[Rizzi1198]

Superb start

[BlackHorse]

Awesome aur fataka kahaani shuro kia aapne bhai,Jabardast update! mast likhte h aapne yaar, ekdom faddu aur lajawab! clp); clp); clp);

[The King of Devils]

Awesome update! Super excellent story! Mind blowing writing! Fantastic narrations! Wonderful erotic scene making! Everything is just perfect. yr):

[Rinkp219]

.mast update tha dost.... waiting more.....

[raj500265]

watinggggggggggggggggggggggg

[Nobita]

Awesome episode 1 ....eagerly waiting for next episodes.

[Lok k]

Waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

[Royalkingfire]

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR APPRECIATING MY WORK THIS IS THE BEGINNING.... clp);

KEEP SUPPORTING

EPISODE 03 AAJ AAYEGA   

[Vik88]

Wow, What an update ! Absolutely fantastic and stunning writings!
IT Is just fabulous! wonderful, mind blowing STORY! clp); clp); clp);

[Kamuk_chora]

Brother you are a great writer.....Please give next update fast

[Kamuk_chora]

[Royalkingfire]

                  EPISODE    :- 02..........





AMRUTA aur RITESH ki car abb ghar ke samne thi ghar nahi puri haveli thi 2 badi badi imarte bada sa garden , haveli ke samne security gards aur politician hone ke karan haveli ke samne hamesha security officer ki 2-3 jeep hoti thi , gate pe security gards 







RITESH aapni car ko andar le jata hain jate vakt security gards usss salam karte hain andar parking ke yaha voh apni car laga deta hain 

AMRUTA car ke niche utarti hain vaha kai sare log the security gards , ghar ke naukar aur garden main kam karne vale 


AMRUTA ke niche utarne se uske pairo ki payal chan kar ke bajti hain 

Lekin vaha moujud kisi ki bhi gardan na Amruta ko dekhti hain nahi koi sar upar kar ke Amruta ko dekhni ki koshish karta hain sabki najre ekdum niche 

Aur aisa hone ka Sabse bada karan tha PRATAP MAHAJAN yani ki Amruta ke sasur bhale he hospital me Amruta aur RITESH khul ke jeete hain par isss haveli me aur shehar main sirf aur sirf PRATAP MAHAJAN ka khouf chalta hain koi unke ghar ke aurat ko aankh utha ke bhi nahi dekh sakta aisa khouf hain PRATAP MAHAJAN ka , RITESH hamesha college me bad me college me kabhi kisi ko nahi bataya ki uska bap kya karta hain fir log bhi usse dar ke rehte 


AMRUTA ko bhi relationship ke kafi bad me pata chala ki RITESH ka background kya hain 


Ab dono bhi uss haveli main entry karte hain haveli main sham ke party ki tayari chalu thi kuch he wakt tha mehmano ko aane me tabhi Amruta ko same sidhiyo se uske sasur aate huve dikhte hain .


Chal me ek alag andaj tha safed kapde niche dhoti hath me ek kadak lathi aur badi badi muche ek alag swag tha PRATAP MAHAJAN ka 



Sasur ke samne aate he Amruta aage jake niche jhuk jati hain aur pranam karti hain pratap uske sir pe hath rakh ke pranam swikar karta hain uske bad Ritesh bhi jhuk kar pranam karta hain 


PRATAP :- jao beta tayari kar lo mehman aate hoge 


RITESH :- ha jata hu papa .


Dono bhi aapne kamre ki aur chal he dete hain .

Tabhi PRATAP ki kadak aavaj dono ko rok deti hain 

PRATAP :- bahuuuuuu. ..


Voh aavaj sun Amruta tham ke piche mudti hain 


AMRUTA :- ji papaji kya huva 



PRATAP :- tum iss ghar ki bahu ho iss haveli ki hone vali malkin aur hamare liye tum vahi ho joh iss ghar me hain .


AMRUTA :- jii par samji nahi main papaji thik se .


