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19-05-2019, 04:39 PM
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Sat shri akal sarya nu .. mai brar tuhde sarya layi ik sachi nd thodi imagination story lai k aa reha .
Jo ki hostal life te hai ..
Characters :-
Hernoor brar
Patwari brar
Shinda brar
Girls characters
Prabhleen sandhu
Ramanpreet kaur
Harjot sidhu
Parnit bhathal
Eh sab ik institution vch ikathe study kr rhe ne ehna te based ik real story
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Harnoor brar . Jo ki ikala munda ghar deya hunda . Us de bapu kolle 70 kille jameen hundi aa . +2 tak oh convent college vch pade hon krke us de +2 vcho 80% number aunde ne jis krke osnu bohut vadia institution vch admission ho jandi hai nd patwari brar os di v admissionosde naal hi ho jandi aa .. oh ikathe patiala jande ne jithe ki ohna da institution hunda . Harnoor de jayda vadia number aun krke osnu osda bapu audi car gift krda . Te oh dove oste patiala nu jande ne te othe jaa k oh koi ghar lhde ne .. te ohna nu ik kothi mil jandi hai .
Te duje pase prabhleen jo k harnoor de naal hi padi c oh v othe hi study krn aundi hai . Osnu osde ghar de shadan aunde ne . Prabhleen ik bohut shreef kudo hai . Te oh osnu pg vch chad jande ne kioki osnu hostal nhi milya c .
Raat hundi hai prabhleen apne ghar gall krke so jandi hai kioki agle din osne jaldi calss lon jana hunda ..
Nd ohdar dove brar pehli warli gharo nikl k bahar rehn lage hunde ne .. oh dove movie dekhn chall jande ne .. nd raat nu late night tak jaag k fr ghar aa k so jande ne ..
agle din hernoor nd patwari tyar ho k clg jande ne .. oh class lagonde ne te ohna di class vch koi khass kudia na hon de karan oh pehla din eva hi muh lta k ture firde ne
Ohdar duje pase prabhleen di class vch kudia v bohut te munde v bohut hunde ne . Te osdi dosti raman naal hundi aa .. jo v apne ghro bahar pg vch rehndi hundi aa .. ohna vch vadia dosti ho jandi aa
Fr free tym de vch dove canteen te jandia ne .. othe kuch kha rhia hundia ne k ehna vch harnoor nd patwari v aa jnde ne oh kurci lai k ohna vall pith krke beh jande ne . Jdo prabh khadi hon lagdi aa tan osnu hernoor disda .. oh surprise hundi aa . Te hernoor nu bula laindi aa .. tuc ethe kive hernoor kehndq meri ethe hi admission hoi aa .. patwari nu v shock lgda v ehni sohni kudi hernoor nu bula rahi aa .. gall eh c k hernoor te prabh 10th tk ikathe pade c but +1nd +2 hernoor ne patwari naal kise hor college vch kri c . So patwari nu shock lgda .. prabh hernoor nu puchdi aa tuc kithe rehne ho . Oh kehndq asi tan bahar rehnde aa . Nd tc . Prabh kehndi hostal nhi milya so mai bahar rehndi aaa bss hostal lyi try kr rhe aaa . Hernoor kehnda mai dva deu ga tuhnu hostal mera dad di ethe bohut chaldi aa. Ehna vch oh dve number exacheange krde ne nd prabh de dill vch umeed jagdi aa k hun osnu may be hostal mill jave es toh baad oh othe chle jande
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Patwari puchda hernoor eh tenu kive jandi c oye . Hernoor kehnda mera naal 10th tak padi c so .. es toh baad dove gadi chakde ne te kothi chle jande ne . Jaa k so jande ne . Nd ohar prabh naal raman v osde pg chali jandi aa osne v pg laina hunda so ikathe ik room vch dove smaan shift krdia ne .. fr prabh msg krdi aa hernoor nu . Mainu lgda ni v hostal mill jayu ga but pls request aa if tc dva deo tan .. ohdar harnoor suta pya hunda uth k msg dekhda oh reply krda b mai ajj dad nu keh dena oh kall nu clg phn kr den gye apa principal naal gall kr lva gye jaa k fr . Agle din dove tyar ho k jande ne te prabh di call aundi aa tuc kithe ho mai inquery te khadi mera naal meri friend v tc ajo apa sir naal gall krliye . Fr oh sir kolle jande ne . Sir nu pehla hi hernoor de bapu ne call kr diti hundi aa so. Jdo oh jande ne sir sirf prabh nu hostal de dende ne raman ikalli reh jandi aa so oh nervous ho nd prabh impress hundi aa te Kehndi aa apa canteen te party krde aa
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Fr party krn toh baad . Prabh hostal shift hundi aa nd raman nu kenhdi aa apa gall krde aa hernoor naal . Maybe tenu v dva deve hostal . Oh hernoor naal gall krdi aa .. hernoor kehnda mai krda koi jugad .. fr agle din hernoor sir kolle janda pehla ta oh nhi mande fr oh sir nu 5000 rupeye denda sir mn jnade ne te raman nu v hostal de dende ne .. fr oh dove bohut khush hundia ne .. nd hernoor da dhanwaad v krdia ne .. oh ik room vch ikathia rehndi en ehostal vch v .. har roj thodi thodi gall hundi prabh te harnoor vch . Ohdar patwari nu class vcho shinda naal dosti ho jande aa shinda v ohna de naal rehn lag janda .. shinda te patwari naal di class diya kudia te bohut try marde ne . Shinda daru v peenda hunda .. so raat nu kehnda yr bharava naal daru peen da bohut mn kr reha .
