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Really Ajanmol,
Tumhara toh jawab nahi bhai.....bahut umda likhte ho bhai.
Really erotic update and hot one..... dick hardenening i must say your writing skills are one of the best, but looks like Vandana being a conservative hottest housewife is getting onto a slut side..... dont you think so that the title given to the story is moving away now... sorry if i have offended you bro.
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(30-11-2021, 07:33 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Really Ajanmol,
Tumhara toh jawab nahi bhai.....bahut umda likhte ho bhai.
Really erotic update and hot one..... dick hardenening i must say your writing skills are one of the best, but looks like Vandana being a conservative hottest housewife is getting onto a slut side..... dont you think so that the title given to the story is moving away now... sorry if i have offended you bro.
Thankyou bhai for appreciation.....nd no need to say sorry.....haa par slut side toh vandana ke andar pehle se tha shuru se hi .... haa par abhishek ke baato ne aag mai ghee ka kaam kar diya isliye vandana ka gussa uska slutness ko baahair laaa raha hai.....dont worry story ka title ke hisaab se story aage badhega...ye to bas shuruwaat hai abhi or bhi seduction or encounter aayenge is episode ke baad.......ab is episode ka last chapter jaldi dunga....mujhe pata hai ki yeh episode bhut lengthy hai but ab aage ap sab ko nirash nahi karunga.......
Agla episode mai hariya ke saath adventure shuru hoga.......bas aap sab pehle ki tarah support karte rahe or hausla badhate rahe ....kyoki yaaha aapsab ke pyaar ke alawa ek writer ko kuch nahi milta hai ....so pls kindly bear with me........
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(30-11-2021, 09:58 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: Thankyou bhai for appreciation.....nd no need to say sorry.....haa par slut side toh vandana ke andar pehle se tha shuru se hi .... haa par abhishek ke baato ne aag mai ghee ka kaam kar diya isliye vandana ka gussa uska slutness ko baahair laaa raha hai.....dont worry story ka title ke hisaab se story aage badhega...ye to bas shuruwaat hai abhi or bhi seduction or encounter aayenge is episode ke baad.......ab is episode ka last chapter jaldi dunga....mujhe pata hai ki yeh episode bhut lengthy hai but ab aage ap sab ko nirash nahi karunga.......
Agla episode mai hariya ke saath adventure shuru hoga.......bas aap sab pehle ki tarah support karte rahe or hausla badhate rahe ....kyoki yaaha aapsab ke pyaar ke alawa ek writer ko kuch nahi milta hai ....so pls kindly bear with me........
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30-11-2021, 12:10 PM
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Anmol bhai... Aurat ke andar slutness acchi lgti h chudai k time m. Use ese hi banake rakkho dono roop. Jalan m aake ekdm slur randj jese bahave hi rkhna iska. Hariya ke sath bi. Or hariya ka jo plan ise apna banane ka rakhel. Usme agr hariya k lie vandana m toda purana payarr or yaade bi daal dena.kyuki phla pyaar to wohi tha.. Jisne vandana ko itna horny or beshrm bnne pr majboor kia.. Ki apna hottest video bi banake dia hariya ko. Or hariya k Naam se toh wo masterbate bj krti thi Naam leke.. To esme tumne jalan ka banake kia h abhi ki wajay se.. Briz se ese chud rhi h like a pure slut. Par es br hariya ke case m toda pyr or besharmi rkhna.. Ki wo uske sath dil se bhi uski rakhel bana de kud ko hariya ki. Like esa kuch ho toh..(sochna aap hi, sahi lage toh tumhe) idea ho h...
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(30-11-2021, 12:10 PM)Suchjn7.1 Wrote: Anmol bhai... Aurat ke andar slutness acchi lgti h chudai k time m. Use ese hi banake rakkho dono roop. Jalan m aake ekdm slur randj jese bahave hi rkhna iska. Hariya ke sath bi. Or hariya ka jo plan ise apna banane ka rakhel. Usme agr hariya k lie vandana m toda purana payarr or yaade bi daal dena.kyuki phla pyaar to wohi tha.. Jisne vandana ko itna horny or beshrm bnne pr majboor kia.. Ki apna hottest video bi banake dia hariya ko. Or hariya k Naam se toh wo masterbate bj krti thi Naam leke.. To esme tumne jalan ka banake kia h abhi ki wajay se.. Briz se ese chud rhi h like a pure slut. Par es br hariya ke case m toda pyr or besharmi rkhna.. Ki wo uske sath dil se bhi uski rakhel bana de kud ko hariya ki. Like esa kuch ho toh..(sochna aap hi, sahi lage toh tumhe) idea ho h... Thankyou yaara..... aage hariya ka adventure mai aapsab ko bhut kuch dekhne ko milega.....