PRATAP :- mujhe ye kehna hain ki tum ek doctor ho voh aspatal me yaha tum hamari bahu ho toh tumhe ek bahu jaisa rehna padega 


Tabhi Ritesh bich me bolta hain 


RITESH :- ji papa main samaj gaya main isse samjata hu thik se 


Amruta ko abhi bhi kuchh nahi samja tha par voh ha me ha mila deti hain 


PRATAP :- aur ha bahu aap hamare liye beti saman ho toh main samaj sakta hu apko yaha thoda adjust karne main taklif ho rahi hogi par apko iski adat dalni hogi , aaj iss shehar ke bohot bade bade log yaha aaa rahe hain aap dono se milne toh aapke peshe ke sath jara iss chij pe bhi dhyan dena.



Dono bhi ha kehte huve vaha se aapne room main jate hain .


AMRUTA :- kya huva RITESH kya keh rahe the papaji 



RITESH :- aare jan voh ye keh rahe the ki aaj hamare ghar me bade log aane vale hain toh tumhe vaisa he rehna hoga jaise ma rehti hain 


AMRUTA :- oh accha ..



RITESH :- MATLAB abhi joh tumne pehn rakaha hain vaisa nahi chalega aisa kehna tha papaji ko 




AMRUTA :- hmmm samaj gayi ye backless saree toh maine tumhare liye pehni thi jan 



RITESH :- i know par papaji ne kaha na ghar me bahu aur aspatal me doctor ho tum .



AMRUTA thodi muskurati hain aur dono aapne aapne tayari main lag jate hain .



Kuch he der bad sham ho jati hain Ritesh apni tayari kar ke niche aaa jata hain aur aapne bap ke sath baith jata hain 


Dhire dhire andhera hone lagta hain aur sab log aa jate hain 





Hall main ek round table tha jaha sare log baithe huve the gin ke 7-8 log the par iss shehar ke bade log jinke madat se pratap shehar pain control karta tha 


PRATAP MAHAJAN ke right side main baitha tha 


GAFUR LALA …..

Age :- 60 







GAFUR kafi samay se pratap ke liye black kam karta tha jaise kisi ko dhamkana kisi ko raste se hatana aur bhi bohot kam jo official nahi the GAFUR ke nam shehar ka ek bada elaka tha joh GAFUR pratap ke under control karta tha aur GAFUR khud ek slum se aaya huva nam tha joh ab ussi slum ko aapna kila bana chuka tha . GAFUR ke pas ek hukum ka ekka tha jiska nam tha RAGA



PRATAP ke left side main baitha tha iss shehar ka DCP sab use DCP MISHRA ke nam se jante the joh 





DCP MISHRA :- Age :- 55

MISHRA kafi harami tha sur voh pratap ke sare black cases handle karta tha aur GAFUR ke kiye gaye criminal activities ko handle karne ka kam karta tha 


Ye dono aadmi PRATAP MAHAJAN ke empire ke 2 piller the in dono ke madat se pratap pure shehar ko control karta tha aur ab voh ye sab aapne bete yani RITESH MAHAJAN ko bhi sikhana shuru kar chuka tha bhale he RITESH doctor tha par PRATAP use shuru se politics ka knowledge aur uski gandagi ko sikhana chalu kar diya tha 


Aur bache 2 piller toh PRATAP MAHAJAN ke baki 2 piller the uska pariwar aur ghar ki izzat politics main izzat bohot important hoti hain PRATAP aapne ghar ke aurto ko kafi chut deta tha par utna he kayde me rakhta tha aapne patni ke dehant ke bad ghar me do  he aurat bachi thi aur unme se ek  Shayad iss empire ki aagli malkin yani AMRUTA MAHAJAN .



Aur dusri PRATAP MAHAJAN ki beti SHANAYA MAHAJAN jiski shadi yaha ke bade business man Agarwal ke ghar uske bete se kiyi thi 


Agarwal PRATAP MAHAJAN ko fund provide karta tha joh abhi table pe moujud tha . 



Aur aakhri piller yani khud PRATAP MAHAJAN agar ye gira toh pura empire gir jaayega bhale he voh RITESH ko sab sikha raha hain par abhi black kamo ke bare me RITESH ko bhanak tak nahi hain .



Toh ye tha MAHAJAN empire ki ek jhalak …



Filhal haveli me bohot khushi ka mahol tha haveli ke gate ke bahar bohot gadiya thi aur gadiyo main khuch log the ye sab GAFUR ke aadmi the GAFUR hamesha aapne sath bohot sara backup leke ghumta tha ..



