Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
What should I write?
What kind of reaction should I show?
What impression did the last episode make on me?

To be honest, I don't know either !!!

The impact of the accident that happened to Krish could play a major turning point in Krish's decisions 
and actions.
I think he will come to his senses and narrow down the scope and (almost unlimited) freedom he gives 
and allows Desai. Maybe even put an end to it.

That depends on the extent of his injury and how much he is handicapped in his activities and actions.
Does he need care for a certain period of time or are his injuries minor that he can get up and continue
immediately?

I think it makes him face the question much more clearly; 

can he bear the loss of Meera to Desai or someone else?
Or;
will he realise that a life with Meera (as his great love, wife and partner) is much more important and 
significant to him than his shenanigans and momentary fantasies?!

This accident could therefore lead to his eyes being opened and he begins to see certain things 
(the relationship in his married life!) more clearly.

What role will Nidhi play in this?
Will she perhaps, through her periodic meetings and the sexual act with Sundeep, indirectly contribute 
(Krish is known to be jealous of these meetings "even if it is not oversized"!)
to his jealousy regarding Desai's intermezzos with Meera becoming more severe than his sharing fantasies...?

Many questions, many ways but one decision...

But which one?...

In this sense
All the best 

Lollobionda
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(06-10-2022, 03:00 AM)Paul5 Wrote: I think may be  i am not capable to do any comments

As fan's, I think it is better to comment than to remain indifferent and distant.
That is the claim and also the respect we show to the author for his work.
Even if we "don't always!" agree with his decisions, "Meera & Krish's" story 
remains unique and one of the best...

Take care, friend

Lollobionda
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I think now Meera will realize how desperate Krish is to see Meera and Desai in the act and now she will fulfill his desire. Krish will be bedridden for some time and to soothe him Meera and Desai will have sex in presence of him.
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(06-10-2022, 10:58 PM)kishen Wrote: I think now Meera will realize how desperate Krish is to see Meera and Desai in the act and now she will fulfill his desire. Krish will be bedridden for some time and to soothe him Meera and Desai will have sex in presence of him.

Exactly what i am thinking would be the outcome. He will suffer fracture but nothing major but his wish will be fulfilled.
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This is the first time krish is getting hurt physically. He was  Mentally and emotionally hurt when Meera had sex with Das in front of krish after she saw him with Ananya. Meera was devastated and broken after hurting krish like that. Dont know how will she react after seeing krish being physically injured. She has burden of what happened to Shekar and her office colleague getting killed in car accident in drunk and drive. What will happen to her when she will know that krish had fallen from 2 stored trying to watch her when she was enjoying with desai. Meera is known to take drastic steps when such a thing happens. What drastic step will she take now?

Still there is more to say but the update has too many things and will take time to digest. Meera and Desai had something happening without krish's knowledge. the bean bag might have some hidden secrets. Desai and Meera lied to krish that they did not do anything in his absence but in bathroom they revealed that they did something on bean bag when they were in hotel. 

Krish for the first time showed his inner feeling when he showed anger when Meera and Desai met in hotel without him and told them that he felt betrayed. Meera and desai apologised but did not take it seriously. Krish took it seriously thats why he rejected desai offer of phone call when he will be with Meera. Meera on that other hand know krish will go further in his fantasies if she revels what Desai does to her and she wants Meera/Krish's future to be together...  

Desai is clearly using things for his advantage and make sure his gets everything. He is directly asking krish what krish will offer if he will make krish watch their act. He wants to take meera to his home town and spend time like family with her in mango farms. He wants to take her to foreign tour and have honeymoon time in beach. He has already planned to send krish away (to mumbai for new branch) from meera for months and told clearly to krish that he will be with meera when krish is away. Desai also wants krish to take Maithrai along so that krish is busy with her so that he can have undisturbed time with meera. So desai is showing his true colours but krish and meera and caving in his plans.

