26-12-2021, 09:04 AM
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Vasant - Vihaar ( LODY BHAI )
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26-12-2021, 09:04 AM
Bhai update
26-12-2021, 06:41 PM
kamal ka story hein... kamal ka writing hein...dhasu... update de do please
29-12-2021, 09:12 AM
Gayatri Devi Jab hosh mein aayi to use bada pachtawa hua ki yah Maine kya kar Diya...main ek Pooja paath wali aurat hun aur kaise uska pakad aur sungh sakti hun....chhi chhi chhi chhi Gayatri Devi ghabrai hui haweli me ghusti hai...Kanta jo abhi abhi andar aai thi vo Gayatri Devi ko dekhti hai....mathe par halki sikan , gardan se bahta hua paseena , tej chalti saanse , kampta hua sharir Ye dekh Kanta puchti hai - kya hua aapko malkin...ye kya halat kar rakhi hai aapne...itni subah subah aapko paseena kaise aa raha hai... Gayatri Devi uski baato se jhep gayi...ab Kanta ko vah kya bataye ki abhi abhi usne kya kiya tha jiski vajah se uske sharir ne toofan sa uth raha hai.... Gayatri Devi - kuch nahi...vo Thakur Shahab aaj jaldi chale gaye na to unko bahar tak chorne gayi thi... Kanta - achha...par ye paseena aur aap ghabra kyu rahi hai....? Gayatri - kaha hai paseena tujhe jyada dikhta hai kya....jaa jaakar kaam kar aur chay nasta bana... Kanta vaha de chupchap rasoi me aa jaati hai aur sochne lagti hai - badi ajeeb baat hai...aaj tak to maalkin ne aise baat nahi ki...aaj pata nahi kya ho gaya... Gayatri Devi kuch lene ke liye rasoi me chali jaati hai aur vahi khadi hokar Kanta ko kaam karte dekhne lagti hai... Kuch der baad Laalu bhi naha dhokar aata hai...haweli me dekhta hai , abhi tak koi vaha nahi tha phir uski najar rasoi me padti hai... Gayatri Devi Rasoi me khadi hui thi...piche se uska ubhra hua sharir , uski chaudi peeth aur gaand Laalu ko saaf dikh raha tha jisko dekh Laalu ka lund phir se akadne lag jaata hai.... Gayatri Devi rasoi se nikal kar nahane ke liye kamre me chali jaati hai...uski najar Laalu par nahi padi thi... Laalu dhoti ke upar se Lund par haath ferte hue sochta hai - lagta hai Laalu tera haweli me subh samay chal raha hai , aisa lagta hai jald hi koi to tera hone waala hai....jo aate hi aise darshan ho rahe hai...aur haste hue vah rasoi me ghus jaata hai... Dono saath me chay nasta banane lagte hai...nasta bante hi Kanta Laalu ko bahar table par nasta rakhne ke liye bolti hai... Laalu jaakar table par nasta rakhne lagta hai...itne me Gayatri Devi bhi apne kamre se niklne aane lagti hai.... Gayatri Devi jo abhi bilkul normal thi , Laalu ko dekh uska man machal gaya , ek energy uske sharir me aa gayi , aankho me hawas aur kaamukta chhane lagi , blouse ne kaid uske adhed stan bhi kade hone lag gaye , uski kamar ki lachak bad gayi aur vah ithalate hue jaakar sofe par baith gayi aur Laalu ko hi dekhne lagi... Laalu ne Gayatri Devi ko dekh pranaam kiya aur usse naste ke liye pucha...Pahle to vah Laalu ko dekhti rahi isi beech Laalu ki bhi najar usse mil gayi....phir kuch sochte hue usne nasta lagane aur Kavita ko bulane ke liye kah diya... Jis tarike se Gayatri Devi ne Laalu ko dekha tha usne Laalu ko kuch to sochne par majboor kar diya tha kyoki Gayatri Devi ki aankhe us samay bahut jyada nasheeli ho rahi thi.... Kavita ka naam sunke Laalu ki aankho me chamak aa gayi aur vo jaldi se usko bulane ke liye upar gaya...darwaje par dastak di , Kavita ne aakar darwaja khola....darwaja khulte hi Laalu phir uske saamne khada tha... Laalu ko dekh Kavita ki phir se ghabrahat aur saanse tej hona suru ho gayi...lekin Laalu to uske saamne vahi apni gardan nichi karke khada tha... Laalu - memsab