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Adultery Green Hotel (submission of a GF) New master
#21
wao great writing and very good and sexy plot. please let the girl have all of the hotel staff willingly. no force please. let make her hungry for rough sex from low class men. lots of low class men, safaiwala, porter, gateman, waiter, sabjuwala, plumbers, etc.
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#22
Pehle force Karo aur fir uski marzi hain waisa litho. Lekin sab fandi cheeze karvao.
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#23
Title is master and when all things like spitting anus lick peeing are done it will be justified
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(22-09-2022, 06:45 AM)joy2008 Wrote: Title  is master and when all things like spitting anus lick peeing are done it will be justified

Story is going to be nasty and brutal, jamaal is a sex addict pervert, who is now close to my GF, he has huge ideas to exploit punam. He will use her to the fullest, no stones will be left unturned.
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Kahani me aage..... 

Humari baate ho rahi thi aur Jamaal apne maksad ko anjam dene k liye humare room ki or badh gaya. Yaha mai uske 2 saathiyo k saath time paas karne laga, Jamaal ko maine 1 ghante ka time diya tha. Uss 1 ghante me wo kya karega ye to mai nahi jaanta, ummid thi k wo kamiyab ho jaaye, magar Punam ki masumiyat yaad aate hi lagne laga k Jamaal jaisa kehte hai..... Waisa karna uske bas ki baat nahi hogi, aur punam maan jaaye ye namumkin sa lag raha tha. Baichaini badhti hi chali ja rahi thi. Tabhi
Aqil- Saab mai Jamaal bhai ko bohot pehle se jaanta hu, behad shatir kisam k hai, Dhaka se hum dono 7 saal pehle aaye the India, pehle Dhanbad me ek saabun ki factory me kaam karte the. 
Mai- Yaha kab se ho? Aur wo naukri kyu chod di? 
Aqil- yaha 5 saal ho gaye, udhar mehnat jada aur paise kam mil rahe the, tabhi kisi tarah kaka se sampark hua, aur inhone humari madad ki. 
Bhura kaka- Are Aqil rehne de, jiski kismat me jo likha hai, mai kon hota hu. 
Bhura kaka- Lekin ek baat hai, Jamaal aurato pe hi jada nazar rakhta hai. 
Mai- sirf aurat, kam umra ki ladkiya nahi? 
Bhura kaka- wo milna asambhav hai, jawan chokra to hai nahi, jo ladkiyo ko aakarshit kar sake. 
Aqil- Sab... Ek baat batata hu bhaijaan k baare me, unko blue film ka behad shawk hai, kaafi gehri ruchi hai unki, sab tarah k kand ka bakhan karte hai mere saamne. 
Mai- kya matlab? 
Aqil- kaise batau.... Mujhe jada ni maalum, par jaisa unhone bataya hai, usme se kuch yaad hai, jaise Doggystyle, blowjob, Pussy eating aur na jaane kya kya hai. 
Mai- oh.... Samjha, matlab sex me jitna kuch hota hai wo sab jaanta hai. 
Aqil- bilkul, wo to alag alag tarah k videos dekhta hai aur ghanto tak lund masalta hai. 

Mere dimag me ye sab baate alag romanch la rahi thi, lekin sabse badi baat ye thi k Jamaal ji Punam k saath ab kya karenge, jaldi se waqt bhi nahi gujarta... Isi bich mai 4 cig excitment me hi phook daali, aur dekhte hi dekhte 2 baj gaye. 
Mai wahi baitha tha, wait kar raha tha.... Kab Jamaal bahar aayega, aur fir ja k dekhunga k kya such me wo punam ki chut laal kiya ya bas kehne ko keh diya josh me. 
Aadha ghanta aur wait karne k baad Jamaal ne msg kiya

Jamaal- Msg me.... Saab machli jaal me phas chuki hai
 
Meri aankhe phati reh gai, maine bina waqt gawaye ek kone pe ja kar use call kiya

Mai- phone pe.... Jamaal ji mai niche hu, jungle waale raaste pe, jaldi aao.... Aur wo camera bhi le aana
Jamaal- abhi aaya
Uske aate hi maine jhat se bola
Mai- Camera dijiye mujhe
Jamaal- Saab maine abtak waisa kuch kiya hi nahi hai, lekin iski madad se mai apna daw chal diya. 
Mai- To 1 ghante tak kya kiya tumne
Jamaal- itni komal chiz ko mai zabardasti nahi karna chaha, isse ye kissa ho skta hai yaha shuru ho jaata, lekin khatam bhi ho sakta tha, uska chehra itna maasum hai, k mujhe plan badalna pada. 
Mai- Maine pucha.... 1 nahi balki aur half hour kiya kya tumne? 
Jamaal- Wo sab aap isi video me dekh lo. Apne phone me lo aur headphone laga k sunna, sirf baate hi ki.... Magar wahi baat ka asar zordar hoga, aur ab aapko jada wait nahi karna hoga..... Ho sakta hai aaj raat hi aapki ichha puri kar dunga. 

