A wedding ceremony in village

[BHAVY.S_King]

Or Ha Logan555 Yaar tu Gokuldham Society ek Sexy Society par ek Sexy se Story Likh . Ek Dum Shandar air jisme Naye carector and Naye Paatr and Naye Kirdar ho . Aur Purano ke sath. Nayi Family ko add kar , naye Aamir and Gareeb Family ko add kar , Naye Different Religion and cast ke Family and care for ko add kar. Sex 40% and Story 60% ho.To Bhai Tere story super hit jayegi and Response Accha milega. Aur ho is site par aise story abhi tak kisi ne nahi likhi aap isko start karo. Your Good Writer.

[Logan555]

bahut hi jabardast update!bahut bahut hot

Bahut hi shandar..

very very exciting and dick raising update! 

Thanks guys for always giving ur feedback on this story.

[Logan555]

Ha bhai yaha tak to padh chuke the...
Aab aage ki kahani padhni hai....

Bhai aapne Aarti ka plot wo bhoot wala banaya tha jismao aapne 2 new male caracters introduce kiye the... Wo plot meko thoda kam pasand aaya tha... usse unnecessary caracters kafi bad rahe the... 

Aap uss plot  jagah kuch aur bhi use kar skte ho agar aap cahe to.. As a reader i am exprssing my wish..

Bro har story me alag flavour hona chahiye jusse har story doosre se alag lage and aarti ki story apne aap me ek alag aur broad story hai aur wo story baki stories ko effect na kare aur uska flashback baki stories ki rhytham na roke isliye maine wo story ab maine sabse akhiri din transfer kardi hai pichli baar us saae ki entry wala update bhi ek din peeche khiska diya hai ab aarti ki story ke chhote mote update aate rahenge but main story with a long flashback is kahani ke akhiri din yani tenth day aaegi jab baki stories almost finish ho jaegi to jo readers aarti ki story se connect honge wahi jude rahenge baki effect nahi honge.

Baki wo story baki story ke end tak baki stories ko bhi effect karegi jis wajah se jab har kirdar ki indivisual alag story aaegi is story ke baad tab waha wo effect pata chalega.

[Logan555]

itana bada aur itana mast update dhiya aap bhai!thanks a lot

Welcome bro mai koshish karta hu ek sex update ek baar me hi khatam karu bhale hi thoda late ho jae par usse continuty bani rehti hai.

[Logan555]

Are Bhai Tune To Garima Ka Final Update To Diya he nahi h. Bhai tu pahle to Garima ka Final Update De.

Bhai kaunsa garima ka final update garima ka pura update to day 5 ke shuruaat me hi ek baar pura de diya tha jab garima hariya ke sathvus khandahar me gai thi uske baad ghar wapas aane par usne jeetu ko bathroom me apni panty par veerya nikalte dekha tha uske baad uske scene khatam ho gae the ab day 6 ki start me wo wapas aaegi.

[Logan555]

Or Ha Logan555 Yaar tu Gokuldham Society ek Sexy Society par ek Sexy se Story Likh . Ek Dum Shandar air jisme Naye carector and Naye Paatr and Naye Kirdar ho . Aur Purano ke sath. Nayi Family ko add kar , naye Aamir and Gareeb Family ko add kar , Naye Different Religion and cast ke Family and care for ko add kar. Sex 40% and Story 60% ho.To Bhai Tere story super hit jayegi and Response Accha milega. Aur ho is site par aise story abhi tak kisi ne nahi likhi aap isko start karo. Your Good Writer.

Bhai maine gokuldhaam society serial kabhi dekha nahi to mai uske sabhi kirdaro se utna parichit nahi hu par jethalal tarak mehta babiita jee in sabme wo sex apeeal nahi hai jis par ek behtareen kahani likhi ja sake. Inki bajae Bhabhi ghar par hai ke kirdaar aur unke kirdaro me sex appeal aur hotness inse kahi jada hai aur us serial ka plot bhi thoda naughty hai jis par ek behtareen kahani gadi ja sakti hai aur wo plot mere dimaag me hai samay milne par mai Bhabhijee Ghar Par Hai par ek kahani jaroor likhunga.

