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#41
(29-09-2021, 08:01 AM)mohitkumarhot Wrote: thanks for the appreciation ,
dont worry i will extend this story,this story was not meant to end here

Please extend Karo Bhai.
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#42
(22-09-2021, 11:14 AM)ambirod Wrote: first half was awesome... but in second half you rushed the story so much that Sneha ultimately seemed like a slut than a reluctant, shy wife whom you portrayed very well in the first half. It almost felt like I m reading 2 different stories with different women. Sad to see that you wanted to end the story so much.

True.. Story ka end karane mai bahut lajdbazi ki.. Story and plot kafi achhi hai.. 

Writer isko rewrite kare to behatar rahega
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#43
(11-02-2022, 03:08 PM)rajkumar90 Wrote: True.. Story ka end karane mai bahut lajdbazi ki.. Story and plot kafi achhi hai.. 

Writer isko rewrite kare to behatar rahega

rajkumar ji ,aapne kaha or samjo ho gaya,me isse fir se shuru karunga ,bas tum ek baar budha tailor me karim or priya ki suhaagraat manwo do

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#44
(15-02-2022, 04:47 PM)mohitkumarhot Wrote: rajkumar ji ,aapne kaha or samjo ho gaya,me isse fir se shuru karunga ,bas tum ek baar budha tailor me karim or priya ki suhaagraat manwo do

Kab se wait kar raha hu bhai kahani ko aage likho yaar.
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#45
Bahut sundar story hai aage likho yaar
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#46
(24-06-2022, 09:06 AM)dickcassidy Wrote: Kab se wait kar raha hu bhai kahani ko aage likho yaar.

bro dekha jaye to story me kya bacha hai,sneha ki chudai ho gayi hai

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#47
(24-06-2022, 09:06 AM)dickcassidy Wrote: Bahut sundar story hai aage likho yaar

sneha ki chudai ho gayi hai ab aage kaise badaya ja sakta hai,jada se jada ek baar or chudai karwa sakta hu ,r bro dusra chudai ki story likhne me maza nahi aata,kuch naya ho to likhe

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#48
(25-06-2022, 07:34 AM)mohitkumarhot Wrote: sneha ki chudai ho gayi hai ab aage kaise badaya ja sakta hai,jada se jada ek baar or chudai karwa sakta hu ,r bro dusra chudai ki story likhne me maza nahi aata,kuch naya ho to likhe

Bhai plz story continues rakho isme kafi kuchh jod skte ho aap
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#49
bahut sahi kahani hain...please aage badhaye .. bahut jyada patra la kar bheed na kare.. 4-5 characters tak simit rakhe .. masager change kare.. aapko dost jiski najar aapki biwi par hain..usko bhi msaager ki jagah le jaye or apni biwi ko chudvaye
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#50
clps clps clps clps clps
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#51
1 saal se upar ho gaya ,matlab ab me isse aage nahi bada ,thoda bahut jo aage likha tha uska update de raha hu

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#52
मजा आ गया डार्लिंग.....
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#53
Dusre ki bv ko chodne ke baad usko apne lund se apna mut pilana chahiye is se vo hamesha tumhare lund ki rand ban jayegi.
Aur jab kabhi akade to tum kah sakoge ki rand nakhre mat kar hamare lode ne tujhe mut pilaya he
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#54
Awesome please update
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#55
Hatao is salim ko   sala acha bahala maza aa rha tha story me  salim naam ka badsoorat word aye hi lund  baith gya   ye salim naam k log tyer ka puntucre jodte ache lagte h  in logo ko kaha masaz krni ati h   topi phen kr huliya ur khrab kr lete h
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#56
where is story ??

i like massage cuckold type story
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#57
Update please
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