Maine jaldi se apne phone me wo video daala aur punam k paas apne room ki or chal pada. Darwaza khula hi tha, andar dekha to punam udas thi... 
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Mai- Kya hua baby? Udas kyu ho? 
Usne koi jawab nahi diya, Maine fir wahi pucha
Iss baar gusse me
Punam- tum mujhe yaha kyu laaye, bahar ja kar cig pine k liye? 
Meri to samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha k hua kya?
Punam- jab se yaha aaye h, tum bahar hi waqt bita rahe ho, mujhe saath le kar bhi nahi jaate. Meri koi kadar nahi hai tumhe. 
Mai samajh gaya k ye Jamaal ki hi koi chaal hai, mai chup chap phone le kar aur headphone laga k bathroom ghus gaya. Aur video chaalu kiya
Maine dekha.... Meri aur punam ki 10 min ki chudai usme kaid hai, aur thoda video aage badhya, ab video me dekha, punam bed pe baithi phone chala rahi thi, itne me door knock hua. Punam khushi se door khola aur Jamaal ko dekhte hi chawk si gai. 
Punam- Wo abhi bahar hai, baad me aana
Jamaal sidhe andar ghusa aur darwaza band kar diya. Punam hairani me thi.... 
Punam- ye kya badtamizi hai, niklo yaha se abhi
Jamaal- madam abhi chala jaunga, lekin aapke bhale ki baat karni thi aapse, aur maine dekha, aapke BF ko bahar jaate hue, tabhi mawka dekh mai yaha aa gaya, kuch zaruri baat aapko batane. 
Punam ko kuch samajh ni aa raha tha k wo kya aur kyu keh raha hai... Himmat kar k usne Jamaal se kaha. 

Punam- Jaldi bolo aisi kya baat hai jo tum mujhe akele pa kar yaha aaye ho. 
Jamaal- dekhiye madam, aapki umar abhi kam hai, isi liye aapko sahi galat, jhuta aur sachha me farak nahi dikhta
Punam- sidhe sidhe bolo kya baat hai? 
Jamaal- thik hai... Aap yaha kal aai ho aur aapka BF jadatar bahar waqt bita raha hai, upar se unhone mujhe iss room me camera fit karno ko kaha, Maine mana kiya.... Lekin wo paise k laalach me kar baitha. 
Punam bhawchakka reh gai, use yakin nahi ho raha tha apni kano me. 
Punam- Kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum? 
Jamaal- yakin nahi hota to ye dekho.... Camere ki or ishara karte hue. 
Punam camere ki taraf dekhne lagi aur uske aankho se aansu behne lage, wo rone lagi....rote hue usne bola
Kya such me Abhi ne tumhe ye karne ko kaha. 
Jamaal- Afsos jatate hue, jhut bol k mujhe kya hasil hoga

Ye sunte hi punam goom si ho gai, sar jhuka k bistar pe gir gai, itne me Jamaal ne use samhaala. Aur punam k gore gaalo me apna sakht haath rakhte hue uske aansu pochne laga... 

Jamaal- madam aap mat roiye, kuch bigda nahi hai, ye camera mai kisike haath nahi lagne dunga. 
Thoda shaant hote hue 
Punam- Tum jao ye camera use de do, meri to life barbad ho chuki hai. 
Jamaal- Kuch nahi hua hai madam.... Ab thoda bold hote hue wo jamin par baith gaya aur punam ek frok pehni hui bed pe baithi thi. 
Punam ki ghutne kapdo se niche the
Jamaal ne uske ghutno k thoda upar apna ek haath rakha aur... 

Jamaal- madam aisa BF kisi kaam ka nahi hai, aur pyar me dhoka to aajkal aam baat hai, uske liye aap khud ko nahi kosna. Galti jisne ki, pachtana bhi use hi hai
Punam chup chap bathi thi, iss baat ka ehsaas ni hua the use k koi vayask aadmi uske nange ghutno ko chu raha hai. Wo soch me doobi hui thi. Itne me Jamaal fir bol padta hai... 

Jamaal- madam agar mai aapki BF k jaga hota to ek pal k liye bhi aapko khud se door nahi rehne deta, jaha bhi jaata...aap mere saath hoti. Wo itna bada gandu hai k kya batau, mera yakin karo madam, uski jaga mai hota to 5 min me nahi jhad jaata....puri raat pyar karta aapse... 
Punam k udas chehre pe thoda sukun dikha, aur wo nazre ghuma kar ab Jamaal k aankho me dekhne lagi. 
Punam- Tumhe kaise pata k Abhijit 5 min hi tik paye the? 
Jamaal- agar wo tik paata to mai yaha nahi hota, aur tumhe rona nahi parta... Use to aapke paas hona chahiye tha. 
Punam- lekin mere samajh me ye nahi aa raha k Abhi ne aisa kyu kiya? 
Jamaal- Madam such batao... Aap log yaha pyar mohabbat karne aaye the na? 
Punam- Hmm
Jamaal- kuch achhe pal bitane k liye hi yaha aaye ho na? 
Punam- Haa


Jamaal ka jaadu lagbhag chal chuka tha, uska left haath punam k thighs pe jam gaya, aur bade pyare andaaz me. Wahi bebak tarike se Jamaal ne kaha... 

