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(05-07-2022, 10:24 PM)Jadugar Wrote: maine likha hai.....lekin mera intrest isi story me or koi bhi likhunga to isi se inspired hoga isiliye or kaafi sahi story hai..... Writer ko regular update dena chaiye.....regular updated ke saath ye story number one story ban jayega if forum ka
Agar apne is story ko aage badhane aur regular update dene ka Faisala kr liya hai to Achi bat hai.. Aapse ummid krenge ki aap apni ye story desi chut se v better likhe aur regular long update de.. Wish you all the best..
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समय आ गया है इस कहानी से रुखसत लेने का।
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(08-07-2022, 01:11 PM)Desi chut Wrote: Abhi Mene update nahi likha he app mujhe 3 -4 din ka time do me tab tak likh kar update de Dunga
pyaare bahi aap 3 4 din lee lo lekin updates achi ce do long ce take your time
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Ye mera July month ka last update hoga uske bad jadugar bhai Sahab continue karenge
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(09-07-2022, 07:31 PM)Desi chut Wrote: Ye mera July month ka last update hoga uske bad jadugar bhai Sahab continue karenge
nhi bhai tum hi karo
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(09-07-2022, 07:31 PM)Desi chut Wrote: Ye mera July month ka last update hoga uske bad jadugar bhai Sahab continue karenge
Jaldi update de do bhai.. Agar next update Apka akhri update hai to Jitna Lamba Ho sake long update dene ka kosis Karna..
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(09-07-2022, 07:31 PM)Desi chut Wrote: Ye mera July month ka last update hoga uske bad jadugar bhai Sahab continue karenge
Alternate kar sakte hai Bhaisaab...Ek aap dena, next baar Jadugar Bhaisaab dega...dono milke update do yaar...
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(09-07-2022, 07:31 PM)Desi chut Wrote: Ye mera July month ka last update hoga uske bad jadugar bhai Sahab continue karenge
बहुत उम्दा कहानी है आप की
चाहूंगी आप नियमित तौर पर लिखते रहे
आगे दोनो की शादी, हनीमून सब करवाये
थोड़ी शर्म हया के साथ मम्मी ओर नए पापा की कामुकता बढ़ाये
दोनो के बीच रंगीन बाते उन निजी पलों में ओर कुछ ऐसे आदेश नए पापा के मम्मी शर्म से पानी पानी हो जाये
जैसे अंकल के सामने बाथरूम करना
जबरदस्ती अंकल ( नए पापा ) मम्मी को करवाये
दीवार से चिपका के गाँड़ चाटना जब तक मम्मी पेशाब के लिए ना मचल जाए
इस तरह से अंकल ओर मम्मी की कामुक हरकते बढ़ाओ
थैंक्यू
बहुत अच्छा लेखन है जी
स्टोरी बंद मत करना अभी तो बहुत आगे जाना है
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(12-07-2022, 11:10 AM)@Kusum_Soni Wrote: बहुत उम्दा कहानी है आप की
चाहूंगी आप नियमित तौर पर लिखते रहे
आगे दोनो की शादी, हनीमून सब करवाये
थोड़ी शर्म हया के साथ मम्मी ओर नए पापा की कामुकता बढ़ाये
दोनो के बीच रंगीन बाते उन निजी पलों में ओर कुछ ऐसे आदेश नए पापा के मम्मी शर्म से पानी पानी हो जाये
जैसे अंकल के सामने बाथरूम करना
जबरदस्ती अंकल ( नए पापा ) मम्मी को करवाये
दीवार से चिपका के गाँड़ चाटना जब तक मम्मी पेशाब के लिए ना मचल जाए
इस तरह से अंकल ओर मम्मी की कामुक हरकते बढ़ाओ
थैंक्यू
बहुत अच्छा लेखन है जी
स्टोरी बंद मत करना अभी तो बहुत आगे जाना है
Bahut ache ideas hai Kusum ji ke, jarur jodne kee kosis kero.
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(12-07-2022, 11:10 AM)@Kusum_Soni Wrote: बहुत उम्दा कहानी है आप की
चाहूंगी आप नियमित तौर पर लिखते रहे
आगे दोनो की शादी, हनीमून सब करवाये
थोड़ी शर्म हया के साथ मम्मी ओर नए पापा की कामुकता बढ़ाये
दोनो के बीच रंगीन बाते उन निजी पलों में ओर कुछ ऐसे आदेश नए पापा के मम्मी शर्म से पानी पानी हो जाये
जैसे अंकल के सामने बाथरूम करना
जबरदस्ती अंकल ( नए पापा ) मम्मी को करवाये
दीवार से चिपका के गाँड़ चाटना जब तक मम्मी पेशाब के लिए ना मचल जाए
इस तरह से अंकल ओर मम्मी की कामुक हरकते बढ़ाओ
थैंक्यू
बहुत अच्छा लेखन है जी
स्टोरी बंद मत करना अभी तो बहुत आगे जाना है Aap se ekdam sahmat hai Kusum ji...
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update kab ayega Bhaisaab???
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(13-07-2022, 12:48 PM)Ankit Roy Wrote: update kab ayega Bhaisaab???
bhool ja mere ankit bahi
story bas khatam ho gaye hai desi chut pata nahi kaha gayab ho gaya hai
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Ayega me Abhi pareshani me hu dost ka farz nibha Raha hu please
Update ek nahi 4 de Dunga please 10 din Ruk jao
Aur jadugar bhai Sahab app update dijiye
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(13-07-2022, 02:50 PM)Desi chut Wrote: Ayega me Abhi pareshani me hu dost ka farz nibha Raha hu please
Update ek nahi 4 de Dunga please 10 din Ruk jao
Aur jadugar bhai Sahab app update dijiye ALL FRIENDS DESI CHUT AIK DUM SACH BOL RAHA HAI US KA AIK FRIEND BOHAT BARI GAME ME PHANS GAYA HAI JAIL ME HAI
YEH BAHI US BECHARE KE PEECHE BHAG RAHA HAI
BHAGWAN AAP KE FRIEND PER KIRPA KARE
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(13-07-2022, 02:50 PM)Desi chut Wrote: Ayega me Abhi pareshani me hu dost ka farz nibha Raha hu please
Update ek nahi 4 de Dunga please 10 din Ruk jao
Aur jadugar bhai Sahab app update dijiye
Bhaisaab app apni dosti ka farz nibhaiye...indino Jadugar Bhaisaab app update de dijiye pliz, taki kahani agee barte rahe...
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(13-07-2022, 02:58 PM)doctor ali b Wrote: ALL FRIENDS DESI CHUT AIK DUM SACH BOL RAHA HAI US KA AIK FRIEND BOHAT BARI GAME ME PHANS GAYA HAI JAIL ME HAI
YEH BAHI US BECHARE KE PEECHE BHAG RAHA HAI
BHAGWAN AAP KE FRIEND PER KIRPA KARE
Haa bhai...pehle dosti ka farz ada karna chahiye...
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(05-07-2022, 10:24 PM)Jadugar Wrote: maine likha hai.....lekin mera intrest isi story me or koi bhi likhunga to isi se inspired hoga isiliye or kaafi sahi story hai..... Writer ko regular update dena chaiye.....regular updated ke saath ye story number one story ban jayega if forum ka
Aab intezar kis baat ka Desi choot bhaisaab ne khud kaha hai ke app dedo update...
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Aaj hi ek bara sa update de dena bhaisaab (Jadugar)
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Koi to update dedo bhai....
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Bhaisaab update kab ayega???
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