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Dost bana pita aur naukar bana jija
#61
(21-07-2022, 05:58 PM)Bluee Wrote: bhai koi detail wagera kuch likha hi nai aapne? shadi hui kasie hui kya hua, mangalsutra pahenaya, fere etc.. ?

New writer hnu,?
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#62
fir bhi acha hai likho astory line up acha hai plot acha hai likhao likhao,, likhte likhte hi seekh te hai..
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#63
UPDATE -X

Ghar me sab dhuki the ,sabse jada dukh to Rita ko thi kunki wo dhuki ho gayi thi.....usne apni suhag ko diya tha...
Priya ko jab uss dhongi ko baat yaad ayi to usko laga sayad wo sach keh raha tha lekin aab samay nehni tha usko leke baat karne kaa....

Tarun ki Maan bhi dhuki tha kunki wo aab apni suhagraat k liye wait karegaaa,hariya bhi dhuki tha kunki usko riya k sath apni khel nehni kar sakta....

Raj to apne pita ko khone k baad duniya bhul gya tha usko to Gita sambhal Rahi thi....

Dhire dhire samay guzar ta gaya.....

2 mahine baad dhire sab kuch normal hone laga tha Priya riya ,raj aur tarun apni college Jane lage the
Gita,swati company ko sambhal Rahi thi Rita ki madad se...
Ghar ki sara bag dor hariya aur vimla pe thi....

Ek raat Priya apni soch me dubi thi....
Riya-kya hua didi aap abhi bhi papa ko yad kar rahe he....
Priya-nehni choti wo baat nehni he phir wo dhongi ne jo baat bataya tha usko riya Priya ko bol deti he...
Riya-ye kese ho sakta he aap aur me ek he admi se shaadi kare....
Priya- mujhe bhi manjur nehni lekin agar hamari family ko koi problem hua jese hum papa ko kho diye...
Riya-priya ki baat ko sochti he....,di aap sahi keh rahi ho iss bare me hum maa ,choti maa aur bua se baat karenge ..
Riya(Mann me)- me didi ko kamine hariya ka hone nehni dungi ,me khud to barbad ho gayi hnu lekin kya karu bahut uljhan he ...

College me..in last days..
Raj- Tarun aab iss college me hamari padhai khatam ho chuka he....kya socha he age ka
Tarun-Me to issi seher ka jo badi college he wahan padhunga.
Raj-Pitaji ka iccha thi ki me Bengaluru jake MBA karu...
Tarun-Haan tum bahar jao,kya dikat he....
Raj-Lekin mujhe akele rehne ki adat nehni he aur family ko kon sambhalegaa
Tarun-me hnu,teri bua he aur tu Teri choti maa k sath chale jana ....
Raj-sahi bol raha he
Phir dono Ghar chale aye...

Shaam ko Saab log dinning table pe baith kar dinner kar rahe the...tabhi raj apni future study ki baat batayi...
Rita-Thik he choti tu iske sath chale jana
Gita-Lekin company kon handle karega ...
Swati-Me aur bhabhi ji milke sambhal lenge tum jao raj sath

Phir raat ko Tarun ki room me....
Tarun-kya swati hamari suhagraat kab hogi,
Swati-sabar karo yaar bhaiya ki gujar jane k baad me thodi pareshan ho gayi thi...
Tarun -Thik thik he ,aur sote time saree nehni chalegi tumko night gown pehen kar Sona he samjhi..
Swati-uski mujhe adat nehni he ...
Tarun-Aab adat daldo,meri har baat mana he tumko
Swati- kosis karungi...
Tarun swati ko kich kar ek kiss karta he aur swati is achanak hamle se achambit ho jati he...

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Swati-chodo mujhe aur chup chap so jao...

Hariya aaj bahut dino baad riya k pass aya tha chat pe milne
Hariya-Bolo kya bolna he....
Riya-bahut badi problem ho gayi he phir Priya ki sari baat usko bata deti he... Aur rone lagti he...
Hariya-sab kuch jante hue bhi,are ye kya ho gaya Priya ko samjhana bahut muskil hoga kunki wo bahut manti he insan bato ko....
Riya-yahi to problem he..
Hariya-Tum room me abhi usko sari baat batado aur wo kya bolti he mujhe batao
Riya-nehni didi mujhe maar degi....
Hariya-kosis karo.....

Phir riya apni room me jati he...Priya ko jagati he....aur sari story usko suna deti he...Priya ko gussa to bahut ata he lekin sari baat samajhne k baad wo shant rehti he....
Priya- jis harami ne tujhe blackmail kiya tu use shaddi karne ka decide kese kiya
Riya-Aur koi rasta nehni tha didi
Priya-lekin hariya itna ghatiya insaan he mujhe nehni malum tha
Riya-chodo di unse jada mera dosh he....
Priya-aab me kya karu,uss admi ne jo bola he agar nehni Manu to hamara he nuksaan hoga....
Riya-aapki marzi
Priya-mujhe sochne ka time chahiye
Yeshe he raat guzar jata hai kalki din bahut kuch parivartan lane wala tha
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#64
acha hai
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#65
Sayad me story accha nahi likh raha iss liye mujhe jada reactions nehni milta jald he ye story khatam kar dunga 2 updates me fast forward karke
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#66
are yaar tum likhao apni puri karo aise skip na karo
jitne par rahe hai unke liye to likho
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#67
(22-07-2022, 11:33 AM)Sambit07 Wrote: Sayad me story accha nahi likh raha iss liye mujhe jada reactions nehni milta jald he ye story khatam kar dunga 2 updates me fast forward karke

