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(28-09-2022, 04:14 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Brilliant....

Superb....


Amazing....

Thank you so much..  Namaskar
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(28-09-2022, 05:21 PM)Johnyfun Wrote: Zabardast mast kahani hai

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(28-09-2022, 08:27 PM)Bregs Wrote: superb story in making

updates zaldi zaldi dein

Or kitni jaldi du?
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next update ?
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Update 6

Jaise hi maine ye awaaz suni to mujhe aisa mehsoos hua jaise kisi ne mera dil daboch liya ho.. waise to m leti hui thi par lete hone ke bawajood aisa lag rha tha jaise mere neeche se zameen nikal gyi ho.. kuch bhi samjh nhi aa rha tha ki kya karu.. dil ki dhadkan itni Tezz Ho gyi thi ki aas paas Wale shaks ko aaram se sunayi de jaye.. Asad ka bhi shyad ye hi haal tha.. kyuki hum dono ne razai odhi hui thi isliye ye to clear tha ki humara koi bhi hissa kisi ko dikhayi nhi diya hoga.. par us awaaz ke ye lafz "Kya kar rahe ho tum dono yaha" hmare hosh udane ke liye kaafi the.. ye awaaz sun ne ke baad sabse pahle to maine or Asad ne hilna band kiya.. or 1 sec ke andr andr hi hum dono ne apne kapde jo ki upar gale tak chade hue the wo neeche kiye.. uske baad Asad ne peeche ko hokar dekha to paya ki samne Hadim Bhai khade the jo ki hum dono ko shak bhari nazro se ghoor rahe the.. Mera or Asad ka dil to pahle hi bihar tezz dhadak rha tha.. Asad himmat karke bola..
Asad - Kuch nhi.. hum dono lete hai..
Hadim - kyu lete ho yha.. kya kar rahe ho let kar?
Asad - hum dono aise hi baate kar rahe hai..
Hadim - mujhe pta h ki tum dono kya kar rahe ho.. abhi btata hu sabko.. 

Itna sunte hi meri or Asad ki sitti pitti gum ho gyi.. hmare paas alfaz khtm ho gye jawab dene ke liye.. Asad mere paas se ek dum se utha or uth kar kamre se bahar bhaag gya.. ab waha par main or Hadim Bhai hi khade the or main soch rhi thi ki ab main kya karu.. kyuki meri himmat nhi ho rhi thi uthne ki.. Hadim Bhai wahi par khade rahe or mujhe ghoorte rahe.. Main unki nazre samjh pa rhi thi ki wo bohat zyada gusse main hai.. Or kuch bhi kar sakte hai.. Main himmat karke razai main se uthi or apni chappal pahen kar Hadim Bhai ko cross karti hui kamre se bahar aa gyi.. Mera Dil abhi bhi tezi se dhadak raha tha..
Main kamre se bahar nikli to dekha ki samne hi chulhe par roti ban rahi hai or uske charo taraf hi Nani, Mumani, Khala, Ammi, Sara or Asad baitha hua tha.. sab log aag ki wajah se waha par baithe hue the or apne hath sek rahe the.. Chulhe ki barabar m hi seedi thi jis par Asad chup chap baitha tha... Main Aaram se jakar Asad ki barabar m baith gyi.. Mujhe laga ki shyad Asad ko pta hi nhi h ki Hadim Bhai ne humko badtameezi karte hue dekh liya.. Kyuki agar use pta hota to wo yaha sabse nazre bachata gya phirta par wo to yaha sabke beech m aake baitha hai.. mujhe jab ye baat mehsoos hui to maine socha ki agar ise pta nhi h to main ise bta deti hu.. maine aage badh kar uske kaan ke paas jakar usko bola ki...
Neha - Hadim Bhai ko sab kuch pta chal gya h hmare baare m..
Asad ne khamoshi se bina meri taraf muh kiye Haan m apna sar hilaya.. hmari ye activity ki maine Asad ke kaan m kuch kaha or Asad ne bhi badi samjhdari se bina shor machye sirf haan main gardan hilai ko sabne dekh liya tha.. Kyuki hum chote the to sabko hmari is harqat par hasi aa gyi.. Mumani or Nani boli, kya baate ho rhi h tum dono ke beech main.. hume bhi bta do.. is par Asad ne jawab diya ki kuch nhi, hai kuch aapsi baat.. ye baat sun kar sab hasne lage ki inki bhi aapsi baat hone lagi.. itne main phir se ek awaaz aayi ki "MAIN BTA DETA HU KYA BAAT HUI HAI".. 