What made this story different form all cuckold stories is that the couple Meera and Krish. Many came and may gone; they separated but still were with each other; they cared for each other even when they were separated. Krish and Meera had a different bond with each other. But in this part krish has gone past their love and deep into his cuck fantasies. This is perfectly suiting desai. No character like Desai has entered their life. This is the first time they have involved someone so deep into their life and this is the first time krish is physically injured. how serious is his injury we dont know yet but we will get where story is moving after this accident.

Meera/Krish might drastically change after this injury and can go in any way. 
  1. They will get get away from all that is happening and stay together. 
  2. They might go ahead and do what they want like Meera will buckle to krish;s wish and will have sex in front of krish with desai due to his injury concern
  3. Krish and Meera will be too devastated to think anything and desai will use it to his advantage and help the couple in this difficult time and sleep with meera more and more and fulfil Krish;s fantasies by talking him into it.
  4. Desai will make Krish and Meera another Ananya/Sam. (hope this never happens)
But the way things are going, life ahead is too difficult to Krish and Meera. Looks like there will be more heart breaking future updates for Krish and Meera and to few of us who wants them together. But for Desai all is going in his favour. He is getting all he wants; not a single negative or bad has happened to desai.

Thanks you Krish for such an wonderfull story but dont turn this in to regular cuck stories...
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Krish is running a security agency. Why he have to take risk to peek into his bed room? A few spy cameras and voice recorders serves the purpose. Do not understand why he is drilling the door for spying and climbing the wall to see. Make no sense to me.
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Yes, Krish also watches his employee's sexual acts on the CCTV camera so ya it does not make any sense that he would not install any spy cam in his house. Even more so when he is so desperate to watch it. At the very least, it should at least come to his mind that one can install cameras in the house as well.  He appears very dumb and often takes dumb decisions which do not make any sense. There is no denying that there are many flaws and gaps in the story but we should accept them as the author's creative freedom. Maybe in his mind, this is the only way he can take this story forward.But, at the end of the day, it is a story and a really good story.
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Now all in hands of meera waiting for next update either it end Desai or end of Krish
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(07-10-2022, 01:19 AM)Vikadakavi Wrote: Krish is running a security agency. Why he have to take risk to peek into his bed room? A few spy cameras and voice recorders serves the purpose. Do not understand why he is drilling the door for spying and climbing the wall to see. Make no sense to me.

Every plot has a reason if Krish ever wants to use CCTV cameras in his bedroom , then how would we know the Krish's intent to Desai as a cuck and Desai's intentions to us? The phone calls and how they want to share the happenings between them shows the growing bond between them all that will be lost. Some times few liberties are ok if those are for the plot to develop.
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There is seriously any love shown from Meera side for Krish at all. She was almost ready to get fucked by Desai without knowledge and presence of Krish. She did with Ashish previously as well. While Krish is completely obsessed with her so much that its way excessive, while she thinks not even shot for him. Even Desai thinks of Krish way more than Meera. This is pure betrayal. If she had so much problems with him being cuckold, she can leave him, but at this point at least it is clear she wants it almost as same as Krish if not more. But in her desires, there is no Krish, while in Krish desires only she is there.
Well kudos to Krish, he atleast spoke up against it. But too little. Bullshit that he always chokes whenever Meera speaks in soft tome or hugs him. That has become a regular cuckold story with cheating wife.

One of the reason its not that enjoyable, because Meera Desai copulation is exciting for the very fact that Meera is doing it for Krish while enjoying herself to the fullest. Not when she is all about herself. It is exciting when Meera and Krish make mistakes here and there, when Meera loses control and does way more.

For this post specifically, sex parts were great as usual, but honestly, kink is getting lost. My suggestion: Bring Meera's love back. Having uninhibited sex in front of Krish, involving Krish, humiliating Krish for his size/cuckoldry, making him eat creampies, etc. will all be great fun only when there is love from her side.

Betrayal could have been fun too but only when there was a strong love. Showing betrayal now looks dull becuase there was never a good love to begin with.