Jamaal- Madam aap jab se yaha aai ho, mera dil bas aapke hi paas aana chah ra tha, dil aur dimag me sirf aap bas chuki ho, aur koi aapke saath aisa galat kare, wo mai bardaast nahi kar saka...aur yahi wajah hai k mai yaha aaya aur sab such aapko bataya. Ab bhale hi meri naukri chali jaaye magar aapke saath kisiko kuch galat hone nahi dunga. 
Punam uski baato se hypnotize si hone lagi, dimag kaam karna band ho chuka tha, use Jamaal ka care achha laga, punam Jamaal ki aankho me doob chuki thi. Itne me wo fir bol pada

Jamaal- mai jaanta hu madam ki aapki pyas wo gandu nahi bujha sakta, aur uss tadap ko maine aapki aankho me dekha hai. Aap meri hoti to ek pal k liye bhi udas ni hone deta.... Pyar se bhi pyara agar maine kuch dekha hai to wo aapka chehra hai. 
Punam ektak uski aankho me kho chuki thi, use ye bhi nahi ehsaas hua k koi adhed umar ka aadmi uske jaangh ki komalta ka swad apne gande haatho se le raha tha. 
Jamaal ek k baad ek jaal faik raha tha, tabhi achanak

Punam- Jamaal se nazre milate hue kaha... Kya aapko lagta hai k koi mujse suchha pyar karega. 
Jamaal- koi kya madam, aap chaho to ye banda aapke isharo pe nachega. Khud ki baat karte hue
Punam- ab mai kya karu kuch samaj nahi aa raha
Jamaal- madam mere paas ek tarkib hai, aap use jada kuch mat bolo, aaj raat 10 baje k baad mai aaunga aur use uski awkat dikha dunga. Bas ek baar bharosa karo mujhpe, mai lunga aapka badla, wo bhi aise tarike se k aapko bhi maza aayega. 
Punam- Kya karoge? 
Jamaal- Bold hote hue, punam se nazre milate hue poore confidence me bola. Madam aaj raat........me uski aankho k saamne aapse pyar karunga, agar aapko koi aitraz hai to mana kar do. 

Punam bhi pyaar k liye tadap rahi thi, aur wo jaanti thi k mai use jada santusti nahi de sakta. Aur upar se ab mera image bigad chuka tha, bina kuch soche punam ne kaha koi problem to nahi hogi na? 
Jamaal- Agar aaj k liye mai aapka aur aap meri ho sakti hai, to koi problem hone nahi dunga, mai jaanta hu k ye ajib hai, lekin aapke BF ko sabak sikhana bohot zaruri hai, mere raat me aane se aapko koi problem hai to bol dijiye. Lekin agar aap bhi wahi chahti hai jo mai chahta hu..... To ye lo mera phone number, msg kar dena. 
Itna keh kar Jamaal utha aur punam k kandho ko apne haatho se pakad kar use khada kiya aur dono ab ek dusre ko ghur rahe the, aur achaanak Jamaal ne apne honth punam ki soft gulabi lips pe rakh diye, punam chawk gai lekin ye ehsaas pyar ka use wasibhoot kar chuka tha, karib 5 min soft smooch chala aur Jamaal ne lips alag karte hue punam ki aankho me aankhe daal kaha.... 
Jamaal- Aapka pura khayal mai rakhunga, jo apka BF 5 min bhi dhang se nahi kar sakta, wo mai tabtak karunga jab tak aap chaho. Aaj raat mera wait karna.  
Itna keh kar wo nikalne laga....jaate jaate mud k dekha to punam soch me dube hui bed ko face karti hui sock me khadi sochne lagti hi, aur Jamaal ki nazar sidhe apne shikar ki gand ko naap leti hai

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Itna chawda chuttad aur patli kamar dekh jamaal ka mussal dastak dene laga, haatho se lund ko adjust karte hue kuch der scan karta hai, aur waha se chala jaata hai, aur punam bed pe baithi aur lait ke soch me doob gai, fir kuch min baad wo fir aaya aur sidha camera nikal ke le gaya. 
Mai bathroom se nikla, aur punam k nazdik ja kar use samjhane ki kosish ki, magar wo ab kho chuki thi, uske dimag me alag hi cahal raha tha, usne bina kuch kahe kambal lapet kar pith ghuma k sone ki kosish karne lagi.
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(22-09-2022, 11:03 AM)Forktail6 Wrote: Story is going to be nasty and brutal, jamaal is a sex addict pervert, who is now close to my GF, he has huge ideas to exploit punam. He will use her to the fullest, no stones will be left unturned.

Thanks you can write something more brutal nasty use words like rand etc. Eagerly waiting for next part
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(22-09-2022, 02:37 PM)joy2008 Wrote: Thanks you can write something more brutal nasty use words like rand etc. Eagerly waiting for next part

This is just the beginning, and is very important part of the story, since it has all the reasons of happenings. Your seggestion is there in my mind, it will come at the right time. I will be kiping it asa true as possible
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(22-09-2022, 03:28 PM)Forktail6 Wrote: This is just the beginning, and is very important part of the story, since it has all the reasons of happenings. Your seggestion is there in my mind, it will come at the right time. I will be kiping it asa true as possible

Thanks . Make her a victim of all this people.  Keep an episode on gang bang where they all together make her a toilet slave
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(22-09-2022, 03:44 PM)joy2008 Wrote: Thanks . Make her a victim of all this people.  Keep an episode on gang bang where they all together make her a toilet slave

