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Misc. Erotica VANDANA..( a hottest tale of conservative beautiful housewife turning to whore)
(29-12-2021, 05:33 PM)Yampag Wrote: Bahot khoob.. Ajanbhai.. Story par achchhi pakad banake rakhi hai.. dhire dhire aage badh rahe ho.. aue ye hi aapki sabse badi khoobi hai.. fatafat sex karavane se jyada.. kaamuk baatchit aur foreplay gehri asar chhodta hai.. aur aap usme maahir ho.. as a reader we feel great erotism with such playful events..
Aur bich me yeh name change ka chakkar kaha se aa gaya.. are bhailog what is there in a name.. are yeh sachhi kahani thodi hai.. aur har ek M-class character thodi hai isme.. sab type ke characters aate jaate rahenge.. aap story ka mazaa lo.. aur aage badho.. haa jahaa pe jyadaa aur sirf ***** men aur ***** woman par hi focuss karke likhate hai vahaa mai bhi asahaj mehsus karta hu.. vahaa pe ham kahe sakte hai ki.. yeh theek nahi lag rahaa..
Baaki writers ko freedom do yaaro.. yeh log ek to free mai likhate hai.. unka bahot saraa time invest karte hai.. aur hame ajeeb se khooshi dete hai.. to appreciate bhi kijiye.. aur kuchh theek na lage to hum unko keh bhi sakte hai in a proper and appropriate way.. or bhailog buraa mat mannaa.. aao.. padho.. enjoy karo.. aur likh sakte ho to woh bhi try Karo..
Waiting for next update.. yeh raat abhi lambi hai...

Thankyou so much yampag bro...apke detail review ka besabri se intezar rahta hai......or raha baat naam change ka toh mene ye isliye kiya kyoki mai nai chahtaa ki mere thread par log dharam ke naam par kuch kahe.....mai sabse pehle ek bhartiya hu or sabhi dharmo ki dil se izzat karta hu...or aapne sahi kaha ki naam se kuch nahi hota ....aaplog aslam ke update ko dhyaan se padhiyega to aaplog notice kiye honge ki maine dharam se related koi bhi faaltu element nahi daala hai ......nahi god ka naam liya nahi dick ka or na hi relegion ka ....fir bhi yaaha mansikta aisi hai logo ki ki qa kahe.....khair naam chahe kuch bhi ho mai apne seduction level best rakhunga story mai........
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Sahi hain. If you can try , pls give an update which moves the story more forward ,even if it is delayed . I mean vandana is on that thela for quite a while so may be a update big enough for some action. Rest this is one of the best stories i have read here after Guruji erotic (on xossip) which was a cult.
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(29-12-2021, 10:57 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Agla update kal aajayega....or mujhe lagta hai ab mujhe wapas se guest user ke liye strict hona padega ....matlab seriously abhi just now more than 20 guest user read kar rahe hai .....itna mehnat karne ke baad bhi log kami na bataye or appreciate na kare to fir aise free ke mehnat ka qa faayda ??? Mai jaanta hu mere ye baat bhuto ko bura lagega par ek update tayaar karne mai kam se kam 3 din lagta hai ....mai apna personal life se bina koi profit ke yaaha aaplog ko time de raha hu toh aapsab ka bhi kuch role toh banta hai.....mai yeh nahi kehraha ki aaplog bina padhe meri story ko waah waah karne lag jaaye..mai bas yeh chahta hu ki agar aapsab padh rahe hai or aaplog ko accha lag raha toh appreciate kariye writer ko or agar aapsab ko kuch kami lag rahi hai to wo bhi dil khol kar bataiye....mai yeh nahi kehraha ki mere thread par aisa kariye balki jitne bhi writer ke story aap padh rahe hai unko motivate kariye......ab mujhe bhi accha nahi lagta baar bar aisa kehna isliye mai ab kuch logo ko hi update dunga......no update for guest......sorryyyyyy.....

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(26-12-2021, 06:09 PM)Ajanmol Beautiful Wrote: Update 54
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Raghu ke khurdure honth ka ehsaas paakar vandana ka rom rom hil chuka tha saath hi apne choochi pe uska haath ka ehsaas vandana ke dabe hue aag ko or jyada bhadka raha tha....yuh is tarah choochi maslane or khurdure honth se apna honth ka choosai se vandana ab puri tarah se behekne lagi thi or saath hi ek sunsaan raaste mai yuh khuleaam ye sab karna use alag hi duniya mai le jaaraha tha.....ab vandana bhi aankhe band kar raghu ka rough kissing ko enjoy karne lagi thi or ab wo khud apne honth ko thoda khol kar raghu ke honth ko apne jubaan mai daalne ka prayas kar rahi thi....wahi dusri taraf raghu bhi vandana ke naram komal honth ka ehsaas paakar bawla ho gaya tha wo aaj apni life mai pehli baar aisi husn ki pari ka honth choos raha tha use ye sab bas ek haseen khawab sa lag raha tha.......wo bhi yeh mehsoos karte hue paaglo ki tarah vandana ke honth ko choose jaa raha tha.......

Vandana ka honth ko khulte dekh raghu foran apne apna jeev vandana ke muh mai daal deta hai or bhut aaram se bina jaldbaaazi ke vandana ke jubaan ke andar apna jeev ghumaane lagta hai......raghu ke garam jeev ko apne jeev mai mehsoos karta dekh vandana ki lazzat bhari siskari foot padti hai par raghu ka honth apne honth par hone se uski aah andar hi dabi rah jaati hai.......raghu bhut itminaan se vandana ke honth or jeev ko choose jaa raha tha wo acche se is hoor ke ang ko aaj chakhna chahta tha use kisi bhi baat ka koi jaldi nahi tha.....wahi vandana ke honth ko chooste hue woh apni haath ki giraft ko or jyada uske choochi par kas deta hai jisse vandana sihar si jaati hai or maze mai apne honth ko raghu ke jeev par kas ke daba deti hai........raghu dono choochi ko baari baari se masal raha tha ...vandana ke choochi bade hone ke bawjood bhi raghu un dono ko apne haatho mai pura samaya hua tha or kisi gend ki tarah unse khel raha tha........

Vandana bhi ab sab kuch bhool kar beparwah hokar raghu ke kiss mai kho chuki thi ....ab use is baat ka bhi tension nahi tha ki woh ek sunsaan sa jagah par hai or waha ek aadmi bhi nashe ke haalat mai soya hua hai ...iswaqt uske dimag par puri tarah se hawas haavi ho chuka tha jiske chalte vandana kuch bhi soch nahi paarahi thi ..... vandana ab apne dono haatho ko raghu ke kandhe ke ird gird lapet leti hai or bhut lagan se kiss mai uska saath dene lagti hai.....aise kiss karne se ab vandana ka choochi pura raghu ke chati se sat gaya tha or use apne seene mai bhut soft kisi rui samaan chiz ke ehsaas ki feeling aarahi thi......vandana ke naram choochi or excitement mai kadak ho chuke uske daane bhut acche tareek se raghu ko apni chaati par chubte hue mehsoos ho raha tha jiske ehsaas se uske muh se aaahhh ki siskari nikal padti hai jo vandana ke honth ke raspaan ke wajah se uske muh mai hi ghul jaate hai.......

Thodi der or vandana ke honth ka jaam peene ke baad raghu apna honth uske hontho se alag karta hai or jese hi wo apna honth uske honth se alag karta hai waise hi vandana tez tez saanse lene lagti hai jisse uski mast choochi or bhi mast tareeke se upar neeche hone lagta hai.....raghu aankhe faad kar vandana ki hilti hui choochi ko dekhne lagta hai wahi raghu ke honth apne honth se alag hota dekh vandana dheere se apni aankhe khol kar usko dekhne lagti hai....iswaqt raghu ka honth vandana ke thook or laar se pura bheeg chuka tha jise dekh vandana sharama si jaati hai.....