PRATAP sabko aapne bete ke shadi ke bare me bata raha tha tabhi GAFUR kehta hain .



GAFUR :- aaare Shahab voh sab toh thik hain par hain ka hamari  bahu. 


PRATAP :- Ritesh jara dekhna bahu ka huva ya nahi aur ha unhe rasoi ghar main ek bar dekhne ko kaho sab thik chal raha hain ya nahi 


RITESH :- ji papaji ….



Tabhi GAFUR kehta hain …



GAFUR :- aaare baitho Ritesh beta aa jayegi bahu rani aur rasoi ka tension na lo khas hamne bheja hain aaj karagir ko joh kadak bakre ki biryani banata hain ….



GAFUR ki ye bat sun ke jame huve sab log hasne lagte hain ……



Tabhi unn sabhi logo ko halki si Payal ki aavaj sunai deti hain .



Upar sidhiyo se iss ghar ki Bahu yani AMRUTA aaa rahi thi 



PRATAP aur RITESH ko chod ke sabko AMRUTA ko dekhne ki utsukata thi badi malkin yani PRATAP ke biwi ke marne ke bad abhi AMRUTA he iss ghar ki malkin hone vali thi 



Khas kar GAFUR aur DCP MISHRA Amruta ki aur aankhe laga ke dekh rahe the 




Pairo me chandi ki payal ek golden colour ki saree aur matching blouse ,kano main sone ke jhumke , otho pe gulabi lipstick , mathe pe gulabi bindi , gale me sone ka mangalsutra joh AMRUTA ke shadi ki gavahi de raha tha .hato ke ungliyon me sone ki anghuti joh uski khubsurti ko badha rahi thi aur chehre pain katilani muskan 








AMRUTA ko dekh sabhi ke hosh ud gaye the MAHAJAN Khandan ko jache usse bhi jyada khubsurti ki malkin thi Amruta 



AMRUTA ke ye roop ko dekh GAFUR ke muh se halke se kuch shabd nikalte hai. Joh koi nahi sunta 



GAFUR :- ah lajawaab….kya khubsurti hain ..iske samne toh apsara bhi fiki pad jaye .




Sabhi ki najre ab Amruta pe tiki huvi thi uske aaane se mahol garam ho chuka tha vatavaran main Amruta ki khushbu fail chuki thi joh sabko AMRUTA ke khubsurti pain aakarshit kar rahi thi 



Tabhi Ritesh khada hota hain aur Amruta ko kehta hain 



RITESH :- ahm Amruta aao tumhe sabse introduce karva ta hu 


AMRUTA Ritesh ke baju me khadi ho jati hain 



RITESH  bari bari sabko introduce karva ta hain vaha kul 6 log the 



Fir AMRUTA sabko pranam karti hain aur fir Ritesh aur Amruta sabka ashirwad leti hain 



PRATAP sabko khane ke liye baith ne ko kehta hain 


Naukar aur kam pe rakhe sabhi log uss table pain dawat ko sajana chalu kar dete hain Amruta sab chijo ko acche se manage karne me madat karti hain . 




Kuch he der main sab dawat ka maja lete hain .



Dawat hone ke bad baki log Amruta aur RITESH ko badhai de kar nikal jate hain 


Ab vaha sirf GAFUR aur DCP Mishra bache the joh PRATAP se kuch discussion kar rahe the .



Par GAFUR ki najre sirf AMRUTA ki khubsurti tatolne main lagi thi aur uske khubsurti ko dekh GAFUR ki halat kharab ho rahi thi usse vaha raha nahi ja raha tha aur nikalne ka man bhi nahi ho raha tha 



Tabhi PRATAP kehta hain .



PRATAP :- aare GAFUR tumhare sath joh log aaye hain unhe rasoi ghar me khana khanee ke liye bhej do 


GAFUR :- ji sahab …



Aur fir GAFUR aapne mobile se aapne karibi RAGA ko call lagata hain joh haveli ke bahar 15 logo ke sath baitha tha …. 