naste ke liye niche aa jaiye... Kavita - ha thik hai mai aati hu....aur vo darwaja halka sa band karne lagti hai lekin Laalu usko beech me hi rok leta hai aur darwaja band nahi hone deta... Laalu gardan nichi karke bolta hai - memsab aap bura na maane to mai aapse kuch baat karna chahta hu... Baat ka naam sunkar Kavita uski taraf dekhti hai...jo abhi gardan nichi karke khada tha..isliye usne kaha.. Kavita - kya baat karni hai tumko...niche sabke saamne karna jao ab yaha se... Laalu - memsab aisi baat mai sabke saamne nahi kar sakta , isliye mai abhi aapko bata deta hu... Kavita ghabrahat ke saath sochne lagi ki aisi kya baat karne wala hai ye jo sabke saamne nahi kar sakta...kahi uske baare me to.... Kavita - kya hai jaldi batao.... Laalu thoda kamre ke andar ghusta hai aur sidhe Kavita ke pairo me gir jaata hai....Kavita ye dekh chauk gayi ki ye kya kar raha hai.... Laalu ne uske pairo ko pakad liya aur aidiyon par sir rakh kar rote hue bola - memsab mujhe maaf kar dijiye.... Kavita ko badi hairani hui ki ye kisi baat ki maafi maang raha hai....usne Laalu ko apne pairo se hatane ki kosis ki lekin Laalu ne pairo ko kaske pakda hua tha... Laalu - memsab us din nadi par jo maine kiya , aisa karne ka mera koi irada nahi tha...maine us din bahut jyada daaru pee li thi...aur jab mai vaha se nikal raha tha tab meri najar aap par padi aur aapko paani me vo sab karta dekh mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha ki mai apne aap ko rok nahi paaya aur aapke saath kya karne lag gaya aapko gande gande shabd bolne laga..... Lekin memsab vo sab bas daaru ke nashe me hua tha maine janbujhkar nahi kiya tha.... Kavita ko Laalu se aisi maafi ki ummid bilkul nahi thi...us din Laalu ne nadi par jo kiya usse to bas Kavita ko vo ek jaahil kameena insaan lag raha tha.... lekin Laalu ko apne kiye par pachtava ho raha tha aur ye baat Kavita ko achhi lagi... Kavita - dekho mai us baare me koi bat nahi karna chahti thi...lekin phir bhi tumne uske liye maafi maangi hai to mai tumhe maaf karti hu....par ab tum mera pair chhoro aur jakar kaam karo... Laalu apne aansuo ko pochte hue khada hota hai aur bolta hai - sach me memsab aapne mujhe maaf kar diya na... Kavita - ha...ab tum ja sakte ho aur dobara kabhi kisi ke saath aisa nahi karna samjhe na... Laalu - thik hai memsab mai kabhi aisi harkat dobara nahi karuga...aapne ye baat Thakur Sahab ko nahi bata kar bhi mujh par bahut bada ahsaan kiya hai aur iske liye bhi aapka shukriya... ( Ye sab baate Laalu ne apni gardan nichi karke hi ki thi...usne Kavita ko aankh uthakar dekha nahi tha ) Kavita sochne lagi ki Laalu sach mein hi ek achcha insan hai use din usne Jo Kiya vah sab Nashe mein hua tha agar sach mein hi Laalu Bura Insan hota to Mujhe gandi najron se dekhta lekin yahan to yah gardan utha hi nahin raha hai... Laalu piche mudkar jaane lagta hai lekin gate per ruk jata hai aur gardan niche karke bolta hai - memsaab agar aap Bura Na Mane to main aapse ek baat aur kahna chahta hun Kavita - ha kya... Laalu - pahle bataiye aap Bura to nahin manengi.. Kavita kuch sochte hue - haan theek hai batao...lekin kuchh galat ya ganda nahi hona chahie... Laalu - ji memsab aisa kuch nahi hai... Kavita - thik hai phir...batao Laalu memsab aap sach mein hi bahut khubsurat hai... Lekin us din Jo kuchh bhi hua uske bad mein aap se najre nahi mila pa raha hun... Agar aap ijazat de to main ek bar aapke khubsurat chehre ko dekhna chahta hun... Aisi baat se chaukne ki bajaye Apni khubsurti ki tareef sunkar Kavita ki aankho me chamak aur hotho par halki muskan aa gayi... Kavita sochne