Raghu vandana ko apni ore dekhta hua dekhkar haule se apne haath se apne hontho ko pochta hai or gandi hasi haste hue bolta hai " waah raand qa swaad hai tera hontho ka...uffffff aisa laga maano koi amrit pee liya hoo....hehe...wakai tu bhut kaamuk or garam aurat hai ..." wahi vandana ek martaba phir raghu ki kahi hui baat sunkar sharma jaati hai saath hi raghu ke muh se apni gandi taarif sunkar khus bhi hoti hai.....wahi raghu isbaar apna haath uske choochi par rakh kar usko dabane lagta hai or dheere dheere vandana ke blouse ka button ko kholne lagta hai ...wahi apne choli ke button khulne ke wajah se vandana ka heart beat badhne laga tha kyoki aaj wo firse kisi anjaan shaksh ke  nazro ke saamne nangi hone jaa rahi thi....sharam se vandana ka jism kaap raha tha or saath hi wo kas ke apni aankhe band kar leti hai kyoki ab wo is haalath mai raghu ka saamna nahi karna chahti thi.....

Raghu apni aankho mai hawas liye vandana ke chehre ko ghoore jaa raha tha saath hi apne haatho se uske blouse ke button ko khol raha tha ....ek ek karke wo saare button ko khol deta hai or fir blouse ke  dono chhor ko pakad kar faila deta hai ....failane ke wajah se khuli hawa vandana ke nange seene se takrate hai jiske wajah se vandana sihar si jaati hai or saath hi uske mukh se aaahhhhh ki siskari nikal padti hai wahi dusri ore raghu apni aankhe faad kar vandana ke nangi choochi ko ghoore jaa raha tha......wo aaj pehli baar aisi ghaatak gori choochi dekh raha tha or is choochi ko dekh uske muh mai paani aaraha tha or saath hi uska dhadkta dil is choochi ko apne muh mai bhar kar choosne ko aatur ho raha tha......

Raghu ab apne dono haatho ko waapas uski choochi par rakh deta hai or jor se maslate hue bolta hai " waah raand qa gazab ki choochi hai teri ...maza aagaya inhe apne haatho se masalkar.....saala puri life mai itni badhiya choochi nahi masli aaahhhh saaali sach mai tu kudrat ka karishma hi hai .......baap re itni badi badi choochi kese tu sambhalti hai apne seene mai ?? Or tere ye blouse ye kese iske bojh ko sambhaal paate hai ?? Sach mai saali tujhe paakar abhishek sir to dhanya bhi hogaye or saath hi barbaad bhi hogaye ...hahaha.....

Raghu ke taraf se apne choochi ka taarif sun vandana ko accha lagta hai or saath hi wo aankh khol ke uske aankho mai dekhne lagti hai ....use raghu ki aankho mai apne jism ke prati hawas saaf taur se dikhai de raha tha ...wo kaampte hue hontho se bolti hai " aaahh raghu jee pls aise jor se na dabao inko ...dard ho raha hai ...." wahi vandana ke muh se faryaad sunkar raghu khush hote hue bolta hai " accha to tujhe dard ho raha hai yu mere is tarah se dabana ?? Hmmm ...chal wese ye toh bata mai kis chiz ko daba raha hu zor se jisse tujhe beinteha dard ho raha hai ?? Aakhir mai bhi toh jaanu ki ye jo do bade bade gende hai wo asal mai qa hai ?? Bol jaldi " .....raghu ye kehte hue hasta hai or saath hi abki baar vandana ke choochi ko jor jor se apne haatho mai pura bharkar masalne lagta hai.....

Vandana ka dil zoro se dhadak jaata hai jab raghu usse sawal karta hai ki "wo uske kis ang se khel raha hai "...vandana ka kaam raas ye sab anubhav karke bhut tezi se uske chut se beh raha tha jo us thele ko bheego raha tha.....vandana ye sab sun bhut jyada hi romanch mehsus kar rahi thi or saath hi use apni chut par cheetiya rengti hui bhi mehsoos ho rahi thi......vandana bhut koshis karke khud ko samjha rahi thi ki " ye sab sahi nahi hai paap hai yeh sab ....ye sab gandi baate mere jaisi padhi likhi sabhya ghar ki aurte ke liye nahi hai " par uska doosra man usse keh raha tha ki " chhod vandana yeh sab sahi galat or is samay ko dil se enjoy kar ....ye samay or maza dobara nahi aayega ....wese bhi tu itni aage to aa hi chuki hai or phir bas ang ke naam hi to batana hai kon sa bhut mushkil kaam hai " vandana apne man mai dono tarah ke vichaar laate hue dono ko soch rahi thi par aakhir mai jeet uski doosri soch wali ki hoti hai or ye jaan kar ki wo aslam jee ko batayegi ki wo uske kon se ang ko masal rahe hai yeh soch kar use bhut alag hi tarah ka excitement mehsoos hua ......wahi use apni gehri soch mai dooba dekh raghu uske peeche aakar khada ho jaata hai or apne dono haath ko uske choochi par rakh kar dheere dheere dabaane lagta hai or saath hi apna chehra uske kaan ke paas le aate hue lambi saanse chhodta hua bolta hai " saali tu baar baar kis soch mai dub jaati hai randi saaali ?? Maine jo tujhse kehne ko kaha hai uska jawab de na ......tera mard ghar mai nahi hai isliye tujhe koiparwah nahi tu aaram se yaaha mahine guzzar sakti hai par mai mera to ghar parivaar hai or mujhe jaana hai isliye ab jyada time khoti na kar or saaf saaf bata ......yeh kehte hue raghu isbaar apne dono haatho ki ungli ko uske nipple par rakhkar masalne lagta hai jisse vandana aankhe band kar madhur aawaj mai aaahhhhhh karte hue sisak padti hai .........

Vandana ko apne nipple masalwaane se bhut jyada maza aaraha tha....wo issamay aisa mehsoos kar rahi thi maano ki wo is samay koi alag hi duniya mai ho ....wo apna sir peeche aslam ke mazbut seene par rakh deti hai or maza lene lagti hai ....par raghu ke baato ko sunkar wo apni aankhe dheere se kholti hai or apna maatha uske sesne par rakhe hue hi chehra peeche ki ore karte hue raghu ko dekhne lagti hai phir kuch sochte hue dheere se par kaamuk lehze mai bolti hai "rraagghuuuu  jeee...wwoohh...aapp...mmmeereee cchh...cchhhoo...cchhoocchhhiii ke saattthhhh kkhheelll   rraaahheee haaaiiiii....aaahhhhhhhh........." wahi yeh bolte hue vandana wapas apne chehre ko aage karke aankhe band kar sharmaane lagti hai......wo hi jaan rahi thi ki wo kese ye sab gandi baate raghu jee se keh rahi thi .....par ye shabd bolte hi uski chut or jyada fadak jaati hai or saath hi uski chut mai khujli badh jaati hai jisse uska man karta hai ki abhi apni chut masal le par yu aisa behuda harkat wo aise kaise kar sakti hai ?? Ye soch kar wo bhut mushkil se apne armaan ko kabu mai karti hai ........

Wahi uske muh se choochi shabd sunkar raghu khush ho jaata hai or dono haatho ko uske nipple se hatakar apne haath se tez thapad maarta hai uske choochi mai jisse vandana ki phir ek baar madhur siskari nikal jaati hai or saath hi uske choochi thapad maarne se mast andaaz mai upar neeche hone lagta hai .....uski badi badi choochi ko aise hilta dekh raghu ka khoon or garam ho jaata hai or wo phir se uske dono choochi ko rough tarike se masalte hue bolta hai " aaahhhh saali qa bade bade choochi jai tere ufffffffff or qa khoob kaaha tune wakai tu besharam randi hai jo yeh sab kehne se hichkaati nahi hai warna shareef aurte yeh sab kehne se accha marna jyada pasand karti hai par saali tu toh awal darje ki raand hai dekh kaise maze lekar mujhse apni choochi masalwa rahi hai maano aisa lag raha hai ki mai tera purana grahak hu .....hehe ...saala koi bhi dekhke ye nahi bolega ki tu mujhse aaj pehli baar mil rahi hai .........hehehe........