Other readers, kindly don't get frustrated with my opinion. Each to their own.
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It's all about MEERA+ DESAI ACTION,,, and KRISH watching
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(07-10-2022, 03:45 PM)sexvrgame Wrote: There is seriously any love shown from Meera side for Krish at all. She was almost ready to get fucked by Desai without knowledge and presence of Krish. She did with Ashish previously as well. While Krish is completely obsessed with her so much that its way excessive, while she thinks not even shot for him. Even Desai thinks of Krish way more than Meera. This is pure betrayal. If she had so much problems with him being cuckold, she can leave him, but at this point at least it is clear she wants it almost as same as Krish if not more. But in her desires, there is no Krish, while in Krish desires only she is there.
Well kudos to Krish, he atleast spoke up against it. But too little. Bullshit that he always chokes whenever Meera speaks in soft tome or hugs him. That has become a regular cuckold story with cheating wife.

One of the reason its not that enjoyable, because Meera Desai copulation is exciting for the very fact that Meera is doing it for Krish while enjoying herself to the fullest. Not when she is all about herself. It is exciting when Meera and Krish make mistakes here and there, when Meera loses control and does way more.

For this post specifically, sex parts were great as usual, but honestly, kink is getting lost. My suggestion: Bring Meera's love back. Having uninhibited sex in front of Krish, involving Krish, humiliating Krish for his size/cuckoldry, making him eat creampies, etc. will all be great fun only when there is love from her side.

Betrayal could have been fun too but only when there was a strong love. Showing betrayal now looks dull becuase there was never a good love to begin with.

Other readers, kindly don't get frustrated with my opinion. Each to their own.

True... The story has its value when there is love/affection/bonding/adventure and experimentation between Krish and Meera else it is regular cuck or adultery story,,, And after so many years of ups and downs and separation this cannot be a regular story...
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Alright my thoughts are due on this episode. I don't know why i feel obligated to write after every episode maybe reading this story since its inception and liking it so much made me do this as a duty lol
Also frustrated and kind of thinking to read it all together when this story finishes as reading an episode and 2 weeks of waiting is something i do not like but author has to have time to write so cannot blame him and he is better than other authors who left the stories in the middle without an update.


As for the thoughts on this episode i feel like every one is frustrated that story is not moving along and its a repeat mode but i feel like story is actually moving great as things are falling into its place as we are reading episode by episode how Desai is manipulating the couple nicely and smoothly and becoming an integral part of their life and its slowly turning into a marriage that involves 3 people.

My analysis on each character

Desai :

