20-07-2022, 04:19 PM
(20-07-2022, 03:16 PM)fuk_fuk_fukrey Wrote: Bhai tum jo khe rhe ho wo sahi hai. Par bhai mujhe laga tumri story ture love banegi aur ban rhi thi achanak se tumne turn le liya.... Agar aisa tha to tumko story ka title kuch aur rakna tha aur bro ye bhi to ho sakta tha 1 month me mummy papa se Kara sakti hai roj ka samaj a rha hai par 1 month me ho sakta tha...
Tumne kaha hai review dene to is liye mai kaha wase story achi hai bas line change hui thodi si
Bhai title se true love kaise soch lia aur writer ne koi hint nai di love ki ulta Kabir ko harami hi bataya hai pehle din se. .Kabir ko pyaar hota toh jab gaurd se karwai toh bura feel hota par usko maza aayi aur security officer wale ko offer bhi Kabir ne hi dia..
Aur Sulochana ke pyaar ka chance hi nai jaise uska pati aayega wo guilt me jayega.
Writer line pe hi hai tum thoda bhatak gaye.
Ye story 1st update se utni hi jabardast hai jitni ab hai.