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Adultery A Wife's Aerola (Pinjre Mein Band Chidya ) Saga
(28-12-2021, 02:29 PM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: Zabardast yaar kitna hot likhte ho or ek suggestion ha shansher gand ka dewana or balraj boobs ka molvi ko hont ka dewana banana or pahla kiss molvi ko karana too excited waiting more

 Thanks @Rizzi1198 any suggestions are welcome,,, , 
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Dhansu....what a update... unique....lajwab... amazing update... please update more bhai
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Zabardast..... great going

Waiting fr update
More n more

Veryyyy hot
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(28-12-2021, 03:24 PM)Suryahot123 Wrote: Dhansu....what a update... unique....lajwab... amazing update... please update more bhai

Surely ,,keep following
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(28-12-2021, 03:48 PM)agoodfriend Wrote: Zabardast..... great going

Waiting fr update
More n more

Veryyyy hot

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AOA Ajj Dopeher Ko Agla Update ayega ,,



fight fight fight


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The story is just getting hotter and hotter with each update. I don’t think I have red anything like this before. The level of seduction, eroticism and kinkiness I’m feeling is beyond explanation. In simple words I’m loving it so much. 

Now Akmas has come out of her shell and showing her true self inner slut. Akmas k undar ki asli randi ab bahar aana chahti hai jisse is hawas k gande khel mein khud ko ganda karna hai lekin sab se chup kar. Uske undar ki dark lust ab usko aek shareef biwi se randibaaz biwi bana degi. Too hot. 

I just have one suggestion bro, do not include all the male characters all of a sudden such as Molvi as it may create a khichri. When too many male characters gets involved without the female being properly opened up creates a lot of confusion and sometimes readers can’t relate with the characters. Right now Balraaj and Shamsher are doing a perfect job and Akmas can do things with them without much suspicion. Just my opinion. 

Overall the story is amazing and you are making it hotter and hotter with each new update. 

Waiting for the next one.
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(29-12-2021, 04:12 AM)rehanboy16 Wrote: The story is just getting hotter and hotter with each update. I don’t think I have red anything like this before. The level of seduction, eroticism and kinkiness I’m feeling is beyond explanation. In simple words I’m loving it so much. 

Now Akmas has come out of her shell and showing her true self inner slut. Akmas k undar ki asli randi ab bahar aana chahti hai jisse is hawas k gande khel mein khud ko ganda karna hai lekin sab se chup kar. Uske undar ki dark lust ab usko aek shareef biwi se randibaaz biwi bana degi. Too hot. 

I just have one suggestion bro, do not include all the male characters all of a sudden such as Molvi as it may create a khichri. When too many male characters gets involved without the female being properly opened up creates a lot of confusion and sometimes readers can’t relate with the characters. Right now Balraaj and Shamsher are doing a perfect job and Akmas can do things with them without much suspicion. Just my opinion. 

Overall the story is amazing and you are making it hotter and hotter with each new update. 

Waiting for the next one.

Namaskar Namaskar Heart Thanks bhai for giving a detail positive review to this thread ,
The suggestion you have given is already in my head , but the other characters will be included in some updates to build up their character not to incounter with akmas but giving the readers the pitch of that character , no character can relate to a story without being introduce properly,, i am just building up every character dont worry every character have their own individual chances,
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Bhai bht h koi kamal or erotic likh rahay ho
Keep it up
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one of the best stories...lamba safar hein... aage aur kiya hote janne ke liye intezar rahega...
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Update # 11

Woh eni socho mein tha k uska mobile beep karta hai jan woh msg dekhta hai whatsapp peh tho uska lund jadka kahta hai usko apne kismat peh yaqeen nahen horaha tha , woh apne kursi se utta hai aur society k main gate ki taraf jaane lagta hai, balraaj lift mein dakil hokar kar pirse mobile k screen mein msg ko dekhne lagta hai , jispe lekha tha,

Akmas: Ajj Darwaza kohla hai,

Abb Aage.......


