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sexcitiing pg3
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next update bro.... with pics..
i like this thread
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(21-10-2019, 12:37 PM)Wickedsunnyboi Wrote: Bahot potential hai iss story mein.. writer Naughty boy had mentioned about Shraddha's neighborhood ..apart from Dhondu there is barber. There is a panwala ...and its a typical middeclass setup with a single storeyed building with middleclass tharki uncles .there are also bachelor boys in the vicinity ....
Ohhh Man...just by looking at the variety of the characters to play with ..I could imagine what a epic it could have been if and only if Naughtyboy hadn't deserted it...
wickedsunnyboi, would be great if you can erotify this incomplete story with your writing and vision.
also this will be refreshing as shraddha hasnt turned seductress yet (unlike nisha and shikha), the journey would be sexplosive.
then you can add shraddha in your universe with nisha and shikha.
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Is anyone interested to continue this one of the greatest story on this platform..
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Ok Wating please continue
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This story needs a continuation
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(06-01-2022, 07:39 PM)Imlegendary Wrote: This story needs a continuation Is story main sabse khas baat ye hai ki shraddha gair mardon se chudne ke bahut kareeb pahuchi lekin chudi nahi... Shraddha ab chudegi tab chudegi ya bas chudne hi wali hai ka ehsaas lekhak ne banaye rakkha jisse shraddha ki chudai ke ikchuk pathak kahin ja hi nahi paye...
Ab vidambana yah hai ki lekhak shraddha ko chudwaye bina hi vilupt ho gaya hai... Pathak yah vishwas nahi kar pa rahe ki aise kaise gadraye badan ki shraddha ko bina chude chod deeya jaye...
Ek majedar baat aur is story main yah dekhne main aayi ki shraddha ke upar haath saaf karne ka mauka un logon ko mila jinki physical description sunkar koi bhi ulti kar de... Genda... Kalua... Saand... Badbudar... Gutke wala muh... Dene doodh aata hai lekin khud kabhi pani tak se nahi nahaya...
Kaho to hum hi ise aage iske anjaam tak pahuncha den...
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(06-01-2022, 09:30 PM)rajebm Wrote: Is story main sabse khas baat ye hai ki shraddha gair mardon se chudne ke bahut kareeb pahuchi lekin chudi nahi... Shraddha ab chudegi tab chudegi ya bas chudne hi wali hai ka ehsaas lekhak ne banaye rakkha jisse shraddha ki chudai ke ikchuk pathak kahin ja hi nahi paye...
Ab vidambana yah hai ki lekhak shraddha ko chudwaye bina hi vilupt ho gaya hai... Pathak yah vishwas nahi kar pa rahe ki aise kaise gadraye badan ki shraddha ko bina chude chod deeya jaye...
Ek majedar baat aur is story main yah dekhne main aayi ki shraddha ke upar haath saaf karne ka mauka un logon ko mila jinki physical description sunkar koi bhi ulti kar de... Genda... Kalua... Saand... Badbudar... Gutke wala muh... Dene doodh aata hai lekin khud kabhi pani tak se nahi nahaya...
Kaho to hum hi ise aage iske anjaam tak pahuncha den...
Neki aur puch puch.. Jarur kijiye.. Superhit banegi yeh story
Aapne jiss tarah iss kahani ka ab tak ka vishleshan kiya hai usse ek baat toh nishit hai ki aap isse bahot aache se aagey badhaoge..
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(06-01-2022, 09:30 PM)rajebm Wrote: Is story main sabse khas baat ye hai ki shraddha gair mardon se chudne ke bahut kareeb pahuchi lekin chudi nahi... Shraddha ab chudegi tab chudegi ya bas chudne hi wali hai ka ehsaas lekhak ne banaye rakkha jisse shraddha ki chudai ke ikchuk pathak kahin ja hi nahi paye...
Ab vidambana yah hai ki lekhak shraddha ko chudwaye bina hi vilupt ho gaya hai... Pathak yah vishwas nahi kar pa rahe ki aise kaise gadraye badan ki shraddha ko bina chude chod deeya jaye...