Bro...jaisa hua 7 mahine pehle se lekar abtak, wahi likhunga, jo hua nahi wo mai likh nahi sakta, aur ye silsila aaj bhi jaari hai.......ghatna jaisi ghati hai aur ghategi. waisa hi mai pesh karunga. Jamaal kamina tharki jarur hai magar, aisi ladki use milegi wo sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta. Mujhe nahi lagta k jamaal punam ko kisike saath share karega.....dekhte hai kya kya hota hai. Only Jamaal has her till now, as of my knowledge....till now he is her solo master. He managed to arrange 2 different girls for Jamaals partners and both of them are heavenly gorgeous....This are all things you will see later in the story
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(22-09-2022, 04:09 PM)Forktail6 Wrote: Bro...jaisa hua 7 mahine pehle se lekar abtak, wahi likhunga, jo hua nahi wo mai likh nahi sakta, aur ye silsila aaj bhi jaari hai.......ghatna jaisi ghati hai aur ghategi. waisa hi mai pesh karunga. Jamaal kamina tharki jarur hai magar, aisi ladki use milegi wo sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta. Mujhe nahi lagta k jamaal punam ko kisike saath share karega.....dekhte hai kya kya hota hai. Only Jamaal has her till now, as of my knowledge....till now he is her solo master. He managed to arrange 2 different girls for Jamaals partners and both of them are heavenly gorgeous....This are all things you will see later in the story
This is fantasy.  And you should add 1 such episode to make it erotic hot. I request you to consider
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(22-09-2022, 04:15 PM)joy2008 Wrote: This is fantasy.  And you should add 1 such episode to make it erotic hot. I request you to consider
Agar aapko yahi chahiye to thik hai... As you wish. Wait for that episode
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Ab aage....

Punam ki narazgi dekh k mai thoda mayush ho gaya, asmanjas me pad gaya....Kya maine sahi kiya? magar Jamaal ki baate dimag me chalne lagi, aur aaj raat ka plan jo in dono ne mere liye banaya tha...uss bare me sochte hue meri bhi aankh lag gai. Thik 8 PM me meri aankh khul gai, aur baju me dekha....Punam ab bhi so rahi thi, aaj raat k liye sayad wo energy bacha rahi thi. Maine use uthaya, wo ab thoda normal ho chuki thi

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Punam- Door raho tum
Mai- aisi kya galti ki maine jo tum ruthi hi hui ho?
Punam- galti? tumne mera tamasha banana chaha, kyu lagwaya tha camera?
Mai- jaan mai hum dono k iss hasin pal ko kaid kar apne paas rakhna chahta tha
Punam- to uske liye kisi or ki madad kyu li? ek baar mujhse keh sakte the
Mai- wahi to....mai ye sab surprise ki tarah rakhna chahta tha
Punam- surprise to mai tumhare liye plan kiya hai aaj raat
Mai- Kya surprise?
Punam- Hai....bada hi hai, aur puri raat chalegi

mai samajh gaya wo kya kehna chahti hai indirectly, mujhe hairani ho rahi thi aur excited bhi tha... manna hoga jamaal ko, bina kisi zor zabardasti k meri GF ko fasa liya, aage kya hoga.....soch kar hi mere lund me tehelka much gaya. Itne me...

Punam- Tum jao jaha jana hai, mai bhi chali naha k jaldi taiyar hona hai, jada waqt nahi hai ab
Mai- Bina kuch kahe bahar nikla.

Nikalte saath hi call lagaya Jamaal ko....Par koi jawab nahi mila, mai usi dukan ki or nikal pada jaha wo tino gaanja phookte the, ja kar dekha to sirf Aqil aur kaka dhuwa chod rahe the.....pura area mehek gaya, mujhe bhi nashe si chadhne lagi thi. 

Mai- kaka ye Jamaal kaha gayab hai? 

Kaka- wo to mai ni jaanta lekin itna andaaza laga sakta hu k aaj wo kuch plan kiya hai, warna hame bina kuch bataye gayab ni hota. Maine use ATM se nikalte dekha tha, saab randiya chodne ki latt lag chuki hai use, shaadi ki hoti to aise bhatakna na parta, bahut paisa bana rakha hai isne, upar tak haath hai, lekin phatelal ki tarah rehta hai. Bohot shatir hai. Chut k liye baap ko bhi dhoka de sakta hai, to hum dono kya chiz hai. 

Aqil- saab aaj kisiko chodega jamaal, pata nahi kon? Lekin jo bhi ho.......bhaijaan ki khusi me hum khush hai

Mai- kya chodega? 10 min se jada koi ni kar sakta

Kaka- tab aap Jamaal ko nahi jaante. Wo jitni der chut k saamne rahega, bas chodta hi rahega, top level ka tharki chudakkad hai wo. 
Inki baato ko sun kar to mera gala sukh raha tha, gand phatne jaisi haalat ho gai, dimag sant ho chuka tha, lekin jab punam ka khayal aaya to socha, Maine to use utna pyar nahi diya jitna use jarurat hai, uski pyas bekabu si thi, use shant karna........bas ab sab Jamaal ke upar hai wo kya karta hai, mai to jitni ho sake punam ki santusti k liye karunga, chahe uske liye mujhe usse door hi kyu na hona pare. Mai thaan chuka tha, man me iss baat ko gaanth ki tarah bandh liya k ab jo punam chahegi wahi hoga, ya keh sakte hai Jamaal jo chahega wahi hoga. Itna kuch soch vichar karte hue Maine phir se phone lagaya, 1 nahi 5 baar.... Lekin koi jawab nahi. Lagne laga k sayad mai jitna soch raha hu waise kuch ab nahi hoga, wo kisi or kaam se bahar jaa chuka hai.... Etc. 
Tabhi achanak phone baj utha, Maine dekha to wo Jamaal ka hi tha, Maine turant call uthaya