Wahan akmas msg bejhkar dadakte dil ke saath poule howe sanson k saath kadi darwaza kohla chod kar intezaar kar rahi thi usko bardasht na howi tho woh kidki pass jaati hai tho kursi peh koi nahen tha, 

akmas yahi sochne lagti hai k hosakta hai balraaj ajj busy O leken raat ki kamoshi mein usko apne floor per lift kulne ki awaaz mehsoos hoti hai, woh wahin kidki k pass apne kaan kadi karke poule howe sanson k saath 2 kadamon ko uske darwaze k pass anne ki hahat sunti hai ,

 woh wahin kidki k pass hall ki light mein apne chamakte shareer k saath kadi thi k uska darwaza kulne lagta hai ,jahan woh kadi thi wahan hall k dim light achi thara nahen ponch rahi thi ,aur akmas wahan tareeki mein kadi hokar darwaze ki taraf dekh rahi thi,

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Tho dekhti hai k balraaj darwaza kolkar andar dakil hota hai aur peche darwaza band karke wahen kade hokar eder oder akmas ko dondne lagta , akmas apne samne apne chokidaar ko kada dekhti woh janti thi k raat k ess waqt uska chokidaar q uske gharke andar dakil howa hai woh janti thi k woh shaks na shaqal se acha na uski hum umar hai,leken pir b akmas uske liye tayar hokar usko msg karke bulaya tha,

Aur woh wahan  apne semi erect lund k saath kada toda darr apne dil mein liye kada tha,apne kursi chood kar apna nokari dahun peh laga kar yahan kesi aur k ghar mein kada tha ,q nahoo akmas chezz esi thi agar akmas ek eshara karti tho logh marne maaarne ko tayar hote balraj ka tho sirf nokari katre mein tha ,

Balraj abi b wahan kada tha, akmas apne sanson ko toda control mein lehti hai aur main entrance ki taraf jaane lagti hai ,tho balraj ke nazar uspe padte hain, akmas apne ubre howe chuchiyon ko aur aage nikal kar ar ek kadam ko jadka dekar apne chuchiyon ko jadke se saath ela ela k chal rahi thi 

akmas k elte chuchiyon ko dim light mein koubsurat chere peh dark black lipstick k saath balraaj ka 9 inch lund sathwen asmaan ko chune ko horaha tha aur uske lungi se bahar ane ko utawla ho raha tha , 

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akmas uske pass se guzarte howe kitchen ki taraf jaane lagti tho itne pass se balraaj k nazren sirf aur sirf bina bra k kade nipple joh kameez k oper se nazar a rahe the ubre howe jadke kaate howe  chuchiyon peh the , yeh nazars kapi tha balraj ko apne lund ko mein lehne k liye q k akmas ko itne pass se woh pehli baar dekh raha tha , aur apne lund ko elane lagta hai,

Akmas uski ankhon mein dekhte howe kitchen ki taraf jaane lagti hai jiss se uske bina panty k naram gand dim light mein koi aur nizara pesh kar rahi thi ,akmas ki ang ang dekhne aur chakne ki layek thi, 
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Balraj ko tho jese lakwa ka gya tha uske sirf haath uske lund ko sehla rahe the aur pora shareer jese sun pad gya tha , leken pir b uske mounse utejetna tareeke se nikal jata hai,

Balraj: Memsaaaab yuuun ee chalteyyy rahoo,

Akmas uski baath sun kar aur gand matkane lagi jiske chalte uski gand jesi jool rahi thi aur kitchen k darwaze peh ponch kar rukti hai aur balraaj k taraf dekh kar uske elte howe haath ko lund peh dekh kar ek nazar uske halat ko dekh kar  uske rooh ko sukoon mili ,jese usko barson se tamanna thi k ese e ek mard usko dekh kar apne asli kirdaar ko chood kar janwar ban jahe,,


Akmas pir kitchen mein dakil hoti hai tho wahan light band hone ki waja se gapa gap andhera tha agar koi kesi ko dekhna chahe tho bss itna dekh sakta hai k koi wahan kada hai, 

