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In the last episode I had the feeling that the author was in the middle of the English Channel and didn't
know what to do;
Great Britain on the left, mainland Europe on the right.
In Great Britain left-hand traffic, in Europe right-hand traffic and the author in the middle of this labyrinth.
He found it difficult to keep his bearings and decide which SIDE to take. In his distress, "Uncle" came to
his aid as a traffic-pilot and guided him safely out...
A short but interesting episode, which I think will have an erotic sequel with Uncle...
In this sense
have a nice evening
Lollobionda
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Thank you for the story and the updates. Keep up the good work.
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(26-09-2022, 08:19 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote: Thanks PingpongDingdong...
"He is trying to describe day to day events happening in DIKHAs life."
- More apt is how she evolves episode to episode.
Dear Amit21msm and other readers,
Fucking at the end of page 3 is pretty much every other story that I have read in this forum, with the exception of *Devika deceived* story. If that is what you are looking for, then no.
Imagine Dhika fucking one person and, she cannot go back to ground zero with the next one and start from scratch. That would look ridiculous.
Few episodes might be slower when compared to others, but every single episode is necessary for a plot that would be coming in further episodes.
Happy Reading...
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(26-09-2022, 10:00 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: In the last episode I had the feeling that the author was in the middle of the English Channel and didn't
know what to do;
Great Britain on the left, mainland Europe on the right.
In Great Britain left-hand traffic, in Europe right-hand traffic and the author in the middle of this labyrinth.
He found it difficult to keep his bearings and decide which SIDE to take. In his distress, "Uncle" came to
his aid as a traffic-pilot and guided him safely out...
A short but interesting episode, which I think will have an erotic sequel with Uncle...
In this sense
have a nice evening
Lollobionda
hahahahahaha.... nice analogy.
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27-09-2022, 02:20 PM
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(26-09-2022, 08:19 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote: Thanks PingpongDingdong...
"He is trying to describe day to day events happening in DIKHAs life."
- More apt is how she evolves episode to episode.
Dear Amit21msm and other readers,
Fucking at the end of page 3 is pretty much every other story that I have read in this forum, with the exception of *Devika deceived* story. If that is what you are looking for, then no.
Imagine Dhika fucking one person and, she cannot go back to ground zero with the next one and start from scratch. That would look ridiculous.
Few episodes might be slower when compared to others, but every single episode is necessary for a plot that would be coming in further episodes.
Happy Reading...
The slow pace tease is what makes this story unique. There are lot of stories where the author killed the golden goose by having sex where the story had started so good but after the sex episode it's completely repetitive and not just the readers but even author lost the fun and later either they cut short the story or left in the midway
Who watches watchman by Aurelius32 was a classic one but after the first sex with story almost finished there but it dragged 2 more parts and ended which infact I've seen people try to reboot but never succeed. The original plot from which the characters where initially adapted for Dhikha story, everyone know what happened after Jaya's sex... So let's leave it to the author.
Now in my view I'm waiting for next update as I don't have slightest predictability for next update going to be expect on the mental talk which John can have within his head whether to ask dhika about uncle and depands on what she share with John. Less she share more John thinks and that can be helpful in the road trip episode. Also I'm waiting to see how the twins gonna make the entry. Also expecting to explore the stranger more as now Dhika have the contact details
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(26-09-2022, 08:19 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote: Thanks PingpongDingdong...
"He is trying to describe day to day events happening in DIKHAs life."
- More apt is how she evolves episode to episode.
Dear Amit21msm and other readers,
Fucking at the end of page 3 is pretty much every other story that I have read in this forum, with the exception of *Devika deceived* story. If that is what you are looking for, then no.
Imagine Dhika fucking one person and, she cannot go back to ground zero with the next one and start from scratch. That would look ridiculous.
Few episodes might be slower when compared to others, but every single episode is necessary for a plot that would be coming in further episodes.
Happy Reading...
That's why your story is most sensual And intresting ever...can't wait to see heroine and uncle encounter...
Waiting eagerly
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I have read this story last week DevilMayCare garu.
You’re writing narration and story superb , excellent.
Literally you’re my inspiration, I also want to write like you.
Subtle and clean explanation. Slow pace taking. Wow.
And you took my favourite Kajal as a depict that’s what dragged me in.
Thank you DevilMayCare
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please post the next one soon
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Hey bro eagerly waiting for the weekend update , logged in 5 times in last 2 hrs
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W A I T I N G. . .
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Waiting for update Brother
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Bhai expecting update news from you...
Waiting
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Hey dude ur silence scares us , please keep talking don’t feel stressed because people are asking u for updates , it’s just that everyone is exited to read what’s happening next
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05-10-2022, 07:12 AM
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In hospital. Emergency for family.
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