Ek majedar baat aur is story main yah dekhne main aayi ki shraddha ke upar haath saaf karne ka mauka un logon ko mila jinki physical description sunkar koi bhi ulti kar de... Genda... Kalua... Saand... Badbudar... Gutke wala muh... Dene doodh aata hai lekin khud kabhi pani tak se nahi nahaya...
Kaho to hum hi ise aage iske anjaam tak pahuncha den...
Okay badhao bhai ise aage
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(27-02-2019, 05:37 PM)sarit11 Wrote: Lekeen tabhee kaamuktaa kee aag may jall rahe 18 saalke vergine avdumberne wo gandi harqatkee jeesko shradha seerf dekhne ke alava kuch karr naa sakee……………….
Avdumberne apne ek hathse apnaa lund jo tent banaye huwe tankarr pantse bonner kee shakalme deekh raha thaa usse usne ek haathse pant ke uparse masalna shuru kiyaa,….aur besharam kee tarah apnee teacher shradha kee aankhonme dekh raha thaa…………..
apnee teacherko itne najdikse dekh avdumberparr ek bachkani kamuktaa haawi hone lagee..shradha ne pahanee huwee black saree usparr golden print aur black blause may shradha ke kamuk raseele ang gajabb dhaa rahe the,.......saree jokee transperent thee usse saree ke pallu se shradha kee blouse may kayd dono chuchiyaa kisee gubare kee tarah avdumber ko deekh rahee thee...to left side jo avadumber ke saamne thee wo palu se dhaki nahi thee,,,..to uss anglese shradha kee patlee kamar,,cutesy naabhee.. aur blause ko fadne kee koshish karr rahee chuchiyonkee zalak bhee waha se deekh rahee thee.......ayse kamuk badankaa najara itne najdikse apnaa lund masalte huwe dekhnaa avadumber kee kishoree avasthaa ke liye bahothee jyada thaa......jo kabhee bhee kisee laave ke rupme fut saktaa hay.......
Shradha saamne khade apne student kee ye gandi harqatt dekh yaane apnaa lund pant ke uparse masaltaa dekh ek pallke liye uske shareer may kamukta kee garmahat usse mahesuss huwee….kyoke bechaaree ne apne patee ke saath 4 deen hogaye prem meelan hee nahi kiyaa thaa….aur abbtakk wo apne patee ke liye jo prem meelanke liye tadpee thee uss karan wo,, iss saamne ke najare ko dekh ek pallke liye uskee gulabi chutme gugudee see huwi thee………….lekeen ussee waqt shradhane avdumberkee iss gandi harqatko dekh apnaa strict teacherkaa naqabb oodhkarr usse ghuse se boli”kya karr rahe ho ye…..?..ye gandi harqate band karo warnaa”……………………………………..ke tabhee shradha kee baat beechme katate huwe avdumber innocently apnaa lund pant ke uparse masalte huwe bola”miss…ahh…seerf ek baar miss… mere ghode kee feerse malish kardonaa” aur ye kahekarr usne apnee pant kee chain kholne ke liye apnaa ek haath apnee chain kee taraf kiyaa…………………………
Shradha apne student kee aysee baat sunn aur ajeeb kamuk harqate dekh wo sannn thee……………uskaa neture iss college may ek strict teacher hone ke bawajudd,,uske student ne kisee bache kee tarah usse ye demand kee ke wo uskaa lund apne haathonme lekarr maalish kare…………………………………………..shradha ko avdumberkee baate sunn unn baatonme ek bachpana mahessuss ho raha thaa……………iss karan shradha kaa strict teacher kaa naqabb dheere dheere utarr raha thaa…………………
Avdumber jokee vergine 18 saalka ladkaa thaa usse ye samaz nahi aaraha thaa ke wo apnee shadi shudaa teacherse kaysi gandi baate karr raha hay...………wo to seerf uss maje ko feerse jeena chahataa thaa..jo maja usne anjane may apnee khubsuratt teacherse apnaa lund masalwakarr liyaa thaaaa…………………………………..