GAFUR ka right hand aur baki gunde logo ka bap yani raga joh umar se toh kafi buddha ho chuka tha par aaj bhi 10 logo ko girane ki takat rakhta tha jisko dekh ke bhi koyi bhi dar jaye aur aurto ko ghin aa jaye aisa huliya hamesha usko ganja fukne ko chahiye aur rat ko ek randi 









RAGA :- age 65 par body se abhi bhi hatta katta aur ganda .




RAGA GAFUR ka call uthata hain .



RAGA :- ji ji Malik abhi bhejta hu ladko ko khana khane 



GAFUR :- are raga tum bhi aajao Sahab se milke bhi ho jayega ..



RAGA :- thik hain Malik .




Yaha Ritesh aur Amruta baith ke kuch bat kar rahe the aur unke thik samne GAFUR aur PRATAP aur MISHRA bate kar rahe the 




Tabhi AMRUTA ko hawa me alag se gandh mehsus hoti hain jisse usko thoda problem sa lagta hain 



Ye gandh aur kisi ki nahi raga ke badan ki thi usne phuke ganja ki thi Amruta piche mud ke dekhti hai. Toh use thoda dar sa lagta hain uss buddhe aadmi ko dekh usse lagta hain koi sadak ka ganda bhikari ghar me ghus chuka ho 



Par voh sidha ja ke PRATAP ke pair chu leta hain aur GAFUR ke baju main chup chap khada ho jata hain . 



AMRUTA Ritesh ko uss aadmi ke bare me puchti tabhi sab nikalne ki bat karte hain 



Sab khade ho jate hain aur PRATAP ko nikalne ki bat karte hain 


Tabhi Ritesh kehta hain .




RITESH :- aare Amruta sab voh mithai toh lao jo hame layi thi sabka muh mitha karao 




Ye bat sun ke sab haste hain aur Amruta mithai ka box lati hain aur khol ke pehle aapne sasur yani PRATAP ko deti hain 




Ab uski chal GAFUR aur uske baju me khade RAGA ki taraf ja rahi thi .





AMRUTA ki dhimi chal aur Payal se aata huva madhur aavaj GAFUR ki aur badh raha tha Amruta ko aata dekh GAFUR ki halat kharab ho chuki thi uske rom rom me kuch alag sa mehsus ho raha tha 



Isse jyada buri halat toh RAGA ki ho rakhi thi mano AMRUTA ko dekh uska ganje ka nasha utar chuka tha usko yakin nahi aa raha tha ki koi itna bhi khubsurat kaise ho sakta hain 


Dono bhi amruta ko dekh he rahe the ki Amruta usnke karib jake ruk jati hain aur GAFUR ko mithai deti hain GAFUR aapne hat aage kar voh mithai le leta hain 


GAFUR :- shukriya bahu ….



AMRUTA bade he adar bhav se kehti hain 


AMRUTA :- aaare ChaCha usme shukriya kaisa 



Tabhi AMRUTA aur ek mithai lete huve RAGA ki aur mudti hain aur RAGA ko kehti hain lijiye 



Raga ko kuch samaj nahi aaa raha tha voh ye sab pehli bar dekh raha tha itni badi haveli , jinki gulami karta hain uske ghar me uski bahu aur is haveli ki hone vali malkin aise uske samne thi toh voh bas bhut ki tarah khada hoke aapne samne ki khubsurti ko dekhe ja raha tha 











AMRUTA ka badan thoda sa pasine se bhig gaya tha uske gardan pe pasina tha jiske karan uski gori gori chamdi chamak rahi thi aur chere pe gila pan aane se uski khubsurti aur nikhar rahi thi 



Ye dekh raga ka lund uske dhoti me thoda machal jata hain aur uske badan me ek alag se kamuk bhavna jag jati hain 




AMRUTA raga ki taraf mudne ke karan GAFUR ko AMRUTA ki piche ki khubsurti ko tatolne ka maouka milta hain voh Amruta ka kasa badan dekh raha tha 





AMRUTA ne aaj puri kasi huvi aur kuch na expose ho aise saree pehni thi par fir bhi uske kamar ka gora bhag asani se dikh raha tha voh dekh GAFUR bhi thoda aapna kamvasna ka bhav jaga deta hain 


Badi gadrayi huvi gaand pe chipki voh kasi huvi saree GAFUR ke sharir ke tapman ko badha rahi thi voh ubhar uske ankho me ghar kar chuke the aur voh najuk kamar uske dil me var kar chuki thi .