Todi dher baad balraj b kitchen ki taraf jaane lagta hai wahan ponch kar eder oder akmas ko dondne ki koshish karne lagta hai tho usko saya jesa koi fridge k pass  kada nazar aya ,woh adbadi mein wahan jaane lagta hai jab akmas k pass ponchti hai tho balraj uss se takra jata hai jeske saath akmas ki bina bra k chuchiyan balraaj k chaati mein danzz jaate hain aur neche balraaj ka kada lamba se lund akmas ki tandon k beech guskar uske puddi ko neche se ragadh kati hai hai tho donon k mounse ek saath nikal jata hai  aaaahhh  ,,

Donon bina kuch kahe bina ele , apne poule howe sanson k saath apne dadalte dadkanon k saath wese e lade the ek apne chati peh 2 vishaal mammon ko mehsoos karte howe aur ek apne geeli chut peh bada sa lund mehsoos karte howe ,,

Bina kuch kahe andhere mein balraaj k haath kud ba kud akmas k chuchiyon ki taraf jaane lagte hain aur seeda jaake akmas k dahen chuchi k oper rukh kar kaske usse apne girapt mein leh lehta hai tho uska lund jadka kata hai , 

Jese e akmas apne boobs peh balraj ka haath mehsoos karti hai tho uski puddi panpanane lagti aur ussi k saath jab balraaj ka lund jadke kakar uske puddi ko lagti hai tho uske roungte kade ho jate hain,akmas k liye yeh ehsaas kesi jannat se kam nahen tha ,

balraaj abb uske boobs ko dabane lagta hai usko yaqeen nahen horaha tha k itni koubsurat, sex bomb ,maal,aur izzatdaar gharki bahu k boobs woh masal raha tha ,esi soch mein woh apna kamar age peche karne lagta hai tho uska lund b akmas k puddi ko ragadne laga ,

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akmas k liye yeh ehsaas jan lewa tha uske puddi peh ragad kaati balraaj ka lund usko woh maza deh raha tha jho adil k andar jaate lund ne b nahen diya tha , akmas ab itna garam hochuki k uski jism b balraaj k ar ek jadke k esaab se chal rahi thi akmas apne ek haath balraaj k haath k oper rakh deta hai tho balraaj uske choochi ko aur kas kas k dabane lagta hai aur dosra haath b akmas k dosre choochi peh rakh deta hai aur apne lund ko aur tezi se akmas k puddi se ragadne lagta hai,
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akmas iss amle ko bardasht kar na saki aur uski woh apne orgasm mein ponchne lagi jiske chalte uske pher ek saath hokar balraaj k lund ko apne puddi peh bechne lagti hai aur apne haath balraaj peet peh lejakar usko kas k pakadne lagti hai , tho balraaj b akmas ki jism ki garmi ko bardasht na kar saka aur akmas k tangon k beech uska lund jadke kaane lagta hai woh b akmas k donon boobs shiddat se pakadta hai aur gurrane lagta hai,,  aahahahhaah memsaaab 


akmas ko apne orgasm k saath apne boobs peh dard mehsoos hone lagta hai leken iss utejetna mein yeh dard usko meethi lagti hai jiske saath akmas k mounse se b aaaaahhahah nikal jaati hai,

aur donon esi e ek dosre k garmi mein apne charamseema mein ponchne ki lutf hota rahe the , bakraaj ka lund akmas ki puddi ko apne paani se begah raha tha akmas b apni paani chood kar balraaj ka garm garm paani apne puddi aur tango peh mehsoos karne lagti hai, alanke balraaj ne lungi pehna howa tha aur akmas ne shalwar leken balraaj k lund ne e itna zyada paani nikala tha k adil pori raat na nikal sakta tha,

Donon ese e ussi position mein abb ek dosre k jism ko mehsoos kar rahe the k balraaj ka mobile bajne lagta hai joh shirt k samne bane pocket mein tha uski roshni mein woh akmas ki chudasi chehre ko dekh lehti joh santusti dekha rahi thi , 

