11-06-2021, 10:32 PM
bohut hi badiya story thi bhai... waqt nikal ke kabhi lekhne ke kousis karna...
(11-06-2021, 10:20 AM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ab ye kahani kaise shuru karo dubara mere samjh se bahar hai....Tabassum ki pati ka accident ho jata hai aur ghar me apahij hokar pade rehte hai.......Isi ke karan rangin life ke shokin tabassum tdoda financial crisis me padta hai.
(12-06-2021, 03:51 AM)Edens Wrote: Tabassum ki pati ka accident ho jata hai aur ghar me apahij hokar pade rehte hai.......Isi ke karan rangin life ke shokin tabassum tdoda financial crisis me padta hai.
Nanduram (45) name ki ek sand Jeysa admi jail se riha hoke is seher me ate hai jo auto chalate hai ...aur tabassum se mulaqat hote hai.
Udhar tabassum thoda financial crisis me padta hai aur Nanduram ke dost Lalanram (46) se udhar leta hai. Lalanram intereste (sud) aur juwa ka dhanda karte hai...dono milkar tabassum ki chut aur gand k bansuri bajate hai.
Lalan ko dudh pine ka shok hota hai..tabassum ki dudh ki tanki se wo khub pite hai. Kuch mahine bad peyse ka interest lalanram maf kar deta hai....Lekin tabassum ko aur money ki jarurat thi tab use madat karne ate hai bohot dur sun san ilake me rehne wale ek bada sa ashram ke do baba......kalicharan (50) aur uska sathi Shivnarayan (52)....kalicharan bhayanak kala rang... dono ke muche hai par dadhi nehi hai...Jab take ye baba milte hai tabassum ko tabtak tabasuum kisi dudhiya gai (milky cow) jeyse dikh rahi thi...... aur tabassum ki doodh se puja hote hai...dono tabassum ki khub madat karte hai.
(13-06-2021, 03:13 AM)pylode Wrote: Edens, kya laajawaab idea diya hai aapne! Bahut hidden talent hai aapke is lund roopi kalam mein!
Ab aage.... Silsila ab Tabassum ke ghar mein wapas aata hai. Ab kya tha, chudakkad Tabassum ghar mein hi apne saandon ko sukh prdaan karti hai. Loan interest maafi ke liye!
Patidev tho kuch kaam ke nahi rahe. Akhir ab Tabassum kya karen.
Kuch kaam ke nahin rahe? Yeh baat nahin hai, doston. Thaki hui biwi ki thakawat kaun dur karta hai, tango ke beech ke lathpath ghosla ko chus chus kar? Patnivrata patidev hi tho akhri sukh deta hai!
Jee, Lion King, aap nayi stori bhi start kar sakte hai yeh plot ke aadhar par. Aap ki talent ke saath tho stori bahut malaidaar banegi!
pylode