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Adultery KAMVASNA..
Bhai yr aapke story ka kehna hi kya... Aap bahut hi high level se likhte ho story.... Yaha abhi hamne aisa socha bhi nhi ki raga aur amruta ke bich mein kuch ho sakta kyunki woh waha jane hi nhi chahti thi par kismat ki baat hein...... Joh kal amruta ne mehsus kiya tha usse toh saf tha amruta khud pein ab easily kabu toh nhi kr sakti ..... Ab usko yeh sab mein dhire dhire maja ane laga hein....kyunki woh puri time wahi soch mein thi... Bhale hi usne thaan liya tha ki woh kuch kregi nhi aaj pr..... Kismat bhi chahti hein ki raga ko amruta ke darshan ho.... And fir uske baad joh amruta gayi toh vatavaran toh shant hi tha.... Pr garam tab hua jab raga ne uska mobile.. Uske gande dhoti mein..... Uske woh kale lund ke pass dala.... Hhaha... Bhai that was like..... Damn.... What a moment .. Aisa lag raha tha mano mein samne baith kr yeh sab dekh raha hu... And then fir uske baad joh amruta ke saath raga ne joh accha khasa uska sajish bhara khel joh khela... Wow.. . Like socha nhi tha aisa bhi ho sakta hein.... And fir uske baad jis way ne raga ne amruta ko emotional way plus uski gandi bato se amruta ko alag sa fill hone laga and uske bolte hi jyda na sochte hue amruta ne uske khule krdiye.... Wow... Matlab... Bahut hi badhiya... And then images ko dekh ke lag raha tha mere samne hi woh ek ek krke uske dono aam nikal rahi ho.... Wah.... Matlab itna khoob likha hein aapne... Bahut hi badiya....and joh amruta ke saath yeh sab scene hue... Woh toh bahut hi mast the..... And upar se raga ne phone side mein rakha nikalke vade ke mutabik bhi kiya...pr... Pr ... Amruta usske hawas mein itni khogayi ki usko dhyaan mein tak nhi aya..... And i think yaha hi amruta ki garmi kitni hein pata chalti hein.... Itna toh ritesh ke saath bhi nhi kiya hoga... Hahaha..... Great.. Amurta ka yeh roop dekh ne mein majja aaraha...... Aage aage aur kya hoga dekhne ko majja aayega ... Royal bhai you are the best writer...... Super excited for next update..... Jaldi dena......
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waiting for next update ❤️
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Waiting bro
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Bohot sundar likh rahe ho aap bhai....or sach mai yeh talent aapko uparwaale ne badhiya sa diya hai....or aapke fan bhi bhut detailed mai complement dete hai jisse ek writer ko motivation milta hai.....isi tarah aage bhi likhte raho bhai...
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(22-08-2022, 02:30 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bohot sundar likh rahe ho aap bhai....or sach mai yeh talent aapko uparwaale ne badhiya sa diya hai....or aapke fan bhi bhut detailed mai complement dete hai jisse ek writer ko motivation milta hai.....isi tarah aage bhi likhte raho bhai...

Bhai apki Vandana Vali story bhi  awesome hai..
You can say top notch...
Aap bhi.. use soon continue Karo...
Apki writing bhi ... badhiyaa hai...
Just you have to add more..Gif.. and pics to make moments more realistic ..
Use feeel badh jata hai story ka...
All the best for that..
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bahut bahut garam,bahut bahut kamuk aur sexy update! clps clps clps
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(22-08-2022, 03:50 PM)Explorer@life Wrote: Bhai apki Vandana Vali story bhi  awesome hai..
You can say top notch...
Aap bhi.. use soon continue Karo...
Apki writing bhi ... badhiyaa hai...
Just you have to add more..Gif.. and pics to make moments more realistic ..
Use feeel badh jata hai story ka...
All the best for that..

Bhai jaldi update dunga usme....
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(22-08-2022, 08:39 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bhai jaldi update dunga usme....

Waiting bhai
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Waiting next update bro
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Eagerly awaiting for the next update
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Plz update
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Bhai Waiting for update news... Eagarly...
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Jabardast,jackass aur faddu update! bahut h mast,bahut h majhedar kahaani
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vah! bahot bahut hi interesting tharika se jaa raha hai ye kahaani!
bahut behtareen thariike se likha hai sab kuch aap ne,bahut khoob,bahut acha, Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar
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Fantastic story! Fantastic writing! Fantastic plot! Fantastic narrations!
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When is next update bro
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(21-08-2022, 09:25 PM)Hellopublic Wrote: True bhai. He can add about namrata also. I think  because the hint in the story are maybe related to her. So in future maybe we can see it. And yes namrata's story is the best story.  waiting for next update.

The thing is why we said to include namrata in this story because if amruta does sex with few strangers then story might become predictable.And for long story it will need more interesting characters for example in namrata's story there was namrata's story as well as suchita's story going parallele so story was interesting.And in this story I think more characters will come in future.So we just requested author to include namrata to give justice to her character.If he thinks namrata is fits in his storyline then he will include and if he thinks it doesn't then no problem.this story is very interesting and we are very much excited for next update. horseride
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(20-08-2022, 04:09 PM)Cutecuck Wrote: Aslam ki raand dr.kamya. Namrata a sanskari girl to randi and budha tailor and last one bde ghar ki bahu betiya and now this story marvoulous outstanding amazing superb

Thank you brother for your honest appreciation Heart

Joh aapne kahaniyon ke name liye voh sab khud me he ek masterpiece hain and agar jinhe meri kahani pasand aa rahi hain i definitely said unko ye kahaniyan jarur pasand aayegi . Before starting writing maine bhi ye sab kahaniya padhi hain  Shy

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