Balraaj akmas k donon boobs akiri baar pir daba kar usko chood deta hai aur mobile k screen peh kaka ka naam dekh kar darr jata hai q k usne kaka ko bazaar jaate howe desi sharab ki bottle saath lahne ko kaha tha aur woh samajh jaata hai k kaka abi gate peh hoga , woh jaldi se apna lund akmas ki tango k beech se nikal kar akmas ko ek baar pir mobile ki screen k roshni se dekh kar wahan se jaane lagta hai thi ,,

Akmas balraj ko adbadi mein dekh kar kuch nahen kehti bss usko jaate howe dekhne lagti hai woh chahti thi k balraah na jahe woh chahti k balraaj pirse akar uske puddi peh apna lund ragde woh chahti thi k balraaj uske boobs ko pirse kas kar pakde leken balraj abb jaa chuka tha ,,

Akmas yun e apne puddi peh balraaj ka pani mehsoos kiye howe kitchen mein kadi thi ,kisko kya pata tha k akmas jesi  ba farda izzatdar ladki ajj apne chookidar k lund ka paani apne puddi k oper liye howe kadi thi, kisko kya kabar k yeh ladki jho amesha garmein veil mein hoti hai ajj apne chokidar k haath k nishan apne boobs peh liye kadi thi, kisko kya kabar agar uske kismat mein O yahi ladki uske b haathon k nishan aone boobs peh aur uske lund ko apne puddi k andar liye ese e kadi O,

Akmas ese e hall mein jaane lagti hai woh apne puddi chipchipi si lag rahi thi woh essi chichipahat ko arwaqt ar kafi mehsoos karna chahti thi ,,haal mein ponchkar woh main darwaza band karti hai aur seediyan chadne lagti hai kesi gheer mard ka paani apne puddi peh liye howe ek randi ki tara pir apne pati k pass jaane lagti hai,woh apne kamre k andar ponch kar adil ko dekhti hai tho abb b wese e soya howa tha kambal mein usko kya kabar ajj uski biwi ek chokidaar ko apna jism masalwa kar uske lund ka paani apne chut mein liye uske kamre mein ayi hai,

akmas mirror k samne kadi hoti hai aur apne ubre howe chuchi k nipple joh balraaj k haath se masal ka kar abb b kade the dekhne lagti hai, akmas apne haath apne boobs peh rakh kar unhen masalne lagti jese mehsoos karna chahti O k balraaj ko kese mehsoos howa tha uske boobs daba kar uska ek haath neche puddi peh jaane lagti hai ,

wahan apna haath leja kar apne kameez k oper se puddi peh rakhti hai aur balraaj k paani se apne ungliyan geeli karne lagti hai jab uske ungliyon geele hote hain tho woh apne ungliyan miror mein apne apko dekhte apne moun k pass lejane lagti hai ,,jab uske haath bilkul uske honton k pass ponchti hain tho uski ankhen b mirror mein apne ankhon se takrati hain , aur hont kolkar ungliyan apne moun mein dalkar unen choosne lagti hai, gher mard k lund se nikla paani akmas k paani se mix namkeen swad jesa woh apne mounse alak mein gatakne lagti hai ,aur pir wese e adil k pass jahkar uske bagal mein neend k agosh mein chali jaati hai,



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Aur wahan balraj jab akmas k ghar se nikalti hai tho woh seeda seediyan chadkar chat peh jaane lagta hai ,  chat k kamre mein ponch kar apna lungi badalta hai ,aur lift se neeche jaane lagta hai , usko dar k saath thrill b mehsoos horaha tha usko ab b kismat peh yaqeen nahen horaha tha k najane kitne society k log akmas k chehre ko dekhne k liye taras rahe hain aur mujhe dekho ussi akmas k boobs ajj meine dabahe the uske tangon k beech apna paani nikala tha ,

woh apne chehre peh guroor lekar kaka k pass ponch jaata hai , jab kaka usko lift se atte howe dekhta hai tho usko pooch lehta hai,