Bhai ap story to achi likh rh ho par ap ne jo nukar ka kirdar hai woh sai nai jo muje lag rh hai dono bhen ko nakur se shadi chalo bhua ki karwadi par itna neecha nai jao ke story me maza e nai aye. Story me tora twist le kar ao. Jase Tarun company ko apna karna chata ho ap raj choti maa ko apna kar sake. Mtlb ab woh dusre city ja rh hai to wahn dono khul kar enjoy kar study ke sath sath or jab usko pta chale to woh wapis aye or company ko take over na ke tarun. Baki ap samjdar ho.
Story both achi par platform tora change karo.
Zabardast likh rh ho ap.
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#68
UPDATE -XI


Priya finally decided kar diya tha usko kya karna he lekin usko daar tha uski family ki badnami naa ho jaye....
Subha uthte hi
Priya-choti me decide kar liye he
Riya-kya?
Priya-me hariya se shaddi karungi
Riya- itni jaldi soch liya,wo Buddha tumko itna pasand agaya kya...
Priya-nehni choti wo mandir Wale admi ki baat se daar he mujhe kese hum dono ne papa ko kho diya wese parivar ko naa khodu isska mujhe dar he .....
Riya-Lekin didi agar hum dono ne ye kiya to ghar ka kya izzat reh jayegi...
Priya- wo sab chod , shaddi me abhi time he 2)3 saal,tu hariya ko bula me baat karungi....
Riya-Raat ko karenge,sab so Jaye tab

Phir dono college Jane ki tayari karte hain

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give me a number
Priya and Riya

Raj-maa me aaj sham ko Bengaluru jaunga flight se choti maa k sath
Rita-Haan ,aaj hotel ? me room le lena age se ek room rent pe le lena
Gita-Haan wahi socha he ,lekin room milna bahut muskil hoga
Rita_ Situation dekh kar kam karna


Sabse jada khus koi tha hariya usko to sirf Priya ki intezar tha kese dono beheno ko apni lugai banayega ye soch raha tha....

Din guzar gayi sham ko Raj aur Gita nikal gaye benguluru airport chodne sab gaye the...
Swati-Gita bhabi raj ka khayal rakhna bahut bhola he
Rita-Haan Gita agar koi problem ho to humko information Dena
Gita-Raj aab meri jimendari he
Priya,riya-bhai tu jald phadai khatam karke ajana u will miss u...
Tarun-dost parivar ki chinta mat karna me hnu sab sambhal lunga....
Phir raj aur Gita nikal gaye...
Raat ko dinner k baad sab log so Gaye the lekin 3 log jinko neend nehni tha ek oriya,dusri teesri hariya

Hariya chupke se Priya aur riya ko kamre me ghus jata he kunki pehle he bol diya tha darwaja khula rakhne ko...
Priya-Aap yahan kese...
Hariya-Riya ne bulaya tha...
Priya-aap riya ko blackmail karke phasa diya he apni jaal me...
Hariya-wo me riya ki sundarta dekh kar apni control kho diya iss liye galti se ye sab kar diya...
Priya-jo bhi ho aap accha insan nehni he...
Hariya-me bura hnu to he sahi....aab me uska hone wala pati hnu...
Riya-didi tum shant raho thoda , didi razzi ho gayi he shaddi k lye tumhare sath ..
Hariya-sach me kya,meri to bhagya khul gayi....
Priya-jada khus hone ki jarurat nehni me mere family ki bhali k liye ye sab kar raha hnu...lekin koi bhi uss k liye razzi nehni hoga
Hariya-uski chinta tum mat karo me kuch soch lunga..... pehle hamare pyar ki suruwat karte hai
Bolke Priya pakad leta he...aurlip to lip kisss karne lagta he ...
Wahin riya hariya ki dhoti khol kar uska Lund chusne lagta he...

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Phir kuch der baad Priya ko lund chusne ko hariya bolta he lekin wo mana dar deti he ,hariya usko pakad k uske mnu me lund ghusaa deta he..

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Kuch der yeshi chalta he aur hariya Priya ki mnu Sara virya nikal deta he aur jabardasti Priya ko pilla deta he....
Hariya-sunno tum dono aaj se me issi room me sounga tum dono k bich....
Riya-koi dekh laga to problem hogi....
Hariya-kuch nehni hoga daro mat,phir teeno wahin so jate hain.....
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#69
wow nice.. nesxt pls. thora bara update do
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#70
Writer bhai ap ahbi be wohi scene create kar rh ho nakur ka jo hum 2 3 story read kar chuke hain.
Please change karin.
keep it up.
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#71
Excellent story bhai pls continue
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#72
update please...!!!
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#73
update please. and make this story more and more long
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#74
Badiya hai age liko
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#75
bhai update doo yaar
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#76
Badia upadate
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#77
Awesome story
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#78
Waiting for next update
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#79
Waiting
Life is for living, So Live it Shy
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#80
Kya yah kahani khatam ho gayi
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