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vah!vah!vah! yaar, bahut bahut maja agaya is kahaani padhke,
superb, wonderful, sexellent kahaani,
bahot hi garam aur kamuk tharika se likha is kahaani ko.
kia likhte hai aapne yaar,
ekdom kamaal hai yaar, such mein ekdom kamaal kahaani.
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bahut bahut mast, zabardsast aur damaka kahaani
ekdom kamaal ka likhte ho aapne yaara
bahot bahut bmaja aaya,dil kush kar dhiya aapne
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ekdom jackass aur lajawab story! bahut bahut acha update!
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bahut h majedaar aur lajawab kahaani hai yah!
bahut ziada garam aur kamuk likha! dil khush kar diya aapne is kahaani likha kar! bahut maja agaya yaar!
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Raat ke 10 baje mai ghar se nikli. Mainay uss waqt ek orange colour ki saree aur matching sleevless blouse pehen rakha tha.apni identity chupane ke liye mainay apni car ki jagah ek auto kiya aur PAKIA ke ghar jane ko nikal padi.
Auto Driver ne mujhay shak bhari nazron se dekha...Itni mast aurat aur raat ke is time par us gandi basti mein???
Auto Driver:- Chalunga Madam...500/- rupey lagenge
SHALINI: 500/-????? Itni kam duri ke liye itna zyada kyon Bhaiya???
auto Driver: Ab aap log 100-200 zyada nahi dogi toh kaun dega??? kehta hua usne ek bahut hee sarcastic smile diya mujh ko
Main ne ussey behes karna munasib nahi samjha aur boli...THEEK HAI ...CHALO. phir mai uss auto may baith gai aur basti ki taraf chal padi
raaste bhar auto driver rear view mirror se meri madmast jawani ka deedar karta raha.
basti ke paas pahunch kar auto wale ne pucha...KIDHAR JANA HAI MADAM??
Mainay ne kaha..kisi se pucho PAKIYA ka ghar kaun sa hai
Auto wale ne ek do aadmi se pucha...aur unhone ek taraf ishara kiya
Auto wala wapas aaya aur bola ...Madam udhar jana hai..lekin udhar auto nahi jaa payega..aapko paidal hee jana hoga....
Shalini: Ohhhh....Theek hai.... Mainay auto walay ko 500 ka note diya aur auto say utar gai
Auto driver ne hanste huey mujh say paise liye aur bola...RAAT KO PAISE DENA TOH AAPKO ACHA NAHI LAGTA HOGA...AAKHIR RAAT TOH AAPKE LIYE PAISE KAMANE KE LIYE HOTA HAI.....
Mai ne uska matlab samajhtey hee chilla kar boli...SHUT UP!!! APNE KAAM SE MATLAB RAKHO..aur waha say aagaya jaanay lagi
Auto wale ne piche se chilla kar kaha...KABHI HUMEIN BHI MAUKA DENA....KASAM SE YEH AUTO BECH DUNGA AGAR PAISE KAM PADEY TOH...
Wo do kaudi ka auto wala mujhay, Jo ki ek high class khandaani aurat thi usay ek CALLGIRL samajh raha tha mai apni ab tak ki life may kabhi itna humiliation nahi jhela tha ..Iss baar mainay uss auto waalay Kay iss ghatiya comments ka jawab dena munasib nahi samjha aur apnay gussay ko pee kar apnay mission yani wo cd pakia say hasil karnay ko kadan aagay badhaya
.Lekin mujh bechari ko kya pata tha ki meray kadam jahan badh rahe hain wahan meray naseeb mein kya kya likha hai
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। शालीनी गुप्तआ
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Great awesome update bhai
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Brother,please give importance on Salaman
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(12-08-2022, 10:58 AM)Bimal Wrote: Brother,please give importance on Salaman
agree with you
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bahut badhiya update! bahut khoob! bahut h mast story!
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(12-08-2022, 10:58 AM)Bimal Wrote: Brother,please give importance on Salaman
ekdom sahi
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bahut h shandar aur lajawab update!
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ekdom kamaal ka update,bahut acha likhte hai aapne yaar! bahut maza agaya
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Great update! Great story! Great writings!
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bahut bahut shandar update
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