lagi - kya mujhe ha karni chahiye...?...aisa karti hu mai ha kar deti hu aur ise dekhne deti hu , agar isne mere chehre ke alawa kahi aur dekha to mujhe ye bhi pata lag jayega ki Laalu sahi me kaisa insaan hai...ghatiya ya sahi... Kavita - thik hai.. Laalu - sach memsab...kya mai apni gardan utha sakta hu aur aapke khubsurat chehre ko dekh sakta hu... Kavita muskurate hue - ha... Laalu ne apni gardan ko dhire se uthaya aur Kavita ko dekhne laga...dono ki aankhe mili... Bilkul gol chehra , aankho me halka sa kajal , hotho par halki laal lipstick aur un hotho par muskurahat , kaano me jhumke... Laalu sach me use dekh kar pagal ho raha tha....vah Kavita ko upar se niche tak poora dekhna chahta tha...uska lund bandhan todkar aajad hona chahta tha...lekin vah badi chalaki dikha kar apne aap ko control kiye hue tha aur lagatar uski aankho me dekh raha tha... Kavita pahle to muskura rahi thi lekin jab Laalu uski aankho me ektak lagaye dekhta raha to uski muskan kahi gayab ho gayi...Laalu ko aise apni aur lagatar dekhna use bura to nahi lag raha tha lekin aise dekhne se ek sihran uske sharir ne daud gayi...uski janghe chipak gayi , hoth kampne lag gaye...chehre par paseena aane lag gaya... Kuch der aise hi dekhne par Laalu ne uski aankho me dekhte hue kaha - memsab aap mujhe dekh kar ghbraya mat kijiye...mai kuch bhi nahi karuga aapke saath... Kavita - kya...nahi to mai kaha ghabra rahi hu... Laalu - memsab jhuth mat boliye...aapke mathe ka paseena sab bayan kar raha hai ki aap mujhe dekh kar ghabra rahi hai... Kavita - kaha...kuch bhi...paseena nahi aa raha mujhe... Ye sunte hi Laalu ne kuch bhi nahi kaha...vah thoda sa aage aaya aur apna haath uthakar Kavita ke mathe par rakh diya... Laalu apna haath Kavita ke mathe par firate hue naak ke upar , hotho ke side se laaya aur kaha... Laalu ne apni ek anguli par lage paseene ko Kavita ko dikhaya aur kaha - aap jhuth bol rahi hai memsab...ye dekhiye aapko paseena aa raha hai... Kavita ne kuch bhi nahi kaha vah chup chap khadi rahi...jab Laalu uske mathe par haath fira raha tha tab uski aankhe band thi... Laalu ab bahar jaate hue bola - memsab nasha mere liye ek beemari jaisa hai...jab mai nashe me hota hu to mai sach me bhool jata hu ki mai kya kar raha hu aur kya karne waala hu...isliye aapse vinti hai ki jab mai nashe me hu to aap mere paas mat aana....aur aisa kahkar Laalu niche chala jaata hai... Laalu bas mauke ki talash me tha jisse vah Kavita ke sharir me aag laga sake aur usne badi chalaki ke saath aisa kar diya tha... Kavita sach me hi kuch der ke liye bahak gayi thi...uska control bigad gaya tha... Poora din aise hi nikal gaya...shaam ko Bheema aur Thakur bhi shahar se vaapas aa chuke the...sabne khana khaya aur sab sone ki taiyari karne lage... Gayatri Devi bhale hi pooja paath waali ho lekin hai to ek aurat hi uski bhi kuch majboori hai...isliye aaj uske man me jo aag lagi thi use shant karne ke liye vah Thakur Indrajeet ko uksa rahi thi....lekin Thakur bechara kuch samjh nahi saka aur ghode bechkar so gaya... Kavita bhi leti soch me doobi thi...vah soch rahi thi ki us din nadi par jo hua usme saari galti to meri hi thi...mai hi thodi bahak gayi thi aur pata nahi kya karne lagi thi...usme Laalu ki to koi galti thi hi nahi vah to nashe me tha...aur koi bhi mujhe vaisa karte dekh leta to kuch na kuch galat karta hi...agar sach me hi Laalu ki niyat kharab hoti to vah aaj bhi mere saath kuch kar sakta tha par usne aisa kuch kiya nahi... Laalu ki vajah se aaj do logo ke sharir me hawas ki chingari lag gayi thi...ek to Kavita aur doosra Gayatri Devi... ...
