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bhai update kab doge? time niqalke jaldi update do bhai
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Commenting to show that there is audience who eagerly waits ..and it's always worth the effort for you to write and us to wait !
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Any timeline for update Bhai we can look forward to ...
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(25-01-2022, 01:05 PM)shdas Wrote: Commenting to show that there is audience who eagerly waits ..and it's always worth the effort for you to write and us to wait !
(26-01-2022, 10:37 PM)shdas Wrote: Any timeline for update Bhai we can look forward to ...
Bhai busy hoo ...free hokar jaldi hi update dunga......
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(31-01-2022, 12:28 AM)RAFTAAR Wrote: Bhai update...
Bas bhai....update ka plot tayaar kar raha hu....jaldi hi kuch din mai update de dunga.....
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(07-02-2022, 12:02 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bas bhai....update ka plot tayaar kar raha hu....jaldi hi kuch din mai update de dunga.....
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Jinhe jinhe update chahiye regular wo is comment ko like kar dijiye.....isse mujhe pata chalega ki aaplog sabhi intezar kar rahe hai.....kam se kam 25 like hone chahiye.....uske baad se hi update aayenge....
Jitna jaldi like aayenge utna hi jaldi update aayenge.....
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(10-02-2022, 10:20 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Jinhe jinhe update chahiye regular wo is comment ko like kar dijiye.....isse mujhe pata chalega ki aaplog sabhi intezar kar rahe hai.....kam se kam 25 like hone chahiye.....uske baad se hi update aayenge....
Jitna jaldi like aayenge utna hi jaldi update aayenge.....
I think you can make a call here as i doubt you would get 25 likes and probably announce the end of this story. Some of us who follow liked it within 2 hours and the registered traffic on this site is dubious.
I totally get why there is no interest from writers like you to write anymore . It's unfortunate for stories to end like this.
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(19-12-2021, 10:47 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Update 53 (b)
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Haaye... saali raand sach keh raha hu mai ki teri jagah alishaan ghar mai nahi balki ek kothe mai honi chahiye ...dekh kaise tu apni chut sehla rahi hai ..ufff itni pyasi hogayi tu mere thapad maarne se apni gaand par?? Hehe...waise kitne logo se ab tak tu chud chuki hai ??
Vandana aslam ke aise jeelat bhari baato se apni aankhe khol deti hai or saath hi apne chut se apne haath bhi hata leti hai ....apne is harkat pe use sharam bhi aarahi thi or saath hi use aslam ki baate bhi buri lag rahi thi....wo abki baar apne tone mai thoda narajgi jaahir karti hui bolti hai " mai koi slut nahi hu aslam jee pls mujhe baar baar jaleel mat kariye ....mai tab se dekh rahi hu ki aap bina matlab ke mujhpe gussa kar rahe hai ...aap samjhte qa hai khud ko ??
Wahi dusri taraf aslam vandana ki baat ko sun kar hairaan ho jaata hai saath hi use vandana pe gussa bhi aata hai or wo apne man mai khud se bolta hai " saali randi baat toh aise keh rahi hai jaise kitni shareef hai .....bhosdiwaali ruk tujhe to aaj mai batata hu....." ye sochte hue aslam vandana ke baalo ko jor se kheechta hai jisse vandana ki cheekh nikal jaati hai ...aslam gusse bhare andaz mai bolta hai " waah saali waah .....qa khoob andaaz hai tera.....saali ek to tu harkate randi wali karti hai or upar se kehti hai ki mai koi randi nahi hu....hahaa....saali abhi thodi der pehle jab mai tere gaand par thapad maar raha tha tab to tujhe bhut maza aaraha tha or saath hi tu apni chut bhi masal rahi thi or ab tu bol rahi hai tu shareef hai .......mai bhut acche se tum jaisi aurato ko jaanta hu jo baahir se pavitra naari banne ka dhong karti par andar se raand hoti hai........tu ye drama apne pati ke saamne karna samjhi or ab se mujhse ucchi awaj mai baat ki na to tere gaand mai apna loda daal kar teri gaand maarunga samjhi .....fir apni fati gaand lekar nangi hi ghar jaana.......