Vandana ki chut raghu ki yeh sab baate sun kar jyada der tak or khud ko sambhal nahi paaya....abki baar uski chut ki khujli or adhik badh gaya jisse vandana ko ab khud ko sambhalna bhut jyada mushkil ho raha tha ....wo khud ko bhut samjha rahi thi ki aise apne haath lejaakar na khujlaaye par uska chut baar baar uske dimaag par haavi ho raha tha....wahi raghu ki baate vandana ko sharam se kahi bhaag jaane ko mazboor kar rahe the or uske kahe har baat se vandana ko humilation mehsoos ho raha tha par saath hi uske chut ki khujli ko or jyada badha bhi raha tha......

Vandana kaapte hue swar mai bolti hai " aaahhhh raghu jee ab bas kariye or jyada mujhe mere nazro mai mat giraiye yuh aise jaleel karke plsss raghu jee....." wahi raghu is baar uske choochi ko chhod apna haath ko neeche le jaata hua apne haath ko vandana ke naram gore pet par rakh deta hai or dheere dheere apne ungli se uske pet ko sehlaane lagta hai jisse vandana ko gudgudi hone lagta hai or saath hi raghu  ke is harkat se uska sharir kaampne lagta hai......raghu ke haath or ungli vandana ke pet par thande thande mehsoos ho rahe the jisse vandana ke jism mai garmi or jyada badh rahi thi ...raghu ab apna ek ungli uski naavi ke neeche jaaha ghaagra tha waaha par le jaate hue chalane lagta hai or uske kaan mai lambe saans chhodte hue bolta hai " are madam jee mai kaaha jaleel kar raha hu aapko ?? Bas aapko aapka sachchai hi bata raha hu .....ab aap hi bataiye bhala koi acche ghar ki shareef aurte aisi randiyo wali harkat karti hai kya ?? Or aise ashleel shabd apne muh se nikaalti hai qa wo bhi anjaan mard ke saamne ?? Bolo madam jee jawab do mai jo puch raha hu.....ye bolte hue wo apni ungli isbaar vandana ki gehri naavi mai daal deta hai  or gol gol ghumaane lagta hai wahi apne naavi par raghu ke mote ungli ka sparsh paakar vandana khub jor se siskari leti hai aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh rrraaggghhuuu jeeeeeee or saath hi sab sharam haya chhod besharmi ki hadd paar kar apne dono taango ko pura faila kar or apne ek haath ko apni chut par rakhkar raand ki tarah jor jor se masalne lagti hai .......

Vandana ko yuh besharmo ki tarah apni taange chaudi karte or saath hi apne haatho se apne chut ko ragadte dekh raghu kamini hasi haste hue bolta hai " haha..are ye qa madam jee aap toh yuh khule aam apni chut masal rahi hai ...are thoda toh sharam kariye ...hehe....accha itna hi khujli ho rahi hai aapki bur mai to thik hai masal lijiye apni paniyayi hui bur ko par mere sawalo ka jawab dijiye jo mene abhi pucha tha ....." ye bolte hue raghu  apna ek haath uske pet se hatakar seedha uske chut masalte haath par rakh deka hai or vandana ko chut masalne se rokh deta hai .....

Raghu ke aisa karne se vandana ka haath ruk jaata hai or uske chut masalne mai baadha padh jaata hai jiske chalte vandana aankhe khol peeche chehra karke raghu ko jhunjhalahat bhari nazro se dekhte hue bolti hai " aaaahhhh ...raghu  jeee ye qa kar rahe hai aapne toh kaha tha avi ki mai nahi rokunga par q fir aap rok rahe hai ?? Pllss raghu  jee haath chhod dijiye mera ...mujhse or ruka nahi jaa raha ".....wahi raghu uski baat sun muskurate hue bolta hai " are maine roka thodi hai bas kuch der ke liye hi roka hai ....rukawat ke liye maafi maangta hu madam jee mai aapse par aap jawab jaldi dengi toh mai apna haath utna hi jaldi hata dunga " yeh bolte hi raghu apne haatho mai dabav banate hue vandana ke haath ko uske bur se hata deta hai or phir apna haath uske haath se alag karke apne haath ko vandana ke panyayi chut par rakh deta hai......raghu ka yeh harkat dekh vandana puri tarah se hairaan ho jaati hai .......

Wahi raghu aaj maano jeete jee swarg ka yatra kar raha tha....ufffff ...qa drishya tha ye ...ek khubsurat aurat apni dono taange failaye hui baithi thi or peeche khada shaksh apna ek panja uski chut ke upar rakhe hue tha.....ab raghu dheere dheere apne haath ko vandana ki chut par upar neeche karne lagta hai jisse vandana ki chut ke daane raghu ke khurdure haath se ragad khaa rahi thi or vandana ko aseem aanand ki anubhuti de raha tha.....vandana lazzat mai apni aankhe band kar leti hai or apna maatha acche se aslam ke seene mai tika ke madhoshi mai sisakne lagti hai.....wahi raghu isbaar apne haath rok deta hai...raghu ke haath ko upar neeche na hota dekh vandana ekmartaba phir apni aankho mai pyaas liye peeche mud kar raghu ko dekhti hai wahi uske jawab mai raghu bas vandana ko dekhte hue ghinoni hansi hans deta hai......

Vandana ruwanshi si ho jaati hai raghu ko aise khud ko tadpaate dekh ...wo apne man mai sochti hai ki " ye raghu jee itna kyu tadpa rahe hai mujhe ?? Ye bhi pure kamine hai jab tak mere muh se nahi sunenge tab tak ye mujhe aise hi tadpate rahenge.....vandana is baar apne chut ki aag ko shaant karne ke khaatir aakhir bol hi deti hai " haa raghu  jee aapne sahi kaha ki koi bhi shareef aurat aisa harkat nahi karti jo mene kiya hai......mai badmash aurat hu raghu jee or please ye badmash aurat ko or na tadpaiye pls mujhe meri badmashi ki saza dijiye raghu jee " vandana ek hi saans mai raghu ki aankho mai dekhte hue ye sab keh deti hai saath hi apna haath uske haath ke upar rakhkar apne chut masalne ki nakaam koshis karti hai .......par raghu ke mazbut  haath ko zara bhi wo hila nahi paa rahi thi ....

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Ajanbhai.. thank you first of all.. as you take notice of my comments..
But aapki ek bat se sehmat nahi ho paa raha hu ki aap updates kuchh logo ko hi denge.. ek request hai aap sab ke liye hi update dijiye.. mai jantaa hu ki aap ke kaam ko koi appreciation nahi milta to frustration aanaa swabhawik hai... And I am OK with your attitude..
Bhailog.. aap jahaa kam ya job karte hai.. wahaa par bhi agar aapke kaam ko koi appreciate nahi karega to aap ki manosthiti kaisi banegi.. aur wahaa pe to aapko salary bhi milti hai aur achha performance hoga to incentives ya promotion bhi milta hai..
Aur yahaa sab writers free me hi kaam karte hai.. but woh apni personal / professional life me se time nikalake likhate hai.. aur such me erotic story likhana behad muskil kaam hota hai.. aur fir agar hum padhate hai to atleast kucch to boliye.. achha lagaa ya kya kami lagi.. aur koi suzaav bhi de sakte hai.. acche shabdo se kami bhi bataa sakte hai.. mai bhi harek story nahi padhata. Kuchh mere taste ke hisaab se pasand aati hai wo hi padhata huu.. lekin baki sab writer kharaab likhate hai aisaa nahi hai..
But I felt ke hamaari comments se unko motivation to jaroor milta hai.. aur wo hi unka puraskar hota hai... Thank you
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(30-12-2021, 10:56 AM)Yampag Wrote: Ajanbhai.. thank you first of all.. as you take notice of my comments..
But aapki ek bat se sehmat nahi ho paa raha hu ki aap updates kuchh logo ko hi denge.. ek request hai aap sab ke liye hi update dijiye.. mai jantaa hu ki aap ke kaam ko koi appreciation nahi milta to frustration aanaa swabhawik hai... And I am OK with your attitude..
Bhailog.. aap jahaa kam ya job karte hai.. wahaa par bhi agar aapke kaam ko koi appreciate nahi karega to aap ki manosthiti kaisi banegi.. aur wahaa pe to aapko salary bhi milti hai aur achha performance hoga to incentives ya promotion bhi milta hai..
Aur yahaa sab writers free me hi kaam karte hai.. but woh apni personal / professional life me se time nikalake likhate hai.. aur such me erotic story likhana behad muskil kaam hota hai.. aur fir agar hum padhate hai to atleast kucch to boliye.. achha lagaa ya kya kami lagi.. aur koi suzaav bhi de sakte hai.. acche shabdo se kami bhi bataa sakte hai.. mai bhi harek story nahi padhata. Kuchh mere taste ke hisaab se pasand aati hai wo hi padhata huu.. lekin baki sab writer kharaab likhate hai aisaa nahi hai..
But I felt ke hamaari comments se unko motivation to jaroor milta hai.. aur wo hi unka puraskar hota hai... Thank you