Mai- Jamaal ji aap kaha gayab ho gaye, kuch plan tha aaj ka? 
Jamaal- saab aaj to khaas din hai, aur usse bhi khaas raat banane k liye thodi taiyari to karni hogi. 
Mai- kya taiyari? 
Jamaal- are saab wo sab aap tab dekh lena, abhi rakhta hu, aur bhi kuch baaki hai wo le leta hu
Mai- Jamaal ji bas condom badhiya waala lena na bhulna? 
Jamaal- saab mai wo sab nahi pehenta, humare dharm me wo sab haraam hai
Mai- wooo... 
Jamaal- are saab mai samhal lunga, ab wo aapka matter nahi hai. 
Mai- bhai ji aap samajhte nahi ho, punam nahi maanegi. 
Jamaal- ha haha ha ha... Uski chinta aap mat karo, saali ko jabardast chodunga agar nakhra dikhai to. 
Mai- Jamaal bhai ghussa kyu hote ho, agar kuch ulta ho gaya to? 
Jamaal- wo mai dekh lunga, aap bas dekhne ki taiyari karo
Man me sochne laga mai, k dekhne k liye kya taiyari? 
Mai- achha achha thik hai, aap late mat karna....aur call cut kiya. 

9 baj chuke the, bas 1 hi ghanta baaki tha, Mai jhat se hotel ja kar apna parcel liya, aur room pohcha. Andar gaya to dekha punam ek sexy night dress me baithi mirror k saamne apne lips pe gaadha laal rang k laga rahi hai, uski night dress me wo sex ki devi lag rahi thi, mai ektak use dekhta reh gaya. Maroon colour k short dress uske jism ki numaish kar rahi thi, puna had se jada gori thi lekin fir bhi makeup kar rahi thi, mujhe itna kuch pata bhi nahi hai, magar shise me jab uska chehra dekha, wo behad khush thi..... Maano jaise aaj uski hi raat gai, uske jism ki tamam zarurate aaj ek sakt mard pura karne waala ho, oooohh God. Mera to use dekhte hi jhad gaya, pata nahi kis irade se wo itna saj rahi thi... Waha Jamaal apni taiyari me vyast tha.... Yaha punam apni jawani ko aur dhardaar karne me lagi thi, aisa lag raha tha k aaj in dono jism ka ek hona pehle se hi taye tha, mai bas ek zariya matra mehsus kar raha tha. Magar iss baat ki khusi mere andar badhti chali ja rahi thi k aaj bohot har chodam patti dekhne ko milega, aur mere lund ne hulchul karte hu iss baat ki pusti ki. Khayalo se nikal kar...... Khana table pe rakhte hue
Mai- baby ab bhi gussa ho kya? 
Punam ne mujhe dekhte hue muskuraya.... Aur kaha
Punam- Maine tumhe maaf kiya, tum mera pehla pyar ho, magar aakhri nahi hoge. 
Mai chup ho gaya ye sunte hi, mere pairo k niche se zamin nikal gai. 
Kya kehta.... Maine khana parosa aur punam ki or plate badha kar apna dinner karne laga. 
Hum dono ne khana khatam kiya aur mai bed pe kapde change kar lait gaya....mai punam ko dekh raha tha. 10 baj chuke the, meri dil ki dhadkan itna zor se bajne lage maano koi bina kaan lagaye bhi sun le, pata nahi punam ka kya haal ho raha hoga? 
Punam bas ghadi ki or dekh rahi thi, mai samajh gaya k uska sabar ka baand tut chuka hai. Usne phone uthaya aur sidhe Jamaal ko phone lagaya..... Lekin wo sayad punam ki tadap ka imtahaan le rahe the. Punam ne back to back Jamaal ko call kiye... Magar koi response nahi, mayus hote hue
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aur wo frustrate ho kar phone ko bed pe patak diya aur TV on kar k bed k kone me baith gai.... Apni gaal pe haath rakhte hue wo apni duniya me sama gai...mai samajh sakta hu, Jamaal jaise mard me punam ko wo baat nazar aa chuki thi, jiski tadap liye wo mere saath iss hotel me aai thi... Use bohot tight non stop chudai ki chipi hui talab thi, aur ye maine tab mehsus kiya jab maine uske saath sambhog kiya tha, lekin wo bhi sirf 2 baar, kuch 10 min aur 5 min me mera khel khatam ho chuka tha, ab bas Jamaal ji ka khel dekhne ki ichha reh gai thi. Ghadi me dekha to 11:40 pm ho chuke the, ab lagne laga k hum dono ki pyaas aaj bhi bujh nahi payegi..... Tabhi darwaze k dhime knock se hum dono ki dhadkane ekdam se ghode ki tarah dawd padi. Ek saath humne door ki or dekha, me uthne hi waala tha, ki Punam jo kinaare pe besabri se Jamaal ka intazar kar rahi thi..... Uth khadi hui, aur teji se door k saamne ja khadi hui, kuch pal k liye sir jhukaye khadi rahi door k handle ko pakadi hui  .... Ke wo phir knock hua, iss baar der na karte hue punam ne darwaza khola........... Aur Jamaal ji saamne khade the apne haath me chota sa ek bag liye hue. Punam sir jhukaye piche hatte hue unse andar aane ka ishara kiya, aur Jamaal smile karta hua punam ko dekh raha tha, aur apne kadam badhate hue room me ghus gaya. Unke room me aate hi punam ne jhat se door lock kiya aur diwar pe piche hatte hue sat kar khadi ho gai, aur Jamaal khoonkhar sher ki tarah apna shikar ka jaiza lene laga, punam ka sir jhuka hua tha, mai to bas dono ko baari baari butt bane dekhne laga. Jamaal ne meri taraf dekha aur aankh maarte hue mute motion me shukriya kaha, aur apna focus jama k punam ka khusi se ghoorne laga. Punam ki harkat dekh Jamaal garv se phool gaya, punam sir jhukaye daaye baaye dekh rahi thi par unse nazre milaane ki usme zara si bhi himmat nahi nazar aai. Jamaal bag dressing table par rakha aur punam ki or badha...... 

