Adultery Anita Singh Story of a seductive housewife by seansean007 (incomplete)

[Fuckstar]

Update to bohot hi badiya hai..... Par ye itne saare naye characters kaha se aa gye plus story itni aage kese bad gyi ye samajh nahi aaya...... Baaki update to lajawab hai.....

[Guy93]

Story mai character sab itne ek saath laa ke ...Anita ka to randi gang bang kar de rahe ho ....jo ki majja nahi aane wala  story  mai aage jaaa ke....Anita ki story famous thi kyuki wo seduction queen hai isliye.

I don't like this scene Anita with 5 men ...like she is randi.

This is my opinion . It's upto you now how you will take this story further.

[Heena parvej]

Story mai character sab itne ek saath laa ke ...Anita ka to randi gang bang kar de rahe ho ....jo ki majja nahi aane wala  story  mai aage jaaa ke....Anita ki story famous thi kyuki wo seduction queen hai isliye.

I don't like this scene Anita with 5 men ...like she is randi.

This is my opinion . It's upto you now how you will take this story further.

 Me bhi yahi soch rahi hu, gang bang se puri story bor ho jayegi

[Heena parvej]

Story mai character sab itne ek saath laa ke ...Anita ka to randi gang bang kar de rahe ho ....jo ki majja nahi aane wala  story  mai aage jaaa ke....Anita ki story famous thi kyuki wo seduction queen hai isliye.

I don't like this scene Anita with 5 men ...like she is randi.

This is my opinion . It's upto you now how you will take this story further.

Achanak itne character ki jarurat nahi thi story me, story already hariya aur apne naukar se achi seduce wali feeling aa rahi thi, so pls request remove this update and seduce the low class man

[Heena parvej]

Welcome for long time, seansean007 dear

[Hellybelly]

I appreciate your hardwork regarding this story, but still don't know which half of story fratures this update. I would like to suggest if you want to keep this part as is in story , you must put this in the last winding part of story because Anita's character is not like this where 4 men can seduce her and gangbang her .. this is not the essence of her character..she must be seduced by jeetu and hariya or one more character at least..but not more than that...Try to focus more on night quick sex, cheating talks, whatsapp chats etc ... You can also add some more parallel scenes to it..like car ride with jeetu . And other things like this .. where she discovers other extra material affairs of other woman or professionals etc..

[Hellybelly]

And atleast give a glimpse of any jeetu Anita future encounter.. that would compensate this .

[Kinkpink]

I am coming back on this site after almost 3 years of long gap and what a treat to come back. I have been following this story from 2-3 months but couldn't able to make a comment because of some circumstances. Nevertheless, to answer your first question, if any character resembles anita singh or not or there is anyone whom we know who is like anita. I dont know of any such character but i can't help imagining Rashmika Mandhana(South Indian) actress in while imagining the anita Singh of how must she would be while reading this story. have no idea why i think this but i must be truthfull to you as a reader that, rashmika seems almost perfect to the characterization of anita singh and the character of her being portrayed here. whenever rashmika comes in casual videos other than movies she almost poses the naughtiness and cuteness and both through her facial expressions while interacting or sharing something related to her life. I hope so this would be true that rashmika also has something like this deep inside her heart and cant help imagine that the character like hariya or these 5 men can only bring sluttiness out of rashmika(these are not claims but my wildest imagination only). i don't think I have seen a character like anita singh in real life so unable to share about such real-life woman.

About the character Anita Singh- Anita singh is something that lives in everyone's mind, naughtiness and sluttiness is there but in a dignified manner and it can only come out if only Anita feels like it. She wants to enjoy being a human other than just a woman and break the barriers of whatever idea of woman the people have in their mind, like that she should be sanskari and all such bs only. she is everyone's wildest fantasy one would not ever get and can only think of getting it and neither people like us in real life can have so much courage to bring something like this from a particular woman like anita. even if we can make this possible then the next step is handling and satisfying and living up to date of how some woman like anita want us to be, it is true that all men reading this story will fail to live as per the expectation of the men anita singh would want us to be. that is why we are here reading this story and satisfying ourselves only.

about this update- i would mostly be positive here about your writing skills, you are the master of buildup and foreplay, I can see this in your previous written updates. i would share only my experience here, while reading this story, though I am craving for one sex scene now, nonetheless, sex is not about penetration only, it is about excitement, about the preparation, about the foreplay, like you show in this story. lots of story focuses solely on the male character gaze here only and write stories from their point of view, your one of that writer after pinkbaby i guess that you are writing a story about anita through her gaze and not about the gaze of male. of course, the male gaze is also there but never have been a story that has ever portrayed their female character like you are doing in this story. we get to see the side of anita of how she is feeling, how she is enjoying without being forced by the male character and coercion by them. it's like taking your life into your own hands and enjoying every bit of it without thinking about the circumstances it will bring in her life, after all, why should males have all the fun? it not only shatters our idealization about women and it also makes us think that if men can come out and live their life according to their own terms while doing all this, why can't women be like this? are they not human beings? they are and they must live their life thinking about thier own worth through their own eyes only not through the eyes of society.