Ye sun kar meri phir se jaan nikalne ko ho gyi.. nazar upar krne ki himmat nhi ho rhi thi par phir bhi maine himmat karke upar dekha to Hadim Bhai mujhe or Asad ko dekh kar muskura rahe the.. mujhe unki hasi bhi aaj darawni lag rhi thi.. aisa lag rha tha jaise meri Jaan unke kabze main ho.. Itne me Nani bol padi..
Nani - Puchna to chah rahe the in dono se hi.. par tumko pta h to tum bta do..
Hadim - Kyu Asad or Neha? Bata du kya?
Asad - Nahi..
Nani - Aisi kya baat hai jo humare se chhupai ja rhi hai..
Asad phir se beech m bol pada..
Asad - Hai Koi Aapsi baat..
Ye sun kar sab phirse hasne lage.. Par Hadim Bhai phir se bole..
Hadim - main bta du tumhari aapsi baat?
Nani - nahi rehne do... Asad agar apni aapsi baat btayega to theek hai, nhi to hum nhi puchte..

Nani ke aisa kehne ke baad meri jaan main jaan aayi, or main Ammi ko bol kar ki mujhe neend aa rhi hai, or unse apne sone ki jgah puch kar waha se chali gyi.. Sabne mujhe bohat roka ki khana khakar hi jana par maine unko bol diya ki mujhe bhuk nhi hai or Waha se jakar main bina khana khaye hi so gyi..
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Bahut khoob mazedar kahani ban rahi hai
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(30-09-2022, 11:23 AM)Johnyfun Wrote: Bahut khoob mazedar kahani ban rahi hai

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lagta hai hadim bhi ab maze marega
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#29
story exciting hoti ja rahi hai

family incest hawi hone wala hai

abhi to ghar ke badon ke bhi raaz khulna baki hai
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(30-09-2022, 09:07 PM)Johnyfun Wrote: lagta hai hadim bhi ab maze marega

Guess karte rahiye..
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Text ka font kaise bada karna hai?? Kisi ko pta hai??
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#32
superb story in making

baki ghar walon ko bhi slowly shamil karo
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(01-10-2022, 08:14 PM)Bregs Wrote: superb story in making

baki ghar walon ko bhi slowly shamil karo

Padhte rahiye.. or apka bohat bohat shukriya support krne ke liye..
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#34
Agle update ka intezar hai
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Update 7

