01-12-2021, 07:45 AM
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Adultery Lockdown ruined everything
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01-12-2021, 07:45 AM
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
01-12-2021, 07:55 AM
Alaudeen know to play with the sentiments and how he can attract woman. He won using that technique. Awesome update
01-12-2021, 08:12 AM
Good update
01-12-2021, 09:48 AM
both fell in love omg
01-12-2021, 06:04 PM
Great going bro. Good update
01-12-2021, 08:16 PM
Excellent
01-12-2021, 08:46 PM
Marvelous update friend. She is going to fall for his "Meat".
Allau will teach cooking with the fee of fucking.
01-12-2021, 09:02 PM
This is the first time Kritzee going to fall in LOVE. He is going to impress with his humor, cooking, body building, care and love making.
01-12-2021, 09:09 PM
He cannot be that good. She cannot be that fool.
01-12-2021, 09:37 PM
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UR Rocking !!!
Allaudin should cook some delicious non-veg for her. One such food to be prepared with meat of her husband after killing him by his men. She must appreciate that more.
01-12-2021, 09:45 PM
Friend?? This is the start of new relationship with criminal. She is going to make her department accusation true. Wonderful narration.
01-12-2021, 09:50 PM
Very nice narration
01-12-2021, 11:28 PM
Nice update
02-12-2021, 06:32 AM
Still not clear how the guest house had her photos as batch topper and with rahul. It is not her home anyway.
02-12-2021, 06:37 AM
She must be still a virgin in both holes and going to lose it to a criminal.
02-12-2021, 07:13 AM
02-12-2021, 07:35 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-12-2021, 07:39 PM by Yampag. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Created good tempo n flow with interesting turns in the story.. finally both are alone in the guest house and lockdown period will increase.. now alaudin started the game of sympathy and kirtika is moving inch by inch towards Alaudin.. and within no time she will be under his lund.. but how long they will be there..? Alaudin attracts her towards him but how will he fuck her.. blackmail.. force.. hard.. or erotically seduces her and she will lovingly fall and do actively participate in sexsession with whole heartedly.. anybody comes to know about both's love-game.. anyother person will be addon later on.. or she will ruined fully her life with alaudin's trap.. will she survive..? let's see.. what is in writers plan..
03-12-2021, 07:46 AM
Amazing
03-12-2021, 05:51 PM
Allauddin couldn't able to believe how quickly he fooled krithika. All he needed was a sentiment story regarding his religion, pushing every crime that he did on someone else and even faking his crime of R*ping women. It was such an easy task or did she fooled him? Her smile and body language changed dramatically, she was no more a security officer and he wasn't a criminal. They both were laughing like buddies.
They both were relaxing in the balcony enjoying the beautiful scenery of green forest ahead of them. They both talked about everything from their childhood to adulthood. Krithika did more the talking part and allauddin did more questioning part. The time was close to 6 and they could see the beautiful sunset. "I used to enjoy my evenings with a hot coffee and newspaper. But since from joining in this department I never got time to even enjoy my coffee break. Now that I finally got some time, I remembered that I don't even know how to make a coffee too haha" krithika just gave a weak smile. "I could teach you, I can make delicious coffee" "Still I don't want to learn. Anyway thanks" Allauddin doesn't want to lose this chance of impressing her, so he got up from his chair, "I will make a coffee for us, we would enjoy the sunset together" and he walked towards the kitchen. Krithika smiled inside, fully knowing that he won't be back for few minutes and his mobile was lying beside her. She remembered the pattern which he used while unlocking his mobile, she used the same pattern and the mobile got unlocked!!! Quickly she went to call logs and just wanted to note the numbers of incoming calls on the day of her raid. So that she would know who was the person behind all this. But unfortunately there were no call logs, perhaps allauddin might have deleted the call logs... Smart person!!!!!! He wanted to check the whatsapp chat but unfortunately it was secured with fingerprint. She was disappointed. She just wanted to try checking text messages just to make sure, and she gone through all the messages. One message got her attention, it said "security officer.... Raid.... Tomorrow" Krithika was too much involved in the mobile that She didn't hear the footsteps of allauddin. She was about to check the number but allauddin took his mobile from her hands. Krithika thinking about the possible explanation she has to give. Allauddin opened the recent apps, he understood that krithika opened the call logs, whatsapp and text messages. Krithika wasn't just a innocent or sensitive person, she fooled him. She fooled him to convince him that 'she believed in everything' that he said. Krithika turned out to be more tough than he anticipated. "What were you doing with my mobile krithika? I thought we became friends?" Now that he understood that she was checking his mobile, there is no other way to deny it and importantly she has seen the last 4 digits of the number. It may take her some time to know who that person is but it's not impossible task now. She got a chance to clear his name. So there is no point in acting as a good person with allauddin too. Krithika laughed at him looking at his clueless face, she couldn't able to hide her laugh, "friends? How could you thought that I will be friends with such a criminal?" Krithika walked inside the home and sat on a sofa, "you really think that I believed in what ever you told me?" Changed her body language to that of agressive and said "You are a monster and in no way anyone would believe in you" Alauddin was mistaken, he thought that krithika was just another girl whom he can seduce with friendship but it turned out to be more tough than he thought. "I know the only reason you were keeping me alive or not forcing yourself on me because you know that security officer were calling me every day, if I dont lift the call, they will come to me to this house catching you, and you can't even escape after killing me, the security officer aren't even allowing normal person, and you were most wanted criminal. you have no place to go other than this" Krithika almost cracked everything but what she didn't understand was, he was here to make her his slave. He wanted to enjoy her beautiful body. "If something happens to me, you can't even escape. You can't go to another country. I know very well that you can't do anything to me" Krithika took her mobile and said, "it takes me hardly a minute to call the security officer and ask them to come here, I know that you will tell them that me and you were partners. They may even believe in that. The only way they won't believe is, 'if you kill me' " krithika threw her mobile on sofa and continued "you need to keep me alive for your own safety." Allauddin stood there without even blinking his eyes. He might have bedded many women, deflowered many women but no one came close to Krithika. Krithika almost catched his lies since from starting. She isn't just another girl. She is KRITHIKA. |
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