[koolme98]

what an amazing update..... Maza aa gaya Logan bhai!

[KareenaKapoorLover]

Bro har story me alag flavour hona chahiye jusse har story doosre se alag lage and aarti ki story apne aap me ek alag aur broad story hai aur wo story baki stories ko effect na kare aur uska flashback baki stories ki rhytham na roke isliye maine wo story ab maine sabse akhiri din transfer kardi hai pichli baar us saae ki entry wala update bhi ek din peeche khiska diya hai ab aarti ki story ke chhote mote update aate rahenge but main story with a long flashback is kahani ke akhiri din yani tenth day aaegi jab baki stories almost finish ho jaegi to jo readers aarti ki story se connect honge wahi jude rahenge baki effect nahi honge.

Baki wo story baki story ke end tak baki stories ko bhi effect karegi jis wajah se jab har kirdar ki indivisual alag story aaegi is story ke baad tab waha wo effect pata chalega.

Ok bro ;) 
Waiting for the upcoming updates..

[Amitraj39]

Awesome update
Waiting for more updates

[BHAVY.S_King]

Are Logan555 tu mere liye Story likh sakta h. Vo bhi paid. Me Tujko Really m Paytm Kar Duga ya Tere Bank account m Transfer Kar Duga. Aur ha m tujko koi choti amount nahi balki 200 se 1200 ke Beach m payment karuga. Story ek Dum Professional honi chahiye. Kya aap Ready ho. Story ke Title and Kirdar mere hoge.ok

[Logan555]

what an amazing update..... Maza aa gaya Logan bhai!

Thanks bro jub update dene ke baad aise badiya badiya comments milte hai to hume bhi maza aa jata hai aisa lagta hai mehnat safal rahi.

[Logan555]

Are Logan555 tu mere liye Story likh sakta h. Vo bhi paid. Me Tujko Really m Paytm Kar Duga ya Tere Bank account m Transfer Kar Duga. Aur ha m tujko koi choti amount nahi balki 200 se 1200 ke Beach m payment karuga. Story ek Dum Professional honi chahiye. Kya aap Ready ho. Story ke Title and Kirdar mere hoge.ok

Bhai yahi bahut badi baat hai ki apko writing skill samajh aai jo apne mujh par bharosa kar mujhe story likhne ke liye paise offer kare but bhai iski koi zarurat nahi story mai bina paise ke bhi likh sakta hu isme paise ki kya baat hai. Mai bus maze aur shauk me story likhta hu paise dene ki koi zarurat nahi tum title aur kirdaar batana koi achha plot banega us title par to jaroor likhunga waiae bhi is story ke baad 4-5 sequels hai mere dimag me.

[BHAVY.S_King]

Bro Baat To Vahi aa Gayi na. Paid Story m apko Creater And Created Mind Ka Use Karna hoga. Apko thoda Professional hokar story likhni hogi. Aur Agar aap Bina Paise Ke Story likhoge to aap apne Marji ki he story likhoge. Kuch Jada Nahi Sochoge. Mujko Aapki Story Personal Chahiye. Story m mere kirdar and Title hoge. M Really Apse Story Lena Chahta hu. Aapki Writing Skills Best and Good h. Agar aap ready ho to aap apna Gmail Bata do m apko Mail Kar Duga. Ok Bro.

[Logan555]

Bro Baat To Vahi aa Gayi na. Paid Story m apko Creater And Created Mind Ka Use Karna hoga. Apko thoda Professional hokar story likhni hogi. Aur Agar aap Bina Paise Ke Story likhoge to aap apne Marji ki he story likhoge. Kuch Jada Nahi Sochoge. Mujko Aapki Story Personal Chahiye. Story m mere kirdar and Title hoge. M Really Apse Story Lena Chahta hu. Aapki Writing Skills Best and Good h. Agar aap ready ho to aap apna Gmail Bata do m apko Mail Kar Duga. Ok Bro.