Agle din main sokar uthi to sab kuch normal tha.. par halka sa ek Darr bhi dil main baitha hua tha.. jab main uthi tab tak sab uth chuke the.. maine uth kar muh hath dhoya or jaha sab nashta kar rahe the waha baith kar nashta karne lagi.. kisi se zyada baat krne ki himmat nhi ho rhi thi.. Asad bhi mere paas hi baitha hua nashta kar rha tha or uska haal bhi lagbhag meri tarah tha.. Hadim Bhai bhi dusre palang par baith kar nashta kar rahe the or nashta krne ke baad waha se chale gye.. Pura din aise hi nikal gya.. Kyuki jab se Hadim Bhai ne mujhe or Asad ko dekha tha tab se main Asad se bhi doori bna kar rkh rhi thi ki agar Hadim Bhai note bhi kare to unko lage ki ye log ab alag alag reh rahe hai isliye ab kuch nhi karege.. Asad ne to 1-2 baar mere paas aane ki bhi koshish ki lekin main usko ignore krke dusri jgah chali jati thi.. Khair 2-3 din aise hi nikal gye.. 2-3 din ke baad Khalu jee aaye or unke sath hi Hadim Bhai apne gao chale gye.. Unhone meri or Asad ki baat kisi ko nhi btayi thi.. Hadim Bhai ka Nani ke Ghar Kam hi mann lagta tha.. isliye wo kabhi bhi puri chuttiyo m Nani ke Ghar nhi ruke.. Khalu jee ko phone kar karke bula lete the or unke sath hi nikal jate the.. Hadim Bhai ke jane ke baad mujhe bada sakoon mila or aisa lag rha tha jaise ab m azad hu.. Main Asad ke sath time spend karna chahti thi.. lekin ab Asad ne mujhe ignore karna shuru kar diya tha ... M jab bhi uske paas jati to wo uth kar waha se chala jata.. shyad wo mujhse badla le Raha tha kyuki Hadim Bhai ke samne maine usko kafi ignore Kiya tha.. mujhe achha nhi lag rha tha kyuki main soch Rahi thi ki pahle hi kuchh din bache h chuttiyo ke upar se Asad ke nakhro ki wajah se din nikal rahe hai.. Aise hi pura din nikal gya or raat ho gyi.. raat main hum sab khana kha kar razai main let gye.. Sara or Asad ek razai m lete the.. or ek dusre se idhar udhar ki baate kar rahe the.. maine dusre palang par dusri razai m leti hui thi or in dono ko hi dekh rahi thi.. main chhah rhi thi ki Asad aakar meri razai m lete.. par wo meri taraf dekh bhi nhi Raha tha.. Maine Sara ko bola ki Sara tum mere paas aakar let jao.. Par usne bhi aane se mna kar diya or Asad ke paas hi leti rahi.. Jab mujhe laga ki wo log nhi aa rahe h to m khud uthi or Asad ki side m jakar let gyi.. Asad ne mna bhi kiya ki yha jgah nhi h tumhare letne ki.. Par m phir bhi zbardasti unki razai m let gyi.. Asad beech m leta hua tha or uske ek side main or dusri side Sara leti thi.. unki baato ke beech m ab meri bhi entry ho chuki thi or m bhi beech beech m koi baat shuru kar deti thi.. Asad abhi bhi zyada response nhi de Raha tha.. Ab pta nhi mujhe kya sujha ki maine Apna hath razai ke andar se hi Asad ke pajame ke upar se uski Phunno par rakh diya.. Asad Sara ko koi baat bta rha tha par meri is harqat se use ek halka sa jhatka laga or wo Sara ko baat btate btate chup ho gya.. Sara ne usko baat btane ke liye bola ki aage kya hua.. Asad ne haqlaate hue apni baat khtm ki.. Asad ne abhi tak apni phunno se Mera hath nhi htaya tha.. or mujhe Asad ka ghabrana, or itne logo ke beech Mera usko chedna wo bhi kisi ko bina pta lage.. Mujhe bada maza aaya is kaam m.. maine Asad ki phunno ko apne hath se halka halka neeche dabane shuru kar diya.. Main jitna zyada neeche dbati uski phunno utna hi zyada upar ko uth kar aati ... Size ka us waqt mujhe kuchh andaza nhi tha .. par ab Asad bhi normal ho chuka tha ... Wo Sara se lagatar baat kar raha tha or Razai ke andar main apne kaam par lagi hui thi.. Achanak Asad ne mera hath apni pant ke upar se hata diya .. maine bhi socha ki chalo kafi pareshan kar liya, ab bacche ko baksh dete h.. Maine to ye soch kar usko koi harqat nhi ki ... Hmare palang ke upar ek takht beecha hua tha jis par Ammi or Khala Isha ki ,,., padh Rahi thi.. or unki brabar m hi hmara palang tha.. Ab maine to apni chedkhani band kar di thi.. Par pta nhi Asad ko kya hua usne ek dum se meri kameez ke andar mere nange pet par hath rakh diya or ek dum se use sehlane laga ... Main iske liye bilkul taiyar nhi thi... Uske hath ke sehlane se mujhe gudgudi uthi jo m bardasht nhi kar paayi or meri hasi nikal gyi.. or apne badan ko peeche ko karne lagi... Meri hasi ki awaz sunte hi Asad ka muh ajeeb sa ho gya.. Meri Ammi brabar m hi ,,., padh Rahi thi.. to unhone jb meri hasi suni or mujhe apne jism ko peeche krte hue dekha.. to wo boli...
Ammi - Kya hua??
Neha - Kuch nhi Ammi Asad gudgudi utha raha hai ...
Asad ye sunte hi shyad Darr gya, or kuch nhi bola..
Ammi - to tu yha hi kyu leti hui hai, apni razai main jakar let.. 
Neha - kuch nhi ammi, hum baate kar rahe hai..
Ammi - Nahi.. bohat ho gyi baate, phir subah ko derr se uthte ho.. chalo dono utho yaha se or apne apne palang par jakar Leto.. 
Ammi ke itna kehne ke baad main or Sara waha se uth kar apni apni Razai m jakar let gye...
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Bahut badiya
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(03-10-2022, 11:38 AM)Johnyfun Wrote: Bahut badiya