Wahi vandana ko aslam ki baat sunke dar lagne lagta hai saath hi use apni galti ka ehsaas bhi hota hai ....wo sochti hai ki " ufff ye mai kya bol gayi ?? Waise bhi mai yaaha musibat mai hu or aslam jee ko or naaraj kar diya ...ab yeh kahi sach mai waisa mere saath kar diye jo ye bol rahe hai toh ?? Nahi nahi mujhe jaldi hi ye sab khatam karwaana hoga ...mai ab yeh sab or nahi jhel sakti ..." vandana apni soch se baahir aakar kehti hai " maaf kijiyega aslam jee wo mai ghabrayi hui thi toh ucchi aawaj nikal gayi aayinda nahi hogi mujhse aisi galti ....par aslam jee mera yakin maaniye mai koi baazaru aurat nahi hu balki acchi ghar ki sharreef aurat hu......mera yakin kariye asalm jee ....wahi aslam uski baat ko sun kehta hai " haa yehi hui na baat ...ab se mujhse aise hi izzat se baat karna .....or maan liya ki tu shareef aurat hai to ab tu hi bata ki ek shareef aurat aise bhadkile kapde pehen kar raat mai aise baahir nikalti hai woh bhi tab jab uska mard is sehar mai nahi hai ....saali mujhe chutiya banana band kar or mere sawalo ka sahi sahi jawab de jo maine pehle pucha tha ki kitno se chudi ho ab tak ??
Ab bhala vandana uski baat ka qa jawab deti ?? Wo bhi jaanti thi ki aaj aslam use aise jaane nahi dega...or wo jitni jaldi yeh sab khatam karegi utna hi jaldi wo ye sab se dur jaa sakegi .....wo bhi apne man ko shaant karte hue bolti hai " bas brijmohan jee se aslam jee.." ....wahi aslam ko uski baat sunkar hairani hoti hai or wo uske gaand par ek jordaar chamat maarta hua bolta hai " jhoot...jhoot bol rahi hai randi tu....sach sach bata warna bhut bura hoga tere saath....wahi vandana sisakte hue bolti hai " aah aslam jee mai sach keh rahi hu...mera yakin kariye mai jhoot kyo bolungi aapse ?? Mai kewal brijmohan jee ke saath hi yeh sab kiya hai ......aslam abki baar apne haath ko uske baal se hatate hue bolta hai "or wo birju?? Wo bhi to tujhe khoj raha tha ....qa usne tujhe nahi choda ?? .......
Baar baar aslam ke muh se apne liye raand or chudai choda jaise shabd sunkar vandana bhut awkward sa feel kar rahi thi....haalanki delhi mai usne market jaate waqt logo ke muh se behenchod ,madarchod jaisi ashleel gaali suni thi par koi bhi usko istarah lund chut chudai jaise shabd koi nahi bola tha....pehle birju , brijmohan or ab aslam ke muh se apne liye ye sab sun use bhut himilation mehsus ho raha tha saath hi usko ye sab alag hi romanch de raha tha....abhishek ne bhi kabhi usko sex karte waqt gande shabd nahi kahe the or na hi rough tarike se sex kiya tha......inlogo ke saath ye sab karte hue or in low class logo se apne liye gande shabd sunkar use ab andar hi andar accha lag raha tha.....
Vandana ko alag hi tarah ka excitement mehsoos ho raha tha...wahi saamne pada shaksh ab bhi gehri neend mai tha jise dekh vandana ko thodi raahat mehsoos hota hai....wahi aslam bhi yeh dekhta hai ki vandana us soye hue shaksh ko dekh rahi hai ...use dekhta hua aslam bolta hai " madam jee itni gaur se us shaksh ko kyu ghoor rahi ho ?? Usse chudne ka man kar raha hai qa ?? Bologi to abhi uthata hu ise or bolta hu ki tu chudna chahti hai isse ....mai daawe se bol sakta hu ki isne kabhi bhi teri jaisi maal ko puri apni zindagi mai kabhi nahi choda hoga ....iski toh kismat khul jaayegi agar isne uth kar aise dekh liya toh .....bol jagau ise ?? Wahi aslam ke muh se yeh sunkar vandana ka kaleja dar se beth jaata hai or wo ghabrahat mai apna sir naaa mai hilati hai or bolti hai " nahi nahi aslam jee aisa nahi kariyega...pls.....wahi uski baat sunkar besharmo ki tarah hasta hua aslam bolta hai " are madam jee mai mazak kar raha hu ghabrao mat ....wese tune bataya nahi ki birju tujhe kyo dhoond raha tha ?? Kahi wo bhi to tujhe choda nahi hai ?? Ya abhi chodne wala tha ?? ......