Pehle to bro Thanks again meri writing skill ko itna pasand karne ke liye i am so overwhelmed. Bhai pehle aap mujhe story ka plot aur kirdaar batao to sahi phir mai kuchh kahu ki ye story mere zoner ki hai bhi ki nahi kyuki kuchh plots mere zoner ke bahar hai jaise maa bete ka plot baap beti ka plot is type ki stories na mujhe padna pasand hai to likhna to bahut door ki baat hogi.Aur aisa nahi hai ki mai bina paise ke apki sunuga nahi sunuga bhai zaroor sunuga bina paise bhi sunnuga lagta hai aap apni life se releted koi story likhwana chahte ho. Aap kirdaar aur plot mail karo pehle phir sochte hai my email id is cheeti555; is par apna data bhej dena.

[Rocksanna999]

Waiting for next update...

[Logan555]

Ye dance party us haweli me jaise vasna ka toofan le aai thi kisi ki asmat uski marzi ke bina taar taar kar di gai kisi ki hawas ki aagne ek paak rishte ki maryada ko taar taar kar diya aur kisi ke liye apni maryada taar taar karna bhi ek khilwaad tha bus ek fantacy thi. Par in sabse itar ek paak muhobaat ko bachane ki jaddojahad me ek premika har musibat uthane ko taiyaar thi apni maryada ki kurbani dene ko bhi tayar thi Neetu jo Raj ke jeewan ki raksha ke liye ek aisa sankalp kar chuki thi jiska kya parinaam aane wala tha ye wo bhi nahi janti thi aur apni saheli ke is bure waqt me aarti ek sachhe dost ki tarah kandhe se kandha mila ke khadi thi. Neetu aur aarti aghori ke sath us shiv mandir ki taraf bade chale ja rahe the par wo sirf teen nahi the unke peeche wo saaya bhi tha jo us toofan wali raat aarti aur us girte ped ke beech aa gaya tha par wo aarti se ek niyat doori banae tha kyuki aarti neetu ke sath wo aghori bhi tha jo ek aatma ko asani se mehsoos kar leta aur abhi wo aghori ke sath ulajhna nahi chahta tha.



Neetu aur aarti aghori ke sath us shiv mandir tak pahuch gae us shiv mandir ke paas pahuch kar aarti ko kuch ajeeb sa anubhav ho raha tha jaise is shiv mandir se uska koi nata hai uske kadam jaise us mandir ke darwaze par hi thithak se gae the, par aghori aur neetu to us mandir ke andar dakhil ho gae. Wo dekhne me chhota mota mandir tha par us mandir ki mahatta uske akar se nahi uske andar viraajmaan shivling ki divyata se thi aur us shivling ka aas paas ke kai gaanwo me vishesh mahatva tha door door se log waha mannat mangne aate the. Aghori neetu ko is mandir mi mahatta samjha raha tha par aarti ab bhi jad si mandir ke bahar hi khadi thi. Mandir ke andar aghori ne shivling ke rudrabhishek ki tayari shuru kar di neetu bhi is kaam me unki madad kar rahi thi. Rudrabhishek ki puri tayari ho jane ke baad aghori aur neetu wahi zameen par baith gae tab unka dhyan bahar khadi aarti par gaya.



Aghori: Kya baat hai aap bahar kyu khadi hai ye bhagwaan shiv ke rudrabhishek ki puja hai koi tantra saadhna nahi aur puja me koi bhi shamil ho sakta hai isliye aap bhi humare saath is puja me shamil ho sakti hai. Andar aa jaiye aur humare sath is rudrabhishek me shamil hokar bhagwaan shiv se prarthna kariye ki aapki saheli ke premi ke jeewan par aae sankat ko door karne ke liye hone wali tanra kriya me bhagwaan shiv apna aashitwaad pradan kare.
Neetu: Hmm aarti aao na andar bahar kyu khadi ho yu butt bani.
Aarti: Hmm ha aati hu pata nahi aisa lagta hai jaise is mandir se mera koi rishta hai.
Neetu: Kya kuch bhi tum yaha pehli baar aai ho kuchh bhi mat socho chalo andar aao.