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Ohdar hernoor te patwari ni peende hunde .. oh kehnde bai asi tan nhi peende tenu peya leone aa .. shinda bohut zidd krda . But oh nhi mnde .. kehnda chlo fr naal chlo .. oh theka te jande ne te otho ik botel lai lainde ne . Shinda 2 peg londa te ohna nu kehnda tuc bhra ni mera tuc mera naal daru nhi peende .. naal nhi khad de mera tc . Fr patwari mn janda te shinda osnu ik peg ponda te patwari v peg la lainda .. her noor dekh reha hunda oh dove jidd krn lag jnde ne tu v pee .. ehna vch osnu v 2-3 peg lva dende ne .peg londe londe osnu prabh da msg aa janda . Tuc milde nhi .. hernoor bohut set ho janda . Oh prabh naal bohut galla krda . Mai tenu bohut tym toh pyar krda scholl yym de tera te marda. Prabh surprice hoi hundi aa . V hernoor ki keh reha . Oh hernoor nu sirf vadia friend mndi aa
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Fr oh kothi jaa k so jande ne . Tina nu koi hosh nhi hunda .. subha hernoor uthda fresh ho k msg dekhda .. rola ponda patwari nu uthonda bolda salya raati prabh naal pta nhi ki galla ho gyia .. dekh mai prabh nu purpose v krya oh mni nhi osne manu subha 10 vje inquiry bulaya .. ikale nu .. bhenchod mai nhi janda .. ehna nu shinda uthda kehnda jaa salya . Ki pta agli mn j .. hernoor da dill nhi mnda .. but patwari te shinda de force krn krke .. oh tyar hunda . Bootcut jean de naal white lightning wali shirt paa k janda . Oh apni audi te baith k inquery park krda . Te black suit vch prabh othe khadi hundi aa.. oh prabh kolle janda te hello krde ne dove .. prabh kehndi aa ajo canteen toh kuch khane aa naale galla krde aa
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Hernoor nu dar lag reha hunda osda dill bahar nu aun nu krda .. prabh ohnu kehndi aa hernoor mai ethe padan ayi aa na ki eva de km krn .. hernoor osnu samjonda prabh mai tenu bohut pyar krda naale ajj di genration vch eh aam jehi gall aa .. but prabh kehndi aa apa bohut vadia dost v reh sakde aa .. mera es study te future khda sara . But hernoor bohut force krda . So prabh nahi mandi . Oh kehndi aa v eh sab mai nhi krna mainu bohut galt lgda .. fr hernoor kehnda jina tuhnu sahi lgya ohna relation rakhyo es toh kde nhi vadhda but prabh ne jive jidd hi fad lyi hove na krn di ..
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Hernoor dhila jeha muh krke kothi chla janda te prabh calss nu chali jandi aa . Ohdr patwari te shinda wait kr rhe hunde ne . Oh jaa k sari gall dsda ohna nu . Oh osnu samjhonde ne kuch nhi hunda . But hernoor da muh dhilla hi rehnda .. hernoor ik dum kehnda chlo daru peen chle 12 vje da tym hon krke shinda te patwari shock ho jande ne . Hernoor kehnda hune peeni aa .. shinda kehnde patwari nu j bai ne keha ta java gye hune .
Oh 3no bar vch chle jande ne .. othe jaa k 1 full botel pee jande ne .. hernoor bar toh bahar jaa k prabh nu call krda .. mai mar jana tera bin hune j tc mera naal na hoye mai kuch nahi . Bohut kuch kehnda ohdar hostal vch baithi prabh ro ro k bura haal kr laindi aa v mera krke ohnu kuch ho gya fr .. prabh v osnu bohut tym toh pyar krdi aa but osnu study krke te parents di strict hon krke mna kr rahi c . Oh bohut kehnda mai eva krlu hune mai mar jayu .. prabh dar k hernoor nu yes kr dendi aa .. hernoor fr thoda tym os naal gall krda te fr bar vch jaa k ohnu nu dsda v prabh mn gyi ..
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ekdum kaint start bai...maja aa gya
keep it up
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Te duji side . Parnit te harjot ne v navi admission lyi hundi a aa .. oh v seal band hundia . Te munde patan da nva nva chaska lag janda institute aa k .. par parnit chalak hundi aa .. oh paise valya nu jayda line dindi aa .. but ohdr hernoor prabh nu call krda miln lyi .. prabh miln nu mna krdi hai oh apne institute vch miln lyi v ghbrondi aa . Oh shaam nu milde ne thoda tym tea pew k chle jande ne te thodia glla krde ne .. patwari te shinda gediya londe ne v koi kudi mil j .. awe krde prabh da Hernoor naal din raat glla krn nll pyar vadh janda .. te hernoor thodi thodi gall raman naal v krda .. oh v thoda ohda naal franklly glla krdi aa .. te ohdar patwari nu ik kudi pasand aa jandi aa .. jo ki bohut sohni hundi aa .. oh osnu har roj dekhda .. oh kudi v patwari nu bohut dekhdi aa .. patwari eh gll apne yaara naal krda .. oh kehnde tun purpose laa de .. agle din patwari tyar ho k janda .. te oh kudi nu purpose jr denda .. oh v agge sharma k haa kr dendi aa .. te har roj ik duje nu miln lag jnde ne .. patwari tej hunda oh avdi gf jisda nam kamal hunda osnu puchda .. v apa movie dekhn chlye ..oh mn jandi hai .. movie dekhde tym patwari hath ferda kamal de . Oh kuch nhi kehndi .. oh oh osnu raat rehn lyi mna lainda v .. tuc ajj mera naal kothi hi reh lio .. oh v mn jandi aa .. agge dekhyo ghaint update wait kro ......
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