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Amazing and awesome starting!keep going
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(01-05-2019, 01:30 PM)snehasneha Wrote: Suggest if u like my start or not i will try to improve as this is my first story....
very good start. You write well for first time.
Images + TEXT is the best way to capture effect of story
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excellent starting!! carry on yr):
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thank you friends,,,,.....
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Or shall i start a new thread on any one of the actress?
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)Anushaka Shettty will be very hot choice.please give 100% concentration on this story and after completing it then start another.
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Good starting bro...... Your way of story writing is very sexcellent
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very very nice starting! your writing skill is really excellent
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superb.excellent starting
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(01-05-2019, 03:26 PM)snehasneha Wrote: yeah i will bro but i want to add one more actress in this plot so thats y i am asking after completing this i wil start a new thread...
Trisha is my choice but as usual majority preference
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Trisha ok....
Awesome update bro.... waiting for more
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Fantastic starting!! Anushaka Shettty will be matched more
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Excellent update bro
Trisha is my choice
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super excellent start! I prefer Anushaka Shettty
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very nice start.Anushaka Shettty is more sexy than Trisha