who watches the wactmen -A new chapter

[blackdesk]

It takes lots of efforts to write a good erotica. You write smoothly dear writer, Kindly do not stop please. Many good writers stop midway, do not do that.

[abcturbine]

harsha.......kindly continue
your writing have great potential

[Uday]

Nicely done Harsha.
What I see here is the stories with a touch of melodrama & emotion are well received and readers participate with the dos & don'ts, that too when the lady charecter indulges in adultry and the husband knowing it but still allows for his greed (may be cockoldness) or to show his empathy and at the same time emotionally feeling bad and the more lady character turns away from him the more agony he encounters.....these things are hot cakes.
If possible take the story in that direction that menaka ignores him even when he comes back for Dara...something like that or as your original story line of Dara dominating Menaka

Overall a nice try, keep it up bro

[Uday]

UPDATE BRO

[neerathemall]

...................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[tinderbird]

Update the story

[slammaster]

You're doing a great job with the story and characters so far thank you very much keep up the great work we're enjoying your continuation
I was reading the comments but do not forget the title of the story is who watches the Watchman meaning the Watchmen should always be a big part of the story I have a suggestion have you read the story wife please with construction workers it was also well written similar to the store your continuing I think even from the same author
I was wondering if it wouldnt be too much to add some interfaith into the mix have her who I presume is a ***** work for '.s as they break her down sexually even more have have her wear a burkha for whatever reason also I think we need to add more Dimensions to the heroine let us get to know the wife more her background her likes and earlier history to show the difference in transition of how she was before to now after her sexual experiences also I think she should be dominated and become very willing after much more time of breaking her down I want her to be like a girl from facial abuse after being sexually dominated and broken like logan sinns from her first scene to her latest 4th broken vow scene have the husband leave her for someone one else have her become the new vimla to something worth bragging about to something not special anymore but after a long time and much more history and adventures make her into a slave at a Mosque and a new life with no family just her lovers that she lives for and have her give birth to someone's child with lots of pregnancy sex
Thank you again my inbox is always open hope we could be good friends
Waiting eagerly for your updates