07-06-2020, 03:48 PM
Jrur agge badegi
Adultery भैंसा DOODHWALA....
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07-06-2020, 03:48 PM
Jrur agge badegi
07-06-2020, 09:49 PM
(07-06-2020, 03:48 PM)maakigaand Wrote: Jrur agge badegi kab badegi aage,is theme par bahut kam stories hai jo gaon ,dhoodwala or adultery par ho,please isse bhi jaldi update kare
07-06-2020, 11:25 PM
Bhai u going gr8 keep ur good work n write bro
19-06-2020, 07:48 AM
pata nahi ab is writer par bharosa bhi karna chahiye ya nahi ,1 update dekar kai dino tak gayab rahta hai,story puri nahi karta?????
09-07-2020, 10:40 AM
kaha gaye,abhi tak update nahi diya,kuch to sharm karo,kam se kam yaha aa kar ek reply to kar sakte ho ki kyo nahi diya update
10-08-2020, 09:06 PM
itni mast story ko bich me adhura chod sabse ghatiya kaam kiya hai,lekin me fir bhi umeed karta hu writer jaldi hi is par update dega
22-12-2020, 03:37 PM
27-10-2021, 11:53 AM
New upddate bro....waiting.......?????
28-05-2022, 03:04 PM
mast story hai
28-05-2022, 03:05 PM
update post karo
01-06-2022, 08:26 PM
Badhiya par abhi bahut time se incomplete.
05-06-2022, 03:40 PM
Kisko meri yeh story aage padni h
05-06-2022, 07:41 PM
Ha ha bhai ha ye bhi koi puchne ki baat h
06-06-2022, 10:26 AM
bilkul padhni hai
06-06-2022, 03:14 PM
Go on dear we are waiting....
07-06-2022, 10:14 AM
(This post was last modified: 18-06-2022, 09:43 PM by xfirefox. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
bhai kahani to mast hai but aapne jo last update post kiya tha usme story change kar di thi
wo pehle jab rajjo apne pati ka jhoota glass uthane ke liye jhuki thi to uske peeche ekdum se bhainsewala khada ho gaya tha magar baad mein isi scene ko dobara se repeat kiya magar is baar rajjo ka pati wahi baitha tha jabki pehle ke update mein wo us time tabele mein gaya hua tha. aur fir raat ko rajjo bina kapdo ke he tabele se nangi he ghar ke andar jaati hui dikhayi wo bhi apne bete ke saamne se jo asliyat mein nahi hota bas request hai kahani ko thoda realistic sa rakhna aur rajjo ko innocent sa jaisi ki aurte hoti hai baaki aapki kahani ki theme acchi hai aur different bhi. continue rakho shuruat gazab ki kari hai ek baar writer aap khud kahani shuru se padh kar jab continue karna tab aapko samajh aayega main kya kehne ki koshish kar raha hoon.
15-06-2022, 01:00 PM
(07-06-2020, 03:48 PM)maakigaand Wrote: Jrur agge badegi kab aage badegi (05-06-2022, 03:40 PM)maakigaand Wrote: Kisko meri yeh story aage padni h sabko padni hai ,is tarah ki story padne me bahut maza aata hai
22-06-2022, 04:33 AM
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