..to udharr shradha kuch bhee bolne ke halatt may nahi thee wo to seerf apne student kee aankhonme aankh daalkarr ghurr rahee thee…..
Lekeen jabb shradha ne apnee najre neeche karee to ………uske gore badanka harr heesa shock may heelgaya…..avdumberne apnaa safed lund jo 7 inch lambaa aur 2 inch motaa thaa usse apnee pant kee zeep se bahar nikale huwe thaa…usse dekh shradha ke to hoshh hee uddgaye….aur wo uss landse apnee najre zatse ghuse may uparr avdumberkee oor karr boltee hay”get out …now”
Shradha ko itnaa ghusa hokarr baat kartaa dekh avdumber tabb bhee normal aur andarr hee andarr kammagnee may bahe karr apne lundko apne ek hathse saamne kee afsara ko dekh masall..aur heelaa raha thaa……….tabhee uss waqt avdumber ek aur shocking kadam uthata hay…aur apnaa lund haathse heelate huwe apnee khubsuratt teacherke kareeb jaata hay ,,itnaa kareeb ke shradha jo kee kursee parr baithee thee usse avdumber seerf 18 inch kaa faslaa thaa……
Avdumber ke iss kadamse koyi dusree aurat hotee to usko Dhaka dekarr durr kartee lekeen yaha to saamne paiasss shradha thee,,,jeesne kabhee kiseeke uparr haath nahi uthaya thaa….aur usparr soneparr-suhaga uskee gulabi yonee iss ajeebo gareeb kamuk situationme bhee abb kaam rass chorr rahee thee……
(Avdumber ko pata nahi thaa ke wo karrr kyaa raha hay,,,aur aakhir karnaa kyaa chahata hay……wo ek ajeebogareeb paristhitee may thaa…..jo kee harr ek kishorke jeewanme aatee hay………lekeen yaha shradha uss kaamvasana may tadap rahe apne ajeeb student ke saamne thee jo sex ke liye deewana thaa..usne bahutsare porn bhee dekhe the..aur wo ek sex addictive thaa jeesne kabhee sex nahi kiyaa thaa..aur ayse Kishore ke vergine lundko apne haathse anjane may masalkarr shradha ne hee sabse badee bhull kee thee………). …..
Apnaa lund itne najdikk apnee teacher ke side may heelate huwe avdumber ek palke liye hoshme aaya aur bola”miss…..pliz miss…..meraa khudparse kaabu hatt raha hay…miss..plizzzzz…I m sorry”
Avdumberne apnee pant ke posterse bahar nikale huwe shradha jaha kursee parr baithi thee waha uske najdikk khada apnaa lund uske gore badanko dekh ek hathse heelaa aur masal raha thaa……………..
(Uss waqt class room may seerf wo dono teacher aur student the....classroomkaa darwaja khulaa thaa...khidkiyaa bhee khulee hee thee…lekeen classroom kone may hone ke karan abheetak kiseeki najarr yaha chall rahe kaandparr nahi gayi thee….lekeen agar koyi class room kee taraff aata to usse ye najara khidkee se hee deekh saktaa hay……..aysaa najara jeesko dekh iss collegeme ek strict teacher classroom may apne student ke saath iss situationme may ho ye soch bhee nahi sakte wo bhee ek paiass shadi shudaa khubsuratt teacher….)