Thankyou yampag bro... Namaskar
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(30-12-2021, 03:15 AM)Curlygirl Wrote: Do as you wish dear your story is good but not the attitude already a good running story has suddenly gone unavailable now you are telling you will give update to certain user fine replies will also reduce even more  Namaskar

I m very sorry for this action  bt as a writer mujhe us sahi laga......baaki aaj update aajayega.....raat tak .....
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Nice story
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I thought this story stopped so I just gave hope but came back to it today and my gosh this is turning out to be a killer in all sense... hopefully the writer continues and sees it to an end.. a big thanks to writer
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waooooo hot super hot., give her more and more low class men to fuck mercylesly
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Are Ajanmol babuu.. ekdam se dhyan me aayaa ki aapne Aslam ka Raghu to naam change kar diyaa par Brijmohan ko ye batayaa ki nahi.. nahi to tour se aake woh dekhega to usko pataa kaise chalega ki Aslam kahaa gayaa aur Raghu vahaa kaise aayaa.. lol..
Just kidding..  Smile
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[b][i]Vandana ruwanshi si ho jaati hai raghu ko aise khud ko  tadpaate dekh ...wo apne man mai sochti hai ki " ye raghu jee itna kyu tadpa rahe hai mujhe ?? Ye bhi pure kamine hai jab tak mere muh se nahi sunenge tab tak ye mujhe aise hi tadpate rahenge.....vandana is baar apne chut ki aag ko shaant karne ke khaatir aakhir bol hi deti hai " haa raghu  jee aapne sahi kaha ki koi bhi shareef aurat aisa harkat nahi karti jo mene kiya hai......mai badmash aurat hu raghu jee or please ye badmash aurat ko or na tadpaiye pls mujhe meri badmashi ki saza dijiye raghu jee " vandana ek hi saans mai raghu ki aankho mai dekhte hue ye sab keh deti hai saath hi apna haath uske haath ke upar rakhkar apne chut masalne ki nakaam koshis karti hai .......par raghu ke mazbut  haath ko zara bhi wo hila nahi paa rahi thi ....

Vandana ko aise apne haath par khud ka haath rakh kar masalte hue dekh or khud  ke muh se badmash aurat sun raghu kameeni hasi hasta hua bolta hai " are madam jee lagta hai bhut jyada hi khujli ho raha hai aapki bur mai ..hehe ..koi nahi chinta mat kariye acche se aapki bur ki khujli mita dunga.. or saath hi tujhe teri badmashi ki saza bhi dunga ...." raghu yeh bolkar vandana ka haath pakad kar apne haath ke upar se hata deta hai or use tadpate hue apne haath ko dheere dheere sensual tareeke se upar neeche karne lagta hai......[/i][/b]

Apne chut par raghu ke haath ko yuh dheere se upar neeche hota dekh vandana ke muh se kaamuk siskari nilal jaata hai "aaahhhhhhh rraaggghhuu jjeee hhmmmmnnn "..saath hi lazzat mai apni aankhe band kar leti hai....wahi dusri ore raghu vandana ko tadpa raha tha ...ab wo apne haath ke do ungi ko uske chut par upar neeche kar raha tha saath hi apne ungli ke madad se uske chut ke daane ko sehla or ragad raha tha.....vandana ko raghu ke aisa karne se bechaini mehsoos hone lagta hai saath hi wo sisakte hue apni gaand baar baar upar ko uthane lagti hai jaise wo apni bur mai raghu ke mote mote ungli ko lena chha rahi ho......apni bur mai ungli ko na ghuste or raghu ka aise khud ko tadpaate dekh vandana kaamuk swar mai sisakte hue bol padti hai " aaahhhhhh rrraaaggghhuuu jeee oorrrrr naaaaa tttaaddddppaaiiiyeeee mujhhhheeeeeee......ddaaallll dddiiijjjjiiiyyyeeee nnnaaaaaa appnnnniiii uuunnngggllllliiiiiii " ........ye kehte hue vandana phir ek baar apni bhaari bharkam gaand hawa mai utha leti hai or raghu ke ungli ko apni paniyayi bur mai lene ki naakam koshis karti hai.......

Wahi raghu vandana ka aisi haalat dekhkar mand mand muskura raha tha or saath mai yeh bhi soch raha tha ki " saala ye chudai ki hawas acche se acche aurat ko raand  bana deti hai ...hehe dekho to saali kaise uttezna mai apni gaand uthakar uthakar tadap rahi hai mere ungli ko apni bur mai lene ke liye.....  " ye sochte hue raghu haule se apna chehra vandana ke kaan ke paas leaata hai or kaan ko haule se choomte hue bolta hai " sabar kar raand.. sabar kar ...teri yeh manokaamna bhut jaldi pura karunga ....waise yeh bata saali ki tu kon se jagah mai meri moti ungli lene ko vyakul hai ?? Aakhir mai bhi to jaanu ki tu kaha pe meri ungli lena chahti hai " ??? ......yeh bolte hue raghu wapas se vandana ke kaan mai apna honth rakh deta hai or dheere dheere apne hontho se choomne lagta hai .. .....

Raghu ke aise apne kaan ko choomta hua mehsoos kar vandana lazzat mai sisak padti hai ....use yuh raghu ka choomna alag hi prakar ka aanand de raha tha ....saath hi raghu apna jeev vandana ke kaan mai daal deta hai or saath mai apna ek haath vandana ke choochi par rakh deta hai or dheere dheere vandana ki choochi ko masalne lagta hai.....ab aalam yeh tha ki vandana raghu ke teehre hamle se puri tarah uttejit ho chuki thi....ek haaath raghu ka vandana ke bur ko sehla raha tha or dusra uske choochi ke saath khel raha tha or uske jeev vandana ke kaan mai ghusa hua tha.......is teehre waar ke chalte vandana ji bur or jyada uttejna mai apna paani chhodne lagi thi jo raghu ke ungli ko puri tarah bheego rahi thi.....

" jaldi bol na raand ki tujhe kaaha par meri ungli leni hai ??? Dekh tu jitna der karegi utna tu or teri bur tarpegi isliye deri na kar or bata jaldi ..." ....wahi baar baar raghu ke muh se apne liye raand bur or  chut jaise word sunkar  vandana buri tarah jhep jaati hai par ab apne choochi masalwane or chut ragadwaane ke chalte uska dimag ab kaam nahi kar raha tha....wo ab jald se jald apni pyaas bujhana chahti thi ...ab chahe uske liye use kuch bhi kyo na kehna pade .....apni saans ko durust karte hue vandana aankh band kar haule se bol padti hai "" aaahhhh rraagghhuu jeeee oorr naaa tadpaiye plsaseeee...ab daal dijiiiyeee naaaa meeeerrriii pppuuuusssyyyyy mmaaiii aaappnnniiii uunngllliiiii......aaahhhhhhhhhh " ....yeh kehte hue vandana bhut buri tarah sharmindi mehsoos kar rahi thi saath hi apne chut ke garmi ko shaant karne ke khaatir raghu ke ungli ko pakad leti hai or use apne chut ke ched par rakhkar andar daalne ka prayas karne lagti hai ..........