29-12-2021, 01:11 PM
Super... please update regular.... please update more
29-12-2021, 02:44 PM
(This post was last modified: 29-12-2021, 02:45 PM by Yampag. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Wahh ji wàahh.. der aaye durust aaye.. very interesting.. laalu dhire dhire aage badh rahaa hai.. aur dono kavita aur thakurain ki aag bhi dhire dhire badh rahi hai..
Dekhate hai aage kya hota hai.. aur pahele kaun shikaar hota hai.. Touch n go aur sabka apne tarike se manomanthan.. create more interest in the story.. keep it up..dostt..
29-12-2021, 03:30 PM
Very nice story... ek baat mereko samaj nehi ata buddhi pe itna interest kaha se ati hein? Har dusre story mein dekhte hu buddhi hawas ka shikar ban zate...strange
29-12-2021, 03:34 PM
Superb update... Waiting for next...
29-12-2021, 10:21 PM
(This post was last modified: 29-12-2021, 10:47 PM by LODY BHAI. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
(29-12-2021, 03:30 PM)kaala69 Wrote: Very nice story... ek baat mereko samaj nehi ata buddhi pe itna interest kaha se ati hein? Har dusre story mein dekhte hu buddhi hawas ka shikar ban zate...strange Yes it's a little weird....I didn't want to make the character of Gayatri Devi...but when I read other stories , I came to know that people are more interested in 40+ aged women...so i have also kept such a character of Gayatri Devi according to the choice of the readers and made a erotic scene... Scientific reason - One study showed that women between 27 and 45 had more frequent and more intense sexual fantasies than younger or older women... ( Here Gayatri Devi is 46 old )
01-01-2022, 11:04 AM
You've also made some research, very good. But still when you have a young 'raand' like Kavita who cares about others...Waiting for Kavita's encounters.
01-01-2022, 01:31 PM
Fantastic update! Great writings
02-01-2022, 09:54 AM
Agle Din Subah jab Laalu haweli me aaya to dekha ki Thakur samet sabhi log kahi jaane ki taiyariya kar rahe hai... Gayatri Devi aur Kanta kuch saman pack kar rahi thi...Bheema unki madad kar raha tha...Lekin Kavita vahi normal kapdo me khadi unko dekh rahi thi... Laalu - kya hua Thakur Sahab aap kaha jaa rahe hai... Gayatri Devi - are Laalu tu abhi taiyar nahi hua....tujhe Kanta ne nahi bataya tha kya... Laalu - nahi to Thakur - are Laalu har shaniwar ko hum gaav se door ek mandir me jaate hai...pooja paath karne ke liye to vahi jaane ki taiyari kar rahe hai... Gayatri Devi - tu bhi ab jaldi jaa aur taiyar ho ja nahi to deri ho jayegi vaha pahuchne me... Laalu taiyar hone ki bajay vahi khada raha... Thakur - kya hua ja na aur taiyar ho jaldi se... Laalu - Shahab vo...jab se maine chori jaise gande kaamo me kadam rakha tha tab se mai bhagwan ko apne charno se maila nahi karna chahta tha...isliye maine murti pooja se viswas tod liya aur apne sharir me hi bhagwan ka niwas manne laga...to Thakur - are ab tu vo sab kaam chhor chuka hai na...to ab kis baat ki paresani h... Laalu - nahi shahab mai apne kiye karmo se bhagwan ko aur nirash nahi karna chahta...isliye mai nahi chal sakta... Thakur - thik hai ye teri marji hai...ab yahi rook kar haweli aur bahu ka dhyan rakhna... Laalu - matlab...chhoti memsab nahi jaa rahi hai kya...? Gayatri Devi - uska bhi