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(30-11-2021, 01:55 PM)Explorer@life Wrote: Amazing update buddy
Thankyou yaara ....
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(01-12-2021, 10:42 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: Thankyou yaara ....
Tumse story na likhi ja rhi to band krde bh9sdike.
Kabi 10-10din, kabi 1 month m ek update krta h. Or appreation magta rhta bc.
Appreciatn khusi se kra jata h.
Pr tu itne late late uadate deke irritate kr ra h tu baki sbko bi. Gussa aa ra h abteri story P sbi ko.
Tb bi tuje fir bi appreciate krne k lie msg krte h rhte sb. Pr tere kahtm hi ni hote.. Bahane.
Phle 1m8nth se jada gayab rhne k baad bola Nov. Se continue update kra karega.
Or fir Sala disappointed krke gussa kra ra. Notanky.
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(02-12-2021, 02:53 PM)Suchjn7.1 Wrote: Tumse story na likhi ja rhi to band krde bh9sdike.
Kabi 10-10din, kabi 1 month m ek update krta h. Or appreation magta rhta bc.
Appreciatn khusi se kra jata h.
Pr tu itne late late uadate deke irritate kr ra h tu baki sbko bi. Gussa aa ra h abteri story P sbi ko.
Tb bi tuje fir bi appreciate krne k lie msg krte h rhte sb. Pr tere kahtm hi ni hote.. Bahane.
Phle 1m8nth se jada gayab rhne k baad bola Nov. Se continue update kra karega.
Or fir Sala disappointed krke gussa kra ra. Notanky.
Read my story shipra.... You will definitely like that...
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(02-12-2021, 02:53 PM)Suchjn7.1 Wrote: Tumse story na likhi ja rhi to band krde bh9sdike.
Kabi 10-10din, kabi 1 month m ek update krta h. Or appreation magta rhta bc.
Appreciatn khusi se kra jata h.
Pr tu itne late late uadate deke irritate kr ra h tu baki sbko bi. Gussa aa ra h abteri story P sbi ko.
Tb bi tuje fir bi appreciate krne k lie msg krte h rhte sb. Pr tere kahtm hi ni hote.. Bahane.
Phle 1m8nth se jada gayab rhne k baad bola Nov. Se continue update kra karega.
Or fir Sala disappointed krke gussa kra ra. Notanky.
Bhai update likh raha hu or tumne saayad yeh gaur nahi kiya ki maine last 13 days mai 4th update kiya hai.....waise tum kyo nahi likhte koi story ....??? Tmhari baato se lagta hai ki tum bhut punctual ho .....are bhai bolna bhut aasan hai kabhi ek story likh kar dekho tab pata chalega tumhe....nonsense.....
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(02-12-2021, 05:32 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bhai update likh raha hu or tumne saayad yeh gaur nahi kiya ki maine last 13 days mai 4th update kiya hai.....waise tum kyo nahi likhte koi story ....??? Tmhari baato se lagta hai ki tum bhut punctual ho .....are bhai bolna bhut aasan hai kabhi ek story likh kar dekho tab pata chalega tumhe....nonsense.....
Bilkul sahi bola... Ek small sa update likhne me chaar paanch ghante lag jaate hai... But ye readers ko kya maaloom... 2 minutes me padhkar maamla khatam.. ek appreciation tak to banta nahi inse...
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03-12-2021, 02:10 AM
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Update is paid..... For purchase pls contact me on my telegram I'd @loverboy094.....
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Aakhir kaar maine is long journey ko khatam kar hi diya......so aap log bataiye ki yeh turning kaisa laga aap sab ko...??? I hope aap sab ko pasand aayega ye mega update......
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Excellent awesome update bhai
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Bahot achha mod liya he kahani me
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Fantastic turn to the story Ajanmol bhai.
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maja agaya.... ekdam dhasu... eysa koi turn ki zarurat thi... abhi to raat baki hein Aslam ke rand dr kamya kya kare
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(03-12-2021, 10:29 AM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Excellent awesome update bhai
Shukriya yaara.....
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(03-12-2021, 11:18 AM)Shield Wrote: Bahot achha mod liya he kahani me Thanks yaara...
(04-12-2021, 04:35 AM)qazmlp Wrote: Fantastic turn to the story Ajanmol bhai. Thanks to you bhai a idea dene ke liye.....
(04-12-2021, 10:17 AM)kaala69 Wrote: maja agaya.... ekdam dhasu... eysa koi turn ki zarurat thi... abhi to raat baki hein Aslam ke rand dr kamya kya kare
Thanks yaara....aage saath bane rahiyega...
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08-12-2021, 12:47 AM
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Update 51 (a) is paid..... Contact me on my telegram channel for membership @loverboy094
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