Desai arguably one of the best character ever written on this site or at least i have read, He knows Meera would hate knowing any details on their intimate meetings to Krish but knowing all that why is he sharing the details to Krish. Is it to get more chances or he can feed into his cucky nature? My guess is both but majorly because he can convert Krish into full fledged cuckold so he pushes Meera more and more towards him and eventually end up giving her completely. I would be hugely disappointed if he is really a changed man as these episodes will lose its purpose if that is true so only alternative is Desai's will to get Meera permanently should be the ultimate goal for him making him the villain of this story , the episode with photo in his purse has shown him where things stand as per Meera and Krish and he knows he has not made much progress with Meera as she is right there with Krish and treats Desai still her fuck toy and nothing else so what are Desai's options now so he is planning a trip with Meera and spend more time with her and change her attitude towards him and also towards Krish. His constant questions on his comparison with Krish when Meera is vulnerable under him shows signs of him trying to find a weak spot in Meera and push it harder and so far he didn't find any and Meera wouldn't take anything that humiliates Krish. So what would change Meera? Probably she needs to lose trust on Krish and would that be sufficient? Things point in that direction because our very own hero Krish is a nutcase when it comes to his fantasies , he doesn't care about his wife's wishes and would go any length to get what he wants. Why does he has to hide every thing from her? True love means no secrets isn't it? Yet Krish here doesn't fear that when truth prevails how will it impact his marriage. He was not truthful about phone calls with Desai, he was not truthful about Piyush, He has not come clean about the holes in the doors and now he is caught looking into the window so how will Meera react? She would obvious understand the desperation of Krish but she would also realize for the first time that Krish doesn't care about her wishes and he would simply ignore them and go to any lengths to get what he wants so will she finally decide that she will give him what he wants that means one session with Desai before him and end this affair? We are yet to see about that but back to the point Desai needs to change Meera and her perception towards him as a fuck toy so he is making his effort through his only source that is Krish. He is giving him his branch and making him go away for a month and this time he wants alone time with Meera with out Meera worrying about Krish and make his stand there  so he planted that idea in Krish's brain and next thing he will do is plant another idea that he will give every min details or phone call or video somehow so Krish will feel like he is on the trip with them too or maybe in a different way  but he needs to convince Krish to agree with him that he will meet with Meera when he is not there or his alternative plan could be using Maitreyi on Krish so he would cheat on Meera which would be the ultimate blow to Meera to lose trust on Krish else why would we need Maitreyi on this trip just because she owns the building. So this new branch is definitely a ploy he came up with to make progress but Krish's stupidity could have actually saved him as he is hurt now doesn't know how bad but he might not go to the trip at all now , lets see how Desai's plans will unfold further after new developments and how they will be impacting the couple. He is definitely smart and can adapt to new developments and make it useful for himself.

Meera :

When it comes to women she is always a bitch or a slut huh? Why? Desai's honest answer was maybe they would have ended up having sex in the suite but is it really true? Meera might not have advanced as Desai thinks she would, how come every one jumps on to that conclusion purely based on Desai's claim? She might kiss him but sex i doubt that and don't think she would have given in with out Krish. She wants Krish outside imagining what is happening in the room and she mentioned that is her kick obviously apart from her obsession of the pleasure she gets from making a guy like Desai submissive to her beauty.

On to the plot now next episode is eye opener for Meera on lot of things. Krish obviously will now end up getting caught on what he was doing as they will search for him for dinner and he is unconscious outside their bedroom window with a broken leg lol so how hard will these revelations hit Meera? Meera might initially be worried about Krish and his leg but she will figure out that Krish has grown so much onto his fantasies that he started not caring about her wishes.Krish out of this encounter might come up clean on all the things he is hiding and that could lead to further creating gap between them , this time it would be Meera taking some hard decisions and what would those be? If she decides to end the affair seeing the madness Krish is led into with his own fantasies, will she be able to survive her obsession with Desai and pleasures he gives her on bed? or will she give one last adventure with Krish seeing it this time? Or will she take even drastic steps like agreeing to go to trip with Desai just to spite Krish? Or even worse would she start not caring about Krish anymore and plan on her own with Desai?
Meera mentioned many level to this cuckoldry and she wouldn't reveal of course because she knows well instead of doing good it would in turn make Krish attractive towards the next level and push him towards it.  Is it threesome or maybe him watching live sex between them? Or even more kinky as Krish wants to get dirty ? or even worse Is the next level marriage with Desai for a day or something that keeps popping up now and then?

She is equally smart as Desai and can think a lot on her own and capable of taking control of future , If any one that can take Desai down its Meera of course unless like last part Krish is pushed into some dramatic turn of events and he takes control of his life and wife.
Next Episode could determine lot of turns in the couple's lives.

