15-04-2022, 10:14 PM
U ain't trapping me into asking for an update this time ?? but stil temptation gets d better of me , waiting for an update for weekend
Adultery Dhika - An Innocent Angel
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15-04-2022, 10:14 PM
U ain't trapping me into asking for an update this time ?? but stil temptation gets d better of me , waiting for an update for weekend
16-04-2022, 12:43 AM
(11-02-2022, 09:55 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote:Your story is stunning so far. Great start and going well but i feel it's fast paced and seem little hurried. I would like dhika should have someone to connect emotionally as well besides physical be it chotu or any twin brothers.
16-04-2022, 09:15 AM
Bro..hats off man...u r one of the best writter on this forum..thanks for giving this lovely update...
16-04-2022, 09:33 AM
I love this story and what makes it really good is you write what you feel. You don't alter the story to suit every readers whims and fancies. People always have an opinion how to make a story better according to them but the writer always knows best.
Keep it up. Write as you like. Cheers
16-04-2022, 01:10 PM
(16-04-2022, 09:33 AM)Rainman Wrote: I love this story and what makes it really good is you write what you feel. You don't alter the story to suit every readers whims and fancies. People always have an opinion how to make a story better according to them but the writer always knows best. Agree with you. And waiting for your update too.
16-04-2022, 01:12 PM
(15-04-2022, 02:54 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote:Beautiful. But I was Expecting longer update. Keep it up.
16-04-2022, 07:37 PM
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17-04-2022, 12:16 AM
Waiting anxiously for d next adventure of dhika
17-04-2022, 04:26 AM
what a super update bro..it is like reading modern day kamstutra style.. Hats off to you brother..thank you for updates.. Take care..
17-04-2022, 10:43 AM
I really like the last part of story where dhika surprises the Bobby by her sudden unexpected move and told him "you are not the only who can surprise"..hope Bobby get more surprise ahead..
also the night part where buntu is sleeping and Bobby playing with her navel and then kisses her..you are beautifully written these small part of stories and these small part make storyline more hotter and engaging..
17-04-2022, 11:11 AM
Bro next update kab aayega eagerly waiting for it
17-04-2022, 02:18 PM
Dhika is surely losing her inhibitions around the twins. Maybe the chat with John did help her to take bolder steps. It seems it will be a steamy last day in Switzerland for the three.
17-04-2022, 04:36 PM
17-04-2022, 07:55 PM
This story is like FOREPLAY before actual SEX... the longer the foreplay sweater/hotter the sex... love the story
17-04-2022, 10:51 PM
Bad weather..get the return flight delayed.. let Dhika reads the reply mail from John... More action with twins...
17-04-2022, 11:49 PM
Best story in this site right now, Can't wait to see how boys get access to her private parts.
18-04-2022, 12:42 PM
(15-04-2022, 02:54 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote:
18-04-2022, 02:18 PM
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