Poll: Story Kaisi Honi Chahiye.....?
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Romantic
2.17%
1 2.17%
Adultery
56.52%
26 56.52%
Fantasy , Erotic
6.52%
3 6.52%
Incest
26.09%
12 26.09%
LGBT
8.70%
4 8.70%
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Vasant - Vihaar ( LODY BHAI )
Dosto abhi ke liye ek chhota sa update de raha hu kyoki meri tabiyat thodi kharab hai....isliye iska anand uthaiye...


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Absolutely rocking update! Very very sexy and exciting narrations!
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Behtarren update bhidu......lallu to bahut chalak or tharki hai gayatri ki bhi thrak jga di.... dekhte hai aage kya majedar hota hai.....
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Mast... please update more
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Nice update bhai or jb tabiyat theek ho jaye toh jaldi se jaldi Gayatri Devi ka game bajwao

Waiting for next update
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Absolutely fantastic update!
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Lajawab,mast baut h jabardast update! thanks
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Mast update tha yar dost
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Dhasu story bro
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bahut badhiya update! lajawab likhte h aap bhai, very very nice build up! clps clps clps
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Fantastic update!
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Jabardast,mast,faddu aur bahut bahut mazadar update! thanks
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Take Care Lody bhai.. App badhiya likh rahe ho.. I don't know what is your plan for later development.. but ek character ne to entry maar lii aur kaam pe lag gaya..
Jab tino aurato ki baat aayi.. to mai soch raha tha ki tino me se Thakur ke patni ka number pahela lagna chahiya.. aur abhi ki update me isne lund to dekh hi liya, touch bhi kar liya..aur soongh bhi liya.. mere hisab se yeh thoda fast aage badh gaya.. abhi aur thodi kashmkash aur zizak aur tadap jyada dikha ke fir touch wala late to thoda aur mazaa aataa.. but yeh meri koi tikaa nahi hai.. aap badhiya jaa rahe ho.. aaraama karke vapis update dena.. dekhate hai itne hi character rahenge ya aur badhenge.. dekhate hai.. but blackmail yaa jyada abusing mat banaa denaa.. but it's your story.. do whatever you like.. thanks..
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(28-11-2021, 04:49 PM)Yampag Wrote: Take Care Lody bhai.. App badhiya likh rahe ho.. I don't know what is your plan for later development.. but ek character ne to entry maar lii aur kaam pe lag gaya..
Jab tino aurato ki baat aayi.. to mai soch raha tha ki tino me se Thakur ke patni ka number pahela lagna chahiya.. aur abhi ki update me isne lund to dekh hi liya, touch bhi kar liya..aur soongh bhi liya.. mere hisab se yeh thoda fast aage badh gaya.. abhi aur thodi kashmkash aur zizak aur tadap jyada dikha ke fir touch wala late to thoda aur mazaa aataa.. but yeh meri koi tikaa nahi hai.. aap badhiya jaa rahe ho.. aaraama karke vapis update dena.. dekhate hai itne hi character rahenge ya aur badhenge.. dekhate hai.. but blackmail yaa jyada abusing mat banaa denaa.. but it's your story.. do whatever you like.. thanks..

Sorry bhai story thodi fast ho gayi...story ko mai slow rakhna chahta tha lekin kai readers ko ye pasand nahi hai....jyadatar readers sex ke intejar me rahte hai....lekin ab se mai is baat ka dhyan rakhuga aur story ko aaram se aage badauga...


Thank You So Much....


Aap sab agle update ka intezar kar rahe hoge par iske liye mai maafi chahta hu , abhi tabiyat sahi nahi hai isliye thoda time lag sakta hai....phir bhi mai kosis karuga ek chhota update dene ke liye..

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(28-11-2021, 07:41 PM)LODY BHAI Wrote: Sorry bhai story thodi fast ho gayi...story ko mai slow rakhna chahta tha lekin kai readers ko ye pasand nahi hai....jyadatar readers sex ke intejar me rahte hai....lekin ab se mai is baat ka dhyan rakhuga aur story ko aaram se aage badauga...


Thank You So Much....


Aap sab agle update ka intezar kar rahe hoge par iske liye mai maafi chahta hu , abhi tabiyat sahi nahi hai isliye thoda time lag sakta hai....phir bhi mai kosis karuga ek chhota update dene ke liye..

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Bilkul bhai ,,sex se jada build up important  hai..
Lage raho bhai
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Sorry Dosto pichle 1 saptah se mai beemar tha isliye mai update nahi de saka...aur abhi mai thik ho gaya hu to ab bhi agle update ke liye time lagega...


Mai iske liye maafi chahta hu...lekin maine ek aur kahani likhi hui hai agar aap chahe to mai use post kar sakta hu....jab tak aap us story ko pad lena aur mujhe bhi aage likhne ke liye time mil jaayega....


Agar aap agli kahani ko padna chahte hai to reply karke bata sakte hai...mai use post kar dunga....


Thanks
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Koi baat nhi bhai pr ab ap thk hai to ap ish gape ko cover kar lena jaldi agli update ka intezaar hai or ap agli kahani post kro bhai jaldi  welcome
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Aap ko ye story bhi puri karni chaiye thi bro..
Ye story live cemra action se aachi hai..
Dhanu bhai.
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(13-12-2021, 01:56 AM)Dhanu01 Wrote: Aap ko ye story bhi puri karni chaiye thi bro..
Ye story live cemra action se aachi hai..

Don't worry bro , i need some time to prepare further updates till then enjoy my second story....

Thanks for commenting...
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Bhai meri baat mano ye story jabardast hai , isliye pahle aapko ise poora karna chahiye...aap please is kahani ko aage likhiye...

Maza aata hai aisi kahani padhne me jisme haweli ki maalkin naukaro ke saath chudai karti hai....lekin jyadatar aisi kahaniya adhoori rah jaati hai
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