Aarti bhi mandir ke andar aa gai, mandir ke andar is shivling par nazar padte hi aarti ko usme ek tez prakash sa niklata dikha aisa laga jaise us andheri raat me wo shivling surya ki bhati chamak raha hai.




Itne teevra prakash se bachne ke liye aarti ne apni aankhe band karli, par neetu ne use hilakar aankhe kholne ko kaha.

Neetu: Kya hua aarti ye aankhe kyu band karli kholo aankhe kya hua tabiyat kharab hai kya.

Neetu ki baat sun aarti ne jaise hi apni aankhe kholi shivling ka prakash gayab ho chuka tha aur wo ek normal shivling hi nazar aa raha tha.

Aarti: Wo wo wo tez roshni kaha chali gai.
Neetu: Kaisi tez roshni kis roshni ki baat kar rahi ho yaha to itni kaali andheri raat hai.
Aarti: Are wahi roshni jo abhi is shivling se aa rahi thi aap logo ne nahi dekhi kya.
Aghori: Nahi humne to koi roshni nahi dekhi yaha to bus is hawan samagri se uthti lapat ka prakash hai aur kuch nahi.
Aarti: Are kaisi baate kar rahe the abhi to aa rahi thi itni tez roshni is shivling ke andar se maine dekhi thi.
Neetu: Nahi aarti tumhe kuchh wehem hua hai shivling se koi roshni nahi aa rahi thi shayad tum thak gai ho aur thakawat ke karan tumhe aisa bhram hua.
Aarti: Hmm shayad bhram hi hua hoga.
Neetu: Agar tum thak gai ho to tum bahar aram karlo puja hum kar lenge.
Aarti: Nahi nahi ab puja me shamil hone aai hu to bahar baithkar aram kya karu mai theek hu.
Neetu: Pakka
Aarti: Hmm
Aghori: To chaliye ab hum is shivling ke rudrabhishek ki puja arambh karte hai. Kal humne us tantra saadhna ka sankalp kara tha jo hum Raj ke jeewan ke liye karne wale the aaj hum usme bhagwaan shiv ko prasann karke unka aashirwaad lenge kyuki Raj ke jeewan par kaal ki chhaya hai aur devo ke dev Mahadev to khud MAHAKAAL hai. Aur is chhetra me is shivling ka vishesh mehetva hai koi bhi kaam bina inki anumati liye nahi hota isliye aaj hum inka rudrabhishek kar inki anumati aur aashirwaad dono lenge.
Neetu Aarti: Jee



Aghori ne us mandir me rudrabhishek ki puja prarambh kardi aur aarti aur neetu ne hawan kund me ahuti daalte hue OM NAMAH SHIVAY ka jaap prarambh kar diya. Wo chhetra sunsaan raat me om namah shivay mantra ke jaap se gunjaymaan ho utha tha. Wo saaya ab bhi waha se doori banae khada tha aur taktaki lagae bus Aarti ko hi nihar raha tha.



Samay pal pratipal beetta ja raha tha aur rudrabhishek badastoor jaree tha. Neetu aarti waha 12:45 par aae honge aur ab 2:55 ho raha tha. 3 bajne me bus 5 min baaki the kitna sach hai aur kitna jhoot par kaha ye jata hai ki raat ke 3 baje kaali shaktiyo ruhani takato ki shakti apne charam par hori hai par philhaal to yaha bus ek ruhaani takat thi jo kal raat se aarti ke sah thi aur usne ab tak aarti ko koi nuksaan nahi pahuchaya tha par agar is waqt wo chahti bhi to shayad aisa nahi kar pati kyuki aarti neetu dono mahakaal ki sharan me thi jaha koi kaali shakti un tak nahi pahuch sakti thi.

