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Congratulations Brother for 12 Lakhs + views.We miss you lot in this forum.Hope you to see you soon in this forum. 
I was reading this story for one more time and I have found very interesting perspective,what would have happened if Sanjay didn’t killed birju in diwali?What would be namrata’s reaction after facing birju next day,she will remember what happened yesterday night then what will be birju’s next plan??how he is going to manipulate namrata to complete his lust??
How he is going to fuck namrata,will he do that in his jhopadi or in her home ?will he take quick chance With namrata while her parents in home??and will namrata resist him?this story line was also intresting.
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(22-01-2022, 03:11 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Congratulations Brother for 12 Lakhs + views.We miss you lot in this forum.Hope you to see you soon in this forum.
I was reading this story for one more time and I have found very interesting perspective,what would have happened if Sanjay didn’t killed birju in diwali?What would be namrata’s reaction after facing birju next day,she will remember what happened yesterday night then what will be birju’s next plan??how he is going to manipulate namrata to complete his lust??
How he is going to fuck namrata,will he do that in his jhopadi or in her home ?will he take quick chance With namrata while her parents in home??and will namrata resist him?this story line was also intresting.
I totally agree. Birju was such a solid character and killing him was not a good idea in my view. Maybe the writer can amend and bring him back. She started to submit to his lust and was getting ready to be dominated by him in any way he wanted.
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(24-01-2022, 06:39 AM)rehanboy16 Wrote: I totally agree. Birju was such a solid character and killing him was not a good idea in my view. Maybe the writer can amend and bring him back. She started to submit to his lust and was getting ready to be dominated by him in any way he wanted.
I agree with you,birju successfully seduced namrata after long planning now it was his time to enjoy sweet fruit but unfortunately it didn’t happen I will give credit to writer for giving 2 twists in the story which shows his writing skills but long pause to the story making story less interesting and will be very difficult for writer too to continue the story where it is paused.
The point I was making was that if story continued to revolve around sunshine society it would have reached its destination now.savla suchita story was on interesting mode so was namrata birju.
You would have added more characters in the society to make it more interesting.
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(25-01-2022, 03:16 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: I agree with you,birju successfully seduced namrata after long planning now it was his time to enjoy sweet fruit but unfortunately it didn’t happen I will give credit to writer for giving 2 twists in the story which shows his writing skills but long pause to the story making story less interesting and will be very difficult for writer too to continue the story where it is paused.
The point I was making was that if story continued to revolve around sunshine society it would have reached its destination now.savla suchita story was on interesting mode so was namrata birju.
You would have added more characters in the society to make it more interesting.
I think it is too late now. The writer has given up on the story and asking to amend his previous updates when he is not even committed to write any further is a no brainer. It happens with every writer at some point where they are just not able to write any further as too much imagination in their brain exceeds their physical capability to write. I just hope he comes back and finish what he has already started and end this story on a good note.
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Suchita aur Abdul ka affair kab aur kese chalu hua
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(26-01-2022, 06:22 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: I think it is too late now. The writer has given up on the story and asking to amend his previous updates when he is not even committed to write any further is a no brainer. It happens with every writer at some point where they are just not able to write any further as too much imagination in their brain exceeds their physical capability to write. I just hope he comes back and finish what he has already started and end this story on a good note.
I visit this forum only to read this story,this story has unique theme young innocent girl with old man with lots of seduction play which other stories lacks.Unfortunately story moved into the past and with the introduction of mysterious character of professor the story has become very complicated and writer seems like unable to move story forward.I hope he just mentions that wheather he is going to continue the story or not.its absolutely ok if he is not going to give further updates so that we stop bumping this thread.
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(17-10-2019, 04:52 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: UPDATE :------ 01 
Toh shurvat karte hai kahani ko .shurvat karne se pehle iss kahani ke main characters Ko introduce karna chahunga
[i]Place :- sunshine society (jo kuch month pehle he new Bani hai )
Characters:-
1) Birju :- age :- 50 ( sunshine society ka watchman ) Namrata jis society me Rehti hai uska Birju watchman hai ..Voh udhar he 10 minutes ke duri par uska jhopda hai vaha rehta hai . Uska Parivar PURA gaon main hai..dikhne me bohot Kala aur Ganda hai aur daru pine ki buri aadat hai
2) savla :- age 58 (sunshine society ka kachrewala). Savla roj morning aur evening Mai society Ko jhadu marne ma Kam karta hai ...dikhne Mai bohot badsurat aur kala hai
To dosto ye the kuch characters hamare story ke ane vale samay me aur characters introduce honge
Namrata:- age - 21![[Image: Aarya-Ambekar-Ti-Saddhya-Kay-Karte.jpg]](https://cdn1.marathistars.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/01/Aarya-Ambekar-Ti-Saddhya-Kay-Karte.jpg)
Namrata ek bohot Sanskari aur scholar ladki hai jo jo kuch mahine pehle he Apne mom dad ke saath sunshine society Mai rehne ayi hi . Namrata ek college going student hai jo apni BSC TS ki padhai kar Rahi hai
Namrata dikhne Mai bohot khubsurat hai
Uski ankhe , uska Hasna ekdum mast ..Aisa lagta tha ki Voh koi shadi shuda ladki ho q ki sharir se Voh 28 saal ki lagti thi uska badan PURA bhara huva hai . Aur uski chal main alag he Nasha hai .jo koi bhi Namrata Ko dekhta ghayl ho Jata
In sabke bavajud Namrata ka koi boy friend nahi tha q ki uske dad ek security officer officer hai . So bhot sare ladke usase bat karne ke liye bhi katrate . College main bhi Namrata scholar thi .
Namrata ki mom ek school Mai cleark hai aur dad officer toh bachpan se he Namrata Ko Akeli rehni ki aadat ho gayi thi . Namrata ke friends bhi bohot Kam the .
But usko kabhi akela pan mehsus nahi huva. Itni khubsurat hone ke Karan bohot sare lok Namrata Ko dekh kar he apna lund hilate the . Bohot log Namrata Ko pane ke liye tadap rahe the . In sab chijo se anjan Namrata roj apna din acche se Gujar Rahi thi par usko kya pata ab uski life Mai ek sunami aane Vali hai
Kya inn San chijo se Namrata ki jindagi badalne Vali thi .??
Kya Namrata Bach payegi in sare chijo se ??
Nice start..
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Hey brother where are you man.. Please comeback.. Continue this story.. Waiting
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Ateast reply to the posts here. If the writer doesn't wish to continue this story he can say so. No point keepin the readers in a limbo
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(02-10-2021, 05:43 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Thank you sooo much brother 
Yes iam trying different different theams and there is biggest mystery 
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