AMRUTA :- lijiye na muh mitha kijiye ….


Amruta fir se ek bar bolti hain iss bar RAGA AMRUTA ke lips ke movement ko dekhta hain kaise bolte vakt uske khubsurat oth ekdusre ko chipak ke ek alag he kamuk andaj banate hain .



Par tabhi raga thoda hosh me aajata hain aur kehta hain..



RAGA :- HA…ha dijiye memshahb aur aapna ganda hat aage karta hain 


AMRUTA uske hat pe mithai rakh deti hain 


Aur ek chij notice karti hain RAGA ke hat kafi kale the aur uspe jalne ke aur kuch var ke bhi nishan the uss hat pe kafi gandagi thi mano abhi koyle ke bhatti se nikale ho …..



Mithai hat me milte he raga man me kehta hain


RAGA :- ( ah muh mita karne ko keh rahi hain , iss mithai se , iss se jyada toh mitha iska ….) 


Tabhi raga aapne dimag se ye khayal nikal deta hai. Q ki voh jis Amruta ke bare me soch raha tha uska sasur un sabko palta hain .



Tabhi GAFUR vaha se nikalne ki bat karta hain aur ab sabhi vaha se nikalne lagte hain 



PRATAP aur RITESH sabko haveli ke darwaje tak chod dete hain Amruta abhi bhi hall me he thi 




GAFUR :- are …RAGA main jaha baitha tha vaha mera mobile reh gaya jao leke aao 



RAGA :- ji ji maalik …….



PRATAP :- ha jao leke aao agar nahi mile toh ek ring deke dekho ….


RAGA jhat se hall main jata hain toh dekhta hain Amruta vahi sofe pain baithi huvi thi kisi ke aane ki aahat se Amruta jhat se sofe se khadi ho jati hain 




Voh RAGA ko aata dekhti hain …



RAGA bhi AMRUTA ko dekhta hain aur najre jhuka ke GAFUR jaha baitha tha vaha jake voh mobile utha leta hain 



RAGA :- ji o memshahb mere maalik ka phone reh gaya tha issliye aaya…




AMRUTA :- koi bat nahi mil gaya na 



RAGA :- ji ji memshahb



Aur Amruta vaha se nikalti hain aur apne room ki taraf chal deti hain 



RAGA bhi vaha se nikalte huve AMRUTA ki khubsurti ko piche se dekhta hain voh AMRUTA ko dekh he raha tha ki Amruta piche mud jati hain aur kehti hain 



AMRUTA :- vaise apka nam kya hain 



RAGA :- ji memshahb voh RAGA…


AMRUTA :- accha thik hain 


Aur halka sa muskurate huve aage badhti hain 







RAGA ka lund thoda phir se machal uthta hain q ki usse Amruta ke bade bade aamo ka aur gadrayi huve gand ka anuman lagana asan ho gaya tha voh katlani aada upar se ubhre huve badan ko dekh voh thodi der ke liye vahi khada ho gaya tha 



Uske ankho ke samne abhi abhi dekha huva kamsin badan ghum raha tha bhale he AMRUTA ne kafi sanskari tarike se saree pehni thi jisse kisi ko kuch dekhne ka chance nahi tha par voh kehte hain na jisko joh dekhna ho voh dekh leta hain 



Vaise he aaj RAGA ne aapne jivan ki sabse khubsurat stri ko dekh liya tha joh uske aukat ke kafi bahar thi RAGA ke ankho ke samne abhi bhi voh saree me kase huve bade bade saam ghum rahe the voh kasi huvi gaand joh saree ko ubhar bana ke mardo ko akrshit karne ka kam kar rahi thi .




Amruta jane ke bad raga bhi vaha se nikal jata hain.



Sab aapne aapne ghar nikal jate hain GAFUR raga ke sath aapne slum me gadiyo ke sath entry karta hain 



GAFUR ko chod ke raga aapne ussi slum ke ek gande se ghar me chala jata hain .