i am liking how lively you have made me feel while reading this story. I can almost tell if you have been continuing writing this story. there are almost 1500 pages have been written so far. by looking at the pace and details you go through, anita singh has matured so much see is no longer the amateur woman like with hariya, where she was uttering "tarbooz" in response to the remark of "gand" hariya was making, "hathiyar" in response to the "lauda", and here she is now, making the sign of choot with her hand and uttering the words like Lauda also without having any shame and enjoying her every second.
it has not disappointed me at all, it showed anita has grown up and has learned the art of sex with a desi touch, I think most of the negative came on this only, idk why readers are not thinking about the character of anita, she cannot be the same like she was before, she has every right to be open and shut like every male in this story, it is the basic nature of low, seed becomes to plant and plant becomes a tree. anita is also growing like this in this story.

some negative marking- i think you could improve chosing the dressing section of anita, she is rich and modern also and she is with such lower-class men who are almost 50 years older than her. do you not think, instead of saree she could have worn some modern dresses, there are so many. this thing can be improved i guess? make her wear thigh-high slit dresses which possess a high level of social status among her yaars through such attire, especially in such party like occasions. she can wear short dresses to appear as modern through her attire and yet desi with her character. not saying a saree is a bad choice but still making her wear such dresses can give us extra kick while reading the updates and imagining anita.

you could also have made anita pose her ass in front of Dilbar to spank her more, instead of Dilbar remark, this would have made this update even hotter.


if i can request you one thing,
i dont know when are you going to start writing this story again, it's not about me though, but it's about your readers who have patiently been waiting for the same from your side. can we expect one full sex scene from you atleast? there will be always less engagement with your glimpses. I think there are 2-3 stories where readers are engaging with the writer of the story, if you start writing this then only you could get what you want? anyway, this is my insight only, its all up to you. come back soon!
your admirer.

[creamydelight]

Oh damn... Ye toh gaana hi nahi khatam kar paa raha mai bina jhade


I imagine the face/body of nyra Banerjee while reading this

[Hellybelly]

I'll always emphasize encounter on very few characters with many ways instead of many characters at once..she is doing well with hariya and jeetu and both haven't been able to use her properly so story must go a long way with them as well...one can add parallel story with it to increase the plot and add atleast one more character of age between 18-22. As the seductive body she possess she can also be portrayed in any job like teacher etc. At that work place new characters can also be added

[seansean007]

I am coming back on this site after almost 3 years of long gap and what a treat to come back. I have been following this story from 2-3 months but couldn't able to make a comment because of some circumstances. Nevertheless, to answer your first question, if any character resembles anita singh or not or there is anyone whom we know who is like anita. I dont know of any such character but i can't help imagining Rashmika Mandhana(South Indian) actress in while imagining the anita Singh of how must she would be while reading this story. have no idea why i think this but i must be truthfull to you as a reader that, rashmika seems almost perfect to the characterization of anita singh and the character of her being portrayed here. whenever rashmika comes in casual videos other than movies she almost poses the naughtiness and cuteness and both through her facial expressions while interacting or sharing something related to her life. I hope so this would be true that rashmika also has something like this deep inside her heart and cant help imagine that the character like hariya or these 5 men can only bring sluttiness out of rashmika(these are not claims but my wildest imagination only). i don't think I have seen a character like anita singh in real life so unable to share about such real-life woman.

About the character Anita Singh- Anita singh is something that lives in everyone's mind, naughtiness and sluttiness is there but in a dignified manner and it can only come out if only Anita feels like it. She wants to enjoy being a human other than just a woman and break the barriers of whatever idea of woman the people have in their mind, like that she should be sanskari and all such bs only. she is everyone's wildest fantasy one would not ever get and can only think of getting it and neither people like us in real life can have so much courage to bring something like this from a particular woman like anita. even if we can make this possible then the next step is handling and satisfying and living up to date of how some woman like anita want us to be, it is true that all men reading this story will fail to live as per the expectation of the men anita singh would want us to be. that is why we are here reading this story and satisfying ourselves only.

about this update- i would mostly be positive here about your writing skills, you are the master of buildup and foreplay, I can see this in your previous written updates. i would share only my experience here, while reading this story, though I am craving for one sex scene now, nonetheless, sex is not about penetration only, it is about excitement, about the preparation, about the foreplay, like you show in this story.  lots of story focuses solely on the male character gaze here only and write stories from their point of view, your one of that writer after pinkbaby i guess that you are writing a story about anita through her gaze and not about the gaze of male. of course, the male gaze is also there but never have been a story that has ever portrayed their female character like you are doing in this story. we get to see the side of anita of how she is feeling, how she is enjoying without being forced by the male character and coercion by them. it's like taking your life into your own hands and enjoying every bit of it without thinking about the circumstances it will bring in her life, after all, why should males have all the fun? it not only shatters our idealization about women and it also makes us think that if men can come out and live their life according to their own terms while doing all this, why can't women be like this? are they not human beings? they are and they must live their life thinking about thier own worth through their own eyes only not through the eyes of society.

