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kamal ka story hein... kamal ka writing hein...dhasu... update de do please
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Super... please update regular.... please update more
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Wahh ji wàahh.. der aaye durust aaye.. very interesting.. laalu dhire dhire aage badh rahaa hai.. aur dono kavita aur thakurain ki aag bhi dhire dhire badh rahi hai..
Dekhate hai aage kya hota hai.. aur pahele kaun shikaar hota hai..
Touch n go aur sabka apne tarike se manomanthan.. create more interest in the story.. keep it up..dostt..
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Very nice story... ek baat mereko samaj nehi ata buddhi pe itna interest kaha se ati hein? Har dusre story mein dekhte hu buddhi hawas ka shikar ban zate...strange
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Superb update... Waiting for next...
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You've also made some research, very good. But still when you have a young 'raand' like Kavita who cares about others...Waiting for Kavita's encounters.
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Fantastic update! Great writings
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Waah Lodybhai.. kahaani me twist..
Kahi Laalu ne Daroga ki baan sunn to nahi lii.. aur usi bimari ka daura padne ka naatak karke wo apni hawas mitayega.. dono ya fir teeno naariyon se.. let's see what is in writers mind.. waiting....
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Super update.
Please update more
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Yeah kya update de dala...!! Lots of scope opened for sexy built up and a seductive story...!! Superb!!
Kavita aur Thakur aur security officer wala bhi gao ka bhala soch rahe hai... but lagta hai asli bhala toh Laalu ka hi hoga...Awaiting next
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Wonderful update! Bahut badhiya kahaani