Shradha kaam uttejana may tadap rahe apne student avadumber kee bachkaani kamuk baat sunn wo atakte atakte huwe bolti hay”hoshme aao avadumber may tumharee teacher hu…”………………………..beechme rukte huwe avadumber jo apnaa lund apnee khubsuratt teacherke najdikk heelaa raha thaa usse darate huwe kahatee hay”agar tumh,,,yahase nahi gaye to may kal tumhare parents ko sabb kuch batadungi,,..uske baad tumhara jo hogaa wo tum khud soch hee sakte ho……”
(Becharee innocent teacher usse iss situationme kaysaa react karnaa chahiye ,ye bhee samazz nahi aaraha thaa….usse lag raha thaa ke ,,agar usne avadumberse cheekhte huwe baatkee to jo class room ke bahar huwaa wo sabb collegeme feer pure city may fayl saktaa hay…feer badnamee ke saaye may uskaa pyaar Ramesh bhee uskaa sath chorr saktaa hay………..iss tarahkee durkee soch shradha kee thee…..jeeski koyi jaruratt nahi hay…….......…yahee ek karan nahi thaa jo shradha ko thande dimagse kaam karne ke liye force karr raha thaa…dusraa karan ye bhee thaa k eek naujawann lund itne kareeb dekh shradha jo apne patee rameshke pyarke liye 3 deense tadap rahee thee wo aaj iss situationme garam ho chukee thee……………………)
Shradha kee baat sunn kamm vasana may bahek chuke avadumberne ek aur risky kadam aage badhaya ..feer itnaa kareeb gaya ke uske lundkee garmahatt aur lundse aati kamm rass kee mahek wo mahessuss karr saktee thee…….shradha kee aankhe iss ajeebo gareeb situationme band ho jaatee hay…………………………………………..
Apnee aankhe band karr shradha ne apnee life kee pahalee sabse badee galtee kardee….jeeska parinaam bahothee jyada bhayanak hone wala hay…………………………..
Dusri taraff avadumber to bechara apnee Kishore avasthaa may jees cheej yaane kamuktaa ko usse control karnaa chahiye ..usse wo control karne may nakam saabit ho raha thaa…issee joshme usne apnaa ek haath shradha ne pahanee black saree ke pallu kee tarafff dala………………………..
(Aaj bhee wo gulabbka full wahi table ke pass hee thaa…jeese aaj shradha ne ignore kiyaa thaa,,,kyoke uske saamne ek bahot badee aafat jo khadee thee jo ek kishorree awasthaa may tadap rahe ladke ne apnee bachkani harqatonke karan paydaa kithee………….lekeen shradha ke iss tadapne kaa maja koyi aur bhee kheedki se le raha thaa…….)
To be continued Super
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(07-01-2022, 01:43 AM)chandu_2288 Wrote: Super If you started than complete it
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(06-02-2022, 03:45 PM)joy2008 Wrote: Update
Please update
Please update
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So many wonderful stories get abandoned just like that
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(06-01-2022, 09:30 PM)rajebm Wrote: Is story main sabse khas baat ye hai ki shraddha gair mardon se chudne ke bahut kareeb pahuchi lekin chudi nahi... Shraddha ab chudegi tab chudegi ya bas chudne hi wali hai ka ehsaas lekhak ne banaye rakkha jisse shraddha ki chudai ke ikchuk pathak kahin ja hi nahi paye...
Ab vidambana yah hai ki lekhak shraddha ko chudwaye bina hi vilupt ho gaya hai... Pathak yah vishwas nahi kar pa rahe ki aise kaise gadraye badan ki shraddha ko bina chude chod deeya jaye...
Ek majedar baat aur is story main yah dekhne main aayi ki shraddha ke upar haath saaf karne ka mauka un logon ko mila jinki physical description sunkar koi bhi ulti kar de... Genda... Kalua... Saand... Badbudar... Gutke wala muh... Dene doodh aata hai lekin khud kabhi pani tak se nahi nahaya...
Kaho to hum hi ise aage iske anjaam tak pahuncha den...
Jarur bhai... eagerly waiting for an encounter with shraddha...
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What about an update of this epic story.....
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क्या इस कहानी को कोई आगे बढ़ाएगा? ? एक बढ़िया स्टोरी को यू अधूरा छोड़ देना सही नही जी ??
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Its a shame iss story ko koi aagay nahi badhana chahta.
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