Yeh bolte hi vandana ke honth thar thar kaamp rahe the...wo hi jaan rahi thi ki wo kaise ye sab boli hai raghu ko jisse wo bas aaj hi mili hai....par kehte hai na hawas ki aag mai insaan puri tarah se andha or behra ho jaata hai...khair vandana ke muh se yeh sunke raghu ka loda uske paint mai hi jhatka maarta hai or saath hi baahir aane ko bhi tadapne laga tha.....raghu ab ungli par chipchipa sa mehsus kar raha tha jisse wo samajh chuka tha ki yeh raand puri tarah se garam ho chuki hai or ab chudai ke liye bekarar hai.....fir bhi wo vandana ko or jyada jaleel karna chahta tha isliye wo bolta hai " are oo angrezan ki aulad maine tujhse kaha na ki mujhe angregi nahi aati to phir angreji mai kyu bolti hai ?? Chal dobara bol or is baar acche se shudh hindi mai kehna samjhi....." yeh bolte hue raghu apne ungli ko vandana ke clit par rakh deta hai or dheere dheere apni ungli se sehlaane lagta hai.......

Raghu ke aise clit ko chhedne se vandana buri tarah karaah uthti hai or saath hi gusse mai khud se bolti hai " oofo ...ye raghu jee bhi na kyo itna tadpa rahe hai mujhe ?? Maine bol to diya jo wo bolwana chahte the mujhse .....ab mai pussssyyy ko kaise kahu wo ?? Ooohhh my god ye kaise imtihan le rahe ho mere ??? Par agar wo nahi kahungi jo raghu jee ne bola hai kehne ko toh wo aise raat bhar mujhe tadpaate rehenge .....ni ni mai ab or jyada nahi tadap sakti ..." yeh sochte hue vandana peeche chehra karte hue raghu ki aankho mai pyaasi nazro se dekhti hai or kaamuk andaaz mai bolti hai " rraagghhuu jjeee pleaseeeee apnniii mmootttiii uunnggliiii mmeereee bbuurrr mmaaiiii ddaalliiiyyeeee nnnaaaaaaa ........pplllssss mmmuujjjhhheeee ooorrrr mmmaaatttt ttaadddppaaiyyyeee rraaagghhhuuuu jeeeeeee......mmmeeriiiiiii bbbuurrrrr kkkiiiii pyaaaasssssss bbuujjhhhaaaa ddiìiijjjiiiiyyyyyyeeeeeeeee....." yeh kehte hue vandana raghu ki aankho mai dekhte hue apne neechle honth ko apne daant se kaat leti hai .........wahi dusri ore raghu vandana ka yeh roop dekhkar or jyada apne jajbaat par kaabu nahi rakh paaya or turant hi apne ungli ko uske daane se hatakar neeche uske chut par rakh kar ek hi baar mai andar ghusa diya .....apni chut mai  raghu ke mote ungli ko ghuste hi vandana ki tez magar kaamuk siskari nikal jaati hai aaaaahhhhhhhhhh rraagghhuuuu jeeeee ddhheereeee sseeeee aaahhhhhhh......wahi raghu ab dheere dheere apne ungli ko uske bur ke andar aage peeche kar raha tha chut geeli hone ke wajah se raghu ka ungli phach phach aawaj karte hue aasani se andar baahir ho raha tha bina koi pareshaani ke........

Raghu ke ungli aasani se vandana ke chut ki gehrai mai andar baahar ho raha tha or shaant waataran mai phach phach ki madhur aawaje gunj raha tha...vandana apni moti gaand ko baar baar upar ko utha rahi thi maano wo jyada se jyada raghu ke ungli ko apne andar lena chah rahi ho...khair thodi der or raghu uske chut mai ungli ko aage peeche karta hai or vandana ab apne orgasm par pahuchne wali hi thi par kameena raghu use kaha aasani se sukh ki prapti hone deta ...vandana ke expression or uske sharir mai ethan hota dekh raghu samjh jaata hai ki ye raand jhadne wali hai or yhi dekh kar wo apne ungli ka raftaar ekdum dheema kar deta hai or fir dekhte dekhte wo apna ungli ko aage peeche karna chhod deta or apni ungli ko bas vandana ki chut mai ghusaye rakhta hai .....

Wahi raghu ke ungli ko apni chut mai aage peeche na hota dekh vandana haule se apne aankh ko khol deti hai or pyaasi nazre liye peeche mud raghu ki hawas bhari aankho ko dekhne lagti hai...wahi raghu bhut acche se vandana ke sthithi ko samjh raha tha ...raghu ke ungli ko apne chut par fasa dekh vandana or jyada tadap uthti hai or sisakte hue bol padti hai " aaahhhh rraagghhuu jeee ruk q gaye aaahhhh?? Plsss aise mat tadpaiye na raghu jee please andar baahir kariye na "......wahi raghu isbaar vandana ke swallo ka koi jawab nahi deta wo bas vandana ki haalath ko muskurate hue dekh raha tha wahi vandana raghu ko koi harkat na karta dekh jhunjhula si jaati hai or fir aage apna chehra karte hue gusse se apni kamar ko uske ungli pe aage peeche karne lagti hai.......ab vandana apne dono haatho ko thela par rakh deti hai or pura dabav apne haatho par deti hai or koi bazaaru raand ki tarah apne kamar ko aage peeche karne lagti hai......vandana ka yeh randipana wala harkat dekh raghu man hi man muskura raha tha or ab wo apne anguthe se vandana ke chut ke daane par rakh sehlaane lagta hai .....ab vandana ko raghu ke ungli se double maza mil raha tha ek ungli uske chut mai aage peeche ho raha tha toh dusri uske daane ke saath khel raha tha.....vandana iswaqt bhut anandit hokar raghu ke lund par apni kamar aage peeche kar rahi thi ....wo ab apne dimag se nahi balki apne chut se soch samjh rahi thi.....wo apne hawas ki bhook mai itni kho chuki thi ki wo ek anjaan se khule jagah mai ek low class watchman ke ungli ko apne chut mai liye khud se hi apni kamar ko hila rahi thi jaise wo khud chud rahi ho ........

Wahi vandana ke aise uttejna mai apne kamar aage peeche karte dekh raghu fir samjh jaata hai ki yeh jhadne wali hai isliye raghu isbaar turant apni ungli uske paani se riste hue chut se nikaal leta hai or apne chehre ke saamne us ungli ko laake ek tuk muskurate hue dekhne lagta hai.....uski ungli iswaqt pure tarah se vandana ke kaam ras se bheeg chuki thi or usme se boond boond karke neeche gir rahe the.....wahi raghu kuch sochte hue us ungli ko seedha vandana ke saamne lejaata hai or use wo ungli dikhaane lagta hai.....apni kaam ras se bheege hue raghu ke ungli ko dekh vandana ka heart beat tez ho jaata hai saath hi use sharam bhi aane lagta hai istarah khud ke hi chut ras ka ek gair low class watchman ke ungli mai dekhne se.....saath hi raghu ka achanak se apna ungli khichna tab jab wo apne skhlan ke aakhri parao par thi iske chalte uska pura dimag frustation se kharab ho chuka tha ........

Ab raghu apna haath vandana ke chehre par lejaata hai or use apni taraf upar kar deta hai jis wajah se vandana ki aankhe na chahte hue bhi raghu ke chehre ko dekhne lagte hai....raghu ke chehre mai iswaqt ek ghinoni hasi thi jo vandana ko sharam se paani paani karne ko kaafi thi ....wahi raghu kameeni hasi hasta hua wo ungli usko dikhaate hue apne chehre ke ekdum paas le aata hai or phir us ungli ko thik apne naak ke saamne laata  hua uski khusboo ko sunghne lagta hai....raghu ka yeh harkat dekh vandana sharam se mar jaati hai or saath hi raghu ka aisa harkat dekh wo khud ke man mai sochti hai ki " chhhiiii...ye raghu jee qa kar rahe hai ? Aisa bhala koi karta hai qa ?? Kitne gande hai yeh jo mera pussy se nikle juice ko aise sungh rahe hai .....bhala aisa karne se qa maza mil raha hai raghu jee ko ? " ......vandana apne man mai yeh drishya ke baare mai soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi raghu use fir se bada jhatka de deta hai jisse dekhkar wo or jyada hairaann or usse bhi jyada uttejit ho jaati hai dekhkar......darasal abki baar raghu apne ungli ko sunghte hue seedha ungli apne honth ke paas leaata hai or vandana ko dhekte hue us kaamras se bheege hue ungli ko muh mai lekar chusne lagta hai.......