Rat bhar GAFUR ko nind nahi aati usse koi bat sata rahi thi kuch drishya uske ankho ke samne aa rahe the 


Uska lund pura tight ho chuka tha kya chal raha tha uske khayalo me usse he pata par uske lund me kafi dum tha bhale he umar ho gayi ho 


Vaise GAFUR kafi harami insan tha uska ek pariwar tha uski 2 betiya thi aur ek beta uski biwi iss duniya me nahi thi par GAFUR ko ladkiyo ki koi kami nahi thi uski har ek rat rangin hoti thi RAGA ke sath milkar usne kayi randiyo ko choda tha 


Par aaj GAFUR badla badla sa lag raha tha voh so nahi pa raha tha aapni karvate badal raha tha 


Aur tabhi uska hat aapne kate lund pe jata hain aur dhoti ke upar se voh aapne lund ko masalna shuru kar deta hain uska kala lund nag ki tarah fan fana uthta hain aur voh aapne aap se bat karne lagta hainn


GAFUR :- ahhhhh kya kamar thi uffff kya roop ahhh kya kamsin badan tha mano koi jannat ki hur ahhh apsara , ahh mallika fiki hain iske samne toh ahhhhh kya kasi huvi gaand thi mar gaya main 


Uss room main phat phat lund ko hilane ki aavaj aa rahi thi GAFUR siskariyan le raha tha sur mano 20 minutes bad voh aapne charam sima pe tha uske ankho ke samne ek aurat thi jisko soch ke voh aapne lund ko hilaye ja raha tha 


Uske lund ke tope se gadha virya nikalne laga aur uski ke sath fan fan karta huva lund uss apsara ko soch aapna virya tyag deta hain





Aur GAFUR buddhe ki ek he aavaj uss room main gunjti hain 


GAFUR :- ahhhhh AMRUTA ahhhh ye kya kar diya iss buddhe ko tune ahhh 





Subah uthte he GAFUR raga ko call lagata hain aur turant GAFUR ke ghar aane ko bolta hain 




Raga aapne Malik ka order sunte he pooch jata hain 


GAFUR usse gadi me bitha ke slum ke piche vale area me leke jata hain 


Dono main kuch batchit hoti hain adha ghanta kuch discuss karne ke bad GAFUR aapne gadi se ek pistol nikalta hain aur use load karta hain 


RAGA thoda dur hoke khada ho jata hain …



GAFUR pistol ka nishana raga pe lagata hain aur RAGA aapni ankh band kar leta hain 


GAFUR jhat se gun ko shoot karta hain aur goli sidha jake RAGA ke ghutne ke upar lag jati hain aur uske chikh se pura sumsam area dehal jata  hain.






Dopehar ke 11 baje :- 




Doctor Amruta aapne cabin main baithi huvi hain hamesha ki tarah usne kamuk saree pehni hain .





Tabhi wardboye bhagta huva aata hain aur AMRUTA se kehta hain .




Madam ek emergency case hain …pair main goli lagi hain …..…






To be continued…..…………………..

[Anvesharonny]

Jabardast update,Gafur ne toh apna move khelana start Kiya hain ab dekhte hain wo successful hota ya nahi?aur raha ko bhi chance milta hain ya nahi?Aur wo mysterious aadami kya bhi abhi pata lagna baaki hain
Great going.Eagerly waiting for next update.

[KareenaKapoorLover]

Mind blowing.. clp); yr):

[Kartik69]

Bahut badhiya update, lajawab likhte hai aapne yaar

[SweetSonali]

vah!vah! bahut h shandar update, clp); clp); clp);

[Mafiadon]

super excellent update! Wonderful build up! very nice narrartions clp); clp); clp);

[Bimal]

what a sweet update! Mind blowing writings

[Rahul007]

Absolutely sensational update! Really outclass writings!

[Ella]

बहुत बढ़िया अपडेट! आपकी कथा लेखन बहुत ही रोचक है। मेरा आपसे एक निवेदन है। कृपया इस कहानी के नायक को एक ही रखें और नायक को इस शक्तिशाली परिवार की सभी महिला सदस्यों को एक-एक करके बहकाएं और अंत में इस परिवार की सभी महिला सदस्य उसकी निजी वेश्या बनें। और इस रहस्य को केवल परिवार की महिला सदस्यों को ही जानने दें और परिवार के पुरुष सदस्यों को इस रहस्य को प्रकट न करने दें। clp); yr):