teri tarah murti pooja se viswas uth gaya hai... Thakur - Laalu tujh par mai poora viswas karne laga hu...aur ummid hai ki tu ye viswas nahi todega...isliye charo taraf nigrani rakhna... Laalu - dhanyawad Shahab...mai kabhi aapka viswas nahi toduga.. Thakur - Bheema chale phir...gaadi taiyar hai.. Bheema - ji maalik.. Bheema gaadi nikalta hai aur phir vo sab mandir ke liye nikal jaate hai...ab haweli me keval Kavita aur Laalu hi bach gaye the... Pahle jab sabhi log mandir pooja karne jaate the to Kavita haweli me akeli hi rahti thi...us samay use itna dar nahi lagta tha...lekin aaj Laalu ko vaha pakar use ghabrahat ho rahi thi... Kavita isi ghabrahat ke chalte apne kamre ki aur jaane lagti hai...tabhi.. Laalu - memsab aapke liye khana bana du... Kavita piche mudkar dekhti hai...Laalu apni gardan jhukaye khada tha... Kavita - nahi khana Kanta bana kar gayi hai...rahne do Laalu - ji memsab...to phir aapko khana laga du agar aap khana chahe to...? Kavita - nahi mai apne aap kha lugi...tum paresani mat uthao... Laalu - thik hai...memsab agar aapko kisi cheej ki jarurat ho to mujhe aavaj de dena...mai bahar bageeche ki taraf hu... Kavita - thik hai... Laalu ke aise aadar aur samman ke saath baat karne par Kavita ki ghabrahat door ho gayi... Laalu bahar bageeche me chala gaya...usne janwaro ko chaara diya aur phir pedo me paani dene laga... Kavita kamre ki khidki se Laalu ko vo sab karta dekh rahi thi...tabhi use haweli ke darwaje par ek jeep dikhai deti hai... Jeep haweli ke darwaje par aake horn bajane lagti hai...Laalu ko uski aavaj aati aur vah jaakar dekhta hai ki kon hai... Laalu darwaje ke paas pahuchta hai to use ek security officer waala jeep me dikhai deta hai...usko dekh Laalu ko paseena aane lagta hai...Laalu darwaja khol kar use andar aane deta hai... Jeep andar aa jaati hai aur haweli ke bahar aake rook jaati hai...Laalu bhi vahi aa jaata hai... security officer wala jeep se bahar niklta hai aur Laalu ki aur dekhte hue bolta hai... security officer waala ( Saket Kumar ) - tu yaha kya kar raha hai be...chori karne aaya hai saale...? Laalu - nahi nahi shahab aap galat samjh rahe hai...mai vo sab kaam chhor chuka hu...ab mai yaha kaam karta hu... Saket Kumar - ( haste hue )...Thakur Sahab ne tujhe kaam karne ki ijazat de di yaha par... Laalu - ji sahab... Saket Kumar ye bolkar haweli ke andar jaane lagta hai...Lekin Laalu usko andar jaane se rook leta hai... Saket - ye kya kar raha hai...hat yaha se mujhe andar jaane de... Laalu - mai apna kaam kar raha hu shahab...aap andar nahi jaa sakte... Saket - kya bakwas kar raha hai...Thakur Sahab se milna hai mujhe... Laalu - isliye hi to mai aapko andar nahi aane de raha... Saket - kya matlab... Laalu - Thakur Sahab aaj yaha nahi hai...vo mandir gaye hue hai...shaam tak vaapas aayege... Saket - to saaf saaf bola kar na...baate ghumata kyu hai...achha aur koi hai kya yaha par... Laalu - chhoti memsab hai... Saket - thik hai to unko bula mujhe ek khaas baat karni hai... Laalu - aap yahi rookiye...mai unse puch kar aata hu... Ye bol kar Laalu andar jaata hai...Kavita bhi sidhiyan utarte hue niche aa rahi thi...Laalu ne usko dekh kar gardan nichi kar li... Kavita - kya hua Laalu kon aaya hai...? Laalu - memsab vo daroga aaya hai...bol