Aslam ki baat sunkar vandana sochti hai ki "qa aslam jee to sab sach bata du kya ki birju mujhe abhi tak chh..chodaaaa nahi hai (aaj pehli baar vandana apne man mai itne gande word sochi thi or yeh sochte hi wo khud pe sharma jaati hai ....chhhiiii ....vandana tu bhi aslam jee jaisa gande word bolne lagi ....par kitna excitement feel hua mujhe jab maine choda shabd bola toh ....hehe ...aslam jee ke saath thodi der rehkar hi unke jaisa ho gayi..).. haaa unko sab bata deti hu ki birju ne mujhe nahi choda bas pehle mere jism ke saath khela hai ......par mai aslam jee ko kahungi toh wo meri baat maanenge ?? Wo to kahenge ki mai jhoot bol rahi hu or yeh bhi bolenge ki koi meri jaisi " maal " ke saath sirf khel ke kaise reh jaayega ....ooohhhhh gaawwdd ....kuch samjh nahi aaraha......tabhi usko aslam ka aawaj aata hai jisse wo apni soch se baahir aati hai " are ab bol bhi de sach sach...saali qa ab raat bhar doggy style mai aese gaand nangi karke khule hawa lena hai qa ???......
Vandana ko kuch bhi samjh nahi aaraha tha ki qa jawab de phir vandana bol padti hai ki "haa aslam jee birju ne bhi mujhe chh..chh..chhhhooddaaa haai.....(vandana ye isliye bol deti hai kyoki use pata tha ki agar wo naa kahegi toh aslam jee ko yakin nahi hoga or wo usse sawaal karte rahenge or ab wo ye sab jyada der tak nahi sehna chahti thi .....wahi wo chha rahi thi ki ab aslam jee jaldi uski chudai kare or usko ghar jaane de...) vandana ki baat sun aslam bateesi dikhate hue bolta hai " mujhe pata tha raand ki tu usse bhi chudi hai ...saali hai hi tu randi dekhne se hi lagta hai....waise tere gaand mai yeh til to bhut sunder lag raha hai ....ufff ye til bhi tere gaand ko bhut pasand karta hai isliye toh apna ghar tere ubhre hue gaand par bana betha hai ....." ye bolte hue aslam phir karare ka thapad uske til ke upar gaand par maarta hai or is baar bhut jor se maarta hai jiske chalte vandana karahte hue peeche mud ke aslam ko dekhne lagti hai or saath hi use dekhte hue apne komal haath se apni gaand ko sehlaane lagti hai......
Ufffff ....rand qa thirkan hai teri gaand ka....sach mai mai deewaana ho gaya hu......waise bhut ho gaya tere saath sawal jawab ab jaldi se tere saath masti kar leta hu ....ye sunkar vandana ko khushi bhi hota hai ki finally ab aslam jee yeh sab khatam kar rahe hai or saath hi uske jehen mai yeh khyaal bhi aata hai ki "wese aslam jee kaisa masti ki baat kar rahe hai ?? Qa ye sirf birju ki tarah mere jism se khelenge ya mere saath sex...nahi nahi chh...ccchhhuuddaaaiiiii karenge ........uffff mai bhi puri besharam hoti jaa rahi hu.....par jo bhi kare mere saath bas jaldi se yeh sab khatam kare .......
Ab aslam se or jyada bardasht nahi ho raha tha or saath hi vandana ke nange gaand ko dekhkar or uske gaand par chaata maarkar uska lauda bhi pura khada ho chuka tha....usks man kar raha tha ki abhi ke abhi is raand ko acche se chod de par wo abhishek sir ke baare mai sochkar khud ko aisa karne se rok raha tha.....