Yeh scene vandana ke liye kisi sadme se kam nahi tha kyoki usne aaj se pehle kisi ko bhi aisa karte nahi dekha tha.....na hi abhishek ko or na hi birju or brijmohan ko.....uske liye yeh uske jeevan ka pehla experience tha.....wo to soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki koi mard aisa kar bhi sakta hai khaas kar ke uske chut se nikla hua kaamras ko apne muh mai lekar chus sakta hai....vandana fir se apne man mai sochti hai " oohhhh mmyyy god ....yeh raghu jee toh sach mai paagal hai ..cchhiiii kitna ganda kaam kar rahe hai ....bhala aise koi gande cheej ko chatta hai qa?? Wakai raghu jee ekdum gawar hai...." yeh sab sochte hue vandana ghabraate hue raghu se bol padti hai " yeehh qa kar rahe aap raghu jee ?? Bhala koi aise kisi ka paani chusta hai qa ??? Cheeeeee kitna ganda harkat kar rahe hai aap??? ".....bhale hi vandana raghu se yeh keh di thi par raghu ke is harkat ne dobara uske chut mai hulchul paida kar diya tha jisse use apni chut par dobara khujlahat mehsus hone laga tha......

Hahaha.....raghu vandana ke kahi hui baat ko sun joro se hasne lagta hai jisse dekh vandana uske chehre ko gor se dekhne lagti hai ...wahi raghu haste hue bolta hai " are madam kamaal ki randi ho aap ....itni badi randi hoke tumhe ye kaam galat lag raha hai ?? Lagta hai ki jinlogo  se tum ab tak chudi ho wo sab kabhi aisa ni kiye ....koi nahi ab tu sab dekh legi chinta mat kar ....or yeh koi gandi cheez nahi hai yeh to amrit hai amrit "....yeh bolte hue raghu wapas se apne ungli ko muh mai lekar choosne lagta hai .....wahi raghu ke aisa kehne se vandana dobara jhep si jaati hai or sochti hai " baat ko sahi keh rahe hai raghu jee ...aajtak kabhi koi bhi aisa harkat nahi kiya ......kya ise chaatne mai maza milta hai ?? Or ..or iska swaad kaisa hota hoga ?? Kya raghu jee mere muh mai bhi ye ungli daalenge or mera hi pussy ka juice mujhe chakhayenge ??? Agar chakayenge to qa mujhe accha lagega ya bekar lagega apne hi pussy ka juice ????? Oohhhhh gawd.....yeh mai qa faaltu ki baate soch rahi hu ...bhala kisi ko kese accha lag sakta hai iska taste ?? Par vandana ko na jaane ab kyu man karne laga tha apne pussy ka juice se bheege hue ungli ko apne muh mai lekar chusne ka .......wo gaur se bina palke jhapkaaye raghu ke chehre ko dekhne lagti hai saath hi use apns ungli ko chusta hua dekhkar apne jeev ko baahir nikaal kar apne honth par ferne lagti hai.........

Raghu vandana ki yeh harkat dekh samjh jaata hai ki iske man mai qa chal raha hai or wo abki baar apne ungli ko apne muh se nikaal leta hai or seedha vandana ke honth par rakh deta hai or dheere dheere us  ko daaye se baaye toh baaye se daaye firaane lagta hai ...apni ungli ko uske honth par firate hue raghu haule se bol padta hai " jara tum bhi toh chakh kar dekho raand ki kaisa swad hai tera chut ka paani ka ?? Hehe ....dekhna tujhe bhut maza aayega apne hi chut ke paani ka swad chakhkar...."....... wahi uska yeh harkat dekh or muh se yeh sab sun vandana ka dil or jyada beth jaata hai....wo kuch bhi ab sochne samjhne ki haalat mai nahi thi.....uska ek man keh raha tha ki paagal hai qa tu jo aisa nesch kaam karegi wahi dusra man ussse keh raha tha are pagli qa soch rahi hai jaldi se muh khol or chakh le amrit ka swad...aisa moka baar baar nahi milta......vandana dono mano ka vichaar soch rahi thi par ab dusre man ka vichaar uske pehle man par haavi ho raha tha .....uska ab dil yeh soch kar baitha jaaraha tha ki pata nahi kesa swad hoga mere juice ka ??? Par apne juice ko chakhne ke khyaal maatra se uski chut dobars paani chhodne lagti hai jiske chalte vandana turant apna honth khol deti hai jisme raghu muskurata hua apni kaali gandi uske chut ke ras se or apni thook se bheege ungli ko uske muh ke andar daakhil kar deta hai or acche se uske muh ke chaaro or ghumaane lagta hai ..........

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Amazing.....
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(01-01-2022, 12:50 AM)abcturbine Wrote: Amazing.....

Thankyou @abcturbine....
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Extra Amazingly mast update ajajmol sir ,, keep rocking
 THE TALES OF EROTICISM ARE BEFORE  SEX

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(01-01-2022, 12:33 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: Update 55
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[b][i]Vandana ruwanshi si ho jaati hai raghu ko aise khud ko  tadpaate dekh ...wo apne man mai sochti hai ki " ye raghu jee itna kyu tadpa rahe hai mujhe ?? Ye bhi pure kamine hai jab tak mere muh se nahi sunenge tab tak ye mujhe aise hi tadpate rahenge.....vandana is baar apne chut ki aag ko shaant karne ke khaatir aakhir bol hi deti hai " haa raghu  jee aapne sahi kaha ki koi bhi shareef aurat aisa harkat nahi karti jo mene kiya hai......mai badmash aurat hu raghu jee or please ye badmash aurat ko or na tadpaiye pls mujhe meri badmashi ki saza dijiye raghu jee " vandana ek hi saans mai raghu ki aankho mai dekhte hue ye sab keh deti hai saath hi apna haath uske haath ke upar rakhkar apne chut masalne ki nakaam koshis karti hai .......par raghu ke mazbut  haath ko zara bhi wo hila nahi paa rahi thi ....

Vandana ko aise apne haath par khud ka haath rakh kar masalte hue dekh or khud  ke muh se badmash aurat sun raghu kameeni hasi hasta hua bolta hai " are madam jee lagta hai bhut jyada hi khujli ho raha hai aapki bur mai ..hehe ..koi nahi chinta mat kariye acche se aapki bur ki khujli mita dunga.. or saath hi tujhe teri badmashi ki saza bhi dunga ...." raghu yeh bolkar vandana ka haath pakad kar apne haath ke upar se hata deta hai or use tadpate hue apne haath ko dheere dheere sensual tareeke se upar neeche karne lagta hai......[/i][/b]

Apne chut par raghu ke haath ko yuh dheere se upar neeche hota dekh vandana ke muh se kaamuk siskari nilal jaata hai "aaahhhhhhh rraaggghhuu jjeee hhmmmmnnn "..saath hi lazzat mai apni aankhe band kar leti hai....wahi dusri ore raghu vandana ko tadpa raha tha ...ab wo apne haath ke do ungi ko uske chut par upar neeche kar raha tha saath hi apne ungli ke madad se uske chut ke daane ko sehla or ragad raha tha.....vandana ko raghu ke aisa karne se bechaini mehsoos hone lagta hai saath hi wo sisakte hue apni gaand baar baar upar ko uthane lagti hai jaise wo apni bur mai raghu ke mote mote ungli ko lena chha rahi ho......apni bur mai ungli ko na ghuste or raghu ka aise khud ko tadpaate dekh vandana kaamuk swar mai sisakte hue bol padti hai " aaahhhhhh rrraaaggghhuuu jeee oorrrrr naaaaa tttaaddddppaaiiiyeeee mujhhhheeeeeee......ddaaallll dddiiijjjjiiiyyyeeee nnnaaaaaa appnnnniiii uuunnngggllllliiiiiii " ........ye kehte hue vandana phir ek baar apni bhaari bharkam gaand hawa mai utha leti hai or raghu ke ungli ko apni paniyayi bur mai lene ki naakam koshis karti hai.......