Par aarti aur us saae ki kahani se judi ek nai kahani to waha se kafi door nadi ke us paar us khandahar me likhi ja rahi thi jaha aaj subah garima ne apne mangalsutra ko taak par rakh kar sari lok jaaj maryada bhool kar hariya ke sath sambandh banae the wo kisi ki adhuri suhagsej ke upar jo asliyat me kewal suhaagsej nahi thi balki uske neeche dafan thi 300 saal purani wo adhuri kahani jo ateet se vartamaan me pravesh karke is kahani ko ek naya ayam dene wali thi. Yahi wo samay tha jab wo shaksha sashareer us pathar ki sej roopi kabra ka seena phad kar bahar aa gaya tha jise uski suhaagraat me uski hi biwi ne zeher dekar maar diya tha. Deewar par lagi uski photo ekdum saaf ho gai thi us naam photo ke neecche likha uska naam ke mit chuke deewar par garima dwara pochhe gae veerya se wapas se ubhar kar aa rahe the aur jo naam waha ubar kar aaya tha wo tha ABHAY RAICHAND. ( Abhay Raichand ke baare me aap garima wale part me page number 17 par pad sakte hai. ) 



Abhay: Manjari Manjari 300 saal pehle tu mere pyar ko pehchan hi nahi pai thi ki kis tarah deewano ki had tak pyar karta tha mai tujhe apni shaadi ke din hi tune mujhe meri zindagi ka wo zakhm diya jisne mujhe 300 saal ki neend me sone par majboor kar diya par ab mai wapas aa gaya hu. Aur ab tu is duniya ke kisi bhi kone me kyu na ho kisi bhi roop me kyu na ho mai tujhe dhoond lunga. Jo kahani tune 300 saal pehle adhuri chhod di thi use mai ab pura karunga aur ye wada hai tujhse ki ab humare beech koi nahi aa paega wo bhi nahi jo 300 saal pehle humare beech aa gaya tha aur jiski wajah se hume alag hona pada tha. Manjari Manjari.........

Abhay ke bahar aate hi wo suhagsej khud ba khud wapas pehle jaisi ho gai jaise kabhi wo tooti hi nahi thi. Abhay usi sej par sadhna ki mudra me baith gaya aur apni mansik shaktiyo se manjari naam ki us mahila ki khoj prarambh kar di uski mansik tarange hawa me yaha waha manjari ko khoj rahi thi majrai ko khojte khojte subah ke 5 bajne ko aae the par ab tak abhay majari kis disha me hai ye tak pata nahi kar paya tha. Udhar shiv mandir me rudrabhishek ki vidhi poorna ho chuki thi aur aghori neetu aarti ne shivling par jal chadaya aur unhe pranam karke raj ki lumbi umar ki prarthana ki aur aghori ne unhe kal ki vidhi ke bare me bataya.

Aghori: Aaj raat is tantra sadhna ka teesri raat hogi aur aaj ki raat ki sadhna thodi kathin hai aur usme kewal neetu ko akele ana hoga aur thodi himmat ke sath aaj ke charan ko pura karna hoga to achha hoga ki aarti aaj uske sath kabristaan me na aae kyuki aaj ki raat use kabristaan me bahar rukne ki bhi anumati nahi hogi. Aur jald se jald ua brahmchaari ko khoj le kyuki bina uske ye sari vidhiya bekar hai din nikal aya hai ab aap dono haweli wapas jaaeiye, aur neetu aap aaj raat mujhe yahi shiv mandir par miliyega mai yahi apka intezaar karunga aaj raat ki sadhna ke liye.

Aghori ko pranam kar neetu aur aarti mandir se haweli ki taraf chal pade aur aghori wapas apne niwas sthan us kabristaan ki taraf chala gaya. Aghori ke jate hi wo saaya ek baar phir unke sath aa gaya. Achanak us saae hawao me kisi ki mansik shaktiyo ki maujoodgi ka ehsaas hua jo aarti ki taraf badi chali aa rahi thi.

Saaya: Ye mansik tarange ye jaroor usiki hai wo ek baar phir humari zindagi me zeher gholne aa gaya hai par is baar mai use aisa karne nahi doonga jab tak mai beech me khada hu tu ise nuksaan pahuchana to door is tak pahuch bhi nahi sakta.