raha hai ki aapse kuch jaruri baat karni hai... Kavita - mujhse...? Laalu - ji memsab... Kavita - thik hai unko andar bulao... Laalu bahar jaata hai aur Sakte kumar ko andar bula laata hai...Saket Kumar andar aata hai aur uski najar Kavita par padti hai...Kavita ko dekh Saket Kumar mantrmugdh ho jaata hai... Tight saree , khubsurat chehra , hotho par lipstick , aankho me chamak , blouse aur saree se dhaki uski badi badi chhati...Saket Kumar usko dekh kar bahak sa gaya... Kavita - Laalu inke liye paani lekar aao...bithiye aap.. Saket Kumar uski baat sunkar baith jaata hai... Kavita - aap mujhse aisi kya jaruri baat karne aaye hai... Saket - ji mai baat to Thakur Sahab se karne aaya tha lekin ab vo yaha nahi hai isliye ab aapse hi baat karni padegi....vaise maine aapko pahle dekha nahi hai...kya aap Thakur Sahab ki bahu hai... Kavita apna sir ha me hila deti hai... Laalu ek gilash paani lakar Saket Kumar ko pakda deta hai... Kavita - to bataiye kya baat batane aaye hai aap...? Saket - ( Laalu ki aur dekhte hue )...ji...lekin ye baat mai aapse akele me karna chahta hu... Laalu - nahi...mai memsab ko akela nahi chhor sakta...aap mere saamne hi baat kijiye... Saket - are mai kuch nahi karuga...bas baat karne aaya hu... Kavita ko is baat par hasi aa gayi aur use achha bhi laga ki Laalu uski chinta kar raha hai... Kavita - Laalu...tum thodi der ke liye bahar jaao... Laalu - ji memsab....vah apni gardan nichi karte hue bahar nikal jaata hai... Saket - badi ajeeb baat hai madam...Thakur Sahab ne ek chor ko haweli me kaam par rakha hua hai... Kavita - ajeeb kya hai...har insaan ko sudharne ka ek mauka milna chahiye... Saket - ha ye to hai...aur jaise vo aapki vafadari aur chinta kar raha tha usse lagta hai ki vo sach me sudhar gaya hai... Kavita - aap kuch jaruri baat karne aaye the to bataiye kya baat hai...? Saket - ji baat ye hai ki...har saal sabhi security officer station me kaid criminals ki health check up ke liye ek camp lagta hai...3 din pahle hi camp laga jisme hamare security officer station me kaid 6 criminal ka check up hua....aur unki jaanch se hume pata chala hai ki un 6 ke 6 criminals ko ek intermittent explosive disorder naam ki bimari hai....aur jab humne is bimari ka karan pata lagaya to pata chala ki ye bimari unko gaav me bane ek daaru ke theke se sharab ka sevan karne se hui hai...vaha par banne wali sharab me " immunomodulatory aur benzodiaze pines " drugs ki matra jyada paayi gayi hai...aur vaha par banai jaane wali sharab ka sevan lambe samay tak jisne kiya hai uske blood me ye drugs poori tarah se haavi ho chuki hai jiske chalte unhe ye bimari hui hai... Kavita - ha to isme hum aapki kya madad kar sakte hai...? Saket - yahi ki madam...gaav me gaav ke aaspas chalne waale daaru ke theke sabhi Thakur Sahab ki marji se hi chalte hai aur unki marji se hi band hote hai....agar vo ijazat dede to hume vo theka band karwana hoga...mai nahi chahta ki ye bimari poore gaav walo ko ho jaye... Kavita - thik hai...mai Thakur Sahab se iske baare me baat karugi aur ho sake to us theke ko band karane ki anumati bhi le lugi.... Saket - ji thank you madam...ab mai chalta hu...aap mujhe iske baare me jaldi se khabar kar dijiyega... Kavita - kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki is bimari me kya hota hai...? Saket - jisko bhi ye bimari hai...agar vo kabhi bhi kisi nasheeli cheej ka sevan karta hai to uska dimaagi santulan bigad jaata hai...jisse vo violent ho jaata hai , uska aggression bad jaata hai , logo ke saath gaali galoch aur maar peet karne lagta hai...usko ye bhi pata nahi rahta ki jisko vah gaali de raha hai vo kon hai....bas vah apni bhadaas nikalne lagta hai...kabhi kabhi to vah itna violent ho jaata hai ki kisi ko jaan se maar bhi sakta hai... Kavita - badi kharab bimari hai ye to....phir iska ilaaj kya hai...? Saket - ilaaj...ilaaj kuch permanent to nahi hai lekin agar us aadmi ko jise ye bimari hai nasheeli cheejo se door rakha jaaye to dhire dhire vah sahi ho sakta hai....ya phir jab aadmi nasha karke violent ho jaata hai to phir ek hi ilaaj hai ki vah jo bhi kuch karta hai use karne diya jaaye...use beech me rooke na...jab vah shant hoga to use apne aap par bada pachtawa hoga... Kavita - thik hai...mai aapko iske baare me Thakur sahab se baat karke bata dugi... Saket - ji mai ab chalta hu... Aur itna kahkar Saket vaha se chalat jaata hai...uske jaate hi Laalu andar aata hai...aur bolta hai... Laalu - memsab khana laga du...aapko bhookh lagi hogi... Kavita - ha laga do... Laalu Kavita ke liye khana laga kar bahar chala jaata hai...Khana khate hue Kavita ke dimaag me bahut se sawal ghum rahe the... Kavita - badi ajeeb bimari hai ye to...aadmi ka dimagi santulan hi bigad jaata hai...kahi Laalu ko to ye bimari nahi hai...?....usne bhi to nadi par nashe ki halat me mujhe gaali nikali aur mere saath kya kya kar raha tha...aur phir vo sab karne ke baad use iske liye pachtava bhi ho raha tha...agar Laalu ko ye bimari hai to uske liye ye khatrnak ho sakta hai....mujhse usse iske baare me baat karni hogi aur usko nasha karne se rokna hoga... Shaam ko Thakur mandir se laut aate hai...Kavita aaj jo baat hui vo sab Thakur ko bata deti hai...aur usse ye bhi bolti hai ki hume vo wala theka band kar dena chahiye... Thakur bhi gaav walo ki khusi chahta tha isliye usne bhi vo theka band karne ki sochi...aur is baare me kal Saket Kumar se baat karne ki sochi... ...
02-01-2022, 11:36 AM
Waah Lodybhai.. kahaani me twist..
Kahi Laalu ne Daroga ki baan sunn to nahi lii.. aur usi bimari ka daura padne ka naatak karke wo apni hawas mitayega.. dono ya fir teeno naariyon se.. let's see what is in writers mind.. waiting....
03-01-2022, 11:43 AM
Super update.
Please update more
04-01-2022, 11:58 AM
dhasu update... waiting
04-01-2022, 02:04 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-01-2022, 02:05 PM by Mgaya. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Yeah kya update de dala...!! Lots of scope opened for sexy built up and a seductive story...!! Superb!!
Kavita aur Thakur aur security officer wala bhi gao ka bhala soch rahe hai... but lagta hai asli bhala toh Laalu ka hi hoga...Awaiting next
04-01-2022, 03:42 PM
Wonderful update! Bahut badhiya kahaani
04-01-2022, 06:24 PM
Thanks for your support...hope you like the story..
Next update on the way...!!
04-01-2022, 06:55 PM
(04-01-2022, 06:24 PM)LODY BHAI Wrote: Thanks for your support...hope you like the story..Thanks |
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