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ముంగింపు సంతృప్తికరంగా లేదు. సగం భోజనం అయ్యాక, ఎవడో వచ్చి తిన్నది చాలు దెంగెయ్ అన్న ఫీలింగ్ వచ్చింది. కథలో విక్రమ్ కి ఎవరెవరు ఏమేమి చేసారో? ఎందుకు చేసారో? ఎలా చేసారో? తెలుసుకోవాలని లేదేమో కానీ సాధారణ పాఠకుడికి ఉంటుంది కదా!
ఈ అన్నీ విషయాలు తెలిసిన, బ్రతికున్న ఏకైక వ్యక్తి సంధ్య. Pre-climax episode కంటే post-climax episode రాస్తే బాగుంటుందని నా అభిప్రాయం. తల్లిగా సంధ్య, తన కొడుక్కి, జరిగిన విషయాలు చెప్తే బాగుంటుంది.
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05-05-2022, 07:25 AM
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Manasa bratiki unte bagundedi,Thanu kooda mudragada Mandu thesukuni undi unte bagundu so sad ,but your story nailed and vera level,i hope manasa will alive in pre climax twist .
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Hi, Climax is not satisfactory...Please reconsider.
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chala bagundi update
నా కథ లు ప్రియగీతం
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Nice one last update konchem pedaga ivadaniki try cheyandi detailed ga time tisukunna parledu
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Update chala bagundi bradar
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Super super super story. Vikram taruvata emiaado chepute bavundu
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Manasa brathike unte bagundadi amurutham Elago undi , 5 rings dorikayi kuda manasa undi unte bagundadi
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Superb
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చాల అద్భుతంగా ముగించారు. మళ్లీ ఎప్పుడు మొదలవతుందా మీ అద్బుతమైన కథ అని ఎదురు చూస్తున్నాం
మంచి సినిమా కథ లా వ్రాసి అందరి మనస్సు దోచుకున్నారు
వీలైనంత తొందరగా మొదలవుతుంది దాని కోరుకుంటున్నాము.
థాంక్స్ సార్.
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Very nice story. Please give full story in pdf
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bro pre/post climax episode ekkada bro.... pls close this before moving to other story bro...
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