Kaka : kahan tha bey bonsdike ,
Balraj: kya chacha kahan jaonga chat peh gya tha sir dard k goli kahne apne dher kardi bina daru k sir dard karne laga tha,
Kaka: Acha kab ?
Bakraj : woh woh chacha abi adda gante pehle,
Kaka kuch sochkar,
Kaka : tek hai leken gate ko zyada waqt k liye na chood agar society k chairman ne dekh liya tho tere lawde lag jahenge ,
Balraj: han han kaka abi giyan mat do aur jao chat peh araam karo boode hogye 0 tak jaoge  kal sohbe apko gate peh duty dena hai,
Kaka : Abe bosdike budda kisko bola ,ajj b pore society k randiyon k bur paaad sakta hun agar yaqeen na O tho kar dalali leh ah kesi ko,

Balraaj bekhyali mein
Bakraaj : leken adil sahab ki gharko choodkar,
kaka: Q bey tere sagge lagte hain kya,yaar kiska yaad dila dya adil k biwi ko ek 2 baar burke mein dekha tha ,magar burke mein b saali ne lund kada kardiya tha,

balraj ko yeh baath bura lagta hai q na lage akmas joh uski mashoka thi,
Balraj: Yeh kese baten kar rahe hain kaka app b na,
Kaka: Teri q jall rahi hai bey , tho ese jall raha hai jese meine teri biwi k baare mein baath ki ho,
Balraj: jha jha abb bore na kar ,
Kaka : tek hai abb kaam oora hogya daru mil gyi abb kyon mujjse baath karega tho loodu,
Balraj: Esi baat nahen hai kaka app apna umar dekho aur galiyan dekho,
Kaka: Tho pirse mujhe budda keh raha hai,
Bakraj : nahen nahen kaka acha tk maafi mangta hun apse abb tho chaliye,
kaka: tek hai 

aur kaka wahan se chala jata hai ,aur bakraj kursi peh tang peh tang dalkar kuch dher pehle howe waqiye k baare mein sochne lagta hai,

Kaka jab lift se oper jha raha tha tho sochne laga 
saala iss balraj ne mujhse jhoot q bola k mein chat peh tha , mein neche usse phone karne se pehle chat peh gya tha leken woh wahan nahen tha, leken pir apne appse kehta hai woh mujhse q jhoot bolega ,aur chat peh ponch jata hai jab apne kamre mein jakar daru ki bottle kolta hai tho usko bed  k kinare rakhe howe balraaj k beege howe lungi peh nazar padte hain woh usko utata hai tho samajh jata hai k balraj ne lungi mein kya kiya hai , leken pir uske dimaag mein atta hai kahen iss balraj ka society mein koi chakkar nahen , saale ne essi liye jhoot bola tha,


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Hot hot hot
Wolfy sir muja to shamsher ka charachter sab sa zayda pasand aya great update waiting for next
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Hot hot hot ....thand mein garmi kaise ho ye aap se koi bhi samj sakta h....mind blowing... super.. duper.... amazing.... please update more
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(29-12-2021, 02:16 PM)Suryahot123 Wrote: Hot hot hot ....thand mein garmi kaise ho ye aap se koi bhi samj sakta h....mind blowing... super.. duper.... amazing.... please update more

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amazing... dhasu update
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(29-12-2021, 06:22 PM)kaala69 Wrote: amazing... dhasu update

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Bohat garam update. Had to wait for a specific time to read it. And until now I’ve red it 4 times. It’s so different from other stories feels almost real. I think I may get addicted to story and with Akmas. She’s so deliciously explained that I can imagine her beauty, sexiness, slutiness and her deep inner lust. 

As for my favourite character I would have to pick Shamsher the plumber. Reason being is that he was always loyal to Akma’s father in law and never had any I’ll intentions until he saw what a busty beauty is hidden in the house he is meant to serve. He was the one who touched her first and he was the one who grabbed her big juicy gaand and he is the one who can visit their house in the pretext of fixing things and can spent secret time with Akmas either in kitchen or her bedroom or bathroom. She can always lie to her mother in law that the plumber is gone while he’s hiding in her bathroom to see and feel the naked body of Adil’s wife. As we’ve seen that Akmas is not scared anymore for letting gair mard in her house and she is now at the edge where she really want to have a rough man molesting her busty soft white figure. 