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Update 8

Agle din subah m wohi late uthna.. uthne ke baad haath muh dhokar nashta karna.. uske baad wohi khel kood Wale kaam.. par raat ki harqat ki wajah se Asad baar baar mere paas aakar mujhse chipkane ki koshish kar rha tha.. m bhi uska yu chipakna enjoy kar rhi thi.. or moka dekh kar uski phunno ko sehla deti thi.. Par ek baat zaroor thi.. jab bhi main uski phunno ko hath lgati thi to mujhe hmesha hi uski phunno rode ki tarah tight milti thi.. 
Sham m Alisha Appi humko boli ki chalo hide n seek khelte hai.. hum sab taiyar ho gye.. sabse pahle Sara bahar gyi.. Sara ko humko dhundna tha.. to hum sab chupne ke liye jgah talashne lage.. Sara ko 15 tak count Krna tha uske baad aakar humko dhundna tha.. Alisha Appi kahi chup gyi.. or main or Asad anaaj ki tanki ke peeche chup gye.. m tanki ke peeche se jhank kar dekh rhi thi ki koi hmari side aa to nhi rha.. Asad mere peeche khada tha.. Achanak pta nhi Asad ko kya hua, usne ek dum se apne hath meri kameez ke andar ghusa diye.. maine ye expect nhi kiya tha or na hi m iske liye taiyar thi.. jaise hi uske thande hath mere nange pet par lage mujhe ek dum jhatka sa mehsoos hua.. maine usko aahista se bola ki tumhare hath mujhe thande feel ho rhe h.. or m uska hath pakad kar htane lagi.. par jitna m uska hath htane ke liye zor lgati utna hi wo mere pet ko or zor se dba deta.. chahti to m bhi yhi thi ki Asad na hate.. or shyad wo mere dil ki baad smjh gya tha.. usne apne hath se mere pet ko sehlate hue upar le gya.. or mere nange nipple par apne hath pherne laga.. mujhe itna maza aaya ki m bayan nhi kar sakti.. or pahli baar meri halki si aaahhh nikal gyi.. wo meri zindagi ki pahli siski hogi jo ki lagbhag 9-10 saal ki umar main mere muh se nikli thi.. 
Asad mujh se bilkul chipak kar khada tha or main uski phunno ko apne kulho main mehsoos kar rhi thi.. wo lagatar mere se chipak kar mere nipple ko sehla rha tha or neeche se mere kulho ke andar dhakke pe dhakke lagaye ja rha tha.. mujhe bhi kafi maza aa rha tha.. main uske aage jhuki hui thi or tanki ke peeche se jhaank kar dekh rhi thi ki Sara humko dhund na le.. Or idhar Asad apne kaam m laga hua tha.. pta nhi use kya hota ja rha tha ki uski speed baar baar badhti hi ja rhi thi.. jitni zyada uski speed badh rhi thi utna hi zyada mujhe maza aa rha tha.. uske dhakko ki speed se waha par halki halki awaaze aane lagi jo ki shyad chappalo ke aage peeche hone se or tanki par hath lagne or hatne se aa rhi thi.. wo Awaz Sara ne sun li thi.. use ye to nhi pta tha ki uski bahen or uski Khala ka beta kya kartoot kar rahe hai, par usko hmari in awaaz se hume dhundne main aasani ho gyi.. usne hume pakad liya.. par hume kisi galat halat m nhi dekha.. humse pahle Alisha Appi pakdi gyi thi to is baar dhundne ka number Alisha Appi ka tha.. 
Mujhe or Asad ko ye to clear ho gya tha ki ab hum dono ko ek jgah chupna hai or aisi jgah jaha par koi aasani se hume dhund na paaye.. Nani ka Ghar gao ka ghar tha or gao ke ghar ki tarah hi kafi bada tha... To chupne ke liye kaafi jgah thi..
Is baar jab Alisha Appi counting krne gyi to main or Asad ek jgah chupne ke liye jgah dhundne lage.. hume dekh kar Sara bhi hmare sath hi aane lagi.. Asad ko shyad laga ki agar Sara hmare sath chupegi to hum kuch nhi kar payge.. or m bhi yhi chahti thi ki Sara kabab main haddi na bane.. Sara jab hmare paas aane lagi to Asad ne bola...