Mai- o mister tum kyu aaye ho iss waqt yaha, pata nahi ye sone ka waqt hai? 
Jamaal- gusse me bol para..... Gandu Tu apna mu band rakh, warna yahi pel dunga tujhe
Mai to hairaan tha, wo pehle mujhe saab saab kehta tha aur ab meri GF k saamne mujhse aisi baat kar raha tha, uska andaaz bhi kaafi rowbdaar tha, mai sehem gaya aur bed pe sidhe bath gaya. 
Jamaal- Sabaash, ab sun TV ka sound badha aur kone pe baith ja chup chap, ni to maalum h na.... Usne jeb se ek haath me pehenne waala fiber nikala aur... 
Jamaal- phod k rakh dunga saale. 
Itne me wo chup nai hua, 
Jamaal- chote lund waale hokar aisi pari rakhne ki teri itni majaal, bas aankh khol kar dekhta reh, ab jo bhi hoga sab teri zindagi ka yaadgar pal hoga. 
Mujhbpar se dhyan hatate hue wo punam ki taraf badhne laga, wo aaj pura maintain kar parlour se sab kuch kara k aaya tha, gentle man ki tarah achhe kapde pehen kar, wo punam pe apna ye impression banana chahta tha k sirf aaj ki raat nahi balki aaj se har raat wo iss shaks k saath bita sakti hai, pura perfume lagaye, clean shaved. Wo yahi jataana chahta tha k wo aisa banda hai jiske saath punam bahar ki duniya ka pura aanand le sakti hai. 
Jamaal- punam ji aap mat ghabraiye, ye chuha ab se apko pareshani nahi dega. Meri taraf ishara karte hue
Punam ne ek baar meri taraf dekha aur fir nazre jhuka li, uski jhuki hui nazar aur jism ki sajawat se uska samarpan ab aaine ki tarah saaf tha. Jamaal uske karib apna face laa kar punam ki khubsurti ko niharte hue....
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Jamaal- meri jaan aaj se teri zindagi badalne waali hai, tujhe wo sab milega.... Jiski Tu hakdaar hai. Ab aur soch mat aur iss pal ka pura maza lene k liye khud ka taiyar kar le
Itna keh kar jamaal piche aaya aur apni bag se  laal gulab ka phool nikala, aur ghutno k bal aate hue wo punam ki nazro ke thik saamne niche uski aankho ki gehraiyo me kuch sec doob kar.... 

Jamaal- Punam I love you, mai tumse beintaha pyar karne laga hu, puri life maine gutter me guzari hai, lekin jab se tum dikhi ho.... Maine bas tumhe hi paane ki khwahis rakhi hai, tumhare liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hua. Mai apni baaki saari zindagi tumhare saath bitane ki dua karta hu..... Agar tumhe mai mnzoor nahi, to iss phool ko kachre me fek do, aur agar tum bhi mujhe chahti ho to iss gulab ko apne sine se laga lo, kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai.
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Bahot he erotic story hai and best part is aap update jaldi post Kar rahe ho really appreciate since we readers need quick updates atleast the writer batana chaiye ki update kab post hogi and time

Congratulations for a wonderful story !!!
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Plz update kab next part live hoga
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(22-09-2022, 09:47 PM)Pvzro Wrote: Plz update kab next part live hoga

Won't have to wait long, I know the urge.... I have felt myself. Bt have patience, ye story xossip ki sabse lambi story hogi. You have my words. Har roz update milega, kisi kisi din jada bhi milega, aur pics and gifs mai edit kar daal dunga sahi time pe
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Ab aage... 

