[nallapaiyan]

yr):

excellent update boss.

please move the story at your own pace. that is the uniquness of this story. all the best.

the scenes/ convsersation between kumar/shemba is mind blowing. great dialogues of double meaning.

[Ragunathan]

Vera level update bro.....

[Joshua]

Guys please give some space to author he knows how to write please don't interfere in his own ideas.

[nallapaiyan]

Guys please give some space to author he knows how to write please don't interfere in his own ideas.

you are perfectly correct bro.

the author mostly wont react to the comments, he just posts the story episodes and concentrates on next episodes.


i am happy if he even drags the story even more. i like the temptation more than sex scenes,

i again say this is one sort of a unique story 

cheers to the author

[Joshua]

Yes bro some kajii fellow always insist the author to change the story that's what most of the author quit the story inbetween. And thnks for this kind of mentality bro. Here most of the people not think this is just a story they think something realistic happens their life and fight to change the story plot.hahahahaha

[nallapaiyan]

Yes bro some kajii fellow always insist the author to change the story that's what most of the author quit the story inbetween. And thnks for this kind of mentality bro. Here most of the people not think this is just a story they think something realistic happens their life and fight to change the story plot.hahahahaha

yes, i see author's brilliance in shemba falling for 2 guys at the same time. if it was only one guy, it could have been bit boring of recurring situations, but interchanging it between 2 guys makes this story quite good journey.

[Noor81110]

You are writing best one bro

[krishkj]

Nice nanba unga way of narrative lae kalakitu irukinga semma keep rocking

[harry9944]

[Navinneww]

Semma tempting

[Sparo]

Nice update bro

[hornyfromchennai]

Semma update nanba

[auntidhason]

Bro no wards .....smiply hottest narration

[rr806767]

Super hot story.. Please continue in your own style.

[karthicrs]

yr): yr):  நான் இந்த கதையை ரசித்து படித்து வருகிறேன். மெதுவாக நகர்ந்தாலும் ரசனையுடன் நகர்கிறது. ஆசிரியருக்கு ஒரு வேண்டுகோள் நான் ஆண்ட்டி தொப்புள் ரசிகன். எனவே கதையில் சிறு அளவிலான தொப்புள் காட்சிகள் வைக்கவும். நன்றி  

 

[Tamilfuck]

இந்த தளத்தில் கதை எழுதுவது எப்படி தெரிந்தவர் இருந்தால் பதில் கொடுங்கள்

[Krkitp]

Super

[Thirupriya]

Super nanba slow va ponalum sema story nanba but konjam update matum quickly potu nanba pls ithu enga elarthota request nanba

[nallapaiyan]

Super nanba slow va ponalum sema story nanba but konjam update matum quickly potu nanba pls ithu enga elarthota request nanba

i think, as he giving big update regarding this story, he will take time

[Manikandan85]

Update pannunga bro ?