Asad - agar sab ek hi jgah chupege to Alisha Appi ko dhundne me aasani ho jaygi or hum jaldi pakde jayge.. ek kaam krte hai sab alag alag jgah chupte hai..
Neha - Haan.. mujhe bhi thi lagta hai.. main bhi alag hi chupugi...
Sara - par mujhe to koi jgah nhi mil rhi chupne ke liye...
Asad - Jgah main bta deta hu tujhe.. tu waha par chup ja.. Baki main to apni chupne ki jgah kisi ko nhi btauga kyuki agar tumko maine bta diya ki main kaha chupa hu to tum Alisha Appi ko bta dogi or mere pakde jane ke chances zyada hai..
Sara - aree main nhi btaugi.. tum mujhe btao tum kaha chupp rahe ho..
Neha - Nhi.. koi kisi ko nhi btayega ki kon kaha chup rha hai.. sab alag alag jgah dekh kar chupp jao..

Sara kafi der tak hume mnane ki koshish karti rahi, lekin humne uski baat nhi mani.. kyuki agar hum uski baat maan lete to hmare maze me khalal padta.. isliye hum apni baat se Tass se mass nhi hue.. thak haar kar Sara ne hmari baat maan li.. Aakhirkaar hum teeno is baat par raazi ho gye ki ab teeno alag alag jgah chupege or koi kisi ko nhi btayega.. Par Sara ne bola ki aaplogo ko mujhe ye nhi btana ki kon kaha chupp rha hai to mat btao.. par mujhe koi jgah to bta do jaha par m chup saku.. Iske baad Asad ne Sara ko chupne ki jgah btayi.. uske baad jb Sara chup gyi to Asad jaha par bhains bandhti hai waha par jane laga.. or usne mujhe bhi apne peeche aane ka ishara kiya.. maine idhar udhar dekha ki koi hume to nhi dekh rha hai.. or chup chap Asad ke peeche peeche Bhains wala kamre main chali gyi...
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Zabardast mast kahani ban rahi hai
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मस्त कहानी है बचपन की याद दिला दी
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