Punam ne dhire se wo gulab thama aur jamaal se nazre milate hue, usne gulab ko apne dil se laga liya. Aur ek sharmati hui smile de di, bas....ab jamaal ko signal mil chuka tha. khusi me
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Punam- aapke pyar ne mere andar bhi pyar jaga diya, I love you jamaal ji, aaj se mai sirf aapki hu, aur aap sirf mere. 
Kehte hue jamaal k barabar jhukte hue jamal k sine me khud ko sama liya, uske chehre pe sukun saaf tha, aakhir kaar punam ne jis pyar ki kalpana ki thi, wo pyar ab use mil chuka tha.... Lekin ye to ek shuruwat thi. 
Jamaal- oh meri jaan, tum kitni khubsurat ho, tera ye jism mujhe bekabu kar raha hai
Sukun se jamaal ko jakadye hue punam ne kaha... 
Punam- aapko mujhse ek waada karna hoga
Jamaal- tere liye jaan bhi de du..... 
Punam- sssshhh chup, aisa mat kahiye, mare aapka bura sochne waale. Bas aaj hamar iss mulakat ko itna yaadgar bana dijiye k mai marte dam tak ise bhul na pau, aur pls jamaal ji jaise aaj 10 bol k 12 kat diye, aisa nahi kijiyega, mai pagal ho jaungi. 
Jamaal ka teer bilkul nishane pe laga, punam ne baato me hi apna sampurna samarpan ka sabut de diya tha, wo jamaal k pyar me doob chuki thi, aur uski aankho me madhosi chah gai. 
Mujh par to dono me se kisika dhyan nahi tha, ab mai room me hote hue bhai waha nahi tha. 
Jamaal ne punam ki baahe than kar use aur khud bhi khada hua..... Punam ki height 5ft 4inch ki hai aur Jamaal ek sakht sharir k 6ft ka mustanda hai, dono ek dusre ki aankho me doob chuke the, Jamaal koi jaldbaazi nahi karna chahta tha, uske liye baat sirf aaj raat ki nahi thi, balki hotel me baaki 2 din pure, aur mere collage jaane k baad bhi jaari rakhne ka mazbut irada tha. Tabhi room me pura sannata chaa gaya, 
Jamaal ne apne lips ko punam k gardan me rakh k use apne sine me dabochne laga, ye sab dekh k mera halka se ras lund se nikal pada, air maine chadar k andar apna lund k ragadna shuru kar diya. Ye anubhav mujhe ajib se santusti dene lagi. 

Dono ek dusre ko haiwano ki tarah kiss karne lage, hoth chusne ki awaz saaf sunai de rahi thi.... Kuch der honth se honth milte rahe, dono jism me hawa k liye bhi jagah nahi bachi thi, Jamaal apna sir jhukaye aur punam sir utha kar zabardast chumban ka khel khelne lage. Jamaal ab rukne waala nahi tha, use ye achhi taraf maalum ho gaya k punam ab uska pura saath degi, Jamaal ab bold ho kar apna dono haath punam k pith ko aur patli kamar ko sehla raha tha, hoth dono ne abtak alag nahi kiye.... Jamaal ne ab apna dono haath punam ki gand pe rakh diya, punam ko bijli ka jhatka sa laga, wo kaamp gai, lekin use koi aitraz nahi tha, Jamaal ne dress k upar se hi punam ki gand ko halke haatho se sehlana chalu kiya,....kiss tadta hua Jamaal... Apni nai GF ki aankho me dekhta hua bol pata
Jamaal- meri jaan, teri gand behad mulayam hai, 
Punam- ab se aapka hai, mera dil, dimag aur ye jism sab kuch k maalik ho aap. 
Punam ki baate sun kar mera andaza bilkul sahi nikla, Jamaal k pyar me wo fas chuki hai. 
Jamaal - to ab se tum mujhe sirf maalik keh kar hi pukarogi. 
Punam- ji maalik..... Aur Jamaal ko hontho ko wapis se apni honth se jakad liya.
Jamaal- kiss fir se todta hua.... Mai tumhe kya keh kar pukaru,? 
Punam- aap bas pukaro mujhe, chahe kisi bhi naam se, 
Jamaal- soch lo, baad me mu na fulana
Punam- soch liya, aap jaise bhi bulao....bas bulao, wahi mere liye sabse jaruri hai. 
Jamaal man hi man apne gande vichaaro ko aage karne laga, aur kas k punam ki gaand ko binch kar apne lund se uski chut tagadte hue kaha... 
Jamaal- achha to sun.... Mai tujhe randi keh kar bulau to he he
Punam- mai wo bhi ban jaungi aapke liye, aapko mera jitna stamaal karna hai kijye, magar mujhe khud se door ni kariye. Aap jo bologe mai karungi, har chiz me aapka pura saath dungi, aapke pyar k liye mai kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hu.
Punam ki kaamukh baate Jamaal k andar chipe baithe uss janwar ko jagane lagi, jo janwar uski jism ki har zarurato ko pura karna ka dam rakhta hai. 
Jamaal uski baate sun kar ab control kho chula tha, punam ki gaand k dono hisso me apna ek ek haath rakh kar masalte hue kapdo k upar se hi failane laga, aur chumban sura ho gaya, aaaauuummmcchhh aauummmcchh, punam ko dard ho raha tha, usne apni lips hatate hue.... Oooohh God, mmmmaaaaahhhh, hhhhhaaaahhhhh, aaaahhh. Punam ki siskariya tez ho gai, Jamaal ne apna kaam jaari rakha, uske haath punam ki gand ko kabi masalta, to kabhi failata, wo jitna failata, punam ki aaahhhh ki awaz me gati aa chuki thi.... Uski chut ne apna ras bahana shuru kar diya, Jamaal samajh chuka tha, wo sidhe punam ko diwar pe tikate hue khade khade usse chipak jaata hai, punam apni baahe Jamaal ke kandho pe tkaya aur khade hone ka sahara liye. 
Usne bilkul der nahi ki aur punam ka night dress jhat se utar k bed pe mere karib fek diya. Punam ne whit exotic bra pehen rakha tha, lekin wo size ka hote hue uski tight gol doodh k chupa na paya, niche ek black panty me punam bohot gazab lag rahi thi, 
Jamaal- ya ,.'....kya taqdir banai hai meri, ufff. 
Jamaal ne bra ko bhi khol diya aur sidhe uski gori chuchhi pe toot pada, right boobs ko masalte hua left boob k nipples ko chusna chalu kiya, punam ki siskariyo ka hisab rakhna muskhkil tha, wo zor se aaahe bharne lagei, tez garam saanse Jamaal ko aur bhi uttejit karne lagi, Jamaal ne apna panja punam ki right chuchi pe ja chuka tha, bohot zor lagate hue hawas me haavi ho kar chuchi ko aate ki tarah guthne laga, aur left chuchi ki nipple chuste hue puri chuchi ko apne muh me bharne ka naakam koshish karne laga....punam se ab raha nahi gaya usne Jamaal k lund uske pant k upar se pakad liya, achanak punam ko jaise 440 volt ka jhatka laga, aaahhh..... Ooohh maaa, Jamaal k lund ko pakde hue
Punam thoda anjaan banne ka natak karne lagi, masum si shakal bana k usne bade hi pyar se kaha