Krish:

Why? Why? And Why?
Does Krish only think with his dick? Is he not seeing the picture Desai is leading him into?
The moment you know this guy loves your wife and not want to take her somehow don't you think that is big BS? When did ever any human loved someone but did not seek her while fucking her a lot ? Is he a changed man as a cuck or is he changing his wife to accept him as a cuck?
How come one not think about consequences but yet get stunned and shocked by the varying outcomes that could result with your actions? He just got confirmation that Meera doesn't want him to watch because she thinks he will take this to next level and he wants to find the next level and explore it? Why did he still want to do the same thing which your wife has strictly said no , that means as all readers here think that our Krish is so selflessly in love with his wife is not the truth maybe half baked truth but when it comes to his fantasies and his wife he would choose his fantasies over her and at the cost of what? Did he ever think that? Why so much mad confidence that Meera will not leave him ever? At one point she would hate herself and realize that being with him means a world to her as well as also death to her as she will lose herself in his madness.
Is Krish ready to face the consequences , i doubt that but his actions are so silly that he is in no control of his life.

How would it look that you showed so much compassion questioning them and setting rules and then behind their back creep into the window to check on them and show your true nature? If you want transparency in their relationship and they keep him in the loop all the time then doesn't that work same way for Meera? She absolutely need to know that you are getting first hand reports on what is happening from Desai  or his phone calls and major thing you kept secret with Piyush which would come back and bite you big time.
Krish has no play anymore here , he is caught and now ball is in Meera's court and to some extent Desai's as his plan to open an agency in Mumbai is trashed. Will they take any drastic steps? or is it going to fizzle out into another episode of no twists in this long story? If we are talking about only 6 more episodes this would be the one which can turn ugly for the couple and as usual very good for Desai.

As for the writing it is top notch as usual and i wish the episode of Krish watching them could have been lengthy and more visually pleasing than small encounter it came out to be, But KRISH is not known for his long sexual descriptions. He is good with getting us excited with the imagination and anticipation and that alone could match the missing content. I appreciate taking time for us and writing this story.

One thing i would like to suggest is if possible when the story is complete you could talk to us on the varying questions on the characters, other authors do and esp i like the hunt story where author explains his side of thought process about characters.
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Even if krish have sex with mithri Or any other women, I think meera don't have any moral right to question Krish. If she is questioning him, then it will be a hypocrisy. She her self cheated on Krish on her back having sex with Ashish. And krish forgive her. So same rule applies vise versa
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Who knows this can be a DREAM of Krish?
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Some point of time i think this plans made Desai are meera ideas ? Becoz she know the weakness of Krish may b that's y she said no to go with Krish... She want a trip to Desai alone few days or months to enjoy every possible thing that too with permission of this cuck hubby ? She use Krish for her fantasies too? Who knows they r in touch behind Krish.. She knows he loves her so much so she can fool him to believe everything wt she said.. Now is she leave Krish for her desire to fuck Desai or leave Desai for her husband next episode are most imp one for everyone even  for Desai hope author will come as soon as possible
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I personally feel that I am in not position to comment on this part may bee is it too typical I cnt assumed or understand any how waiting for next than i understood the scenes of this part in future hopes next will be soon waiting
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I would also like to think out loud and discuss some clues:

* Krish should (after waking up from unconsciousness) quietly and briskly sneak out of the house and take an Uber to the hospital without informing anyone. 
(Meera and Desai are so busy with themselves that they will only notice Krish's absence the next day)
This would then be important to see from Meera's reaction how much she cared for Krish and how deep her love and respect for him are!

* Krish keeps affirming that he loves Meera more than anything and cannot spend a single day without her.
This is another reason why he should NOT fulfil Desai's plan of "going to Mumbai".

Because the whole thing is simply paradoks ... (The author Krish described this clearly)

Firstly, 
Krish is planning to give up his post and will no longer work for Desai. He has made that clear to him. Therefore, why should he leave his house, wife and town for Desai for several weeks, though he does not plan his future in that company anymore.

Secondly, 
Krish made it very clear to the Dasei that he no longer agrees that he and Meera should not meet if he (Krish) is not there and everything should be done in his presence, otherwise not. 
He (Krish: No, Desai. I feel betrayed) !!

