Kayee Log merey pass apna Ehtamad gum kr jatey hn lekin mein phir un ko lota deta hoon. Bachon se dour lagatey huey jaan bujh k haar jata hoon.

Ek roz aesa laga k mujhey kisi sey pyaar ho gya hai Us k liey na janey kitney julm sahey us ko her who khushi di jo who mujh se chahti thi us k naaz uthaney k wastey mein roz pedal uni jata jo k ghar se 3 KM door thi takeh patrol k pesay bacha sakun.

Apney aap ko bhool k apni Pocket Money us k liey sambhal k rakhta aur us ki her fermaish puri krta jab Job lagi tou us main se aadha hisa us k liey jama krta Lekin meri kismet jab mein us ki badi fermaish puri na kr saka tou chor dia.

Lekin mayoosh tub bhi nai hua her roz esi umeed k sath jeeta tha k us ko Ehsaas ho jaey ga merey pyaar ka 10 saal us ki yaad aur us k intezaar main guzaar diey ab bhi mayoos nai hoon khush rehney ki koshish krta hoon apney chahney walon ko maloom nai perhney deta k mein ander se kitna zakhmi hoon.

Mein ne apni Khuwaish ko itna uncha nai honey dia k mujhey merey apney dikhney band ho jaen.
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Yeh sab Dill ka derwaza khula rakhney ki koshish nai tou aur kia hai? Sachi baat yeh k meri in koshishon ka dill ne bht sath dia hai. Phir achanak mujh per apney derwazey band kr leney ka dill ka faisla samjh main nai aa raha”. Mareez ne kaha aur Doctor ki traf deikha jo herat se us ki traf deikh raha tha.


Doctor k pass un baton ka koi jawab nai tha ager hota tou who deta.

Operation kamyaab hua aur kuch dinon baad mareez ki chutti ka waqt aa gya. Doctor khaas tor per usey hospital k derwazey tuk chorney aaya. Hath milatey huey us ne Mareez se kaha.

Doctor: “Aap k dill k derwzey ek dam badal diey gaey hn. Hum ne her trhah se aap ka khyaal rakhney ki koshish ki hai. Mujhey yakeen hai k hamarey staf ne aap ko shikayat ka moqa nai dia ho ga”.

Mareez muskuraya aur bola.

Mareez: “Baqi sab tou theek hai lekin eham baat tou mein aap ko btana hi bhool gya”.

Who kia? Doctor ne poucha.

“Doctor shahb, Dill k derwazey per ek baat likhwana thi mager na janey kiun us waqt mujhey aap se kehna yaad kiun nai raha”. Mareez ne hasrat bharey lehzey main kaha.

Likhwana tha….Kia likhwana tha?,, Doctor ek baar phr herat ki tasveer bana hua tha.

Bohat acha hota k aap dill ka derwaza tabdeel krtey waqt yeh elfaaz likh detey keh “Yahan pyaar ka dakhla manah hai. Merey khyaal mein merey dill k derwazey ko sab se zyada nuqsaan yaheen se pouncha hai jo mein kisi ladki se kr beitha mager kheir………”. Mareez ne baat aduri chori aur doctor ka sukriya ada kr k gadi main beith k chala gya.

Doctor Muskuraya aur khud se bola. “Tum jesay logon k sarey valve band ho jaen mager dill k derwazey kabhi band nai ho saktey… Gud luck Mr. Patient…….”.

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