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Punam- aaaaahhh.....mmmmhhhhh ooofff, ye kya hai maalik? 
Jamaal- tumhe nahi pata? mmhhmm
aap batao na. 
Jamaal- ise lund kehte hai meri jaan, kya tumhe ye chahiye? 
Punam ko kapdo ke upar se Jamaal k lund ka andaza nahi lag pa raha tha lekin pura tight lund haath se hatana muskil tha punam k liye... Itne me usne kaha
Punam- apni lower lip ko daat se dabate hue, Jamaal ki lips tak pochi aur pura ka pura honth chuste hue kaha....... ji, apke lund ki mujhe zaurat hai. Denge na? 
Jamaal hanste hue- meri bholi bhali pari... Iss lund pe kaho to tera naam likh du. 
Punam- Itrate hue......Mai likhungi, taaki mere alawa koi bhi ise chu na paaye....aapka lund sirf mere kaam aayega maalik....plsss ab dikhaiye, bahar nikaliye. 
Jamaal- Achha ji, mai kyu nikalu, tere kapde maine utare, teri bra bhi utari, aur tum mera lund apne haantho se nahi nikal sakti? 
Punam- thik hai fir. Keh kar punam ne Jamaal ki pant ka belt kholna shuru kiya, pant k buttons khole chaddi pe haath rakhte hi Jamaal ne use roka. 
Jamaal- Itni bhi kya jaldi hai jaaneman, pehle ye to batao k tum kya karogi mere iss lund ka? 
Iss sawal ne punam ko sharmsaar kar diye, wo kaise besharmo ki tarh kehti k kya karegi uske saath. Lekin mujhe chawkane me punam ne der nahi ki....aur kaha

Punam- iski puja karungi
Jamaal- hmm?..... kya baat hai, yaani k cock worship?
Punam- ji maalik. Aur sharm se apna mu Jamaal k chati pe sata dia. 
Jamaal- mai tumhara mood to nahi kharab karna chahta lekin tum kaho to iss gandu ko bahar nikal du. Meri or ishara karte hue.... 
Punam- nahi ise rehne do, iska hak hai apni GF ko uske naye navele BF k saath pyar karte hue dekhne ki, waise bhi ye kuch kar nahi sakta, lekin ise aaj ye sikhana zaruri hai k 5 ya 10 min me har mard jhad ke khatam nahi ho jaata. Aur ye mujhe yaha na laata....to aapse mili na hoti
Jamaal- jaisa tum kaho begum sahiba
Uske muh se begam shabd sun k punam khus ho gai, usi khusi me usne Jamaal se kaha...
Punam- maalik aap mujhe begum hi boliye, achha lag raha hai. 
Jamaal- mmmm thik hai begum, lekin tumhe ab aage bohot kuch sikhna hoga. 
Punam- wo kya? 
Jamaal- jaise kaise tum mujhe khush kar sakti ho, mai ruth jau to manane k liye kya karna hoga? Aur pyar me kya kya kar sakte hai.....kya kya karna parta hai?  
Punam- aapko hi sikhana hoga
Jamaal- tab to mai tumhara guru hua, to mujhe sir keh kar bhi ab pukar sakti ho
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(22-09-2022, 10:55 PM)Forktail6 Wrote: Won't have to wait long, I know the urge.... I have felt myself. Bt have patience, ye story xossip ki sabse lambi story hogi. You have my words. Har roz update milega, kisi kisi din jada bhi milega, aur pics and gifs mai edit kar daal dunga sahi time pe

Thanks again for prompt response
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(22-09-2022, 11:34 PM)Pvzro Wrote: Thanks again for prompt response

In future of the story... A glance

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Superb Awesome story...!!
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(23-09-2022, 08:42 AM)Mgaya Wrote: Superb Awesome story...!!

Thanx a lot buddy
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