I have another favourite character which is the other watchman (kaka). In my view he will be more rougher than balraaj as he’s more randibaaz and is already imagining Adil’s wife young body when he saw her while he’s shaking his lund. Another point is that he is free at night in his room on the roof which can be a plus point for him to take Akmas there at night without anyone knowing and properly fuck her in the roughest way that she always desired. As she is not afraid to take the risks anymore, she can sneak out at night when everyone is asleep and can go to the roof quickly using the lift to Kaka’s room to be his secret night slut while Adil is sleeping unaware that his young wife is laying on the old watchman’s dirty bed fully naked and the watchman is fulfilling his lust using his wife’s busty soft naked body  sex sex sex  

Sorry but I’m a deep thinker and there a lot of scenarios running wild in my mind and I couldn’t stop them from coming out  horseride horseride  

All I can feel is that the story is just going to be hotter and hotter from this point and I can’t wait to read further. It’s too hot and spicy. 

Waiting for next update eagerly.
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(30-12-2021, 04:37 AM)rehanboy16 Wrote: Bohat garam update. Had to wait for a specific time to read it. And until now I’ve red it 4 times. It’s so different from other stories feels almost real. I think I may get addicted to story and with Akmas. She’s so deliciously explained that I can imagine her beauty, sexiness, slutiness and her deep inner lust. 

As for my favourite character I would have to pick Shamsher the plumber. Reason being is that he was always loyal to Akma’s father in law and never had any I’ll intentions until he saw what a busty beauty is hidden in the house he is meant to serve. He was the one who touched her first and he was the one who grabbed her big juicy gaand and he is the one who can visit their house in the pretext of fixing things and can spent secret time with Akmas either in kitchen or her bedroom or bathroom. She can always lie to her mother in law that the plumber is gone while he’s hiding in her bathroom to see and feel the naked body of Adil’s wife. As we’ve seen that Akmas is not scared anymore for letting gair mard in her house and she is now at the edge where she really want to have a rough man molesting her busty soft white figure. 

I have another favourite character which is the other watchman (kaka). In my view he will be more rougher than balraaj as he’s more randibaaz and is already imagining Adil’s wife young body when he saw her while he’s shaking his lund. Another point is that he is free at night in his room on the roof which can be a plus point for him to take Akmas there at night without anyone knowing and properly fuck her in the roughest way that she always desired. As she is not afraid to take the risks anymore, she can sneak out at night when everyone is asleep and can go to the roof quickly using the lift to Kaka’s room to be his secret night slut while Adil is sleeping unaware that his young wife is laying on the old watchman’s dirty bed fully naked and the watchman is fulfilling his lust using his wife’s busty soft naked body  sex sex sex  

Sorry but I’m a deep thinker and there a lot of scenarios running wild in my mind and I couldn’t stop them from coming out  horseride horseride  

All I can feel is that the story is just going to be hotter and hotter from this point and I can’t wait to read further. It’s too hot and spicy. 

Waiting for next update eagerly.


 This is what i want from a reader, the detailed review of this thread from a reader to see the characters briefly from his point of view is called a succession to me ,The more i see readers comments the more i want to start writing another update to try to make a scene where readers can relate to their imagination, Thanks from bottom of my heart for the love you people are giving ,
 THE TALES OF EROTICISM ARE BEFORE  SEX

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Nice update but i have a feeling that this thread was written in a haste. As far as character is concerned i think the perspective of all three are different. Balraj for close proximity and being the first to ignite the fire should get more chance and coverage in the sexual and phone chatting part. Moulabi can be a challenge to her whom she will try to seduce possibly based on the situation. Samshad being an outsider and not a frequent visitor should be considered for situational sexual advantage. 

Again this is my view but as a writer your thought process and plan to create plot and subsequent progress should get priority. End objective is your satisfaction of creation a master piece which can led to absolute delight for readers.

Thanks….keep writing and entertain the readers.
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