* * *
Krish should (he will have enough time now) go into himself and listen to his inner voice (without manipulation on the part of Desai and unfortunately also Meera) and soberly analyse and question Desai's actions, also Meera's behaviour especially in the last two meetings with Desai.
He must ask himself: what would have happened in the hotel if he had not called at the right moment and not a second later?
Desai (who calls him a friend, which of course is ONLY a calculation!!)) and his beloved wife had no compunction about betraying him and ultimately cheating on him.

* Krish must realise that he is faced with a vital decision and has only two options;
1. go to Mumbai, which would mean losing Meera forever to Desai,
2. stay at home with his beloved wife, stop working with Desai and take up a new professional challenge ...

In this sense 
All the best

Lollobionda
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(09-10-2022, 12:31 AM)Lollobionda Wrote: I would also like to think out loud and discuss some clues:

* Krish should (after waking up from unconsciousness) quietly and briskly sneak out of the house and take an Uber to the hospital without informing anyone. 
(Meera and Desai are so busy with themselves that they will only notice Krish's absence the next day)
This would then be important to see from Meera's reaction how much she cared for Krish and how deep her love and respect for him are!

* Krish keeps affirming that he loves Meera more than anything and cannot spend a single day without her.
This is another reason why he should NOT fulfil Desai's plan of "going to Mumbai".

Because the whole thing is simply paradoks ... (The author Krish described this clearly)

Firstly, 
Krish is planning to give up his post and will no longer work for Desai. He has made that clear to him. Therefore, why should he leave his house, wife and town for Desai for several weeks, though he does not plan his future in that company anymore.

Secondly, 
Krish made it very clear to the Dasei that he no longer agrees that he and Meera should not meet if he (Krish) is not there and everything should be done in his presence, otherwise not. 
He (Krish: No, Desai. I feel betrayed) !!

* * *
Krish should (he will have enough time now) go into himself and listen to his inner voice (without manipulation on the part of Desai and unfortunately also Meera) and soberly analyse and question Desai's actions, also Meera's behaviour especially in the last two meetings with Desai.
He must ask himself: what would have happened in the hotel if he had not called at the right moment and not a second later?
Desai (who calls him a friend, which of course is ONLY a calculation!!)) and his beloved wife had no compunction about betraying him and ultimately cheating on him.

* Krish must realise that he is faced with a vital decision and has only two options;
1. go to Mumbai, which would mean losing Meera forever to Desai,
2. stay at home with his beloved wife, stop working with Desai and take up a new professional challenge ...

In this sense 
All the best

Lollobionda

To be honest I doubt there is anything in Krish's hand now after the fall. It  is a two storey fall and it will be serious. He also went against meera and tried to sneek in.  So the decision will be of Meera now. She is the one who takes firm decisions in their relationship. She is the one who avoids desai and tells krish  when they should meet desai even if krish wants to meet desai early.

She has taken drastic decisions when something bad has happened. I am sure she will take some drastic decision now when krish is injured. The decision may not be against krish because she will never leave krish when he is hurt (specially when he is physically hurt). I dont think she will care what desai thinks or wants or about their sexual intimacy when krish is physically hurt. Even though krish made a mistake to sneak on them, Meera will be with krish to take care of him and think about their life and future. Yes once krish is out of danger then she might think about desai... but until krish is fine she will not think of anything apart from taking care of him...

Desai: What all he has done and behaved till not and what all he has planed till now( manipulating krish and meera; planning to send krish away from meera for a month to mumbai; planning to have a foreign trip with meera for honeymoon and his plan to take meera fir his home town vacation) He is clever and he will understand the situation and will definitely take advantage of this situation. He will forget the sex with Meera and try to impress the couple by taking care of krish and consoling Meera during this difficult time. Once krish is out of danger he will try to spend more time with meera and try to take her away..... Not sure when will Krish and Meera think of their life and future and try to think that desai might be manipulating them instead of thinking that he is a changed man because of them..  They used to always doubt his actions and think or doubt about his every move before; dont know why they started to blindly belive him now. PS: Desai might even have sex with meera in the hospital room where krish is admitted right infront of krish. I doubt Meera will do this. She broke off with Das when she knew that krish was hurt after she had sex with das in front of Das as revenge after she caught Krish with Ananya even when they were in breakup.
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(09-10-2022, 02:31 AM)chutdriller Wrote: To be honest I doubt there is anything in Krish's hand now after the fall. It  is a two storey fall and it will be serious. He also went against meera and tried to sneek in.  So the decision will be of Meera now. She is the one who takes firm decisions in their relationship. She is the one who avoids desai and tells krish  when they should meet desai even if krish wants to meet desai early.

