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(26-09-2021, 08:46 AM)mr_nocturnal Wrote: Hi, I'm very big fan of ur story "anita singh" i can relate her character very well... she's like my chemidy teacher, she pretend to be strict from outside but she's actually emotional from inside... she loves freedom and independency, only some unique and selective and bebak persons like (hariya, jeetu,etc) can come closer to her... otherwise she's a woman who have high standard and attitude....
Read a story like "anita singh" is far better than visuals.. because visuals mein hum kewal vo dekhte hein jesa vo dikhana chahte hein, lekin story reading me hum vo imagine krte hein jesa hum actually imagine krna chahte hein..and it varies person to person..
So i seriously want you to continue the story... it's my request, even if you take charge per update that too reasonable.. please continue the story...
"..... lekin story reading me hum vo imagine krte hein jesa hum actually imagine krna chahte hein...."
Perfect description.
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(27-09-2021, 05:21 PM)creamydelight Wrote: "..... lekin story reading me hum vo imagine krte hein jesa hum actually imagine krna chahte hein...."
Perfect description.
That's what I'm saying... anita Singh is distinct in this style because writer has left a lot on reader's own imagination. For example physical appearance of Anita is not very clear only highlights are given. It gives Reader more space to imagine According to their preferences.
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28-09-2021, 01:10 AM
(This post was last modified: 02-10-2021, 06:11 PM by Teebone1985. Edited 5 times in total. Edited 5 times in total.)
Taking my words of anger back with apologies.
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I request Sean sir to atleast complete the last update of this story so we could have an idea of further development of ivents .
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Now when discussion is going on.. no-one cares to write anything down.
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(21-10-2021, 09:41 PM)Hellybelly Wrote: Sad...story is doomed.
Sadly and truly the story is doomed
Val
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Are Seanbhai... Kya gazab ki story aap likh rahe the...pata nahi kya ho gaya.. ab to ham wait hi karte rah jayenge.. yeh Anita to hamare dil-o-dimaag me hi baith gai hai.. kya aap ki likhawat thi.. aap ne puchha tha ki ab OTT ki vajah se log nahi padenge kyoki wo sab dekhane ko hi mil jata hai.. but sahi maayne me aisa mujhe to bilkul nahi lagta.. kyoki dekhne se jyada sochne se jyada erotic feelings mehsus Hoti hai.. woh sab ki alag alag kalpana ke hisaab se sochate hai aur majhe lete hai.. aur upar se aap ki bahetarin kushalata se bhari hui erotic writing with erotic dialogues.. kya kahene.. Swanbhai nadi nesabri se intezaar kar rahe hai.. hum sab ko maayush mat karnaa... Kripya aap wapis aa jaiyye aur damakedaar upadates dijiye plzzz....
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(22-05-2019, 01:18 AM)seansean007 Wrote: In today's fast paced world,it is very difficult to spare some time to write stories.I don't get much time to write but I also love this story so don't feel like abandoning it.I don't know when but I will try to complete it someday when I get time.May be in the form of an erotic novel.
I won't write any more here as once started,the constant demand of readers for updates become frustrating.Starting a story is like commiting 7-8 hours every week for a normal length update only to be read by readers in a few minutes and then see them asking for updates till the next update comes and the cycle keeps repeating.
It is better that I keep myself away from all these and write as and when I feel like with complete freedom.Hopeully one day I will complete this and then share it with others.
Thanks for showing love to this story.I will appreciate if no one tries to make it into a story of his own by writing his own version.
YOU CAN RECEIVE SOME DONATION BY PAYTM, PEOPLE LIKE ME WILL DO THAT TOO BUT PLEASE I BEG YOU TO CONTINUE THE STORY
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we should support sean bhai by paytm taki unka bhi intrest bana rahe story likhne mein.. sean bhai please give me your paytm no. i will support you.. bas aap story continue karo
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(18-11-2021, 04:46 PM)mr_nocturnal Wrote: we should support sean bhai by paytm taki unka bhi intrest bana rahe story likhne mein.. sean bhai please give me your paytm no. i will support you.. bas aap story continue karo
Agreed...but atleast he should say something..he is silent.