i am liking how lively you have made me feel while reading this story. I can almost tell if you have been continuing writing this story. there are almost 1500 pages have been written so far. by looking at the pace and details you go through, anita singh has matured so much see is no longer the amateur woman like with hariya, where she was uttering "tarbooz" in response to the remark of "gand" hariya was making, "hathiyar" in response to the "lauda", and here she is now, making the sign of choot with her hand and uttering the words like Lauda also without having any shame and enjoying her every second.
it has not disappointed me at all, it showed anita has grown up and has learned the art of sex with a desi touch, I think most of the negative came on this only, idk why readers are not thinking about the character of anita, she cannot be the same like she was before, she has every right to be open and shut like every male in this story, it is the basic nature of low, seed becomes to plant and plant becomes a tree. anita is also growing like this in this story.

some negative marking- i think you could improve chosing the dressing section of anita, she is rich and modern also and she is with such lower-class men who are almost 50 years older than her. do you not think, instead of saree she could have worn some modern dresses, there are so many. this thing can be improved i guess? make her wear thigh-high slit dresses which possess a high level of social status among her yaars through such attire, especially in such party like occasions. she can wear short dresses to appear as modern through her attire and yet desi with her character. not saying a saree is a bad choice but still making her wear such dresses can give us extra kick while reading the updates and imagining anita.

you could also have made anita pose her ass in front of Dilbar to spank her more, instead of Dilbar remark, this would have made this update even hotter.


if i can request you one thing,
i dont know when are you going to start writing this story again, it's not about me though, but it's about your readers who have patiently been waiting for the same from your side. can we expect one full sex scene from you atleast? there will be always less engagement with your glimpses. I think there are 2-3 stories where readers are engaging with the writer of the story, if you start writing this then only you could get what you want? anyway, this is my insight only, its all up to you. come back soon!
your admirer.

Thank you for the valuable feedback.Good understanding of the character and the story in general.

[seansean007]

Thank you everyone for your valuable feedback.

[mr_nocturnal]

Thank you everyone for your valuable feedback.

plz check ur inbox.. and respond on my offer

[Hellybelly]

Sean bhai kindly show us some intercourse

[Hellybelly]

Sean bhai how you took these feedback kindly let us know

[seansean007]

Sean bhai how you took these feedback kindly let us know

To be honest I was surprised with the feedback of most of the readers.I thought they might like the seductive dance of Anita, especially when I explained dance on each and every word of the lyrics to help the reader imagine in a much better way.
I have read a few stories where the female characters danced to entertain their male counterparts but never came across a detailed explanation (pardon me if there is one and I am unaware of it) of the dance movement as the lyrics progressed.I tried to create that so the readers could imagine in a much better way and enjoy. 
There were two layers to feedback, one whether the update is as per the character of Anita and the other the update itself (whether update was written in a manner to arouse the readers feeling, which is the primary reason of these stories). 
Most readers gave the feedback on the former, ignoring the effect the updates had on them while reading it.Only one reader "kinkpink" gave the feedback on both the matters.
As I already told, I am okay with the negative feedback but if I had got a feedback (even negative) on the update also (keeping aside the fact whether or not that makes sense on the character or the story because let's be honest you cannot tell it because that part may be way late in the story and by that time it might make sense) then it would have been great, but it's okay.

[Hellybelly]

Really great that you replied, as far as update is concerned negative comments were only focused on the 'more characters' in that update, they were not happy because they always imagined Anita as a homely educated housewife who can only have secret affair. they were not criticising your writing abilities and if I tell you about seduction part.. it was amazing there is no doubt in that. Detailing is awesome and story is as original as it was back then xoss"p days. I have also given many suggestions in previous updates etc hope you will consider them too.

[Hellybelly]

Only last thing I would demand is if you can give us short peak of secret conversation between Anita and any character if it is present in story. Otherwise you can give whatever you like but please give another peak .

[Kinkpink]

I have no doubt that the wait would be of worth. I can not imagine the future progress of the update and the play between these 5 people and anita. It is for sure that there will be a gangbang but how it will unfold, is purely in the hands of sean and anita(character) itself. It will be worth to read how she will suck their dicks and how enthusiastically she will take part in this session. Would love to see one more dance and striptease of Anita and taking initiative in this session by her will and handling of Anita by the hands of these raunchy males, about how they will handle her roughly and fuck her face and all of her holes mercylessly and anita also enjoying and encouraging them to do the same and enjoy every bit of this.

[seansean007]

Only last thing I would demand is if you can give us short peak of secret conversation between Anita and any character if it is present in story. Otherwise you can give whatever you like but please give another peak .

Thanks for the curiosity.I will try.Thanks.