Aslam yeh sochte hue vandana ko us thele par sidha betha deta hai or apne dono haatho ko uske gaal par rakh kar dekhne lagta hai ....wahi vandana bhi uski hawas bhari aankho ko dekhne lagti hai ....ab aslam bina koi waqt gawaye apna chehra ko vandana ke chehre ke saamne le aata hai.....ab undono ke honth ke beech bas kuch hi inch ka faasla tha ....aslam ke honth apne honth ke itne nazdik paakar vandana ka seena excitement mai upar neeche hone lagta hai or saath hi uska aankh bhi lazaat mai band ho jaata hai.....uski aankhe band hona aslam ke liye green signsl jaisa tha....wo bhi samjh chuka tha ki yeh raand bhi chudna chahti hai or yeh dekhkar wo khud ko jyada der rok nahi paata hai or turant hi apna kaala honth vandana ke naram honth par rakh deta hai......
Wahi apne komal honth par aslam ka khurdura honth ka ehsas paakar vandana sihar si jaati hai or uska pura sharir mai current sa daur jaata hai......aslam uske honth par honth rakh kar choosne lagta hai or saath hi apne dono haath uske gaal se hata kar uske dono choochi par rakh deta hai or jor jor se dabaane lagta hai........
Nice update bro but last page par the watchman was Raghu aur is page par Raghu Aslam ban gaya..... Caste convert kar liya kya ????  
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(11-02-2022, 09:09 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Nice update bro but last page par the watchman was Raghu aur is page par Raghu Aslam ban gaya..... Caste convert kar liya kya ????
Dost padh rahe ho toh upar writer ne 'Likes' ke liye request kiya hain..kar do wo bhi...lets give them some motive to write :-)
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Val.Coutinho bhai...It was initially Aslam,then changed to Raghu and I guess now changed back. I am sure you can guess what kind of language was used by people who wanted the writer to change that interfaith theme.
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(10-02-2022, 10:20 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Jinhe jinhe update chahiye regular wo is comment ko like kar dijiye.....isse mujhe pata chalega ki aaplog sabhi intezar kar rahe hai.....kam se kam 25 like hone chahiye.....uske baad se hi update aayenge....
Jitna jaldi like aayenge utna hi jaldi update aayenge.....
Ajanmol bhai ...Hamm 8 hi 25 ke barbar hai...U know it well about me atleast.
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(11-02-2022, 03:15 AM)shdas Wrote: I think you can make a call here as i doubt you would get 25 likes and probably announce the end of this story. Some of us who follow liked it within 2 hours and the registered traffic on this site is dubious.
I totally get why there is no interest from writers like you to write anymore . It's unfortunate for stories to end like this.
Mai story nahi chhod raha bhai.....maine yeh to nahi kaha ki mai aage continue nahi karunga....maine bas like karne isliye kaha ki mai dekhna chahta tha ki baaki log bhi intrested hai ya nahi......bas...baaki mai update jaldi dunga ...or ab khatam karke hi rukunga.....mai bhi chahta hu ki meri story complete ke list mai shaamil ho.......saath bane rahiyega......
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(11-02-2022, 09:09 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Nice update bro but last page par the watchman was Raghu aur is page par Raghu Aslam ban gaya..... Caste convert kar liya kya ????
Bhai kuch issue ke kaaran naam change karna pada....pehle aslam tha bt ab raghu ho gaya hai.....pehle ke kuch update mai saayad main bhul gaya edit karna isliye aapko aisa lag raha hai.....
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(11-02-2022, 03:44 PM)qazmlp Wrote: Ajanmol bhai ...Hamm 8 hi 25 ke barbar hai...U know it well about me atleast.
Are bhai....yeh keh ke mujhe sharminda mat kariye......mai jaanta hu ki aap 9 log 25 qa 50 ke barabaar hai....or aaplog regular visitor hai mere thread ke....mai to bas yeh dekhna chha raha tha ki koi new user /silent user / guest reader yeh log like karte hai ya nahi.....kyoki yeh sab comment nahi karsakte bina register kiye bt like to kar hi sakte the.....yhi kaaran se mai khafa hu guest logo se.....khair ab farq nahi padta mai ab apna kaam karunga shiddat se.......aaplog shuru se is thread par jude hai uske liye mai pure dil se aapsab ka shukra guzzaar hu........
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Aaj 1 bje tak update aajayega.....pls aapsab ise padhne se pehle previous part ko padh lijiyega taaki aaplog ko confusion na ho....
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