01-09-2022, 02:20 PM
Superb.....
Waiting for more...
Waiting for more...
Adultery Married Lady forcibly Fucked by multiple men
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01-09-2022, 02:20 PM
Superb.....
Waiting for more...
02-09-2022, 09:28 PM
No updates?
03-09-2022, 10:05 PM
05-09-2022, 11:53 AM
(03-09-2022, 10:05 PM)ktmguy2019 Wrote: My apology is already in the starting time. You have destroyed Shalini's character even at the begining which another writer developed with utmost care. You have already made Shalini into lusty. you have no right to destroy other writer's story like this. Start your own story and do as you want, but do not spoil this super developed character. Original writer developed her lust little by little, see within a few episeodes, you have exposed her to many men.... what da hell idiot, If i had an option i would report you.... do not spoil this story idiot....
05-09-2022, 09:36 PM
(05-09-2022, 11:53 AM)jobut Wrote: You have destroyed Shalini's character even at the begining which another writer developed with utmost care. You have already made Shalini into lusty. If you don't like then don't read it bro. He is writing on his version there are so many stories like this with different versions with different writers. He is doing all this in his free time and giving us update we have to respect him for his work. Not everyone in this site like all genres, versions and plots if we liked the story just give like rate and comment else just avoid that's it...These are all just for the free time to relax and stress free....
05-09-2022, 09:41 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-09-2022, 09:42 PM by Muralimm. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(05-09-2022, 11:53 AM)jobut Wrote: You have destroyed Shalini's character even at the begining which another writer developed with utmost care. You have already made Shalini into lusty. Here we have no right to say anything to the writer because everyone has there own thought So don't question are say wrong you don't like it then quite And you want justice then write your own
06-09-2022, 04:37 PM
06-09-2022, 04:42 PM
(03-09-2022, 10:05 PM)ktmguy2019 Wrote: My apology is already in the starting time. https://xossipy.com/thread-38609-post-34...pid3424783
10-09-2022, 06:26 PM
update fast
10-09-2022, 11:37 PM
11-09-2022, 01:17 AM
Please update soon
12-09-2022, 10:47 PM
No update
12-09-2022, 10:57 PM
Waiting..
13-09-2022, 12:26 PM
(05-09-2022, 09:36 PM)Saikarthik Wrote: If you don't like then don't read it bro. He can write any bulshit here, but he has no right to destroy another writer's character. That is why i am talking, men.... i do not say anything if he writes his own story without making matters worst.
13-09-2022, 12:26 PM
(05-09-2022, 09:41 PM)Muralimm Wrote: Here we have no right to say anything to the writer because everyone has there own thoughtHe can write any bulshit here, but he has no right to destroy another writer's character. That is why i am talking, men.... i do not say anything if he writes his own story without making matters worst.
13-09-2022, 10:43 PM
(13-09-2022, 12:26 PM)jobut Wrote: He can write any bulshit here, but he has no right to destroy another writer's character. That is why i am talking, men.... i do not say anything if he writes his own story without making matters worst. Okk let's go Anyway I think the author had stopped this story so waste of discuss
15-09-2022, 07:05 PM
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I don't think the author ruined the story. It's just a different style.
20-09-2022, 02:02 PM
Dead?
29-09-2023, 07:59 PM
Mast hai bhai
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