25-11-2021, 10:24 PM
Dosto abhi ke liye ek chhota sa update de raha hu kyoki meri tabiyat thodi kharab hai....isliye iska anand uthaiye...
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Romantic | 1 | 2.17% | |
Adultery | 26 | 56.52% | |
Fantasy , Erotic | 3 | 6.52% | |
Incest | 12 | 26.09% | |
LGBT | 4 | 8.70% | |
Total | 46 vote(s) | 100% |
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Vasant - Vihaar ( LODY BHAI )
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25-11-2021, 10:24 PM
Dosto abhi ke liye ek chhota sa update de raha hu kyoki meri tabiyat thodi kharab hai....isliye iska anand uthaiye...
Thank You
26-11-2021, 05:30 AM
Absolutely rocking update! Very very sexy and exciting narrations!
26-11-2021, 11:14 AM
Behtarren update bhidu......lallu to bahut chalak or tharki hai gayatri ki bhi thrak jga di.... dekhte hai aage kya majedar hota hai.....
26-11-2021, 11:30 AM
Mast... please update more
26-11-2021, 01:36 PM
Nice update bhai or jb tabiyat theek ho jaye toh jaldi se jaldi Gayatri Devi ka game bajwao
Waiting for next update
26-11-2021, 01:59 PM
Absolutely fantastic update!
26-11-2021, 02:03 PM
Lajawab,mast baut h jabardast update!
27-11-2021, 12:26 AM
Mast update tha yar dost
27-11-2021, 01:33 AM
Dhasu story bro
27-11-2021, 07:15 PM
bahut badhiya update! lajawab likhte h aap bhai, very very nice build up!
28-11-2021, 12:23 PM
Fantastic update!
28-11-2021, 12:26 PM
Jabardast,mast,faddu aur bahut bahut mazadar update!
28-11-2021, 04:49 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-11-2021, 04:52 PM by Yampag. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Take Care Lody bhai.. App badhiya likh rahe ho.. I don't know what is your plan for later development.. but ek character ne to entry maar lii aur kaam pe lag gaya..
Jab tino aurato ki baat aayi.. to mai soch raha tha ki tino me se Thakur ke patni ka number pahela lagna chahiya.. aur abhi ki update me isne lund to dekh hi liya, touch bhi kar liya..aur soongh bhi liya.. mere hisab se yeh thoda fast aage badh gaya.. abhi aur thodi kashmkash aur zizak aur tadap jyada dikha ke fir touch wala late to thoda aur mazaa aataa.. but yeh meri koi tikaa nahi hai.. aap badhiya jaa rahe ho.. aaraama karke vapis update dena.. dekhate hai itne hi character rahenge ya aur badhenge.. dekhate hai.. but blackmail yaa jyada abusing mat banaa denaa.. but it's your story.. do whatever you like.. thanks..
28-11-2021, 07:41 PM
(28-11-2021, 04:49 PM)Yampag Wrote: Take Care Lody bhai.. App badhiya likh rahe ho.. I don't know what is your plan for later development.. but ek character ne to entry maar lii aur kaam pe lag gaya.. Sorry bhai story thodi fast ho gayi...story ko mai slow rakhna chahta tha lekin kai readers ko ye pasand nahi hai....jyadatar readers sex ke intejar me rahte hai....lekin ab se mai is baat ka dhyan rakhuga aur story ko aaram se aage badauga... Thank You So Much.... Aap sab agle update ka intezar kar rahe hoge par iske liye mai maafi chahta hu , abhi tabiyat sahi nahi hai isliye thoda time lag sakta hai....phir bhi mai kosis karuga ek chhota update dene ke liye..
28-11-2021, 09:58 PM
(28-11-2021, 07:41 PM)LODY BHAI Wrote: Sorry bhai story thodi fast ho gayi...story ko mai slow rakhna chahta tha lekin kai readers ko ye pasand nahi hai....jyadatar readers sex ke intejar me rahte hai....lekin ab se mai is baat ka dhyan rakhuga aur story ko aaram se aage badauga...Bilkul bhai ,,sex se jada build up important hai.. Lage raho bhai
05-12-2021, 05:15 PM
Sorry Dosto pichle 1 saptah se mai beemar tha isliye mai update nahi de saka...aur abhi mai thik ho gaya hu to ab bhi agle update ke liye time lagega... Mai iske liye maafi chahta hu...lekin maine ek aur kahani likhi hui hai agar aap chahe to mai use post kar sakta hu....jab tak aap us story ko pad lena aur mujhe bhi aage likhne ke liye time mil jaayega.... Agar aap agli kahani ko padna chahte hai to reply karke bata sakte hai...mai use post kar dunga.... Thanks
05-12-2021, 05:36 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-12-2021, 05:37 PM by Vihaan. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Koi baat nhi bhai pr ab ap thk hai to ap ish gape ko cover kar lena jaldi agli update ka intezaar hai or ap agli kahani post kro bhai jaldi
13-12-2021, 01:56 AM
Aap ko ye story bhi puri karni chaiye thi bro..
Ye story live cemra action se aachi hai..
Dhanu bhai.
13-12-2021, 08:29 AM
13-12-2021, 08:52 AM
Bhai meri baat mano ye story jabardast hai , isliye pahle aapko ise poora karna chahiye...aap please is kahani ko aage likhiye...
Maza aata hai aisi kahani padhne me jisme haweli ki maalkin naukaro ke saath chudai karti hai....lekin jyadatar aisi kahaniya adhoori rah jaati hai |
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