Wahi raghu vandana ka aisi haalat dekhkar mand mand muskura raha tha or saath mai yeh bhi soch raha tha ki " saala ye chudai ki hawas acche se acche aurat ko raand  bana deti hai ...hehe dekho to saali kaise uttezna mai apni gaand uthakar uthakar tadap rahi hai mere ungli ko apni bur mai lene ke liye.....  " ye sochte hue raghu haule se apna chehra vandana ke kaan ke paas leaata hai or kaan ko haule se choomte hue bolta hai " sabar kar raand.. sabar kar ...teri yeh manokaamna bhut jaldi pura karunga ....waise yeh bata saali ki tu kon se jagah mai meri moti ungli lene ko vyakul hai ?? Aakhir mai bhi to jaanu ki tu kaha pe meri ungli lena chahti hai " ??? ......yeh bolte hue raghu wapas se vandana ke kaan mai apna honth rakh deta hai or dheere dheere apne hontho se choomne lagta hai .. .....

Raghu ke aise apne kaan ko choomta hua mehsoos kar vandana lazzat mai sisak padti hai ....use yuh raghu ka choomna alag hi prakar ka aanand de raha tha ....saath hi raghu apna jeev vandana ke kaan mai daal deta hai or saath mai apna ek haath vandana ke choochi par rakh deta hai or dheere dheere vandana ki choochi ko masalne lagta hai.....ab aalam yeh tha ki vandana raghu ke teehre hamle se puri tarah uttejit ho chuki thi....ek haaath raghu ka vandana ke bur ko sehla raha tha or dusra uske choochi ke saath khel raha tha or uske jeev vandana ke kaan mai ghusa hua tha.......is teehre waar ke chalte vandana ji bur or jyada uttejna mai apna paani chhodne lagi thi jo raghu ke ungli ko puri tarah bheego rahi thi.....

" jaldi bol na raand ki tujhe kaaha par meri ungli leni hai ??? Dekh tu jitna der karegi utna tu or teri bur tarpegi isliye deri na kar or bata jaldi ..." ....wahi baar baar raghu ke muh se apne liye raand bur or  chut jaise word sunkar  vandana buri tarah jhep jaati hai par ab apne choochi masalwane or chut ragadwaane ke chalte uska dimag ab kaam nahi kar raha tha....wo ab jald se jald apni pyaas bujhana chahti thi ...ab chahe uske liye use kuch bhi kyo na kehna pade .....apni saans ko durust karte hue vandana aankh band kar haule se bol padti hai "" aaahhhh rraagghhuu jeeee oorr naaa tadpaiye plsaseeee...ab daal dijiiiyeee naaaa meeeerrriii pppuuuusssyyyyy mmaaiii aaappnnniiii uunngllliiiii......aaahhhhhhhhhh " ....yeh kehte hue vandana bhut buri tarah sharmindi mehsoos kar rahi thi saath hi apne chut ke garmi ko shaant karne ke khaatir raghu ke ungli ko pakad leti hai or use apne chut ke ched par rakhkar andar daalne ka prayas karne lagti hai ..........

Yeh bolte hi vandana ke honth thar thar kaamp rahe the...wo hi jaan rahi thi ki wo kaise ye sab boli hai raghu ko jisse wo bas aaj hi mili hai....par kehte hai na hawas ki aag mai insaan puri tarah se andha or behra ho jaata hai...khair vandana ke muh se yeh sunke raghu ka loda uske paint mai hi jhatka maarta hai or saath hi baahir aane ko bhi tadapne laga tha.....raghu ab ungli par chipchipa sa mehsus kar raha tha jisse wo samajh chuka tha ki yeh raand puri tarah se garam ho chuki hai or ab chudai ke liye bekarar hai.....fir bhi wo vandana ko or jyada jaleel karna chahta tha isliye wo bolta hai " are oo angrezan ki aulad maine tujhse kaha na ki mujhe angregi nahi aati to phir angreji mai kyu bolti hai ?? Chal dobara bol or is baar acche se shudh hindi mai kehna samjhi....." yeh bolte hue raghu apne ungli ko vandana ke clit par rakh deta hai or dheere dheere apni ungli se sehlaane lagta hai.......

Raghu ke aise clit ko chhedne se vandana buri tarah karaah uthti hai or saath hi gusse mai khud se bolti hai " oofo ...ye raghu jee bhi na kyo itna tadpa rahe hai mujhe ?? Maine bol to diya jo wo bolwana chahte the mujhse .....ab mai pussssyyy ko kaise kahu wo ?? Ooohhh my god ye kaise imtihan le rahe ho mere ??? Par agar wo nahi kahungi jo raghu jee ne bola hai kehne ko toh wo aise raat bhar mujhe tadpaate rehenge .....ni ni mai ab or jyada nahi tadap sakti ..." yeh sochte hue vandana peeche chehra karte hue raghu ki aankho mai pyaasi nazro se dekhti hai or kaamuk andaaz mai bolti hai " rraagghhuu jjeee pleaseeeee apnniii mmootttiii uunnggliiii mmeereee bbuurrr mmaaiiii ddaalliiiyyeeee nnnaaaaaaa ........pplllssss mmmuujjjhhheeee ooorrrr mmmaaatttt ttaadddppaaiyyyeee rraaagghhhuuuu jeeeeeee......mmmeeriiiiiii bbbuurrrrr kkkiiiii pyaaaasssssss bbuujjhhhaaaa ddiìiijjjiiiiyyyyyyeeeeeeeee....." yeh kehte hue vandana raghu ki aankho mai dekhte hue apne neechle honth ko apne daant se kaat leti hai .........wahi dusri ore raghu vandana ka yeh roop dekhkar or jyada apne jajbaat par kaabu nahi rakh paaya or turant hi apne ungli ko uske daane se hatakar neeche uske chut par rakh kar ek hi baar mai andar ghusa diya .....apni chut mai  raghu ke mote ungli ko ghuste hi vandana ki tez magar kaamuk siskari nikal jaati hai aaaaahhhhhhhhhh rraagghhuuuu jeeeee ddhheereeee sseeeee aaahhhhhhh......wahi raghu ab dheere dheere apne ungli ko uske bur ke andar aage peeche kar raha tha chut geeli hone ke wajah se raghu ka ungli phach phach aawaj karte hue aasani se andar baahir ho raha tha bina koi pareshaani ke........

Raghu ke ungli aasani se vandana ke chut ki gehrai mai andar baahar ho raha tha or shaant waataran mai phach phach ki madhur aawaje gunj raha tha...vandana apni moti gaand ko baar baar upar ko utha rahi thi maano wo jyada se jyada raghu ke ungli ko apne andar lena chah rahi ho...khair thodi der or raghu uske chut mai ungli ko aage peeche karta hai or vandana ab apne orgasm par pahuchne wali hi thi par kameena raghu use kaha aasani se sukh ki prapti hone deta ...vandana ke expression or uske sharir mai ethan hota dekh raghu samjh jaata hai ki ye raand jhadne wali hai or yhi dekh kar wo apne ungli ka raftaar ekdum dheema kar deta hai or fir dekhte dekhte wo apna ungli ko aage peeche karna chhod deta or apni ungli ko bas vandana ki chut mai ghusaye rakhta hai .....

Wahi raghu ke ungli ko apni chut mai aage peeche na hota dekh vandana haule se apne aankh ko khol deti hai or pyaasi nazre liye peeche mud raghu ki hawas bhari aankho ko dekhne lagti hai...wahi raghu bhut acche se vandana ke sthithi ko samjh raha tha ...raghu ke ungli ko apne chut par fasa dekh vandana or jyada tadap uthti hai or sisakte hue bol padti hai " aaahhhh rraagghhuu jeee ruk q gaye aaahhhh?? Plsss aise mat tadpaiye na raghu jee please andar baahir kariye na "......wahi raghu isbaar vandana ke swallo ka koi jawab nahi deta wo bas vandana ki haalath ko muskurate hue dekh raha tha wahi vandana raghu ko koi harkat na karta dekh jhunjhula si jaati hai or fir aage apna chehra karte hue gusse se apni kamar ko uske ungli pe aage peeche karne lagti hai.......ab vandana apne dono haatho ko thela par rakh deti hai or pura dabav apne haatho par deti hai or koi bazaaru raand ki tarah apne kamar ko aage peeche karne lagti hai......vandana ka yeh randipana wala harkat dekh raghu man hi man muskura raha tha or ab wo apne anguthe se vandana ke chut ke daane par rakh sehlaane lagta hai .....ab vandana ko raghu ke ungli se double maza mil raha tha ek ungli uske chut mai aage peeche ho raha tha toh dusri uske daane ke saath khel raha tha.....vandana iswaqt bhut anandit hokar raghu ke lund par apni kamar aage peeche kar rahi thi ....wo ab apne dimag se nahi balki apne chut se soch samjh rahi thi.....wo apne hawas ki bhook mai itni kho chuki thi ki wo ek anjaan se khule jagah mai ek low class watchman ke ungli ko apne chut mai liye khud se hi apni kamar ko hila rahi thi jaise wo khud chud rahi ho ........