She has taken drastic decisions when something bad has happened. I am sure she will take some drastic decision now when krish is injured. The decision may not be against krish because she will never leave krish when he is hurt (specially when he is physically hurt). I dont think she will care what desai thinks or wants or about their sexual intimacy when krish is physically hurt. Even though krish made a mistake to sneak on them, Meera will be with krish to take care of him and think about their life and future. Yes once krish is out of danger then she might think about desai... but until krish is fine she will not think of anything apart from taking care of him...

Desai: What all he has done and behaved till not and what all he has planed till now( manipulating krish and meera; planning to send krish away from meera for a month to mumbai; planning to have a foreign trip with meera for honeymoon and his plan to take meera fir his home town vacation) He is clever and he will understand the situation and will definitely take advantage of this situation. He will forget the sex with Meera and try to impress the couple by taking care of krish and consoling Meera during this difficult time. Once krish is out of danger he will try to spend more time with meera and try to take her away..... Not sure when will Krish and Meera think of their life and future and try to think that desai might be manipulating them instead of thinking that he is a changed man because of them..  They used to always doubt his actions and think or doubt about his every move before; dont know why they started to blindly belive him now. PS: Desai might even have sex with meera in the hospital room where krish is admitted right infront of krish. I doubt Meera will do this. She broke off with Das when she knew that krish was hurt after she had sex with das in front of Das as revenge after she caught Krish with Ananya even when they were in breakup.

Few disappointments on how story is moving forward

1. Last few chapters are going the way krish thinks with his dick..... It is going exactly how he wants to get aroused. Before other factor had a say. What meera wants,  what she thinks, what other character wants, what people around them think. These all used to influence the story but now its all about what excites krish's which is what his dick feels.

2. Social factors: The author added slight social factor where Venkat saw meera with Desai and raised it with Krish. Meera said she will never ever repeat such a thing but immediately next she went alone with desai to hotel and spent time alone with desai in hotel room. This does not make any sense when she said she will never repeat such a thing. She should have never been alone with desai without krish if she said she will never ever repeat what happened last time.

3. Professional Aspirations: There is no professional update of meera and professional future about krish. Yes krish did mention about leaving desai's security services but there is nothing concrete he is thinking about his professional life. Meera who always wanted krish to be out of desai's shadow in professional matter was silent when krish said desai's offer of pune branch to krish. Ideally she would have opposed it to so that krish is independent.

4. Family, Friends and relatives: There is no mention of family, friends and  relatives except of desai's parents in last few updates. There is no influence or effect of families from Krish and Meera. Yes the last mention was of Meera's mother passing away. But apart from that there is no mention of friends family and caretakers of Meera and Krish.

5. Neighbours and apartment society: So much happening in the house and not anything from neighbours and society. In last society even security guard were watching and had a role. In this society they heard few things when desai had anal sex and lot of noise was there but after nothing.....

6. Nidhi/her mother and boyfriend: What is their role in this story? Till now there is no connection.

Sorry Krish to raise so many things. But just wanted to put down my thoughts.. I dont want them to be in my mind; I just wanted them to be out in the open. I know story writing is not easy. It is a huge task to take all things into consideration. Story writing is an art and a beautiful journey in itself where you keep audience hooked. The amount of comments and discussions you are getting on this story itself speaks for you work. You have an amazing talent to have so many viewers hooked and involved in your story. Thank you for this.
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