Us saae ne un mansik tarango ko beech me hi rok diya aur aarti ko adrashya suraksha kawach me mehfooz kar diya jaha wo mansik tarange aarti tak pahuch hi nahi sakti thi. Aarti ko abhas bhi nahi tha ki koi kitni besabri se us tak pahuchne ki koshish kar raha hai aur koi use us tak pahucne se rok bhi raha tha. Aarti ko khojne wala aur use rokne wala dono hi aarti ke aas paas the par aarti un dono se hi anjaan thi use to abhas bhi nahi tha ki koi use kyu khoj raha hai aur use khojne wala uska hitaishi hai ya unke beech me deewar bana wo rokne wala par itna tai tha ki aane wala samay aarti par kafi bhari padne wala tha. Idhar us khandahar me apni mansik tarango ko awruddh hota dekh abhay aag baboola ho utha.

Abhay: Kiski itni himmat hui meri mansik tarango ko rokne ki. Kisine meri mansik tarango ko roka matlab manjari aas paas hi hai aur meri mansik tarango ko rokne ka kaam sirf wahi kar sakta hai matlab mere sath sath wo bhi us duniya se wapas aa gaya. Tu kitni bhi koshish karle mere aur manjari ke beech aane ki par na tu tab safal hua tha na aaj hoga jo haal tera tab kara tha usse bhi jada bura haal karunga. Dekhta hu kab tak meri tarango ko manjari rak pahuchne se rokta hai. Abhay nadi ki koi chhoti dhara nahi jise tu rok lega abhay wo sunami hai jise bade se bada bandh bhi nahi rok sakta.

Abhay lagatar manjari ko khojne ka apna prayas jari rakhe hue tha aur wo saaya lagatar aarti par apna suraksha kawach banae hue tha aur aarti un dono se anjaaan aane wale khatre se puri tarah bekhabar thi. Neetu aur aarti haweli tak pahuch gae the jaha abhi bhi kafi sannata tha wo chupchap bina kisi ki nazro me aae apne room tak pahuch gai aur apne kamre me aa gai jaha raat ki thaki haari neha ghode bech kar so rahi thi unhe yahi laga ki kisi ko unke na hone ka pata na chale isiliye neha yaha unke room me so gai. Raat bhar ki jaagi neetu aur aarti bhi thodi thodi jagah bana kar wahi bistar par neha ke agal bagal me let gae aur lette hi kab unki aankh lag gai unhe pata hi nahi chala.

Hawas waasna pyar apnapan sazish geletfehmi pratishodh raksha samarpan balatkaar aise kai bhawo se bhara is wedding ceremony ka ye paachwa din khatam hua. Ye paachwa din apne andar bahut kuch samete hue the isne ek gharelu khushhaal pativrata patni ko wasna ke unmaad me behek kar kisi parae mard ke sath sambandh banate dekha, to ek paak zaheen mahila ki asmat ko hawas me doobe ek bhooke bhediye ki sazish ke hatho taar taar hote hue bhi dekha. Isne ek baap beti ki umar wale aurat aur mard ko vipreet halato me bhi khud par kaboo rakhte aur pyar apnepan ki wajah se ek nae prem ke beej ko ankurit hote dekha to sharab ke nashe me bhavnao ki galatfehmi beheh kar ek sage baap ko apni kuchh din pehle kanyadaan ki gai beti ki kokh ko apne beej se bharte hue bhi dekha. Isne ek aur aurat ka balatkaar hote hue bhi dekha aur khud ek aurat ko apni ichha se apna balatkaar karwate bhi dekha. Isne prem ke liye khud ki maan maryada ko kurnbaan karne ko tayar premika bhi dekha to prem me chot khae ek premi ki aankho me dhadakti pratishodh ki jwala bhi.

Par ab ye kahani apne madhyantar ko paa chuki thi kahani ke pratham paach din pure ho gae the aur ab kahani madhyantar ke baad ki kahani me pravesh karne wali thi yani apne chhathe din dekhna tha kahani me ab kya nae mod kya nae paridrashya ubhar kar aane wale the.

[Logan555]

END OF DAY 5

[Jaan]

Great..!

[Badstar]

Ekdam jhakkkas
Bole toh bhut hard

[Vicky007]

jabardast update dhiya bhai