Wahi vandana ke aise uttejna mai apne kamar aage peeche karte dekh raghu fir samjh jaata hai ki yeh jhadne wali hai isliye raghu isbaar turant apni ungli uske paani se riste hue chut se nikaal leta hai or apne chehre ke saamne us ungli ko laake ek tuk muskurate hue dekhne lagta hai.....uski ungli iswaqt pure tarah se vandana ke kaam ras se bheeg chuki thi or usme se boond boond karke neeche gir rahe the.....wahi raghu kuch sochte hue us ungli ko seedha vandana ke saamne lejaata hai or use wo ungli dikhaane lagta hai.....apni kaam ras se bheege hue raghu ke ungli ko dekh vandana ka heart beat tez ho jaata hai saath hi use sharam bhi aane lagta hai istarah khud ke hi chut ras ka ek gair low class watchman ke ungli mai dekhne se.....saath hi raghu ka achanak se apna ungli khichna tab jab wo apne skhlan ke aakhri parao par thi iske chalte uska pura dimag frustation se kharab ho chuka tha ........

Ab raghu apna haath vandana ke chehre par lejaata hai or use apni taraf upar kar deta hai jis wajah se vandana ki aankhe na chahte hue bhi raghu ke chehre ko dekhne lagte hai....raghu ke chehre mai iswaqt ek ghinoni hasi thi jo vandana ko sharam se paani paani karne ko kaafi thi ....wahi raghu kameeni hasi hasta hua wo ungli usko dikhaate hue apne chehre ke ekdum paas le aata hai or phir us ungli ko thik apne naak ke saamne laata  hua uski khusboo ko sunghne lagta hai....raghu ka yeh harkat dekh vandana sharam se mar jaati hai or saath hi raghu ka aisa harkat dekh wo khud ke man mai sochti hai ki " chhhiiii...ye raghu jee qa kar rahe hai ? Aisa bhala koi karta hai qa ?? Kitne gande hai yeh jo mera pussy se nikle juice ko aise sungh rahe hai .....bhala aisa karne se qa maza mil raha hai raghu jee ko ? " ......vandana apne man mai yeh drishya ke baare mai soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi raghu use fir se bada jhatka de deta hai jisse dekhkar wo or jyada hairaann or usse bhi jyada uttejit ho jaati hai dekhkar......darasal abki baar raghu apne ungli ko sunghte hue seedha ungli apne honth ke paas leaata hai or vandana ko dhekte hue us kaamras se bheege hue ungli ko muh mai lekar chusne lagta hai.......

Yeh scene vandana ke liye kisi sadme se kam nahi tha kyoki usne aaj se pehle kisi ko bhi aisa karte nahi dekha tha.....na hi abhishek ko or na hi birju or brijmohan ko.....uske liye yeh uske jeevan ka pehla experience tha.....wo to soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki koi mard aisa kar bhi sakta hai khaas kar ke uske chut se nikla hua kaamras ko apne muh mai lekar chus sakta hai....vandana fir se apne man mai sochti hai " oohhhh mmyyy god ....yeh raghu jee toh sach mai paagal hai ..cchhiiii kitna ganda kaam kar rahe hai ....bhala aise koi gande cheej ko chatta hai qa?? Wakai raghu jee ekdum gawar hai...." yeh sab sochte hue vandana ghabraate hue raghu se bol padti hai " yeehh qa kar rahe aap raghu jee ?? Bhala koi aise kisi ka paani chusta hai qa ??? Cheeeeee kitna ganda harkat kar rahe hai aap??? ".....bhale hi vandana raghu se yeh keh di thi par raghu ke is harkat ne dobara uske chut mai hulchul paida kar diya tha jisse use apni chut par dobara khujlahat mehsus hone laga tha......

Hahaha.....raghu vandana ke kahi hui baat ko sun joro se hasne lagta hai jisse dekh vandana uske chehre ko gor se dekhne lagti hai ...wahi raghu haste hue bolta hai " are madam kamaal ki randi ho aap ....itni badi randi hoke tumhe ye kaam galat lag raha hai ?? Lagta hai ki jinlogo  se tum ab tak chudi ho wo sab kabhi aisa ni kiye ....koi nahi ab tu sab dekh legi chinta mat kar ....or yeh koi gandi cheez nahi hai yeh to amrit hai amrit "....yeh bolte hue raghu wapas se apne ungli ko muh mai lekar choosne lagta hai .....wahi raghu ke aisa kehne se vandana dobara jhep si jaati hai or sochti hai " baat ko sahi keh rahe hai raghu jee ...aajtak kabhi koi bhi aisa harkat nahi kiya ......kya ise chaatne mai maza milta hai ?? Or ..or iska swaad kaisa hota hoga ?? Kya raghu jee mere muh mai bhi ye ungli daalenge or mera hi pussy ka juice mujhe chakhayenge ??? Agar chakayenge to qa mujhe accha lagega ya bekar lagega apne hi pussy ka juice ????? Oohhhhh gawd.....yeh mai qa faaltu ki baate soch rahi hu ...bhala kisi ko kese accha lag sakta hai iska taste ?? Par vandana ko na jaane ab kyu man karne laga tha apne pussy ka juice se bheege hue ungli ko apne muh mai lekar chusne ka .......wo gaur se bina palke jhapkaaye raghu ke chehre ko dekhne lagti hai saath hi use apns ungli ko chusta hua dekhkar apne jeev ko baahir nikaal kar apne honth par ferne lagti hai.........

Raghu vandana ki yeh harkat dekh samjh jaata hai ki iske man mai qa chal raha hai or wo abki baar apne ungli ko apne muh se nikaal leta hai or seedha vandana ke honth par rakh deta hai or dheere dheere us  ko daaye se baaye toh baaye se daaye firaane lagta hai ...apni ungli ko uske honth par firate hue raghu haule se bol padta hai " jara tum bhi toh chakh kar dekho raand ki kaisa swad hai tera chut ka paani ka ?? Hehe ....dekhna tujhe bhut maza aayega apne hi chut ke paani ka swad chakhkar...."....... wahi uska yeh harkat dekh or muh se yeh sab sun vandana ka dil or jyada beth jaata hai....wo kuch bhi ab sochne samjhne ki haalat mai nahi thi.....uska ek man keh raha tha ki paagal hai qa tu jo aisa nesch kaam karegi wahi dusra man ussse keh raha tha are pagli qa soch rahi hai jaldi se muh khol or chakh le amrit ka swad...aisa moka baar baar nahi milta......vandana dono mano ka vichaar soch rahi thi par ab dusre man ka vichaar uske pehle man par haavi ho raha tha .....uska ab dil yeh soch kar baitha jaaraha tha ki pata nahi kesa swad hoga mere juice ka ??? Par apne juice ko chakhne ke khyaal maatra se uski chut dobars paani chhodne lagti hai jiske chalte vandana turant apna honth khol deti hai jisme raghu muskurata hua apni kaali gandi uske chut ke ras se or apni thook se bheege ungli ko uske muh ke andar daakhil kar deta hai or acche se uske muh ke chaaro or ghumaane lagta hai ..........

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(01-01-2022, 09:53 AM)wolfy Wrote: Extra Amazingly mast update ajajmol sir ,, keep rocking

Thankyou so much @wolfy ......saath bane rahiyega....
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Thanks @RAFTAAR..
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