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Thanks a lot for keeping the interest alive.All I can say at this point of time is "Sabr ka phal meetha hoga".There are issues which I cannot express,but apart from that I have always been truthful.Look at bdrew,she was away for a long time but she is back again on this platform.You need to keep yourself in the writer's shoes too.Till then continue enjoying other great stories,erotics series and erotic comics available on various platforms.
Thanks.
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(27-11-2021, 02:14 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Thanks a lot for keeping the interest alive.All I can say at this point of time is "Sabr ka phal meetha hoga".There are issues which I cannot express,but apart from that I have always been truthful.Look at bdrew,she was away for a long time but she is back again on this platform.You need to keep yourself in the writer's shoes too.Till then continue enjoying other great stories,erotics series and erotic comics available on various platforms.
Thanks.
Thank you sir, thanks a lot ...hope soon we will see this greatest of all time story going to its destination. A joy for all serious readers ..
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The encounters between Anita and Haria are so much more satisfying than the sex itself.
Anita ki participation in the dirty talks is so much appealing. Include other characters also who take short term advantage of Anita.
WO Jo golgappe wala that, auto driver, wo budhha Jo Anita ko dekh ke shagging kr RHA tha, In sab ko bhi kahi kahi include kr do.
Sexcapades in Train and Bus are also v interesting.
Just a few things I thought to share with you
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29-11-2021, 09:06 PM
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i tried to be angry towards the author but u read the story and the anger just melts away, this story hits and i am serious every time i read it, just shoots blood to parts of my brain and dick with force i never knew existed....and even now i get frustrated sometimes when i see there is no progress or update but there is not a single week that goes by when i dont do a google search for anita xossipy to hit this link ...
hopefully the writer takes this as a compliment
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First time I read this story on xossip app after closure of site and it became most favourite. Writer is perfectly writing this with his own imagination. As story is growing and plot is developing we can not suggest much but with Anita's character he can add more cheating stuff like night quickies, phone calls of plannings between jeetu and her.. apart from that some additional scenes could also be added like she come to know about other affairs of her neighbourhood etc. Jeetu bring her to the market where they see something etc.
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Give us a Christmas gift.
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Yes, indeed.. this is a masterpiece.. undoubtedly.. Seanbhai..
we are deeply involved in this story. Unfortunately yeh story atak gayii.. we humbly request the writer to once again take us to the erotic ride.. aap ne kya badhiya story pesh kiya tha.. aur kya minute details ke saath particularly jab haria us raat Anita ke ghar guest ban kar aaya tha.. matlab Anita ne bulaya tha.. aur jab tak wo log bedroom me Gaye tab tak kya details me aap Jaa rahe the.. aur kya verbal chats thi.. ahaaahaaa.. har baar aap ek dusre se baat karate hue jo baatchit lokate the woh highly erotic thi aur fir usme inki body language aur fir body ke saath action.. abhi bhi lund khada ho jaataa hai.. sach me..
Har rickshaw wala Anita ko lund maslate dekhate the.. aur woh rickshaw wala aur uske friend jituu.. raat ko Anita ke ghar rukte hai aur woh rajuu baat karte rah gaya aur jeetu do baar Anita ko chod gaya... Masha,.'.aur wo jituu jab rickshaw se thookta hai hai to paan ki karach uud je Anita ke khule hue pet pe chipak jaati hai... Kya badhiya imagination hai aapki.. kya kahenge.. aur meri baat karuu to aaj bhi mujhe porn movie ya ott par jo dikhate hai wo dekhane k bajaay aisi badhiya story padhane ko mile to mai ye padhana pasand karunga.. isme hi story k sath apne hisab se soch ke jyada mazaa aayaa hai..
So Sean Bhai aap se tahe dil se request hai aap abhi tak ki sory ki link de ke fir aap ko jaisa sahi Lage vaise use aage badhaye. Bas yahi prarthna hai.. thanks.
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I'll keep checking this thread. Never loose hope
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Writer is offline since 2 months. Hope he come with a bang
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